Sigi is no ordinary girl. Unbeknownst to her, she can unravel reality if her body falls into the wrong hands. Sitra Achra has cursed her, slowly gaining control over her to reshape the world in her own image. Now a vampire plagued by perpetual hunger, Sigi knows her life will never be. Sigi was an average girl who didn't know that she was a being who could destroy all reality if people took control of her body. One night, Sitra Achra put a curse on her to slowly control her body to recreate the world in her image. Now, turn into a vampire and is cursed with an endless hunger. Sigi thought her everyday life wouldn't be the same. Lieneke tells her thst there exist seven relics called the seven keys of death and a hôy body to seal Sitra Achra. The problem is that if Sigi needs to get rid of Sitra Axhra, she will be forced to commit acts like self-mutilation, cannibalism, and murder in order to reach her goal, but would she be able to commit gruesome acts to get rid of Sitra Achra or will she'll lose herself in her new vampire nature like the other qliphoth user the same. Lieneke informs her
#END cycle requiem : Dark vampire reincarnation of death chronique
lyric belfry
This is the outline version of the END
Number of words: 749
Number of pages: 5
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bmmpIJDwVESGAZvK1LKTNzLZyNiseDSEV9CRCYAxNL0/edit?usp=drivesdk
oak lantern
see, this sort of outline is useful to keep track of what even happens and why it matters
one thing i notice is that Sigi is incredibly lucky in conveniently having access to all these important people and sigils - especially when 3 of them just happen to be behind a museum. there should be more challenge and a more personal connection there
which leads me to the other thing that bothers me: i dont see how this plot relates specifically to Sigi. it seems like the protagonist could be replaced by any other person in a similar situation and the plot would still happen the exact same way
you especially notice this at Break Into Three [85]: The hero realizes a truth evading them all this time.: the truth that is to be realized is not supposed to be the location of some MacGuffins, but some mental barrier that prevents the protagonist from achieving the specified goal. once that barrier is overcome and the truth accepted, suddenly a path to victory is opened, thus tying the plot and the character arc into one satisfying finale
lyric belfry
So, I need to change the outline, got it
oak lantern
first you need to think really hard about what makes Sigi the one and only character that this story can truly be about
all the events of the story need to be personal to an extent that only Sigi can undergo them, find out this evading truth and ultimately overcome adversity
lyric belfry
Ok
lyric belfry
Chapter 1: Sigi
length: 8 pages, and 1036 words
the begining of Sigi 's journey
lyric belfry
Which one
mental musk
This one
"Sounds like you’ve made some friends, Sigi!” said the woman.
I think that you miss the parentheses on some.
lyric belfry
Already fix it
lyric belfry
chapter 2: Qliphoth
length: 13 pages, and 1984 words
Lieneke explained what qliphoth is to Sigi
lyric belfry
Look forward to chapter 2.
@mental musk chapter 2 is out
lyric belfry
Chapter 3: Nehemoth and the Etheric Layer
Length:21 pages, and 3466 words
Sigi learned more about the exoskeleton of the conscious layer of aura
lyric belfry
Look forward to chapter 2.
Chapter 3 is out
mental musk
Ok
