#💬 Aiden__ʹs Feedback
maiden marshBOT
gilded sapphire
I'm gonna give some feedback
hot gull
Aight
gilded sapphire
You should put some effects on or under the helicopter, it looks like it was just placed there and not crashed or blown up or whatever
hot gull
So maybe fire/smoke etc?
gilded sapphire
The lighting on the tank looks really static, which is something you want to avoid.
The lighting on the people don't match the other lighting either, they look out-of-place
Final thing: The facemask on the units looks like it was photoshopped onto them. It ruins the units. I would recommend getting rid of it
hot gull
I used HDRI and inserted sun pointing onto the right of the pople.
hot gull
Final thing: The facemask on the units looks like it was photoshopped onto them....
It might just be as its a little dark
gilded sapphire
Try experimenting with 3D clothing, maybe add track marks behind the tank or footprints
hot gull
Is their any youtube tutorials?
gilded sapphire
It looks good for a beginner, definitely GFX1. maybe weak GFX2
gilded sapphire
Is their any youtube tutorials?
Not many
I would recommend talking to some other artists in #🎨︱gfx, ask them for feedback
Good luck!
hot gull
Alright, thanks alot 🙂
tacit sapphire
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