#mha-anime

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modest walrus
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And this is like version 1 of how I would rewrite it

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Should I write peak academia

woeful creek
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First rough draft

modest walrus
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When I have time one day bc works be killing my ass

woeful creek
modest walrus
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Wattpad ?

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Ao3 !

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*?

woeful creek
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Oh like writing

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Couldn't tell ya

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My personal favorite medium in general is animation

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Haven't actually read enough on either site to really have an opinion either now that I think about it

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my favorite medium is the notes app on my phone

modest walrus
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I used to post on wattpad but

woeful creek
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Fair enough

modest walrus
woeful creek
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Any kind

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It's just better for the description aspect

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And facial expressions

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and motions

modest walrus
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Yeah it’s dope

digital minnow
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LMAOOOO

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Why does he sound kind of tamer

modest walrus
digital minnow
modest walrus
modest walrus
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If I have to rewrite every character

digital minnow
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Fair enough I mean it's your native language after all

modest walrus
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Some of them are fine like Bakugo, Shoto, Izuku, Uraraka

digital minnow
modest walrus
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But the biggest cases for me are characters like Tory

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*Toru

digital minnow
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Oh? Why

modest walrus
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Inexistant

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Pun intended

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You don’t need a backstory to save a character

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You just need to make the character feel part of the narrative

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And not be a sloppy last minute try yk

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I just like to talk about backstories so that’s my main medium

digital minnow
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You're right actually

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That's why you should cook

modest walrus
modest walrus
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Some good things are made by koshi though I need to preface

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I like AFO as a villain

woeful creek
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Greetings number

modest walrus
digital minnow
digital minnow
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Where's human #1?

woeful creek
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how art we

woeful creek
digital minnow
digital minnow
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What did you do to him??

digital minnow
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I need to draw today

woeful creek
woeful creek
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weren't even good lines

digital minnow
digital minnow
modest walrus
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How can y’all draw

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This shit is harden

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I can only do stick
Figures

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😭😭😭😭

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Like
I tried drawing Bakugo one day n

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It was an insult to the character..:

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😭😭😭

woeful creek
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step one is the outline of the outline

modest walrus
woeful creek
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you make vague shapes until it looks kind of right

digital minnow
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Yep

modest walrus
digital minnow
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😭 😭

modest walrus
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Bakugo would have torn apart the drawings

digital minnow
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Nah but seriously

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If you want to draw look at youtube goats

modest walrus
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Aight

digital minnow
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There are many lessons out there

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Samdoesarts and angel ganev off the top of my head

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I want to draw angst

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Rn

woeful creek
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Draw a guy bandaging his arms

digital minnow
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Whose arms

modest walrus
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Uhhhh

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Tetsu Tetsu

woeful creek
digital minnow
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😭 😭

digital minnow
woeful creek
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Him

digital minnow
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Deku?

woeful creek
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idk if Deku can bandage his broken arm with his other broken arm I'ma be real

modest walrus
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Btw what I meant earlier about toru

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Keep again her current character tic of being upbeat and a bit airheaded because she wants to be seen. Even though her parents (headcanon territory) loves her ( she seems healthy) she doesn’t think the world will see her

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But her mom always had faith in her type shit

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And since she is not noticed she learned to notice people

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Make her the first one to notice hidden things in the show

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Make her the second after Deku to peep Aoyama being weird

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And built their connexion from there

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Which is why when Aoyama is revealed to be the traitor

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It make more sense to have Toru partnering with him then

woeful creek
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Man if she has a healthy relationship with both parents she's not destined to get super far up the main character ladder

modest walrus
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Well yeah but you can use another external factor to make her relevant

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I think it can be boring to have the repetitive it’s the parents fault

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If you use the world building to be the reasons why a specific character moves a certain way

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It’s interesting imo

woeful creek
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Even Deku has his father who left him

modest walrus
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Yeah

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Also a main character is not defined solely by what happened to them

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It’s more so what they believe

marble frost
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I’ve always wondered about Izuku’s father

modest walrus
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Saitama from opm has no sob story

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But he has like a core thesis that he fights throughout the show

woeful creek
marble frost
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lol

modest walrus
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Saitama is “ if nothing challenges you, why do efforts”

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Toru can be functional with a similar thesis

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Not the same but having a thesis like Saitama

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Regardless she is not main character material tho

woeful creek
modest walrus
# woeful creek She could be high on the side character tier list thi

I know and I don’t intend to make her a main character because based on this rewriting, which is not a new characterization but more so like trying to expand on the rare seeds Horikoshi did which is fucking hard bc Hagakure is similar to Mina : upbeat girl (although she comes off as more innocent), she would still be a high side character rather than a secondary character

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At least she would feel more cohesive with the traitor plot

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I’d say Tsuyu is fine the way she was so there’s not much to rewrite about her specifically

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Maybe give her a personal goal

woeful creek
modest walrus
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1-A girls based on who is the most innocent

woeful creek
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she played to Mineta that one time to get him to join the dance team

modest walrus
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  1. Toru
  2. Momo
  3. Tsuyu
  4. Uraraka
  5. Jirou
  6. Mina
woeful creek
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And Tsu is so cute and huggable that she disappeared from the list entirely

modest walrus
woeful creek
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Ye

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Uraraka's thinking about Deku too often to be too pure

modest walrus
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Yeah like this suspicious

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😔😔😔

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Tsuyu is geniunely a pure spirit

woeful creek
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like h m m m m

modest walrus
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She can be brash but she is not like

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Having a background thought

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Mina is always being sly

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😭😭😭

woeful creek
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Tsu is blunt but not unthoughtful I feel

woeful creek
modest walrus
modest walrus