#how to place more focus to the face on this drawing

13 messages · Page 1 of 1 (latest)

heavy geyserBOT
#

cheerful_capybara_25260 has been timed out for 2m mute
spacearrowRight Reason: Emojis Spam

crimson jewel
#

I think I expressed too much rage. to keep it brief: how do i stop my eye from ending up at the tree. I've already tried blur and lightening the dark spot on the tree and cropping it differently like 8 times and im getting close to eradicating the planet.

inland terrace
#

My eye personally was not drawn to the tree.. but regardless viewers are being “forced” to look toward it because of her arm placement! The arm gestures toward the tree, therefore drawing the eye to it. I think you could blur the tree some more, or add more detail to the woman. The tree is at the same detail level with the rest of the background, so it still stands out

stoic zodiac
#

the foreground could use to be a bit darker too, and i feel the sky mixes too much with the top of the girl

inland terrace
#

Tree is very saturated ye

manic sun
manic sun
#

If there was other things it would be to try and follow the rule of thirds. It states if you were to cut a picture in three slices from top to bottom they must all be hsrmonious

#

This is also useful for making aesthetically pleasing images. Notice how the humans head in this image is placed where the lines intersect. Wherever the lines intersect, if you place an object of interest there the eye woll look at it and find it pleasing

#

I would recommend first going back and modifying the clouds and have a halo of blue sky around her to give the eye some reprieve, and adding more trees to the background so the lone tree doesnt stand put. And also filling the fore ground with more waving grass as right niw it looks rather empty

#

Finally i strongly suggest you change her gesture with her hand, perhaps to shading herself from the sun. If mot, just change tbe height of the trees and add a slightly lower opacity of the tree around the hand