Roast my sketch

[noble wyvern]

Critique it aldo

[tacit nexus]

IT'S TOO BEAUTIFUL TO BEEN ROASTED HELP

[grand quest]

ooh this is super pretty

i think the arm on our right looks a little too thick to match the arm on the left

and its a little confusing where the body starts and ends horizontally

though thatll prob be clearer when ya line it

[quiet hollow]

Tiny pinky

[noble wyvern]

Tysm

[grand quest]

np! its a really nice drawing, i love how you drew her face its super cute

[sly crescent]

i think the wings are a bit off

like one is lower than the other

the hand is a bit hard to read so far but i think it looks nice overall

[vivid vigil]

I think the wings need to be a bit bigger and its positioning looks a bit off??

Like the wings dont look aligned to each other

[noble wyvern]

It should look drawn on like a pic

[blissful hemlock]

woww amazing art!!

[sly crescent]

have u considered this then

[vivid vigil]

Ohk gotchu

[noble wyvern]

i think a sharper design for them fits the concept better imoooo