#art-discussion-and-wip
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i think you end up shrink it... well just length up the base of them
try to look at the pic i put up there for the length
should be fine but now you still need to increase the finger size
since they look way smaller than the rest of her fingers now
ah, yeah. I was thinking her but my brain just didn't function
I’m gonna try my hardest to my my HoF batter then my HoV but idk if I can since my HoV is probably the best one I’ve done
Better*
@plain bane should be fine now
i feel that, my very first digital piece is still my best
meanwhile i got kicked out of Deviant Art so i lost most of my stuff, hoohoh
then try to move to tumblr but then... well you know what happen to tumblr
at least pixiv will always be there for me~
this was my first, colours are trash but i remember how hard i worked on it and overall it looks better than anything i do now which is really disappointing
while mine is just this
back when i still try out what style of color i want to use
My first was an attempt at hyperrealism on digital
It got to the point where I had so many layers with an already large canvas that is crashed
And wouldn't open ever again
every time i do realism i just do it all on one layer
back when i did stuff like this i didn't even do a sketch i just blocked everything in on one layer
oo
Also background isn’t mine
it from Nekopara isn't it
any advices?
I..
can't draw males
yet
so can't really help there sorry <-<;;
oh wow, my first digital drawing's wayyyyy back during 2019 lul
if you cant help just dont say anything 😛
either bring the palm higher to balance level of finger length or bring down the crevices of the fingers to make them longer
But then if I just post another thing or something here it might look that I'm ignoring people 
Right shoulder is non existent
doesnt rly help if what you say is still useless for the one needing help
hmm, thanks
its like running to an accident victim and saying i dont have a phone to call 911, sorry then just stares at them dying
🏃
Also
i kinda made it like that on purpose cause of the perspective, but ill see if i can make like theres a shoulder there
collarbones are usually like this, I think, so yeah, might be a shoulder problem or a collarbone placement problem or something
it looks fine to me tho...
considering shoulder and collarbone arent where they should be, it is
also, don't Male character usually have more muscles on the arms or something?
especially a character that murders people or something?
yae collarbone isn't alined with the sholders but idk anotemy isn't my thing
Depends on the body of the model
You can be skinny, muscular or fat
Kalpas looks maskular tho
yeah

i didnt really wanted to add that much and its honestly first time of me drawing a male
but ill add some
I don't think we even have better references for him
once i read Fat i for some reason didn't just imagon a rounf kalpas but a chic phoenix kalpas 
yeah took me a lot to find out how his hair work
we don't even have a 3d model
but theres an official chibi wallpaper of him so i looked at that to find out how his clothes work
Kalpas playable when?
lol wtf
it look so gay wtf
Bruh
we do?
ye
Aren't those in the files or something?
hes prolly doing the good ol take-a-shit squat
LMFAO
Can't you try to uh, fiddle with the files using a software that can view 3d models?
They are the same picture

is he gonna do the vodka dance as well?
Alright line art is done, I think
I probably missed something
I’ll cross that bridge when I get there
The sketch is nightmare material
I merged all sketch layer since the sketch itself usually has about 15-20 layers
Any feedback?
the rinkel on the uhhh wat r thy called....the fabrik on the arms.....it looks kinda wird

try looking up references this is a rather comen outfit
and the hands
the arms also rather bendy in that angle
try to not have the right arm completly stiff i mean the one going over the body
I can fix it with lasso
well you can fix it by change up the hem of the shirt
it is too center with cause the arms to look weird
like she about to swing her bag into your face
i don't eathe....
it is too on the side, make her look like she is twisting her hip, prepare to slap you
now i see it she about to bonk me with tat bag 

huh she a bit thin on the waist just sayin but dam tat ass
and saddy booba
Sketch be like
yae tat looks normal but considering her thin arms she kinda looks liuke me lol
she looks like an android went through battle and lost most of her outer skin
wow and i thot i had a messy work flow lol
It’s about 20 layers merged together because I have a layer cap of 72
I mean this is how my sketches look like
and yes i like to color them...and shad them....i don't like line art....
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it still looks good tho 😭
I draw on paper
so all my drawings r gone
I have like 4 drawings on digital
the one I sent included
u r noth the only one usualy i start a pice and never finish it
I have 9 unfinished pieces
i only draw tradsenaly in school no i don't go to art school i just draw during class
fine enough
wait the arms
Me too
wait leme show u how it could look beter if i don't fuck this up myself
okay
thanks
eat
something
even an apple
eat something
eat something yummy
u deserve it

what
I’ve never had that
bc
WHAT
UMM
Did someone @ me?
ok i think i just realised something the problem is't realy bad anotemy ok maybe it is but the pose looks very stiff as it is
I DONT KNOW WHAT UR SAYING
Yea
I’m very bad at anatomy
I’ve only been drawings for a couple of months
like in this style
IS TAKING 2 SHOts OF THAT GOOD OR BAD
SHOTS***
The shoulders are uneven and her back is awkwardly tilted backwards. Since I’m assuming the skirt is short, her waist is also a smidge high and her arms are too short
thanks 😻😻
sorry for sounding blunt! the eyes are really well done and I love the hair shape
Ok
😹😹
WHAT
I DONT KNOW
IS IT HONKAI
I DONT PLAY HONKAI THAT MUCH ANYMORE BUT THIS WA D HTE ONLY ACTIVE SERVER
I have hov and hor
I don’t know
I DONT LNOW
The black bg makes half of his body virtually invisible and sort of confusing, is this purposeful?
Yes trying to go for a shadow look
Like he’s part of darkness
Do any of youse know what series he’s from?
The proportions are good and the one thing is the hair isn’t shaded to the right direction as everything else (light from front)
Ah ok that makes sense.
no I don’t recognize him sorry
ikr
Thanks
By honestly I still think the HoV I did is better
alright imma call it a night, don’t want to go overboard and be Hangover in school
I can fix the hands later
good night 😴
ignore the emoji
I tried to make it less stiff ig?
retried again
why do the arms look so short still
Fate series, this is alter Saber male
make this longer
this is killing me
The shoulder closest to us is too close to the neck, the make it less stiff try moving it more to our right
Move the hands and bags down
i tryed to redraw it to se wat i would have done and i think i only made it worst 
I’ve made another layer with a longer Sword handle so it’s more accurate, it a bit rough but tell me if you think the loner sword handle is better or the shorter one
pls color or hide her eyes so she doesn't look like she about to die~~
In general the sword is a lot skinnier and not as bulky
I will when I get around to it
Might actually redo the sword so it’s deeper in the ground and left hand is in the herrscher cords and her right hand is just at the pommel
any crits
original by kenji_893 on twitter
why are his 2 fingers merged together
they are sticking to each other
you could just have one arm shielding her face like someone splashing water at her
why is her bow on top of the hair?
I'll fix that and consider not drawing at 1am anymore
not under

need to lengthen waist and make her face less circle
as for shading style, just try thing out and see how it go
the easiest shade you can do is cell shading
better? idk what you mean by "lengthen waist", can you give an example?
well as she is right now, she would have no ribs
just her chest connect to her waist
Is it looking good so far?
so your draw just look like she missing the part between her boobs and her bulley button there
looks scuffed because i drew everything on the same layer and just had to rely on selection tool
oke wait
and make the head smaller
why you so slow~ =3=
coz im binging netflix and glancing at my discord is not my top priority rn
its okay as long we patch the anatomy correctly
Can i help too? (If thats ok)
it looks the same.
extreme art discussion
elbow is in line with belly button and forearm is as long as the upper arm. Keeping that in mind should help with the arm length. If your style is short bodies go for it but if you're trying to anatomically correct either make the head much smaller and lengthen the torso slightly or lengthen the torso by quite a bit
to make arm length a little easier because i forgot to add this, the wrist is in line with the groin
and the elbow is in line with the ribs
the right arm as it is now the hand would dig right in her hip
do i make the right hand float on her skirt then
Her dress goes out pretty high but that’s not where her waist is in the screenshot
Idk i felt like she had too much thigh and it didnt match up with her head to hand
Wait
what is anatomy
you gonna need to shrink her head
yes
Give her ribs
ya but if he going for normal body size then it would be really odd...
just remember to make the anatomy of the face proper as well as the body itself
yup very odd
Try to not draw in the bust and just make a torso without bust and add the bust later to get the perspective right
not really, a lot of artists draw head much larger and it looks great
was trying to make her dress realllyyy wavy + puffy if that gives you an idea
The puffy dress does not make her waist higher?
The dress is separate from her body
The dress can go out high but the hips don’t need to be moved
Idk if this makes sense sorry
Inthink this is slightly better, perphaps actually lengthen her waist and correct her head
there still need a decent distance for her rib
though her leg shouldn't be merge to her hip like that too
hos, what are you going for? Do you want the drawing to be heavily stylized or realistic?
heavily stylized
idk wtf i'm supposed to do with her head
i shrinked it like 4 times already
if you like it big keep it big. Since its stylized then its your style and preference
thanks for the reference
i feel theres something off about her legs but i cant put my finger on it
If you want more expression then like this sort of
Red is the puffy dress
the legs are slightly off because the biggest curve of the hip is where the femur connects to the pelvis
I think it’s just her thigh on our right bulging too much
Ok pepehands
Idk
I need to correct chest part
But i dont have a clear idea
so
Im confused
i don't think it would be much different so it is your choice
So i should leave it?
Leave it as it is, it looks better that way.
just go for it, if it off, you can always erase it after
Alright! Thankyou
the wonderful thing about digital is you can just throw it in different layer
if it look bad to you, you can just erase it
This look good so far
It more challenging when only working with single layer
Black Rock Shooter OVA Bonus Extra. Huke Speed Drawing of the Black Rock Shooter Cast.
Black Rock Shooter
Dead Master
Black Gold Saw
Strength
this is the thing always amaze me about painting style
you just watch him transform a blob into that
ah~ if only they bring back Black Rock Shooter and give it a game like Honkai
Yeah i never say it impossible, but it is a challenge
Because I used to draw traditional before
How does this shading style look?
I haven't done the shading that's supposed to be at the centre of the character yet
hard to say with only the hair
I'm considering something more basic
how did you color it to even make it took 2 hours lol
well
i tried using multiply
on my line art layer
i mean i didn't try i used it
and FOR SOME REASON
my lines took some ew colors and sometimes the line art took a hair color instead of skind color
it was all just one big mess...
did you separated the hair and skin layer from the start then?
or just simple make new layer, clip it to lineart layer
then you can do whatever you want without it damage the base lineart
her right side of the chin took a dark color cuz of the hair
and i didn't want that
it looked wierd
so i hade to be super fucking cerful about not going over the line
i could've dione this but well... i didn't
wait... how did you color then?
why not just use magic tool and dump bucket on it
the just filled what is missing
idk man.. i did use bucket but lines had a weird color
but now i know
to never ever use multiply on my line art layer
okay
i have hair and thigs color layer cuz for some reason thigs didn't want to be colored on the skin layer
magic wand/bucket usually leaves a small pocket of white stuff under the color and lineart
yeah it leaves that part transparent
then you probably should adjust the detective mode
cause it cant select inside the lineart to make it look ok
it also easier if you put a dark color in the background to make it easier to see
yea it was so hard to see the skin color now that i think about it
or dont and set your program to light mode too 😠
also, using huge canvas make it quite easy for bucket to fill properly too ufufufuf
and I imagine that white stuff would be seen easier with a darker bc
yeah but you can also fill the gaps easier
you do the lineart on that bg too?
you did 2 poses in the same drawing damn you are so not lazy
of course not
also damn these muscles seccs
i like rib~
nono I get it 😔
i usually just use black for lineart then put layer on top of it if i want to change color
ic
I do that too, lately I've made played around with making the lineart layer multiply too
i have Clip too but the pen just doesn't feel the same
so i mostly use Clip for backgroudn stuff
yeah sai stabilizer is smth else
it's almost hard to move to other programs after drawing in it
ya
but I can't get used to it again cause it doesnt have scrubby zoom
Alright I’ve Redone the sword so it’s a lot bigger
Even besides all those details i can't help but to notice that the chin or the face looks a little misplaced
Idk if it's just me who sees it tho
I shouldn’t leave my phone unlocked in school with discord open
what should be fixed? also where should i put the shadows on the right side of the clothes
The face seems uneven and the chin is asymmetrical, is the head on an angle?
Also it looks like you squashed the right side of her head (her right, our left) so maybe move the gold thingy a bit closer to the corner
Otherwise it looks good! The shadows are in the right place on the clothes, maybe make the shadow a bit bigger
its supposed to be at an angle, though i have no clue what im doing wrong

oh shit i just realized i shouldve probably added a shadow under the head

Try adding a centerline maybe? to sort of make it clearer while drawing
U guys use a lot of layers
@-@
for the life of me this always looks a little off pls help
I haven’t tried this angle in a long time
yup
I’m almost done with the lineart oh my god
800?/?/?//?/
but it’s definitely in the hundreds
yeah
a 12 frame 1 second animation
having no onion skin is pain you know? :”D
How many seconds was it
In total?
Woah
CSP can only allow up to 2 seconds of animation if you only have PRO
Animation is hard 😭
especially if you have no onion skin lul
Rip
like so~~?
but eye usually the part where artist can be more "creative" so just try out various thing you want until you settle on one

anything i should change? something still looks a little off
eyes supposed to be closed (realized this after i tried to draw an eye for a few minutes
)
hard to say with just that but if you aim for chibi anyway, you don't have to think too much
just go nut
otherwise, it mainly the chin that bother me
but it only because the line rather clunky
yeah the stabilizer wasnt working right 
my dumb ass just realizing she has no eyebrows
any better?
my hands are dying because the weather is so hot 
her left cheek still feel like it drag down too much
you could just extend the hair bun...? or what ever it call a bit longer

maybe make the eyes bigger and a little closer hahah
chibi style can be use more freely anyway
i suggest you make your lines thicker, thick lines goes well with chibi artstyle
yeah
makes the lineart more visible or something
if you plan on making it an emote then you have to have thick lines so it’ll be visible when it’s smaller
thicc
not yet final lol 
not sure why japan likes drawing them with thigh gap, in reality those look ugly and can be rarely seen in a woman unless theyre very skinny
coz the thighs' fat usually fill up that gap

either thigh fat fill the gap or the shorts/skirts cover it up
and well, art is always there to draw something you don't normally see anyway
like Niko Tama
who always draw nip so hard they always look like it can piece through clothe
even more fun if you check his old stuff, they all have normal nip but then they keep increasing in size over the year
the artist probably want to set it as his trademark
Guess that's one way to slap "hey I draw uniquely " to the viewers
oh
and then we have One Piece's author
always draw the female char with extreme thin waist
there also kawakami masaki or Houtengeki that love draw girl with wide hip and thick butt
so ya, while some draw more closer to how real body work, there are plenty draw them in "unique" way because that is what look good for them
yeah im planning to fix that when i render it, thanks for pointing it out
well another fix would be to make the crotch wrinkle on the right left head down instead of up
oh okay got it, thank you
because you draw those part so high up, it created a kind of illusion of something really saggy in there
oh yeah it does lol no wonder it looks kinda off in that part
I noticed a big mistake but if no one notices then it’s A ok
See no one notices it so it’s A ok and I’ll fix it when grade 12 isn’t squeezing the life out of me with 6 assessments due this week alone
currently editing a guide, I'll try to view it on phone when I'm finish lul
You know the way I’ve positioned her and the sword either way I’ll be a awkward, I just tried to fix it and yah Another problem came up when I did
:□
I hated high chool so much
at least you guys are almost done with it. It gets better
Its been a long time since i draw
that sounds like fun
The eyes are too closed too each other?
Hahahaha, I don’t need energy drinks to get my heart rate up anymore, school is doing a better job at it
you're saying that meanwhile other ppl I know are saying that after hs is when the real pain begins 
No
The nose are too high?
I already tried fixing the mistake but it leads to another mistake similar to the first
True, i remember having to get constant extensions on assignments in hs
its gets better because you have more freedom and can leave class without having the teacher up your ass
honestly kind of bs since you can get extensions on everything in the real world and uni
thats why hs is so stupid
they pretend this is the way the real world works when it doesn
t
yeah its pretty dumb
Mind an ATAR is valid for a year, if you don’t get anywhere within that year you just wasted a lot of time
gr 12 I missed half of the school days and had to completely change what i was going to go into which was dance but a car crash in gr 11 fucked my back up so i had to take gr 10 and gr 11 art courses in gr12
thats terrible
one year my hs had a fire over christmas break took over a month for us to go back so we ended really awkwardly
Oh btw the mistake was the sword hand guard, if id flipped it id have to redo the arm but because I really don’t want to do that I’ll just say her arm is in the little Gap between the hand guard and handle, it’s a bit awkward but it saves me the trouble of another redesign
Ah
This is me duplicating it onto another file trying to find a solution
o
fumo
The only way I see on solving the mistake and that’s making the sword thinner and just in general a bit smaller
but then you'd be fiddling around the sword's size and it won't be the same like the original
Actually I think I may have found a way I’ll try it later on and see if it works
can't wait to see your solution then 
seele modeling progress
hair is always the most difficult and time consuming but at least my drawing works fine I guess..
thank u~
Fremy!
Rokka no Yuusha was great
I remember whatching all of it staight after seeing the first episode
My current WIP for the contest, wanted to show a possible future where Kiana also became a teacher after the main story
Might make the room messier since I imagine Kiana wouldn't be able to keep it clean 🤣
just kevin things 
Alright I’m done, solution is done it’s a bit rough but I’ll fix that later
oooo
It’s less detailed but at least it makes sense with the sword design
yeah, it does
at least move the "no steal" out of her face first
it is hard to compare when one of them have something block off
Yeah gimme a sec
but i would say, go with half half
first one fits more with the way you coloured the background but darkening and giving the hair a rim light would make it fit the lighting
if the sunset is behind her then ya, as Saiph said, it would be like the first one
but that would also cause a more similar dark hair on her left side
as her head and arm would block off the light
thoughg the second one is a bit too dark
because even your draw doesn't want you to steal it
it is gaining sentience, time to delete it
oh you mean bald spot
fine enough
anyway, just shade the rest of her too then ask us again
it is easier to see the whole thing than just one spot
I love seeing honkai impact ads, those practically ever show up for me
I either get honkai ads or ads trying to sell me houses 
then time to buy a house in honkai ver
cool concept
The manga is not finished either?
as far as i know the next LN wasn't released (even after 10th anniversary)
guys why do my lines almost look like they are made out of pixels when i zoom in a little bit, ppl on yt have nice and smooth lines\
probably canvas size
I thought it was resolution
Usually canvas size
I use A4 for anything important
I then go 350+ dpi for anything merch wise
what do you use?
Clip Studio paint
the smaller your canvas the less you can zoom in without quality loss
ohh
oh thanks
3k x 3k or 4k x 4k pretty much my base canvas size
i have a rly small tablet so big canvas are hard to draw on
thats a lot wow
small table is not really matter
you only have to increase your pen size
i usually use size 8-9
the size is technically the same as smaller sizes just has higher res
I can't go to 10k by 10k like i do on pc
but like if i draw on a big canvas and yous moste of it I'll have some very big lines that are very hard to draw just from your wrist
Damn never had to go that big before
on ibispaint your ipad dies after going over 100 at 2000x2000
then it becomes hard to cennect the lines
its something you will get the hang of as you practice
idk mabye it's a me problem
what pen size you usually use then
I'll start using bigger ones soon as possible
i rly don't know cuz I switch em a lot
Might be good to learn to draw without zooming in for a bit on a larger canvas
its p hard to do that
you don't have to use big ones. My sketch pen for my 10k by 10k canvas is only size 17
Not saying never zoom in when drawing, just a little bit of practice on it lmao
i did 7 for body and 4 for the face
17 is pretty big too =3=
oooh thats so cute
its very small for this canvas size
it was a g pen so it had pen pressure
and that is why i say to put some dark background
because my eyes i burning staring at that right now
1 second
lmaoo
well UMMMMM
I'm glad I'm not the only one that draws on a gray surface XD
lol
you can just make a new layer, set it in the bottom and throw the bucket at it
I SWEAR THE FACE LOOKS GREAT
WELL NOW SHE HAS NO HAIR
ohh
try gray-ish purple
you can use something different than the color you use lol
and airbrush the bottom sides with black
One of Us
Grayish backgrounds are /;w;/
a bit too bright, it not gonna feel good if you look at it when you draw
it will mess your eyes up
too vibrant id say haha
i bucketed color white on hair layer
now i turned it bac to pink
but um
now the lines are fucked cuz of multiply layer on my line art
CTRL+Z
ya just ctrl z it
oh no way that exists?
I CAN'TTTT
Megapensive
Okay what you can do is, select all the pink and delete it.
Then you can colour layer 8 to a different colour which will give the hair it's freedom
Pain
redraw time
a good neutral background for colours is a mid tone grey
nooooooooooo
i think he only just notice he bucket the wrong later today
are you telling me that you have never CTRL+Z ed anything?
and he did that sometime ago
HOLY
Ikr?
now it is easier to see all the odd spot there
Okay nice job, you'll be able to fill in the spots that have been left out on the hair 👍
thank god
after every line I use ctrl z
you do have pretty nice liness
thanks
I would say I'm good or something but that drawing took me like 20h total and it's not even done
I just redo untill I'm setisfied
just like my discord status says :)
thats a lot of determination omg
meanwhile i just stuck on what size of boobs i want my OC to have
and also shikniful helped me soooo much with this drawing
LMAOOO
my oh my
use your size :)
mine is too thick and long
GET SOME HOLY WATER
never knew boobs were long
Sad
oh well, i just gonna do medium size for now
do you guys have any favorite artists?
Mines LAM
i just started art so I don't know any artists except ppl in here
almost 2
oooh that really good
hmmm
i do however now SomeNormalArtist, he makes yt vids so I now him
@/hitsukuya perhaps
he helped me a lot
that remind me
https://twitter.com/hitsukuya this person
I draw stuff!!
✉️ moehitsu2@gmail.com
▶︎ PIXIV http://pixiv.me/hitsukuya
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LOOK AT THIS MY EYES
iine
this on the other hand doesn't look that real and is somehow so good
ALSO LOOK AT THIS ONE
that one looks like it hase some kind of texture on it, loooks very nice
yess
I love the lighting so much on that
the composition , and the rendering is just amazing
before I started art i never noticed the bg that much and now I appriciate it cuz i know how hard that bg must have been
thoes clouds look so good damn good
thats really niceee
how do they make it looks so real like, it's almost as it's a figure sitting at my desk, thoes colors are something else
especially that eye color
looks so real
Yup
OK THIS what do yall think of this
They're also one of the top artists I admire
YESS
One thing I always want to improve on is lighting and backgrounds atm
backgrounds are pretty hard
yep
Backgrounds can be hard but my word are they satisfying
a very underrated artist that I also follow is Janyhero-sensei https://twitter.com/Janyhero
P͟i͟x͟i͟v͟:͟ janyhero
https://t.co/rbukAOUr3f
F͟a͟n͟b͟o͟x͟:͟ ͟ https://t.co/fyyrF62VWH
Gumroad:
https://t.co/tl5JqxYMZU
Commission Sheet:
https://t.co/PWh47OwYvr
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they do some great azur lane art
like this one
Ooooooooooohhh
https://twitter.com/Janyhero/status/1427530932890701825?s=20 here's the gif version of the art btw
Here's the process of the art!
#AzurLane #Yostar #AzurLane3rdAnniv https://t.co/wodLXTO26u
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they said that they use 3d stuffs for the bg
I love that
Always looked up to the Azur Lane artists
i can't say i like the game but ya Azur Lane has a lot of good art
yup
Yeah people use Blender or premade 3D resources for backgrounds which is really helpful
they splurge money into their art
https://twitter.com/abara/status/1428751079756296197?s=20 Abara-sensei also have a very unique style, be it digital or traditional
it looks so fluffy
ooooh
Shunin also seem to gaining popularity lately
them colors
link?
The colours there are really well used
ah there we go https://twitter.com/_himehajime
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フリーになりまして よろしくね
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A great artist!
Honestly
欲望の渦でかき乱せ!
PC向けハルウラレ系RPG『ドーナドーナ いっしょにわるいことをしよう』
2020年11月27日発売
18歳未満購入禁止
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http://www.alicesoft.com/dohnadohna/
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メインテーマ『ドーナドーナのうた』
作詞:仲村芽衣子
作曲:水夏える
歌:月乃
サントラ試聴
https://youtu.be/nW-kTpRdQ64
well his game is quite blow up anyway
Alicesoft's games have a lot of cool artist
They certainly do
oh yea NABIII do any of you know nabi
I think finding a unique style would be hard
ah
?
you sure like a lot of shoujo style huh?
I like that kind of shading
how do you even fing your own style?
the shading is pure anime
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/88070709 I also found this earlier
and gosh the colors man
it just comes out by itself ig
yeah
shoujo style always have some amazing hair style
the detail always so overkill
those shadings too
NO WAY THATS SO COOL
Isn't it?!?!
oh nice
so much to learn
aA
her body looks rather square-ish
yeah
can't redline since have to go to sleep
her shoulders look weird imo
neck feels quite short, maybe just me
mm
ah
might be because of shoulders
oohhh
2
idk if you can see the difference
2
2
slight color difference
LMAO

2 just amkes the eyes pop
2 for me
I meant 2 ye
Sticking with 2
well go for 1 if that what you like
oh yea critique pleasee
so her eyes are less visible cuz it's like dark or something
but idk if I can make her seem like it's dark outside so...
Perhaps relax the pinky slightly
alr thank youu
just stuff all layers into one folder
put a multiply layer on top of that layer
then try out various color to make it look darker
see which one you like
Also on the top shirt on Mumei's left side, I would recommend sliding it back towards her arm to more to give a more rounded shape
alr I'll do that when I finish shading the hair
ohhh thank youu
the dagger also too center
like if she stand up, it would be in front of her crotch
and last one
these 2 are good and know how to point out your mistakes but imo it looks very nice :)
so if you try to pull the dagger out, her hand gonna smash her boobs
ohh i didnt think of that ty
LMAO
first glare, the gun has no trigger
I'll respond, in a bit, just in a meeting
I feel like the eyes don’t match up with the face
oh yea lmaoo
too slanted or the eues just dont match?
it shoots based on emotions
likely because her face looks like it is melt to one side
Yep
ohh yea i see it now
just cut it in half like this and you can see her right eye is drift away there
the left cheek and right cheek also rather different
oh and
just look at the ear between the left and right
Okay I would raise the stock of the gun a little and personal preference would be to make the large a bit larger
Shading is fine 👍
okayy thank good
hands look very small compared to her body and face imo
also, I suggest flipping the canvas often
can see where your mistakes are at
It kinda looks like her eyes are falling off her face
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