Composition could be better idk how tho

[halcyon creek]

I feel like the composition could be better than it already is, I dont know how i could Imporve upon it though, maybe a perspective change or moving things around? also if you want to point out any other critiques feel free to do so

[short patrol]

Very nice illustration!! First thing I noticed is the overlap between the human character and robot character creating a lot of tangents/tension making it very hard to read their silhouettes. I suggest moving the robot more to the left and/or the character to the right so the character is nicely framed between the body of the robot and the arm!

[short patrol]

There’s also a lot of negative space on the left side, you might be able to fill it with another element that’ll lead our eye back to the character. Or just crop the space