#art-discussion-and-wip

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hazy lichen
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I need advice.

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on life

lament stump
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@Hanami

grave nymph
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I don’t even wanna bother on redoing the lineart

lament stump
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WHERE IS HAMANI

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HUH

hazy lichen
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@lone wagon

lament stump
lament stump
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Hanami

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Tell her

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That

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Thoes lines

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Gotta be thicker

hazy lichen
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should I finish eula

lament stump
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Send wip

hazy lichen
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I already sent it

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the lineart

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I’ll resend

lament stump
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Sendagain

lament stump
grave nymph
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sighs

hazy lichen
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Gilr

grave nymph
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I’ll just wait for the senseis to roast me

lament stump
hazy lichen
lament stump
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Gender

hazy lichen
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hottie man yen’s

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yena

lament stump
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WTF

hazy lichen
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I’m hottie man yena btw

lament stump
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Yena

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Wtf happened

hazy lichen
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I’m catfishing someone

lament stump
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To your name

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Ok

hazy lichen
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It’s a different acc

grave nymph
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Note to Senseis: please roast my coloring on this piece, thank you very much :D

hazy lichen
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@fiery lantern

lament stump
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That eula sucks

hazy lichen
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she has no hair

lament stump
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Jk she looks good but GUYS LINE ART IS UGLY EHEN EVERY LINE IS THE SAME THICKNESS

hazy lichen
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h hate eula nvm

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I

lament stump
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@dusky trail TELL THEM

hazy lichen
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🙁🙁

grave nymph
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I’m literally focusing on coloring

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saying this like, for the fricking nth time

hazy lichen
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FOCUS!!!

lament stump
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Fuck coloring if the lines look boring

hazy lichen
dusky trail
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why not just draw a big curve on the hair, then use erase to chop some part off

hardy yew
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Where can we see the full splash art of valks?

grave nymph
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SHIKNI-SENSEI MY SAVIORR

dusky trail
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then there you go, similar enough high light

hardy yew
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Im making a mobius skin

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So like

hazy lichen
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snaky

lament stump
grave nymph
hardy yew
dusky trail
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that is why you use big enough curve so you can keep on shaping it until it looks similar

grave nymph
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naruhodo

dusky trail
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as for anything look weird on that thing

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the left part of Seele's hair is too thick

grave nymph
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also, can the oh great shikni-sensei bestow advice upon this puny mortal on how to color the devilish clothing folds? specifically Seele’s btw

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her left or our left

dusky trail
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cause her hair to look bigger than Vel

grave nymph
dusky trail
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the blue thing part on her right

hazy lichen
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oh my god why is this so bad

hazy lichen
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ignore the feet please

dusky trail
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just do it likes Vel there

grave nymph
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will do

dusky trail
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or make Vel as thick as Sel

grave nymph
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I’ll just do the former

dusky trail
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otherwise one of them will look like they have bigger head

grave nymph
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📝

hardy yew
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Hmmm

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I dont see mobius’ full splash on twitter

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Only ely’s

grave nymph
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I have NO idea how to do the clothing folds for this one

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let me narrow it down

dusky trail
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are you talking about her boob or her waist

lament stump
dusky trail
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busy playing Genshin right now, you do it

grave nymph
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the breast and this one

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my mind blanked after trying to do this part

lament stump
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No. I don't

lament stump
grave nymph
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clothing folds

lament stump
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The fuck

grave nymph
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not the chains and stuff

dusky trail
lament stump
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If we lookin just at clothe i don't think there shoukd be any folds there

grave nymph
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you see

dusky trail
grave nymph
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her leg’s raised up

dusky trail
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there your under boob

hardy yew
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Thankyou

grave nymph
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thank you for the reference

lament stump
dusky trail
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as for under the waist bind

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the fold will naturally be on her side

lament stump
dusky trail
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are you saying her boobs are small~

lament stump
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Yes

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You got offended cuz you find yourself in that sentence?

grave nymph
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have you even saw her in game model or something

dusky trail
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show him your boobs, Shii

grave nymph
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right.. I forgot you don’t play the game

grave nymph
dusky trail
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but anyway, the waist fold would be similar to that

grave nymph
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ahhh

lament stump
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Boat

dusky trail
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as the waist bind will hold the part of the clothe, so naturally the fold will be on the side as you twist your body around

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so ya, just put in some / / / line there

grave nymph
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but what would happen on the skirt where one of her legs are up

dusky trail
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Vel's left leg look way too short compare to her right btw

grave nymph
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it got covered by the balloon :”D

dusky trail
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well when the leg raise up, the skirt will drop down by the base which cause the fold there

grave nymph
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was wondering how would you do the clothing folds

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when in that scenario

dusky trail
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and then most of the fold will gather near the crotch

grave nymph
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o

dusky trail
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there always option to ignore that fold and make the skirt all float up

grave nymph
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thank you for the references TeriCry

dusky trail
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so, many way to draw that fold

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just pick one

lament stump
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Shik

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You know so much about art tf

grave nymph
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well duh

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it’s Shikni-sensei after all

lament stump
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Why don't you make your coloring style more exciting skih?

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Shik

dusky trail
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because my style of color is the way it exciting me

grave nymph
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mhm

lament stump
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Really?

grave nymph
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can’t just force someone to use a different art style

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people draw what they want to see, most of the time

dusky trail
lament stump
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It's the one that excites you more then any other style

dusky trail
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you don't need overly shading to make it looks good

lament stump
dusky trail
lament stump
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That either

dusky trail
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and this kind of hard pen shading can make the skin look even more fun to stare at

grave nymph
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that’s why they develop their own art style, because they take stuff from different art styles that they admire and want to mimic/copy

grave nymph
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please don’t tell me that’s a stigmata..

lament stump
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I mean if you like your style and you don't care about impressing ppl who aren't like you then okay

grave nymph
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please don’t tell me that’s a fricking stigmata

lament stump
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It's not chill

dusky trail
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yes

grave nymph
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AAAAA

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NOOOOO

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I missed it

grave nymph
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I kinda wonder how do they do those smooth curvy lines when it comes to coloring

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like the soles of her feet for example

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ig they abuse the bucket tool or something

dusky trail
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well ya, draw a curvy line then just dump bucket onto it

grave nymph
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wow so handy

dusky trail
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or you can just draw an arc there

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then use erase to shape it

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this kind of style is popular in anime and a lot of game because of how fast it can shade after all

grave nymph
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yeah… you can mass produce stuff after all

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and it’ll still look good

dusky trail
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but of course, there are artist also just like that style of coloring

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like Shimada, the artist of Strike Witches

grave nymph
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oooo

dusky trail
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or Takehito of Disagaea series

lament stump
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That's hot

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Not the loli

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Fuck

dusky trail
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sure

lament stump
dusky trail
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that is what everyone point to when they got caught liking the loli

lament stump
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Me not a lolicon

dusky trail
lament stump
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Also where is hamami thes days

dusky trail
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there even Supernew from Girl Frontline

lament stump
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Haven't seen to color noob in a while :(

lament stump
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Why

grave nymph
dusky trail
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because that is the way you draw attention to the skin

grave nymph
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yuh

whole cloak
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composition

lament stump
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Hi sel o////

dusky trail
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when you have other part with more stand out color and there just a piece of white skin there, your eyes will naturally draw to it like you want to lick it

grave nymph
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like refining and making a certain part look more attractive

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or something

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so that your eyes focus on that spot after taking a quick glance

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Naoki-sensei made a vid about that

lament stump
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Sel left me on read

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Now i must die

grave nymph
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pain

whole cloak
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what else do I say lol

grave nymph
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guess I won’t see Aki’s fall due to their pride

lament stump
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I said hi

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What do tou say on that?

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Hmmmm

whole cloak
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hi

dusky trail
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since Shii and Delay both denied him, now Aki is after Sel huh?

grave nymph
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yeah

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hungry for attention af

lament stump
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Now I'm undied

grave nymph
whole cloak
lament stump
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I JUST

grave nymph
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what

lament stump
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Not saying hi back is y'know

grave nymph
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desire attention or else you fade into nothingness

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or something

grave nymph
lament stump
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Why did this turn into me begging for attention

grave nymph
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because you are? TeriPoint

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knowing your past history in this channel is uhh

lament stump
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WHEN DID I BEG FOR ATTENTION

dusky trail
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anyway, now that Sel is here and Shii bullying Aki

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i gonna go back to my genshin

grave nymph
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have a fun gaming session shikni-sensei o/

hardy yew
whole cloak
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see you shik

lament stump
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Bye.

hardy yew
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Im done with mermaid mobius

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I like the design but i think it looks too similar to her base skin

dusky trail
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or put the shell as the tip of her long thingy behind her too

hardy yew
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Good idea yeah

dusky trail
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actually change the crown into a coral may sound fun too

hardy yew
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Im gonna make it look like

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A tiara

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Less spiky

dusky trail
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make it an urchin

hardy yew
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add a bg mayb TeriHuehue

whole cloak
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color the lineart maybe

dusky trail
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add more tentacle maybe

hardy yew
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Ok but the jellyfish mount is genius right

dusky trail
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well at least it also fit her lightning elemental too

onyx breach
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jelly hat? touhou mobius?

ocean flower
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Like something that if put more work into it it would be in the game

hazy lichen
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it looks like Kokomie but better

fiery lantern
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no

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mobius is prettier

hidden wagon
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just sharing another art once again, an old one~ please bear with the arms

lament stump
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I just cheated my way tru a whole ass test

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I'm proud

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Of how my skills have improved

grave nymph
dusky trail
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did she snapped so hard her middle finger completely broken?

grave nymph
hardy yew
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you disappointment

dusky trail
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Aki got disowned again

whole cloak
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as another Asian
I agree with candz

lament stump
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As a European

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I gotta do what i gotta do

hardy yew
onyx breach
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hmm

dusky trail
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hmmmm?

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i should try draw pole dance at some point

lone wagon
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Making some progress...

late carbon
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SakuraBox👍

lone wagon
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Oh now i need to finish this rozaliya before Halloween

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So im busy

dusky trail
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for next year halloween

lone wagon
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this halloween hasn't even come yet

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i am not that slow!

arctic folio
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OC: Herrscher of Starlight, Veliza.

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Artificial Herrscher born from experimentation on tarantulas.

dusky trail
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since there just not much feature of her that feel Honkai-ish, she just look like a random OC that can fit anywhere

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after all, we all know Herrsh has stupidly long hair

paper briar
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can i post here other drawings that are not about honkai impact ?

paper briar
dusky trail
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yes

paper briar
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ok thanks bc i really need help, i'm not sure what i'm doing

arctic folio
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Thanks!

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And I didn't want to add to many details to such a busy body. Lots happening, so some simplistic details are enough. Maybe should add some honkai lines.

paper briar
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it's as you want to do it

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well

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here's what i'm doing rn and i need some advices

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o just realised i didn't finished the hair

shadow nebula
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what style are you going for, chibi-esque, anime, anime head with a realistic body?

paper briar
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well that's the problem, but i think is more anime

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so the head is maybe a little to big

dusky trail
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well unless you want to go for more serious style, then the draw is simple enough to pass

shadow nebula
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alright, I won't comment on head size since that more stylistic. Make the facial features smaller, eyes should have an eyes width of space between them, lengthen the pelvis, and fingers are naturally different lengths so make the middle finger longer than the index and make the pinkie finger shorter than the ring finger

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overall its looking good

dusky trail
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her left arm also rather odd

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since you can see a part of the shoulder there, that mean she just bend and not fully extend her arm

paper briar
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i tried to hide it ^^' because i still have problems with proportions

dusky trail
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like her arm is doing this _ instead of / or --

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then you should put the hand more in line with the shoulder

paper briar
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okay, i'll try to do what you two said

dusky trail
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and maybe title the hand to the right a bit to make it less stiff

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while you can ignore the big head, the neck could be a bit smaller so it won't fight with the body shape

paper briar
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oka

dusky trail
paper briar
shadow nebula
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people naturally have an eyes width of space between both eyes. So take one of the drawn eyes and make sure that the space between them is the same as that eye

paper briar
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like that ? (sorry my english is not perfect so i don't understand everything)

shadow nebula
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i took the measurement of your eyes and put them in the center. the eyes should be on either side of the red line so you should spread them out. Make them smaller to fit the head more and take the new measurement and put it as i did to get the right spacing for them

paper briar
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i tried what you said for the eye but i looked weird for me so i put it a little bit on the right

whole cloak
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that mouth is very big

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idk if it’s purposeful since it takes up way more than usual anime proportioned mouths

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And in comparison to the rest of the teeth, the fangs are thin

lament stump
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She looks like she can bite my head off in 1 bite if she wanted to

smoky osprey
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chomp

hardy yew
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nom

shadow nebula
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worked on this a bit more

grave nymph
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oooooo

dusky trail
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while i did seen plenty of worst shoes but that one certainly look like it will be really stressful for the feet

onyx breach
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The 1st woman who invented the first ever heels probably want something that can make women look taller than men

dusky trail
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well that type of annoying shoes sometime also mean to train your posture

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they are not easy to walk in after all

onyx breach
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ye theyre more annoyance than serving as footwear

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lineart done for this thing VelionaDerp

shadow nebula
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high heels were actually made for men originally

onyx breach
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good thing we dropped those things coz i'd kill myself

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fantasy rpg clothes are too complex

shadow nebula
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they were dropped because women picked them up

onyx breach
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best thing that ever happened

dusky trail
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well while high heel is a pain, i personally like walking on tip toes

shadow nebula
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i enjoy high heels and properly fit shoes are comfortable

dusky trail
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it makes your step cause less sound but there is a fun way to make your legs feel longer

shadow nebula
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some heels are quiet as normal shoes

dusky trail
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those curve also quite fun to draw

hazy lichen
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oh

onyx breach
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they indeed are

hardy yew
hazy lichen
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WHAT

hardy yew
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any problem? yes its shibi Hmm

shadow nebula
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the tied bit should be on the other side but besides that its looking fine

hardy yew
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because it looks weird in this way

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i prefer it on the left, otherwise it looks off to me

dusky trail
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why not just flip the whole draw then

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also, since you made the choker like that, she looks like discount Doraemon

hardy yew
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i cant flip the whole drawing because the person commissioning wants her facing the right kekWait

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we dont talk about my art choices Hmm

dusky trail
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just flip him then

hardy yew
dusky trail
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yep, Doraemon alright

hardy yew
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HAHA

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i only colored it like that so future me can remember to cut it out

dusky trail
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and since you made the hair rather small compare to the head, it made her face really bloated

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even shiibi's style still need a more balance head

grave nymph
hardy yew
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guess ill redo the hairs then

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im not really sure how to make the hairs bigger while not making it too big for emote space

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having trouble with left part mostly

hardy yew
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theres barely any difference because i suck

dusky trail
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it still look flat so ya

hardy yew
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how to unflat BooTaoHuh

dusky trail
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redo the whole head

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just do a normal circle head frame

hardy yew
dusky trail
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so you can balance out the bang and the face

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then just put another circle for the hair

hardy yew
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i was gonna do the chubby chibi thing but when i tried to implement it, it looks deform

buoyant sky
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How much time did you spend on this?

sage canopy
reef tulip
hazy lichen
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can someone please help me with where the collarbone would go??

dusky trail
hazy lichen
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thanks

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I just did straight lines for now

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but 😭

dusky trail
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well a stretch S shape always good

fiery lantern
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🙁

dusky trail
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the upward part would point to the shoulder

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so your collarbone kinda dig in her shoulder there

fiery lantern
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ohh

arctic peak
fiery lantern
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thanks user kylie

arctic peak
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Np

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What now

dusky trail
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give her a wig

arctic peak
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Hair?

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Short or long hair idk

dusky trail
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did you just draw the body without even think who it gonna be...?

arctic peak
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Yeah

dusky trail
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=3=

arctic peak
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Now idk what should i do

dusky trail
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just pick a fav char then draw them

arctic peak
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Okey. . . But now i lost my motivation

reef tulip
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i am now going to draw elysia

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WITH A SKETCH

fiery lantern
reef tulip
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yeah i gave up

wraith vault
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its ok to trace over a real model right? id never trace over art but like...real people is ok right?

fiery lantern
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the real people be like

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I copyrighted my body how dare u

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I’m kidding

wraith vault
arctic peak
onyx breach
wraith vault
sinful imp
grave nymph
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lul this balloon w

dusky trail
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the shade just look like it got hit by something right there

grave nymph
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LOL

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yeah

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shikni-sensei and their accurate descriptions, chef's kiss

onyx breach
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try googling a baloon so you can see how it bounces off light

dusky trail
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or just copy that

grave nymph
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I hate it how it keeps giving me those simple pictures and not the real ones :"D

onyx breach
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This is fine as well coz it matches your shading technique rn which is cell shading

grave nymph
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pain peko

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so it's counted as cell shading huh, hope I can improve on coloring so it's not cell shading in the future TeriDerp

dusky trail
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time to develop your own shading style and name is Shiiding

prime kelp
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shiiding?

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more like shitting

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its a joke

dusky trail
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shedding

lament stump
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mornin ppl

dawn rapids
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Naruto is trace one not kruma

lament stump
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treace....

dawn rapids
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😭

dusky trail
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even for a trace, his head look rather square-ish

grave nymph
fiery lantern
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for me

lament stump
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Good morning yena

fiery lantern
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good morning

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it’s almost midnight

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so almost morning

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eisasafaitlormambtwaiitmmtsmfswiitianum

lament stump
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Yee

plain bane
dusky trail
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the bunny girls from Blue Archive sure became super popular nowaday

plain bane
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Saw that link fail

dusky trail
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and ty for that, i get a lot of fun bunny girl's reference

fiery lantern
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🤤🤤

hazy lichen
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@fiery lantern

onyx breach
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i think ppl are just naturally drawn to a bunny costume

hazy lichen
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not me tho stay safe 😜

dusky trail
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well the dark skin girl always been rather popular anyway

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so giving her bunny suit seem to push that up even higher

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the artist, Mx2j has interesting hair style too

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rather hard to see anyone with bright color hair like that but hey~

hazy lichen
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I think

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I’m

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in love

lament stump
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looks ok?

dusky trail
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that one pointy chin

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and the torso so wide it looks more like a man's body

lament stump
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torso

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isn't torso down

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this a man?

dusky trail
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yes

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the small face cause the shoulder looks too wide

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make her looks more manly

lament stump
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so just make the head bigger?

dusky trail
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just make her chin less pointy and her body with more curve

lament stump
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well

dusky trail
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make the body seem stiff just feel more like a male body

lament stump
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i already made the head more big

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and i think i'll keep the head

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how tf

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do i make the body curvy

whole cloak
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what is it with you and pointy raised shoulders

lament stump
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GUYS

whole cloak
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Also the waist should be a bit higher

lament stump
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IT'S JUST TO MAKE HER DESIGN

whole cloak
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then use a base?? wouldn’t that be faster

lament stump
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where find base

dusky trail
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didn't i throw you the base last time =3=

lament stump
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well that's your base, i would lose my dignity if i used that

whole cloak
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deviantart has a ton

dusky trail
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then just throw your dignity away

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as for how to make her body more curvy, just draw a hourglass shape

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the hip could always use more meat

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that way you also get more room to draw the leg

whole cloak
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those are really small feet

dusky trail
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it kinda Houtengeki's fetish

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he seem to really like this kind of dwarf like char

hazy lichen
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oh

whole cloak
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Also what’s the 20 and 40 in the chart

dusky trail
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it is the age

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that why the 40's has more saggy tits

lament stump
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ok

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@dusky trail send that base again

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i gotta download it so the res doesn't suck

dusky trail
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oh boi, my internet is really slow today

lament stump
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ty

lament stump
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witch eye better?

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here it is with hair

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was trying to go for crazy girl but idk anymore

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making a caracter with 2 totally different eyes?!?!?!?

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jk no

dusky trail
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it is your OC, just pick whichever you like

lament stump
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well idk

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ig her right is crazy

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sitch would suit this mouth hm

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ye mouth a lil deformed but yknow

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um yuno

hardy yew
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how does multiply blend work

dusky trail
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just put a multiply layer on top then try to throw some color at it

hardy yew
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what type of color at it

dusky trail
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i mean you just go and test it out =3=

hardy yew
dusky trail
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but you usually use lower value color for it

lone wagon
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What should I add?

dusky trail
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a background, ba dum

lone wagon
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I am trying but idk what t9o add

dusky trail
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when in doubt, just throw random object into it

onyx breach
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you can throw Liliy's severed head in the pumpkin jar for fun

dusky trail
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Rozaliya plushy, random carbage, gem

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you know, typical Halloween background stuff

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if you want it, you can even make her candles thingy light up the background

frank sundial
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not sure about gem

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will make players feel like buying gem

lone wagon
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lmao

frank sundial
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i do like the Halloween night backgruond though

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maybe can incorporate that with the halloween roza

lone wagon
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I am shiz at backgrounds. I am no pro, I think simple is better

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for my mentality

dusky trail
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then single color background with halloween theme's pattern

lone wagon
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show me some ref

dusky trail
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like that but with pumpkin, bat or candle

lament stump
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um

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that's about it

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not sure about shorts

dusky trail
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you are not Hanami, throw some color in there

lament stump
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if anyone has better idea on what she should wear down there send ref

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also hair i gotta find better hair before i start colors

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cuz she ain't crazy girl any more

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i want a simple cute one

lone wagon
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A cute ghost?

lone wagon
dusky trail
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since it is halloween theme, you can use pumpkin color for the background

lament stump
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hanaimi

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that cell shaded hair

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is killing me

lone wagon
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Wdym?

lament stump
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looks too simple

lone wagon
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Simple not always bad

lament stump
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ye sure

dusky trail
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Aki just want to flexing his coloring skill

lament stump
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ye my coloring skill isssssss

lone wagon
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I cant colour in general so i am starting simple

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Are you sayinf you can do better aki with the hair?

lament stump
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yes

lone wagon
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Go on then

lament stump
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1st ever hair

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better then yours

dusky trail
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look like she dip her hair in dye and now can't get it off

lament stump
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everything else tho

lament stump
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anyways here is she, can't be bothered to make her hair more flowy rn

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I'll do it in line art

lone wagon
lament stump
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ay

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1st ever

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cut me some slack

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dis one was good

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and this one was so fucking weird cuz of the light source

dusky trail
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it looks like Eula wearing a lego set for hair

lament stump
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:(

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also why is your caracter base thingy

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why no bg

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like tf

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it's so weird

dusky trail
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do you want me to put a background color there to make it even harder for you to use the base layer?

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it is pretty normal for char solo art to not have background

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so it easier to add stuff in later

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if the feeling of try to cut the char out of the background sound fun to you, then go ahead and merge it with one

robust tapir
dusky trail
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no pelvic curtain, me sad

robust tapir
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Ehh

hardy yew
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have i fixed the flat BooTaoHuh

lament stump
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so um

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you said you don'y want to draw chibi

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so

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just like

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don't y'know

lone wagon
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Is this looking better? Not done yet though

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@dusky trail ??

hardy yew
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for my personal art i dont like to draw chibi

dusky trail
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look festive enough

lone wagon
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the bg wasn't as hard as i hough. Well i guess it's still simple

lament stump
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i would the sjy a lil more darker

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if you want that misty vibe then it's good

dusky trail
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right now, it looks like she is balding so she just try to covered her bald spot by her long bang

hardy yew
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oh you mean the long hair?

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i forgot about it mb

dusky trail
dusky trail
hardy yew
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the hair is supposed to kinda be behind ANLiliyaUhh

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idk how to explain

dusky trail
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then just simple add a line here

hardy yew
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anything else i need

dusky trail
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the crystal thingy on her choke should be more on the right

hardy yew
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like slanted?

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or flipped

dusky trail
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mean like so

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since her body seem to lean to the side there

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the choker shouldn't be in middle of the body

hardy yew
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so like tilt to left?

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like this?

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forgot to fix the hair bit hold on

dusky trail
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i already move the thing on that pic

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you put the choker in the middle of the body while it should be slightly on the right

hardy yew
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it looks the same BooTaoHuh

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on both yours and mine on top

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oh wait

dusky trail
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the choker itself is fine, the position you placed it is the problem

hardy yew
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im blind mb

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like so?

lament stump
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basic phisycs even apply to chibis huh

dusky trail
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yes

hardy yew
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thank you shik sensei

lament stump
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she never says your welcome :/

hardy yew
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shes too good for us

lament stump
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line art done but you can't even see it cuz shik and her stupid no bg

hardy yew
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cant you just put grey bg and turn the lines a diff color

lament stump
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eh I'll add color now so ye

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I'll send it then

dusky trail
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then why not just trace the skin part...

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or, even simpler

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put your thing in different layer so it will be on top of the base

full solstice
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aki out here making his oc already and me with an oc design that i havent managed to finish after 2 months

dusky trail
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so you just have to put something on the top of the base

hardy yew
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my friend made my oc concept art for me when i didnt do art and i never drew the oc

full solstice
hardy yew
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🤝

lament stump
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i hope i haven't made an existing caracter

lament stump
hardy yew
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something is wrong with that face

lament stump
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ye it was supposted to be crazy girl, that's why mouth weird

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i could just do 2 lines for mouth and make it look normal but

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that mouth took timee

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shik what are you hmming about

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should i rly do all 3 for someone this simple?

whole cloak
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Mouth way too low

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Sides of head look flat, give the hair more volume there

lament stump
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ye i saw that and moved it

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but eh

hardy yew
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ya face looked stretched out-ish

whole cloak
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still higher

dusky trail
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and absolutely no chest at all

whole cloak
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She’s flatter than fu hua

lament stump
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okay but i don't need crits, this was low effort cuz i just wanted to get her design down

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ik anatomy and stuff sucks

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but I'll worry about that when i draw her in an actuall pose

dusky trail
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sure

wraith vault
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sorry if im interrupting but are there any issues with the anatomy/proportions?

whole cloak
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If you’re looking at design only then the one thing I think is odd is how this works without choking her or something

lament stump
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cuz it's bloody cloth

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how could it chock her

dusky trail
whole cloak
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neck looks fine to me bc it’s angled

whole cloak
wraith vault
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got it 👍

dusky trail
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but Sel~ what if he just doing the "bouncing chest muscle" thing

lament stump
wraith vault
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does it change if hes sitting down? or are the hips still too wide

lament stump
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sit down and see

dusky trail
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it doesn't seem to work as a chocker but more like it connect to the back of her shirt

lament stump
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ye

dusky trail
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the hip won't change much, right now, your hip look too wide and round

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like it is one of those child-bearing hip

wraith vault
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TeriSparkle i get what you mean

lament stump
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doneeeee

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now time to finnaly draw a caracter in some pose

hardy yew
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am i missing anything before i move on to line

dusky trail
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passable

hardy yew
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tfw just got told the person might not like the cheek thing

dusky trail
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then time to make it even sharper

full solstice
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is very fair

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and you had a base from shik

lament stump
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Ye

onyx breach
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😂

lament stump
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Don't overthink your oc if you are not creative

onyx breach
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She looks like a mango

full solstice
dusky trail
full solstice
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i didnt even lineart the back yet

lament stump
onyx breach
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Hahaha

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Her face shape is

lament stump
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Bullys

dusky trail
full solstice
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yeah her face has some issues

dusky trail
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she probably walking around somewhere you can't see

lament stump
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I JUST GOT THE DESIGN

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There was no effort into making her look normal

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Her anatomy look normal*

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Proportions or what you wanna call it

full solstice
lament stump
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I'll do them things when i start drawing a normal illustration

full solstice
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a character can have an amazing design and such, but if the face doesnt look right

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it'll ruin it all

dusky trail
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but since she is super simple anyway, why do you even need the base...

lament stump
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Ofc I'll spend time on making my caracter normal i alway did that, if i didn't i wouldn't be in this chat

lament stump
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She may be simple but i can make her look cute

dusky trail
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hah cute, good joke

lament stump
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What

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You think after all this time

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I can't even make caracter cute?

full solstice
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uh

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looking at the face

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yeah

lament stump
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I SAID

full solstice
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no offense

lament stump
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Ahh...

dusky trail
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i mean.. the 3 draw you made so far are mostly depress girls..

full solstice
lament stump
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She will be normal guys

dusky trail
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you literally want to make Eula want to jump off the cliff

full solstice
dusky trail
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and then you do so with Mobius

lament stump
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and i said I'm into broken girls

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BUT THAG DOESN'T MEAN

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My style gonna be broken girls

full solstice
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fair enough

full solstice
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👍

lament stump
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Can't she be cute and sad?

full solstice
frank sundial
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who is sad?

full solstice
dusky trail
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that just sound like you bullying someone because her crying face is cute

frank sundial
lament stump
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Alr I'll try to find a pose ref and I'll do thr thing tomorrow

dusky trail
wraith vault
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i press enter too soon mb

lament stump
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I got tripped out by that sail

wraith vault
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how's this? i tried to slim down the waist a bit

full solstice
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same lol

lament stump
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I was like tf

full solstice
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that tripped me up

wraith vault
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D: mbmb

full solstice
lament stump
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His pic turned into a girl that shik sent lol

dusky trail
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with the way the chair make him looks like he sitting lean to the side

lament stump
dusky trail
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the hip feels rather off center to the chair

lament stump
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I don't like fuck boys they weird

full solstice
lament stump
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Not meannn

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He just look like he wanna do bad things to me

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Looks

full solstice
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says drawing looks like a fuckboy -> proceeds to say fuckboys are weird

wraith vault
full solstice
wraith vault
dusky trail
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so i would push the back of the chair to the left more

lament stump
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Ye maybe and i said it cuz it's what it looks lije

dusky trail
wraith vault
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oh true

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thank you 🙏

dusky trail
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unless you want him to completely sit to one side until the chair's leg broke

frank sundial
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getting vergil vibes

lament stump
frank sundial
lament stump
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Lolis are not thag cute

wraith vault
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now im debating making this vergil LMAO

lament stump
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Something like a girl in rain that looks sad but isn't crying while she has a design that makes her cute

dusky trail
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so you want to trick the girl so she gave up her house and now she has to live outside even though it is raining

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got it

wraith vault
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now he looks like even more of a fuckboy

dusky trail
lament stump
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Sad day dreaming in a Caffè while it's raining

dusky trail
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so you want to stood up a girl after asking her on the date and never come to the caffe, got it

lament stump
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Asking girls out is hard

frank sundial
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maybe draw her enjoying a nice latte in the cafe

dusky trail
frank sundial
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currently listening to this as I do hw

lament stump
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That caffe sucks skih

frank sundial
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at least he give a good ref for a pose you can draw closely to

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but something with good lighting like the one I gave

lament stump
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I was thinking like a half body shot with her hand holding her head

frank sundial
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ah like resting her head on her hand

dusky trail
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so you want to ditch her after order so many thing and now she holding her head after look at the bill

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got it

lament stump
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While looking out of a window, ofc i won't do this oart cuz drawing a window is probably hell on earth

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Not that holding shik

frank sundial
lament stump
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Not hand on forehead

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Ye thatt

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Fuck i forgot to add her bra

dusky trail
lament stump
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Is it called bra i have no idea lol

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The thing that holds booba

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why does this search not work tf

frank sundial
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have you tried using the "-" operator?

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or put "head resting on hand"

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chin resting on head also works

lament stump
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Thanks

lament stump
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found dis

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not sure that this gonna be a caffe

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probably not buttt

lone wagon
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I think i have finished now

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I will send it again on halloween xD

hardy yew
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hanami improve so fast

lone wagon
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MeiHappy thank you

lament stump
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at least she knows what is she doing with the lines

hardy yew
lament stump
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it wasn't meant to be

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but now that you said it yea

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you have no idea either

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just watch how to do line art on yt

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even making random lines thicker and thiner then otheres is better then everything with same thickness

hardy yew
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i sketch with the same line size

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plus its chibi so idc

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when i go to line it i change it

lament stump
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yea sketch should be done with same size

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line art shall not be!

lone wagon
hardy yew
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@lone wagon what videos do you watch to get the lineart so godly

lone wagon
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I watched 1 video from naoki saito. I realised i was doing the lineart wrong so i changed it.

jaunty python
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i mean

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there really is no way to do lineart wrong

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lineart can be messy and pleasing at the same time

lone wagon
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I haven't watched any speed paints in a while though. Atm i am just downloading a lot of references and analysing it.

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No i mean i didnt have an appealing lineart so i changed it to make it more appealing

jaunty python
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oh ic ic

hardy yew
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sad im at work right now

lone wagon
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Ans i dont think im godly. I still see a lot of fault with my lineart.

hardy yew
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its godly for someone who is a beginner like me

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like you just started not too long ago

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improvement go brrr

lone wagon
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You're too kind. XD

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I still think I have a lot to do, I am still nowhere to where i want to be. So I'll keep on trying until i get there.

hardy yew
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you're too humble reeee

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you're doing great

jaunty python
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i've seen plenty of artists who don't use varying lines and their art still looks really pleasing

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again, there is no wrong or right way to do lineart

lament stump
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i think most ppl can agree that diff in size of lines is better

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not better

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looks better

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you can do what you want in art for sure

hardy yew
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i mean its a choice of preference

jaunty python
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^

shadow nebula
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its just preference tbh. I prefer incredibly thin and even lines

jaunty python
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i've seen plenty of artists who can convey depth and have a focal point without varying lines due to their use of color and shading

hardy yew
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except for me its not preference i just dont know how to use touch sensitivity

jaunty python
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do i personally use varying lines? yeah, but that's because of how i do lineart in the first place

shadow nebula
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I never use varying line width. Its all the same.

jaunty python
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i commonly draw "lineart" on the same layer as my sketch
and by that i mean i clean up the lines and such

lone wagon
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I use it because the style i draw usually looks better with variety in line thickness

jaunty python
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exactly

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the artists we take inspiration from can influence how we draw

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if we take inspiration from artists with varying lines, then we might incorporate that when we draw something ourselves

lone wagon
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It improves my style personally and even artists with very different style uses different thickness. Its jist something ive personally analysed and decided to incorporate it into my own art after watching naoki saito and gone and look at different art that i like.

jaunty python
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mhm

lone wagon
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Two very different styles

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But whwn you imagine it without colours

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You can tlel theyve alao used different thickness in lines

jaunty python
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mhm

lament stump
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i always wanted to see what anime boobs look like without underboob shadow

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guess i gotta test it my self aka use base colors on my caracter lol

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but i want to see what it looks like with everything else shaded

lone wagon
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This one focuses on colour but you can still see the different thickness in lines

lament stump
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thick

shadow nebula
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it just looks flat if you do it that way

lament stump
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ye i can imagine

shadow nebula
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take anime line art with a grain of salt when looking at paintings. A lot of artists that have the look of line art don't actually use it. Its added in near the end for the aesthetic

jaunty python
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well

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i'd argue otherwise

lone wagon
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Me too, ive seen so many speedpaint ans they add it in the beginning. Some evwn add it in their sketch xD

shadow nebula
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I'm not saying all I'm saying artists do that. Its not something to argue and you can't really know without seeing them paint

jaunty python
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lineart is used widely as either some form of sketch or something to define the shapes before they paint over it

lament stump
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hanami send me just 1 speedpaint so i get them recommended more often i gotta start watcing em

lone wagon
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Obviously you can tweak it later on but a lot so it in the lineart process

shadow nebula
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once you get skilled enough you don't need sketches or lineart, plenty of artists do that. Its why I said don't look at all art and think its done the exact same way between all artists because its not

lone wagon