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[dense ruin]

it looks nice

are you looking for critique?

[lofty swan]

i always assumed posting here means wanting critique, so if you don't im sorry then
the body proportions are wrong- chest is not in the right direction, think of how ribs would stand in such position; left hand is too masive and doesnt sit right, the curve is not really standing correctly; the eyes are too small
overall i would think of this pose - look up posemaker online and see for yourself how it would look correctly

[thick tapir]

Kinda feel like that was kinda harsh and not 100% accurate, the character might just have smaller eyes for 1, the chest looks a little off but not too much it’s very simple fix if you ask me

Here’s how I would edit it, really super easy fixes, I tucked the back arm in a bit because it was a bit wide for her physique, I also slimmed the front arm. If your going to do the below chin black shadow I’d say just commit and do it all the way to the edge. I used liquify to bring up the shoulders. And I used a multiply layer to add shadow to the booba. I also made the hair a bit bigger this tho is just my personal preference, and for arguments sake I made the eyes slightly bigger.

[olive lance]

Ik the pose makes her shoulders pull foreword a lil but the back one is a lil too foreward and could be pushed back the slightest bit. Other than that it looks wonderful (I love ur art sm I stg is so dnedidmeenfeid )

[lofty swan]

i don’t think i was harsh, the character with your fixes don’t look anatomically correct anyway

so it still would need some fixes, that’s why i recommended posemaker
no idea what’s harsh in it

[thick tapir]

The way you give critique could be much nicer put, your just coming off as really rude..

[lofty swan]

so tell me what i said wrong in my og comment

[lofty swan]

exactly

[dense ruin]

👍

[compact valve]

For me the only real problem is the shoulder

Let me explain

[coarse prawn]

She didn't actually look to post in the critique chat, she's still learning how to use Discord aaa