#💬 qeratoʹs Feedback
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unprovoked negativity is lowk cringe
cant imagine criticizing and not even trying to help the person get better by providing feedback
to do that would probably mean I don't care if the person gets better, and I just want to make them feel bad
lol, couldn't be me. I'm not a loser like that.
I see the vision and I think the map is good (like the framework), but the but the buildings need work.
I think u should try and learn more about the modeling/building tools offered by Roblox Studio and practice making things you want to make.
When learning (if u choose to) , u should let your curiousity guide you, rather than a playlsit or an algorithm. If you're curious about something, look it up. Nobody's stopping u, and it's the only way to improve.
Don't get disheartened (if you're feeling that way at all). A lot of ppl say "you can do anything" and don't elaborate. I'm telling you to think about all the time you have left in your life. You can even just think of maybe five years. Personally, I think of 50 years. Think about how much you can accomplish in that time. If you're passionate about something, you can't do anything but you can do A LOT more than you'd think.
The map could also use a little foliage (trees, bushes, etc.) (maybe with CanCollide off).
the thing is this map was fast paced, its so obvious im gonna recreate it due to the fact that it's missing some aspects and details, while criticism is obviously a major factor here, im gonna recreate it just for that fact. I've made better stuff so i'll see what i can do.
ok cool
i've read your message again, im clearly gonna remove the blood and the fire and i'll maybe try to make the map a bit more creepy by adding more black smog and trees n bushes that are burning with fire.
im gonna finish the map sometime soon before i recode the matchmaking UI and move on to modeling again