#denme una crítica constructiva/give me constructive criticism
quiet stone
mild ledge
what program do u use?
cobalt bronze
Try working on your lines, don't chicken scratch and make sure its consistent
Maybe also, actually draw the hand next time
quiet stone
what program do u use?
Ibis paint X
quiet stone
Try working on your lines, don't chicken scratch and make sure its consistent
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it's a sketch not the lineart
pliant stag
the pose looks a bit stiff as it is rn. it could be a bit more dynamic. i twisted her body a bit so her face is facing front while her body is facing to the side.
her hairline is a bit too high so i also lowered it just a bit. just for the overall composition to flow better, i made her flow to just one side too.
it would also help if you added more creases to the coat.
avoid the tangent line on her right arm (our left). it would be better to hide her arm so it does not converge with the line of her coat or to stick it out even more
i am not very good at explaining but thats as clear as i can get rn. i hope it helps!
quiet stone
i am not very good at explaining but thats as clear as i can get rn. i hope it h...
OMG thank you very much for your review. I appreciate it so much.
pliant stag
OMG thank you very much for your review. I appreciate it so much.
anytime! glad i could help
broken mason
the hand tho 😭
honestly seeing a copy and paste hand feels worse than seeing an honest attempt at drawing a hand
maybe slightly better if you traced it but still, you wont get better if you dont face defeat at the hands of... hands
quiet stone
maybe slightly better if you traced it but still, you wont get better if you don...
Man, calm down a bit
broken mason
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cobalt bronze
slime didnt do anything tho