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[cold robin]

Loud

[twin sinew]

Mid posing

[teal crater]

im not much of an animator lol, i might refine it later but for now ive been focusing on the actual scripting and doing small details whenever im stuck

kinda wish the people downvoting would give some useful feedback though

[twin sinew]

lol

cool model tho

but u kinda didnt make it

but still cool

[teal crater]

yeah, the models cool ^_^ im planning to add my own at some point, obviously, but i needed a placeholder and this was the 3rd result lmfao

@knotty plover @clever burrow @calm marlin @distant wing
id like to borrow your time and know whats the reason for the thumbs down, i like constructive criticism

[knotty plover]

1. The video could be way larger, idk why youre only showing half the character
2. the transition between the idle and the aim could use some work, not making it so linear, but if you cant do that just make it quicker

[teal crater]

thx, ill probably brush up the animation at some point
video is small to try to make it easier to see the detail

[clever burrow]

1. video should be a bit longer and at least zoom out the screen
2. the volume is pretty high but it can be lowered
3. same answer as @knotty plover

[knotty plover]

ye volume as well

[distant wing]

Posing looks bad

[teal crater]

Are you guys sure you don't have your volume too loud? It sounds fine to me

Also I don't have anything that can capture longer than 7 seconds at the moment </3

[teal crater]

How could I improve it? It looks about right to me

[clever burrow]

Yea even when its like 90% lowered i still hear it loudly

[clever burrow]

Oh

[distant wing]

It just looks bad, not sure how you could improve it

[twin sinew]

[distant wing]

🖕

[clever burrow]

W bro

[knotty plover]

?

cry all you want buddy Im not going to support a terrorist organization

[distant wing]

💀

supporting a genocide aswell

nice

[knotty plover]

hammas quite literally machine gunned 260 innocent Israelis attending a peaceful music contest

no way you think gaza isnt gonna get invaded

I dont really support isreal committing these killings as well but when you start the conflict yourself..

[distant wing]

Israel quite literally shot my cousin in my head while he was picking up his kids

[knotty plover]

I have no evidence to believe that, so no comment.

[distant wing]

Crazy.

https://www.instagram.com/reel/C3OC8F0rG_b/?igsh=MXB5ZzR2ZzM1dTVkdw==

ahmed.hashim3

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[knotty plover]

one of these videos was found to be edited (with evidence), and its crazy that when one pops up, majority of them the IDF is no where near.

hamas is playing victim after starting this shit themselves

[distant wing]

Me after trapping 3 million people in a prison and giving them water that is reviewed by the FDA and is not safe aswell as little to no food and expecting them to cooperate

[distant wing]

Which one exactly?

One of these videos

I didn’t show any videos that were edited.

Israel lies constantly to the media then goes back on those lies

“Starting this shit” ??? And the wars before Hamas even existed???

Your talking out your ass my man