#Exalted

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marsh garden
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lol

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I've heard it's good!

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did you just not really click with the first set?

velvet raft
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Exigents just never super interested me

marsh garden
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fair

velvet raft
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I kinda like the vibe conceptually but

marsh garden
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unrelated to exigents, the thing that motivated me to actually go finish up the backstory for abyssal yeetmaster was the realization that the perfect character portrait already exists

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and it's another mf from arknights

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can you guess who?

velvet raft
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You know it's funny, I like eigents conceptually, and I like pregens in other games, but for some reason I have trouble finding the energy to look seriously at the exalted pregens

marsh garden
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the only improvised artifact in the game is a fucking wheel, even

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a steering wheel with thrown

velvet raft
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hahahaha

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It's true, she has perfect Abyssal vibes

marsh garden
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she's got super pale skin and unnatural vitality

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and she's the weird immortal captain of a crew of bastards

bleak hazel
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exalted is not really a pregen game for me

marsh garden
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and the underworld is pretty sea-themed in 3e

bleak hazel
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I might play a foxbinder at some point but it would require some fairly heavy refluffing

prisma sun
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I gave my abyssal villain an anchor goremaul

marsh garden
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so it Just Works

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fuck yeah

bleak hazel
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I'd sooner go for an Architect and bust out the neutral MA

marsh garden
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anchor goremaul is a vibe

velvet raft
wise ocean
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I wish axes and polearms had better MAs, I want to play a halberdier exalt sometime

coral wraith
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Eh, (splat) Melee always works

wise ocean
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but it's so sauceless ๐Ÿ˜”

bleak hazel
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embrace sidereal melee

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very solid + goes into your SMA of choice

coral wraith
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A good artifact also solves this

bleak hazel
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a CMOS halberdier clash build is technically quite effective, although heavy weapons can be a bit painful so I tend to make my polearms reflavoured longfangs/staves rather than reflavoured direlances

marsh garden
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i like hungry ghost, and i'm told that devil-prince is real good

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they also work together pretty well, thematically

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you're an unhinged finger-eating axe murderer

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your other martial art is about people being scared of you taking their fingers

marsh garden
bleak hazel
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DPS is one of the strongest normal Arts, I think

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not quite thousand blades/bear/righteous devil/single point tier but nothing should be

velvet raft
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Yeah, Exigent of a jailer god

bleak hazel
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and it's up there with things like Crane and Mantis as rock-solid combat suites

wise ocean
wise ocean
velvet raft
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So at a glance, I'm sort of contractually obligated to like the Chosen of Masks best

wise ocean
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takes away the downside other than the +1 defense

bleak hazel
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sids really like weapon accuracy because they multiply the effectiveness of accuracy dice with TN reduction

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so you're unusually accurate because you have accurate weapons

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Sids are very much light/medium weapon enjoyers

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I would recommend strongly that any artifact you make take the MA compat of one existing weapon type at any given time

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messing with compatibility is generally above the power budget of all but the most juiced 5-dots

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and even that needs to be fairly carefully vetted

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spear is easy though

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halberd can be either longfang or staff-that-does-lethal

wise ocean
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considering the dearth of axe and spear MAs I can't imagine it'd be that OP, which is mostly why I was considering it

coral wraith
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Like eg. Threnody Engine

velvet raft
bleak hazel
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devil-prince + white reaper is not something I would particularly like to see comboing on the same attacks and defences

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axe + spear are both doing quite well for themselves lately

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Ccham, White Reaper, Golden Janissary and a stack of the new Agents ones when they show up

wise ocean
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ah, devil-prince works on axes as well? thought it was an EB-style "sword MA and also the new sword we added"

bleak hazel
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also takes hatchets

wise ocean
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neat

velvet raft
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Tragic lack of Big Axe

bleak hazel
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which means you can chuck them and take people's fingers off at range

velvet raft
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Only Hungry Ghost can do Big Axe

wise ocean
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yeah, I thought it was basically "hungry ghost, WR, GJ - okay so everything here sucks except WR"

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hungry ghost is funny but its only independently useful charm is at the very start

marsh garden
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which is really funny

velvet raft
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I dunno, Hungry Ghost looks pretty good to me

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But you gotta be a Hungry Ghost Stylist

marsh garden
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THERE AREN'T ANY GREATAXE OR GREATHAMMER MAS

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WHEREMST

velvet raft
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There's Earth Dragon

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For big hammer

marsh garden
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i thought ed was regular hammers?

velvet raft
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Nope, tetsubo

marsh garden
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huh!

velvet raft
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Also supports heavy armor

bleak hazel
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earth derg extremely strong

marsh garden
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i know what I'll be deebing if i deeb, then!

marsh garden
marsh garden
velvet raft
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To be tbh I'd suggest people just treat big axes and scythes as the same thing

marsh garden
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bc it relies a lot on earth aura

bleak hazel
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what if we bypassed all the traditional flaws of deebs by simply having absurd giga soak + smashing, so we don't care that we can't block because we can just dunk

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honestly earth dragon is not that aura dependent

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there's a bit of it in there but not huge amounts

velvet raft
bleak hazel
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still, I prefer it on deebs and sids

wise ocean
bleak hazel
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they are the natural candidates for IMAs

wise ocean
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even the capstone is mostly an "this is extremely funny if you hit it" thing than a Useful Charm

bleak hazel
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other terrestrials can't even learn them unless they're like architects and get neutral MA base

marsh garden
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that's why hungy + prince!

velvet raft
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They actually don't pair well

marsh garden
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oh fr?

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sad

velvet raft
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I've looked at it and they mix awkwardly despite some elements that seem like they should mix

marsh garden
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tragic

velvet raft
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Among them, they're both styles that want to be in their form

wise ocean
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... come to think of it, hungry ghost, white reaper, and golden janissary all share "there are 1-2 really independently good charms in these and then a lot of Situational Tech" as a thing

HG is "kiting enemy tech," WR is "battlegroup tech," and GJ is "doomoid tech"

marsh garden
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huh

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janny uses axes?

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oh spears

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you were talking general trends

wise ocean
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technically GJ is also kiting enemy tech because it has great rushes but ymmv

velvet raft
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White Reaper is pretty good even for 1v1s, it's just less specialized

wise ocean
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oh, sure, but everything in it is poking you and going "yeah man you really hate battlegroups huh"

marsh garden
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me when i invert onslaught

velvet raft
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I do think my character in mortalgame will pick up some white reaper if she can

bleak hazel
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Downside to my E5 crane build is that once I have PAOC Form I have to go exchange student with some of the other MAs and learn how to onslaught negate

marsh garden
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...okay your talk of mortalgame has reminded me

bleak hazel
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so unarmed WR dip likely real

marsh garden
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i have the dumbest idea

velvet raft
marsh garden
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mortalgame start, goobers in creation doing what you do

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arc 1 you do some heroic shit

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and die in the process

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smash cut

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you are an alch

velvet raft
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Abyssals?

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OH

marsh garden
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Everyone Is John

bleak hazel
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I'm not sure adding White Reaper Form to Crane + SFS actually gets you anything other than halo aura farming though

velvet raft
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Wait you're all one alch?

marsh garden
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YOU ARE ALL ONE ALCH

velvet raft
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snrrk

marsh garden
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DISCO ELYSIUM VOICES

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EVERYONE IS JOHN

bleak hazel
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You kind of need to get the WR multiattack and that's expensive

marsh garden
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the process went wrong! the creation wasn't perfect!

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and the souls aren't one soul, but still their disparate parts

velvet raft
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Yeah, it's less that WR form is great

marsh garden
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and yet it worked, and you are an Alchemical Exalt

velvet raft
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And more that halos make WR charms a lot better

marsh garden
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i would have a blast with that

wise ocean
velvet raft
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And halos are a WR form thing

wise ocean
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I genuinely think the best way to deal with WR is the graves tech where you just go "I am Fighting a BG, time to turn the fuck up" and use the reflexive condition

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because it's so permissive

velvet raft
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give us a secret technique that lets us gain a smaller number of halos in another form, you cowards

marsh garden
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wild that she gets quadcasting

velvet raft
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I'm contractually obligated to go for a person who can use Mastery

marsh garden
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is she celestial?

velvet raft
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Yes

marsh garden
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thought so

marsh garden
buoyant summit
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You know what would fuck as an idea for 'an' Alchemical

velvet raft
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Well dang

buoyant summit
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two Alchs of the same Caste who've always manifested from the stream of souls as twins

marsh garden
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huh

velvet raft
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That's a cool concept

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Alternately, make them orichalcum and soulsteel :D

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takes off sunglasses to reveal another pair of sunglasses

marsh garden
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that's really fun

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can she stack that?

marsh garden
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or like, keep doing it over and over i mean

velvet raft
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It's once per scene unless she upholds her current mask's principle

marsh garden
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i like that that encourages shenanigans by enabling shenanigans

velvet raft
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Also from the same charm

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So she can be Kamen Rider

marsh garden
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be the right kind of abrupt and erratic asshole and just

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keep swapping faces

velvet raft
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She is, tragically, a little bit undercooked in terms of the variety of her masks

bleak hazel
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Her charm trees are limited by what mask she's currently wearing, so that's basically a kit swap charm

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Like Alchs, but with even fewer charms up at any given time and easier swapping

marsh garden
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i imagine she's fun if you're willing to brew up more kits based on the assorted masks in books

velvet raft
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I do think they intended a certain amount of superhero vibes here

marsh garden
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...i said assorted, but

velvet raft
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Since this is The Clark Kent Charm

marsh garden
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wow there are no fucking masks

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i thought there was one in a lunars book

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and one in arms

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but i guess it's just the abyssals one?

velvet raft
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FWIW you don't need the masks to be external artifacts or anything

prisma sun
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Theres also the Deeb mask charm

marsh garden
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oh i'm sure she can just make more

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but

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i thought there were more external masks to take inspo from

velvet raft
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Ah, yeah

buoyant summit
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Would you say a Divine Minister is a suitable 3-Dot Mentor?

bleak hazel
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each mask is basically just a charm tree with a mask theme attached

buoyant summit
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for a Machine Saint

velvet raft
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Ye

bleak hazel
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so you don't need artifact masks to steal

velvet raft
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Anyway, Chosen of Masks seems ideal if you want a partially-completed kit to flesh out more

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Which I do not

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But I like the overarching concept

bleak hazel
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there are some interesting compatibility things going on with a lot of exigents

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masks has the masks, Mysteries has mastery + full native charm compatibility limited by the fact the resource he spends on mastery is quite limited and his native charms, as a giant nerd exalt, are not exactly Solar Melee

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so he can bust out a really scary suite for a short period of time

velvet raft
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He seems like he's supposed to be Sherlock Holmes: Exalted Edition

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Chosen of Seals is pretty cool

velvet raft
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I'm just an MA addict

prisma sun
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MAs are fun

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I do think people should just add weapons to styles

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And not feel anything in their souls

buoyant summit
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Our GM is letting us use a grand beamklave with Golden Janissary

marsh garden
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beamu...

velvet raft
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TBH Mastery would feel pretty fitting on Bleak Warden

buoyant summit
# marsh garden beamu...

You just made us realize we could look at BeaMu to see what a Built Stupid Adamant can do that isn't just combat lmao

bleak hazel
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if you don't use additional weapon options on an MA to combo it with stuff it shouldn't combo with or to cheese something like, say, long range thrown smashing attacks on a close range only style, you can basically do what you want with custom weapons

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bleak hazel
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grand daiklave that works with white reaper? go wild

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(I prefer "this weapon counts as [weapon type]" for the purpose of martial arts compatibility" to listing out styles since it makes it easier)

marsh garden
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oh, i just did

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The Rotting Sun is compatible with Fire Dragon Style, but can't combine Fire Dragon Charms with other Martial Arts Charms unless they're compatible with both short swords and meteor hammers.

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for an artifact i'm working on

buoyant summit
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I don't think a grand daiklave working for Golden Jan does anything too stupid

bleak hazel
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is that the one that does disgusting amounts of ping damage whenever you pull it back?

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(the meteor hammer, that is)

buoyant summit
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oh, VBoS

bleak hazel
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simply do not mix it with VBOS and you're fine

marsh garden
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i'm changing the ways that works around, but yeah

velvet raft
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I think people should feel free to reflavor MA weapons

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But enabling new combinations is a bit more fraught

merry arch
marsh garden
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Fitful Spark Paroxysm
Cost: 2m, 1wp; Mins: Essence 1
Type: Reflexive
Keywords: None
Duration: Instant
Prerequisites: Gutter-Star's Despair
When the wielder Reflexively retrieves Liala with its Special tag, it detonates with a scream and an eruption of pyreflame. This is a one-time environmental hazard with difficulty (Appearance or Charisma) and Damage (lower of Essence or 3)i against all enemies within close range of the hammer, or Damage (Essence + 1, maximum 6)i against battle groups and characters with hopeful Intimacies. This withering damage is unsoakable, but the wielder can only gain a maximum of (lower of Essence or 3) Initiative.
current place i have that evo

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marsh garden
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not sure if it's too over or under-sauced

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it's meant to just be an evil bitter motherfucker that hurts people for not being as jaded as it is

velvet raft
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... god damn it I would play a Chosen of Seals with Mastery in a second

merry arch
marsh garden
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SOGGY DUSK AGENDA

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go forth, my friend

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make shitty loser dusks

bleak hazel
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unfortunately none of my characters are soggy

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Telek is a guilt-ridden mess who is putting up a semi-decent front of being the big cool dynast

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just has to go through the Apocalypse Now hotel room scene every morning before putting on the beautiful silk robes and picking up the giant jade dragon spear

merry arch
# marsh garden make shitty loser dusks

yeah they're gonna be bullied incessantly by their circle. I've already talked to the other prospective players and pretty much everyone that could be chosen is like "yeah I'm gonna bully them mercilessly" or "I'm going to perform unethical medical experiments on them"

bleak hazel
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(Telek is also not an Azimuth despite the fact he's going to end up with a lot of combat investment, because he is Potential Exalt)

marsh garden
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my circle is kind of the opposite of that, with the exception of one of the sids that keeps being a menacing endings about it, whose hand is only stayed because she's a gold radical very firmly on vacation

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the other sid is super new to the job and both extremely optimistic and extremely adjusting

velvet raft
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From Chosen of Slaughter anima effects: dang, that ain't bad at all

marsh garden
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but i do want to play a pathetic loser that gets bullied by their circle

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oooh

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that's a meaty as hell reflexive jb

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not even needing to kill em is great

velvet raft
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... haha, chosen of slaughter gets a reflexive clash that has to be a disarm, because it's biting the weapon

marsh garden
merry arch
marsh garden
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it's peak

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tell your group that i love them

merry arch
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๐Ÿซก

merry arch
velvet raft
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Charm type: Shark

marsh garden
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i love this too

velvet raft
marsh garden
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...okay, i'm confused

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is the e3 one a second rebuy

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or part of the e2 rebuy

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it looks like it's just part of the e2 rebuy, right?

velvet raft
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That's how I would read it

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Chosen of Slaughter definitely has a well fleshed-out set of charms

marsh garden
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nice

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glad that it's not one with obvious pain-point gaps

merry arch
marsh garden
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a long, long way from home

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who's the rest of the gang?

merry arch
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nothing solid yet, but there's someone thinkin about making a lunar sorcerer, manipulator, and doctor. then another person is making a apoc medicine abyssal Frankenstein dollgirl

velvet raft
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This is an amusing image

bleak hazel
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Janest has an absolute ton of art

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she is kind of the edition postergirl so I guess it makes sense

chilly sluice
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Janest punch

velvet raft
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Her charmset's pretty rad, really

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merry arch
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yes Arby too

marsh garden
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arby?

merry arch
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hell's soggiest princess having the worst time ever

marsh garden
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excellent

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i wish her all the worst

fierce star
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I wonder if the infernal I'm fiddling with isn't soggy enough for being a dawnoid

merry arch
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reveler needs a sog to commiserate with

marsh garden
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continue to drip all over the floor

fierce star
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since it seems like most good dawnoids are quite soggy

velvet raft
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She has the meats

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I'm still pleased with Chains for a non-soggy dawnoid

merry arch
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I think u can make a good dawn without them being damp, but gap moe is a very fun way to undercut the Dawn stereotypes

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marsh garden
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i didn't set out to make Hope a dusk! it was just that or day for athletics, and i needed to only be good at ruining everything i touch

fierce star
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wait a goddamn minute I recognize that princess maker 2 screencap

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that's from the something awful let's play

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i'd know lizzie shinkicker anywhere

marsh garden
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lmao

fierce star
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this makes it even more horrifying (great LP by the way highly reccomended read)

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Slavering Horror-Maw
Unrelenting Hellbound Might
Six-Demon Senses
All-Hunger Rapacity
Instaitable Horror Gourmand
Unyielding Devil Will
Hardened Demon Flesh
Hardened Demon Flesh
By Pain Reforged
By Agony Empowered
Scar-Writ Saga Shield
Scar-writ Saga Shield
Beast of Proud Bearing
Black Iron Flank
arby chose violence

fierce star
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but yeah my azimuth, Liangxiao, has the following defining intimacies:

Tie: Her Father (Love)
Principle: "Dad raised me to be a better person than he was. When we meet again, he'll be proud."

And major intimacies related to genuine heroism and diong her best to be a Good Person, while actually understanding what that means and how her actions effect others.

marsh garden
fierce star
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Mind you she is blind, armless, scarred, hungry all the time and tastes people from a distance

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so like. She definitely hits the Freak (TM) Vibes (TM) visually

marsh garden
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fierce star
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and then she's just an actual good person under all that because her dad was absolutely not and wanted her to not grow up to be like him, because he was a gangster working for the god of addiction.

merry arch
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reveler starts with flaw Sickly where people go hey pleaguey get away from me

marsh garden
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i'm still chuffed by

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i love having a bad time

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it's my favorite

velvet raft
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Man I really want a chance to play Hao-Guntur

merry arch
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babythey's clothes are stained with blood from coughing and they generally have Wet Lung Noises all the time when they aren't coughing up a lot of blood

marsh garden
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i think i've said this before, but y'all's characters are great and a continuous inspiration to get better

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it's peak

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velvet raft
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Hm. What do y'all imagine an infernal fetich soul of "Let's all calm down and discuss this rationally" would be like as a 3CD?

merry arch
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merry arch
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resistance roll? 2 dice? yeah. alright.

marsh garden
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does black gunk leaking from tooth-eyes count

marsh garden
merry arch
marsh garden
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listening to y'all's goober cookery is entertaining and inspiring

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yaaaaaaaay

velvet raft
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i have been poisoned by exalted since middle school

velvet raft
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As we all know, squid are extremely rational

fierce star
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Ligier as Gendo Shinkicker...

marsh garden
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the principle is cessation

merry arch
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velvet raft
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Hmmmm

marsh garden
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the absolute demand for all to stop, because only when action is impossible can discussion be possible

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velvet raft
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The weather theming would fit with being an infernal archery user

marsh garden
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and a hateful inquisition, to seek out and cease anything that exists too loudly

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arby trying to talk about the novels she's read and the maid has stumbled in horror one too many times and her temper snaps

marsh garden
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or too passionately

velvet raft
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And a sail user

merry arch
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I think they land around 6 with void mask facade

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they can hide the fact they're scared shitless decently well

marsh garden
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the most recent things Hope has done are have a panic attack and call a circlemate with the abyssal rancid telepathy charm into his mom-infernal's kitchen at 3 am to try curry, and be confused and suspicious of another abyssal we met for calling mass sacrifice of civilians "a blasphemy"

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immediately before these things he accidentally obliterated someone when trying to catch them because he wanted to ask a question about cooking

fierce star
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I should acutally put Liangxiao to full sheet instead of just generic notes probably

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infernals aren't in the gdoc sheet yet rihgt

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... I need more exalted games

marsh garden
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yeah

marsh garden
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marsh garden
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THIS SHIT IS WAY TOO FUN

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the strong must fall afore the weak, so that despair takes the lessers and they know their place

marsh garden
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it does!! and he's one of the Walker's, and the other abyssal's ostensibly one of the Heron's

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who's like

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not faithful faithful, but her existence is a perfect statement

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yah yah

fierce star
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really my problem is my work schedule

marsh garden
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so because he's completely drunk the kool-aid, another abyssal not being gung-ho about at the very least the religion part is "hmm, are they a traitor?"

fierce star
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I don't do well at PBP unless i'm being rode hard about it and my work schedule would have me missing (or the game just not happening) every third week

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and that's a turnoff for a lot of groups

marsh garden
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scheduling's real hard

merry arch
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reveler will probably end up accepting their new circumstances very easily once the lover explains everything to them. i'm imagining her having a very medusa gorgon relationship with them. (point reveler at thing that needs to die โ†’ they say o-okay... anything for you... I just want to dance with my sword... โ†’ unquestioning pursuit of their goal because nothing else makes sense anymore)

marsh garden
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cronaposting my beloved

merry arch
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correct

fierce star
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Hmm

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does anyone have the blank character inspo template?

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merry arch
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yes yes exactly. they get to have a very strange soulcrushing maternal relationship with the lover as a treat. mom who wants to kill love treats them as a tool. what's not to like

marsh garden
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oh, sniped

fierce star
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ty

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I might try to find ssix things that vibe for me for liangxiao

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I don't have any actual art for her (yet) but

merry arch
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im thinkin about maybe getting a comm of Reveler or badgering my wife for art of them

fierce star
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hell yeah

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I'm definitely getting a comm for liangxiao I think

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but i'm waiting on the artist I want to have a comm slot free up lol

marsh garden
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ooh, which artist?

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i need to add more to my repertoire of good exalted artists with comms available

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to call on in times of need

fierce star
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uuuh let me ask if she has a portfolio she's cool with me linking, she's a friend of mine

marsh garden
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ah gotcha

fierce star
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i'll DM it to you since it's a bsky with NSFW stuff posted on it

marsh garden
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o7

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cheers

wise ocean
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graves is the sog equivalent of antarctica

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largest desert in the world. cold as death

fierce star
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lol

merry arch
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im very pleased with my dusk so far. I'm trying to deliberately keep the training weights on them until they finish their first story. the 5 charms they'll get at the end of it is basically all I need to make their combat suite significantly scarier. until then, potential dusk

tulip folio
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Hellova Entrance
Cost: โ€”; Mins: Appearnace 3, Essence 1
Type: Permanent
Keywords: None
Duration: Permanent
Prerequisite Charms: None
Win or lose, none can deny the wanderer does it with style and panache.

The Wanderer can Join Battle with [Appearance + [Performance, Presence or War]). This isn't compatible with effects that grant bonus Appearance dots or replace her Appearance with a higher value.

I've been wanting to use this name for a charm for ages and I think I finally found a decent place, making it one of the stat swaps for wanderers.

prisma sun
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Hellova Boss

fierce star
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oooh

marsh garden
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...i really don't like that it's "a entrance" lol

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instead of an entrance

fierce star
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I think most 'replace both wits and awreness' are temporary swaps, but dont' take me word for it

marsh garden
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but otherwise showboating appearance JB is fun

fierce star
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I mean hellova/helluva entrance is pretty normal terminology I think?

marsh garden
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i've never seen it with the -ova

fierce star
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it's not 'correct' but neithe ris a lot of common vernacular english

marsh garden
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...although i've never actually seen "[that was] a hell of an entrance" written down anywhere, i think

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so i dunno if it's standard in the slang

fierce star
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I do really like the vibe though

marsh garden
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yeah, absolutely

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fun flavor text too

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it's not about the fight, it's about the show

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you gotta give the people what they want! doesn't matter if you win or die, they're just here for the bread and circuses

prisma sun
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Ive only seen-uva tbh

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Ive never seen ova

tulip folio
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Look, would you rather lose or would you have prefered to not be in the scene at all? Not being on-page is worse than being dead, they mourn the dead! ๐Ÿ˜›

marsh garden
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We who are about to die...

prisma sun
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Aren't

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suplexes the lion

fierce star
marsh garden
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yay, secret

fierce star
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is this? a thing? This is kind of a thing? Maybe? I feel like there's tonal whiplash here but finding a full six people is hard.

tulip folio
#
Razor Tongued Socialite Invocation
Cost: 3m; Mins: Appearance 3, Essence 1
Type: Supplemental
Keywords: None
Duration: Instant
Prerequisite Charms: None
The Wanderer knows some of the most important rules for survival in the cruel courts of the fey: Every weakness must be exploited.

This supplements an action that uses the Wanderer's appearance to add bonus dice to a roll. For this roll, she compares her appearance to the lower of the target's resolve or appearance.
fierce star
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You have a bunch of horrible monsters and then some soggy children and then also LEgitimately A Good Person

tulip folio
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Mr X is pretty good, yeah

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๐Ÿ˜›

fierce star
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lmao

fierce star
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in the general sense of 'younger person willing to call out old people on their shit when they're actively making the world a worse place for everyone'

buoyant summit
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Fair

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But

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Zato and G r e t a T h u n b e r g

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I think we've been dethroned as having the most whiplash inspos

fierce star
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siblings I have nemo from finding nemo and mr. x from resident evil on there too this whole thing is a tonal whiplash

buoyant summit
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For a Lancer character we had Steven Universe and Ultron directly across from one another

fierce star
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hell yeah

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honestly my big thing is that it is very hard to find a character in fiction who is a double above-elbow amputee that doesn't have them replaced with some form of prothesis

marsh garden
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i should try to avoid being guilty of that on my next character

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make it a genuine challenge, no alch no lunar no infernal to ignore that in their different ways, just

buoyant summit
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Oh wait you wan't fuckin tonal whiplash, hold on

marsh garden
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genuine constant consideration

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i applaud you for it

buoyant summit
marsh garden
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i hope it goes well

buoyant summit
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Darth Maul, Vivec, Johnny Silverhand

fierce star
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hell yeah

buoyant summit
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M E G A M I N D

fierce star
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Topple: being fair this is an infernal, but like... yes, she has Mind hand manipulation, as well as the infernal touch and taste/smell booste rcharms

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the problem is those don't cover all her bases, right? MHM is very not subtle, and (sans hallucinogens) it's not like she can reasonably taste colors or similar. So she's getting over some of it, but not all of it.

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I'm like cheating halfway there?

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you can't hug your father with telekinetic arms

marsh garden
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oh yeah i wouldn't be going the whole way down, just

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only the amputations (which might actually end up being a consistent thing for Hope, depending on my and the GM's plans for horrific maiming annihilation of his prosthetics)

fierce star
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hell yeah

marsh garden
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i have three npc abyssals in my backstory and literally all of them exist primarily to enable bullying

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one threw me into the labyrinth, one made my prosthetics for the express purpose of them failing eventually so i truly understand nihilistic despair instead of just being grateful to my deathlord, and one thinks I'm an annoying overdramatic stereotype of the Realm's picture of an immature young man (overly emotional and bad at everything except hurting people), which is entirely lost on me, having minimal exposure to Realm culture

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i can't wait to make his life worse

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the one that tossed him into the labyrinth is just kind of a short-tempered misanthrope, and was annoyed that his first real display of initiative was asking her to help him with something absurdly intimate and time-consuming (learning sorcery)

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so she went "sure, fine, go figure it the fuck out"

fierce star
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hell yeah

marsh garden
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Hope is guilelessly grateful for this

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because it worked

fierce star
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LIangxiao's a sorcerer, but I think it's likely she was a sorcerer as a mortal; her dad was rich as hell and absolutely doted on her, which included hiring tutors for whatever hyperfixation she's gotten this week. I'm thinking just go with heptagram student for her initiation, though i'm not sure yet.

marsh garden
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you could snag one of the ones from Ys in 8 directions

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or hell-fruit crucible, which lets you OD or gorge yourself

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as like

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not something that you would want

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but something that might have been your most comprehensive instruction on sorcery

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all of arby's siblings fuckin died in various tragic ways (two suicides and a blue beard situation) leaving her unready spoiled self to a throne under constant attack by agents of the Realm and various backed rebellions

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sometimes a person's life is a dunk tank

marsh garden
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due to being in the thrall of your opiate-god

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or do soul-perfecting elixir's asceticism benefits for the inverse

fierce star
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a ysyri sorcerer who travelled all the way to wu jian to tutor a spoiled girl...
well, she's not in thrall to them. Her dad was, and he wanted her to not be, and I feel like part of the deal with his exigency was that his patron never, ever touch his little girl or his exigent would spill all his dirty secret's to heaven's straightest cops

marsh garden
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growing up, your dad's resources would have been connected to the god, yeah?

fierce star
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a stipend from that plus his own gangster activities, yeah

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marsh garden
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so it'd be the customary or comfortable rites from the sorcerers he'd have been able to draw on

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i love her eyes

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her lancer version is much more fucked up (zombie coded) and her infernals version is coded as larval demon queen

marsh garden
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i wanted to get lamprey teeth in Hope's, since he's all-in on the Maw and i describe them as a thing with the suggestion of hungry mouths, but

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it ended up looking like it'd be a bit too busy

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however i cannot stop posting because i love the way his arms and hair came out

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i'm sorry for being annoying about my blorbo it will happen again

fierce star
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blorboposting is like half of why we play exalted

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exalted is great for making blorbos

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arby's got the slavering horror-maw which i like to go with her teeth are a mix of conical crocidile fangs and sharp houndstooth, chimerically crammed into a mouth that seems too small for it all. until she opens her jaws, going wider and wider and wider than should be possible.

fierce star
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I haven't taken any of the like, supe rmutationy charms on liangxiao yet. I might later, but not yet.

marsh garden
fierce star
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i should blorbo about my lunar more

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hey topple do you know what carrion bees are

marsh garden
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i don't!

fierce star
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so they're a species of bee-related insect that are, uh

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carnivorous

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vulture bees!!!

fierce star
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Ye!

marsh garden
fierce star
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they make their honey out of meat

marsh garden
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unfortunately i'm bad at that

fierce star
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They're also cute lil bastards (spoilered for bees)

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marsh garden
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oh that's neat, where are they from?

fierce star
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the three known species are native to south america iirc

marsh garden
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horrifying! but neat

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nice

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meat-honey mead sounds like it would go hard

fierce star
#

so my carrion bee lunar is a (former?) immaculate exorcist who followed the Intou heresy from the former Intou Shogunate area

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(the former is because she's anathema now, but like. She still takes ocmfort in her faith, even if she has found out it's a lie)

marsh garden
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incredible

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is it a lie? look at your buddies, they're all huge dickheads

fierce star
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she is a necromancer and white reaper stylist who believes in bringing comfort to the living and peace to the dead once it is their time.

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also the ghost of her great-great-great-great aunt sticks around to give her ghostly advice and drink all her grave wine.

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I had fun with her intimacies lmao

marsh garden
bleak hazel
# merry arch im starting reveler with some chronic illnesses (consumption, anemia, hemophilia...

I can't remember whether this was actual 2e canon or just a common fan interpretation that I found extremely funny, but under at least one interpretation of how X-blooded used to work if they cultivated their essence up to E4 they'd transcend into an example of the type - so a demonblooded would become a custom 1CD, a god-blooded a low to medium strength god, a Faeblood a wyld thing.

Ghostblooded... got sicker and sicker until they fell over dead at E4 and became ghosts. Sucks to be them.

fierce star
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That was actual 2e canon but it didn't ALWAYS happen

marsh garden
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transcend to Fucking Loser

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incredible

fierce star
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it was a 'the player character can make the choice rule, for NPCs it probably does though'

marsh garden
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would be kinda rad if you could do that and it would be like

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the 3e core Bizarro Hungry Ghost

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that hides inside its living body

bleak hazel
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Also an E3-4 god-blooded was still kind of nothing on actual Exalt scales, the absolute strongest might be able to fight a young deeb

marsh garden
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except your lower soul just eats your higher soul and you become a semi-living vampire

bleak hazel
#

Honestly in 3e Enlightened Mortal Gaming might not be that bad

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10xEssence motes each, learn those TMAs or be a sorceror instead

marsh garden
#

what does the T in that MA standard

bleak hazel
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go do some fairly low end wuxia

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Oh, Terrestrial

marsh garden
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ahh

bleak hazel
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There used to be Terrestrial Martial Arts, which were specific jobs like "assassin" or "street brawler", Celestial Martial Arts which are your animal styles or immaculate styles or all the other actually good stuff and then SMAs

fierce star
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enlightened mortal gaming was honeslty pretty fun in ex2

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enlightened mortals are one of teh things I miss most from ex2 as being, like, a noted thing that can exist

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(do not speak to me of half-castes)

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(vile things, never should have been written)

bleak hazel
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The distinction was removed once they figured out a way to do cross splat charms in 3e that didn't suck and wildly swing between "this is a worse, less flavourful version of the real CMA but we need to print it anyway" and "this is cracked because it's balanced against X Splat charms but other splats can take it ".

marsh garden
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ah right, the half-a-solars that were straight up better than deebs yes?

bleak hazel
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There was like, shitty terrestrial earth dragon style equivalents that were just worse and really boring, and it even deebs took them because deebs could just enlighten into using CMAs

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They existed almost entirely so that you could use the generic mortal enlightening rules to make your army of enlightened mortal TMA using gunzosha wearing tiger warrior astartes

fierce star
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the ony thing I really miss about TMAs is that I had a character whow as nicknamed 'The Golden Cynis'... becuase he used both Golden Exhalation and Golden Jannissary with a firewand with a bayonet.

bleak hazel
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I feel that's pretty easy to do these days as well, although I'd wait until Roaring Iron Style and see if that is less Core than righteous devil as a firewand MA to reflavour

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although I guess GE was basically shitty terrestrial righteous devil anyway

marsh garden
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i thought righteous devil was pretty good?

bleak hazel
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It's up there with Bear/Thousand Blades/Single Point

marsh garden
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ah, too good, i see

bleak hazel
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If Single Point Form didn't do deeply immoral things to the action economy Righteous Devil would almost certainly be stronger

fierce star
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GE was a little 'terrestiral righteous devil' but it has some unique quirks of it's own as I remember, though I don't remember waht they were

marsh garden
#

wild

fierce star
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it was one of the better 'terrestrial version of a cma' styles

bleak hazel
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It's not really that RD has anything that insane design wise, it just has huge numbers on every charm because they hadn't quite calibrated things yet

marsh garden
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ah

bleak hazel
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Check that aoe charm out

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and the one that straight up ignores all soak (actually that's based, honestly)

marsh garden
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i think core should be burned, why does it keep fucking ordering e2 charms behind e3 charms

fierce star
#

but yeah, The Golden Cynis was a fun character I had in ex2. If I did him in ex3 he'd kind of need a new epithet I think. I mean, it still kind of works, golden janissary being there, but

marsh garden
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oh, dancing devil trigger finger, i see

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that just applies full init to everyone

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okay

fierce star
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... fuck

marsh garden
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extremely normal button

fierce star
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his mom would just use milf venusaur gijinka art if I used her now.

marsh garden
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LMAO

buoyant summit
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One of the players in potential Alchgame made a jetpack joke

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Do

marsh garden
buoyant summit
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Do Alchs get a jetpack?

bleak hazel
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It kind of sucks that RD is so strong because it is just drippy as hell

marsh garden
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one of their mid-essence mobility tools

bleak hazel
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"dancing devil trigger finger" is up there with "steel and smoke mandala" as cool names for gun charms

prisma sun
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Are there rogue Alchemicals?

marsh garden
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yes, apostates

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not all apostates are blight-huffing gremlinmaxxers

bleak hazel
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Maybe I should write a righteous devil rebalance that ensmallens a few numbers and makes some of the terrestrial tags hurt less

marsh garden
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they're just all named as heretics

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and i'm sure there are like, one or two tunnelfolk defectors

fierce star
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A lot of them end up that way but it's because alchemicals ultimately need a support structure, and what the octet won't offer them...

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not all do, of course

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but when you're designed to be part of osmething bigger and the good guys don't feel so good anymore

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I do like that the previous edition's iconic soulsteel is a hair's bredth away from going apostate and joining the one tier movement

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because he's fallen in love with his mark

buoyant summit
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Our Adamant is possibly a One-Tierist

marsh garden
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oh boy

buoyant summit
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Mostly because their Orichalc, their friend, possibly subject of romantic affection, this paragon of virtue, literally built to be so

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Failed

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What does that say about the caste system meant to support these apparently fallible paragons?

feral cipher
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having fun prodding at The Grave tonight
I like having fucked up awful guys with reasons why they're Like That

coral wraith
wise ocean
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realized the Incredible Power of RD while properly statting out the E3 version of my sniper deeb, now the awareness will never leave me

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psychically poisonous knowledge

tulip folio
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im trying to write an intimacy for Arablissa i have no idea how to phrase her beautiful princess disorder

wise ocean
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yeah man the uh. the e3 deeb just one-shot you from Range Yes. why? uhhhh. 30 damage withering ginore soak

fierce star
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fierce star
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i had somehow forgotten about her, but it's been awhile since i watched loK

marsh garden
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oh i dig ming-hua

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that's a cool setup

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prisma sun
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"I am. The rightful heir. No matter what anyone says."

feral cipher
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Nobody will ever leave me again

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Hrmmnnnnn i have to figure outttttt

marsh garden
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oh yeah. that works

bleak hazel
prisma sun
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What's RD in this context?

marsh garden
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righteous devil

fierce star
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Righteous Devil

marsh garden
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the gun MA style

prisma sun
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Ah

wise ocean
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to be fair we are unlikely to hit E3 for the next two years or so

prisma sun
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I was thinking Resplendent Destiny

fierce star
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an RD who uses RD to RD his RD

marsh garden
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those also have incredible power!

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but usually not in combat

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hehehe okay hiiii arbyintimacies

wise ocean
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and righteous devil just really fucking sucks for deebs until you can get water dragon form online
which, realistically, e3

fierce star
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good lord that's a soggy infernal

bleak hazel
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Yeah there's a lot of terrestrial

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Main goal would be to smooth out the curve a bit

marsh garden
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SOPPING wet skrunklo

bleak hazel
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less big bignumber, less insanely harsh terrestrial tags

fierce star
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honestly I don't think Terrestrial should be a tag, it mostly exists from like, an emotional standpoint to make you feel bad for playing terrestiral martial artists

prisma sun
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Del I need to bully Arby more

fierce star
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that aren't immaculate stylists

marsh garden
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which is kind of how it is on modern styles

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most of the clash/counter charms and multiattacks lose some amount of their attack efficiency

tulip folio
#

Does this make sense to people? I'm working on a second circle machine spirit:

Panzer Hive: Abeille generally goes into combat docked with her Panzer Hive, a large external mobile factory submodule. The Panzer Hive is treated as a mount that does not roll its own initiative and grants her access to traits and charms with the 'Hive' tag. She can mount or dismount the Panzer Hive as a simple action while she's within arm's reach of it. While she is not mounted with the Panzer Hive, it can be damaged to prevent her use of it until it is repaired, though it would require a difficulty 14 feat of demolition that requires a minimum strength of 7.
bleak hazel
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Yeah it's important to have mechanically because otherwise every deeb uses Snake or what have you and every native Deeb combat tree lies down and cries

prisma sun
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Core Terrestial just feels mean-spirited

fierce star
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makes sense to me, iki

marsh garden
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situation normal

fierce star
#

SNCFU

prisma sun
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god

fierce star
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situation normal core fucked up

prisma sun
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i need to get back into the server

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i need to write anything

fierce star
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(pronounced 'snack-fu')

prisma sun
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i've been so fucking exhausted lately

marsh garden
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oh i was responding to iki with the situation normal

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but yeah core fucked up too

fierce star
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oh

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lol

feral cipher
tulip folio
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Trying to make people remember the 'Unhorse' gambit exists one character and charm at a time. XD

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feral cipher
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uh oh!

coral wraith
marsh garden
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hm

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gamers

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i request assistance

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stumped on evocation ideas

prisma sun
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between moving, work being abnormally hellish, and breaking up with my partner my energy is just gone and I'm feeling the executive dysfunction set in

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I should probably get back on magnesium

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prisma sun
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Also I realized I can now use the art I just got for my Season of Ghosts character for an Abyssal Whenever I Want

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Be hilarious and say this is him Pre-Exaltation

coral wraith
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tis the season

tulip folio
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I'm having fun tinkering with an Infernal who has both strength 1 and also is Strength 7 for the purpose of Feats of Strength. Surprisingly: She does not have mind-hand manipulation.

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well there you go.

tulip folio
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She's this noodle armed mage who occasionally ponders objects for a minute and then Gmod physics exploits them into the sky.

prisma sun
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I will do a post tomorrow in the server asking what people would need to get the server reenergized

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I think more mini STs are needed

wise ocean
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this is potentially wise

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atm though I honestly think it's just missing people who are Nevertheless Plot-Critical

prisma sun
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Yeah I am gonna ping speaker

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I know people have been waiting for him

bleak hazel
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My usual Lancer game tomorrow has been cancelled so I'll start running the first Crimsonquest in that time slot

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Once that's underway I can spin something up for Drifts to show off against in parallel and then maybe see if I can write something for the deebs or infernals who haven't had much action yet

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Tomorrow? Today? Twelve hours from now

wise ocean
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iirc deebs just have to actually ping everyone together and drag them into a thread

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with voy

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I have Plans for Iosefine infernals-wise but I don't feel it makes logical sense for her to turn up day 2, so that's a day 3 thing

marsh garden
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missing one evocation

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trying to figure out what should slot in there

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having trouble, would appreciate help

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it's the remnant dregs of one of the underworld's many failed suns, and super salty about it

bleak hazel
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You should give it to the brown dwarf tsundere 2CD and see what she makes of it

marsh garden
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who's that one?

bleak hazel
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One of the fanmade ones I usually use to illustrate how subsouls work because while they are all a very funny bit (Generic isekai protag 3cd and his seven anime girl subsouls of different types) they are also very illustrative demons

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Jokes aside I quite like this artifact, that crippling capstone is fun

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I might go for some kind of read intentions booster in the vein of "false sun illuminates your hopes so it can set them on fire"

coral wraith
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Just to get people on the board

prisma sun
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Yeah

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Just full send it

marsh garden
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RI booster is a good suggestion, thanks there as well

tulip folio
#
Intimacies
Defining Principle: The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few.
Defining Principle: Perfection is a Lie. There is always room for optimization.

Major Principle: There is no such thing as cheating in war, only victory and defeat.
Major Tie: Debok Moom (Filial Piety)
Major Principle: The Octet draw too wide a net with their definition of Voidbringers, Necromancy would be a valuable tool for Autocthonia.
Major Tie: Tamarak Met (Sadness)

Minor Tie: Music and Art (Fascination)
Minor Tie: Mortals (Protectiveness)
Minor Tie: Individual Heroism (Bemused Disregard)

How's this look for a Divine Subminister's intimacies?

tulip folio
merry arch
bleak hazel
#

it was always irrelevant to Exalts anyway, the Exalt essence curve is very different to the spirit(blooded) one

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although Abyssals have always had this thing where they either get more pretty or more horrific as they scale up

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some people use "Celestial Exalt essence is roughly comparable to Spirit Essence x2" but I find that falls apart at the low end because a starting Exalt is going to eat blood apes and similar for dinner

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it's a roughly correct curve from about E3 upwards, at least

tulip folio
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God that abyssal thing was hell when I played for the first time in 2e.

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As A) I didn't know about it B) I made a disguise specialist who'd taken a merit that required her to have exactly two appearance.

fierce star
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gotta love jank

fierce star
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also Abeille's stuff looks cool, iki. Gotta jump her while she's not riding the hive or you're gonna get swarmed, I like it

tulip folio
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Not sure super sure how she compares to Second Circle Demons like the Player of Games but I'm liking the areas I'm going in with her.

#
Wood Dragon Secret Technique: So that's what the string is for!
Cost: โ€”; Mins: Martial Arts 4, Essence 2
Type: Permanent
Keywords: None
Duration: Permanent
Prerequisite Charms: Wood Dragon Form
Sidereals spent hundreds of years developing a martial art for using bows as staffs. Then a Dynast asked if he could still shoot the bow, upending all previous understanding of the style.

Wood Dragon becomes compatible with bows, as bows. With Ranged Attacks and everything. Amazing.

New Secret Technique homebrew.

fierce star
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pft

tulip folio
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adds fluff

velvet raft
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And lower its requirements to 0 and 0

fierce star
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I still dont' get what the reasoning behind not being able to use a bow as a bow in wood dragon is

tulip folio
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Because Fuck You

merry arch
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shooting a guy with The Arrow That Heals You fuckin rules

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missed opportunity

marsh garden
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Rotting Sun Inquisition
Cost: 8m; Mins: Essence 2
Type: Simple
Keywords: None
Duration: (Essence - 1) days
Prerequisites: Gutter-Star's Despair
No flavor text yet.
The wielder makes a read intentions roll against a character with a hopeful Intimacy, with his weakest hopeful Intimacy penalizing Guile as if it were his Resolve. On a success, all of his Intimacies are set ablaze, leaking as fire-tears, dripping from his nose with sickly green blood, or glowing as an emerald furnace whenever he opens his mouth. All of his Intimacies become plainly obvious for anyone to see, although he can protect his Defining non-hopeful Intimacies by spending one Willpower to resist. The victim can temporarily suppress this effect by plugging his nose, holding in his tears, and covering his mouth, but he suffers dice of Aggravated damage each minute he does this equal to (his strongest hopeful Intimacy - 1).

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not sure i have it all ironed out, but

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i think i'm happy with this as the last evocation for the rotting sun?

bleak hazel
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a) targeting condition is a bit odd, does it just arbitrarily fizzle if you use it and they don't have any valid intimacies?

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b) this seems a bit much, "reveal all intimacies" is an exceptionally powerful effect, I would at least restrict it to Hopeful only

marsh garden
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they can't have no valid intimacies

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part of the attunement benefit is knowing when someone has at least one

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not how

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or how strong

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just "yeah this person Has One"

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gotcha, i can do that

bleak hazel
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there really aren't many multi-read-intentions charms out there

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at least not ones that apply to the same target

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this is probably still way too big, especially since it's going to land damn near all the time since they have at least some kind of standing guile penalty, but I'm not sure what to template off

marsh garden
wise ocean
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shouldn't be

bleak hazel
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damned if I know, I think either way it's going to be exceptionally highly priced

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I might just go for something smaller in general, like "whenever you land a RI, use this to do Obvious glowy stuff and discover their most relevant hopeful intimacy to the current conversation" so you can get two

marsh garden
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gotcha

bleak hazel
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there are almost certainly better RI charms out there but I honestly don't go hunting for them very often

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not because of any grand strategy or anything, just not usually my department

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these two may be more what you're looking for

marsh garden
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hmm

buoyant summit
tulip folio
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What could possibly go wrong? XD

wise ocean
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mmmm delicious corpse-thralls for the Devouring of War

buoyant summit
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It's going to be so fucking funny how despite having Dex 1 our Adamant is going to be our Circle's best acrobat

tulip folio
# tulip folio

I hope these charms look interesting for a Second Circle Machine Spirit? The intent is that she's basicly constantly burning Hive Drones if she wants them to be running at full power.

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And you can knock her on her ass and disable her ability to restock hive drones if you unhorse her

wise ocean
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Looks solid, yeah

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... can you actually unhorse gambit Legendary Size without a charm

marsh garden
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by raw, yes

merry arch
marsh garden
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LS just cares about onslaught, being crashed, and decisive damage

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your smashing attack can topple as many cows as you want

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you can unhorse a giant from his elephant

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grappling not working on LS characters is a specific clause of grapples, not of LS

tulip folio
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Also: Yes, she's strength 3 with legendary size. She's basicly a human-sized body on a small building with the hive connected. XD

buoyant summit
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We have hit upon the fact our Adamant is gonna be star themed, despite not being Starmetal

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Gravity and light, bitches

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Bioluminescent Starman lifts a building and throws it at you with their mind

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oh god damn it we made a glowy robot jedi

merry arch
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lol, lmao

wise ocean
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surprising nobody

buoyant summit
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Rude

merry arch
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im tryin to decide if I give my soggy little dusk flesh and bone winds or a blood necromancy reskin of isob

buoyant summit
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XD

merry arch
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isob is obviously the better choice but flesh and bone winds is cute

marsh garden
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is this for control?

wise ocean
merry arch
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yes

marsh garden
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if it's control my vote is totally flesh and bone winds

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make them Weird About Gore

merry arch
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yeah that's kinda where my head's at

marsh garden
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instead of just weird about violence

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it is also just a pretty good-looking spell, although all i have is misc's word that it's actually good in practice lmao

prisma sun
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Give them the skeleton attack

wise ocean
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it is indeed pretty good but requires some very specific targets

marsh garden
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The Grisper

merry arch
marsh garden
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bone puppet dance looks very funny

wise ocean
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it's why my necrosid doesn't have it even at e5 because he doesn't intend to attack The Living

fierce star
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Blessed dead fools is I think my favorite shadow circle spell even if it's super niche

marsh garden
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not one-time!

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a one-time environmental hazard every time you're attacked

merry arch
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ah fair enough

marsh garden
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are you thinking of Flesh-Sloughing Wave?

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Flesh and Bone Winds doesn't care about life or death

fierce star
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Right Shadow isn't lowest anymore.

marsh garden
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except in that killing automatons is inconvenient, because those don't leave "corpses" to scale off of

wise ocean
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wait which one is flesh and bone

marsh garden
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Flesh and Bone Winds creates...flesh and bone wind

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which gives you cover and shreds people that attack you

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as a scenelong

fierce star
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Used to Shadow lands/labyrinth/void, iron/etc

wise ocean
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ah. neat

marsh garden
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it gets bigger and gives you better cover and higher damage/difficulty on the hazard when it zuccs corpses

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the control benefit doesn't seem amazing outside of pitched battles

merry arch
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I think they'll pick up blood necro reskin of isob as my 2nd spell then

marsh garden
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since it just turns gore into light cover trenches

bleak hazel
marsh garden
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but the control effect lets you just

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turn meat into bullshit

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and you become a freak about viscera

bleak hazel
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flesh and bone winds is a fine scenelong defensive buff to the whole squad, even ignoring the meat trench effect it's basically "cast for Battlesid anima power"

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and then if you're fighting BGs it ramps up to a genuinely mean envirohazard

marsh garden
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i imagine it also gets uh

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really really good if you have raise the rotting horde

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and can just bring your own size 1 booster pack to instantly turn it into heavy cover and +1 d/d

bleak hazel
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I suppose zombies are corpses

marsh garden
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oh, no

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i was thinking of just like

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dropping conc?

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since Raise the Rotting Horde is indefinite duration

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not instant

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or sorry, skeletal horde

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rotting is the pre-abyssals version in adversaries

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rotting sounds better imo tho

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so you have your size 1 of zombies and then just

bleak hazel
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oh yeah you can do that, which I suppose is a reasonable use of such a mediocre battlegroup in many cases

wise ocean
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need to be zombies, bonesiders don't have flesh (see distortion)

marsh garden
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drop the spell, collapsing them

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skeletal horde, despite its name, does not create a skeletal horde

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it makes zombies

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bone puppet dance is what lets you make bonesiders

prisma sun
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Well zombies can be skeleTAL they just arent skeleTONS

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Checkmate liberals

merry arch
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yeah im not gonna be dipping extremely heavily into necromancy for this character mostly cos melee monster tings. in my head they like necromancy cos they studied the occult a lot before becoming an abyssal and now they're having caste dysphoria /hj

marsh garden
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Rotting Sun Inquisition
Cost: 8m, 1wp; Mins: Essence 2
Type: Simple
Keywords: None
Duration: (Essence - 1) days
Prerequisites: Gutter-Star's Despair
No flavor text yet.
The wielder makes a read intentions roll against a character with a hopeful Intimacy, with his weakest hopeful Intimacy penalizing Guile as if it were his Resolve. On a success, the penalizing Intimacy is set ablaze, plus an additional hopeful Intimacy for every three extra successes. All of his burning Intimacies become plainly obvious for anyone to see, leaking from his eyes as fire-tears, dripping from his nose with pale green blood, or glowing as a pyreflame furnace whenever he opens his mouth. The victim can temporarily suppress this effect by plugging his nose, holding in his tears, and covering his mouth, but he suffers (strongest hopeful Intimacy - 1) dice of Aggravated damage the first time each scene he does.
okay, adjusted, is this still too much or is it fine now?

merry arch
marsh garden
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at "just the penalizing intimacy plus maybe some more hopefuls"

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and also wp now

prisma sun
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The agg damage seems a bit much at e2

marsh garden
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or Mortification of the Hallowed Self

bleak hazel
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I would simply change "minute" to "scene" there because asking the GM to carefully assess how many minutes you've been talking in a social scene is a real bitch

marsh garden
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which doesn't have to be combat-cast

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ah fair

marsh garden
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because my understanding is that agg is like...exotic and locked to Magic Charms but not super expensive, broadly speaking

prisma sun
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A bit of both

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Though is it soakable by armor?

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It doesnt seem to bypass hardness

marsh garden
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uhhh, it should ignore hardness, good catch

prisma sun
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Then yeah, I think its a bit of both

marsh garden
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mm, but you don't have to tank the damage

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it's just if you hide your probably two-ish intimacies

prisma sun
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Though I also think the language is a bit weird in that like

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Does everyone somehow divine what the intimacies ARE by the radioactive snot?

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That's kinda what the text implies

merry arch
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evil nightmare puppet turns into a massive blender of bones and guts

marsh garden
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like...you know when someone's cooking with cinammon or onion, or smoking meat, or making soup

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it's the same here, except emotions instead of ingredients

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Rotting Sun Inquisition
Cost: 8m, 1wp; Mins: Essence 2
Type: Simple
Keywords: None
Duration: (Essence - 1) days
Prerequisites: Gutter-Star's Despair
No flavor text yet.
The wielder makes a read intentions roll against a character with a hopeful Intimacy, with his weakest hopeful Intimacy penalizing Guile as if it were his Resolve. On a success, the penalizing Intimacy is set ablaze, which spreads to an additional Intimacy for every three extra successes. The fire can only spread to Intimacies that are hopeful or related to the penalizing Intimacy. All of the victim's burning Intimacies become plainly obvious for anyone to see, as the emotions leak from his eyes as fire-tears, drip from his nose as pale green blood, or pour from his mouth as pyreflame smog. The victim can temporarily suppress this effect by plugging his nose, holding in his tears, and covering his mouth, but he suffers (strongest burning Intimacy - 1) dice of Aggravated damage, ignoring Hardness, the first time each scene he does so.

Reset: Once per scene.
is this description more clear? and wondering about the damage as well, since voy's expressed concern

fierce star
prisma sun
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Seems good

marsh garden
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cool cool

tulip folio
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Peruse the Script
Cost: 5m (+5m 1wp); Mins: Perception 3, Essence 1
Type: Reflexive
Keywords: None
Duration: One scene
Prerequisite Charms: None
No matter what tongue they speak, the storyteller always knows what each character says. Stepping aside from reality slightly, the wanderer peers into creation's script and examines the truth under the meaningless noise of language.

The Wanderer chooses a character within long range. All sounds made by that character become text for the Wanderer in any language of her choice. She ignore penalties on read intentions against him for due to not sharing a common language, not being able to hear him, or otherwise failing to comprehend his speech. She can understand him, no matter which language he speaks. Non-word sounds become Onomatopoeia to her eyes and hard to hear sounds are likewise hard to see.

With Essence 4, the Wanderer can pay a five mote, one willpower surcharge to affect all characters in range.

Keys:

Dramatis Persona: In addition to sounds made, the name of the character making them is also revealed. Characters in disguises supported by magic instead show the name of the character they are disguised as, though mundane disguises provide no such protection.

Scenography and Stage Directions(Perception 5): In addition to sounds, communication through visual methods such as written words or sign language is also translated. The charm can affect objects as well as characters, allowing translation of documents from one language to another.

Painting the Medium(Perception 4, Essence 2): The text becomes able to be seen by all characters, not merely herself. This grants other characters the benefits of the charm against him or allows the wanderer to target herself, translating her words into text in the language of her choice.

Wanderer Perception charm. Translation stuff!

marsh garden
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okay

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think it's done

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would appreciate any quick scans through

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but i haven't really changed much other than adding resonant/dissonant effects

fierce star
marsh garden
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i stole the general "yeah agg is gucci as long as your magic weapon is enough of a shitbag" go-ahead from Zelator

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whose benefit is "i deal agg damage to all sorcerers, spirits, constructs, and sorcerous creations forever"

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"also when i hit a sorc she loses 3 smotes"

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i hope it looks like a fun horrifying nightmare-deeb-villain weapon, at least

fierce star
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yes

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also yeah th epower of that does kind of depend on how much of a nihilist your ST is I usppose

tulip folio
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...also pondering wanderer Base Tricks. Pondering an effect that's less 'combat useful' and more 'narratively useful'.

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Rewrite The Story: The wyld-born power of wanderers flows along narrative lines, rather than that or physical laws. This allows the Wanderer to make dramatic edits to a scene she is part of reflexively, representing her taking the storyteller's pen and rewriting part of her own tale. Examples include winning a fair game of chance, discovering that the princess of a nation looks similar enough to her to be a plausible disguise, a helpful character arriving, or finding a hidden passageway while fleeing pursuers. The Storyteller can veto dramatic edits that would be narratively unsatisfying, stretch credulity or feel out of place but should propose a narrower version of that edit that still provides a significant advantage.

Rewriting the story costs 1 willpower, plus 1 limit for each time it has been used this story, including this use.
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They don't have much in the way of base tricks so I was pondering giving them something ala Blades In The Dark Flashbacks as their built in thing.

fierce star
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really just go ham on the meta, huh? I like it

tulip folio
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Also ties into their limit. Which is a much more abyssal-like limit

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Where the harder you push at the story, the more it pushes back

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So if you keep Fucking Up The Story, eventually the story grabs you by the throat and tells you it's time for your Suffering Arc.

fierce star
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I love suffering arcs :D

tulip folio
# fierce star I *love* suffering arcs :D

The idea is that it's less 'blight the world' and more 'improbable, dramatically inconvenient events'.

One of the basic 'this could vent it' things is:

Luck of Obrien: A bad event that is randomly chosen (A member of a crowd chosen for sacrifice, a pickpocket's target, a black claw stylist's latest fling) has the Wanderer automatically chosen.
fierce star
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some of my favorite episodes of DS9, those

tulip folio
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(I'm glad you realized what it was XD)

tulip folio
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Orbien's Curse are manifestations of creation's narrative turning against the Wanderer. She has pushed the story too far in her favour and it is correcting itself through acts of improbable bad luck or unfortunate circumstances. 

Unlike unveilings, there are no trivial examples of Obrien's curse, as each is a significant twist against the Wanderer's interests.

Major manifestations of Obrien's curse have a scope capable of affecting a large town or a significant portion of a city. It can inflict meaningful harm or trouble comparable to what mundane dangers might cause. They last one session unless otherwise specified. Examples include:
-Circumstances give the wanderer an unfortunate reputation among the general area (A skinflint, a philanderer or other reputation that is negative but not legally enforceable or likely to cause direct violence). This reputation is treated as a minor negative tie among characters who do not already have an intimacy related to the wanderer.
-A personally important mundane object, such as a coin purse or travel papers, is misplaced.
-A failed roll this session becomes a botch.

Defining manifestations of Obrien's curse can affect small cities or much of a large city, potentially inflicting supernatural perils. They last one session unless otherwise specified.
-Circumstances give the wanderer a horrible reputation among the general area (A murderer, a traitor etc). This reputation often has legally enforceable consequences and is treated as a major negative tie among characters who do not already have an intimacy related to the wanderer.
-A horrible event that is randomly chosen (A member of a crowd chosen for sacrifice, a black claw stylist's latest fascination) has the Wanderer become the target.
-An important object, including magical objects, is misplaced and must be located.
-The stars align, revealing a time of mystical danger for (Wanderer's Essence) days.
fierce star
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oooh

bleak hazel
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sitting around skimming the old 2e Sapphire Veil and I think the capstone maps quite well to that one Alch capstone

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I desire Transfinite Ultraviolence Ribbons, gimme

wise ocean
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huh, I guess that's a wording issue they should catch

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OPC submodule does nothing but cost 5m as written

bleak hazel
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yeah I am pretty sure intended structure is "makes decisives only at base, run up the submodule tree to unlock witherings and remove Perilous"

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which makes sense because reflexive wither/withering clash is way better than the decisive alternative

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(also hey, we found another withering clash)

wise ocean
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yep, makes sense

marsh garden
#

I KEPT FUCKING LOOKING AND TRYING TO FIGURE OUT

bleak hazel
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yeah draft manuscript is draft

marsh garden
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but withering being a flub on the base makes sense

bleak hazel
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I know I've left similar mistakes in stuff while generally shuffling designs around

marsh garden
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or maybe it's supposed to be like

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withering or dec, but the first submod should only allow dec clashes

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either way, i understand its intent now

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...broadly

velvet raft
#

My favorite draft error is Unyielding Devil Willโ€™s duration

marsh garden
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oh?

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is it a near-infinite duration or like

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instant so it never falls off? or instant so it falls off immediately and never works

velvet raft
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Itโ€™s got a listed duration of permanent

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And has a cost

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Is it supposed to be indefinite? One scene? Permanent without a cost? Nobody knows!

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(Probably one scene, going by the strength of its effect)

wise ocean
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it simply commits the motes forever and you can never turn it off

velvet raft
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You have to get a PAOC stylist to dispel it for you

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XD

bleak hazel
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it's probably easier to find a water deeb to chuck a bucket of water over your head

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very useful charm that one

marsh garden
#

hmm

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two artifacts i'm kinda struggling with mechanics for, and would appreciate some direction on a place to steal from to start

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blue jade grimcleaver mined from extremely high up the imperial mountain, i want it to play with the extraordinarily thin but pure air of a mountaintop and the journey of the climb

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and then...i'm undecided on a gauntlet, shield, or bow, but one of those made from an Elden Ring Azur/Lusat figure sidereal sorcerer's starmetal bones

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i know i want it to be a sorcerous relic, so probably not a weapon, actually

wise ocean
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big ol' sorcerer staff
alternatively: you can do what I did for necrosid and it's "legally this is a staff" (actually it's a spear)

marsh garden
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nah, i don't want it to be a weapon, so i think bow and shield are out

wise ocean
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fair

marsh garden
#

would you be more interested in it as a gauntlet, a prayer wheel, or a wind chime?

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just immediate thought

bleak hazel
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Bone circlet with hearthstone slot

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Sids love stuff that covers the forehead because of how their caste marks work

marsh garden
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naw, i don't want headgear

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want it to be a non-weapon thing that gets waved around when you cast

wise ocean
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sorcery relic with bone feels a bit odd, come to think of it, but if those three are the Options then a chime with said bones

marsh garden
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well it's starmetal, just

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interestingly-sourced

fierce star
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Fucking love me a bone chime

marsh garden
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...i may have too many opalized artifacts

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but it's a really cool process ๐Ÿ˜ญ

chilly sluice
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Opalized bone you say

marsh garden
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opalized starmetal bones, opalized wood flag, an opalized crab earth elemental

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that's a summon-buddy artifact

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but it's a really cool process

marsh garden
chilly sluice
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I was playing at Hearteaters a little

marsh garden
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oh right!

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forgot about that part of them

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no fucking wonder i love hearteaters

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their bones are opal and they haunt them when they die

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shit goes crazy

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oh hey sorry what the fuck

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this is apparently a kosher magical ability to shove onto any animal by core's reckoning

chilly sluice
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If you touch them you get possessed and Exalt as a Hearteater

marsh garden
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yeah, i love them!

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i forgot that they opalized

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and i must flagellate myself for my grievous error

chilly sluice
marsh garden
#

IT'S PEAM

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i love HEs

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really want to play one

velvet raft
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Peam

tulip folio
#

Hmm...how do you think Devil Prince + Hungry Ghost with axes would go?

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As they both share axes

wise ocean
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It's a bit finicky unless you're an Abyssal for reflexive social actions

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or have some careful wordings around hungry ghost threaten creating craven intimacies for DP

tulip folio
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Have to check if any other style can use axes. Pondering things for a Lunar martial artist.

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Or just focus on hungry ghost

prisma sun
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Well anyone can flurry an intimidate roll

wise ocean
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Sure, but -3 on the attack and the intimidate is ๐Ÿ˜ฌ

merry arch
#

just get more arms 5Head

prisma sun
marsh garden
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it's kosher

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look at emerald sunset

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genuinely ridiculous

prisma sun
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I also need to fuckin

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stat Drift's gloves

bleak hazel
tulip folio
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I should look at artifact axes. Genuinely never checked them out.

prisma sun
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I am adding a caveat to them at least that they now count as form weapons except for styles made by enemies of Fate

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so they can't be used with Cantercile, Hungry Ghost, Black Devil, RIghteous Devil, or Devil Prince

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lots of devils

marsh garden
wise ocean
bleak hazel
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Every celestial

marsh garden
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there are a bunch of grand grimcleavers

tulip folio
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I know Alchs have one

marsh garden
#

there are...not very many one-handed grimcleavers

tulip folio
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Huh...that's odd

marsh garden
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one-handed? not a daiklave? shit yourself for the temerity

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we've got uhhh