Improving a Level

[potent sundial]

(this is all my opinion of course)
The main problems i saw were
1: The level not yet being able to visualise a central idea behind it, which is it being "fractured"
2: The city theme also being a bit hard to see

Some ways to fix these problems would be, i would say splitting up the structures, something being fractured is it being "in pieces" of sorts, i only saw whole structures in the beginning and that doesnt really help the "fractured" vibe. And a fix to the second problem could be adding a bustling city as a background in the second part where you see a little bit of the city theme(being the block designs) and adding a bit more of the theme, (like a background or block design) to the first part as it isnt really clear to an onlooker that it is city themed in the beginning.

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[turbid star]

Your first point isn’t really valid, personally I found the way quite clear so it may be because of your lighting or phone brightness

[potent sundial]

now that you say that, yeah my phones brightness is pretty low

will re-do that point then

thank you

i cant really find anymore faults

thank god it said 2-3 and not 3 problems

welp

im done here then

[turbid star]

Lmao

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