#art-discussion-and-wip
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I don't like using tools that are too technical
Prefer ones that are simple to understand xD
#honkai-art-gallery hasn't been touched since the 90s
And #honkai-meme-gallery aswell
I got some good stuff for my senti ! So I’m drawing her haha, any criticism is welcomed!
Anyone got FR references?
the thing with her legs seem to be various though
in that official launcher art, it looks like it just on top of the legs
while in the model and event's CGI, it looks like a tattoo
Thanks
Ayo short hair senti is hot

I think I've stopped playing honkai now, been months since I've touched it.
Too busy simping manwha characters. A lot of spiciness goes on. I'm having a new phase. God help me.
Has that painter loli come out yet? Keep seeing her on youtube
She has, there's an event rn and she's in SP supply I believe
The one holding the handle isn't too bad
Oooo it looks pretty good :>
I think the eyes are a little bit too high on her face though, by about 4cm
yeah
if you zoom in a bit
you can see that I lasso'd and moved it w
guess it's not low enough huh w
I don't need to zoom, u can tell that because u out liens on her cheeks but they're moved
:"D
Agreed
too bad I drew this all in a single layer
But you're doing a great job tho, keep it up
:"D
You've improved for sure. I need to draw, but I've been holed up reading.
SAME
Haven't done one in weeks
I'm scared I'm gonna lose my touch but I csnt help it
right?
I've been reading the dark romance, villainess types manwhas lately
is this enough?
I think maybe even a bit lower
If you can tell from my pfp. Up to date on your throne within a day.
I need more of this in my life tbh i've been working all the time lmao
:""
Don't worry about losing your touch with art tho, I find that sometimes when you come back after a break you actually perform way better
You as in anyone obv
Wdym?
Like, sometimes when you take a long break from drawing because of other things happening in your life, when you start drawing at it you have way better results
It might just be cause you're letting your brain rest for a while
Ah yes
Oh I've had that happen before.
passive exp
Sorry for my grammar, i'm still half asleep 💀
I think i did some practise last week and I suddenly wasn't struggling as much but tbh I'm still awful at colouring, just I've gotten quicker with sketches
I gave up on my yor fanart since I wasn't liking it
Ohhh well getting quick with sketches is still a really good skill to have
I'm slow asf for some reason and it really bothers me
Maybe you can try again in the future when you think you are more capable
I'm still slow, just improved a littlr on my speed. Atm colouring Is of huge concern.
It looked good to me when it was liensrt
Oh that actually does look really good, did you mirror the eyes tho?
Hmmm
What don't you like about it?
I think the colors are pretty nice tbh, the only thing I think needs a little work is lineart since it doesn't really blend in a lot near the folds of the clothes
I don't think my style of colouring match my neat lineart. I am used to roughly colouring so it takes a lot of tries for it to be neat
And i end up messing up my liensrt in the end anyways so I feel it is useless to even do a liensrt
But im not confident enough to colour after a sketch either
And my colours are always never as saturated as I want, it just missing a lot of things like it's too mild. There's no glow
I tried to add glow with the yor but it just wasn't right for me so I gave up
Maybe I'm trying too hard
Also I hate the eyes.
I want it to be simple like this but it for some reason looks dull when I try
I see what you're talking about, I think that honestly this is an issue for a lot of artists and it may not sound like it but changing the color of the lineart (maybe even putting different colors in different areas) really helps a lot with that
Let me take a closer look so I can give you some actual advice maybe
The main reason it might not look as "simple" as those comics is because those actually use mostly cell shading, which creates a more minimalistic vibe and makes details in the lineart of the eyes more noticeable. Also, they fill in the eyelashes with lineart instead of coloring them in
Your colors blend a lot which is really good when painting but maybe not as much when you're trying to achieve that specific result you're looking for
Yeah i have a very much painter style. I don't use much tools xD like 3 tools at most
Mhm, same here
Although you are better than me at picking unsaturated colors haha, when I started painting I really liked saturated styles and so I never really learned how to do anything else
Right now I'm working to fix that xd
This is mroe painter but they've somehow managed to do simple at the same time
I cant simple
Either way I know you may not like their style but if you wanna find out how to do cell shadinf properly take a look at par0llel's art, she uses a lot of tricks with gradiants and stuff
And her art uses mostly cell shading
That looks epic ngl
Fuck I realize how limited I am because of saturated colors when I look at things like these xd
I love this
Thr eyes are so simple they didn't do much with it
Their colouring is over all simple but it looks complex because of the grains
And the lineart/sketch
I overdo my colouring, I can't simple.
I try and try until it looks simple enough but it's a lot of tries until I can make it look simple
I understand what you mean, I have the opposite problem instead haha
I'm heading to work now. Talk to u later
Np have a good day
I'm really excited about this 
very
That looks like it's gonna be great :D
Kameha-ception
I play classical music or just relaxing sounds in the bg on low volume when I'm drawing cuz i cant stand loudness when I'm concentrating.
Call me old I dare you
I get mad easily when someone or something disturbs my concentration. Unless they're cute adorable little fluffy beings that goes meoww
and also decided to take a nap on your tablet
Too cute I can't get mad at them when I should
I get the feeling, old music puts me in a trance and I just find myself humming to it subconsciously, while drawing better than before
I can get my concentration back pretty easily, it all depends on how motivated I am to finish what I'm doing, if it's 100 percent I don't mind taking a quick break which I rarely do
meanwhile i just listen to some bond story in some games
you can basically treat it like typical anime drama CD after all
Is it really OK to bother with coloring when your laptop's screen is so trashy?
Can always do black and white
Never goes wrong
but what if you want to practice coloring? :"D
I was soooo motivated earlier
when I was going to color
Hmmm
and my motivation plummeted the moment I try to do so
because I can't distinguish skin colors :"D
Just steal the colour from mihoyo official arts O w O
Or search online for the colours, there should be plenty
shading's gonna be tough huh
mannnn
I wanna learn but my device is stopping me to do so
waow
I have trouble with this as well Q Q
What about trying on a different medium like paper?
To get a feel where to put lighting and shadows

Just a note that it will be harder to shade and stuff due to its nature
And blunt wooden pencil may work better
I'll try to look for wood pencils then w
but mannn
I wanna try practicing coloring too qq
What about using your phone to colour?
O
it makes my mind feel cramped :"D
I guess :"D
will work on values and anatomy practice on copy paper I suppose w
Good luck > v <
i would say the right hand also equally creepy
it also way shorter compare to the left arm
her neck barely exist while her ankle make it look like the socks are too tight
I just draw that lines for nothing
Let me draw neck longer
though you seem to also have problem connect the line
Yeah sadly 
well you can either draw in long stroke by just get your fingers ready on the ctrl Z
that way you hand will "eventually" draw the right curve
or draw in short repeated line then just erase the part that poke out
like here when i use like 3-4 strokes without care
then just slim it down after
but well, it take time to get your hand into habit so just keep practicing
I'm on phone and keep my finger on undo button but my hands go shaky
=3=
Yep I don't draw a lot, gotta practice
Better?
neck could still be longer
Longer or shorter one?
unless i need to make it longer 
try not to stretch her neck to collarbone that much
you can see it in this Seele, it is just straight down then to the side
since you turn it more of a triangle shape, it cause her neck to seem chunky
Like that?
Okay did that, do i need to fix anything else?
Why are game bikinis so much prettier than real life?
bcuz we use them to swimm and less friction in the water means more swimming efficiency... so thats why they looks so smooth n boring. the valks use them as good looking skin. I bet with you that they would just drown because there is always so much fabric and frills on it

because it actually fit, ohhhhhh
Also it is because they are designed to keep some parts of our body protected while swimming.
I wish there is a way to mix these two qualities Q Q
I don't even go swimming, just sit in the water for 20mins and im like yeah gonna get out
Yeah im skinny a lot of bikinis are too big on me.
I don’t stay need the beach or swimming pools
I prefer sitting in hot springs
And cook soft boiled eggs to eat
I'm going to Thailand to visit family next month for 3 weeks
I'm excited to sit in the hot springs again there
also, those twins need more love
The one in SG is small with no surprise
They only appeared in the events once…and it was really nice seeing them interact
They're cute for sure
well they get to pop up in Mobius web event too
Too little screen time for their appearances Q Q
Because they're not as popular
Thrills are very possible
i rarely go swimming but if i go then i dive for hours and collect some seashells or other cool stuff like stones, i can even dive in the ocean without swimming goggles xD
I don't like to sea that much xD
But you can gwt all kinds now
So its not impossible to make anime swimwear to rewality
You just have to know where to look
I'm very much into fashion so ik where to find relsly nice stuff
SO WHWRE ARW RHEY HOW COMR NOBODU THOUGH OF IT YET
I'd totally wear this
well anime get to have better texture after all
That's a shame. Why not wear bikinis anyways I'm sure you'd get a lot of attention.
Why not????
This is such a good pose, you could probably do some really cool illustrations with it
plenty of male cosplayer
just look at all those Shimakaze's cosplay... it is so infamous as trap cosplay now
Do it

late but there are pretty bikinis irl too
theyre just usually not made for swimming
honkai likes to add things like blouses and shorts to its beach skins too
void queen base colours
Fischl in her new skin

Nice
wip of dehya 😄 cant wait for her to come out
Gorący mechanik w twojej okolicy

Fluffy clouds
New sticker design
I don't know if this counts as art, but...
have text covered her thigh? you monster
I'm thinking of making a quick art of Kiana, Mei and Bronya as classic rpg roles. I know I want to make Bronya a mage.
Though what class would Kiana be?
well gunner type is still one of the class rpg roles
Ah yeah, could give her a canon lol
i feel like the sketch is too simple but her design is originally simple
do i have any major mistakes in the anatomy
Kiana is leader and ranged lol
well are you try to make her body twist to the side? because the legs lean more on the left while her torso is facing right
or just turn her into Yuna from FFX-2
Some good civ there
i was trying to make it kinda like this
then just swap the legs
ok thanks
so just check one of those reference~
hey look stigmata art
tyty
is this better?
Try making the front legs thigh a bit bigger from the behind
try to lean her left leg a bit like this
Like barely a bit just like the smallest big possible and lean the back leg
hmm ill try
And the part where the skirt curves at the front leg, make a fold going down by the front thigh to show it
make the left leg a bit longer too, the knees are way too different in height
thanks
Like that but make it look better
oh ya~ swap the skirt curve can be use to show the left is the front leg too
And the front legs knee line is toooooo curved
Alr well can someone help me with this
I’m trynna draw miko and there’s something off about the skin coloring
What do I fix/remove?
I cant wrap my head around what’s wrong but it just looks off
Should I remove the lip light
i'm lighter skin color's faction so...
?
Looks like you might need to add little more colour/ saturation if that's the right word?
Oh it looks grey bc discord makes it like that just tap the photo for it to be more pink
also, the light on the lip should be in the middle of it
Idk why discord is doin that
instead of just below the lip
Alr
But wdym by this
as in i already draw in lighter color so your skin's color is off to me
Is it just me or is discord making it look grey??
Oh I usually draw with colors that compliment the main color, pink in this case
I feel like something is wrong with this pose, but I can’t tell. Can someone give suggestions to improve it? ( not sure if the body looks okay with the head…)
is this skirt better?
im sorry i usually dont draw legs so im struggling
ty both for the advice
i would add a M shape curve on the skirt instead of just S shape
so a slight curve for the back leg too?
but that is optional
No
it more like the front leg's skirt curve is too strong
Yea
Why teri 
so it made the back one look flat in compare
Ah yeah, probably add a lighter colour to the skin I reckon. A bit peach. I'd show what I mean but stuck in work
because Kongming best girl
Hey I said this already but click the photo for it to be more saturated because discord makes it look grey
Don't worry I had a look
i always like the alter version of Teri rather than Teri herself
Them two
I can’t make it any pinker or it’ll ruin the contrast
you may want to lift the back of the skirt up too
So many teris
What about a little orange?
Purple?
then time to go red
Yea
alr tysm
O
Should I just scrap the whole thing since no one can find out what’s wrong with it even tho it’s still off
Maybe a mix of purple and red
Um, can I have suggestions on how to improve the pose?
The arm that’s closer to the head is longer than the other
Legs are too short and skinny
oh then, the head is too big yes
Show the hip curved a bit so it looks like she’s sitting on her ass not her tail bone
her left leg also too high for that angle
A little arch
with that view point, you should be able to see both legs clearly
Ok
@dusky trail
her right arm also seem longer than her left
i would go for higher
that would just make me see her as she poking her tongue out
well i also tend to go for more shorter lower lip like this too
ya that looks better
Oh nah small lips don’t sit well with my artstyle
But I could make it less darker
More pink
ty to some "anime" that cause me to hate obvious thick lips
you know, "that" kind
Oh hanime
back then, there are many using the "horse face" style and that cause me to hate thick lips
So where should I add more pink?
middle of the lip and the cheek?
i usually use stronger color but seem fine to me
Alright thanks
Nice
I normally draw eyes but i got alittle lazy this time. Im still learning art so ya 
bootiful
i draw the girl that mi ||crush|| crush on
she’s beautiful ngl

more beautiful than my essay
my roxana sketch
Originally was just gonna do this but in my own style but ended up changing some bits anyways to make it more like an illustration
For practise purposes
Colouring now. Didn't bother with linear this time to see how I handle it.
The eye looks out of place…
they didnt ask for criticism, no need to point it out
Probably will attempt to paint the hair and then go for another one
attempt 3. Tried to fix the proportions of the eyes since they were massive before. Think they're a little better now. 🙂
Should I color her ear the same as the other hair? I mean, it’s still fur but it’s her ear so
are you still having trouble with the skin tone?
Why, does the skin look bad?
i wouldnt say it's bad
if you feel something is wrong with it then i'll try to see what i can do, otherwise then no problem
i tried painting over,
so tried adding blush/makeup and removing some of the specular (highlights)
I’m not actually going for such dark eyes
can just ignore the eyes
ill just say dont randomly put highlights
The two highlights on the cheeks are for her cheek highlights
yeah but the location a bit off
Alr where do I put them
wait, give me a minute
can kinda imagine the cheeks as a bit rounder, so the specular should be more on the right
Alr
something like this
you place the specular on the part where the light hits the objects and it reflects directly on to our eyes
Yelan wip
whether you use hard edge specular or soft depends on the material/ reflectivity of the object
if you want it to be more glossy, can use hard edge like the one on the lips
Well the reason it’s glossy on the lips is because it’s lip gloss
But you think gloss is a good idea? I’ll do it
should also be on the right side more since the structure of the nose is ball shape with wings
if you are going for a more realistic render
hmm..is there any reason why you place it at the point of the nose
To show contour and highlight ig
ok, cause the specular/highlight will change depending on how you imagine the form of the object
i wouldnt say it's wrong if you put it on the tip if that's how you imagine the form
i think a lot better, but personally i feel could use a bit more contrast
Contrast? I’d need an example
dont be afraid to make the shadows darker
Alright I’m onto it
weird discord...it's flagging the lips of yae
lol
check the lips, i made the line a bit darker so it would pop out more
is it just discord or you added some blue shade for shadow
I added the blue shade for color
value might be a bit off, shadows generally does look a bit cooler or "blue" cause of the ambient light
are you following a reference that does that?
value refers to how bright or dark
Darker or brighter?
i was thinking that it might be a stylistic choice as to why it's that bright
Oh darker
if it's not your intention then you might want to darken it a bit
if you dont find anything wrong with it then just ignore what i said abt the blue shadow
so your intention of adding it was to make the colors pop out more is it?
hmm...do you feel it's working?
Is it not
Not to make the colors boom out that much but to not make the colors look boring because it’s too much pink
if you think it is then i wont really say much abt it, but personally it looks more like face makeup / paint or something
Oh
i think you shud paint the eyes
if you look at yae face right, eveyrthing is pink, but the eyes isnt, and it kinda grabs your attention towards the eyes
i mean, that's a separate issue lol, but what im saying is that, the reason you find it boring cause everything is pink is because you havent added the eyes
by having that diff color dot in the middle, it gives a focal point for the piece
of course, what you did is also valid by adding some diff color, this is just another way to solve the problem
I personally feel could use a bit more saturation for the eyes
Saturation refers to how blue/green/yellow the color is
Like the conentration
If you are satisfied with it then prolly just ignore my opinion cause it might be a stylisitc choice
And when it comes to style it all just boils down to our individual preferences
But one thing is it def looks a lot better. Cause last time the eyelashes are kinda off in terms of values
My sister just said that I needed to fix the hair to head value bc the head is too big
I’ma do that
Also
Value doesnt refer to the size though
She said value idk
You meant proportion maybe
Does the pic I sent look good
Yea, can try making the specular on the eyes whiter to make it look more reflective
Alr also is the head rlly that big
The face is fine.. prolly the hair giving the illusion.
Alright
What rendering style are you aiming for? Semi realistic? Anime style?
Give me a sec. Will finish something first
Also, just saying this but you're current render is leaning more towards semi reliastic not anime
Lunch. So i cant open up csp to do stuff
You can try drawing the head shape first if you want
That shud help you get the hair down properly
My sister said make the ears smaller and more down
Fischl's new outfit looks like Rita
The issue I see currently is the face in proportion to the rest of her hair is too "squashed". Make it a little wider as my suggestion
you pinged wrongly, not my work
oh woops
@thin oxide
im just drawing the head shape so the person can see it better and adjust accordingly
yeah good
Can anyone help me buy graphic tablet 😔 🧛
i'm too poor to buy you one
But thanks
why does the face shape throw me off so much?? it looks ok flipped.
tysm
U outlined it completely different from what I drew
?
Didn’t mean to ping u
Oh
I dunno how you draw it so cant help you with that. This is just how i think it is
Hey so I almost finished it
But the one u seen is the old one
Here
@noble wasp
Soo??
if you think it's ok then yeah, this is already part of aesthetics for me so it really varies from person to person depending on their taste
it's looking good
yeah good for me, that particular line can indeed be misunderstood
what i meant was there's really no glaring issue for me, and if i have any nitpicks it would most prolly be just my taste which i dont want to kinda impose on you
thats why if you are satisfied with it then it's good to go
It's looking good, just need to do clean ups and stuff
Oh yea it’s not done yet
yeah, but the base is kinda solid, so i think it shud turn out great
one last thing, can add specular on corner of lips to make it popout more
Perhaps it’s the position of the eye? Not sure though, looks awesome
does this look better to you?
Made a Herrscher of Reason Gfx
project bunny's finger look like Bronya just try to lift her skirt to show off her legs there
yeah, a bit better ngl
my layers are horribly organized tho
any way to liquify multiple layers at once on CSP?
Not sure how liquify works in csp..i think it's a relatively new feature so im not sure how it works. Is it implemented alr? Worst case is just copy merge everything
no ;o you can only do one at a time
but ya. merge all visible to new layer, work there ;o
plus if you haven't changed it hold d to be able to select individual layers ;o
Made fanart for Fischl's new outfit!
https://www.instagram.com/p/CfxoiLkJZKq/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link
uh oh
if it not important then you can always throw the light source directly at her face
look for reference
its going😌
It's creepy but great art
spookie
Did I do the torsos too long or thin? I have a long torso so I often do it by mistake
hard to tell without see the full body but it is thin yes
specially with how big her crotch and thighs are
it almost like she wearing a super tight corset
Is this any better
now the head is too big
and the distant between her breast to collarbone is too wide
you can use this as reference
her left eye is a bit too tilt
because you already draw her head in tilt position, it cause the eye off compare to the face
if you put the guide line there, you can see her left cheek also rather drag out too
Thanks
Is there anything else you see that's wrong
there is the way you draw her collar as more drag upward instead of just straight down
it may cause it to look like her collarbone is curve too hard
it is more balance like this
and her should is rather short in compare to the head too
WHAT
what
what happen to aponia?
Does this look better and ill fix the turtle neck soon
hmm may want to wider the arms too
seem fine, beside the left cheek still off compare to her right cheek, nothing else too noticeable
you do want to fix the eye still though
Thanks
Is the left side of her hair lacking volume
i thought you are going for a side hair style but if not then yes, it lack in volume
Oh I am I was just wondering
well, it just need a bit more, enough to outline the ear should do
Thanks again you were really helpful because I always thought smth was wrong with her eyes but couldn't quite pinpoint it
well stuff like that is why guide line is helpful
Yeah and I should probably flip my drawings more
how detail it is depend on the person but have those point lay out just make it easier to see it
I'll call it a night for drawing today and fix stuff tomorrow
hey there chat :D
i asked a question at honkaichat but peeps are kinda busy so i wanna try asking here
i'm looking for transparent pictures of the FC sims thingy that you see in ER, i need it for an artwork... i think this channel is pretty fitting to ask-?
its like corrupted aponia for a request
not really transparent but you mean this?
HoYoLAB is the community forum for Genshin Impact and Honkai Impact 3rd, with official information about game events, perks, fan art, and other exciting content.
uuuu that one's interesting 
hmmge but i guess i can also just screenshot the ones in the game
ty tho :D
Does the turtle neck look okay
wip part 2 
thanks 
well the left side hug the neck while the right one is slightly away from it
Okay
Speak/post, live, die, repeat
Size?
I dunno, they seem to have the right proportions. But once again i have no idea what am doing wrong
They do seem bigger than the original artworks
Its looks alright
since #honkai-cosplay isnt a discussion channel
does anyone here know anything about cosplay making?
or working in blender lmao
Something I did
A DTIYS I’m doing for hitting 100 followers on instagram
bruh this is strange
Cygames claimed 2 of my artworks as copyright infringement
what a weird way to start the week
seems cygames have a bone to pick with my art? idk man
not to mention i had to delete the other because of same claim
yet im seeing similar themed arts floating about as well yet its not in their radar
hopefully they wont snipe the ones on fanbox, that would really suck
suffering and pain on a WIP
how the hell does that even work
hi just need some help because i am absolutely failing at art but i needa draw a long coat for the knave arlecchino but idk how to draw it :S
pretty sure its slleeveless?
Quick illustration of high ponytail Lumine!
https://www.instagram.com/p/Cf5K9qRpxcc/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link
Selee
im having a hard time deciding on what to do with the legs and feet, anyone have an idea 
i want the leg closer to us to be kinda forshortened
that already seem to be one knee down position anyway so why not just go with that?
i would say it is the angle of the knee
the right knee
it is too close the ground, cause the thigh to look massive and putting pressure on the feet
I depicted Columbina as if a Seraphim angel https://twitter.com/AzJames34/status/1546883521780027394
watercolor really is the hardest material I’ve ever used in a long time 
Time lapse of wip, gloria, creative outfit by ME
local birb
Try checking "area scaling" and adjust the value depending on how big your canvas usually is - I usually have it on 3-4!
my scrimblo
WIP
help on arm placement? It looks off 💀
i don't think the placement is weird, the sharp elbow though
Bruh
I fucking messed up
any chainsaw man fans here? 👀
caster hov
her <3
trust me,if i have 10 times draw Ulquiorra,9 times are wip,and the left is unfinish
Another quick illustration, this time for Klee!
https://www.instagram.com/p/Cf-w3sDJWiB/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link
I’m not sure try taking a photo of urself
Uh, am I allowed to share arts not honkai-related here?
https://twitter.com/haihaiera/status/1547484263309721600?t=hNUzY5f8YBr19M8MKB-qwg&s=19
Omg I have that outfit for her and it’s so good
I think you’ve gotta reevaluate those hands
Try segmenting them, it’ll help :3
already did, still wasn't much help
then again, I guess trying to pose your hands for the gesture isn't the best idea since you're already contorting your arm to do so.
I'll come back to it some other time once the rest of the stuff is finished
Do these notes help any? @lunar sonnet
The legs do, ye
Yea try messing around w that
If you use a big brush for effects it’ll make things easier to see as well
Like put it on its own layer, turn it off and on
Better?
Yea! The hand looks a lot more legible now as well
The top is still a little wide, but that can be improvements for next time if you don’t feel like fixing it
Ugh this is taking forever idek how I spend 20 hours on this it didn’t even feel like it
Cus of the bangs
even the sharp eyes looks full of fire and motivation like himeko, aponias eyes looked more numb and depressed
with how Arlecchico and Columbina pretty much everywhere nowaday
stuff like that is why i can't bother draw for Genshin anymore
I tried to make it look numb and depressed but it didn't fit my art style ;-;
but i think it looks very good still 
We lack quality Pierro and Capitano stuff
I tried adding a little bit of shading
I think I should’ve made her lips a bit bigger tbh
give her more love instead
maybe just a little not so much bigger than before
Try making the top flatter instead of curved then, make them look less pointy on the edges
Also im pretty sure her bangs dont look that way, maybe that'll help too
Smth like this maybe? Just a suggestion tho
Yep yep, just soften the curve a little to make it look natural
The left curve
You could also do the eye like this to make it more dead looking
You can give her light eyebags
Alright
I hope that helps :D
Yup! ^^
I tried but it makes her look like she’s gonna cry @timid flicker
Should I add tears just to make it go with her persona?
Isnt that her character? Pent up pain
She wants to cry but she cant
Thats up to u
Both look nice in my opinion
Just have one eye trickling a tear down her face
I like this better
The left eye is still a tad too sharp in the inner end
That’s probably the issue
Ye
When u do color it, dont highlight her eyes
You can highlight her lashes a little bit, but keep the pupils dark
I know I haven’t said anything yet but here are somethings you could change if you wanted to
Also another tip, try to make your clothes flow more naturally around the shape of the body, try to use the body as a guideline on how you'll draw the clothes on
For example the bobas
The arms are a cylinder, so sleeves should curve around them
You can draw the pieces of clothes in segmets to help you understand it better
After you have your basic shapes you can sketch in the extra details
You can also score the darker areas of the clothes to help you find your way around a bit better. Like behind the arms, underboob, and usually under the neck
If you're doing it digitally, then draw the details a layer on top of the basic clothing shapes ^-^
What should I draw her wearing next????

Minecraft creeper hoodie 😄
Made some small changes, that aside I like it so far
:00 okay!
Looks great
Thanks
Not honkai but W.i.p nonetheless
Ayo it’s starting to look really pretty
oh!! crits please for my random completely unexpected perspective sketches i did ;o
i wanna know how i can improve
buttt they're also pretty messy :') so apologies
so one of them is standing while the other sitting?
yeyeye
then i would suggest not to go for completely top down view for the standing girl
and it easier to see the problem when you flip them around
but if you still want to go for that then, the sitting girl could be bigger
her head can still be on the same size as the other girl
she just sitting, not a floor down
her hip could be wider and her knee should be parallel with her left boob
oooo ty shik ;o
well if you still want to keep it that way, then they should look something like this
when you look up, your head will lean backward so the collabone and some of the neck should be visible
no need for the hair to show that much in the back either
unless you want to be fancy and have the wind blowing their hairs
Suggestion, break them down into forms first before you draw them. If you’ve ever heard of geoforms, make sure to make your drawing in perspective in accordance to those
Additionally, the one sitting down would be smaller
Add a plane too so you can actually see where characters are standing
? i have no idea what a geoform is
I’ll do a redline
Basically you’re drawing the object like it’s in a 3d space
Uhhh ignore big white space lol
I just copy pasted ur drawing into a file and didn’t use the whole thing
But basically what I’m trying to say is that when you’re drawing your characters, it’s helpful to draw them out of three dimensional shapes like cubes and cylinders. This way, you can tell the curvature of the character’s anatomy and better adjust it. Using referencing will also be really helpful for you!
For this particular drawing, it might help to add an object for scale that we’re all familiar with, for example a fire hydrant.
oohhhh i understand now ;o
I dont know where I should ask about it, but I suppose it's the closest channel to it, does anyone know where I can get MMD models for honkai characters?
Character wip
Have u tried a simple google search?
surprisingly, yes, and all I can find are chinese sites that I cannot navigate through because I am not chinese, nor does google translate works, because text is applied on images, I tried using a certain site but it requires a phone number, and I cannot get verification code to download the models
I dunno, i dont work with mmd
I spend 19 hour for this drawing and im happyyy
ref for a hand like this?
the cuff part of the right sleeve maybe a bit too small
This is on the right hand from the point of view of the character right
yes, her right
since her puff sleeve rather pointy there, it also seem to make her shoulder feel rather stiff and small
like the sleeve hanging on the tip of the shoulder, not around it
you can see the left sleeve hang around the collar part too
may want to push the frill part deeper to match the left sleeve
Woah that’s really coming together my guy
=3=
well just adjust so the left and the right side match
You mean to add these little bits sticking out?
from that angle, it can stick out more than just little bit
i do it a bit too much there but you get the point
I see, alright then
Thanks, but it's going to be a long way before it all comes together
you can use that as reference i guess
Like this?
here something for the puff sleeve
and there the frill
so no need to put the puff sleeve that high
so just draw a ball shape like this
then draw the sleeve around it
you will have a bit more natural shape that way
These things are always harder once it's down to lineart...
it is fine to make the frill flat like this
you are using high angle after all so those frill should be more visible
Sorry but is this a specific character or original character?
i would go for flatter but that is fine i guess
Which character is it? (Sorry I’m just blind)
I should probably stop for now, feeling sleepy and not quite in the right mind to figure out how to adjust these frills on the dress
Nvm looks like I need to adjust the size
Hello
Does anybody have references for Durandal’s stand, King, with the Elf outfit?
Regular references for king will be great, too
This is probably the best you’ll get
Thanks!
Art commission for Capy
https://www.instagram.com/p/CgLFN_xPAHb/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link
it’s been a while
crit welcome I’m experimenting and I need background/composition ideas
Is her forehead too big
yes
why only one of her earring seem to be dangling?
when her hair, clothe and the other earring seem to be normal
the right one is tilting so it just oddly stand out
have some meme
https://twitter.com/haihaiera/status/1549234075478532098?t=IzHfJ6jsgGpH4Pzz_Kao0A&s=19
Is this better? And is there anything else wrong

Is that guardian tales
it easier to see if you don't use yellow lineart or at least put a gray background
but her ear looks rather small
It was just a sketch that I cleaned up and I forgot to change the color
Here are some thing you could change if you want to
Thanks
yess
her neck is kinda long ig
it more like it is rather wide, cause her head to feel small
true dat 😄 sketch looks epic.. but once you work on 1 line.. it looks like a work of 5yo XDDD










