My best attempt at 200step so far

[hollow girder]

My main regret is that I picked a tough key to work with for this style (B)
https://youtu.be/N_LnzXW7x6s

[oak condor]

cat

[pallid delta]

I like the variety of sounds and assorted spices sprinkled around

I don't want to give too much feedback without knowing what it is that you're going for with the song. This song might hit absolutely perfect worked into the middle of a set where you had already built up the energy and mood accordingly.

If instead you want it to be a self-contained banger: I'd recommend more variation in the drum rhythm, the vocal samples, and more of an overall trajectory: tell a story.

[hollow girder]

TYSM for your feedback!