#art-discussion-and-wip

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dusky trail
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the base usually longer than the middle and the tip

plain bane
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Hands are literally the spawn of Satan.

dusky trail
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i think you end up shrink it... well just length up the base of them

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try to look at the pic i put up there for the length

plain bane
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Now it just looks like she's broken them

dusky trail
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should be fine but now you still need to increase the finger size

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since they look way smaller than the rest of her fingers now

plain bane
shadow nebula
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ah, yeah. I was thinking her but my brain just didn't function

safe falcon
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I’m gonna try my hardest to my my HoF batter then my HoV but idk if I can since my HoV is probably the best one I’ve done

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Better*

dusky trail
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@plain bane should be fine now

shadow nebula
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i feel that, my very first digital piece is still my best

plain bane
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I lost my first LiliSip

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Corrupted file

dusky trail
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meanwhile i got kicked out of Deviant Art so i lost most of my stuff, hoohoh

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then try to move to tumblr but then... well you know what happen to tumblr

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at least pixiv will always be there for me~

shadow nebula
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this was my first, colours are trash but i remember how hard i worked on it and overall it looks better than anything i do now which is really disappointing

dusky trail
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while mine is just this

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back when i still try out what style of color i want to use

plain bane
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My first was an attempt at hyperrealism on digital

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It got to the point where I had so many layers with an already large canvas that is crashed

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And wouldn't open ever again

shadow nebula
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every time i do realism i just do it all on one layer

plain bane
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I struggle doing that

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Even when I draw kn paper I treat it like its layered

shadow nebula
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back when i did stuff like this i didn't even do a sketch i just blocked everything in on one layer

grave nymph
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oo

safe falcon
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Also background isn’t mine

dusky trail
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it from Nekopara isn't it

prime kelp
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any advices?

grave nymph
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I..

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can't draw males

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yet

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so can't really help there sorry <-<;;

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oh wow, my first digital drawing's wayyyyy back during 2019 lul

potent mason
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if you cant help just dont say anything 😛

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either bring the palm higher to balance level of finger length or bring down the crevices of the fingers to make them longer

grave nymph
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But then if I just post another thing or something here it might look that I'm ignoring people LiliSweat

ocean flower
potent mason
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doesnt rly help if what you say is still useless for the one needing help

potent mason
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its like running to an accident victim and saying i dont have a phone to call 911, sorry then just stares at them dying

grave nymph
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🏃

ocean flower
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Also

prime kelp
ocean flower
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The collar bone is too high

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Or shoulders are too low

prime kelp
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its probably about the shoulder

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thanks

grave nymph
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collarbones are usually like this, I think, so yeah, might be a shoulder problem or a collarbone placement problem or something

potent mason
jolly galleon
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it looks fine to me tho...

potent mason
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considering shoulder and collarbone arent where they should be, it is

grave nymph
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also, don't Male character usually have more muscles on the arms or something?

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especially a character that murders people or something?

jolly galleon
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yae collarbone isn't alined with the sholders but idk anotemy isn't my thingTeriDerp

ocean flower
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You can be skinny, muscular or fat

jolly galleon
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Kalpas looks maskular tho

grave nymph
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yeah

ocean flower
prime kelp
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but ill add some

ocean flower
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Never watched kalpas without shirt

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So I can't say anything

grave nymph
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I don't think we even have better references for him

jolly galleon
prime kelp
grave nymph
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we don't even have a 3d model

jolly galleon
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3D Kalpas when?

prime kelp
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but theres an official chibi wallpaper of him so i looked at that to find out how his clothes work

ocean flower
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Kalpas playable when?

jolly galleon
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Su body pillow when?

prime kelp
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kinda fucked up

jolly galleon
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lol wtf

potent mason
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it look so gay wtf

ocean flower
grave nymph
prime kelp
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ye

ocean flower
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Why squatting

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Lmao

grave nymph
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Aren't those in the files or something?

potent mason
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hes prolly doing the good ol take-a-shit squat

prime kelp
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LMFAO

grave nymph
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Can't you try to uh, fiddle with the files using a software that can view 3d models?

ocean flower
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Tell me a reason why they made a squatting position

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Lmao

grave nymph
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yakuza

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perhaps

ocean flower
grave nymph
potent mason
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is he gonna do the vodka dance as well?

safe falcon
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Alright line art is done, I think

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I probably missed something

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I’ll cross that bridge when I get there

jolly galleon
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how?????

safe falcon
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The sketch is nightmare material

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I merged all sketch layer since the sketch itself usually has about 15-20 layers

fiery lantern
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Any feedback?

jolly galleon
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the rinkel on the uhhh wat r thy called....the fabrik on the arms.....it looks kinda wird

fiery lantern
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yea

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the clothing folds

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I rushed that

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I’m gonna change it

jolly galleon
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try looking up references this is a rather comen outfit

fiery lantern
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thanks

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yea

jolly galleon
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and the hands

dusky trail
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the arms also rather bendy in that angle

fiery lantern
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the hands aren’t even effort

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yea the bendy arms are a habit 😞

jolly galleon
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try to not have the right arm completly stiff i mean the one going over the body

fiery lantern
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I can fix it with lasso

dusky trail
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well you can fix it by change up the hem of the shirt

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it is too center with cause the arms to look weird

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like she about to swing her bag into your face

fiery lantern
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wait

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what

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I don’t

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understand

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😞

jolly galleon
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i don't eathe....

dusky trail
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=3=

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sec

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this here

fiery lantern
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oh

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ohhh

dusky trail
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it is too on the side, make her look like she is twisting her hip, prepare to slap you

jolly galleon
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now i see it she about to bonk me with tat bag TeriChrist

dusky trail
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like so

jolly galleon
fiery lantern
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I’m very bad at anatomy

jolly galleon
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huh she a bit thin on the waist just sayin but dam tat ass

dusky trail
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and saddy booba

jolly galleon
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she very thin in generall so her thicc thighs realy stick out

fiery lantern
safe falcon
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Sketch be like

jolly galleon
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yae tat looks normal but considering her thin arms she kinda looks liuke me lol

fiery lantern
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WTF

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SO DETAILED

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😻😻

dusky trail
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she looks like an android went through battle and lost most of her outer skin

jolly galleon
safe falcon
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It’s about 20 layers merged together because I have a layer cap of 72

jolly galleon
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I mean this is how my sketches look like

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and yes i like to color them...and shad them....i don't like line art....

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e

fiery lantern
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it still looks good tho 😭

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I draw on paper

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so all my drawings r gone

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I have like 4 drawings on digital

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the one I sent included

jolly galleon
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u r noth the only one usualy i start a pice and never finish it

safe falcon
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I have 9 unfinished pieces

fiery lantern
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what about now

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any advice is appreciated

jolly galleon
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i only draw tradsenaly in school no i don't go to art school i just draw during class

dusky trail
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fine enough

fiery lantern
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thanks

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very big halo

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HELP

jolly galleon
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wait the arms

fiery lantern
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yea

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I hate drawings arms

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so much

safe falcon
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Me too

jolly galleon
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wait leme show u how it could look beter if i don't fuck this up myself

fiery lantern
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okay

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thanks

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eat

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something

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even an apple

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eat something

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eat something yummy

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u deserve it

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what

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I’ve never had that

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bc

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WHAT

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UMM

whole cloak
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Did someone @ me?

jolly galleon
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ok i think i just realised something the problem is't realy bad anotemy ok maybe it is but the pose looks very stiff as it is

fiery lantern
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I DONT KNOW WHAT UR SAYING

fiery lantern
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I’m very bad at anatomy

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I’ve only been drawings for a couple of months

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like in this style

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IS TAKING 2 SHOts OF THAT GOOD OR BAD

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SHOTS***

whole cloak
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The shoulders are uneven and her back is awkwardly tilted backwards. Since I’m assuming the skirt is short, her waist is also a smidge high and her arms are too short

fiery lantern
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thanks 😻😻

whole cloak
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sorry for sounding blunt! the eyes are really well done and I love the hair shape

fiery lantern
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oh

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I’m

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like

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way under

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age

safe falcon
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Ok

fiery lantern
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😹😹

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WHAT

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I DONT KNOW

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IS IT HONKAI

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I DONT PLAY HONKAI THAT MUCH ANYMORE BUT THIS WA D HTE ONLY ACTIVE SERVER

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I have hov and hor

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I don’t know

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I DONT LNOW

whole cloak
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The black bg makes half of his body virtually invisible and sort of confusing, is this purposeful?

safe falcon
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Like he’s part of darkness

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Do any of youse know what series he’s from?

whole cloak
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The proportions are good and the one thing is the hair isn’t shaded to the right direction as everything else (light from front)

whole cloak
fiery lantern
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how did u misspell both 😭

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I have no idea

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what

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Series

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ur talking ab

whole cloak
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Oh that’s really impressive

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the art I mean lol

fiery lantern
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ikr

safe falcon
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Thanks

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By honestly I still think the HoV I did is better

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alright imma call it a night, don’t want to go overboard and be Hangover in school

fiery lantern
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I can fix the hands later

fiery lantern
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ignore the emoji

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I tried to make it less stiff ig?

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retried again

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why do the arms look so short still

safe falcon
fiery lantern
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oh

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Fate was too long for me

potent mason
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make this longer

jolly galleon
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this is killing me

whole cloak
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The shoulder closest to us is too close to the neck, the make it less stiff try moving it more to our right

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Move the hands and bags down

jolly galleon
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i tryed to redraw it to se wat i would have done and i think i only made it worst HimekoDead

safe falcon
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I’ve made another layer with a longer Sword handle so it’s more accurate, it a bit rough but tell me if you think the loner sword handle is better or the shorter one

dusky trail
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pls color or hide her eyes so she doesn't look like she about to die~~

safe falcon
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In general the sword is a lot skinnier and not as bulky

safe falcon
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Might actually redo the sword so it’s deeper in the ground and left hand is in the herrscher cords and her right hand is just at the pommel

lusty hazel
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any crits

tacit raven
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original by kenji_893 on twitter

plain bane
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What sorta shading style should I do for her?

lament stump
tacit raven
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they are sticking to each other

dusky trail
dusky trail
plain bane
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Wdym?

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Oh

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Ah

dusky trail
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the collar bow one ya

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the hair should be on top of it

plain bane
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I'll fix that and consider not drawing at 1am anymore

dusky trail
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not under

plain bane
potent mason
dusky trail
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as for shading style, just try thing out and see how it go

potent mason
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the easiest shade you can do is cell shading

lusty hazel
dusky trail
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well as she is right now, she would have no ribs

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just her chest connect to her waist

hardy yew
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Is it looking good so far?

dusky trail
plain bane
dusky trail
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so your draw just look like she missing the part between her boobs and her bulley button there

lusty hazel
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looks scuffed because i drew everything on the same layer and just had to rely on selection tool

dusky trail
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@lusty hazel something like this

lusty hazel
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oke wait

dusky trail
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s for the arms, how about something like this

potent mason
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and make the head smaller

dusky trail
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why you so slow~ =3=

potent mason
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coz im binging netflix and glancing at my discord is not my top priority rn

lusty hazel
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was planning to do smth like this

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not sure if thats okay or no

potent mason
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its okay as long we patch the anatomy correctly

hardy yew
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Can i help too? (If thats ok)

lusty hazel
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sure

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harsh comments are fine

hardy yew
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Nah im not like that

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Im constructive

dusky trail
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ya the arm would be too long with the old body

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feel like it may reach the knee

lusty hazel
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it looks the same.
extreme art discussion

shadow nebula
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elbow is in line with belly button and forearm is as long as the upper arm. Keeping that in mind should help with the arm length. If your style is short bodies go for it but if you're trying to anatomically correct either make the head much smaller and lengthen the torso slightly or lengthen the torso by quite a bit

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to make arm length a little easier because i forgot to add this, the wrist is in line with the groin

potent mason
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and the elbow is in line with the ribs

dusky trail
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the right arm as it is now the hand would dig right in her hip

lusty hazel
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do i make the right hand float on her skirt then

dusky trail
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you just have to raise the arm higher

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that will increase the distance to the hip

whole cloak
hardy yew
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Idk i felt like she had too much thigh and it didnt match up with her head to hand

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Wait

lusty hazel
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what is anatomy

dusky trail
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you gonna need to shrink her head

potent mason
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yes

lusty hazel
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again 🪦

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let me fix her neck real quick

shadow nebula
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head size for anime art is preference

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so if you like it big keep it big

whole cloak
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Give her ribs

dusky trail
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ya but if he going for normal body size then it would be really odd...

shadow nebula
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just remember to make the anatomy of the face proper as well as the body itself

potent mason
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yup very odd

whole cloak
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Try to not draw in the bust and just make a torso without bust and add the bust later to get the perspective right

shadow nebula
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not really, a lot of artists draw head much larger and it looks great

lusty hazel
whole cloak
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The puffy dress does not make her waist higher?

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The dress is separate from her body

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The dress can go out high but the hips don’t need to be moved

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Idk if this makes sense sorry

hardy yew
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Inthink this is slightly better, perphaps actually lengthen her waist and correct her head

dusky trail
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there still need a decent distance for her rib

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though her leg shouldn't be merge to her hip like that too

shadow nebula
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hos, what are you going for? Do you want the drawing to be heavily stylized or realistic?

lusty hazel
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heavily stylized

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idk wtf i'm supposed to do with her head

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i shrinked it like 4 times already

shadow nebula
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if you like it big keep it big. Since its stylized then its your style and preference

whole cloak
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I was thinking this

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the head size the way it is is good

lusty hazel
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thanks for the reference

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i feel theres something off about her legs but i cant put my finger on it

whole cloak
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If you want more expression then like this sort of
Red is the puffy dress

shadow nebula
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the legs are slightly off because the biggest curve of the hip is where the femur connects to the pelvis

whole cloak
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I think it’s just her thigh on our right bulging too much

hardy yew
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Ok pepehands

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Idk

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I need to correct chest part

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But i dont have a clear idea

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so

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Im confused

lusty hazel
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rushed

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ok ill continue my amazing journey of art tmr

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tired

plain bane
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Would it look better with her hair behind her?

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Or should I leave it as is?

dusky trail
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i don't think it would be much different so it is your choice

plain bane
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So i should leave it?

twin knot
dusky trail
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just go for it, if it off, you can always erase it after

plain bane
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Alright! Thankyou

dusky trail
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the wonderful thing about digital is you can just throw it in different layer

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if it look bad to you, you can just erase it

plain bane
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Yeah

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When I draw traditionally i feel weird now

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I have to pay attention alot

frank sundial
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It more challenging when only working with single layer

dusky trail
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this is the thing always amaze me about painting style

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you just watch him transform a blob into that

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ah~ if only they bring back Black Rock Shooter and give it a game like Honkai

frank sundial
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Yeah i never say it impossible, but it is a challenge

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Because I used to draw traditional before

plain bane
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How does this shading style look?

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I haven't done the shading that's supposed to be at the centre of the character yet

dusky trail
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hard to say with only the hair

plain bane
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I'm considering something more basic

lament stump
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so adding base colors took me 2h

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i wonder how much will the shading take then

dusky trail
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how did you color it to even make it took 2 hours lol

lament stump
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well

prime kelp
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it took you that long?

lament stump
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i tried using multiply

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on my line art layer

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i mean i didn't try i used it

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and FOR SOME REASON

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my lines took some ew colors and sometimes the line art took a hair color instead of skind color

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it was all just one big mess...

dusky trail
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did you separated the hair and skin layer from the start then?

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or just simple make new layer, clip it to lineart layer

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then you can do whatever you want without it damage the base lineart

lament stump
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her right side of the chin took a dark color cuz of the hair

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and i didn't want that

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it looked wierd

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so i hade to be super fucking cerful about not going over the line

lament stump
dusky trail
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why not just use magic tool and dump bucket on it

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the just filled what is missing

lament stump
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idk man.. i did use bucket but lines had a weird color

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but now i know

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to never ever use multiply on my line art layer

dusky trail
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can you show me the layer set up then

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it is hard to imagine how you color

lament stump
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okay

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i have hair and thigs color layer cuz for some reason thigs didn't want to be colored on the skin layer

supple sorrel
lament stump
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of white stuff

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got it

supple sorrel
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yeah it leaves that part transparent

dusky trail
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then you probably should adjust the detective mode

supple sorrel
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cause it cant select inside the lineart to make it look ok

dusky trail
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it also easier if you put a dark color in the background to make it easier to see

lament stump
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yea it was so hard to see the skin color now that i think about it

supple sorrel
dusky trail
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also, using huge canvas make it quite easy for bucket to fill properly too ufufufuf

lament stump
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and I imagine that white stuff would be seen easier with a darker bc

supple sorrel
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yeah but you can also fill the gaps easier

dusky trail
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i usually just do this, it just right amount of dark to not mess up my eyes

supple sorrel
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you do the lineart on that bg too?

lament stump
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you did 2 poses in the same drawing damn you are so not lazy

dusky trail
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of course not

supple sorrel
dusky trail
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i like rib~

supple sorrel
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nono I get it 😔

dusky trail
supple sorrel
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ic

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I do that too, lately I've made played around with making the lineart layer multiply too

dusky trail
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like so

supple sorrel
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oo sai

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that brings back some memories

dusky trail
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i have Clip too but the pen just doesn't feel the same

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so i mostly use Clip for backgroudn stuff

supple sorrel
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yeah sai stabilizer is smth else

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it's almost hard to move to other programs after drawing in it

dusky trail
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ya

supple sorrel
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but I can't get used to it again cause it doesnt have scrubby zoom

frank sundial
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I really like the simple design on her

dusky trail
dusky trail
safe falcon
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Alright I’ve Redone the sword so it’s a lot bigger

frank sundial
lament stump
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Idk if it's just me who sees it tho

safe falcon
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I shouldn’t leave my phone unlocked in school with discord open

hardy yew
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what should be fixed? also where should i put the shadows on the right side of the clothes

whole cloak
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The face seems uneven and the chin is asymmetrical, is the head on an angle?
Also it looks like you squashed the right side of her head (her right, our left) so maybe move the gold thingy a bit closer to the corner
Otherwise it looks good! The shadows are in the right place on the clothes, maybe make the shadow a bit bigger

hardy yew
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its supposed to be at an angle, though i have no clue what im doing wrong

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oh shit i just realized i shouldve probably added a shadow under the head

whole cloak
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Try adding a centerline maybe? to sort of make it clearer while drawing

lusty breach
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U guys use a lot of layers
@-@

whole cloak
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for the life of me this always looks a little off pls help
I haven’t tried this angle in a long time

hardy yew
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wish i could help you but i suck at angles

grave nymph
dawn pelican
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I’m almost done with the lineart oh my god

grave nymph
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one animation I made took up like

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800 layers or so

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perhaps

dawn pelican
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800?/?/?//?/

grave nymph
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but it’s definitely in the hundreds

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yeah

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a 12 frame 1 second animation

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having no onion skin is pain you know? :”D

dawn pelican
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How many seconds was it

grave nymph
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1

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:”D

dawn pelican
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In total?

grave nymph
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yeah

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it’s a 1 second animation

dawn pelican
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Woah

grave nymph
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CSP can only allow up to 2 seconds of animation if you only have PRO

dawn pelican
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Animation is hard 😭

grave nymph
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especially if you have no onion skin lul

dawn pelican
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Rip

hardy yew
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how to draw/color eyes

dusky trail
dusky trail
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but eye usually the part where artist can be more "creative" so just try out various thing you want until you settle on one

hardy yew
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anything i should change? something still looks a little off

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eyes supposed to be closed (realized this after i tried to draw an eye for a few minutes Kek )

dusky trail
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hard to say with just that but if you aim for chibi anyway, you don't have to think too much

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just go nut

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otherwise, it mainly the chin that bother me

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but it only because the line rather clunky

hardy yew
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yeah the stabilizer wasnt working right A_HuDead

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my dumb ass just realizing she has no eyebrows

hardy yew
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my hands are dying because the weather is so hot paimonded_hh

dusky trail
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her left cheek still feel like it drag down too much

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you could just extend the hair bun...? or what ever it call a bit longer

hardy yew
strong pond
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maybe make the eyes bigger and a little closer hahah

dusky trail
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chibi style can be use more freely anyway

strong pond
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yup

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its cuteee

potent mason
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i suggest you make your lines thicker, thick lines goes well with chibi artstyle

grave nymph
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yeah

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makes the lineart more visible or something

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if you plan on making it an emote then you have to have thick lines so it’ll be visible when it’s smaller

dusky trail
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thicc

obtuse night
grim heart
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not yet final lol EinsteinSip

dusky trail
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the crotch part makes it look like "something" is there

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it is too lean on one side

potent mason
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not sure why japan likes drawing them with thigh gap, in reality those look ugly and can be rarely seen in a woman unless theyre very skinny

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coz the thighs' fat usually fill up that gap

dusky trail
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because it is where hope and dream go

grave nymph
dusky trail
potent mason
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either thigh fat fill the gap or the shorts/skirts cover it up

dusky trail
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and well, art is always there to draw something you don't normally see anyway

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like Niko Tama

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who always draw nip so hard they always look like it can piece through clothe

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even more fun if you check his old stuff, they all have normal nip but then they keep increasing in size over the year

fiery lantern
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wait why r the nipples so

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🔺

dusky trail
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the artist probably want to set it as his trademark

potent mason
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Guess that's one way to slap "hey I draw uniquely " to the viewers

fiery lantern
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oh

dusky trail
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and then we have One Piece's author

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always draw the female char with extreme thin waist

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there also kawakami masaki or Houtengeki that love draw girl with wide hip and thick butt

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so ya, while some draw more closer to how real body work, there are plenty draw them in "unique" way because that is what look good for them

grim heart
dusky trail
grim heart
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oh okay got it, thank youW_HuYAYMarch

dusky trail
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because you draw those part so high up, it created a kind of illusion of something really saggy in there

grim heart
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oh yeah it does lol no wonder it looks kinda off in that part

dusky trail
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or at least put it in the center like so

safe falcon
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I noticed a big mistake but if no one notices then it’s A ok

grave nymph
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hmmmm

safe falcon
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See no one notices it so it’s A ok and I’ll fix it when grade 12 isn’t squeezing the life out of me with 6 assessments due this week alone

grave nymph
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currently editing a guide, I'll try to view it on phone when I'm finish lul

safe falcon
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You know the way I’ve positioned her and the sword either way I’ll be a awkward, I just tried to fix it and yah Another problem came up when I did

lusty breach
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:□

shadow nebula
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I hated high chool so much

lusty breach
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I'm in 11th grade

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Class just started last week for me

shadow nebula
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at least you guys are almost done with it. It gets better

robust tapir
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Its been a long time since i draw

shadow nebula
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that sounds like fun

robust tapir
safe falcon
supple sorrel
safe falcon
robust tapir
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The nose are too high?

safe falcon
shadow nebula
shadow nebula
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honestly kind of bs since you can get extensions on everything in the real world and uni

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thats why hs is so stupid

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they pretend this is the way the real world works when it doesn

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t

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yeah its pretty dumb

safe falcon
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Mind an ATAR is valid for a year, if you don’t get anywhere within that year you just wasted a lot of time

shadow nebula
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gr 12 I missed half of the school days and had to completely change what i was going to go into which was dance but a car crash in gr 11 fucked my back up so i had to take gr 10 and gr 11 art courses in gr12

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thats terrible

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one year my hs had a fire over christmas break took over a month for us to go back so we ended really awkwardly

safe falcon
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Oh btw the mistake was the sword hand guard, if id flipped it id have to redo the arm but because I really don’t want to do that I’ll just say her arm is in the little Gap between the hand guard and handle, it’s a bit awkward but it saves me the trouble of another redesign

grave nymph
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Ah

safe falcon
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This is me duplicating it onto another file trying to find a solution

grave nymph
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o

minor grove
safe falcon
# grave nymph o

The only way I see on solving the mistake and that’s making the sword thinner and just in general a bit smaller

grave nymph
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but then you'd be fiddling around the sword's size and it won't be the same like the original

safe falcon
grave nymph
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can't wait to see your solution then RozaPeek

plain sorrel
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seele modeling progress

grave nymph
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ooooh

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That's looking quite good so far

plain sorrel
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hair is always the most difficult and time consuming but at least my drawing works fine I guess..

plain sorrel
obtuse night
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Rokka no Yuusha was great

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I remember whatching all of it staight after seeing the first episode

hallow marsh
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My current WIP for the contest, wanted to show a possible future where Kiana also became a teacher after the main story

Might make the room messier since I imagine Kiana wouldn't be able to keep it clean 🤣

jaunty python
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just kevin things EinsteinSip

safe falcon
grave nymph
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oooo

safe falcon
grave nymph
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yeah, it does

plain bane
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Which should I go with?

dusky trail
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at least move the "no steal" out of her face first

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it is hard to compare when one of them have something block off

plain bane
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Yeah gimme a sec

dusky trail
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but i would say, go with half half

shadow nebula
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first one fits more with the way you coloured the background but darkening and giving the hair a rim light would make it fit the lighting

dusky trail
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if the sunset is behind her then ya, as Saiph said, it would be like the first one

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but that would also cause a more similar dark hair on her left side

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as her head and arm would block off the light

plain bane
dusky trail
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thoughg the second one is a bit too dark

plain bane
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Wait why is the no steal still there

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I moved it HoVLoading

dusky trail
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because even your draw doesn't want you to steal it

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it is gaining sentience, time to delete it

plain bane
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It might be breaking

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Also, does the crown look better like that?

dusky trail
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crown? where?

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also, what is with that honkai ads there

plain bane
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The Crown of her hair TeriDerp

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I'm still getting honkai ads from the haxxor bunny event

dusky trail
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oh you mean bald spot

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fine enough

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anyway, just shade the rest of her too then ask us again

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it is easier to see the whole thing than just one spot

safe falcon
# plain bane

I love seeing honkai impact ads, those practically ever show up for me

plain bane
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I either get honkai ads or ads trying to sell me houses LiliSip

dusky trail
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then time to buy a house in honkai ver

minor grove
obtuse night
minor grove
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as far as i know the next LN wasn't released (even after 10th anniversary)

lost wagon
lament stump
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guys why do my lines almost look like they are made out of pixels when i zoom in a little bit, ppl on yt have nice and smooth lines\

grave nymph
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probably canvas size

grave patrol
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Are you using paint tool sai?

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Cause its Normal there

grave patrol
strong pond
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you need a bigger canvas size lol

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bigger canvas = higher qualityy

grave nymph
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mm

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I usually have mine at 300dpi A4

hallow marsh
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Usually canvas size

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I use A4 for anything important

I then go 350+ dpi for anything merch wise

strong pond
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what do you use?

hallow marsh
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Clip Studio paint

shadow nebula
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the smaller your canvas the less you can zoom in without quality loss

strong pond
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ohh

lament stump
dusky trail
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3k x 3k or 4k x 4k pretty much my base canvas size

lament stump
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i have a rly small tablet so big canvas are hard to draw on

strong pond
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thats a lot wow

dusky trail
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small table is not really matter

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you only have to increase your pen size

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i usually use size 8-9

shadow nebula
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if you use ipad than they have a limit

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its why i stopped using mine

strong pond
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the size is technically the same as smaller sizes just has higher res

shadow nebula
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I can't go to 10k by 10k like i do on pc

lament stump
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but like if i draw on a big canvas and yous moste of it I'll have some very big lines that are very hard to draw just from your wrist

hallow marsh
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Damn never had to go that big before

dusky trail
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you can just zoom out you know

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it is the nice thing about digital

strong pond
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on ibispaint your ipad dies after going over 100 at 2000x2000

lament stump
shadow nebula
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its something you will get the hang of as you practice

lament stump
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idk mabye it's a me problem

dusky trail
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what pen size you usually use then

lament stump
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I'll start using bigger ones soon as possible

lament stump
hallow marsh
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Might be good to learn to draw without zooming in for a bit on a larger canvas

dusky trail
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=3=

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also you don't have to zoom that far out

strong pond
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its p hard to do that

shadow nebula
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you don't have to use big ones. My sketch pen for my 10k by 10k canvas is only size 17

hallow marsh
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Not saying never zoom in when drawing, just a little bit of practice on it lmao

lament stump
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i did 7 for body and 4 for the face

dusky trail
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17 is pretty big too =3=

strong pond
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oooh thats so cute

shadow nebula
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its very small for this canvas size

lament stump
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it was a g pen so it had pen pressure

dusky trail
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and that is why i say to put some dark background

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because my eyes i burning staring at that right now

lament stump
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1 second

strong pond
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lmaoo

lament stump
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well UMMMMM

hallow marsh
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I'm glad I'm not the only one that draws on a gray surface XD

dusky trail
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lol

lament stump
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IT SEEMS LIKE I BUCKETED

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on some layer

dusky trail
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you can just make a new layer, set it in the bottom and throw the bucket at it

strong pond
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I SWEAR THE FACE LOOKS GREAT

lament stump
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WELL NOW SHE HAS NO HAIR

strong pond
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try gray-ish purple

dusky trail
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you can use something different than the color you use lol

strong pond
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and airbrush the bottom sides with black

dusky trail
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purple, dark red or pink

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also, what is going on with her cheek over there

lament stump
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well fuck this

grave nymph
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Grayish backgrounds are /;w;/

dusky trail
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a bit too bright, it not gonna feel good if you look at it when you draw

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it will mess your eyes up

strong pond
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too vibrant id say haha

lament stump
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i bucketed color white on hair layer

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now i turned it bac to pink

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but um

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now the lines are fucked cuz of multiply layer on my line art

raw ridge
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CTRL+Z

lament stump
dusky trail
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ya just ctrl z it

lament stump
dusky trail
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the wonder of digital art

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use it

lament stump
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I CAN'TTTT

raw ridge
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Megapensive

lament stump
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i buceted it white a long time ago

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i can only erase it now

hallow marsh
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Okay what you can do is, select all the pink and delete it.

Then you can colour layer 8 to a different colour which will give the hair it's freedom

raw ridge
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Pain

dusky trail
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redraw time

shadow nebula
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a good neutral background for colours is a mid tone grey

lament stump
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nooooooooooo

grave nymph
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eh

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you didn't know about Crtl Z???

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That's a digital artist's savior TeriFied

dusky trail
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i think he only just notice he bucket the wrong later today

strong pond
dusky trail
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and he did that sometime ago

strong pond
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HOLY

grave nymph
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Ikr?

dusky trail
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now it is easier to see all the odd spot there

lament stump
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GUYS CHILL

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I use ctrl z

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ofc I do

hallow marsh
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Okay nice job, you'll be able to fill in the spots that have been left out on the hair 👍

strong pond
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thank god

lament stump
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after every line I use ctrl z

strong pond
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you do have pretty nice liness

lament stump
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thanks

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I would say I'm good or something but that drawing took me like 20h total and it's not even done

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I just redo untill I'm setisfied

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just like my discord status says :)

strong pond
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thats a lot of determination omg

dusky trail
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meanwhile i just stuck on what size of boobs i want my OC to have

lament stump
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and also shikniful helped me soooo much with this drawing

strong pond
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LMAOOO

dusky trail
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still can't decice yet

strong pond
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my oh my

lament stump
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use your size :)

dusky trail
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mine is too thick and long

strong pond
#

GET SOME HOLY WATER

lament stump
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never knew boobs are thick

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i knew they could be big tho

strong pond
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never knew boobs were long

dusky trail
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oh well, i just gonna do medium size for now

strong pond
#

do you guys have any favorite artists?

dusky trail
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plenty

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lol

hallow marsh
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Mines LAM

lament stump
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i just started art so I don't know any artists except ppl in here

strong pond
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oooh

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how many months?

lament stump
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almost 2

strong pond
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oooh that really good

grave nymph
lament stump
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i do however now SomeNormalArtist, he makes yt vids so I now him

grave nymph
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@/hitsukuya perhaps

lament stump
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he helped me a lot

dusky trail
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that remind me

grave nymph
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whoops

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sorry for ping ;w;

grave nymph
strong pond
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LOOK AT THIS MY EYES

grave nymph
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iine

lament stump
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BRUH OMG THAT'S SO AMAZING

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soo cutee

strong pond
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ITS SO SOFT N STUFF

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i meant the shading

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yes

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the shading

dusky trail
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most of my fav artist are the type draw clear rib

strong pond
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oohh

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also check out rosuuri on twitter

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shes just the best

lament stump
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she looks very real

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too real for my taste

lament stump
strong pond
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ALSO LOOK AT THIS ONE

lament stump
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that one looks like it hase some kind of texture on it, loooks very nice

strong pond
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yess

hallow marsh
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I love the lighting so much on that

strong pond
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the composition , and the rendering is just amazing

lament stump
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before I started art i never noticed the bg that much and now I appriciate it cuz i know how hard that bg must have been

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thoes clouds look so good damn good

dusky trail
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Piromizu also did a lot of amazing one

strong pond
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thats really niceee

lament stump
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how do they make it looks so real like, it's almost as it's a figure sitting at my desk, thoes colors are something else

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especially that eye color

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looks so real

grave nymph
strong pond
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OK THIS what do yall think of this

grave nymph
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They're also one of the top artists I admire

dusky trail
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and then there is Kantoku

strong pond
hallow marsh
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One thing I always want to improve on is lighting and backgrounds atm

strong pond
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backgrounds are pretty hard

grave nymph
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yep

dusky trail
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just be cheap and draw background like this

hallow marsh
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Backgrounds can be hard but my word are they satisfying

grave nymph
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they do some great azur lane art

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like this one

hallow marsh
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Ooooooooooohhh

grave nymph
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they said that they use 3d stuffs for the bg

hallow marsh
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I love that
Always looked up to the Azur Lane artists

dusky trail
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i can't say i like the game but ya Azur Lane has a lot of good art

grave nymph
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yup

hallow marsh
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Yeah people use Blender or premade 3D resources for backgrounds which is really helpful

grave nymph
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they splurge money into their art

dusky trail
grave nymph
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it looks so fluffy

dusky trail
grave nymph
#

ooooh

dusky trail
#

Shunin also seem to gaining popularity lately

grave nymph
#

them colors

dusky trail
#

ya his color style is quite pop

grave nymph
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link?

dusky trail
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i don't think he has twitter

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sec

hallow marsh
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The colours there are really well used

dusky trail
grave nymph
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followed

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oh wow 250k huh

hallow marsh
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A great artist!

grave nymph
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yup

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so many great artists

hallow marsh
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Honestly

dusky trail
#

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well his game is quite blow up anyway

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Alicesoft's games have a lot of cool artist

hallow marsh
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They certainly do

strong pond
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oh yea NABIII do any of you know nabi

grave nymph
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I think finding a unique style would be hard

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ah

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?

dusky trail
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you sure like a lot of shoujo style huh?

grave nymph
#

I like that kind of shading

strong pond
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i really like the anime style

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just

lament stump
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how do you even fing your own style?

strong pond
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the shading is pure anime

grave nymph
#

and gosh the colors man

dusky trail
strong pond
grave nymph
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yeah

dusky trail
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shoujo style always have some amazing hair style

grave nymph
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yup

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I wanna draw hair like that

dusky trail
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the detail always so overkill

grave nymph
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those shadings too

strong pond
grave nymph
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Isn't it?!?!

lament stump
grave nymph
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it has like

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50k bookmarks lul

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I wonder how do they make lineart like that

strong pond
grave nymph
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so much to learn

dusky trail
strong pond
dusky trail
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her body looks rather square-ish

strong pond
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hmmm i see

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like stiff?

grave nymph
#

yeah

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can't redline since have to go to sleep

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her shoulders look weird imo

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neck feels quite short, maybe just me

dusky trail
#

like from a glare, she just look like this

grave nymph
#

mm

strong pond
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ah

grave nymph
#

might be because of shoulders

strong pond
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oohhh

lament stump
#

guys what's better this

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or

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this

grave nymph
#

2

lament stump
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idk if you can see the difference

strong pond
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2

hallow marsh
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2

grave nymph
#

slight color difference

lament stump
#

DAMN IT

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I LIKED 1

strong pond
#

LMAO

grave nymph
strong pond
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2 just amkes the eyes pop

lament stump
#

let me zoom out maybe you'll like it more

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still 2?

grave nymph
#

2 for me

lament stump
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I meant 2 ye

hallow marsh
#

Sticking with 2

lament stump
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dang it

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okayy

dusky trail
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well go for 1 if that what you like

lament stump
#

i was like

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1 cuz i want to make her in like dark

strong pond
#

oh yea critique pleasee

lament stump
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so her eyes are less visible cuz it's like dark or something

dusky trail
#

the fingers feel a bit stiff

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specially her pinky

lament stump
#

but idk if I can make her seem like it's dark outside so...

hallow marsh
#

Perhaps relax the pinky slightly

strong pond
#

alr thank youu

dusky trail
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put a multiply layer on top of that layer

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then try out various color to make it look darker

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see which one you like

hallow marsh
lament stump
dusky trail
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like if she stand up, it would be in front of her crotch

strong pond
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and last one

lament stump
dusky trail
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so if you try to pull the dagger out, her hand gonna smash her boobs

strong pond
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LMAO

dusky trail
hallow marsh
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I'll respond, in a bit, just in a meeting

full solstice
strong pond
strong pond
lament stump
dusky trail
full solstice
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Yep

strong pond
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ohhh

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thank you all

strong pond
dusky trail
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just cut it in half like this and you can see her right eye is drift away there

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the left cheek and right cheek also rather different

strong pond
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ah

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okayy thank youuu

dusky trail
strong pond
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oh and

dusky trail
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just look at the ear between the left and right

strong pond
#

aside from that

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is the shading ok?

hallow marsh
#

Okay I would raise the stock of the gun a little and personal preference would be to make the large a bit larger

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Shading is fine 👍

strong pond
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okayy thank good

dusky trail
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i think this here should be darker?

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as the cape would create more shadow there

strong pond
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ohhh right

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HOLY I FOUND UR TWITTER ACC

grave nymph
#

hands look very small compared to her body and face imo

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also, I suggest flipping the canvas often

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can see where your mistakes are at

ocean flower
#

The rifle looks like a piece of cardboard

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And also there is no trigger

topaz zealot
#

It kinda looks like her eyes are falling off her face

lament stump
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eyes are done

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not very happy about them

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but Idk how to do it better for now

dusky trail
#

you could