Roast this i need rough critics specially on lightning and perspective. Took 7h.

[dry edge]

i will check tomorrow now i have a terirble headache from sitting 7h drawing that (ihad nothing better to do and just hyperfocused) it has noise filter, original canvas 3000x3000 might look pixelated idk how much discord can take

[coral herald]

Maybe make the lighting more exaggerated, and the balls closer to the light brighter (since the shading makes the balls look like they’re the same amount of distance from the glowing/shining eye) , and shadows the the face darker (like behind the hair? The eye lids) or shadows in general, there should be more gray values and be distinct

[dry edge]

Thank you!!