#art-discussion-and-wip

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fast spindle
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Here?

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Same as brushes

lone wagon
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I don't like using tools that are too technical

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Prefer ones that are simple to understand xD

prime spoke
blazing anchor
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I got some good stuff for my senti ! So I’m drawing her haha, any criticism is welcomed!

lime kraken
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Anyone got FR references?

dusky trail
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the thing with her legs seem to be various though

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in that official launcher art, it looks like it just on top of the legs

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while in the model and event's CGI, it looks like a tattoo

lime kraken
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Thanks

livid storm
lone wagon
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I think I've stopped playing honkai now, been months since I've touched it.

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Too busy simping manwha characters. A lot of spiciness goes on. I'm having a new phase. God help me.

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Has that painter loli come out yet? Keep seeing her on youtube

dusty lotus
grave nymph
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slowly but surely progressing TeriRip

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hands are bad yes.

lone wagon
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The one holding the handle isn't too bad

dusty lotus
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Oooo it looks pretty good :>

grave nymph
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yeah the fingers are just

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urk

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dies

lone wagon
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I think the eyes are a little bit too high on her face though, by about 4cm

grave nymph
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yeah

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if you zoom in a bit

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you can see that I lasso'd and moved it w

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guess it's not low enough huh w

lone wagon
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I don't need to zoom, u can tell that because u out liens on her cheeks but they're moved

grave nymph
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:"D

grave nymph
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too bad I drew this all in a single layer

dusty lotus
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But you're doing a great job tho, keep it up

grave nymph
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:"D

lone wagon
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You've improved for sure. I need to draw, but I've been holed up reading.

grave nymph
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SAME

lone wagon
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Haven't done one in weeks

grave nymph
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I've been rereading a novel series

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for the past few days

lone wagon
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I'm scared I'm gonna lose my touch but I csnt help it

grave nymph
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right?

lone wagon
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I've been reading the dark romance, villainess types manwhas lately

grave nymph
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is this enough?

dusty lotus
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I think maybe even a bit lower

lone wagon
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If you can tell from my pfp. Up to date on your throne within a day.

dusty lotus
lone wagon
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I'm working too

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Reading them on my days off where I should be doing art

dusty lotus
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:""

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Don't worry about losing your touch with art tho, I find that sometimes when you come back after a break you actually perform way better

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You as in anyone obv

lone wagon
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Wdym?

dusty lotus
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Like, sometimes when you take a long break from drawing because of other things happening in your life, when you start drawing at it you have way better results

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It might just be cause you're letting your brain rest for a while

grave nymph
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Ah yes

lone wagon
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Oh I've had that happen before.

grave nymph
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passive exp

dusty lotus
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Sorry for my grammar, i'm still half asleep 💀

lone wagon
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I think i did some practise last week and I suddenly wasn't struggling as much but tbh I'm still awful at colouring, just I've gotten quicker with sketches

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I gave up on my yor fanart since I wasn't liking it

dusty lotus
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Ohhh well getting quick with sketches is still a really good skill to have

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I'm slow asf for some reason and it really bothers me

bronze dagger
lone wagon
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I'm still slow, just improved a littlr on my speed. Atm colouring Is of huge concern.

dusty lotus
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Do you need any coloring tips?

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I got nothing to do rn

lone wagon
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It looked good to me when it was liensrt

dusty lotus
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Oh that actually does look really good, did you mirror the eyes tho?

lone wagon
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But i hates the colouring

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I thought it looked good but then i hated it the next day

dusty lotus
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Hmmm

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What don't you like about it?

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I think the colors are pretty nice tbh, the only thing I think needs a little work is lineart since it doesn't really blend in a lot near the folds of the clothes

lone wagon
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I don't think my style of colouring match my neat lineart. I am used to roughly colouring so it takes a lot of tries for it to be neat

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And i end up messing up my liensrt in the end anyways so I feel it is useless to even do a liensrt

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But im not confident enough to colour after a sketch either

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And my colours are always never as saturated as I want, it just missing a lot of things like it's too mild. There's no glow

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I tried to add glow with the yor but it just wasn't right for me so I gave up

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Maybe I'm trying too hard

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Also I hate the eyes.

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I want it to be simple like this but it for some reason looks dull when I try

dusty lotus
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I see what you're talking about, I think that honestly this is an issue for a lot of artists and it may not sound like it but changing the color of the lineart (maybe even putting different colors in different areas) really helps a lot with that

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Let me take a closer look so I can give you some actual advice maybe

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The main reason it might not look as "simple" as those comics is because those actually use mostly cell shading, which creates a more minimalistic vibe and makes details in the lineart of the eyes more noticeable. Also, they fill in the eyelashes with lineart instead of coloring them in

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Your colors blend a lot which is really good when painting but maybe not as much when you're trying to achieve that specific result you're looking for

lone wagon
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Yeah i have a very much painter style. I don't use much tools xD like 3 tools at most

dusty lotus
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Mhm, same here

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Although you are better than me at picking unsaturated colors haha, when I started painting I really liked saturated styles and so I never really learned how to do anything else

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Right now I'm working to fix that xd

lone wagon
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This is mroe painter but they've somehow managed to do simple at the same time

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I cant simple

dusty lotus
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Either way I know you may not like their style but if you wanna find out how to do cell shadinf properly take a look at par0llel's art, she uses a lot of tricks with gradiants and stuff

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And her art uses mostly cell shading

dusty lotus
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Fuck I realize how limited I am because of saturated colors when I look at things like these xd

lone wagon
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I love this

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Thr eyes are so simple they didn't do much with it

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Their colouring is over all simple but it looks complex because of the grains

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And the lineart/sketch

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I overdo my colouring, I can't simple.

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I try and try until it looks simple enough but it's a lot of tries until I can make it look simple

dusty lotus
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I understand what you mean, I have the opposite problem instead haha

lone wagon
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I'm heading to work now. Talk to u later

dusty lotus
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Np have a good day

hardy yew
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I'm really excited about this KianaSparkle

dusty lotus
plucky bobcat
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oh helluuu nyamhk

thick light
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Vibing to music while drawing really does something

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Reference:

dusky trail
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Kameha-ception

lone wagon
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I play classical music or just relaxing sounds in the bg on low volume when I'm drawing cuz i cant stand loudness when I'm concentrating.

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Call me old I dare you

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I get mad easily when someone or something disturbs my concentration. Unless they're cute adorable little fluffy beings that goes meoww

dusky trail
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and also decided to take a nap on your tablet

lone wagon
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Too cute I can't get mad at them when I should

thick light
thick light
dusky trail
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meanwhile i just listen to some bond story in some games

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you can basically treat it like typical anime drama CD after all

grave nymph
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Is it really OK to bother with coloring when your laptop's screen is so trashy?

bronze dagger
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Never goes wrong

grave nymph
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but what if you want to practice coloring? :"D

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I was soooo motivated earlier

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when I was going to color

bronze dagger
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Hmmm

grave nymph
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and my motivation plummeted the moment I try to do so

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because I can't distinguish skin colors :"D

bronze dagger
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Or search online for the colours, there should be plenty

grave nymph
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shading's gonna be tough huh

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mannnn

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I wanna learn but my device is stopping me to do so

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waow

bronze dagger
bronze dagger
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To get a feel where to put lighting and shadows

grave nymph
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🤔

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will try with my mechanical pencil w

bronze dagger
bronze dagger
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And blunt wooden pencil may work better

grave nymph
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I'll try to look for wood pencils then w

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but mannn

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I wanna try practicing coloring too qq

bronze dagger
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What about using your phone to colour?

grave nymph
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no.

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just no.

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I refuse to draw in such a small screen

bronze dagger
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O

grave nymph
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it makes my mind feel cramped :"D

bronze dagger
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O

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Colouring in black and white can help in the meantime though

grave nymph
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I guess :"D

bronze dagger
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Until you get a better device

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That’s the only solution I can think of now

grave nymph
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will work on values and anatomy practice on copy paper I suppose w

mystic lintel
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Does anything look super off?

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(except that creepy left hand)

dusky trail
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i would say the right hand also equally creepy

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it also way shorter compare to the left arm

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her neck barely exist while her ankle make it look like the socks are too tight

mystic lintel
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Let me draw neck longer

dusky trail
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though you seem to also have problem connect the line

mystic lintel
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Yeah sadly HimekoDead

dusky trail
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well you can either draw in long stroke by just get your fingers ready on the ctrl Z

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that way you hand will "eventually" draw the right curve

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or draw in short repeated line then just erase the part that poke out

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like here when i use like 3-4 strokes without care

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then just slim it down after

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but well, it take time to get your hand into habit so just keep practicing

mystic lintel
dusky trail
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=3=

mystic lintel
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Better?

dusky trail
mystic lintel
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unless i need to make it longer HimekoDead

dusky trail
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try not to stretch her neck to collarbone that much

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you can see it in this Seele, it is just straight down then to the side

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since you turn it more of a triangle shape, it cause her neck to seem chunky

mystic lintel
dusky trail
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try a more curve outward kind of line

mystic lintel
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Okay did that, do i need to fix anything else?

dusky trail
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well the right arm is still shorter than the left

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the ankle could be thicker too

mystic lintel
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Fixed now

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Thanks so much, i'll be back when I finish lineart BronyaTease

lone wagon
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Why are game bikinis so much prettier than real life?

plucky bobcat
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bcuz we use them to swimm and less friction in the water means more swimming efficiency... so thats why they looks so smooth n boring. the valks use them as good looking skin. I bet with you that they would just drown because there is always so much fabric and frills on it

dusky trail
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because it actually fit, ohhhhhh

bronze dagger
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I wish there is a way to mix these two qualities Q Q

lone wagon
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I don't even go swimming, just sit in the water for 20mins and im like yeah gonna get out

dusky trail
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same as well, i'm not a beach person

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heck, i can't even get along with seafood

lone wagon
bronze dagger
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I don’t stay need the beach or swimming pools

lone wagon
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I prefer sitting in hot springs

bronze dagger
dusky trail
lone wagon
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I'm going to Thailand to visit family next month for 3 weeks

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I'm excited to sit in the hot springs again there

bronze dagger
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O

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Is the place huge?

dusky trail
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also, those twins need more love

bronze dagger
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The one in SG is small with no surprise

bronze dagger
lone wagon
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They're cute for sure

dusky trail
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well they get to pop up in Mobius web event too

bronze dagger
lone wagon
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Because they're not as popular

plucky bobcat
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i rarely go swimming but if i go then i dive for hours and collect some seashells or other cool stuff like stones, i can even dive in the ocean without swimming goggles xD

lone wagon
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I don't like to sea that much xD

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But you can gwt all kinds now

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So its not impossible to make anime swimwear to rewality

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You just have to know where to look

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I'm very much into fashion so ik where to find relsly nice stuff

lone wagon
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SO WHWRE ARW RHEY HOW COMR NOBODU THOUGH OF IT YET

lone wagon
plucky bobcat
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hmm but i'm a man i just wear a simple short with boring palms on it or so

dusky trail
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well anime get to have better texture after all

lone wagon
plucky bobcat
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bruh cross dresser like?

lone wagon
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Why not????

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This is such a good pose, you could probably do some really cool illustrations with it

dusky trail
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plenty of male cosplayer

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just look at all those Shimakaze's cosplay... it is so infamous as trap cosplay now

prisma vector
plucky bobcat
outer ember
livid storm
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void queen base colours

hardy yew
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Fischl in her new skin

spring sphinx
livid storm
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Nice

livid storm
rich bluff
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wip of dehya 😄 cant wait for her to come out

chrome beacon
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Gorący mechanik w twojej okolicy

fair flare
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Fluffy clouds

mossy flume
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New sticker design

latent pecan
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I don't know if this counts as art, but...

dusky trail
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have text covered her thigh? you monster

hallow marsh
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I'm thinking of making a quick art of Kiana, Mei and Bronya as classic rpg roles. I know I want to make Bronya a mage.

Though what class would Kiana be?

dusky trail
hallow marsh
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Ah yeah, could give her a canon lol

inner talon
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i feel like the sketch is too simple but her design is originally simple

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do i have any major mistakes in the anatomy

dusky trail
hallow marsh
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Some good civ there

inner talon
dusky trail
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then just swap the legs

inner talon
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ok thanks

dusky trail
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that way, she would look more like she put the other leg behind

dusky trail
livid storm
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hey look stigmata art

inner talon
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tyty

thin oxide
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Try making the front legs thigh a bit bigger from the behind

dusky trail
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try to lean her left leg a bit like this

thin oxide
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Like barely a bit just like the smallest big possible and lean the back leg

inner talon
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hmm ill try

thin oxide
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And the part where the skirt curves at the front leg, make a fold going down by the front thigh to show it

dusky trail
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make the left leg a bit longer too, the knees are way too different in height

inner talon
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thanks

thin oxide
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Like that but make it look better

dusky trail
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oh ya~ swap the skirt curve can be use to show the left is the front leg too

thin oxide
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And the front legs knee line is toooooo curved

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Alr well can someone help me with this

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I’m trynna draw miko and there’s something off about the skin coloring

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What do I fix/remove?

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I cant wrap my head around what’s wrong but it just looks off

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Should I remove the lip light

dusky trail
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i'm lighter skin color's faction so...

thin oxide
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?

hallow marsh
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Looks like you might need to add little more colour/ saturation if that's the right word?

thin oxide
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Oh it looks grey bc discord makes it like that just tap the photo for it to be more pink

dusky trail
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also, the light on the lip should be in the middle of it

thin oxide
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Idk why discord is doin that

dusky trail
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instead of just below the lip

thin oxide
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Alr

thin oxide
dusky trail
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as in i already draw in lighter color so your skin's color is off to me

thin oxide
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Is it just me or is discord making it look grey??

thin oxide
bronze dagger
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I feel like something is wrong with this pose, but I can’t tell. Can someone give suggestions to improve it? ( not sure if the body looks okay with the head…)

inner talon
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im sorry i usually dont draw legs so im struggling

thin oxide
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Nice job

inner talon
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ty both for the advice

dusky trail
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i would add a M shape curve on the skirt instead of just S shape

inner talon
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so a slight curve for the back leg too?

dusky trail
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but that is optional

thin oxide
dusky trail
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it more like the front leg's skirt curve is too strong

thin oxide
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Yea

dusky trail
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so it made the back one look flat in compare

hallow marsh
dusky trail
thin oxide
dusky trail
hallow marsh
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Don't worry I had a look

dusky trail
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i always like the alter version of Teri rather than Teri herself

thin oxide
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Them two

inner talon
dusky trail
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both Kongming and Kindred are just~~~

thin oxide
dusky trail
thin oxide
hallow marsh
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What about a little orange?

thin oxide
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Uhh

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Orange to pink??

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No

bronze dagger
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Purple?

dusky trail
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then time to go red

thin oxide
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Yea

inner talon
thin oxide
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I’ll go purple

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Where do I put the purple

bronze dagger
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In the darker areas perhaps

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Like shadow

thin oxide
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I already did

bronze dagger
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O

thin oxide
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Should I just scrap the whole thing since no one can find out what’s wrong with it even tho it’s still off

bronze dagger
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Maybe a mix of purple and red

dusky trail
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also, the lip's gloss thing

thin oxide
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Yea I’ll change it

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Charging my iPad rn

bronze dagger
thin oxide
dusky trail
thin oxide
dusky trail
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her left leg also too high for that angle

dusky trail
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with that view point, you should be able to see both legs clearly

bronze dagger
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Ok

thin oxide
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@dusky trail

dusky trail
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her right arm also seem longer than her left

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i would go for higher

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that would just make me see her as she poking her tongue out

thin oxide
dusky trail
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well i also tend to go for more shorter lower lip like this too

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ya that looks better

thin oxide
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Oh nah small lips don’t sit well with my artstyle

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But I could make it less darker

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More pink

dusky trail
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ty to some "anime" that cause me to hate obvious thick lips

thin oxide
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Well this isn’t an anime artstyle

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What animes?

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Also where should I add more pink

dusky trail
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you know, "that" kind

thin oxide
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Oh hanime

dusky trail
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back then, there are many using the "horse face" style and that cause me to hate thick lips

thin oxide
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So where should I add more pink?

dusky trail
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middle of the lip and the cheek?

thin oxide
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How’s this

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Cus lips usually get darker near the center and lighter outside

dusky trail
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i usually use stronger color but seem fine to me

thin oxide
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Alright thanks

prisma vector
hardy yew
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I normally draw eyes but i got alittle lazy this time. Im still learning art so ya WeltHmph

hardy yew
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bootiful

hardy yew
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i draw the girl that mi ||crush|| crush on

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she’s beautiful ngl

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more beautiful than my essay

lone wagon
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my roxana sketch

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Originally was just gonna do this but in my own style but ended up changing some bits anyways to make it more like an illustration

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For practise purposes

hardy yew
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details

lone wagon
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Colouring now. Didn't bother with linear this time to see how I handle it.

undone hawk
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The eye looks out of place…

bleak grotto
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they didnt ask for criticism, no need to point it out

lone wagon
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Probably will attempt to paint the hair and then go for another one

lone wagon
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attempt 3. Tried to fix the proportions of the eyes since they were massive before. Think they're a little better now. 🙂

thin oxide
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Wow it’s insanely good

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Like literally wow

thin oxide
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Should I color her ear the same as the other hair? I mean, it’s still fur but it’s her ear so

noble wasp
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are you still having trouble with the skin tone?

thin oxide
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No

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It’s the ear

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The darker part of the hair is the ear

thin oxide
noble wasp
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i wouldnt say it's bad

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if you feel something is wrong with it then i'll try to see what i can do, otherwise then no problem

thin oxide
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I don’t feel anything wrong with it but people are saying it’s horrible

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So plz help

noble wasp
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i tried painting over,

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so tried adding blush/makeup and removing some of the specular (highlights)

thin oxide
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I’m not actually going for such dark eyes

noble wasp
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can just ignore the eyes

thin oxide
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Alright

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She has makeup already tho

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She already has all the stuff u added

noble wasp
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could use more saturation i guess

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might be a discord thing

thin oxide
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It is yea

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When u click the photo it gets pinky

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Pinker

noble wasp
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ill just say dont randomly put highlights

thin oxide
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The two highlights on the cheeks are for her cheek highlights

noble wasp
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yeah but the location a bit off

thin oxide
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Alr where do I put them

noble wasp
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wait, give me a minute

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can kinda imagine the cheeks as a bit rounder, so the specular should be more on the right

thin oxide
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Alr

noble wasp
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something like this

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you place the specular on the part where the light hits the objects and it reflects directly on to our eyes

hardy yew
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Yelan wip

thin oxide
noble wasp
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whether you use hard edge specular or soft depends on the material/ reflectivity of the object

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if you want it to be more glossy, can use hard edge like the one on the lips

thin oxide
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Well the reason it’s glossy on the lips is because it’s lip gloss

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But you think gloss is a good idea? I’ll do it

noble wasp
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i mean, there's also matte lipstick

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it's really up to you

thin oxide
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The nose is fine tho?

noble wasp
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should also be on the right side more since the structure of the nose is ball shape with wings

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if you are going for a more realistic render

thin oxide
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I put it at the point of the nose

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Wait brb

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Alr back

noble wasp
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hmm..is there any reason why you place it at the point of the nose

thin oxide
thin oxide
noble wasp
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ok, cause the specular/highlight will change depending on how you imagine the form of the object

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i wouldnt say it's wrong if you put it on the tip if that's how you imagine the form

thin oxide
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I made some spots darker

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How does it look now? Anything else need fixing?

noble wasp
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i think a lot better, but personally i feel could use a bit more contrast

thin oxide
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Contrast? I’d need an example

noble wasp
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dont be afraid to make the shadows darker

thin oxide
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Alright I’m onto it

noble wasp
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weird discord...it's flagging the lips of yae

bleak grotto
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lol

noble wasp
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check the lips, i made the line a bit darker so it would pop out more

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is it just discord or you added some blue shade for shadow

thin oxide
thin oxide
noble wasp
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value might be a bit off, shadows generally does look a bit cooler or "blue" cause of the ambient light

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are you following a reference that does that?

thin oxide
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No

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Value? Whats value

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Example?

noble wasp
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value refers to how bright or dark

thin oxide
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Darker or brighter?

noble wasp
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i was thinking that it might be a stylistic choice as to why it's that bright

thin oxide
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Oh darker

noble wasp
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if it's not your intention then you might want to darken it a bit

thin oxide
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Yea it’s stylistic

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So does it look good now?

noble wasp
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if you dont find anything wrong with it then just ignore what i said abt the blue shadow

thin oxide
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Okay

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It’s not a shadow it’s for the colors to boom

noble wasp
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so your intention of adding it was to make the colors pop out more is it?

thin oxide
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Ye

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The pink color

noble wasp
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hmm...do you feel it's working?

thin oxide
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Is it not

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Not to make the colors boom out that much but to not make the colors look boring because it’s too much pink

noble wasp
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if you think it is then i wont really say much abt it, but personally it looks more like face makeup / paint or something

thin oxide
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Oh

noble wasp
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i think you shud paint the eyes

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if you look at yae face right, eveyrthing is pink, but the eyes isnt, and it kinda grabs your attention towards the eyes

thin oxide
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Yea I usually do it in end

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But uhh

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Idk how to color eyes

noble wasp
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i mean, that's a separate issue lol, but what im saying is that, the reason you find it boring cause everything is pink is because you havent added the eyes

thin oxide
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Ok

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I’m onto it

noble wasp
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by having that diff color dot in the middle, it gives a focal point for the piece

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of course, what you did is also valid by adding some diff color, this is just another way to solve the problem

thin oxide
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@noble wasp

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Wait I changed it a bit

noble wasp
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I personally feel could use a bit more saturation for the eyes

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Saturation refers to how blue/green/yellow the color is

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Like the conentration

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If you are satisfied with it then prolly just ignore my opinion cause it might be a stylisitc choice

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And when it comes to style it all just boils down to our individual preferences

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But one thing is it def looks a lot better. Cause last time the eyelashes are kinda off in terms of values

thin oxide
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My sister just said that I needed to fix the hair to head value bc the head is too big

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I’ma do that

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Also

noble wasp
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Value doesnt refer to the size though

thin oxide
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She said value idk

noble wasp
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You meant proportion maybe

thin oxide
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Does the pic I sent look good

noble wasp
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Yea, can try making the specular on the eyes whiter to make it look more reflective

thin oxide
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Alr also is the head rlly that big

noble wasp
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The face is fine.. prolly the hair giving the illusion.

thin oxide
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Alright

noble wasp
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What rendering style are you aiming for? Semi realistic? Anime style?

thin oxide
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Anime

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The hair is smaller how is it now

noble wasp
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Give me a sec. Will finish something first

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Also, just saying this but you're current render is leaning more towards semi reliastic not anime

thin oxide
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Oh alright I like that more anyways

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Wyd?

noble wasp
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Lunch. So i cant open up csp to do stuff

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You can try drawing the head shape first if you want

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That shud help you get the hair down properly

thin oxide
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My sister said make the ears smaller and more down

noble wasp
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yeah, if you look at yae's ears

livid storm
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Fischl's new outfit looks like Rita

livid storm
# noble wasp

The issue I see currently is the face in proportion to the rest of her hair is too "squashed". Make it a little wider as my suggestion

noble wasp
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you pinged wrongly, not my work

livid storm
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oh woops

noble wasp
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im just drawing the head shape so the person can see it better and adjust accordingly

livid storm
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yeah good

dawn rapids
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Can anyone help me buy graphic tablet 😔 🧛

dusky trail
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i'm too poor to buy you one

dawn rapids
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But thanks

livid storm
edgy cairn
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why does the face shape throw me off so much?? it looks ok flipped.

hardy yew
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it looks cute

edgy cairn
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tysmwhat

thin oxide
# noble wasp

U outlined it completely different from what I drew

livid storm
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?

thin oxide
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Didn’t mean to ping u

livid storm
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Oh

noble wasp
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I dunno how you draw it so cant help you with that. This is just how i think it is

thin oxide
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Hey so I almost finished it

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But the one u seen is the old one

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Here

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@noble wasp

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Soo??

noble wasp
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if you think it's ok then yeah, this is already part of aesthetics for me so it really varies from person to person depending on their taste

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it's looking good

thin oxide
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When you say “if you think it’s okay” that’s pretty back handed

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Is it good or not?

noble wasp
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yeah good for me, that particular line can indeed be misunderstood

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what i meant was there's really no glaring issue for me, and if i have any nitpicks it would most prolly be just my taste which i dont want to kinda impose on you

thin oxide
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Ooh

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Okay

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So it’s good from a viewers pov?

noble wasp
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thats why if you are satisfied with it then it's good to go

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It's looking good, just need to do clean ups and stuff

thin oxide
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Oh yea it’s not done yet

noble wasp
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yeah, but the base is kinda solid, so i think it shud turn out great

thin oxide
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Thanks for all the help dude!

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I really appreciate it

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Loads

noble wasp
bronze dagger
noble wasp
serene shore
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Made a Herrscher of Reason Gfx

dusky trail
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project bunny's finger look like Bronya just try to lift her skirt to show off her legs there

edgy cairn
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my layers are horribly organized tho

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any way to liquify multiple layers at once on CSP?

noble wasp
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Not sure how liquify works in csp..i think it's a relatively new feature so im not sure how it works. Is it implemented alr? Worst case is just copy merge everything

dire ruin
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no ;o you can only do one at a time

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but ya. merge all visible to new layer, work there ;o

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plus if you haven't changed it hold d to be able to select individual layers ;o

livid storm
steep helm
spark pasture
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I'm having a hard time on where to put the light source for this 😆

dusky trail
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if it not important then you can always throw the light source directly at her face

noble wasp
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look for reference

sage canopy
steep helm
prisma vector
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It's creepy but great art

bleak grotto
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spookie

worthy junco
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Did I do the torsos too long or thin? I have a long torso so I often do it by mistake

dusky trail
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specially with how big her crotch and thighs are

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it almost like she wearing a super tight corset

worthy junco
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Is this any better

dusky trail
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now the head is too big

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and the distant between her breast to collarbone is too wide

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you can use this as reference

worthy junco
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Thanks

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Do her eyes look wonky

dusky trail
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her left eye is a bit too tilt

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because you already draw her head in tilt position, it cause the eye off compare to the face

dusky trail
worthy junco
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Thanks

worthy junco
dusky trail
dusky trail
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it may cause it to look like her collarbone is curve too hard

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it is more balance like this

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and her should is rather short in compare to the head too

visual cargo
steep helm
visual cargo
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what happen to aponia?

worthy junco
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Does this look better and ill fix the turtle neck soon

dusky trail
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hmm may want to wider the arms too

worthy junco
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Is this better

dusky trail
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seem fine, beside the left cheek still off compare to her right cheek, nothing else too noticeable

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you do want to fix the eye still though

worthy junco
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Thanks

dusky trail
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just draw a quick line on the face

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you can see the left eye is too tilted there

worthy junco
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Is the left side of her hair lacking volume

dusky trail
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i thought you are going for a side hair style but if not then yes, it lack in volume

worthy junco
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Oh I am I was just wondering

dusky trail
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well, it just need a bit more, enough to outline the ear should do

worthy junco
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Thanks again you were really helpful because I always thought smth was wrong with her eyes but couldn't quite pinpoint it

dusky trail
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well stuff like that is why guide line is helpful

worthy junco
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Yeah and I should probably flip my drawings more

dusky trail
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how detail it is depend on the person but have those point lay out just make it easier to see it

worthy junco
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I'll call it a night for drawing today and fix stuff tomorrow

drifting flare
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hey there chat :D

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i asked a question at honkaichat but peeps are kinda busy so i wanna try asking here

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i'm looking for transparent pictures of the FC sims thingy that you see in ER, i need it for an artwork... i think this channel is pretty fitting to ask-?

steep helm
dusky trail
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not really transparent but you mean this?

drifting flare
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uuuu that one's interesting TeriSparkle

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hmmge but i guess i can also just screenshot the ones in the game

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ty tho :D

toxic trellis
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Practicing anatomy w Ellie's elysian realm pose

cold basin
worthy junco
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Does the turtle neck look okay

spice tundra
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wip part 2 TeriDerpMelon

worthy junco
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Oh wow

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Your art is stunning

spice tundra
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thanks TeriTeehee

dusky trail
worthy junco
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Okay

granite crescent
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Speak/post, live, die, repeat

obtuse night
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I feel like the legs are off but i can't tell what's wrong with them

obtuse night
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I dunno, they seem to have the right proportions. But once again i have no idea what am doing wrong

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They do seem bigger than the original artworks

toxic trellis
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ear things look a little different

worthy junco
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Its looks alright

rancid gazelle
formal spindle
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does anyone here know anything about cosplay making?

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or working in blender lmao

warped rapids
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Something I did

mossy flume
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A DTIYS I’m doing for hitting 100 followers on instagram

onyx breach
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bruh this is strange

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Cygames claimed 2 of my artworks as copyright infringement

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what a weird way to start the week

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seems cygames have a bone to pick with my art? idk man

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not to mention i had to delete the other because of same claim

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yet im seeing similar themed arts floating about as well yet its not in their radar

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hopefully they wont snipe the ones on fanbox, that would really suck

lost wagon
deft cairn
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UwU

lunar sonnet
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suffering and pain on a WIP

bleak grotto
lusty pike
edgy cairn
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hi just need some help because i am absolutely failing at art but i needa draw a long coat for the knave arlecchino but idk how to draw it :S

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pretty sure its slleeveless?

livid storm
hardy yew
timid flicker
silent hound
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im having a hard time deciding on what to do with the legs and feet, anyone have an idea HigoIDK

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i want the leg closer to us to be kinda forshortened

dusky trail
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that already seem to be one knee down position anyway so why not just go with that?

dusky trail
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i would say it is the angle of the knee

silent hound
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Repost

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Which knee

dusky trail
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the right knee

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it is too close the ground, cause the thigh to look massive and putting pressure on the feet

gentle cedar
idle tartan
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watercolor really is the hardest material I’ve ever used in a long time A_HuCry

hardy yew
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Time lapse of wip, gloria, creative outfit by ME

oblique wing
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local birb

edgy cairn
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ANY WAY TO FIX THESE STUPID SMALL GAPS WHENEVER I USE BUCKET IN CSP?

burnt canyon
edgy cairn
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oh my god that exists

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CRYING thank you

outer ember
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FuHuaApprove my scrimblo

drifting tulip
edgy cairn
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help on arm placement? It looks off 💀

dusky trail
verbal marten
hardy yew
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I fucking messed up

rich bluff
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any chainsaw man fans here? 👀

timid flicker
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Columbina ♡

grave thunder
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caster hov

full solstice
visual cargo
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trust me,if i have 10 times draw Ulquiorra,9 times are wip,and the left is unfinish

livid storm
timid flicker
fast spindle
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I mean

verbal marten
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Are you supposed to draw the arm like this SakuraBox

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Wiat its wrong lmao

fast spindle
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I’m not sure try taking a photo of urself

fiery lantern
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help I just got procreate

oblique vector
near rampart
lunar sonnet
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This feels like it's getting overcomplicated...

marsh path
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Try segmenting them, it’ll help :3

lunar sonnet
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then again, I guess trying to pose your hands for the gesture isn't the best idea since you're already contorting your arm to do so.

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I'll come back to it some other time once the rest of the stuff is finished

marsh path
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Do these notes help any? @lunar sonnet

lunar sonnet
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The legs do, ye

marsh path
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Yea try messing around w that

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If you use a big brush for effects it’ll make things easier to see as well

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Like put it on its own layer, turn it off and on

lunar sonnet
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Better?

marsh path
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Yea! The hand looks a lot more legible now as well

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The top is still a little wide, but that can be improvements for next time if you don’t feel like fixing it

timid flicker
thick light
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Aponia

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My iPad sucks

teal seal
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Ugh this is taking forever idek how I spend 20 hours on this it didn’t even feel like it

thick light
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Idk if coloring it ruined it or not

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I might just leave it as a sketch

timid flicker
plucky bobcat
# thick light

in black n white it really looks like himeko in aponias skin

timid flicker
plucky bobcat
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even the sharp eyes looks full of fire and motivation like himeko, aponias eyes looked more numb and depressed

timid flicker
brittle rivet
dusky trail
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with how Arlecchico and Columbina pretty much everywhere nowaday

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stuff like that is why i can't bother draw for Genshin anymore

thick light
plucky bobcat
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but i think it looks very good still CB_nod

lunar sonnet
thick light
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I tried adding a little bit of shading

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I think I should’ve made her lips a bit bigger tbh

dusky trail
plucky bobcat
timid flicker
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Also im pretty sure her bangs dont look that way, maybe that'll help too

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Smth like this maybe? Just a suggestion tho

thick light
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Alright, thanksCeciliaHappy

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How’s this?

timid flicker
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The left curve

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You could also do the eye like this to make it more dead looking

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You can give her light eyebags

thick light
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Alright

timid flicker
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I hope that helps :D

thick light
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Yup! ^^

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I tried but it makes her look like she’s gonna cry @timid flicker

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Should I add tears just to make it go with her persona?

timid flicker
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She wants to cry but she cant

thick light
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So I’ll just either leave it as is

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Or add lil tears

timid flicker
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Thats up to u

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Both look nice in my opinion

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Just have one eye trickling a tear down her face

thick light
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Alright, so these are the alts

timid flicker
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The left eye is still a tad too sharp in the inner end

thick light
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That’s probably the issue

timid flicker
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Ye

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When u do color it, dont highlight her eyes

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You can highlight her lashes a little bit, but keep the pupils dark

woeful hinge
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I know I haven’t said anything yet but here are somethings you could change if you wanted to

plucky bobcat
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joo it looks amazing

thick light
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Fixed it

timid flicker
# thick light

Also another tip, try to make your clothes flow more naturally around the shape of the body, try to use the body as a guideline on how you'll draw the clothes on

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For example the bobas

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The arms are a cylinder, so sleeves should curve around them

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You can draw the pieces of clothes in segmets to help you understand it better

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After you have your basic shapes you can sketch in the extra details

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You can also score the darker areas of the clothes to help you find your way around a bit better. Like behind the arms, underboob, and usually under the neck

timid flicker
thick light
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Alrighty

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Thank you so much for the advice lately

near rampart
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What should I draw her wearing next???? TeriThink TeriThink

thick light
thick light
plucky bobcat
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i like it too

near rampart
timid flicker
thick light
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Thanks

timid flicker
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Not honkai but W.i.p nonetheless

timid flicker
woeful hinge
dire ruin
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oh!! crits please for my random completely unexpected perspective sketches i did ;o
i wanna know how i can improve
buttt they're also pretty messy :') so apologies

dusky trail
dire ruin
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yeyeye

dusky trail
# dire ruin yeyeye

then i would suggest not to go for completely top down view for the standing girl

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and it easier to see the problem when you flip them around

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but if you still want to go for that then, the sitting girl could be bigger

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her head can still be on the same size as the other girl

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she just sitting, not a floor down

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her hip could be wider and her knee should be parallel with her left boob

dire ruin
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oooo ty shik ;o

dusky trail
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when you look up, your head will lean backward so the collabone and some of the neck should be visible

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no need for the hair to show that much in the back either

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unless you want to be fancy and have the wind blowing their hairs

dire ruin
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ty for the advice !! ;o

thick light
marsh path
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Additionally, the one sitting down would be smaller

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Add a plane too so you can actually see where characters are standing

dire ruin
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? i have no idea what a geoform is

marsh path
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I’ll do a redline

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Basically you’re drawing the object like it’s in a 3d space

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Uhhh ignore big white space lol

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I just copy pasted ur drawing into a file and didn’t use the whole thing

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But basically what I’m trying to say is that when you’re drawing your characters, it’s helpful to draw them out of three dimensional shapes like cubes and cylinders. This way, you can tell the curvature of the character’s anatomy and better adjust it. Using referencing will also be really helpful for you!

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For this particular drawing, it might help to add an object for scale that we’re all familiar with, for example a fire hydrant.

dire ruin
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oohhhh i understand now ;o

blissful niche
#

I dont know where I should ask about it, but I suppose it's the closest channel to it, does anyone know where I can get MMD models for honkai characters?

marsh path
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Character wip

timid flicker
blissful niche
# timid flicker Have u tried a simple google search?

surprisingly, yes, and all I can find are chinese sites that I cannot navigate through because I am not chinese, nor does google translate works, because text is applied on images, I tried using a certain site but it requires a phone number, and I cannot get verification code to download the models

timid flicker
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I dunno, i dont work with mmd

weak raft
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I spend 19 hour for this drawing and im happyyy

edgy cairn
#

ref for a hand like this?

dusky trail
lunar sonnet
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Anybody mind giving me a second opinion on these sleeves

timid flicker
dusky trail
lunar sonnet
dusky trail
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yes, her right

lunar sonnet
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ayt just making sure

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Adjusted it slightly

dusky trail
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like the sleeve hanging on the tip of the shoulder, not around it

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you can see the left sleeve hang around the collar part too

lunar sonnet
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I see

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This better?

dusky trail
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may want to push the frill part deeper to match the left sleeve

woeful hinge
lunar sonnet
#

Which frill part

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The one on the sleeve or the one on the shoulder coif?

dusky trail
lunar sonnet
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Oh, that's gonna get erased

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Since it's covered

dusky trail
#

=3=

lunar sonnet
#

Oh wait now I think I see what you mean

dusky trail
#

well just adjust so the left and the right side match

lunar sonnet
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You mean to add these little bits sticking out?

dusky trail
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from that angle, it can stick out more than just little bit

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i do it a bit too much there but you get the point

lunar sonnet
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I see, alright then

lunar sonnet
dusky trail
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you can use that as reference i guess

lunar sonnet
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A very long way

lunar sonnet
dusky trail
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here something for the puff sleeve

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and there the frill

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so no need to put the puff sleeve that high

dusky trail
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then draw the sleeve around it

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you will have a bit more natural shape that way

lunar sonnet
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These things are always harder once it's down to lineart...

dusky trail
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it is fine to make the frill flat like this

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you are using high angle after all so those frill should be more visible

woeful hinge
lunar sonnet
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specific

dusky trail
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i would go for flatter but that is fine i guess

woeful hinge
lunar sonnet
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It's from an rpg

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mmo

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a commish for a person's character

lunar sonnet
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I should probably stop for now, feeling sleepy and not quite in the right mind to figure out how to adjust these frills on the dress

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Nvm looks like I need to adjust the size

opal walrus
#

Hello
Does anybody have references for Durandal’s stand, King, with the Elf outfit?

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Regular references for king will be great, too

woeful hinge
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This is probably the best you’ll get

opal walrus
livid storm
whole cloak
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it’s been a while
crit welcome I’m experimenting and I need background/composition ideas

worthy junco
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Is her forehead too big

dusky trail
dusky trail
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when her hair, clothe and the other earring seem to be normal

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the right one is tilting so it just oddly stand out

oblique vector
worthy junco
#

Is this better? And is there anything else wrong

dusky trail
#

but her ear looks rather small

worthy junco
woeful hinge
#

Here are some thing you could change if you want to

worthy junco
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Thanks

oblique vector
oblique wing
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needs to be longer

dusky trail
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it more like it is rather wide, cause her head to feel small

whole cloak
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better?

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I haven’t gotten to hair yet but it will flow to the right

little estuary