#💬 sherisalʹs Feedback
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worn gorge
thank you !
spring umbra
why does it take so long to explode 😭
worn gorge
what's with the crying emoji every time ??
plus it only takes 10 seconds like jeez don't be so dramatic
spring umbra
10 seconds is so much time
terse pewter
plus it only takes 10 seconds like jeez don't be so dramatic
You should make some indicator that it will explode. For example tweening the color back and forth.
worn gorge
thank you !
terse pewter
Is it just alot of raycasting or are you spawning a sphere and getting parts inside and checking if they have a tag called e.g. ‘Destroyable’? Im curious.
obsidian yarrow
Is it just alot of raycasting or are you spawning a sphere and getting parts ins...
This is a really cool GUI. How did you animate/make it?
terse pewter
Asking me?
terse pewter
This?
terse pewter
obsidian yarrow
health bar
terse pewter
Tweenservice
obsidian yarrow
I wish I was a good enough scripter to know that
😔
got any tips?
I'm struggling with a damn kill block
obsidian yarrow
local KP = script.Parent
KP.Touched:Connect(function(TP)
local humanoid = TP.Parent:FirstChildOf("Humanoid")
if humanoid then
humanoid.health = 0
Idk if this is correct even
terse pewter
I'm struggling with a damn kill block
script.Parent.Touched:Connect(function(hit)
if hit.Parent:FindFirstChild("Humanoid") then
hit.Parent:FindFirstChild("Humanoid").Health = 0
end
end)
Close enough
Missing some ends at the end
obsidian yarrow
```lua
script.Parent.Touched:Connect(function(hit)
if hit.Parent:FindFirstChild(...
this looks a lot simpler
😔
terse pewter
And a single typo
obsidian yarrow
```lua
script.Parent.Touched:Connect(function(hit)
if hit.Parent:FindFirstChild(...
Why didn't you include the if and then statements?
Don't they verify the Humanoid?
terse pewter
I did?
terse pewter
How did you get so good?
Wdym?
obsidian yarrow
At scripting
terse pewter
That is the simplest thing. One of the first parts of scripting on the documents.
obsidian yarrow
KillBlock, yes.
terse pewter
At scripting
I just started learning 4 month ago
obsidian yarrow
I mean to more advanced scripting and what not.
mortal gazelleBOT
Here you go! 
terse pewter
Ups
obsidian yarrow
Like what methods did you use to improve?
terse pewter
Discord
terse pewter
Best learning is practicing
terse pewter
and asked discord for help
No
obsidian yarrow
terse pewter
I helped others on discord
obsidian yarrow
oh
worn gorge
woooow alot of talk here eh ?
i see some questions.....
don't hesitate to ask @obsidian yarrow
worn gorge
Is it just alot of raycasting or are you spawning a sphere and getting parts ins...
well...let me show y'all
local debounce = true
local function applyCodeToChild(child)
if child:IsA("BasePart") then
child.Touched:Connect(function(hit)
if hit.Parent:FindFirstChild("Humanoid") and debounce == true then
local player = game.Players:GetPlayerFromCharacter(hit.Parent)
if player then
debounce = false
workspace.BombTick:Play()
game.ReplicatedStorage.TakeBomb:FireClient(player)
local bomb = game.ReplicatedStorage.BombClone:Clone()
local weld = Instance.new("Weld", player.Character:WaitForChild("HumanoidRootPart"))
bomb.Parent = workspace
weld.Name = "BombWeld"
weld.Part0 = bomb.Bomb
weld.Part1 = player.Character:WaitForChild("HumanoidRootPart")
bomb.Bomb.Position = player.Character:WaitForChild("HumanoidRootPart").Position + Vector3.new(0,3,0)
wait(10)
local explosion = Instance.new("Explosion")
explosion.Parent = workspace
explosion.Position = bomb.Bomb.Position
explosion.Visible = true
explosion.BlastPressure = 999999
explosion.BlastRadius = 4
bomb:Destroy()
workspace["Explosion HD"]:Play()
workspace.BombTick:Stop()
debounce = true
end
end
end)
end
end
for _, child in ipairs(script.Parent:GetChildren()) do
applyCodeToChild(child)
end
yes it's very long
first i put all the bombs in a folder called "Bombs"
and as you can see...for every child in the folder..if it's a basepart then it executes the code
and here it just fires the takebomb remoteevent so.....
THIS would appear on your screen
ok, now
local player = game.Players.LocalPlayer
local uis = game:GetService("UserInputService")
local char = player.Character
local humrootpart = char:WaitForChild("HumanoidRootPart")
local hum = char:WaitForChild("Humanoid")
local anim = hum:LoadAnimation(script.BombHold)
local mouse = player:GetMouse()
game.ReplicatedStorage.TakeBomb.OnClientEvent:Connect(function()
anim:Play()
mouse.KeyDown:Connect(function(key)
if key == "q" then
game.ReplicatedStorage.ThrowBomb:FireServer()
anim:Stop()
end
end)
end)
this is a localscript in startergui named BombClient
it basically receives the takebomb remotevent on the clientevent so the player can press Q to drop the bomb
and it plays the animation the player presses Q
@terse pewterso that's how i did it
kind lotus
local KP = script.Parent
KP.Touched:Connect(function(TP)
local humanoid = TP.Pa...
make some more variables
wait nvm he showed u something else
terse pewter
and it plays the animation the player presses Q
Great job! Nice script.
worn gorge
Thanks !
worn gorge
Great job! Nice script.
Excuse me, would you like to know the name of the game and the goal ?
i swear it's not to advertise it lol
i just like sharing details
worn gorge
@terse pewter
terse pewter
yea sure
worn gorge
alright
the game's name is "Pizza Boy"
BUT it's not a game inspired by pizza tower ❎
in fact i took inspiration from a lego stop motion video called "Lego Pizza Delivery"
the delivery dude was chased by ALOT of strangers
because of the smell of the delicious pizza
and that's the goal of the game
nocturne dagger
this is good, the only complaint that i haven't seen be said and i know isn't really the focus of the showcase is the health bar
the health bar is a pretty intrusive and takes up a lot of the screen and i'd suggest making space for it somewhere in the bottom portion of the screen
worn gorge
oh