#Open to critique!

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dusty nest
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i think the arm is alittle off. if you look at the reference, her elbows kinda curve upwards, creating that caved in part which adds depth and makes it less stiff

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and i think raising the shoulder will help make her look more balanced, as well as curving the armpit line thing

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the eyes are really cute btw! hope this helps catHeart

rigid stirrup
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Ahh, i see! This prolly means i have to draw the entire arm again despair but TYSM for the advice!!!

uneven hamlet
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Marry me omg such yummy art omg

uneven hamlet
# rigid stirrup Ahh, i see! This prolly means i have to draw the entire arm again <:despair:1147...

The shoulder advice I would say just depends on the pose!! It depends on how chill she is in this pose!! If you struggle with a part of the drawing, try the pose urself!! That always helps me imagine it better!!! One time I made my friend pose with me for this one dance move and they were like wtf dude and I was like JUST GO WITH IT and it helped a lot!!! Ur art looks so good though!!!! And depending on the fabric over her elbow, it’s actually perfect as is!! The elbow is being covered right now and unless it’s supposed to be skin tight, you can just go with it!!! Also the armpit line imo is a bit far up but don’t trust me because I do not know shit about human anatomy 😭 I draw ducks a lot

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Omg sorry I talk a lot

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Good luck!! Looks amazing!! Only minor changes are needed!!

rigid stirrup
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I didn't want to make the drawing super based off the reference but just to give me an idea on the feel, it's a recreation off an old artwork i made back then but now I'm at the coloring stage i regret not finding a proper reference or making one.. but it's fine... I'll live with it this one time Skullshocked i haven't drawn digitally in months so it's a nice refreshing activity to do again!