any criticism ? is he hard to read is the head and shoulders alright ?

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I wanted him to look mor Melo then the other two he is the one that is not inked and gives of real old man energy also he's sitting

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shut the fuck up chris

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I love the details on your character

a way to make him more clear is to use line weights