#artist-lounge

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sullen juniper
limber harbor
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What’s play dirt?

sullen juniper
limber harbor
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Oh

sullen juniper
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kinda looks like chicken rn

limber harbor
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Clay?

sullen juniper
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ye

limber harbor
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Looks good so far

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The last time I used clay I made a cursed artefact

sullen juniper
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tho i gotta let it rest rn

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too wet rn

formal temple
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i've never drawn large breastseseses before this is gonna be interesting

drowsy elm
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That's uh, not exactly kosher for the server

formal temple
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huh?

drowsy elm
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you're going to want to hold off on posting your in-progress art until it's in a SFW state

formal temple
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interesting

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the censor bar on it was more censoring than some of the "sfw state" artwork posted here but yeah suppose i'll do that then lol

drowsy elm
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censor bar wasn't really doing it any favours, if we allowed simple censors like that everybody would be posting porn on the server

formal temple
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sounds like a good time to me, but ye I get it. gonna repost later once i gain the motivation to sketch more detailed bathingsuit ig

drowsy elm
formal temple
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||(ppst, anybody here have a better discord spot for sharing art? dm's are open)||

analog merlin
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Grave Subtraction for the Fettered Mind

ripe olive
languid light
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So if I’m understanding correctly, our drawing can either be beach themed or summer festival themed ?

forest talon
scarlet crest
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how do people do lineart without wanting to sudoku? EssexCry

lucid talon
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we dont

scarlet crest
lucid talon
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||also it's seppuku||

hardy solar
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Final Mnei

cedar temple
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since HMS Enty got revealed, I'd might as well show my Star Trek art

limber harbor
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Hms entry?

sinful reef
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azur lane cm

limber harbor
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Oh

sinful reef
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now we got a british enty

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that's even worse

limber harbor
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What does this enty like lemon slices and bad dental hygiene?

limber harbor
sinful reef
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enty

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i don't mean the art..i meant the ship has been reveald

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to clarify

limber harbor
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No I just thought you where comparing long island to British enty lol

sinful reef
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no

limber harbor
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Is it an actual HMS?

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Enterprise I don't play a lot of Azur lane

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I just draw a lot of art for it, since I got Bismarck I stopped playing

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Also

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What's a cm?

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Azur lane cm?

sinful reef
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go to general and scroll up a bit

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oh sorry..i meant " CN" china

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my bad

limber harbor
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oh that makes more sense now

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Your all good

strong raptor
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baiken

fervent cliff
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Rice shower

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I set the background too dark

cedar temple
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it's my OC but wearing the Mirror Universe Starfleet uniform

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funny how 1967 society saw that as "borderline ero" when it's just "normal ecchi" nowadays

stiff mesa
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i rlly like it

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especially the tummy

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wait, i mean abs

unique flame
uneven lake
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Ello ppl from alo im lobo and im an artist AmagiLaugh

tiny moon
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hello an artist

uneven lake
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Glowow nice to meet ya all

limber harbor
sly berry
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taking care of a fiend
drew Akashi to keep him distracted

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the aftermath

kind warren
ripe olive
half ferry
fervent cliff
warm ingot
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stuff for friday foxrotate

lucid talon
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Segs

forest talon
obtuse mountain
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Hey guys, I just finish up a new Commission Work for this month. Enjoy.

unique flame
stiff mesa
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is that a cathedral

tranquil wing
short lichen
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WIP entry for the contest

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I think the shading will be the death of me

untold crypt
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@willow kelp

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Welcome Glowow

willow kelp
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Thank you

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Now let's post the art here one more time

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Breh. I can only use slash command

quiet monolith
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you need the lil artist role

willow kelp
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Ok

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There we go

untold crypt
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rip

orchid laurel
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LaffeyStare six fanarts #1, wip

untold crypt
unique flame
honest flume
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Progress

little tiger
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Been ages since i post here. My wip for indomitable

potent orbit
honest flume
limber harbor
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Background is nearly done

honest flume
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Nice

fervent cliff
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Matikane Tannhauser

native furnace
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AL JP 5th anni contest

quiet monolith
fervent cliff
little tiger
stiff mesa
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Can i have tips, what i need to retraining first after a very long hiatus from drawings

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Im very clueless where to starts of first, perhaps the basic of lines and shapes?

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Im a person who draws varieties of things other than anime tiddies too

uneven lake
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Why not start with the basics again? like some gesture exercises for example? AmagiLaugh

stiff mesa
uneven lake
short lichen
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Your Long Island art is looking great too

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Extra comfy

little tiger
stiff mesa
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good idea

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tqvm

untold crypt
native furnace
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New one

stiff mesa
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yama class

fervent cliff
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Rice Shower

native furnace
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Its yamato

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Ill make musashi next

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Also indy chan

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I need to not make as many tho. Need to do AL contest and I've got enough work as is

honest flume
honest flume
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My brain goes

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INDY CHAN KAWAAIII

little tiger
unique flame
hardy solar
warm ingot
untold crypt
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.

warm ingot
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My oc that ive been posting every friday TsutsuPeek

untold crypt
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Carry on, then

half ferry
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🐴

scarlet crest
untold crypt
scarlet crest
fervent cliff
fervent cliff
half ferry
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No

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wait

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I'm sorry

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Sike

ripe olive
scarlet crest
honest flume
fervent cliff
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Thicc

half ferry
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Holy

stiff mesa
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that looks hella clean

uneven lake
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thats indeed very clean lineart AmagiLaugh

honest flume
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Thank you

stiff mesa
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in simple term

honest flume
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Pain

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Well in this case

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Not much pain

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The office is pretty plain and simple

stiff mesa
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Well now my exam is over, imma tey to draw smth today

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after got back from a wedding

honest flume
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Nice

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Oya

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Wedding

stiff mesa
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Hmm, based on your finished lineart. i can see you didnt focus that much on lining depth

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Not a pro to judge, just wondering

honest flume
honest flume
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After finishing lighting and shading

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Plus all the filters and what not

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Gonna need to redraw some of the lines

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To solidify the figure

scarlet crest
stiff mesa
minor verge
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Finally got the basic shapes (probably

half ferry
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Ibuki and...?

minor verge
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Guess, the other girl with same eye color with Ibuki

quiet monolith
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ayo

half ferry
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huh?

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Not an AL character?

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wait

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It's not...

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Elbing... is it?

minor verge
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Elbingggggggggg

half ferry
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So it is

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oh dear lord

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Two heterochromia girls with two big booba

minor verge
half ferry
quiet monolith
minor verge
half ferry
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oh

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I hope this becomes an ingame loading screen

quiet monolith
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i am working on smth as well but i prolly need to do a bit more before I show smth lol. nothing crazy HelenaWink

fervent cliff
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I don't think i can do some for the contest

quiet monolith
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do it if you find it fun but don't force yourself

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this is prolly my best opportunity to take part since idk if I'll have time again in the future, and it's smth I wanted to do at least once

fervent cliff
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im going to finish my rice shower drawing first

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there's a lot of time i think

forest talon
obtuse mountain
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Alright, I just done one of the merchandize work on Chibi Keychain with Rider Girl Saber. Still got another one coming soon. Enjoy.

half ferry
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Red

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with fire

obtuse mountain
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Yup

half ferry
obtuse mountain
tiny moon
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so the extra 20px bleedline for contest already including the canvas resolution right?

native furnace
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Attaching rigging wire

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Jesus

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Its thin

hardy basalt
tidal pine
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this is rather... enticing Fumizoomi

scarlet crest
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tried to add nj to my thing, i wanted to draw her with a smaller swimsuit but idk if that's a good idea

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also I think her leg looks weird but idk how to fix it UniCry

tidal pine
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you could make nj lifting her feet up to the camera
or make it symmetrical as her left

scarlet crest
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i thought about that but i really dont wanna draw feet UniHurt

tidal pine
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i suppose the latter option WarZoom

untold crypt
honest flume
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Nice

quiet monolith
fervent cliff
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Hors

stiff mesa
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Idk if this is even a good product, i bought the set cuz i've ran out of drawing pen

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Oops, its not the front cover lol

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its 0.03 until 2.0 tip Glowow

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2.0 is a brush, thats a plus Glowow

languid light
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Oh yeah the brush is amazing

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Only problem is dry time

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They take a millennium to dry BacheScared

stiff mesa
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this was be being bored in class

languid light
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How does one use calligraphy pen

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I can’t get them to work BuckyPrideZoom

stiff mesa
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its always the tip angling for calligraphy pen. but for brushes, its the pressure

languid light
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my pen must be defective then

stiff mesa
languid light
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I lost it but like

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yeah

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it didn’t do the calligraphy thing

stiff mesa
languid light
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nono it was like an actual calligraphy pen

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With the metal tip

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This type

stiff mesa
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oh boy

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its the inking pen

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yeah, that is also pressure factor

stiff mesa
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it looks horrible than usual tho LeanderXD

languid light
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Smooth

stiff mesa
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its 12am alr

languid light
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It looks good imo

stiff mesa
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lemme yoink my sister's brush pen for a moment

languid light
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Looks like writing that would be in some Royal scroll

stiff mesa
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you see, even in calligraphy there tons of fonts type for it

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and that one is my style of calligraphy

languid light
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Oh yeah like the calligraphy logo compilations

stiff mesa
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you can see the 'i' is different than the normal calligraphy you've seen

oak star
stiff mesa
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@languid light LeanderXD

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ngl, talked bout calligraphy earlier gave me the mood

stiff mesa
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did smth earlier HoodSmug

unique flame
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wip

plush knot
native furnace
vocal brook
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I drew waggy saggy

quiet monolith
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funny fish

honest flume
maiden oak
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looking great ngl

honest flume
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Thanks

worthy pine
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Raiden Aye

vocal brook
sly berry
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made a long time ago

fervent cliff
stiff mesa
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This proven that i....am very very rusty

sullen juniper
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Nomitter turned to rust

fallow heath
stiff mesa
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agree

untold crypt
fallow heath
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How is this?

sly berry
untold crypt
fallow heath
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Will note in the future then

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Though the tomcats being black have reminded people of a certain squadron

untold crypt
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it's not the livery I'm talking about, it's the blueness from the atmosphere

limber harbor
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Probably the cleanest line art I’ve done lol

silver briar
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I did an art.

languid light
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sketch

sullen juniper
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@languid light my, just who us this cutie on the rightDorkHeart. 12/10 pats.

orchid laurel
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drew myself again cuz y not AmagiLaugh

hardy solar
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Fin

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Pain

coral sky
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That's nicely done hair shape imo

hardy solar
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thank you

limber harbor
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48 hours later and I’m done

native furnace
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I still need a small scissors to trim the rigging

half ferry
little tiger
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commission wip, mama formi

calm karma
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Qipao Finally done

lucid talon
normal scroll
normal scroll
frank cradle
limber harbor
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I probably would loose but hey I’m doing it for fun, this is my submission for the art contest

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There wasn’t any skins with rossiya in a swimsuit so I made one for her, using aspects of her uniform as well as other swimsuit designs, what do you think?

limber harbor
limber harbor
unique flame
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wip

native furnace
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Arleigh burke class

half ferry
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Yes

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DDG being built

half ferry
native furnace
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No not this one

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Ill make jsdf izumo sometimes soon

half ferry
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ah, I hope to see more

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keep it up

little tiger
native furnace
fervent cliff
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Hors Helena

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Again

sinful reef
fervent cliff
sinful reef
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Looks neat

fervent cliff
fervent cliff
stiff mesa
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looks nice

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and detailed

sinful reef
fervent cliff
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I forgor Tannhauser's tail

potent orbit
sullen juniper
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hmmm. i hope i'll manage to finish it satisfyingly for me

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a bit whack still on the left eye area

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gotta drop it down a bit

sullen juniper
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maybe like this?

half ferry
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🐴

sullen juniper
fervent cliff
strong raptor
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vtuber wip

little tiger
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Went crazy with grayscale, its fun. 😋

native furnace
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i bought akagi

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that thing is going 230-270usd elsewhere before shipping + taxes on the international market

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so might as well take it at local price for cheaper

honest flume
native furnace
verbal sequoia
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More super cute Ultraman Kaiju Girls WIP.

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Jirass-Chan” (AKA Recolor Godzilla)

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Memole-Chan

limber harbor
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Nice

minor verge
limber harbor
obtuse mountain
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Just finish the Line Art for Rider Girl Revi & Vice Chibi for future merch. Stay tuned for the Full Colour Version

stiff mesa
little tiger
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Now idk how to turn it into colour. 🥲

limber harbor
limber harbor
limber harbor
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Did. Little fix on rossiya’s shorts cause someone thought she was a guy

obtuse mountain
kind warren
stiff mesa
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Kitty

minor verge
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Heterochromia and booba

obtuse pewter
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:Amagiheart:

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Haha, nice Discord

kind warren
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Most of the research results we would look at her navel. So I used that attraction

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So I enlarged the picture

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BUKI STOKS

verbal sequoia
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Gyeron-Chan

limber harbor
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Does anyone know where the art competition submissions end?

forest talon
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July 27th iirc

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dang I haven't even done anything

limber harbor
forest talon
little tiger
haughty tinsel
stiff mesa
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An example of "editing" in my textbook and i hate it....i hate how bad it is, i had to redraw it myself to get satisfied & not to throw my book

unique flame
limber harbor
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Should I put a manjuu in the corner in floating being tipped over?

potent orbit
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base stuff

sullen juniper
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@stiff mesa that ?kaga? on the finger looks real nice

split mica
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Does she get thicker every week?

warm ingot
half ferry
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Pixiv?

warm ingot
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though, i try to stay around the ones from 2 or 3 weeks ago SpeeBurger

minor verge
half ferry
stiff mesa
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bob got standard EntyLUL

scarlet crest
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i need to find a better way to color hair UniCry

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should i slim down nj a bit? UniHurt

golden anvil
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NJ looks fine

fervent cliff
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Nice Helena art

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Goldship

little tiger
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But, you can still improve it by adding some colour to hair to make it more shiny.

scarlet crest
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ya my hair is super bland, i need to find a good tutorial for coloring

little tiger
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Imho add some colour on it, since its blue it will look good with purple and green for ambient light? Idk whats its called

forest talon
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complementary colors? Glowow

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the thing is even if you get how the theory works in mind, sometimes its still hard to pull it off in the canvas NotLikeAtago

forest talon
warm ingot
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yeah I used to do 2 a week but then I felt like I ended up rushing more than I wanted tofoxcopter

scarlet crest
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idk any color theory, sounds like i gotta search it up z35wow

half ferry
half ferry
fervent cliff
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Hors?

half ferry
fervent cliff
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Non't

half ferry
little tiger
fervent cliff
maiden temple
ripe olive
vocal brook
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Sumireko profile picture DorkHeart

obtuse mountain
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Hey guys, I have finally done with Rider Girl Revi & Vice Chibi (more like Semi Chibi). Enjoy.

limber harbor
short lichen
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It's my first time shading a tummy

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Hope it looks alright

vocal brook
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Tummy!

limber harbor
fervent cliff
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Line art done

limber harbor
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Nice! Looks clean too, keep it up @fervent cliff

fervent cliff
native furnace
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Akagi hull

half ferry
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Gray paint

warm ingot
quiet monolith
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mofu mofu

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how'd you make the background

warm ingot
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The desk + stuff was a free 3d asset i just lined over and colored up

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The background was a photo from google with a bit of white soft spray near the outer half, and a lot of blurring to fake an out of focus look (more blur towards the far corner of the room)

fervent cliff
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Floof

lucid talon
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mOFU

stiff mesa
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your character do have the strongest skeletal structure out of all living creature here EntyLUL

lucid talon
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built different

warm ingot
noble pecan
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is the character and the table perspective look fine or nah

maiden temple
frail maple
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hey, i have an art from another artist that im wondering if someone would like to do another take on. just wondering if someone would like to give it a try, let me know if you are

little tiger
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Is she both aircraft carrier and bb?

snow sigil
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ye, thats USS Kearsarge, a Hybrid BB Concept planned in 1937 that was never realised. (Kearsarge is only the name wows gave her, she was planned under the name "ship X")

shell cypress
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Why does that sound more like a German type ships than a US type there

limber harbor
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I fix the shading a bit so now she doesn’t look sun burnt

stiff mesa
snow sigil
stiff mesa
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oooo

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that book looks very interesting

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guess it'll soon be my collection for my bookshelf

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lets see if its sells in my country

tidal pine
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might happen to have it in kinokuniya DunktsukiStare

fervent cliff
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You booli hors

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Now

sinful reef
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no

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combustion engine forever

frail maple
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hey, thanks for getting back to me. apologies, I was asleep by then

I just think she's a really cool concept, I've got a story in the works focused on her

heavy dagger
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Damn

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I can’t post art

jovial inlet
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you need to apply for artist role to post images here

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"Lil Artist" role will do too

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not a shipgirl but I made a schoolgirl fischl

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I'll just pretend her new skin doesn't exist yet

limber harbor
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I just feel like something wrong with the coat shading I did,is there something I can add to it to improve the coat?

heavy dagger
limber harbor
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Bot*

heavy dagger
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I see

limber harbor
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Give me a sec

heavy dagger
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What da command?

limber harbor
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I don’t remember how to do this cause it’s been awhile since I did it

heavy dagger
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Ok

untold crypt
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This is a short story i wrote involving Bismarck and Tirpitz inspired but this picture, hope you all enjoy this short read:

Her vision was getting dark as her body sank, so this is what dying felt like ? she always thought death would be painful and swift.....this death however she oddly welcomed as she continued to sink. Though as her vision grew darker and she felt the cold jaws of death starting to close on her she felt a warm touch on the side of her face, weakly opening her eyes she would be shocked to see the blue eyes of her sister Tirpitz who appeared to have jumped in after seeing her start to sink. Though she was dying she was conscious enough to see her was trying to raise her and save her, but both knew this was impossible as she was already dying and Tirpitz would drown if she tried to save her from this depth. Weakly looking at her sister she made her look at her as she gently shook her head trying to tell her to leave her and save herself, Tirpitz was still adamant about saving her and the look her sister gave her only served to make her try harder with the desperation clear from her movements.

this however doomed Tirpitz aswell as she found herself having grown exhausted from her attempts, so much so that even if she were to leave her sister now she would drown before she reached the surface. Bismarck knew this aswell as the two sisters looked at each other both knowing they would not survive this, knowing this the two sisters held each other as the cold jaws of death now started to close around them both, yet despite this the two were calm and welcomed death as they held onto each other even as the darkness took them.

limber harbor
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It’s /role little artist

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On bot spam

heavy dagger
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Ok thanks

limber harbor
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If you want more information about it

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Go to al art

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Check the pins

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And on the very bottom under the rules

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There should be a step by step guide to gettin the role

limber harbor
untold crypt
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No self assignable role found that matches criteria.

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i do apologize if there are grammatical mistakes in the short story

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nice

heavy dagger
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Welp I did it i think

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Anyways my character design

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Alter of this orginal

heavy dagger
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Yeah

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I suck at faces

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Which is odd cuz my old GFL fanart had pretty decent eyes

untold crypt
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glad you liked it

kind warren
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I drew this for only 30 minutes

hardy solar
# limber harbor

Maybe add more contrast? Darker @ darks like the inside of the coat where it folds back

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There was a shading method I remember I saw somewhere where it's like slap a swath of dark airbrush (as a basic way to conceptualize the light source/shadow) then carve out the parts where the light hits edges n surfaces n stuff

untold crypt
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if you could decide how the story ended how would you have made it end ?

untold crypt
limber harbor
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Just got the hair, water guns and other shading to do and I should be moving on to the line art portion

quiet monolith
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was this for the art contest? you'll wanna pay attention to the aspect ratio if so HelenaPeek

limber harbor
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Do I need to make the canvas bigger?

quiet monolith
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be sure to check the rules

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number 3 is what I'm referring to

limber harbor
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Oh

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How do I do that?

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Ibis won't let me do that

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I have to start from scratch again don't I?

quiet monolith
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are you not able to resize the canvas?

limber harbor
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The max I can do for Ibis is

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4069

quiet monolith
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o

calm karma
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Ibis doesn't allow past 4k

limber harbor
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Ah.....

calm karma
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At least phone Ibis, not sure about the rest

quiet monolith
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if you have to use ibis to draw, the best solution I can think is to match the aspect ratio, and upscale it afterwards

limber harbor
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Well the best match I can do is 4096 X 3240

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I cannot increase the width any further

quiet monolith
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the aspect ratio is 16:9

calm karma
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He meant have the same ratio but a smaller canvas overall and upscale when you're done

quiet monolith
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4096 x 2304 is what you'll be working with I believe

limber harbor
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Yeah that can work

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But I don't know much about aspect ratios and all that

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I just stick with my usual

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I'm sorry

calm karma
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U draw on tablet or phone btw?

limber harbor
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iPad

calm karma
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Ah

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Cool

limber harbor
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And if this requires a PC I don't have one

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I’m left with this

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If we are going by the

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4069 by 2304

quiet monolith
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have you tried logging into the competition website on mobile

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if you were able to do that you can probably still submit smth

limber harbor
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I don’t have a ox though I can access it through mobile

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Pc*

quiet monolith
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the expected aspect ratio is pretty wide, it's not one I've really done much with before lol

limber harbor
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I know

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The canvas size is slowing down the performance of ibis rn

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I should really consider getting clip

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I might be able to fix it by applying a background as well as a extension to her coat

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This extra space can also allow me to make another character in it

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But I think I will have to do a seperate one for that then apply it to this canvas

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The problem here is the angle I chose for Rossiya

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She is on her diagonal angle sort of

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I tried to bypass ibis's canvas limit by getting on the submissions and then importing it into a canvas but it just made it smaller

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My username has never fit into a situation so well until now

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Still Gona finish it

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Might as well

quiet monolith
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good luck HelenaPlease

limber harbor
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Thank you

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Man my luck with these competitions are terrible lol

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What are we gonna do about it, at least I had fun with it

forest talon
quiet monolith
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I think so

forest talon
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ok thanks 👍

little tiger
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ina's back, been trying to do the colour first then the lineart.

potent orbit
noble pecan
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is this face fine

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really need some advices

potent orbit
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Yeah id say so, main thing wrong would be the left eye, moving the pupil to the right a bit should fix it tho

pseudo atlas
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Help!
Any idea why this happens? I can't click submit

formal temple
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Hard to tell without knowing any details

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Is the file too big? Not the right dimensions?

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Forgot a title?

pseudo atlas
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All requirements were met, File is less than 10 MB
And link to the social media
But it's still like this
Edit: I am finally able to submit my work, thanks

stiff mesa
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ask mods

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you can

coral sky
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Unfortunately I don't know that form well sadly

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Only real advice I can give is double check all your fields cos I gotten tripped by accidentally missing little things before

dry pumice
verbal sequoia
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I do not approve of her being topless. If it wasn’t for that, I’d like this.

verbal sequoia
languid light
little tiger
scarlet crest
forest talon
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Arknights chara Glowow

elfin prism
maiden temple
noble pecan
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can someone help me with the second hand

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like i cant imagine how it holing the stick

sullen juniper
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by making a fist i guess? easiest way would be you posing like that with a stick in hand and making a picture of the mirror

kind warren
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I don't know what to draw

sullen juniper
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Javsette?

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or is it bukisette

limber harbor
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Nearly done

lucid talon
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Looks like baiken

ripe olive
untold crypt
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wip
drawing hair is so painful

quiet monolith
tiny moon
swift nest
maiden temple
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Twitter @Aldifen37
Pixiv bigbox21

fervent cliff
ripe olive
tiny moon
calm karma
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Proof of concept sketch to mess with my friend

fervent cliff
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Now imma sloop

quiet monolith
untold crypt
half ferry
split mica
ripe olive
short lichen
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All of their skin shading looks a bit different from each other I think

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Guess that's something I'll improve on with practice

coral sky
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Still looks pretty good I'd say
And yeah practice make better

lucid talon
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I think the eyes should be moved down just a little bit

stiff mesa
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NJ's is fine, gotta do that to nc and washin

short lichen
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I'll see what I can do

sick ocean
honest flume
fervent cliff
maiden temple
maiden temple
forest talon
honest flume
honest flume
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I needed to fit jean somehow

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So uhh

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Yeah

forest talon
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don't worry it can be just me with my degenerate thought Ehhssex

honest flume
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Ecchi

limber harbor
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Up to line art now

obtuse mountain
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Currently working on Genshin Impact Summer Fanart. Stay tuned for the Full Colour Version

short lichen
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I could try to fix it but it would look very messy

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I'm just gonna have to leave it like it is

limber harbor
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Is this for the competition viper?

short lichen
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I'll try to improve my face proportions in future

short lichen
limber harbor
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Keep it up

short lichen
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Thank you!

limber harbor
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I was going to join the competition with my rossiya but ibis max canvas size couldn’t go pass 4069

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So I wish you the best of luck

short lichen
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That's a shame about the canvas size

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Thank you though!

untold crypt
limber harbor
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I was going to

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But again

untold crypt
limber harbor
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Ibis just won't let me

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Ayyyyy it's looking beautiful!

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Love how you did the shading and the islands at the back just bring it all together

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Keep it up (I'm assuming this is for the competition so I wish you the best of luck)

sullen juniper
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all those ppl wipping around and then wipping good looking pics

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mymymy

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i wish my wips were as good

quiet monolith
oak star
verbal sequoia
sturdy forge
maiden temple
untold crypt
hardy solar
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Foreground render done

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Hahaha time to rig the background

lucid talon
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rig?

hardy solar
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Set up n finalize it

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Plus I got to actually draw her rigging so

velvet folio
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some nj wip~

forest talon
muted slate
honest flume
forest talon
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I mean I like to draw pits.. too Glowow

velvet folio
fervent cliff
analog merlin
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Hyperburst Technology's Looking for Part Time Employee Pay Rate $11.50 an Hour

rain yacht
languid light
light flint
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like ribs visible, hasnt eaten in a week

warm ingot
light flint
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we have only seen the mofu extreme, we must also see the least mofu

half ferry
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@minor verge so... uh how is it looking with Ibuki and Elbing?

minor verge
minor verge
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Lol yes?BuckyStare

half ferry
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damn this art slaps

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Hoooo

minor verge
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Don’t get hopes up, my coloring is absolutely terrible, if anything goes wrong I might give up drawing this lol

half ferry
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No don't

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It too precious

minor verge
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I can try but can’t promise, this is the first time I m drawing beach HelenaPeek

half ferry
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I mean, this is the sunset one right?

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yeah

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that would be difficult

minor verge
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My progress is 30 min per day so you will see the result on the last day before submission ends Shybuki

half ferry
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how much progress do you think you made?

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in percentage

minor verge
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35

half ferry
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Blessex Keep trying

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I have hopes for you

quiet monolith
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your coloring is not terrible lol, looking forward to seeing the final thing HelenaPlease

honest flume
scarlet crest
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i've been thinking of getting an actual tablet for prime day, does anyone have any recommendations for a good one to get? UniHurt

minor verge
verbal sequoia
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Gan-Q from Ultraman made cute.

half ferry
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ooo

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that pose

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feels like I am getting oppressed @verbal sequoia

limber harbor
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Done

half ferry
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Hot

fervent cliff
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hors

sturdy forge
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Reupload cause changes

honest flume
north sky
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I had fun trying to figure out how jeans work ^^

stiff mesa
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bery bery nice work DorkHeart

split mica
analog merlin
maiden temple
analog merlin
maiden temple
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yeah thanks...i posted it on my pixiv

silver briar
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I made a ship.

half ferry
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Vibes of Star Wars

silver briar
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It is Star Wars, except a custom design for a series of short stories I am writing.

warm ingot
quiet monolith
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mofumofu

warm ingot
cyan ocean
fervent cliff
cyan ocean
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Kinda wanna change it from Joffre to a different girl lol

languid light
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To get that grainy look

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It would take a bit of color correction & blending but it works like a charm

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Was gonna draw event submission but artblock hit like a truck & I gotta work with training 2 new ratties PortDoll stuck with warmup sketches for now

short lichen
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Hair shading next

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Which I struggle with

warm ingot
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all i got is she is short and stacked

sinful reef
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first time animating

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looks bad i know...but at least i tried

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any tips how i can imporove?

sullen juniper
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i guess work with layers so that you can see the previous frame

sinful reef
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Onion layers

formal temple
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It would look better if you had more of the “splat” gram like the full movement of it flattening against the ground

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Instead of just one frame

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If you add a frame before and after one of the ball right before it hits the ground slightly less rounded before it makes impact

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And then one after that impact that’s even less rounded than the current last frame

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It’ll look bounce fall look less choppy

sinful reef
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I'll try

obtuse mountain
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Hey guys, I have finally done with the Genshin Impact Summer Fanart with Mona, Keqing and Ayaka. Enjoy.

maiden temple
potent orbit
sinful reef
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Ina?

untold crypt
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Latest mini story i wrote

She kept running as the horde was right behind her, by her side was Graf Zeppelin with Zeppy in her arms, they were hoping to make it back to their bunker quickly before the horde caught up to them. As Tirpitz ran she turned around to see how close the horde was, what she saw however made her heart stop and her blood turn to ice.....

Among the horde was Bismarck her uniform torn in several areas showing cuts and bite marks, some of the flesh on her mouth being torn off aswell. Tirpitz nearly fell over as she stared at her sister, Bismarck's eyes glowed a shade of orange just like the rest of the horde as she came closer moving with the horde "S-sister....." Tirpitz said as her body started to shake, the memories of her sister getting attacked flashing in her mind once again along with tears forming in her eyes. No response came from the corpse that was her sister.

Tirpitz was a few meters away from the horde as she was yanked by Graf Zeppelin, finally snapping back to reality Tirpitz started to run once again as she said in low tone "I'm sorry sister...." she would then reach for her gun and pause for a second taking aim and firing, the shot rang out as the bullet sailed through the air striking Bismarck in the head, Bismarck fell backwards onto the ground the light fading from her eyes. Tirpitz seeing this and confirming her sister was put to rest started to run once again catching up to Graf Zeppelin as they would just barely make it to the bunker with them closing the bulkhead shut.

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the inspiration for the story

fervent cliff
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Hmmm

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That image reminds me of a video game

potent orbit
untold crypt
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CoD zombies series ?
Zombie Army series ?

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also i do apologize for any grammatical errors i made

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and the random ending

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couldn't think of what else to add to the end

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any suggestions for a twist ending ot a proper ending ?

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or perhaps should i make a prequel to it ?

sinful reef
maiden temple
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More details are on pixiv

marble wolf
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sketch

kind warren
silver briar
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Welp, I think my human art level might have improved.

normal scroll
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Still here got new phone now all my work is gone and I probably will start again

normal scroll
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Why do I hear 115 playing

untold crypt
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lol

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but any critiques for the mini story i wrote ?

coral sky
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Main suggestion I'd make for you, War History, would be to try and draw eyes lower/draw more forehead

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Lemme

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I am not good at people either but something like this could help w/ face?

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@untold crypt very minor nitpick because I'm only skimming, but easy mistake to make
Try and stick with three dots for ellipsis like so "..."

sinful reef
coral sky
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I'm not good at people but one trick I learn for heads is to start with a circle then render face shape

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I absolutely need to practice more PortDoll

sinful reef
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i use that kinda

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helps me a bit

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a tiny bit

untold crypt
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So have it so there's "..." like say "Sister...?" ?

sinful reef
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it a minute

coral sky
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Yeah instead of doing like 5, 6 dots in an ellipsis try and keep to 3

analog mirage
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I also need to practice more

untold crypt
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And for the question mark have it so it's at the end of those three dots right ?

coral sky
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Ye

sinful reef
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animating is...difficult

analog mirage
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I'm finally developing a sort of 'anime' style I've been working for but i think I'm getting there

sinful reef
untold crypt
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Ah ok hmm also any suggestions for how the story should end if I make a continuation or a true ending for it ?

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As I kinda left it at the bulkhead being shut in time

coral sky
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I would say think about what type of ending you want
Do you want a downer ending? A hopeful ending?

untold crypt
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Hmm I'd say a mix of both

analog mirage
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bittersweet?

untold crypt
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The situation is grim but there's some light at the end of the tunnel no matter how weak said light is

coral sky
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Oh! Also use commas to break up clauses, they can make things a little easier to read
Also don't be afraid to break up sentences/vary sentence length

Like, pulling a sample from your text for where I'd add comma usage:

"Among the horde was Bismarck, her uniform torn on several areas to show cuts and bite marks, and some of the flesh on her mouth had been ripped off."

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Okay then maybe like
Talk a bit about how the situation looks
Think about where the hope at the end of the tunnel is from
Could kill off a character or two but have someone escape - might go with Tirpitz since she's your focus

untold crypt
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Hmm perhaps the grim part could come from the fact Tirpitz has to deal with the fact she shot her sister ?

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Or Graf Zeppelin is infected and Tirpitz gets away to safety with Zeppy ?

coral sky
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Yeah, that's absolutely a good place to explore emotions
Think about the relationship you want to portray between the sisters & how that affects Tirpitz

untold crypt
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As when I write about Graf Zeppelin and Zeppy I always write it as mother and daughter bond between the two

coral sky
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That also works too yeah

untold crypt
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Well Tirpitz and Bismarck never knew each other that much so I may have it so story wise Bismarck and Tirpitz met on very few occasions but those times were special between the two sisters

Perhaps have it so Tirpitz laments on how she should've spent more time with her older sister (I always have Bismarck as the older sister of the two) but her attention being drawn to the screams of Zeppy as her mother fall to the ground unconscious as a bite mark is revealed ?

coral sky
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Yeah that's a good start
Maybe an additional bit could be to explore how Tirpitz feels about the circumstances that prevented them from meeting before, now that hindsight is kicking in

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And how she heard about Bismarck's death if she'd learned about it before could be a fun one too
If they don't get to meet, she probably heard it secondhand

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If there's a lull in the adrenaline you could have her process seeing her undead sister

untold crypt
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Hmm perhaps those circumstances being work mostly on Bismarck's end keeping her occupied quite a bit

This could lead to Tirpitz blaming herself for not trying to drag her sister out of her obsession with her work

As for what you said hmm perhaps Prinz Eugen being the one who informed Tirpitz of the death of her sister ? With Bismarck being the last to leave the HQ as it was being swarmed making sure everyone else got out first and then when she was stuck she fought like a lion until the end ?

coral sky
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Yeah! Could work
Just in general, I feel like one of the things that really helps make writing compelling is the characters and their reactions
And if you've got connections between characters, that's all the better to play with

untold crypt
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Hmm but what do you think I should do about the Graf Zeppelin and Zeppy situation and Graf Zeppelin being infected?

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As the way I see Graf Zeppelin being bit was protecting her daughter Zeppy

coral sky
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Younger children with good parental relationships are often rather attached
It depends on how old you want to go for Zeppy being whether she'll fully understand
But she won't take it well
Could have Tirpitz dealing with this upset child and having to bundle her off to get ro a safer place

untold crypt
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Hmm I'd say Zeppy would be 8 maybe 9 at most

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And her seeing her mother fall unconscious to thr ground and seeing how bad the bite her mother said "I'll be fine" about would make her panic

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Especially considering the location of the bite mark would be on the left shoulder

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And for that story I'm going off the logic of the closer the bite is to the major blood vessels and heart/neck/head the faster it spreads