#art-discussion-and-wip

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lone wagon
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I think I am almost done

hardy yew
storm shore
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damn

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thats hot

shadow nebula
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Its looking good and your lines are quite clean but I can see that you’re trying to go for a subtle perspective but you’re still drawing her flat. Turn the knees, shins, and feet towards the viewer as we’re seeing them from the side yet everything else is seen from a 3/4th angle. If you want to go for a side view make the shins shorter or the thighs longer since currently the shin are too long. I would also recommend removing the line that shows the bottom of the sole as currently it doesn’t make sense with the perspective. You should also bring the shoulder of the raised arm out more without a a line that isn’t the shirt separating shoulder from torso. Also bring her left eye out slightly to have her face look less squished, that said i do like how happy her face is, it a cute drawing

glass glade
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it looked like this lol

shadow nebula
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Those feet are well done from perspective but you’re finished sketch has both feet at a side angle

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Try to find a reference from the angle that you’re trying to get

full solstice
hardy yew
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Guys. What do you think about my art?

full solstice
hardy yew
full solstice
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that's cute

lone wagon
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I'll carry on practising after this big piece of mine

full solstice
wary verge
whole cloak
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move her right shoulder up, if the arm is raised the shoulder should still be in the same position if not higher

fair flare
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Finally finished the lineart, someone pls end me KianaBeg

molten flume
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lineart is killing us

hardy yew
grave nymph
pseudo harbor
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This is kind of my honkai impact oc and.. She looks like the Walmart version of wendy

grave nymph
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too much inspiration w

pseudo harbor
edgy cairn
dusky trail
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are those lines on the wrists suppose to be the glove wrinkle?

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if so, try to limit it down to just near the wrist instead of zic-zac down the arm like that

rare fjord
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I was trying to make my own Character

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BUT suddenly, it looks like destiny

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From takt op

dusky trail
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meanwhile i just see Mashu

hardy yew
fossil obsidian
hollow marlin
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Credit: Yusha. But I made it colored

rare fjord
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Asta

molten flume
timber seal
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Im done

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I quit

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🫂

hardy yew
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What’s she doing?

timber seal
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I don't know

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🛌

hardy yew
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shama pfp nice

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Well that certainly makes ur life a bit harder doesn’t it?

timber seal
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My back hurts

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My hands are in agony

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And im really tired

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🛌

hardy yew
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Baha I’m teasing u

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I get that

timber seal
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And i think i got ptsd from drawing genshin characters

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🧍‍♀️

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Never. Again.

hardy yew
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Well ok

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Do you want some help mayhaps?

dusky trail
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she just walking her way downtown

onyx breach
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😑🔫

molten flume
hardy yew
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Really nice

molten flume
rare fjord
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omg

hardy yew
fair flare
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currently descending into madness

hardy yew
drowsy onyx
fair flare
fair flare
hardy yew
fair flare
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It's pretty cool too

hardy yew
hardy yew
hardy yew
fair flare
molten flume
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pain

hardy yew
fair flare
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My friends it is finished and now i will be passing awayFuHuaApprove

fair flare
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Thank youSakuraLuv

drifting tulip
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She took me like 12 hours total but I’m really happy with the outcome!

Yeah I draw really slow

drifting tulip
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Tyy!

mild kraken
molten flume
tribal tendon
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i didn't know that there is a wip discussion here xD
ely btw

full solstice
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captain's wallet is smelling something called being broke

tribal tendon
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the skin is kinda tempting xD

dusky trail
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not when Rita and Dudu are coming

tribal tendon
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worst timing ever RozaOops

dusky trail
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if only the skin is spending event

tribal tendon
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true its much easy to spend xtals than b-chips

glass jacinth
tribal tendon
glass jacinth
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Ahh line art..

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The biggest pain of them all

tribal tendon
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yesss HoVREEEHoVREEE

glass jacinth
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You can always try that painting style thing

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But that has it's own ups and downs too

tribal tendon
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im not really into painting still studying how mix colors and stuff but yeah i can try it too

glass jacinth
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👍

bleak grotto
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when you trace your hands bc you couldn't get it rightMeiStare

jaunty python
cloud grail
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fallenrosmarr

edgy cairn
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how can I change my art style

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im dissatisfied with my art style

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examples of my current;

tribal tendon
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art style is not a thing that you can change easily
thats for me tho idk abt others

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just take some inspiration's from other artist you like and put it in your style

whole cloak
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do you have an idea of what you want to achieve as a style?

edgy cairn
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Probably more masculine since everyone says that my guys look like girls

exotic beacon
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Hey guys, sorry to just waltz in here but I just wanted to ask if anyone has some references on perspective faces. Mainly down angles

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If you do, please send here or in my dms. Thank you!

grave nymph
exotic beacon
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Yes! Thank you so much!

hardy yew
hardy yew
hardy yew
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sketch of her ice clone

cloud grail
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i kind of gave up on this ill just redraw it KevinPeek

hardy yew
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critiques welcomeee

molten flume
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fixed the expression, should be good i guess

hardy yew
grave nymph
low hawk
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Long haired Seele? Maybe Maybe? SeeleAra

grave nymph
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dies

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I'm being blessed with Seele art today oh wow

low hawk
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since im done with all of the story and only have APHO now

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my brain was like. what would seele look like during this time period

grave nymph
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it all depends

low hawk
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Long hair and office clothes

grave nymph
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in the faith of "Seele"

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🙏

low hawk
dusky trail
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just give her an apron

hardy yew
hardy yew
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👀

hardy yew
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can't say I get Mihoyo Initial ideals when creating Apho Bronya or Mei's clothes

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I think they somehow has Elegant in their words?

lone wagon
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Well they're meant to be adult versions of themselves

hardy yew
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Tho I don't think Mei's outfit is elegant

hardy yew
lone wagon
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I think they look a lot like the star rail

hardy yew
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We haven't seen Mei tho

lone wagon
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The bronya one definitely have a strong representation

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Mei idk yeah

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But bronya does

hardy yew
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although, the theme is more different

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and the vibe it gives between the two

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Bronya Formal office clothes do seems to be really like what other office woman wears

lone wagon
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Idk if we're even suipoose to talk about star rail yet xD they even have a discord now it's fine right?

hardy yew
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the character is in the official

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not counted as leak I think

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since it's Beta

lone wagon
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To me they just mroe mature. I think the theme is just a more mature version of themselves

hardy yew
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Oh wait I just realized this now

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Bronya Silver Wing outfit does really emphasizes on her being a mature woman

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with the main tone of the clothes is black and blue

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yea, You're right.

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but with this design, It's hard to predict what other character will look like in APHO especially Seele and Theresa

dusky trail
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well Bronya is not one to wear vibrant color anyway

hardy yew
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true

lone wagon
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I think the hair is a relsly good example of them becoming more mature especially in bronya

dusky trail
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dark blue has always been her thing

lone wagon
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As she grew she began to let her hair down

dusky trail
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even Bronie still lean onto dark color

lone wagon
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I think the hair emphasises the development of her character a lot.

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Bronya loves blue for sure

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Kiana loves orange/yellow

dusky trail
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even though she is the young and hip Bronya

lone wagon
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Purple is definitely a mei thing

dusky trail
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Mei is more red actually

hardy yew
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Mei is red/purple

dusky trail
hardy yew
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yea, the herrscher form gives off a lot of red

lone wagon
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The colours probably have meaning to them too xD

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I can see why kiana is more orange and yellow anyways

hardy yew
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so

dusky trail
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even though HoT is literally just a copy from one of Himeko's rejected design

hardy yew
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for Seele APHO design

lone wagon
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Because of her personality and how people around her see her as hope

hardy yew
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could you tell me more?

dusky trail
lone wagon
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Lmao xD

dusky trail
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look at C

hardy yew
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👀

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I see

dusky trail
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some part changed but the design is the same

hardy yew
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ye that's unbelievable

lone wagon
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I wonder if we're gonna get a kallen battlesuit now for those who know what i mean

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Cuz of the story

dusky trail
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specially the middle part

lone wagon
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Not gonan say anymore cuz I might get told off for spoilers

hardy yew
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Kallen Herrscher

lone wagon
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I'm excited for DD new battlesuit now cuz of the story

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Before I wasn't interested

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But now I've kept up with the story the other day om excited

dusky trail
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well even APHO Bronya's new bike is just this anyway

lone wagon
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The new apho? Not seen her on her bike yet XD

lone wagon
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Oh her stigma

hardy yew
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lol, I just noticed that

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👀

lone wagon
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I was tempted to get her battlesuit but then DD story came out

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And im not sad I didn't get ehr anymore

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I like the midair fighting style

hardy yew
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DD story?

dusky trail
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i need her so i can have my Bronie, Bronya, APHO Bronya team

lone wagon
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Yeah the recent story

hardy yew
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oh right

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anyway

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I really wonder what APHO Seele design will be

lone wagon
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U know about hee going into the memories but I won't spoil what happen but they've definitely confirmed some theories that's been going on

hardy yew
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her outfit will definitely has Butterfly and Flowers.

lone wagon
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I have a feeling its gonna be simislr to her star rail design

hardy yew
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I doubt it, honkai Seele is more gentle

dusky trail
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well Star Rail is adult Seele after all

lone wagon
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Well who knows bronya is very simislr to her star rail design

hardy yew
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I feel like she's lean to teen going to be adult

dusky trail
hardy yew
dusky trail
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before that, we also have GGZ Seele

lone wagon
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The outfit is just a bit different

hardy yew
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👀

lone wagon
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But their vibe is the same

dusky trail
hardy yew
dusky trail
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Star Rail Bronya's legging, hmmmm

hardy yew
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that armored legging

dusky trail
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i mean the pantyhose underneath

hardy yew
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👀

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what about it?

dusky trail
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bodysuit aside, we don't really have many ppl wearing pantyhose in Honkai

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mostly bare legs or thighhigh

hardy yew
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hmmmm

dusky trail
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Rita and Bronya probably the only one wear it

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pantyhose is fun to draw

hardy yew
dusky trail
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from make it feel transparent enough to show some of the skin color underneath

lone wagon
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Pole dancing Rita is life

dusky trail
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to the luster feel of it

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not to mention , you can always give it some torn part for extra effect

lone wagon
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Your tight fetishes

hardy yew
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what kind of extra effect exactly

lone wagon
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The wet effect

hardy yew
dusky trail
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depend on how you use it

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the torn part can be use to show harsh battle

hardy yew
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I see

dusky trail
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or just simple to reveal the skin through those holes

hardy yew
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noted

glass jacinth
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Did I add too much falling rocks and stuff?

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Its Orpheus from takt op destiny btw

dusky trail
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who

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also, are those rock flying toward her or falling down

glass jacinth
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Both?

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Like everything is falling apart

dusky trail
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the motion blur in the back make it looks like there is a storm there and rock are flying everywhere

glass jacinth
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Is that a bad thing?

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That happend in the anime kind of

molten flume
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I hate you jiggle physics

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its making me mald

dusky trail
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just want to know what you doing with those rocks~ i don't watch that anime

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hmm want to have some fun with Rita's clothe but i guess that one is tighter than i thought

shadow nebula
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shenhe doodle

glass jacinth
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Cmon dodoles are not supposed to look so good

shadow nebula
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lol, thank you

hardy yew
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Mmmmm

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Heh

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I think I draw badly

hardy yew
hardy yew
hardy yew
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I finished

hardy yew
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I feel
I will muted

solemn inlet
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???/

oblique wing
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what

dusky trail
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ok

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not that i can understand it but i guess that is the fox guy's bio then

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also, if you know you may get mute for that then how about just delete the thing

plain bane
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Sculpture almost done, any tips?

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Can't take him outf the box sadly I left him at college

onyx breach
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we know nothing about sculpting ¯_(ツ)_/¯

plain bane
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Ah well TeriDerp

hardy yew
glass jacinth
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Does he have a name?

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Something cool like bob the dragon :)?

dusky trail
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probably just Jerry

molten flume
hardy yew
onyx breach
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how is this still not done yet? 😱

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its been 5 years already

shadow nebula
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everyone has different speeds and time available. Its pretty rude to say that to someone

buoyant sky
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She's probably being ironic

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Wait she?

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What are your pronouns Delay?

static sleet
languid path
buoyant sky
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Yeah right

languid path
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are you saying that in a sarcastic way or smth

celest wind
static sleet
celest wind
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Thanks, doing it disintigrated 3/4 of my life

static sleet
plain bane
oblique wing
glass jacinth
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Silver trying to get cancelled TeriFied

onyx breach
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thats me when i see things taking ages to finish

glass jacinth
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But i think dreamrisu has a lost of school stuff to worry about so they don't have time

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Btw yesterday I found this artist

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I'm so gonna recreate this to see what's going on

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Im order to find my style i think it's best to use different parts of different artists that i like, like ones skin others hair others eyes etc..

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But if I'm ever gonna use something from this person idk what would it be, everything just looks so good

plush steeple
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does anyone use wacom intuos here?

shadow nebula
shadow nebula
glass jacinth
onyx breach
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Im a male

glass jacinth
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Now you lost your simps

onyx breach
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I'm devastated

buoyant sky
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sorry for misgendering you then

onyx breach
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Dw I don't care about pronouns on the internet, everyone is a stranger and its perfectly fine to mistaken them for whatever.

white girder
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practicing on detailing eyes

celest wind
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Nice

molten flume
white girder
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wip

glass jacinth
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Niceeee

molten flume
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okay im done. this is pain

clear dust
lone wagon
glass jacinth
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I think so lol

onyx breach
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thats from my dress-up darling anime 🤔

glass jacinth
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Yes

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The free pixiv views girl

molten flume
lone wagon
hardy yew
hardy yew
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guys, how to draw breasts?

hardy yew
lone wagon
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This thumbnail, didn't someone from here draw that?

dusky trail
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if i remember, yes

lone wagon
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Well they just got featured in one of the most popular arist on Instagram's video

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On the thumbnail too

glass jacinth
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Yes I wanted to tell you guys that the day it came out but for reasons i couldn't

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I was so happy for them lol

hardy yew
unique surge
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gj

lone wagon
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Yeah it was this one. Congrats avocado!

fair flare
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Yes thank youuVodkaHug VodkaHug

glass jacinth
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Excuse me what the fuck is this artist

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How in the world is someone creating these masterpieces

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Every genshin related artwork they did is literally better then genshis official art

unique surge
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Its not surprising there are really good artists out there who can create these kinds of art

glass jacinth
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Why are they no where but on pixiv

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I want to tell them how much i appreciate their work but on bloody pixiv i can only type 140 letters, i was littery on the begging of my message when i hit that capacity

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Sending a dm would be too weird too ahh..

unique surge
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ah rip

glass jacinth
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If you look at their profile they produced not that Great art and the suddenly became a god, idk how did that happen

unique surge
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I wouldnt call this "not that great art" its pretty good

glass jacinth
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Look at that fireworks one

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Down left

unique surge
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maybe thats just their style at that time

glass jacinth
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Before it it wasn't that good compared to the rest, then after thoes fireworks they made that fate one which is much more better then the old ones and then out of nowhere they made that girl with a spear

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It's just so goddamn good i can't stfu about it

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The best in ne is Noelle fighting 3 ruin guards imo

atomic tide
tribal tendon
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wip ely

sage canopy
molten flume
onyx breach
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shes supposed to be flat

molten flume
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tried to, but my urges to draw her big badonkers is kicking in

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gib the chicken some booba

hardy yew
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that’s not fu hua that’s boing hua

lone wagon
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Have u guys heard of the wombo dream app?

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Its like an AI app that auto generates art based on what you type.

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Its not perfect but it makes really good inspiration especially for bg

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This is what it generated for me when I typed in cathedral

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And this is what it made for me when I typed in elven forest

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It goes terrifying if you try to type in living things though xD

grave nymph
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yeah makes sense www

lone wagon
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Atm there's an art challenge in Japan since it blew up on twitter in thr art community in Japan where you type in weird stuff and u try to create art based on it.

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This is what happened when u try to have it draw humans

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XD

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I think u can probably use this app for your drawing too if you aren't good at bg for simple stuff.

slender spear
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whats that? looks coolKianaSparkle

lone wagon
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Its an app

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Its an AI that creates artwork based on what you type

slender spear
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oo what is it

lone wagon
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I wrote flying dragon for this one

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Its just an app you can download on your phone or tablet

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Its free and its just fun to use. You can use it for all kinds of things. Either for your own art or you can use it as wallpaper.

slender spear
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ooo alright thanks KianaSparkle

lone wagon
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Or just simply to look at.

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It doesn't do wwll with people so unless u want nightmares I wouldn't recommend

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I like this one you can probably add a xharacter standing in it doing soemthing

glass jacinth
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Guys what do you enjoy more, sketching or coloring?

raven swift
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the one i tried fixing enough so you can see what's happening-

lone wagon
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Looks like a woman

raven swift
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yeah and someone hugging

lone wagon
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Oh so that's what the thing over her face is

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Good luck making rhat into a proper piece if ur planning on to xD

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I just like it cuz it's fun

raven swift
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yeah-

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a good app to get some pretty color generator too

raven swift
gloomy herald
lone wagon
whole cloak
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I like the process of blocking and refining

grave nymph
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sketching

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qwq

shadow nebula
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doodle

glass jacinth
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Making my things come to life with color is the best

molten flume
fossil obsidian
fair flare
molten flume
fair flare
molten flume
oblique wing
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amazing

hardy yew
plain bane
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The dude is done

full solstice
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Looks really cool wow

deft cairn
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I was able to put together these puzzles haha enjoy Raiden boss png 😄

glass jacinth
# glass jacinth

So i started redrawing this as a studie, won't post it on socials ofc and i was wondering if you guys have tips on how i approach the coloring

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Drawing part is okay i just draw what i see and all that but I don't get it how do i make that skin so smooth and everything else so smoothie

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My drawings always end up rough looking and i don't want to blend it to much cuz that's to weird so idk, hopeing you guys now something i don't lol

dusky trail
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you need more curve

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also, unable to sleep at all since i still in middle of this

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went to bed but keep thinking about how to finish it and just roll around on the bed for hours...

unique surge
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understandable

dusky trail
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actually start out like this

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want to try draw all captain-gang together

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but then over time, it just turn into another Kongming and Rosemary's one

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but~ it is more fun that way anyway, i just can't get in the mood to only draw half body in simple pose

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i will just make up for other 3 some other time

glass jacinth
dusky trail
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your drawing still have this stiff look to it

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just look over your own draw and you can see there are a lot of sharp edge on the characters

glass jacinth
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Yeah i think only my portraits aren't that stiff

glass glade
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thoughts?

full solstice
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the skirt is wayyyy too stiff and the folds aren't completely realistic

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looking at references realllyyyyyy help

dusky trail
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the skirt's wrinkle looks like it is really tight but it also seem to be effect by the wind

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so it kinda cause a weird conflict there

hardy yew
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ae painting wip

dusky trail
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ahh~ those two really are my fav pair

hardy yew
dusky trail
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just randomly curve they legs because

hardy yew
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so.. standing?

dusky trail
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i made it this way so it can work in both standing up and lying down

hardy yew
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I see

dusky trail
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i always make two versions after all, one with a more safe look while one can go a bit wild

hardy yew
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Just make sure to watch ur proportions

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And the weight of each character

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Cuz then you accidentally make both laying down and standing awkward

dusky trail
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i'm one of those drop logic out just for fun pose

hardy yew
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I mean fair but then their backs end up looking broken <\3

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But u do u

dusky trail
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yes, bending in odd way just to look good is my type of thing

hardy yew
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Yea :/ ravens sprite unfortunately has the art trope I hate most of all

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Boobs and butt at the same time

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Because it’s anatomically impossible

dusky trail
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it certainly a bit much

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i prefer a more casual S shape anyway

edgy cairn
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um

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im testing anatomy

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criticism?

hardy yew
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What’s the character doing?

edgy cairn
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i never draw the actually anatomy whatever i just draw two boxes and works for me

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idk

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oops

full solstice
hardy yew
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Well, knowing what they’re doing will surely help lol

dusky trail
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well the most stand out thing is the left leg

full solstice
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the knees and thighs look like it's suposed to face the front

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but then the shins and feet turn away

dusky trail
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the knee is shorter than the right leg but also bend in really off way from the rest of the body

shadow nebula
# edgy cairn

shins and thighs should be the same length, arms are too long for the torso elbows are almost in line with the belly button and wrists are in line with the base of the groin, feet are too big and the pelvis need to be vertically longer

hardy yew
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Try making adjustments like this

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Keep in mind the weight of your character

edgy cairn
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my brain cant process words as well as pictures lol

hardy yew
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Also, perspective doesn’t go away when drawing the figure, make sure you put the hand and back leg in perspective

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This is super crude, so make sure you look up reference or take your own picture to better visualize it

edgy cairn
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alr tyy TeriDerp

hardy yew
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Ofc

lost wagon
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still not satisfied with Mias color

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: c

dusky trail
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but i guess i just too used to witches type wear more long fabric

lost wagon
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i don't want her design to be more complicated that that.

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especially because i'll be drawing her over and over in many panels of my manga.

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too complicated design won't do good to my sanity ^^'

dusky trail
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time to just throw in lavish effect instead

lost wagon
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my problem with her color is that. her personality type is more of a playful energetic kid that loves to play outside catch insects or other small animals. but the color just doesn't quite show that vibe i feel like. maybe not saturated enough? or idk.

dusky trail
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it probably because the brown on the hat and vest took center rather than other part

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it just ended up draw your eyes into the gray color rather than her blonde hair and red spot

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maybe add some rim color to the vest or hat?

lost wagon
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hmm

dusky trail
onyx breach
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but witches dont have time to play toys, just concoct potion 24/7

shadow nebula
nova juniper
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I honestly think her design is fine, only thing I can think of is making the lineart and shading a bit more vibrant in contrast which would make her pop more.

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this is a sketch of the design so its going to be a little dull. you can also play around with overlay layers to see if you like something else more.

lost wagon
lost wagon
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thanks for all the helps ❤️

molten flume
stuck harbor
lost wagon
regal hazel
hardy yew
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Looks nice

regal hazel
hardy yew
regal hazel
hardy yew
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Maybe yes

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I don't know how to call this

regal hazel
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I use this drawing for colours

hardy yew
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Hm

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Sanks

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Interesting

regal hazel
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I have colour palette for skin but I am at school right now

hardy yew
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Ok

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Sorry

regal hazel
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Np I will send you later

hardy yew
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Ok

hardy yew
drowsy onyx
hardy yew
sinful imp
hardy yew
sinful imp
hardy yew
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Ahah

sinful imp
hardy yew
onyx breach
sinful imp
regal hazel
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@hardy yew skin palette

hardy yew
drowsy onyx
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I was playing around on recroom

fossil obsidian
glass jacinth
drowsy onyx
full solstice
glass jacinth
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Weird

full solstice
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just someone's way of saying it KianaShrug

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slang is everywhere

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might as well get used to it

onyx breach
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sankyu

dusky trail
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hmm want to do something with Delta and Bronie for valentine too

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but then i remember Delta's outfit is quite odd one

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guess Kasumi and Bronie would make better pair

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since those two did have a history in the event

orchid verge
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oc drawing :D

alpine sun
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is music wip allowed here? i forgor 💀 (because i understand that music is an art category)

dusky trail
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go for it

alpine sun
whole cloak
lost wagon
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ok i think im pretty happy with her color now.

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this is much better than before

buoyant vector
glass jacinth
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Thoughts?

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I'll fix the mouth that's bad

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And idk if the forehead it short enough

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I'm open for critiques, i forget i gotta say that, so if i need to fix anything please let me know

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Ears are not allined i see that WeltHmph

shadow nebula
# glass jacinth

Its a good start. Use this as a guideline for the anatomy of the face at that perspective

whole cloak
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the nose is very thin, most ppl with thin noses have a bulbous tip and the bridge is also quite narrow
The jawline starts pointing up too far down, the line is too sharp

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~~ we picked the same ref lol~~

shadow nebula
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We did lmao

glass jacinth
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I used that ref to lol

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Ty for the help

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The reason nose was thin is cuz i saw that ppl in semi realism style make them thin

shadow nebula
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A good way to see whats off is to put your sketch over the reference

glass jacinth
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I feel like that's cheating

grand zodiac
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It’s not

shadow nebula
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You’re not tracing but seeing whats off

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Its something you should do to learn

glass jacinth
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Alright mb I'll do it rn, I'll see about eyes and nose cuz i made them "stilized"lol

shadow nebula
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You can have it stylized but if you size the head correctly things shouldn’t be off too much

glass jacinth
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Yes my face is off by a lot

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It's way better now

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Ty guys a lot

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I'll center things out and make mouth a lil bigger up top cuz that weird thing between nose on upper lip which name i don't know is too long

hardy yew
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Very interesting

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@glass jacinth , sorry for ping

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Did you see that?

edgy cairn
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what is that spreadsheet people use to put their oc

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like drawing from different angles and such

full solstice
hardy yew
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Future comic book

half maple
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i learnt how to draw normal looking noses

hardy yew
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Amazing

onyx breach
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almost done SeeleMad

unique surge
half maple
half maple
hardy yew
hardy yew
half maple
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its jsut a random person i ddrew

hardy yew
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I asked about tyy

half maple
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o

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it means thank u

hardy yew
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Oh

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I see

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Sanks

edgy cairn
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like this

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sorry if it pinged u

drowsy onyx
glass jacinth
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Or today for you Asians

wary verge
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soon™

hardy yew
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im tempted to draw a honkai character but all of them have sm detail

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its gonna take so long and im afraid to lose motivation

half maple
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this was like a 1 minute drawing just for fun so ignore the shiet anatomy anyway misato my love 😍

edgy cairn
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anyone got dress inspiration for an OC

dreamy cypress
dusky trail
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well it is your OC so it is up to you to find the right dress in the end

hardy yew
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Oh, very nice

spice needle
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wip bronya for Valentin day BronyaTease

sinful imp
spice needle
lone wagon
hardy yew
lone wagon
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What sort of personality do you want your oc to have?

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What's your inspiration so far?

hardy yew
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Sorry for ping

lone wagon
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Are u asking me to give critism or are u asking me compliment it?

hardy yew
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Something

lone wagon
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Can I see the full thing? I csnt see it well just from the screenshot

hardy yew
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Hm

lone wagon
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Oh you're making a comic?

hardy yew
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Like this

hardy yew
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What I can make better?

lone wagon
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I think the layout of your comic is a little bit strange. Maybe you should do more research in the composition for comic strips

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U tried to draw the box yourself right?

hardy yew
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Yes

lone wagon
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In clip studio it gives you guides for comics but idk if there's an auto comic layout for ibis

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You'll have to research into that too

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I think there's nothing wrong with your sketches so far, the composition of your comic is just a little bit strange.

hardy yew
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I need help with woman body

lone wagon
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Oh you want anatomy advices?

hardy yew
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Maybe yes

lone wagon
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I don't see anything wrong with her atm, maybe the neck is just a little bit too long.

hardy yew
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I see

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Hm

dusky trail
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hmm still 2 more days left, maybe i can still speed run Delta, Bronie and Kasumi

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also, his arm is way far down

lone wagon
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Like i said the only issue I have is the panel layout of your comic itself.

dusky trail
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while her arms seem to be in 2 different length if you look at the elbow

hardy yew
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I see

lone wagon
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I don't see anything particularly wrong with it, it's a sketch after all. I think they've gotten the main stuff in.

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The biggest problem is just that the panels doesn't convey the story very well.

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This is a good comic layout

dusky trail
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feel like that is a bit "nightmare fuel" to put without spoiler

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see, you traumatize piffle now

hardy yew
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Oh my god!

dusky trail
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now he can't no longer eat banana the same way again

lone wagon
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But you can tell exactly what's going on here

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Without words

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It makes you feel horrfied but excited

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Its dynamic and exciting

lone wagon
# hardy yew

U can't reslly tell the story in piff's comic. You're not reslly sure what's going on.

lone wagon
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Obviously I'm not asking piff to create panels like this

hardy yew
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I will fixe it

lone wagon
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This is expert level

dusky trail
lone wagon
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But there are templates online

dusky trail
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here

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i just simple took out the text out of my manga

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even Hanami can tell Lyle is honky for Adam with this

lone wagon
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I named my apho 2 mc

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Hot guy

hardy yew
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I see

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I will fix my comic

lone wagon
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And i get confused everytime and laugh my head off when they mention my name

dusky trail
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well if you want to write comic, just come up with the theme in mind first before you start laying thing down

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plot first, then imagine then panel

lone wagon
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A tip is just to quickly sketch out your layout before

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On a piece of paper

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But i think if you want to get into comics you should do a bit of research about the composition of panels

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And how to use them effectively

hardy yew
dusky trail
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i usually just sketch out all the scene i want to use then just scale it up or down to fit how i want to see it then panal

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a simple plot would do, you don't always have to make something complicated

hardy yew
lone wagon
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Clip studio has a comic tool it makes it super easy

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It just neatly creates the layout for you and u can add panels and change the panels shape very easily

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8 messed around with it before but I haven't created a comic myself yet.

dusky trail
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i should make one for Maid Elysia after i'm done with valentine stuff

lone wagon
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I just can tell just from looking, it seems simple enough

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I think this one is very clever. The mangkaka uses her spear to give an illusion that she's seperating the panels. She's that strong that not only did she decapitate her enemies but also decapitate the panel itself.

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Its very smart and its very cool

dusky trail
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or like some artist draw boob out of the panel to showcase how large the breast is

lone wagon
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Stuff like this is an effective use of panels. It can exaggerate all kinds of things and can really enlighten the story.

dusky trail
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i also quite like this kind of double panel use

hardy yew
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Ok

lone wagon
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It tells a story of its own, and you can't help but praise it. Since it's very clever.

dusky trail
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but well, don't think too hard about it now, just try out various thing

lone wagon
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Yeah

hardy yew
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I know how to do layout better

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In my comic

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Sanks, guys

lone wagon
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I need to go eat, I was gonna go eat

hardy yew
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Goodbye

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Спасибо

hardy yew
hardy yew
glass jacinth
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Wip

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Neck shadow is off color for now i think

hardy yew
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Looks very interesting

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👍

glass jacinth
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👍

hardy yew
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Guys, I need help

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How to drow woman body?

shadow nebula
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use references to learn its the best way

west bear
west bear
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but i mean, you gotta read with the intension of drawing

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or else your mind is just gonna forget it

hardy yew
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I sometimes use nsfv content to draw bodies

west bear
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yeah its the best for it

hardy yew
dusky trail
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well there is no lacking in character in tightsuit nowaday anyway

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so not like you have to read nsfw stuff just to find it

west bear
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you do what want to so idk

dusky trail
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of course nsfw stuff also give you some good pose reference too

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but if you want a more casual look. it is better for bodysuit and so on

west bear
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in tight suits you can get some parts of the body wrong

hardy yew
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Like this

west bear
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you want purely the anatomy

dusky trail
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ya but in nsfw pose, that also cause some problem too since they often used a lot of different angle

west bear
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its best if you dont use images with tight clothes

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because they also tight your body

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why not both?

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both is good

dusky trail
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depend on the type of clothe, some can cause skindentation but it is still a good option

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again, no problem with using nsfw pose, i just say they often use various angle too

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so it can cause trouble if you don't know how to draw body normally

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that why i just say, bodysuit and bikini version often have more casual pose

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and in normal angle than nsfw one

dusky trail
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but well, just look around, then hoarding all kind of reference

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then you too can have 90GB reference folder like me

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i really should clean some up....

hardy yew
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It's drowned very nice

dusky trail
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also it is draw

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if you keep using drown, it gonna take a whole different meaning...

onyx breach
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Yae would have a good look when shes drowned

dusky trail
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it gonna be a pain for both set of ears

onyx breach
#

on a closer look, goddamnit not this 2 pairs again

dusky trail
#

why 2 when you can have 4

onyx breach
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2 pairs

lost wagon
#

nyo got time to work on my manga project again c:

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wip*

rose bolt
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How to dress? BronyaSad

weak sun
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Idk but yes thats what i doTeriFied

fair flare
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putting this here because i am so proud of that poseKianaSparkle

verbal reef
#

Nice

lone wagon
#

Done. That's it

full solstice
#

nice! SakuraLuv

lone wagon
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If i add anymore it'll be too much. I'm just gonna say I've finished and move on.

whole cloak
#

congrats! SakuraLuv

lone wagon
#

TeriFied time to do some more copy practises

unique surge
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mad respects for finishing it

fair flare
sage canopy
lone wagon
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I do feel like i went overboard and made it too saturated in colour but it's fine, it's only for practise and to see where I'm at.

fair flare
glass jacinth
hardy yew
glass jacinth
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I went in totally different route then i started from

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Idk which eye color do i like more

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Idk if she needs more hair volume and if she does how do i add it

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And any other tips/crits are appreciated

molten flume
edgy totem
# glass jacinth Wip

change the perspective, make 1 image with both blue eyes, and 1 image with both green eyes, then compare them

edgy totem
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my opinion: i like them both actually, it wont bother me if my girl has either blue or green eyes, but blue ticks more for me personally as i like blue more than green in general, i like my girl with red hair too so i know how it feels, but i prefer the red to be a little more darker than the one u colored in ur picture, u can use Himeko as an example (i dislike yellow eyes)

hardy yew
#

how do you make someone’s drawing about your partner preference

grave nymph
onyx breach
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@glass jacinth i like Heterochromia

edgy cairn
#

Anyways just a question im still a really beginner artist (1 year of art) and I've never done any like anatomy studies or like cloth folding studies etc should I probably? Start learning anatomy?

onyx breach
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you should

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its not supposed to be a question, if you want to be an artist that know how to draw characters yshould learn anatomy

dusky trail
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otherwise, you may get in the case of draw clothe first, then body after, cause the part look super off

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you are free to draw anatomy in odd way like making character bend in such a way that look impossible in real life

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but you still want to know how the parts connected to each other

edgy cairn
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Ah ok

hardy yew
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My respect

rugged galleon
lone wagon
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Thank you for everybody's support.

ocean flower
molten flume
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should i dig in on this pose?

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for durandal

onyx breach
molten flume
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will do it, hafta rush this

onyx breach
#

Marin...again

sage canopy
onyx breach
#

'-')b

glass jacinth
glass jacinth
onyx breach
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You didn't do your homework

glass jacinth
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Maybe but ik what navel is so that makes me cool

onyx breach
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It's when ppl are born with diff melamine in their eyes making their eye colors different

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Yes you're

glass jacinth
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Yea but such boring eye design with different colors is weird af

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Which let me come to a conclusion that I'll steal wlops eyes

onyx breach
#

Pls don't commit crime

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Stealing ppl organs is sad

glass jacinth
bronze eagle
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anyone has signet of deliverence logo?

fair flare
sinful imp
bronze eagle
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thanks

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that will do

bronze eagle
sinful imp
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You’re welcome!

bronze eagle
#

where u got it?

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reddit?

sinful imp
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I don’t remember tbh

molten flume
#

i wonder what dress should durandal wear during valentines

lone wagon
molten flume
lone wagon
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Durandal would suit an elegant lingerie

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Ik you like to draw sexy so I thought lingerie would be perfect but if u want to do something cute then ill try to find some cute stuff xD

molten flume
#

yeah its hard to draw like that

lone wagon
#

I can already imagine durandal in this lingerie gosh she'd be perfect in it. Would be difficult to colour though

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Since its mostly see through

molten flume
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yep

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i would like to die seeing her in that

onyx breach
#

i think its probably just another Chiongsam

molten flume
#

you think this is a good pattern?

dusky trail
glass jacinth
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For anyone using csp how do i blur out my whole canvas so that i can erase that blur where i need it to be erased

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Cuz if i got filter/blur/guasian blur

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I can't erase it it puts the blur effect on the whole layer

fair flare
#

Wdym exactly

fair flare
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Then use blur and erase the part you don't want to be blurred

glass jacinth
#

Ty

fair flare
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You're welcome i hope it helps FuHuaApprove

drowsy onyx
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i went on a walk to the beach near my house

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oh and i took a pic of alicia keys mansion

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yuh

dusky trail
#

well then, time to torture myself and rush another koma

molten flume
#

going to take a nap, gotta finish this for mandatory valentines art

dusky trail
#

quite a lot of game i play gonna have update around 15th-16th so i just gonna do what i need then relax after

molten flume
#

durandal my beloved

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a whole lotta to fix tommorow
hope i could really finish this with a bunch of homeworks

sage canopy
supple ingot
lone wagon
#

I picked a really detailed one to try to copy xD. Gosh makes the sketch looks extra messy.

tribal tendon
#

my valentines day art be like as a single: 🗿😭
XDDDD

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idk if this is allowed here xD

jaunty python
#

we’re allowed to say fuck
so it should be fine

glass jacinth
onyx breach
#

i've always feared living near the beach and rivers because of flash floods and high tides
🥶

glass glade
#

wip i dont regret doing lineart again even tho its kinda annoying BEPat

edgy cairn
#

Sorry for the 600th dumb question but where can I make OCs that i can see visually? Mainly because I use photos of like real life clothing and stuff and my mentality fails me. I kinda dont wanna use the only one i know (gacha life) because yeah...

onyx breach
#

you draw it

glass glade
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i finally finished a drawing