#artist-lounge

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valid flicker
halcyon herald
solar reef
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Korone's boyfriend

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Should I make her hold onigiri or taiyaki DunktsukiStare

halcyon herald
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takoyaki

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shit

solar reef
halcyon herald
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takaoyaki

solar reef
halcyon herald
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lets go

solar reef
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Noice pun

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Takoyaki huh

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Alright back to draw

soft moth
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This one I drew on my phone :

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Manjuu eating rice

oak star
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I have the biggest

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Greatest

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Story plot ever

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What if it's isekai

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No wait nvm

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This is a sfw discord

soft moth
oak star
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No wait I think it should be fine

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Isekai but we throw all the r18-tags in it while the mc rejects it with all his might and tried to make the world normal

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No r-18 stuff

light flint
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if the mc is male, its a horrible idea

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because no teenage male would say no to hot women

oak star
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The mc prefers a comfy long-lasting relationship where the boy and girl fell in love after being together for a long while.

light flint
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yeah so in that world he gets cucked daily

oak star
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Not really

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It's more of

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The goddess of the world tried to push him into h situations

light flint
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listen, any girl he goes after would be doing the r-18 stuff like the rest of them

oak star
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All of em

light flint
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ohhhh

halcyon herald
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i would

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bcuz it would be funny

light flint
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so the world isnt like that

halcyon herald
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and i will be alone forever

light flint
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the goddess is forcing it

oak star
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And he decide no

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This is not real relationship

light flint
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so zilf

solar reef
light flint
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you have made highschool of the dead, highschool dxd, etc etc etc, and then made it isekai

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you have ruined anime forever

oak star
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So like the girls will lust him but he's like ew, no.

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And each arc will be a specific genre

solar reef
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Heh

light flint
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no wait

solar reef
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What are you, yuuki rito?

halcyon herald
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is there an anime about a guy getting hit on but just flat out doesnt understand whats happening

light flint
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you have now taken every visual novel ever made

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and jsut plagiarized it

halcyon herald
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i think that'd be funny

solar reef
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Wait, rito is just shy

light flint
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zilf its better if its the opposite

oak star
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So like during a cuck arc he punched the scum woman back to her husband

solar reef
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Wow

light flint
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if he says yes to the situations and then gets cock-blocked by the universe

solar reef
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Assert kazuma on woman?

oak star
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Or if it's a scat arc he will try to bring the person to the nearest toilest

solar reef
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Wha-

oak star
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He will do everything to break the genre

solar reef
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If it's vanilla, he'll bring them to tragic arc?

oak star
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Yes

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Yes he will

solar reef
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Man

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Never ending game

halcyon herald
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scat ar

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c

solar reef
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Keep jumping left and right

oak star
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If he gained hypnosis power he would used it on himself as a buff and never use it on others

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@light flint you like NTR huh

halcyon herald
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Fetosh

valid flicker
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someone should make a game where it’s like
POV you are an isekai protag and your trying to avoid truck kun so you don’t get isekai-ed

halcyon herald
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Hm today i will watch anime for the first time

light flint
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no i dont zilf

halcyon herald
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its time to watch uziel chan wants to fuck around

light flint
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i was saying have him just about to get the good and then the universe is like "nope"

solar reef
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Zilf's nickname became questionable

oak star
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Basically the whole plot is trying to make the story remain sfw

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@light flint that's not amazing nowadays, it's a bit boring

light flint
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like he opens the door to his room and one of the girls is clad in lingerie on his bed, but then one of the demon lord's generals starts attacking at that exact moment

oak star
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Yeah it's boring

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It's overused

light flint
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and your idea of being moral isnt?

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cuz every vn is like that

solar reef
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I mean

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We play nsfw vn for

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Those contents

oak star
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I never said he was morally right

halcyon herald
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ew bad character design

solar reef
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those contents

halcyon herald
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imagine being not morally right

solar reef
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You know, to relief ourselves

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And fantasize

light flint
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"oh man theres this pretty girl that i really like, and she likes me, we both like each other, and fate has made it so we have to bang for plot reasons but im going to resist just like literally no other male my age would in this exact same situation"

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this is every vn ever

oak star
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in that situation he will kidnap the girl and put a chainsaw against her neck while feigning that he is a bad guy. Hitting her sometimes.

light flint
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thats why the nsfw vns have 4 hours of reading until you get one lewd image

solar reef
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Well, that went ryona real quick

oak star
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To escape

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No not that badly

solar reef
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Haha jokes on you

oak star
solar reef
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I skip the story

oak star
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Just light threatening

halcyon herald
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you're literally skipping the "game"

light flint
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zilf if you want to go crazy

solar reef
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Since most of them are boring

light flint
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make the world like shimoneta

halcyon herald
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when the fuck someone gonna make a vn with a gunfight scene or two

solar reef
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Unless it's really interesting

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Huh?

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Gunfire you say

light flint
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bag, vns are made to literally just take money

solar reef
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Dies irae

oak star
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Shimometa's whole plot iss about trying to being back loods

solar reef
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If I spell it right

light flint
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yes zilf

oak star
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This is the opposite

light flint
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bring the lewds back into a world where no one knows about sex

halcyon herald
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fuck.

solar reef
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Then there will be sox

light flint
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bag, a good vn isnt a vn, thats just called a game

halcyon herald
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imma need to make the 1st vn that has game section

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making it

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a game

light flint
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or bag

oak star
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No, those already exist @light flint

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Like

light flint
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just make a game

oak star
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Seriously

halcyon herald
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hmn

oak star
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Itnexists

light flint
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zilf

halcyon herald
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i am going to make

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War Thunder 2

oak star
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It's boring man

light flint
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a vn is a good story with pretty pictures

solar reef
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Make a vn that choices actually change most of the story

light flint
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but if we look at alot of rpg games, its a good story with pretty animations

oak star
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Fire, I know when a boring idea is boring

solar reef
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Some vn literally gave us meaningless choices

light flint
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vns are always trash because the good ideas are made into games

solar reef
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Like, why even bother giving a choice

oak star
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I prefer to call it illusion of choice

solar reef
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It didn't even lead to game over

light flint
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illusion of choice is great, if you let them choose whatever they want

solar reef
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That's even worse

oak star
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Deltarune's purpose for giving you choices is to show you that your choices doesn't matter

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And it runs on that

halcyon herald
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if u made a vn into a comic u could probably milk more money from it

light flint
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bag

solar reef
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Just make vn into personas

oak star
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At the last part of the day, you could move your soul around a cage

solar reef
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Start from 3

light flint
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ever wonder why light novels get made into manga first?

halcyon herald
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no

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fuck is a light novel

light flint
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its like you said

solar reef
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But, eh

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Light novel is more detailed

oak star
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Because manga is less strict on lewds?

light flint
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bag its what most manga and anime come from

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they are written books

solar reef
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Despite not having much pictures

halcyon herald
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thats just a book dawg

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the fukc.

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a novel

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if ur a 5th grader

light flint
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you make the light novel, make a manga from it to get alot of money, and then they milk it even more by making it lewd with a vn

halcyon herald
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a chapter book

ember yoke
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if not an anime/etc

light flint
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the good ones become animes

oak star
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I just don't like it man, I know people are supposed to self insert as the isekai character but the world building are so shit in these plots

halcyon herald
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you ever wonder why they didnt make medal of honor european assault into an anime

ember yoke
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for a certain sense of "good" (SAO... yeah right)

light flint
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then zilf

halcyon herald
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that theme is 💸

light flint
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dont insert

oak star
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In.the end isekai is what I would call a sfw hentai

light flint
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currently the kings of anime are ones where you cant insert

oak star
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It's not really deep

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@light flint you do realize what is popular for modern generation right?

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The most

solar reef
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Back when ppl make r18 content on vn to attracter players/readers

oak star
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It's SAO

light flint
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i realize whats great for one season zilf

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oh zilf

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sao isnt an insert

oak star
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It's the sad truth

solar reef
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Like Fate

light flint
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you cant insert as kirito

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because kirito was never normal

oak star
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What.

halcyon herald
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is it possible to make a funny story but still have emotional moments and a sad ending

solar reef
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Yeah

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Possible

ember yoke
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not strictly, but it is a power fantasy as Kirito's an ace that gets girls.

light flint
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remember that he was already a god at the game from the start

halcyon herald
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without seeming cliche

oak star
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Fire I am not sure if you are shitting me right now

light flint
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kirito was the top tier player at the start

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he wasnt some average joe

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he was a beta tester

oak star
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He was an average joe

ember yoke
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People don't want to read about someone JUST LIKE THEM usually.

light flint
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NO ZIFL

oak star
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Given some cheats

light flint
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YOU DIDNT PAY ATTENTION

oak star
light flint
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he got cheats at the END

solar reef
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He's like

light flint
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look at the other average joes there

oak star
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He have the personality of a grass

solar reef
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70+ lvl from the beginning?

light flint
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they did literal SHIT

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kirito knew everything about the first level boss from day one

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because he already beat it and went beyond before

oak star
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Lemme tell you this, SAO is just isekai said in a different way

light flint
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its not an insert because you say "man i could be kirito" its an insert because you say "i wish i was kirito"

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because you are already an average joe

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you want to get better

halcyon herald
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what if ur a below average joe

solar reef
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Isekai sao? Overlord, cautious hero, konosuba

oak star
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Dear ofh dear fire

solar reef
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The game type isekai

light flint
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thats why heroaca did so well

solar reef
ember yoke
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Easily the precursor to the modern popular formula (different setting, OP powers, girls nigh-dropping panties for ya)

oak star
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How could you hold such high hopes of sao

light flint
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"oh hes a normal person like me who gets powers. i wish i had powers"

oak star
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When the writer clearly wrote hentai of it.

light flint
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zilf SAO was great until the 2nd half of season 1

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and then after that it was kindof ok

oak star
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You gotta be shitting me

light flint
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zilf

solar reef
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Everything starts good

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That's why they got viewers

light flint
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you gotta look at it from an objective stnadpoint

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analyze the story

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there is a reason that SAO is the king of isekai

solar reef
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And fans

oak star
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It got a good story? YorkBruh

lunar swift
solar reef
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Oh

soft moth
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Hi Aria

solar reef
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I'll stop now

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Daddy mercy

soft moth
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I also drew this from my phone :

halcyon herald
soft moth
light flint
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go tell me why all these other "better than SAO" isekai dont have more seasons than SAO

soft moth
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Meowofficer chasing Manjuu

ember yoke
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Lowest common demonator

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Same reason why certain AL characters get way more art than others.

halcyon herald
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i liked battlefield bc2

oak star
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Because SAO is babies first anime and they will use that fact to make more money

light flint
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also aria we are talking about story ideas with zilf, so this is related to ontopic

ember yoke
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Next you'll say Twlight was great because it outsold other better stories.

halcyon herald
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never read twilight

light flint
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nono fish, SAO is still getting new seasons

halcyon herald
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romance books are stupid

solar reef
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Wwhats romance

halcyon herald
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imagine reading about sex and not just going out and trying to get sex

oak star
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Yes but that doesn't void it from being bad

light flint
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zilf

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if its bad, it doesnt sell

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that is the most basic fact of life

ember yoke
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Not true considering hte masses tend to have shit taste

oak star
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It sells because it's babies first anime

light flint
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but fish

halcyon herald
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fire

light flint
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look what you just said

solar reef
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I think is

halcyon herald
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you say if its bad it doesnt sell

lunar swift
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this has nothing to do with art

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dont steer off topic

halcyon herald
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have you ever seen fuckin essential oils and any frozen pizza thats not digiornos

oak star
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Itnhave something to do with writing

halcyon herald
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it all ass

solar reef
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Since they start good, attracted views and fans

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So some stayed for diff reasons

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But well

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I'll stop now

ember yoke
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with SAO it's more the current generation haven't seen better and it hit the right notes. There's some things I'd watch as guilty pleasure, but I can admit that "yeah it's shit" at the same time.

halcyon herald
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also the have you tried the quiznos lobster sandwich

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its ass

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but yet they bring it back every year

oak star
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But let's get back to writing

light flint
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anyway zilf, the point is, having an average joe insert invokes conflict with the reader if that character does anything the reader wouldnt do

solar reef
light flint
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but having an insert that is above the reader means that they will care less about stupid mistakes

lunar swift
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i feel like th ehand should be a little bigger

solar reef
soft moth
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Hey Aria

lunar swift
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just a little

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hi

oak star
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Slightly only

solar reef
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I'll adjust it

soft moth
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What do you think of my art? @lunar swift

lunar swift
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post

soft moth
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Manjuu eating rice

oak star
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Purin

lunar swift
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well

oak star
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Oj

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Oh

soft moth
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I drew it from my phone

light flint
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like zilf, having an insert thats generic enough that most people will relate means that their common sense should be the same

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and when inevitably it is not, the character is proclaimed trash

soft moth
light flint
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its why kazuma is an idiot for not jumping on the opportunity to marry darkness, and why kirito is unfortunate for not warning the noobs about the mimics

oak star
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I'm pretty sure trash story are due to trash story and not trash self insert

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Games design specialize in self insert stories.

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Kinda

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And hoo boy self inserts have absolutely no personality

light flint
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yes but no one wants to insert into themselves

oak star
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What

light flint
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its a self insert but you want to be the person

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its not you in the story

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you want to be the person in the story

oak star
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It's more of a replacement

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You want to replace the person

light flint
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no

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you want to be the person

oak star
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Not.you want to be the person

light flint
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listen bruh

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i would not want myself in any situation of a isekai

ember yoke
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Depends on the game, as with say Final Fantasy it's not so much a power fantasy, but seeing their struggle while with Persona there's more of an element of "self insert fantasy"

light flint
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but itd be awesome to be like kazuma or something

oak star
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Do you know why twilight is popular? Basically people want to impose their personality into the main character.

light flint
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imposing personality is a horrible idea

oak star
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That's how self insert works

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And that's why it sells

light flint
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no male on planet earth has ever wanted to be a character from twilight

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ever

solar reef
oak star
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Only female

light flint
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yes zilf

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because guess what

oak star
ember yoke
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But some women have wanted to be Bella on some level, and that's who Twilight is aimed at, contrasting say SAO (which is aimed at guys)

oak star
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Oooh

light flint
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every girl wants ripped men to constantly give them attention

oak star
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Burn

light flint
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but they dont want themselves to have guys

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they want to be bella

oak star
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Fire, no, Don't assume

light flint
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because bella fits the narrative

oak star
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She doesn't

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Trust me

light flint
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the reader almost certainly doesnt

oak star
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She really doesn't fit at all

light flint
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zilf you understand what i mean

oak star
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You know what I mean too

light flint
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imagine you as the mc of an isekai

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not as the person

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its just you placed in an isekai

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you would die

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end of story

oak star
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Not really, I usually want to replace the MC of isekai since they can't really do the things I believe they should do.

light flint
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thats the thing zilf

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you can change actions

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but you want the skills and knowledge of the MC

oak star
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Eh not really

light flint
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really?

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you just want yourself

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no powers

oak star
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Kinda I guess?

light flint
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no extra knowledge

oak star
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But most of them is kinda dumb

light flint
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you jsut want to be in another world

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jsut poof

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zilf kazuma is currently living as a millionaire from his sheer knowledge alone

oak star
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But there's no computer

light flint
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and?

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he make those blanket table things with the heaters

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and then sold them for fortunes

oak star
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And you can't really sell video games in that world

light flint
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and?

oak star
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Without everyone having computers

light flint
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so you would die

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zilf in the konosuba world would die

oak star
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Fire I have no idea why you dream to be a sel insert protagonist when you should just replace em tbh

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They are meant for you to impose your personality

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Or to be precise

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The author is imposing their personalities into em

light flint
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yeah and then they make good ideas that i wouldnt make

oak star
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You really underestimate yourself huh

solar reef
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Since it's a game, you can just leave it for players to decide whether it's good or bad

light flint
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like with the kazuma example, selling basic items

solar reef
light flint
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becoming a millionaire

oak star
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I don't think you know how self insert works much tbh

light flint
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zilf i dont think you do

solar reef
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Make it, publish it and wait for reviews

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But I guess the topic isn't on game anymore

oak star
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Oh no, I will never make a self insert story that would be boring

solar reef
ember yoke
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I think rather it's more you're seeing it in is/is not as opposed to varying levels of how much inserting is involved.

light flint
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you already have zilf

oak star
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No I did not

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I never wrote a story

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I agree with fishman

ember yoke
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Kazuma is a less inserting example compred to say Kirito or that Jesus MC with the Thirsty siter.

oak star
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We both have a different degree on how much self insert should be involved

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And fire is being salty, bet BuckySmug

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Don't be salty

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/slap @light flint

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Fishman is right

ember yoke
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I was saying that to you as you seem to refuse any gradiants of self-insertness, Zilf.

oak star
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Fire was refusing mine too y'know

light flint
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well im coming from the perspective that i know who i am

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and a story where i am the MC is gonna be pretty boring

oak star
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If I'm the MC it's not gonna be pleasent either

light flint
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but a story where i get to become a superhero? or have an adventure in a fantasy land? those are great

oak star
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I agree on that

light flint
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but the point is that its no longer me

oak star
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Wrong

light flint
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im being something that i am not

oak star
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The point is it's you but special

light flint
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yeah but if i had powers, i wouldnt want to be a superhero

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so the entire premise of the plot is on making a choice that i would not make

oak star
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What, so you would read a superhero story with a self insert main character and not want to be a superhero?

light flint
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its self insert but it isnt you

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nono zilf

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i read that and want to be a superhero

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but if i was given powers, i would choose to not be

oak star
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But you said you wouldn't want to be a superhero

light flint
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because i can make that choice

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the self insert is forced to make choices

leaden abyss
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Yes

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Dependent on their character

oak star
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Ah I understand that

solar reef
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Ahh

light flint
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so its no longer you

leaden abyss
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Would they be self righteous or

solar reef
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Random bkusa appeared

light flint
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thats why im saying you become the character

leaden abyss
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Ngl super powers in modern society is useless

soft moth
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Hi

oak star
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It sure is

halcyon herald
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thats dumb

light flint
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not really bkusa

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look at certain magical index

solar reef
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Unless it's something that can destroy za warudo

light flint
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some of those powers are trash but acutally kinda useful

solar reef
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Just reset the world

light flint
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like uiharu

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shes a living thermos

oak star
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Why not just use a thermos

light flint
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cuz sometimes you want non liquids to be warm

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like she bought donuts once and had to walk a really long way to bring them to her friends

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so instead of them getting cold, she kept them warm

solar reef
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She can warm things 24/7 as long she held them

light flint
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she can basically freeze the temperature that its at

oak star
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How did she not burned the donuts or melt the chocolate

light flint
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so like ice that doesnt melt

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nono

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zilf

solar reef
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Uh.

oak star
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Holy shit

light flint
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she keeps it the same temperature

oak star
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I want a warmer

light flint
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she doesnt increase the temp

oak star
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Hat makes chocolate stay unmelted

solar reef
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Just imagine za warudo on the temperature

oak star
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Ngl

light flint
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the donuts are warm, and she keeps them warm

oak star
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It would be cool

light flint
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by literally telling them to not get cold

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she can freeze entropy

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which breaks all laws of physics

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her singular power destroys the laws of physics

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while misaka is bound by them

oak star
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@ember yoke at any rate fire already gave his ideal of self insert, it wasn't a variety of choice either

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Me and Fire have a separate ideal

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That's why I said you were right

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And pinged fire

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Because in reality we can assume what ever we want with self inserts

light flint
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well yeah but theres also the majority you have to think about

oak star
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I don't think a person could speak for the majority

leaden abyss
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Oh wait that’s op then

oak star
#

Oh shit UI would be killer on the sahara

leaden abyss
#

Preventing the loss of energy

#

No no no

light flint
#

well its only with temperature

leaden abyss
#

UI can maintain the temperature of power plants

light flint
#

no its only what her hands can touch

#

remember her power is still only level 1

leaden abyss
#

Ah right

#

But if she took drugs

light flint
#

so she can only keep the donut box warm

oak star
#

Like, can't they just have her kept the temperature of any enemies in Sahara and they would die from heat stroke?

light flint
#

zilf she has to be touching htem

oak star
#

Yeah

light flint
#

and it has to be the size of her hands

oak star
#

Oh

leaden abyss
#

Wasn’t there like drugs

light flint
#

yeah there were drugs

#

but anyway isekai talk

#

kazuma was a dumbass for not marrying darkness

#

i rest my case

oak star
#

Isekai writing is bad

#

No wait

#

It is good sometimes

#

But most of the time it's bad

leaden abyss
#

Dude marrying darkness

#

= money and nobility

light flint
#

yes exactly

ember yoke
#

Eh, I think I already said why Kazuma likely didn't, namely it'd kill the story in a number of ways. In a way it'd be Moonlighting all over again.

oak star
#

I guess as long as you have a good writing skills they'd just let you write a novel in Japan huh?

light flint
#

perks of marrying darkness:
money, power, political influence
what kazuma currently has:
no money, no power, negative political influence

oak star
#

What about love

light flint
#

also zilf considering having any spare time when you have a job is unheard of in japan, yes

#

also zilf, he can just cheat on darkness

#

she would like that

oak star
#

You need a heart

light flint
#

its a universal win for everyone involved

oak star
ember yoke
#

Konsuba runs on the notion of zany misadventures, and becoming a noble would go against that. And that's excluding any sort of enforced "balance" between the main girls so no one camp gets horribly alienated.

light flint
#

well yeah

#

it goes against the story, which is why it doesnt happen

#

but it never goes against kazuma's ideals

oak star
#

Well

#

Konosuba is complex for me to talk about

#

It feels like the author wrote something and it sell well due to it being slightly unqiue, but after that it feels like a try hard for popularity

#

But that's just me

#

@light flint whatcha think?

light flint
#

its still unique

ember yoke
#

eh, if the series seriously went about aiming just for popularity, it'd be far more blatant

light flint
#

yeah

oak star
#

As in it's still unique

#

Blatant like isekai phone?

#

Because that was a mess

valid flicker
#

my favourite isekai is and will always be saga of tanya the evil

#

it’s a bit over looked tho I feel AmagiKoff

oak star
#

Everyone remembers that

#

Just that

#

It popped out when kemono friends was airing

ember yoke
#

I think if anything, it's just that there hasn't been much new to remind people compared other stuff going on.

oak star
#

I heard isekai phone was supposed to be good but I don't see it

#

What's the writing like?

ember yoke
#

as people in another server Love Tanya

valid flicker
#

she’s my pfp Glowow

oak star
#

Tanya, the story writing is not bad

#

Like it balance the tone between dark and light

valid flicker
#

i read the ln of it

#

the current English translation

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writing wise the ln is a lot better than the anime

light flint
#

i have every LN book thats been translated so far

#

but we are 5 books behind

valid flicker
#

that must be a lot of books MutsukiCurse

light flint
#

theres 12

valid flicker
#

yeah

light flint
#

the 7th just came out in english

#

and the date on the afterword from the author is december 2016

valid flicker
#

the 7th was delayed until December I thought UnicornFused

light flint
#

no

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i have it

#

it came out in june

valid flicker
#

I can’t buy it on amazon or Waterstones it’s not available MutsukiCurse

light flint
#

oh oof

oak star
#

I see LN more of scripts rather than story writing. It's good and super easy to digest

light flint
#

i mean like im literally holding it tanaka

#

so idk

#

zilf the tanya LN is literally a book

#

like he was told to not write so much

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by the editor

oak star
#

Ahhhh

light flint
#

because the 2nd book was like 300 pages

#

no wait

oak star
#

That's lesser than I thought

light flint
#

400

oak star
#

That's better

light flint
#

yeah but for a light novel

valid flicker
#

now it’s on amazon JeanDead

#

last time I checked it said it was out of stock and delayed on amazon SpeeThink

oak star
#

I prefer if people adapt script writing more than story writing tbh

light flint
#

oh

valid flicker
#

can’t trust amazon to be reliable

light flint
#

script writing should be used for adaptation tho

oak star
#

It is, just that there is something amazing about them

light flint
#

like the tanya anime and the tanya books are about the same thing, but they are so different

oak star
#

Have you seen the Tanya manga?

#

That one is also different

light flint
#

if you wrote out what happened in the anime, it would be script writing

oak star
valid flicker
#

I read it online

light flint
#

ehh the manga is basically the anime

oak star
#

Honestly, I like the manga more than the anime ngl

valid flicker
#

I love the anime and all but how does tanya change so much in the art

light flint
#

but the difference is that the manga and anime have to focus on fighting

valid flicker
#

compare her side to side with the manga and she looks like a different person

oak star
#

The author want duck lips. That is why

light flint
#

its cuz the anime, manga, and LN all have different illustrators

#

tbh id love it if the manga had the LN art

#

that would be crazy

valid flicker
#

ngl looks like tanya from the anime could do a pog face easily

ember yoke
#

not uncommon with these adaptations, assuming the anime doesn't just take from LN or Manga

light flint
#

oh it does fish

#

but the LN will just straight up skip fights

#

so it doesnt make for a good anime if you directly adapt it

ember yoke
#

I was talking style of art, like I think Gate did

light flint
#

ohhhh

#

tbh i like the character designs of the anime

ember yoke
#

IIRC the anime copied the LN's style as opposed to the more like Manga.

light flint
#

cuz you can actually tell people apart

#

no

#

it did not at all

#

the LN is stylistic but bland

#

tanya, viktoriya, and mary all look exactly the same in the LN

valid flicker
ember yoke
#

I was talking Gate in that

light flint
#

oh

#

sorry

#

the side characters are where the anime shines

ember yoke
#

But yeah the Tanya stuff is pretty different with the anime going the Tanamin Duckface route.

light flint
#

cuz they made them look so good

#

like zeuttor and rudersdorf dont look like generic old guys

valid flicker
#

you can actually tell apart the guys in tanya’s battalion instead of them all looking like bland generic characters

ember yoke
#

I say that because I swear they must have gotten some of the folks behind the Tannanin Asagi animated hentai

light flint
#

the anime also added 2 more important side characters

#

the guy with the long face and the frogman dont exist in the LN

valid flicker
#

koenig and I forgot his name

light flint
#

im glad you knew exactly who i was talking about lol

untold crypt
#

Tf is the frogmanLeanderXD

light flint
#

also @oak star

#

bruh so i started my training for my programming job

#

and its awful

valid flicker
#

neunman is frog guy

#

I can’t spell LeanderEhh

#

programming looks painful

light flint
#

yeah well i needed a degree to get into this job, and now we are literally learning from scratch

#

im now getting paid a ridiculous amount of money to sit and listen to lectures on things ive been doing for 5 years

valid flicker
#

good luck Fumizoomi

halcyon herald
#

are you the one who is getting a masters or is that someone else

light flint
#

someone else

#

this is just my job training

#

like they gave us homework that was estimated to take 9 hours, i did it in 2, and i wasnt even that focused on it

coral sky
#

Hi, please talk about your programming job in another channel

rapid rose
#

Tanya anime also had dope WW1 aesthetic that was a lot more fun and unique than the manga imo

#

Like the anime flight suits are so much cooler than just like wearing coats like they do in the manga

late badger
#

Hello frens, I haven't drawn in a month and a half again

#

Do I need to change anything here

solar mauve
#

Worry not. They are just doing their regular WWE wrestling practise

brisk flax
#

that looks like something that would be from WWE

formal temple
#

I’m more curious about what’s going on behind that censor

late badger
#

Nothing ||yet||

formal temple
#

Valid

soft moth
#

Italian colonial soldier, World War 2 :

fallow heath
#

プロ漫画家としての知識や経験を元に
個人的な美術解剖学、モノクロ技術の勉強をまとめています。

I’ll be sharing my personal notes and knowledge of anatomy.

【目次:挫折しない目標達成法】
00:00 オープニング
01:29 Point1. 土台となる動機づくり
03:50 Point2. 大目標から逆算して次の目標を立てる
04:54 Point3. 具体的なTODOリストを作る
08:31 今回のまとめ

⬇️動画内でご紹介した書籍
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▶ Play video
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Doesn't really help me, but eh.

soft moth
#

What is that? Thinkpitz

untold crypt
#

Oh hey manga materials

dark sigil
#

My big goal with art is to be able to sell merchandise to support doing what i like

#

which is drawing itself

noble pecan
#

I see lood

arctic cape
#

woow mm also vtuber now :9c

soft moth
untold crypt
#

Might draw Lolo and Nana

#

For the holy mama trinity

rain yacht
#

DunktsukiStare nana mama?

viral radish
untold crypt
#

DeepVickyXD

native furnace
#

🛐

#

kon kon is useful

arctic cape
untold crypt
oak star
noble pecan
untold crypt
soft moth
upper zodiac
#

O shit, mm vtuber 👀👀

Also, just realized today that coco’s yams arent attached to her head

#

Theyre just floating

solar reef
late badger
#

So... I guess nothing looks too off about what's visible in my drawing?

halcyon herald
#

Why is there a little girl sitting on her

#

What os she doing

trim agate
#

extreme yoga

lunar swift
#

something i found

#

thats really cool

soft moth
#

Interesting

solar reef
#

reflection art, noice

#

a way to minimize nsfw

olive kernel
#

keijiron ping?

stone merlin
olive kernel
#

i just saw the ping briefly and missed the msg lol

stone merlin
#

it's on the other server

olive kernel
#

ahh ic interesting

tawdry pulsar
#

And yes I need to sharpen my pencil

#

Just thinking of a concept

#

Good concept or bad concept

olive kernel
#

seems ok for concept? its when u detail it to make sure thats expression and aesthetics of that characters will be shown

tawdry pulsar
#

yeah I will add more details obviously. And draw legs that don't look like Minecraft legs. SadFace

upper zodiac
#

Someone posted SSS content TacoBox

olive kernel
#

?

upper zodiac
#

Artist group

#

The tweet aria shared

olive kernel
#

ah look kool no idea what sss is though

upper zodiac
#

That drawing is done by abec, the sao cover artist and also the cover artist for like 90+ LN

olive kernel
#

also @tawdry pulsar probably make them to a closer distance for the characters unless ur putting ther things on table

#

ohhhh abec sensei

upper zodiac
#

Check the group’s twitter or the member’s, they’re basically all the best artist in the industry

olive kernel
#

yeah just got abec sensei autograph for SAO novel

#

so happy for it

#

few yrs back

tawdry pulsar
#

Yeah, an oxycola and a cup of tea are supposed to be the props
But I drew the table first because I work backwards

#

I do stuff like drawing eyes first lol

solar reef
#

mmmLNartist

#

always top quality

ember yoke
#

From what I've seen, Abec's stuff isn't that impressive.

noble pecan
#

Hmm

olive kernel
#

Im a sao fan so its all good

noble pecan
#

Ưhat is sao fan

solar reef
#

i totally forgot c/d4 existed in AL

#

lmao

#

im so used to C/D3 now

ember yoke
#

Though Accel World (what the SAO writer wrote after the original SAO stuff) had Hima as an artist

noble pecan
#

Ima draw lood pose

#

Owo

ember yoke
#

(guy's best known for hot renderings of the FF5 sisters)

noble pecan
#

Who the loodest ship in azur

ember yoke
#

Generally Taihou, Atago, and/or St. Louis

noble pecan
upper zodiac
#

Is someone insulting bunbun

#

Sit down

noble pecan
#

Who's bunbun

solar reef
#

who's bunbun

#

KUSA

olive kernel
#

well asuna and kiritos design was shit at the time

upper zodiac
#

Git gud before you talk shit

#

Bunbun = abec

noble pecan
#

Who's abec

solar reef
#

ohh

olive kernel
#

SAO artist

upper zodiac
solar reef
#

sao ln artist u talk bout

noble pecan
#

Oh

solar reef
#

i mean

#

for me

#

LN artist is top notch

olive kernel
#

ikr

solar reef
#

maybe because they only need to focus on little pic

noble pecan
#

Lol

solar reef
#

instead of drawing every single page

ember yoke
#

Diffrent from the Bunbun who did Fate's Mysterious Heroine X/etc?

noble pecan
#

Who

halcyon herald
#

klin deer is live

solar reef
#

deer is alive

#

?

halcyon herald
#

in the uh

upper zodiac
solar reef
#

i thought he sank deep under ocean

halcyon herald
#

fuckin

solar reef
#

and work

upper zodiac
#

aBeC iSnT iMpReSsiVe

solar reef
#

for atlantis

noble pecan
#

Oh deer

halcyon herald
#

gamergirl livestream simulator discord

ember yoke
#

But besides that LN artists have to be eyecatching as it's what gets people to buy LNs

halcyon herald
#

that reminds me i must simp for artists

noble pecan
#

Ln

solar reef
#

osu reminds me that im bad at osu

#

yeeeeeeeeeee

noble pecan
#

Hmm

#

Draw

upper zodiac
#

Sub to deer

#

Give him money

noble pecan
#

Smash

#

Neva

#

Gib me waccom

solar reef
#

sub deer for deer meat?

halcyon herald
#

i have 37 cents

noble pecan
#

I want to draw her

solar reef
#

i've nothing

noble pecan
#

But I fkin hate riven

upper zodiac
#

That’s riven?

solar reef
#

spirit blossom

noble pecan
#

No

solar reef
#

just made them looks nothing liek original

upper zodiac
#

Aight

noble pecan
#

That musashi from fate

upper zodiac
#

Huh

solar reef
#

uso de ari

upper zodiac
#

I’m getting trolled

solar reef
#

i mean look at thresh

upper zodiac
#

True lmao

noble pecan
#

I only like kindred

solar reef
#

teemo is just

#

teemo

noble pecan
#

But drawing her take too much skill

solar reef
#

wek

noble pecan
#

Me lazy

#

No

olive kernel
#

im hearing lewd noises in deer stream lol

upper zodiac
#

Wek

noble pecan
#

I want simple draw

solar reef
#

huh

#

deer multitasking?

noble pecan
#

Deer playing ero game

#

While strem

upper zodiac
#

Link? Where’s he streaming?

halcyon herald
#

yernad thats rythm bot

upper zodiac
#

Beji discord?

halcyon herald
#

ye

olive kernel
#

oh still lood

noble pecan
#

Also

#

Kindred face

upper zodiac
#

Is cute

noble pecan
#

Remind me of somebody in

#

Ah

#

Blue fantasy game

#

Idk the name

upper zodiac
#

It’s just an anime girl face

olive kernel
#

@upper zodiac deer streaming at hololive channel

upper zodiac
#

-> it can remind you of anyone

noble pecan
#

Hmm

olive kernel
#

hes just drawing random stuff though

solar reef
#

granblue fantasy?

noble pecan
#

Hmm

#

No leg ana

#

Is gud

solar reef
#

female ver of horny hec

#

bruh

noble pecan
#

Also

#

She naked all the time

#

The clothes only cover her chest

solar reef
#

eh

halcyon herald
#

that is

#

league of leg

solar reef
#

thats pretty traditional chinese cloth to me

#

not sure bout jpnes

halcyon herald
#

new girl from the web vn

upper zodiac
#

I like how the senior chara designer gave up trying to hide the weeb

noble pecan
#

Also

solar reef
#

why not

noble pecan
#

Uh

#

Because

solar reef
#

just design

upper zodiac
#

Hot

noble pecan
#

Look random

solar reef
#

doesnt even need to make sense anymore

upper zodiac
#

Monster girls are UniHappy UniHappy

#

If you’re talking about the ribbon, asymmetry is good

#

If you want an interesting design, when in doubt asymmetry

solar reef
#

nugetto pls come out

noble pecan
halcyon herald
#

when in doubt

#

add more belts

noble pecan
#

Riot gone full weeb mode

upper zodiac
#

Almost makes me want to return after 4 years

noble pecan
#

Don't

halcyon herald
#

maybe i shouldnt have just drawn only torsos and legs for the past 2 weeks

#

because now my heads look like

upper zodiac
#

UniFlox aight

halcyon herald
upper zodiac
#

That’s a nice hand

halcyon herald
#

tahnk yuo

#

i spend much effort

solar reef
#

lookin good

noble pecan
#

Is there

#

Four leg monster girl pose?

olive kernel
#

question for hololivers hachama is not 4th gen?

noble pecan
#

What do u call those with horse or 4 leg animal body again

olive kernel
#

centaur?

noble pecan
#

Yeh

#

Centaur pose hmm

#

Ima search later

#

Lookin at them while lillia exposing her behind

#

Lood

solar reef
#

not really fond of centaur but ok

untold crypt
#

Lilia so cuteIrohaHappy

quasi shore
sullen juniper
#

hmmm which one would u choose if you had to and can't choose none?

#

And can't choose all at the same time

solar reef
#

either all or none

noble pecan
#

Anyway

untold crypt
#

I hate you

quasi shore
#

How about pizza on pineapple, not pineapple on pizza

worldly drum
#

Lol

quasi shore
#

WHY YOU ARE TYPING LOL EVEN HERE

#

WRRRYYYYYYYYYYY

solar reef
#

jpol

#

you are my sworn enemy

#

dont ruin teh food u fuc

mystic walrus
oak star
#

@olive kernel explain why you post that image

#

are you maybe

#

into monster girls?

#

oh shit did you all see the lulu fanart?

#

hold on

#

Try going light mode and look at this image again

#

don't know who made it though

olive kernel
#

eh werent ppl looking for centaur references

#

and i do like shitty harem animes

#

though still havent finishe monsume

quasi shore
#

What did you send modafaka

oak star
#

go light mode

quasi shore
#

All hail amoled mode

oak star
#

no really

#

go light mode

arctic cape
#

black mode masterrace

oak star
#

it's a gimmick image

arctic cape
#

ohhhhhhh

#

i see it now

quasi shore
leaden abyss
#

how does one use markers

solar reef
#

vry interesting art

leaden abyss
#

i prac gave up half way

arctic cape
#

copic?

leaden abyss
#

nah

#

ohuhu

#

some off brand cheap shit

noble pecan
#

Lood

leaden abyss
#

welp, to the next colour piece now

#

need to experiment more

noble pecan
#

Is dat kindrrd

#

Lood

leaden abyss
#

yes\

noble pecan
#

Meanwhile

#

Havent draw anything fufk

#

Rivrn is simple to draw

#

But i hate her

#

Shit tier champ

oak star
#

I WANT TO DRAW KANATA

#

NUDE BUT SFW FOR COMP

#

well maybe a bath towel too

#

and a yakult

#

orange

#

Actually I wanted to toss her into a hotspring

#

do they use towels in hot spring?

#

or go nekkid?

solar reef
#

fine wine

oak star
#

that's hot ngl

solar reef
#

zilf liek em flat

oak star
#

no as in