art-discussion-and-wip

[smoky osprey]

Do they need much running?

[lone whale]

like i've probably written every storyline i could think of

[smoky osprey]

I usually just plop and leave and never look at it for days

[lament stump]

Writers are welcomed here but... No one here writes

[smoky osprey]

And then come back and retweet stuff if it’s twitter

[lone whale]

eh idk

wanted to say something

cant do it in #💢honkai-vent because well-

anyways back to finding honkai memes

[smoky osprey]

Writing is cool

I can’t write fiction for shit

[lament stump]

Well if you write something you can send it and we can crit it cuz mabye artists have a good sense of quality

[shadow nebula]

to work the algorithms and get around them yes you need to be very active

[lone whale]

nvm google is glitching

[smoky osprey]

Oh

[lament stump]

I'm going to try and do that

[lone whale]

maybe

[smoky osprey]

I guess that’s if views matter ig

[lament stump]

How do i get views on twitter tho?

[lone whale]

idk

[shadow nebula]

algorithm as usual

[lone whale]

pray that twitter will do you a favor

[smoky osprey]

Lmao

[lone whale]

and your post will somehow end up on someones twitter page

idfk how twitter works

[shadow nebula]

constant posting, no tags unless they are trending, don't write a lot, don't mention commissions or @ anyone, etc

[lament stump]

On devi i just pop my art in ever gallery and boom 17 favs and 500 views but idk the algorithm on the bird platform

[lament stump]

No tagssss??

No #fanart?

[shadow nebula]

yes, tags decrease the value on twitter

[lament stump]

The fuck

[shadow nebula]

but everything is searchable

so if you write "a little bit of art for today" every word in that sentence is searchable so no need for tags

[smoky osprey]

Oh well

[lone whale]

[plain bane]

Huh

I'm gonna remember all that actually

[lament stump]

I always get so excited when i post my stuff

[lone whale]

so no tags, no mentions

just post

[shadow nebula]

yeah

[lone whale]

makes sense

[shadow nebula]

commission posts also don't get much engagement because algorithm

so never mention that unless you make it as a thread

[lament stump]

Eh commissions are still a long road ahead

[shadow nebula]

of course when you're starting out it fluctuates quite a lot for you on what gets more attention than others but eventually it'll even out to what the algorithm is designed for

[lone whale]

when i used to do art commissions i always get nervous when i receive them

i often think that i'll mess up the order

[shadow nebula]

I've had people approach me for commissions but I have to keep turning them down since i don't do them

[lament stump]

Damn, my goal is to do commissions

But my smaller goal for now is to get 5 comments, which ain't happening cuz no one comments art

Unless it's like amazing

[shadow nebula]

I want to do commissions until I can get into the industry just not now as I don't feel my art is up to par for commissions currently

[lament stump]

If you mabye practice coloring a bit more i can see your art improve by a lot

Cuz your anatomy already slaps

[shadow nebula]

I used to colour a lot, just stopped to focus on anatomy

[lone whale]

anatomy is hard for me

[smoky osprey]

Genshin memes get views

[plain bane]

Imo colouring is the easy part

[smoky osprey]

So many views

[lone whale]

my proportions are horrible

[smoky osprey]

Art is hard

Life is hard

[lone whale]

I agree

[smoky osprey]

I’m going to bed good night

[lament stump]

I don't wanna get views for that, i want to be mistery like wlop

[shadow nebula]

to get an understanding for proportions before anatomy you should mark out landmarks for everything. It'll help a lot

[lone whale]

my sketches always look good but my line art is horrible

[smoky osprey]

You wanna be what

[lament stump]

When i get brake from school I'll start to rly get into learning art, 1st anatomy

[lament stump]

IDK HOW TO SPELL THAT

Mistery

[lone whale]

mystery?

[lament stump]

YES

[lone whale]

[smoky osprey]

But like what

[lament stump]

Mysterious like wloppp

[dusky trail]

he clearly want to spell misery

[lone whale]

lmao

[lament stump]

Wlop is an artist

[smoky osprey]

uh ok

[lament stump]

A fucking mysterious but amazing one

[lament stump]

You met my bully today

Grats

[smoky osprey]

Anyways 3am

[dusky trail]

well WLOP's stuff certainly quite popular in music channel

they sure love to use his art for the thumbnail

[lament stump]

Anyway gn and I'm gonna go study and shik gonna watch some pits

Bye bye

[dusky trail]

a good amount of cosplayer also cosplay his stuff

[lament stump]

He's just amazing

[dusky trail]

his stuff is fancy but not my type

https://cdn.donmai.us/sample/fd/b4/__shalltear_bloodfallen_overlord_drawn_by_so_bin__sample-fdb4cda7d939c4bff47bb25b6e3c46e6.jpg

compare to So-bin

[lone whale]

[dusky trail]

https://cdn.donmai.us/original/c2/22/__black_rock_shooter_dead_master_strength_and_black_gold_saw_black_rock_shooter_drawn_by_huke__c22268f637fbf2ddf44463bfdb6fee8e.jpg

or even Hu-ke

but i guess what i like is the kind of art with epic background but still draw your eyes at the char

while WLOP want you to focus on the background more

[lone whale]

tbh i suck at eyes

which is why most of my drawings perspectives are from the back

[dusky trail]

https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/6f131d22-7974-4793-9db3-2160376b5c72/dend7pf-b9d1c880-4b1b-49b3-b185-37fddb857c12.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzZmMTMxZDIyLTc5NzQtNDc5My05ZGIzLTIxNjAzNzZiNWM3MlwvZGVuZDdwZi1iOWQxYzg4MC00YjFiLTQ5YjMtYjE4NS0zN2ZkZGI4NTdjMTIuanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.ajayIAVSS3xWBKoRLMGwK5wwK3i1A9UB0OCKW3we6EA

[lone whale]

[lament stump]

Too good

Absolutely lost for words

[lone whale]

tbh i thought that was some 3D stuff

[lament stump]

It is a guys crating master piece in ps

Crafting

[dusky trail]

i like cleaner background anyway

[plain bane]

I should try something like that

Though maybe not now, busy enough as it is

[grave nymph]

wait what now

I do????? wtf's that number

[hardy yew]

that's just how Wlop works lol

many artist have talked and analyzed how Wlop works

turns out it's not that different from how other pros make their piece of arts

[prime kelp]

i have 23k

weak

[grave nymph]

Kotawa-sama I kneel

🙇

[prime kelp]

[grave nymph]

I wonder since when did it get that high

[lament stump]

Wlop says he's a hobbyist

Lol

[prime kelp]

well came here for a reason, WIP

[hardy yew]

yes i know that

[lament stump]

Hand too big

Even i can tell

[hardy yew]

the palm is kinda too long i'd say

the finger are fine

[prime kelp]

hmm yeah

[hardy yew]

just the palms

[grave nymph]

palm long fingers short

imo

[shadow nebula]

make the head larger and the arm smaller along with the hand

[dusky trail]

well ya, i not say his style is wrong, i just say it is not my kind of taste, not like he is the only kind of artist doing that kind of style

also it is not just the hand is big, the whole arm is massive

but the main problem is the head too small

[lone whale]

i have come to ask for writing ideas

although nobody here writes

[dusky trail]

go write a story about a bunny girl got isekai and make bunny suit trendy

[shadow nebula]

not a writer but i make quite a lot of stories. Are you having plot trouble?

[lone whale]

yeah

i have some ideas but i cant seem to make the plot

[shadow nebula]

if you want some help on plot you can tell me your ideas

[dusky trail]

well not many ppl here write story but we should still able to give advice

[lone whale]

my only idea is to make a story about a girl whos troubled by something but she doesnt know what

[shadow nebula]

I used to take creative writing class before I realized that I prefer comics as well as film class and dnd campaigns so I do have quite a bit of experience

[lone whale]

cant seem to make the plot relevant or atleast decent

[dusky trail]

what is the kind of setting you go for that girl then

[shadow nebula]

so you know what kind of personality you want for the character?

[dusky trail]

different period can also change the plot

[shadow nebula]

I usually start my stories from the very end

[lone whale]

yk miss perfect thing

or a shy girl

[dusky trail]

i also start with the begin and the end, then start squeeze in the middle plot

[lone whale]

i need the skill that mihoyo character designers have

[shadow nebula]

alrighty, thats workable

[lone whale]

the plot im making right now seems overused

[shadow nebula]

what are you going for right now?

remember that everything you can think of has already been done, its just the nature of it

[lone whale]

thank you

anyways gtg

bye bye

ty for the help also

[lament stump]

Np

[plain bane]

Should I try to redraw this now that ||I think|| I've gotten better

[dusky trail]

her palm's shade just look like she is holding a "certain object"

[plain bane]

I will probably redraw the whole thing

[fiery lantern]

Zodiac it

do it

[lament stump]

Why did you stop before shading the outfit

I remember when you was doing that

It was when i just joined the server uwu

[plain bane]

Gave up with it

Thought I should concentrate on anatomy forst

[plain bane]

Even the few minute sketch looks better anatomy wise

Jesus

Though looking at it I wanna do a different pose

[celest wind]

Imagine doing details in sketches

Fuck my life

[plain bane]

[onyx breach]

sounds like my normal everyday life

[dusky trail]

that is one fabulous figurine and likely quite handy for reference too

[shadow nebula]

i wouldn't use her exactly for reference for that pose as a few elements of her pose are completely wrong for ballet but yes she is beautiful

[dusky trail]

i never say that pose only use for ballet though ufufufuu

[hardy yew]

[lament stump]

I do everything in sketch, my line art is just tracing my sketch

[lone wagon]

When it comes to cartoons it doesn't have to be accurate

I use figurines for reference now too

You can find some really neat poses

[strong pond]

heyaaa

[shadow nebula]

that might be so but an inaccurate dance pose is quite ugly to anyone who can dance. Its why I avoid artists that draw dancers

[shadow nebula]

its gets more complicated with how fabric naturally drapes but this is the very basics

[dusky trail]

for frill thing, it is easier to draw the rim first (the red line) then just draw the line back (the blue line) to from the dress

so you can just draw random red line then depend on the position of the thing, draw the blue line toward it

[dusky trail]

again, just do a frill rim however you want then just start draw the outline

[shadow nebula]

quick studies

[sage canopy]

https://giphy.com/gifs/Su7SkfxqmyR2SrkbCU

[dusky trail]

actually want to do a tongue out but i feel like that would be too common for her already

[hardy yew]

ITS SO GOODDDDD

[bright copper]

dats some good art

[hardy yew]

agreed

[low vector]

How to make tears?

[hardy yew]

this is an amazing question i would like to know too

[onyx breach]

theres a yt tutorial on how to draw water droplets

[bright copper]

Step 1, listen to nightglow
or are you talking about art

[low vector]

[hardy yew]

[lament stump]

NO

[dawn rapids]

[lament stump]

YOU CAN'T FINISH IT BEFORE I DO

I CAN'T GET SLYLED ON THAT HARD

[bright copper]

it’s too late for that I think

[plain bane]

[dusky trail]

i gonna draw 3 Mobius in that one page

[bright copper]

You can get styled on that hard

[dusky trail]

if i somehow finish that before you then you may as well redo the whole thing

[sturdy anvil]

Poggers

[dusky trail]

as for tears, there are various way to draw it depend on the type of situation you using it so...

like this simple water streak for gag one

[bright copper]

and also angles n stuff

[dusky trail]

or the teary eyes

[low vector]

[dusky trail]

but they mostly work the same way, a white outline + multiply blue to mixed with the skin + another darker layer for the shade

then put in some high light for the light reflection

ez

[bright copper]

I don’t need this tips but damn thats good tips.

[lament stump]

ha ha, you gonna get smackedddd

[dusky trail]

see~ ez

the main thing to remember is just it would curve as it flow down the cheek

[onyx breach]

i originally planned to make mine teary eyed yesterday but just went against it

probably because i hate how tears are often depicted as giant waterfalls in anime

[dusky trail]

same, i only use teary eyes at best

[onyx breach]

the thing with it is that its either a giant falls or a tiny droplet and the latter is barely visible to the naked eye

thatws why in anime, sweat are depicted the same thing

giant drops

[dusky trail]

i usually put different kind of "liquid" on them anyway, so not much reason for me to use tears

[onyx breach]

like in this pic as well, i drew several sweat droplets as well but theyre barely visible =/

[low vector]

Okay thanks

[lament stump]

time

to continue

les go

[dusky trail]

so did the tiara cut off part of her hair

because there is one piece just floating around without connect to her head there

[whole cloak]

Her eye whites seem very light compared to her skin tone

try moving this dark body shadow up towards the center of the side of the body since light from the moon lights up the edges a bit

and add some bigger blueish tints to her hair instead of just individual lines in the middle of locks

[lament stump]

I get everything except that last part

Tints

No idea how they are should look

[lament stump]

Ehh...

[dusky trail]

either erase that hair or just color behind the tiara

[lament stump]

do I rlyyyy have to??

[dusky trail]

it will look like a random seaweed stuck on her hair otherwise

not that it is hard to patch anyway

[lament stump]

now tiara looking hm

[dusky trail]

then time to remove the tiara too

[lament stump]

i can't remove the whole tiaraasaa

[dusky trail]

then i guess the only option left is remove the hair and make her bald

or just go back and draw some simple hair color behind the tiara

[lament stump]

@dusky trail happy?

[dusky trail]

now go shade that hair left over after you removed that tiara

it is standing out for no reason there

[plain bane]

Why is one lock darker than the rest

[dusky trail]

because it is the chosen lock

[plain bane]

Then it should be lighter

[dusky trail]

you know they always fall into the dark side

[plain bane]

[lament stump]

wait what is darer then what

[dusky trail]

he mean the random darker one on her bang

[lament stump]

this

?

[dusky trail]

ya

not many thing around it as dark so it also just randomly stand out

[lament stump]

cuz it goeslike over

and makes the shadow?

[dusky trail]

sure

[lament stump]

better?

[dusky trail]

i don't know, ask @plain bane

[plain bane]

[dusky trail]

you are the one spot that thing~

[plain bane]

I just spot it I don't have brain to fix it

[dusky trail]

then i guess Aki will never know if it better or not

[lament stump]

the hair is done ig

made it less weird

added this

hm

[quasi radish]

i eventually got tired of drawing mhy brand art

[lament stump]

that's plain old flexin

drawing like that on a sketch part is a flex

[smoky osprey]

Oh hey

That mobius is looking pretty good

[quasi radish]

i dont really do lineart (wc is why the sketch alr goes like that),, i color sketches immediately

it makes the work easier just revising the sketch instead of having to re-do the whole piece by lining it (at least for me)

[lament stump]

I THINK A PRO HAS GOTTEN INTO ME HERE

YOU I SOMEHOW MADE IT LOOK SEE TRU

@dusky trail i think I'm you senpai now

[lament stump]

ty <3

[dusky trail]

see through is so basic even Shii can do it

[lament stump]

I have like 3h of work untill it's done i think

[lament stump]

no no no

you don't even know how cool i did it

i used the color of the sky with some tranparent brush

I'm amazing

[dusky trail]

meanwhile, i separated the whole layer of the arm so you can see everything under it, the skin low opacity skin lineart, the skin shade, the hair behind it and so on

[lament stump]

doesn't sound as cool as using a transparent brush

[quasi radish]

or just erase the upper layer slightly to expose more of the layer beneath

[whole cloak]

make these highlights bigger, they’re so narrow they look out of place

[dusky trail]

because the point of my transparent is so you can see through it

[lament stump]

shik

time to sleep

you did enough art for the day

come back to it tmorrow when i post my done mobius

[dusky trail]

too late

[lament stump]

better?

[dusky trail]

if you gonna do that then at least do a few for the outer hair too

[lament stump]

no idea

where whould that go

gonna try tho

100 page views

[dusky trail]

and now he got mute for show off

[lament stump]

100

PAGE

VIEWS

LETS GO

[dusky trail]

with only 4 watchers, some probably miss click and accident click your page

[lament stump]

25 of these bad boys tho

on pixiv me cool

altho everyone that follows me is some half naked profile picture with japanese name

i somehow gotta add a bit of shadow here

[hardy yew]

super lammas

[lament stump]

no ideaaa how it should look

[hardy yew]

niceeee

[dusky trail]

it likes you two talking about two different thing

[lament stump]

they talkin about my lammas

i talkin about how i don't know how that shadow work

[hardy yew]

lmao

[lament stump]

okay stopping here

tomorrow it gonna be done

[hardy yew]

the background still too light btw

[lament stump]

rly??

[hardy yew]

looks more blue than dark to me

will you be changing it before you finish? like adding detail orr

[dusky trail]

well you normally need to mix more than just one dark color to make it dark

[lament stump]

i already used it to make some thing transparant, can't change it....

[lament stump]

mabye add darker to the corners?

[lament stump]

so bg, shade the moon, shade this pointy things, add stars and add shadow to the bottom of the dress

don't know how I'm gonna do that last part

[dusky trail]

just add some cloud and stars to change it up

[lament stump]

just

[hardy yew]

maybe try some fog

[dusky trail]

add the space station too

[lament stump]

add the pit lick stop?

[dusky trail]

how about some crates on the moon, why not

[hardy yew]

lmao

[lament stump]

i want this pinned

shik pin it

[dusky trail]

meanwhile unlike your armpit fetish, i actually bother to make a variant where she show her thighs

[lament stump]

our*

sounded way more cool

[dusky trail]

and another version with her fishnet

[dusky trail]

@lament stump good for you, someone just ask me for a commission so i will put my Mobius on hold for awhile

[hybrid kernel]

Pls help, how do I draw the hands

[lament stump]

oh my lors

that head too bigg

[lament stump]

he he

[dusky trail]

the head is not a problem, it is the torso too short

[dusky trail]

try something like this

or you can just simple copy her left hand only

[hardy yew]

aichan bouta bonk you

[dusky trail]

it is a risk i will take to show a better waist size~

[haughty night]

FBI: Sir your gonna need come with us

[lament stump]

my mother walked in and saw me staring at this

[dusky trail]

but anyway, try to give her proper chest/waist/hip ratio first

[lament stump]

i said it's art

[dusky trail]

just tell your mom it is your art

[lament stump]

wait to my mobius

should i add some like air

so it you know

looks like she falling or somethign

[dusky trail]

https://cdn.donmai.us/sample/96/86/__gran_and_luchador_granblue_fantasy__sample-9686ca72e5e6b6a99f62cb8524329f87.jpg

sure, do that then

but there actually no reason to do that at all

she just slow fall, not like she drop from an airplane

there is no reason to add some speed efx

[whole cloak]

yea better
also head still very pointy and long in the wrong place

[lament stump]

this right?

[whole cloak]

yes

[grave nymph]

see-through is just basically a lowered opacity layer/brush...

[hardy yew]

does anyone have a starrail seele reference?

all the official art I digged out doesn’t do the job

[hardy yew]

i dont think theres much reference other than official

I see

[dusky trail]

time to sign up for beta and hope they have her there

[fiery lantern]

my bum

[hardy yew]

I threw in my application I highly doubt I’ll get picked lol

hope for some seele crumbs from the beta testers

[dusky trail]

i usually the wait till the game is full out rather than try beta then wait for who know how long to play it again

[whole cloak]

I signed up for beta but I really don’t think I’ll get picked
worth a shot at least

[rugged galleon]

[onyx breach]

🤔 cant you just draw Seele using the reference in star rail?

[grave nymph]

lineart thickness is wonky imo

[dusky trail]

her pose make it hard for see her Star Rail's outfit after all

[grave nymph]

time to guess

wait

her phantom thing

you only have to guess her back or something

as well as the colors

[dusky trail]

ya you can see the top from her phantom but the skirt part...

[grave nymph]

...leaks yabe

[hardy yew]

CRAP

[grave nymph]

yeah

[dusky trail]

because it is similar to her GGZ outfit

[grave nymph]

I feel like they ripped it from ggz tbh

and made it fancier

[hardy yew]

I’m just blind guessing on her outfit

[grave nymph]

do it

I wanna see how it turns out

xD

[hardy yew]

I got my rough sketch

[grave nymph]

were you going for a back view anyways?

[dusky trail]

i don't think her Star rail outfit really show her midriff though

[grave nymph]

cus censorship

xD

[dusky trail]

also if they gonna rip off GGZ

https://cdn.donmai.us/original/79/28/__houraiji_kyuushou_honkai_and_1_more_drawn_by_sougishi_ego__7928d20973647182e2a3b5c7bc6d76f1.jpg

then bring her back too pls~

[hardy yew]

so far a rough unfinished sketch

similar to the multiple copies of her in the trailer when she attacks ykyk

also roasts welcome

[grave nymph]

roasts are always good

[hardy yew]

best I catch mistakes early

[dusky trail]

her pose looks like Shii is trying to hit some annoying flies has been flying around him for a good while

[grave nymph]

accurate

[hardy yew]

LMAO

[grave nymph]

CURSE THOSE DAMN FLIES

[hardy yew]

KILL EM

[grave nymph]

they kept biting me whenever I draw :"D

[dusky trail]

some of the poses just look rather awkward

[grave nymph]

yup

agree with sensei here

[hardy yew]

tbh yeah

[grave nymph]

it looks stiff?

is that the word?

[hardy yew]

I’ll make them more natural looking

[grave nymph]

yeah

[hardy yew]

opposite of dynamic

[grave nymph]

naruhodo

you can search references on google

or just screenshot Seele's move set on Honkai

and reference from there

[hardy yew]

SMART SMART

[dusky trail]

when draw multi-poses like that you could also make them closer to each other too so you don't leave way too many empty spot around it

[hardy yew]

I see

ahhh I shouldn’t have grouped the layers

[grave nymph]

you can also take a look at Rita's

[hardy yew]

yep

[grave nymph]

to get a good reference for various styles or something

[hardy yew]

helpful helpful

right now I’m gonna go back and make them less stiff

[grave nymph]

you can also just let her pose or something xD

[dusky trail]

give her a good massage

[grave nymph]

instead of doing battle stuff

make her look cool

[grave nymph]

[dusky trail]

just do this kind of pose

[hardy yew]

dudu

is that dudu

[hardy yew]

LMAO

[dusky trail]

it just that oufit but without the jacket and belt

but if you still gona go for action pose

try to straight out they calf/feet

it usually fit action pose more rather and won't make it like they just try really hard to stand on even ground

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/783078378872897608/896981586036273152/image0.jpg?width=589&height=676

that why those pose looks rather stiff

[hardy yew]

I see

[dusky trail]

since it give off the feel of her just stuck to the ground

[grave nymph]

Sirin's leg pose could help you tbh

[hardy yew]

I’m referencing it rn tehe

srry sirin im gonna steal your pose

[grave nymph]

Can't wait for the finished artwork

[hardy yew]

[dusky trail]

like here, a quick adjust from that Seele's pose

[hardy yew]

probably next weekend if I get enough free time

[hardy yew]

MUCH BETTERRR

[dusky trail]

would adjust that other feet too but i'm too lazy to pull my tablet out for that

[grave nymph]

are you gonna make the two on the back as phantoms?
maybe you should put them closer or blur them if you want

[dusky trail]

mostly use magic tool to change it

[grave nymph]

like the one they did on the official art w

[hardy yew]

yep they’re gonna be phantoms

blurring it now won’t be practical

[hardy yew]

that’s completely fine

[dusky trail]

then try to pick a kind of pose so you can see other phantom easier

[hardy yew]

mhm

[lusty hazel]

ouch keqing cons

her pose looks fun but i wanna try something different

[dusky trail]

when you avoid her rate-up banner but she show up anyway

[lusty hazel]

she is everywhere

[sinful imp]

[lament stump]

I got c2 keqing on kokomi banner :(

[lusty hazel]

keqing>kokomi

[dusky trail]

keqing x kokomi

[lament stump]

kokomi kinda cute tho

i wanted her for that

where is liquify tool in clip studio?

[grave nymph]

l-liquify?

[dusky trail]

you mean water brush?

[lament stump]

i mean

that one where you can pinch stuff around

[dawn rapids]

Fish market stonk

[grave nymph]

someone help me with hands :"D
roasts are gladly welcomed

[lament stump]

Shiibi

[grave nymph]

hands are hard

[dusky trail]

too small, specially when you put it next to her face

it looks like she can deepthroat herself with her hand

[grave nymph]

figures

how about the fingers or something

[dawn rapids]

Doraemon hand

[dusky trail]

she is holding on the balloon for dear life anyway, so not like there much variant to do there

[grave nymph]

pain

[dawn rapids]

Make her long hair to hide one hand

[grave nymph]

so just make both hands bigger, got it

[grave nymph]

isn't that just being lazy or something

plus it'll ruin the depth thing

and have to change the arms to to comply with it being hidden by the hair...

[dawn rapids]

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/783078378872897608/896147390573195364/d1be1bc1c020cccd54e8a2833b3ed592.jpg

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/783078378872897608/896147399624503347/ef6316f2d35276e392a1a0e7a434fd76.jpg

[grave nymph]

gasps

thank you for the references

[dawn rapids]

I save all of your reference in my server

[dusky trail]

https://cdn.donmai.us/sample/25/6d/__hoto_cocoa_and_kirima_sharo_gochuumon_wa_usagi_desu_ka_drawn_by_koi_koisan__sample-256d3a7115f25a88fb54ee4103e9afda.jpg

just watch slice-of-life series for hand reference

https://cdn.donmai.us/sample/81/68/__tedeza_rize_gochuumon_wa_usagi_desu_ka_drawn_by_koi_koisan__sample-81681d702969dbfd5930e95718ffa8d9.jpg

they always use they hands more

[lament stump]

she is done

now the bg

how the fuck do i make a moon

what the fuck

[dusky trail]

go to stock image then paste it in

done

[lament stump]

no

[dusky trail]

then just throw in some shade

lower your erase density and edge shape

then just randomly shape the edge

ez

or just cheap out and make it glow

https://cdn.donmai.us/sample/ea/26/__arcueid_brunestud_and_tohno_shiki_tsukihime_and_1_more_drawn_by_taa_acid__sample-ea26f2a963e65e89e169eeef260adacf.jpg

then you won't have to worry about the moon's detail

https://cdn.donmai.us/sample/28/36/__miqo_te_and_hyur_final_fantasy_and_2_more__sample-283689aa4dca19e2b6708b3407c23879.jpg

[lusty hazel]

sheesh nice references

this probably has wrong proportion, i will solve that by saying "its heavily stylized"

[dusky trail]

the knee line actually make it looks like that is her backknee, not the front

[lament stump]

hm

[dusky trail]

the knee usually form this kind of shape

[onyx breach]

when you give an example at least give a better one than this lol

this leg is just fcked up

[lament stump]

silverrrr

this moon gonna be cool

[dusky trail]

while the back knee is well~

[lament stump]

when i finish it the snake girl is dona uwu

[dusky trail]

plenty of knee style for Silver to chose

[onyx breach]

there we go

[dusky trail]

knee cap is also another fun thing to stare at and draw

[onyx breach]

yes

[dawn rapids]

It's pulto

[dawn rapids]

Thick thigh

[onyx breach]

i also enjoy drawing navels

[dusky trail]

that is way too blurry and likely hurt every eyes to look at

[onyx breach]

those cute belly buttons

[dawn rapids]

Where

[dusky trail]

whatever that thing above the moon is just look like a shoes stepping on the moon

and that probably why the shape is slowly flatten

[dawn rapids]

That my first time to draw

A moon

[dusky trail]

and your already better than AKi

i'm proud, son

even though you are adopted

[dawn rapids]

Momi

[sinful imp]

[dawn rapids]

I draw with fingers on mouse pad

[fiery lantern]

kiana

[sinful imp]

[fiery lantern]

hello kiana

[lament stump]

hm

focuss on the moon ik it's glow isn't good

[fiery lantern]

😍😍

[lament stump]

ty yena <3

[fiery lantern]

yw 😘

[lament stump]

1st one or this one?

[fiery lantern]

what did u change

[shadow nebula]

Go with first but lighten it not with airbrush like it looks like what you did to the second one as it takes away the details. It looks really good tho

[lament stump]

I already have a layer for that uwu

I'll just turn to opacity up

I guess that is it

@dusky trail anything that's not passable?

[dusky trail]

the dress could "glow" a bit too

[lament stump]

how the fuck

do i do that

glows now?

[fiery lantern]

give it some shine

glimmer

glitter

glow

[dusky trail]

do it on the edge of the dress

[lusty hazel]

can i just shade it lol

[dusky trail]

if you mean you gonna remove the knee line and just shade it then sure

there are many way to do those parts after all

[grave nymph]

what's the free transform thing but it's a grid and you could control every single intersection called again?

[lament stump]

I'm lookin for that too

[lusty hazel]

perspective form? idk

or was it mesh form

[lone wagon]

Poor kitty

[lusty hazel]

thanks

[lament stump]

https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/93379944

uwu

[lusty hazel]

lucky me gets to be the first one to heart that, looks like that on my screen atleast

[lament stump]

well not like meny gonna heart it

@dusky trail what tags do I add on pixiv?

i don't know japanese

[dusky trail]

just add eng tag

remember there is no space though, so it would be Honkai3rd or Honkai_impact

well just type and it should fill in for you

or just leave the "allow other to tag" option on so ppl can tag it for you

[lament stump]

like someone would do that

[fiery lantern]

HELLPP

[sinful imp]

[dusky trail]

and that is the last time we heard from yena, the end

[lusty hazel]

i would if that makes you feel better

[lament stump]

nah i think i got them

[lusty hazel]

oke

[grave nymph]

someone give ideas of what kind of smile to give

why is it that I'm very bad at drawing smiles but less trashy when it comes to others

roast me Delay-sensei /;w;/

[onyx breach]

maybe coz you dont know how to smile yourself?

[grave nymph]

yeah, maybe

[onyx breach]

also, it doesnt rly have to be a special smile, smile normally

[lusty hazel]

i thought she had 4 eye brows at first

[onyx breach]

normal smile is perfectly fine dude

[dusky trail]

jk smile

[lusty hazel]

why do i keep changing what shes looking at? i dont know too

[dusky trail]

the "i have so many little sisters" smile

[dusky trail]

are you sure she didn't took some kind of drug and make half of her face goes numb?

[lusty hazel]

goodness gracious

ok i found a reason
it looks like veli is being happy at nothing

[onyx breach]

just bring this part lower

eyebrow to nose

[fiery lantern]

forever

[lusty hazel]

2 ways to read that

1. bring the eye brow to the nose
2. idk how to explain this

[dusky trail]

3. pluck her eyebrow and use it to tickle her nose

[fiery lantern]

😠 instead of 😟

[onyx breach]

i meant from eyebrow to nose -_-

[fiery lantern]

ok

[lusty hazel]

figured

[dusky trail]

pluck her eyebrown it is

[onyx breach]

see? looks better with just that @grave nymph

[grave nymph]

so lower this part???

late

[lusty hazel]

yena what

his posts get more concerning each day

[fiery lantern]

her 😜😜👧👧

[lusty hazel]

this a sign?

[fiery lantern]

I think that makes it worse

obey me art 😭

[lusty hazel]

oh shit i am not used to calling someone a she

[fiery lantern]

oh

[lusty hazel]

i see everyone as a guy im sorry

[fiery lantern]

I’m kidding

LMAO

it’s fine

[lusty hazel]

muted

pepega

[lusty breach]

[onyx breach]

ye, there are guys out there pretending to be girls to get easy complements afterall

you cant be too lax in the internet

[dusky trail]

i'm totally it wink wink

[lusty hazel]

simply put; do not acknowledge the existence of women

[fiery lantern]

I don’t have a popsicle

u can think of me as a guy

[onyx breach]

its fine, you dont have to prove it, its ok

[fiery lantern]

it doesn’t make a difference

[fiery lantern]

bc I’m epic either way

LMAO

[onyx breach]

we dont care about your gender just your art coz this is an art ch afterall

[fiery lantern]

ye

I just needed to save it

[lament stump]

silver

you gotta comment my mobius

not like shik

she didn't say shit

[fiery lantern]

ignore my random images I just need to save them again

[lusty hazel]

would you like me to roast your artwork even tho i am no better than you

[lament stump]

well it's gonna make me feel worse

so no pls no roast

[fiery lantern]

pls roast me

[dusky trail]

https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/93379944

[fiery lantern]

I want to be roasted

[dusky trail]

because i still wonder what the heck is that in the top left corner

[lament stump]

idk lol

seems cool ig

[fiery lantern]

why is it cut off

[lusty hazel]

open the link

[dusky trail]

it looks like you leave the pic for months and now some spider make a web on it

[lusty hazel]

pixiv crop is cruel

[fiery lantern]

LL

[sinful imp]

[onyx breach]

no mistaking it

[lament stump]

cuz pixiv

gotta click the link

[lusty hazel]

it looks like white cheese

ghost cheese to be more precise

[lusty hazel]

lol scuffed crop

[dusky trail]

maybe that is the real moon all along

[lament stump]

is it rly that stupid

[fiery lantern]

the discord line

what’s stupid

[lusty hazel]

no is just distracting

[lament stump]

can't rly remove my post from everywhere and delete the man jucie

[fiery lantern]

jucie

[lusty hazel]

anyways, what are those lines on the moon?

[dusky trail]

you can if you pay to be premium~

[fiery lantern]

they are lines

on the moon

[dusky trail]

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/783078378872897608/897092047582949396/image0.png

[lusty hazel]

damn i never would have guessed

[lament stump]

um well the reference had something like that so yea

[dusky trail]

ty to the shade you throw there, it just look like a face with teeth

[lusty hazel]

thank you for that yena

very helpful

[lament stump]

as long as it's better them my last drawing I'm good

[fiery lantern]

pls roasts old art

[fiery lantern]

yw

[dusky trail]

just change the moon color to orange and you will have halloween theme ready

[fiery lantern]

roast it please

I’m begging

I don’t care for it

[dusky trail]

it is so good i rather roast Aki than it

[lament stump]

why do I need that

[lusty hazel]

she looks like she has no point on life

[fiery lantern]

WHAT

[fiery lantern]

maybe bc she is round

[lusty hazel]

staring at my soul and theres that standing ahoge

[fiery lantern]

get it

[lusty hazel]

no

[fiery lantern]

THE AHOGE IS SO BAD

[fiery lantern]

bc no point to life

bc she’s round

pointy

round

[lusty hazel]

oh

im too old to understand this shit

[fiery lantern]

🔺📍

[fiery lantern]

u must be 36470v

anyway that was a shut roast

again

[lusty hazel]

36470 km deep on earth trying to find who asked

[sinful imp]

She is…..uh……well she is……..where’s Bronya? She’s probably got something

[fiery lantern]

bronya?

u wanna see bronya?

[sinful imp]

No. I mean Bronya can probably roast

[fiery lantern]

she is too busy celebrating Halloween

[lusty hazel]

she looks like that one wannabe cute beginner girl that relies on simps to defend her reputation

[sinful imp]

Always made fun of me

[fiery lantern]

lmOA

[lusty hazel]

yeah my name is bronya

[fiery lantern]

that was even more trash

[lusty hazel]

wha

[fiery lantern]

that one was okay

solid

[lusty hazel]

that wasnt a roast

[fiery lantern]

7.8/10

it was trash tho

[lusty hazel]

same could be said to your drawing

that was a joke please dont ban me

[fiery lantern]

that one was a good one

7.9/10 in total

[lusty hazel]

same situation like amber from g game, regardless i like her design

[fiery lantern]

good job u passed with a B-

I’m kidding

idk how a b c grading system works

[fiery lantern]

what

[lusty hazel]

use your asian feelings

[fiery lantern]

we don’t use that system

😜😜

my butt

it just

cracked

oml

it’s hurts

so bad

[lusty hazel]

what do you want me to do

glue it?

out of desperation of art to post

[dusky trail]

you really should fix that weird eyes habit of your

[lusty hazel]

orca from gt, her eyes are supposed to look like that

[dusky trail]

sure

[lusty hazel]

oh no bad timing

[fiery lantern]

okay my hip is fine now

[lusty hazel]

one eye supposed to look like she wants to choke you
one eye looks like she just tired of life

[fiery lantern]

I’m both

[onyx breach]

i think the bigger problem is how he draws the face like this instead of this

[lusty hazel]

it is shiibi

i made that in a few secs

[onyx breach]

chibi have giant eyes, yours look more like an emoji sketch that wasnt approved in pre-production of social media

[lusty hazel]

yeah i can agree

i just like to make a big ass circle and the face wont even match

ill fix it

[grave nymph]

[lusty hazel]

not even a sketch bruh

drawing random shapes speedrun any %

[lone wagon]

[dawn rapids]

Saitama as a kid

[shadow nebula]

thats not completely incorrect since the mandible isn't that low on the skull. Base of the skull, the circle as we simplify it, should be just above the upper teeth

[onyx breach]

Still need work

[fiery lantern]

my art

[lusty hazel]

unironically good

she looks better now, probably. i dont plan on putting actual effort into this

[grave nymph]

ah

that eye style huh

[lusty hazel]

holy shit i drew that just so i dont get banned

please dont try to help me

[grave nymph]

I feel like you’re suffering from my disease more than me, and I was the supposed origin of it, which is ironic

[lusty hazel]

uhhh i rarely draw chibi

[lusty hazel]

first stage of grief: denial

[onyx breach]

rly makes you think how strong your chibisease rly is, Shii

its mutating

[grave nymph]

Oi

that’s not my problem

they have that style wayyyy before that disease thing came to exist

[lusty hazel]

my disease came off easily unlike yours

assuming you mean me by saying "they" lol

[grave nymph]

this counters your statement

[grave nymph]

I always refer to people using “they”

[lusty hazel]

either use my name ayin or say he/him so i know who youre refering to

[grave nymph]

it’s easier for me this way :”D

it’s also a habit so uhh

[lusty hazel]

okie dokie

[dusky trail]

just say "that thing" next time

[lusty hazel]

i am a fish

[grave nymph]

o, maybe using “it” would be good

two letters only

[lament stump]

deviant art

i love deviant art

[hardy yew]

Can anyone give me character feedback, i dont want my char to look too much like a rita ripoff

[dusky trail]

what char?

[whole cloak]

sure

[dusky trail]

well she is hardly Rita rip off that for sure

[hardy yew]

Its just the scythe part thats similar right

[dusky trail]

lol

[whole cloak]

I don’t see much resemblance between her and rita

[dusky trail]

what is that scythe even made of anyway

[whole cloak]

other than the scythe and the fr inspiration

[hardy yew]

Ice

[dusky trail]

if anything it looks more like a magic wand created a blade form rather than an actual scythe

[hardy yew]

Well, its a staff

And the blade part just materializes when she needs to

[whole cloak]

shape looks like iris of helheim without the lantern

[hardy yew]

Yeah i took inspo from IoH

Forgot to mention she was also an inspo

[dusky trail]

the blade just look lack of deep so it may break if it hit something

[whole cloak]

I see the ||sushang|| hairstyle yea

[dusky trail]

other than that, i don't think there any problem with the char, not enough for anyone to even think she is simillar to Rita at least

[whole cloak]

yeah I don’t think anyone will look at your oc and think rita ripoff

if you didn’t say so I wouldn’t have noticed rita similarities other than the scythe

imo she’s closer to ||sushang|| than fr rita

[dusky trail]

meanwhile i just think about Genshin Kokomi

[hardy yew]

Its made of coalced crystals i guess, ice seems too fragile

[whole cloak]

maybe soulium ice?

[hardy yew]

I planned to make her a genshin oc but i feel like her Skills are too complicated?

[whole cloak]

or something similar to soulium in material

[whole cloak]

I think it’s just the scythe blade looking like it’s one paper-thin layer since it lacks those edges

[hardy yew]

Yeah

Im waaay too invested in her

I was imagining an intro video with music and stuff

[dusky trail]

well i see people make a whole manga to squeeze they char into that story's universe so nothing weird there

while i'm the type don't do a profile list but just showcase the OG slowly

that way i can just changed her setting if needed

[lament stump]

guys

it is time

to paint a portrait

:O

[dusky trail]

and which poor soul you gonna draw this time

[lone wagon]

You're gonna paint yourself aki?

[dusky trail]

is he gonna do one of those body paint so he can walk outside with shame?

[lone wagon]

Those people walk out with confidence

This person knows what they're doing

And they're doing it right

Seele is a beautiful work of art after all

[dusky trail]

wedding dress Seele when

[lone wagon]

I accepted this person so fast as my cadet after I saw they were a seele simp

Look at them creases in the clothes

[onyx breach]

how to spot fake seele simp step 1: pfp not seele

[lament stump]

I will try to yea

i like it more then line art i think

[lament stump]

well since it's an oc

idk

i just learned that oc's need a story to them

like tf

why can't you just look at my art and stfu

no, you wanna read a stupid story

[dusky trail]

not necessary

it just depend on what you using them for

[lament stump]

anyway it' time to get like 5 references slap them together and call it an oc

[dusky trail]

i literally made her because "my avatar is pretty old, should make a new one"

and made her because "maybe i should lewd my own char sometime"

[lament stump]

I'm not gonna do a full body

just shoulders

cuz i need to be more active on them socials

[dusky trail]

but make a whole body is so eaze~

[lament stump]

and I can't do that if it takes me 14 dyas to draw something

LMAO

read that comment

and his pfp hahahaha