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verbal vapor Aug 27, 2023, 3:57 PM

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chapter 1: Sigi

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lenght: 9 pages and 979pages

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synopsis : the beggining of Sigi's pain

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z-b4O5BRFBFcy14z06o9GY6qeYKhyomA2z6iy-6DXng/edit?usp=sharing

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END Cycle requiem: Sigi’s pain When the tree of life and death meet for the first time, their battle leads to the creation of all realities. One day, they will return by touching the tree of God’s hand, which can create a new reality. Warning: This book includes graphic violence...

bronze carbon Aug 28, 2023, 10:39 PM

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It could be okay.

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Just read it in your mind.

verbal vapor Aug 28, 2023, 11:12 PM

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What does it mean ?

bronze carbon Aug 28, 2023, 11:29 PM

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It's good.

verbal vapor Aug 28, 2023, 11:33 PM

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Ok

verbal vapor Aug 29, 2023, 11:03 AM

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chapter 2: qliphoth

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lenght: 15 pages and 2282 words

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Synopsis: Naamah introduced Sigi to qliphoth

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z-b4O5BRFBFcy14z06o9GY6qeYKhyomA2z6iy-6DXng/edit?usp=sharing

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END Sigi's pain

END Cycle requiem: Sigi’s pain When the tree of life and death meet for the first time, their battle leads to the creation of all realities. One day, they will return by touching the tree of God’s hand, which can create a new reality. Warning: This book includes graphic violence...

verbal vapor Aug 29, 2023, 1:18 PM

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bronze carbon It's good.

Chapter 2 is here

bronze carbon Aug 29, 2023, 1:48 PM

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One sentence twice

verbal vapor Aug 29, 2023, 2:38 PM

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Where ?

bronze carbon Aug 29, 2023, 4:57 PM

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Page 11

verbal vapor Aug 29, 2023, 6:14 PM

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Fix it

bronze carbon Aug 29, 2023, 6:17 PM

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Nice

verbal vapor Aug 29, 2023, 8:04 PM

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Thanks

bronze carbon Aug 29, 2023, 8:43 PM

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You're welcome.

verbal vapor Aug 30, 2023, 11:32 PM

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chapter 3: nehemoth

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lenght: 32 pages and 6121 words

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Synopsis : Sigi thought that Naamah was just a mere annoying vampire, but in reality, her whole worldview is too fuck up

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z-b4O5BRFBFcy14z06o9GY6qeYKhyomA2z6iy-6DXng/edit?usp=sharing

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END Sigi's pain

END Cycle requiem: Sigi’s pain When the tree of life and death meet for the first time, their battle leads to the creation of all realities. One day, they will return by touching the tree of God’s hand, which can create a new reality. Warning: This book includes graphic violence...

verbal vapor Aug 31, 2023, 12:12 AM

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bronze carbon You're welcome.

Chapter 3 is out

bronze carbon Aug 31, 2023, 12:12 AM

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Ok

verbal vapor Sep 2, 2023, 6:59 PM

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chapter 3: nehemoth ( rework)
lenght: 74 pages and 17013 words
Synopsis : Sigi thought that Naamah was just a mere annoying vampire, but in reality, her whole worldview is too fuck up

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z-b4O5BRFBFcy14z06o9GY6qeYKhyomA2z6iy-6DXng/edit?usp=sharing

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END Sigi's pain

END Cycle requiem: Sigi’s pain When the tree of life and death meet for the first time, their battle leads to the creation of all realities. One day, they will return by touching the tree of God’s hand, which can create a new reality. Warning: This book includes graphic violence...

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chapter 4: Gamaliel

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lenght: 74 pages and 17013 words

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Synopsis : Sigi learn the in and out of Gamaliel

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z-b4O5BRFBFcy14z06o9GY6qeYKhyomA2z6iy-6DXng/edit?usp=sharing

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END Sigi's pain

END Cycle requiem: Sigi’s pain When the tree of life and death meet for the first time, their battle leads to the creation of all realities. One day, they will return by touching the tree of God’s hand, which can create a new reality. Warning: This book includes graphic violence...

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chapter 5: samael
lenght: 74 pages and 17013 words
Synopsis : Sigi learn a dark truth about themself

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z-b4O5BRFBFcy14z06o9GY6qeYKhyomA2z6iy-6DXng/edit?usp=sharing

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END Sigi's pain

END Cycle requiem: Sigi’s pain When the tree of life and death meet for the first time, their battle leads to the creation of all realities. One day, they will return by touching the tree of God’s hand, which can create a new reality. Warning: This book includes graphic violence...

tidal fjord Sep 2, 2023, 8:01 PM

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What are your plans for this story when it's finished?

verbal vapor Sep 2, 2023, 9:36 PM

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Send it to an editor

verbal vapor Sep 3, 2023, 1:28 AM

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tidal fjord What are your plans for this story when it's finished?

Do you think my story is confusing ?

tidal fjord Sep 3, 2023, 11:54 PM

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verbal vapor Send it to an editor

I'll need to get started reading it. I may have some time today and tomorrow to get started.

tidal fjord Sep 3, 2023, 11:55 PM

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verbal vapor Send it to an editor

I've got an art and creative community, so I could help you see if there's an editor available among them when you're ready.

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I can also help connect you with an artist if you need someone to do cover art, concepts, illustrations or promotional art for your book, and help you with creating a marketing plan.

verbal vapor Sep 4, 2023, 12:07 AM

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tidal fjord I've got an art and creative community, so I could help you see if there's an ed...

Ok , I'll call you when I'm done

tidal fjord Sep 4, 2023, 12:10 AM

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verbal vapor Ok , I'll call you when I'm done

FYI, I'm reading Ch 1 now.

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The plot looks good so far, I'll post a video for you that can give you tips on how to get the best possible start to your story.

verbal vapor Sep 4, 2023, 12:11 AM

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Ok

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Tell me more about it tomorrow

tidal fjord Sep 4, 2023, 12:13 AM

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tkcrz2_miMY

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Abbie Emmons

First Chapter MISTAKES New Writers Make ❌ Avoid These Cliches!!

Writing chapter one is easier said than done. If you’re a writer embarking on a new story, you know how terrifying it can be to stare at that first blank page. You know this is a critical moment — this first chapter is going to make or break your entire book. It's a lot of pressure! That's why, in this video, we're discussing the DO’s and DON’Ts...

▶ Play video

tidal fjord Sep 4, 2023, 12:14 AM

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verbal vapor Tell me more about it tomorrow

sure thing. Also, FYI, I'm hosting a writing event designed to help writers improve the visuals of their stories, this one is horror themed in case you wanted to give that a try. I am noting a lot of new writers I'm working with struggle to give the reader a good impression of what the world looks like.

verbal vapor Sep 4, 2023, 12:27 AM

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Can you link it to me

verbal vapor Sep 4, 2023, 11:53 AM

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tidal fjord sure thing. Also, FYI, I'm hosting a writing event designed to help writers impr...

can I join

verbal vapor Sep 4, 2023, 11:56 AM

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tidal fjord The plot looks good so far, I'll post a video for you that can give you tips on ...

what do you think about chapter 1

tidal fjord Sep 4, 2023, 2:13 PM

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verbal vapor can I join

Certainly. I'll send you a DM as it's in a different server

verbal vapor Sep 6, 2023, 12:05 AM

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chapter 6: Harab Serapel
lenght: 81 pages and 19158 words
Synopsis : Sigi learned the in and out of Harab Serapel

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z-b4O5BRFBFcy14z06o9GY6qeYKhyomA2z6iy-6DXng/edit?usp=sharing

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END Sigi's pain

END Cycle requiem: Sigi’s pain When the tree of life and death meet for the first time, their battle leads to the creation of all realities. One day, they will return by touching the tree of God’s hand, which can create a new reality. Warning: This book includes graphic violence...

mental parcel Sep 8, 2023, 8:43 PM

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God damn brother

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You moved up

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20k long chapter 🙀

verbal vapor Sep 8, 2023, 9:53 PM

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Who are you

verbal vapor Sep 8, 2023, 11:45 PM

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chapter 7: Thagirion

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Lenght: 85 page and 19864 words

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Synopsis: Naamah realize that Sigi have more than one person inside their body

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z-b4O5BRFBFcy14z06o9GY6qeYKhyomA2z6iy-6DXng/edit?usp=sharing

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END Sigi's pain

END Cycle requiem: Sigi’s pain When the tree of life and death meet for the first time, their battle leads to the creation of all realities. One day, they will return by touching the tree of God’s hand, which can create a new reality. Warning: This book includes graphic violence...

verbal vapor Sep 8, 2023, 11:54 PM

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mental parcel 20k long chapter 🙀

Hasan

verbal vapor Sep 12, 2023, 9:54 PM

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chapter 8: Golachab
Lenght: 94 page and 22150 words
Synopsis: New revelation came in front of both Sigi and Naamah can they accept this revelation

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