💬 dodman531ʹs Feedback

[open echo]

animations are ok. the finger movement for the mag in is just so incorrect tho. and there is a few clipping problems on the slide pull to b2i transition. the mag out looks and feels floaty. the b2i itself is a bit too quick. the flow is alright tho. i'd give it a 6.2/10

[cyan elk]

... did you watch it at 0.25 speed or something -_-?

Also what would be correct finger movements?? The way I got the finger motions is by taking my nerf gun (lol) and acting it out my self, buuuut I'm not a trained professional so Idk what I'm doing there.

[open echo]

no, normal speed

why?

its honestly kind of notice able

[open echo]

finger mag in references you could use

you kind of did it right for the mag hit/pause

its just the mag in

and their is no trigger discipline at all

nor does he move the trigger backwards when shooting

sorry if i sound like a nitpick

and you should kind of change the left palm pose on the overall idle

[cyan elk]

Further up the hand guard you mean?

[cyan elk]

And yeah. He pumps his wrist in an upward motion and that looks a bit strange

[cyan elk]

It's true this would make it look better.

[open echo]

im not that good at explaining things, so ill just send images of what i mean by that

[cyan elk]

but this isn't necessary

[cyan elk]

alr

[open echo]

oh and, why does the fire sound

sound exactly like the mw2019 X16

[cyan elk]

because that's what it is lol!

[cyan elk]

I'll try and find a different sound. I shouldn't have used something so popular

[open echo]

it's not the popularity being the problem

just sounds so out of place

for that type of weapon and the gun model

[cyan elk]

Maybe something with less bass?

[cyan elk]

AH I see

[open echo]

something like this would fit

[cyan elk]

Gotcha

[open echo]

and i hope you notice this but the muzzle flash position

it's sort of behind the muzzle too much

to where it reaches the handguard