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tulip crow Oct 24, 2024, 4:55 AM

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Just posted my first chapter of my sci-fi / fantasy novel on RoyalRoad. Thoughts?

EDIT: If this is ever monetised, I will remove this post or movie to to #podium

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/96554/the-swords-of-august/chapter/1864342/chapter-1-code-nine

Royal Road

Chapter 1: Code Nine - The Swords of August

Earth had come a long way from the old days of fighting in war-torn hellholes of sand and mud. Our battles had long since shifted away from being entirely planetary and often involved ship to ship combat, (...)

opal hawk Oct 24, 2024, 4:59 AM

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Cool

frozen acorn Oct 24, 2024, 8:40 AM

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tulip crow Just posted my first chapter of my sci-fi / fantasy novel on RoyalRoad. Thoughts...

i like it, but i like normaly to spread more the initial information during the chapter, like i would have put the description of the ship maybe when the team went to the corridor, but thats personal preference

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if you ever get monetised btw, you can just move it to #podium if you want

tulip crow Oct 24, 2024, 8:44 AM

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Ah, true.

stiff siren Mar 18, 2026, 5:16 PM

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tulip crow Just posted my first chapter of my sci-fi / fantasy novel on RoyalRoad. Thoughts...

Do you need feedback?
What is your book genre and word count?

cyan dewBOT Mar 18, 2026, 5:16 PM

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@stiff siren has just advanced to level 2.

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