I need help to remake this it's my oc it's just because I can't draw

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so what do you want critique on?

[crude horizon]

What is a critique

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you posted this in the critique forum?

[crude horizon]

I was told that some people can help you remake stuff like art

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that's not what critique is, critique is constructive feedback given to somebody to help them improve

[crude horizon]

Oh

My bad

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allg