PLES HELP

[crimson plinth]

PLEASE HELP iv been renewing and drawing for ages i dont know whats wrong w it but it feels so wrong sobsob PLS GIVE ME TIPS THANS

[torpid zinc]

I think it might be the eyes that need a lil tweaking other than that it looks amazing to fix the eyes I'd say bring them abit closer and make them a lil big bigger might solve it

[native cliff]

try defining the nose some more

[slender void]

Mb the issue is that he looks kinda young (pretty sure dude’s in his 30s), try defining features and making them more harsh e.i. the nose or eyebrow

[crimson plinth]

dude can be in his 50s and id still bend over for him 🙏

anyways is it okay if you give me an example? I dont really know how to define things like that bc this is my first time drawing men and im scared to mess it up 😭 ❗

[crimson plinth]

ok i did that!! i brought it a little bit close but i didnt make them too big because i associate big eyes w youth and hes pretty old so yeah!!

i also defined the nose but im not sure if you can see it 😭 sorry

[torpid zinc]

It's looking really good

[slender void]

lol I could try explaing but Im not good at it! What I mean by "defining" (i.e. the jawline) is making the contour of it darker and/or sharper. Like in the pic of Toji you can see his jaw is very angular, sorta like a trapezoid. Overall his face has sharp edges everywhere they could even be

if you want to make him look older you can also try changing the general proportions, I could sketch it out roughly on my phone if u'd like