How can I improve this design?

[unborn bane]

the design looks so good

maybe u could add more sharp edges (like the shoulder pads) and some details on the sword (on the handle especially)

besides that i think design is gorgeous

[dull drift]

For the "no lineart" art style, it's perfect.

[jade moss]

Tysm!!! Yess ill def add those! I think that will add more harmony to it!

Youre so sweet ty again!