#Please fix/critique i’m very new to digital art !

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simple shard
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i’m very open minded and lmk any suggestions and ideas on how to improve my drawing !

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i usually watch youtube videos and that’s how i kinda have an idea of highlights and stuff

vernal shadow
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A few suggestions I have

-when shading try your best not to bring down the shade too much, id suggest either increasing the saturation then taking down the shade a bit, or finding a complementary or analogous color and doing the same. (depends on style, what your going for and what makes u happier!)

-A little tip that i've learned some time ago is also not to have straight-out white when coloring and highlighting, If u add a slight hue to the highlights, eyes, etc. It will give the same effect whilst also bringing the colors together better.

-last suggestion, the neck seems a bit long but then again, it really depends on style and how you like to draw!

If u check out Bluebiscuits, she explains all this and the color theory much better.
Hope this helps <3

simple shard
vernal shadow
rare coral
# simple shard

I'm liking the character and the pose. But there are some anatomy issues I'd like to address

  • I'm guessing u wanted to have her head be very tall and thin, but it's a bit too much. If I were to trace the shape of the head, the skull would be too out of proportion, so it is important to keep the bone structure in mind when stylizing a character.
  • the neck and collar bones are wonky. It's hard to explain the structure, but I've repainted it to show u
  • the cleavage is too high, and not centered
  • the arm on the right (our right) could use more form, define the shoulders, upper, and lower arm.
  • add some light to the black dress to match the rest of the lighting
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