#help ;-; (TW: FOR BLOOD/KNIFE)

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raven frigate
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Looking good so far. Just some parts of the face and perspective that need some fine-tuning

  • under the chin should be visible
  • make the upper lid of the farther eye is more rounded due to perspective
  • bottom lids of both eyes should curve up, and add some creases to push the expression
  • push the cheek out and define the jawline, and I'd recommend u add the nostrils to better show the angle of face
  • push the left shoulder farther back bc the body is in 3/4
  • arm shape is a bit wonky, and make sure to define the elbow joint
  • I'd also recommend u draw the collar as shown in image

Good work tho, the pose is dynamic and the expression is good 👍

hollow hornet
raven frigate
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Yea sure

hollow hornet
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help ;-; (TW: FOR BLOOD/KNIFE)

cerulean eagle
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Who is Basil stabbing 😰

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The other advice pointed out most of it so my only thing to say is maybe make the tears bigger the closer they are

hollow hornet
hollow hornet
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I did that originally but I think I went a bit overboard and it didn’t look as good. Will try it again though

hollow hornet