Looking for feedback !

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Should I change anything before rendering? I think that the pose looks a bit off

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Do you know where the further off hand starts? I think it might be not in the right place

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this is the ref that i used, im also unsure abt the arm but in the ref it looks fine??

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Oh yeah I see where the problem is!

See, the hand is shown more the just below the elbow in the ref,

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ur right!! thank you so much :D

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If it's okay by you, I drew some variations on what I though would look better before you showed me the ref, is it okay to send them?

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ofc!!!