Little prouder with this piece but looking for advice

[spare skiff]

No harsh criticism please! The arm looks a little weird i know but is there anything else?

[topaz oasis]

Hello, i think youre doing very well for a beginner artist. your character is very cute.

In terms of anatomy- the shoulders are usually more wineglass shaped than what you drew them, and the body may need reproportioning. in future, it may help to sketch out the torso first and then position the arms around it.

I hope this helps.

[spare skiff]

Thank you! Last time i did the slanted shoulders someone recommended i did more...straight shoulders

so alas i js took their advice

and also i'm not a beginner at most i'm js an intermediate

but as far as anatomy yeah i'm a beginner i'll admit