(very new at scripting to lua) Need help for my script

[heavy holly]

Ok so what im trying to make a script where once a player dies 3 times, he gets sent to the "main lobby". Since im new and I suck at scripting I need help from you guys. very appreciated if helped

[ocean crown]

local TeleportService = game:GetService("TeleportService")
local Players = game:GetService("Players")


local LOBBY_PLACE_ID = 123456789
local DEATH_MAX = 3


local deathCounters = {}



local function onCharacterAdded(character: Model, player: Player)
    local humanoid = character:FindFirstChildOfClass("Humanoid")
    if not humanoid then
        player:Kick("Could not find Humanoid.")

        return
    end

    humanoid.Died:Once(function()
        deathCounters[player] += 1

        if deathCounters[player] < DEATH_MAX then
            return
        end
        -- Player has reached maximum death allowance.
  
        local success, response = pcall(TeleportService.TeleportAsync, TeleportService, LOBBY_PLACE_ID, {player})
        if success then
            return
        end
        -- Teleport failed.
        
        player:Kick("Teleport failed.")

        error(response)
    end)
end

local function onPlayerAdded(player: Player)
    deathCounters[player] = 0

    local character = player.Character
  
    if character then
        onCharacterAdded(character, player)
    end

    player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function(character)
        onCharacterAdded(character, player)
    end)
end

local function onPlayerRemoving(player: Player)
    deathCounters[player] = nil
end



for _, player in Players:GetPlayers() do
    onPlayerAdded(player)
end

Players.PlayerAdded:Connect(onPlayerAdded)
Players.PlayerRemoving:Connect(onPlayerRemoving)

[heavy holly]

hm

[rough hamlet]

** You are now Level 2! **

[ocean crown]

No way I just made that mistake 🤦

@heavy holly, fixed

[heavy holly]

alr ima try

not tping me apparently

nothing in the log

[ocean crown]

Type of script and where?

Keep in mind that TeleportService does not work in Roblox Studio

[heavy holly]

https://www.roblox.com/games/16000614912/Battleground-Test

join this and try to reset 3 times

[ocean crown]

^

[heavy holly]

no errors, just not tping me for some reason

[ocean crown]

Answer the question, man

[heavy holly]

im a noob at scripting

😭

[ocean crown]

Send photo of the script you inserted into the Explorer

[heavy holly]

oh

its in serverscriptservice

[ocean crown]

^

[ocean crown]

Oop, I see the problem...

Try now, @heavy holly

[heavy holly]

alr

aaaaand still nothing

[ocean crown]

Fixed, @heavy holly

This is what blind scripting is like, lol

[heavy holly]

me try now

YES

ITS WORKS

ITS WORKS

IT WORKS

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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[heavy holly]

THANK YOU BROOO

[heavy holly]

yo

i need a lil help again

I want to make it so taht once a player dies 3 times, it adds to the loss