#avatar-ideas

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timber mural
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or it isn't?

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didn't zoom the image in cuz im on pc but i might be mistaken <.<

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oh wait it isn't

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it's really nice overall tbh

sacred flicker
somber bronze
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Dunno if u should just keep it this way and submit it as a gem quest or make male version and submit as offer

gentle lily
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you can to submit it as gem quest then if it fails (and knowing you, it wont 😌), then you can to make male version

somber bronze
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Alright then

blissful temple
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ohhhhhh

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so beautifulllll

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the fg item is soooo niceeeee

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and the hair and the hat and everything it's gorgeous❤️

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maybe - just maybe - make the shirt black shading a lil lil lil bit lighter?

somber bronze
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I had the shirt colour way darker but shading and shirt merged and it didn't look like it was shaded at all so i made the shirt colour lighter

gentle lily
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awesomeee cute_heart

sudden kettle
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Any feedbacks? Since I feel its near to finish but idk

strange ibex
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I think the eyes need more shades

buoyant mantle
buoyant mantle
# somber bronze Alright then

YOU DID IT~ THE BEANIE IS SO MUCH MORE DISTINCT NOW!! That was the only thing I critiqued so now it looks even better. Great job :O !!

somber bronze
buoyant mantle
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BUT IT STILL WORKED SO WELL

dusk kiln
verbal canyon
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._. not done just thoughts so far?

orchid turtle
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That is ✨scary✨

verbal canyon
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Thats the goal but with a soft aspect

outer heath
verbal canyon
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Update. Thoughts? 💭

plucky iron
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I like it but keep in mind the other skin tones in game GW_pika_think

verbal canyon
verbal canyon
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I still really like it with the other skins ( I don't wanna spam them all ) reminds me of a sheep in wolves clothing its cute and scary

verbal canyon
sudden kettle
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Np :)

sacred flicker
sudden kettle
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Well worked on this and how does it look? Should it stay like that or I should do some changes? Fb pls also thanks @strange ibex for shading advices GW_foxto_love

rocky eagle
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I think it’s a good Start, just my opinion below:

  • the eyes are still very bland, if you don’t Zoom in, they just look like they have 1 Color, I would add some highlights, work with lighter shades
  • the mouth is very small, I’d make it bigger
  • and the Shirt is way too high imo, her boobies are supposed to be where her belly is now
sudden kettle
sacred flicker
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||@rocky eagle u seem to be pro at it is there a problem on my drawing?ur ideas?||

sudden kettle
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@sacred flicker knk sen türk müsün?

rocky eagle
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I'm not pro lol

sacred flicker
rocky eagle
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For your avatar I actually have issues seieing it clearly. The image resolution isnt very good. But maybe its my devices that show it a bit blurry

sacred flicker
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Hmm

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Is it clearly now?

mellow salmon
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It appears as though you used blurry lines...

sacred flicker
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Mhm

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Do u have any pen suggestions in IbisPaint X

mellow salmon
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Red lines-too real fake gradient or blurry lines
Blue- outlined

mellow salmon
sacred flicker
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Okay thanks

rocky eagle
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Let me try give u feedback too:
🦚 idea is very unique
Imo I’d work on that

  • did you use a special brush on the lips ? - if I zoom in, they look stamped and really realistic (wouldn’t be allowed cause blurry brush)
  • the eye highlights are mirrored, it’s not forbidden to use mirrored eye highlights but it’s not encouraged either
  • I am very very unsure about that one:
    There might be issues with the shape of the hat and the line (if you checked pinned messages than you can see what’s not allowed). But as I said, I am unsure
sudden kettle
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Changed some things and idk still feedbacks pls

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I made shirt like that since Im out of ideas

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But yes eyes still dont look great tho

quick harbor
sudden kettle
sacred flicker
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I did it with the hard felt tip

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Clearly?

grand needle
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How can you make things like that?

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Sorry, i am new here

sudden kettle
# sacred flicker I did it with the hard felt tip

It's looking more clear now and that's looking actually good but I think in my opinion you should work on mouth more other than that it is an interesting idea and I'd love to see that skin in game GW_foxto_love

sudden kettle
sudden kettle
grand needle
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How can i sent a screenshot?

junior thistle
grand needle
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Lvl 1?

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Okay

sudden kettle
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Okayyyy any feedback? I think eyes still not that great tho but after working on eyes would it get good ratings in #dev-vote ???

next talon
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you’d need a minimum of 6 items tho

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maybe add a hat and mask ?

sudden kettle
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Ohhh okay then so clan quests need 6 items? Should I draw hat or mask? Or can I do earrings?

next talon
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earrings r possible too yeah

sudden kettle
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Hmm I think I'll make earrings it would be easier for me and thanks GW_foxto_love

rancid shore
rocky eagle
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I remember some clan quests have only 5 items and the other one is a bouquet

autumn anvil
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yup

gentle lily
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those were old clan quests so that's why, i guess 👀

rocky eagle
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I don’t know how old they are but they are still there

pliant olive
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they removed all clan quests with less than 4 items i believe

gentle lily
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let me check...

gentle lily
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nope, there is still that 1 clan quest with 5 items

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and one w/ 4 items

lucid fossil
pliant olive
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the ones that had 3 items tho were removed a while ago

sudden kettle
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Added earrings and fixed some parts,,,feedbacks? And also how can I submit this? Ofc after it becomes finished cute_heart

next talon
lucid fossil
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send help, give me some shirt ideas pls

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Im thinking about change the shirt

junior thistle
sudden kettle
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And must I add a background? For example like that one below (of course a different one)

lucid fossil
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Yeh maYbE koekje

sudden kettle
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Okay well thanks cute_heart

sour apex
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to be more beautiful :v

sudden kettle
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Ehhhh final feedbacks? Still idk

rocky eagle
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Yes, you have a white outline going around your avatar

autumn anvil
rocky eagle
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I think it’s because the hairline is up high

sudden kettle
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Okay I'll fix that

orchid turtle
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Do you think I should do a gender bent version?

autumn anvil
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of?

orchid turtle
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My avatar idea

autumn anvil
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sure

timber mural
plucky iron
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Fb? I don't have bg yet GW_kek_dog

sour apex
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cool

quick harbor
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I like it, but i dont think the lime green fits the color palette

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Maybe try making it more earthy and less neony 👀

buoyant mantle
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this may be an unpopular opinion, but personally I do think the lime green color fits the pallete! it gives some contrast to the other colors in the items and works well for me.

the other items details work really well also, it's a really strong design overall imo!! 😁

blissful grotto
autumn anvil
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I got scared

lucid fossil
pine junco
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Wait, this actually looks cool

autumn anvil
rocky eagle
blissful grotto
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It does feelsfunny

graceful egret
autumn bone
wise mirage
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Uh uh any fb? It's my first try btw

quick harbor
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butterfly closing the mouth

quick harbor
quick harbor
sacred flicker
golden forge
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how do y'all draw so smooth lines? (≧▽≦)

autumn anvil
verbal canyon
acoustic wyvern
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I did a sketch for characters what do you think?

blissful temple
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@acoustic wyvern cool! I am excited to see how you will continue👀

acoustic wyvern
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Thanks!

quick harbor
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I can use it?

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As far as i know, you need to draw everything yourself

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But i think you can use them as some sort of inspiration

quick harbor
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I understand

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Ty

quick harbor
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Good night cute_heart

blissful grotto
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This one has the same brush

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U can use brushes and fonts if theyre free for commercial use

quick harbor
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🤝 i didnt know that 🤝

astral yoke
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~the more you know~

somber bronze
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I wouldn't use them honestly since u have to list your references before anything of you gets in game and it's highly possible they don't wanna take the risk and you will end up having to change it anyways

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I'd never rely or use anything someone else made personally that way you don't even have the potential risk

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Plus doing something yourself makes it more unique ;)

quick harbor
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this is my first drawing

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fb plss meowpumpkin

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how should i do the eyes

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what i want to do hannibal lecter

lusty dove
quick harbor
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if your hair grows a little bit

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because the hair reveals the skull

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the background and clothes great!

quick harbor
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What is missing

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lol bad :P

blissful temple
# quick harbor

Well there are buttons so they are not missingcute_heart . About the skin, I have some feedbackies for you: Hair is a good start, but the hair line is really high. I would recommend removing the black line under the eye and add eye brows. Overall I think it is a fine start, but it's pretty messy and try to not use black lines to outline stuffies^^

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blissful grotto
pine junco
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Interesting

blissful grotto
strong ruin
strange ibex
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Does anyone need an avatar idea ? I’m feeling ✨creative ✨

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|| Kid on a bike gets run over by a car ||

blissful temple
blissful grotto
pliant olive
lucid fossil
blissful grotto
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dRaWinG

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Lmao

pine junco
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\😃

lucid fossil
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bOi im waiting for da fedbacc and other idea for shirt

blissful grotto
lucid fossil
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gazp quality is-
Hmmm ok-

timber mural
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since, well, they claim they draw the shapes

gentle lily
lusty dove
sacred flicker
# lusty dove Fb?

Background, hair and clothes are so wonderful i love it i hope i see this in the game 💕
My fb:
1- where is eyebrows? Are u goin' to do it.d
2- maybe u can make the mouth a little bigger.
The hair is really great but i saw no lighting btw :3

rancid shore
sudden kettle
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Uhm feedback......?

sharp notch
sudden kettle
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Something casual I think 😅🤗

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But I dont know if people actually like it

sharp notch
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ooh alright, good to know. i havent seen you here or any design from you. are you new here? because it looks quite good for a first attempt at a wov design. as good as it looks, i would change some small things:

-you are working with pure black for the hair, making is very hard to shade. i can also notice it to your design, due to the shading it currently looks like plastic with the ponytails and the other shading seems to be close to invisible. working with pure black is a bad choice if you need to shade it. i suggest you to try and work with a sort of dark gray. that will make it easier to shade more logically and give it a more natural look
-when taking a closer look, there seems to be a sort of white outline on the side, it seems to be only one layer of white pixels which only get noticed when zooming in. i can only assume this may be due to the background and the avatar. is it possible to remove it? if yes, please do so
-altough the eyes look bland, i really like them a lot, but they may be too big and too low placed, the low placement might be due to the low hairline

overall, even though it has a casual theme, i like it a lot and it is really well made. some of the changes i mentioned will only make it more beautiful. dont doubt your talent, because you definetly have it <3

quick harbor
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I also want to discard the pictures I drew but I could not be level 1 somehow 🥺

sharp notch
sudden kettle
sharp notch
quick harbor
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okay thank you ❤️✨

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and who have white skintone

sudden kettle
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I only have this one

quick harbor
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okay thanks ❤️

sudden kettle
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Thought it would be great if I had other skin tones too

quick harbor
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i need find white

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if i find i can send for u

sudden kettle
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Thanks

quick harbor
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yw ^^

lusty dove
quick harbor
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omg thank you

sudden kettle
quick harbor
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I'm going to draw now I hope you like it when it's done✨

sudden kettle
quick harbor
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thank youu ❤️✨✨

sharp notch
# lusty dove Fb?

i see you are new as well, it is really good for a first attempt! it seems to have a cyberpunk-y design and it reminds me of an outfit that is currently ingame (see screenshot attached, especially the background, so make sure to not make it looks too similar! i would recommend you to change some things tho:

-her boobs are a bit too high, now they are almost up to her neck 👀 i would move them lower and try to take some inspiration from some ingame outfits
-im not sure whether the lighter part on her shirt is supposed to be shading or a certain design choice. at first sight it seems to be a part of the shirt but when you look at it from closer you see a darker spot (which looks a bit messy) implying it is shading. if it is supposed to be a shirt part, is it supposed to look transparent? because that would be a bit inappropriate, im not sure what it would be. for shading, it would look even weirder as straight shading isnt the best shading to use, it also doesnt match up with the hair shading
-the eyes are looking a bit to the top left corner instead of forward, make sure they look forward to us
-speaking of eyes, they look a bit dead inside, what happens when you try to make the pupil bigger? that would help i think in combination with the other eye feedback
-as mentioned by marks, dont forget the eyebrows 👀
-the hair is missing a bit of shading, especially on the right side
-the hexagons can use to be a bit more clean, tried using a pen tool instead of a pencil tool or use a stabiliser? it will help a lot

overall, it is a really good first attempt and im curious to see what your further idea is. even if it are a lot of points that i mentioned, most are a small fix. keep up the good worl ❤️

quick harbor
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Heyy, I'm not sure 1 or 2 :' ?

blissful grotto
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2

sudden kettle
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Bence 2 :)

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Seriously I need to learn how to do shading 😩

lusty mason
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1

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i can't shade as well

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that's why I have bad arts

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I thought I was shading when then...

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someone said that was not shading

sudden kettle
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Dont say that Im sure u have great arts

lusty mason
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that was gradient😂

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@sudden kettle I try my best but one of them has gradients

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the other one is like a bad skin tbh

quick harbor
lusty mason
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1 is strawberry themed girl

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and 2 is like just none

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pink thing

quick harbor
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Oh okay okay i see them now

lusty mason
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pink wow thing

quick harbor
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Okay okay my internet just really bad atm

lusty mason
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anyways lemme change to another device to send those baddie

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These are the bad pictures

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That failed

fleet tusk
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Lol

lusty mason
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The ice outfit was actually using the

fleet tusk
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Nice try tho

lusty mason
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People with mouth and eyes template

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That's why it failed

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Cherry one had gradient

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(Over the eyes and hair)

fleet tusk
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Better than my hand writing

lusty mason
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I thought that was...

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sHaDiNg

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Feedback tho

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Pls don't talk about the mistakes

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Oh the cherry one I forgot the eyebrows-

quick harbor
autumn anvil
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then do strawberries! :d

quick harbor
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Nobody loves strawberries, my nub strawberries :')

blissful temple
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if someone needs a 30 sec skin idea lemme know

lusty mason
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Strawberries tasty

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Deliciouz

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And here was a random drawing I did on this girl

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I know it won't get in game

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But I just drew for fun

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# blissful grotto

this is how you draw, these mine:
and stop talking about something you dont know like you know them all. i just said and show it once.
be respect with what im saying. "kInD oF ThiS tYpO loOk liKe A JoKE"

lusty mason
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Bad connection me

pine junco
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Oooo 😮

lusty mason
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I can't open it

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Lag me

pine junco
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F

next socket
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im using illustrator on PC

autumn anvil
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oki

lusty mason
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I can't really open it

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I think it has issues to me

blissful grotto
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Magik

rancid shore
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Tracing ofc

lusty mason
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I still can't open the video

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Can someone repost it and I will try again

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Or I should test the other videos first

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I can play @blissful grotto 's video

next socket
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you take my design to give wrong example. i fixed your false by my video already 🤷‍♂️

lusty mason
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Its loading

rancid shore
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Well vid ain’t something special so don’t mind not opening the vid.

lusty mason
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Um

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How to send videos

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There's only button for images-

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Should probably open it in another device

safe smelt
next socket
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sure, you can use them on your or anyone else use for themselves, i just said about my design because it got posted here

blissful grotto
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They just have the same shapes

next socket
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🤷‍♂️ then nothing to complain

safe smelt
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I think if we don't use gradient or outlines, we can use brushes, cuz same shapes could be remade easily

blissful grotto
lucid fossil
safe smelt
lucid fossil
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irises can have outlines, but some people don't like it tho

blissful grotto
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The mouth too

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Some mouths have black outlines

quick harbor
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is it good? this my first drawing✨

lucid fossil
quick harbor
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thanks❤️

lucid fossil
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but the mask/or sth on her face is kinda weird to me koekje

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so does the lips.

quick harbor
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I have a lot of mistakes haha ​​😹 I'll fix it ❤️

somber bronze
lucid fossil
# quick harbor

also i think that the hair's shading needs dark shading too

sacred flicker
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Fb please

somber bronze
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Outlines that serve the purpose of style or similar are no biggie
You just shouldn't use outlines all over your design and as a medium of seperating parts from each other

lucid fossil
sacred flicker
atomic hearth
# sacred flicker Fb please

-I think the shading of the hat doesnt really make a lot of sense this way, why is it dark all around the top?
and the white-ish part below it, is that shading too or fabric?
-why is the feather on her hat not looking like a peacock feather at all?
-The hair is absolutely beautiful, but again it isnt fully logical. If thre is so much hair on the left, then it would come from behind her head too, not just all hang in front of her ear/body. The right side seems a bit too little/flat as well.
-The background, are they feathers or food? the green part looks like a salad leaf?
I think the black dots that look like eyes on every single one, is a bit overkill. Peacock feathers are more iconic with just one black circle in the centre, and being more green than brown

the shirt look really fancy, and pretty. i think adding the feather/fruit thing here makes it look a bit too tacky and gives it too much diff coloured details that will make the shirt hard to mix n match

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Example for the hair: you can clearly see the hair on the right, there is a part below her ear that moves to the left

quick harbor
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fb✨

quick harbor
sacred flicker
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I'm not sure about the feather on the hat and clothes anymore fb pls

quick harbor
sacred flicker
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Thanks for feedback 💞

quick harbor
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yw ❤️

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guys i need fb for drawing

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you mean idea?

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yes theme*

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You can choose the horror theme. not many horror themed products

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mythology, modern, etc

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mythology cool

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hmmm okay

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good luck 😊

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you pick

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mithology or horror

quick harbor
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I like mythology very much. If it's easy for you to draw you can choose this ❤️

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ok have a nice day byb

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y too✨

visual shore
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Hey guys, one question, where do you draw?

gloomy orbit
visual shore
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Yes

gloomy orbit
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Ok well it depends but I personally use Procreate on iPad

visual shore
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I haven't Procreate xd

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And minus an iPad

gloomy orbit
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Maybe you can go to pinned messages and see all the apps you can use

visual shore
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Okay thank you

gloomy orbit
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Np

quick harbor
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should I make a dress or shirt?

quick harbor
rancid shore
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Wouldn’t the background be considered outlines?

lusty dove
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Idksect_inspect

quick harbor
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its end for me✨ fb plz ❤️

rancid shore
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You have a bit higher quality image?

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Oh nvm

quick harbor
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?

rancid shore
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It wasn’t fully loaded yet feelsfunny

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Only thing I’d change is the shadow on the shirt but well now I am nitpicking. XD

quick harbor
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i just good drawing hair and eyes :')

rancid shore
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well I’ll point it out first I guess the eyes are mirrored, personally don’t have a problem with it but people tend to get triggered from it

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Eye as in highlights

quick harbor
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So I have a lot to fix

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ty for fb 😊✨

lusty dove
strange ibex
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The shading on the hair is inconsistent
It has darker shades on the bottom some lighter on the top.

lusty dove
pliant olive
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hair usually doesnt wrap around the head, maybe try making it stick to the head shape less

astral yoke
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@quick harbor u should make the heart on the mouth pink so we can see it better 🤗

quick harbor
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okay thanks 😊❤️

astral yoke
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No problem I love the design!

somber bronze
smoky nacelle
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@somber bronze design goddess

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She has surpassed kween

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Its happened

pliant olive
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color scheme too pretty Panda_thanos

somber bronze
smoky nacelle
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There you go xox

dusk kiln
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Gimme some of your skills pls

lusty mason
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Gots to show a bad transformation

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1 or 2 its bad o.o

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Or want me to do another transformation o.o

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I cant shade btw

blissful grotto
safe smelt
sage trellis
tacit merlin
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It's cute

untold ingot
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I think the eyes that I draw are a bit small, does anyone think like me sect_thinking

mossy shoal
mossy shoal
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||i'm praying for be the first affirmation||

sage trellis
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I quitted designing

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Good luck everyone

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My first design it's still in feedback

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I can only give advice atm

mossy shoal
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Hm, i cannot really identify what is or not a joke.
And yes, i know that people do this kiddings

sage trellis
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They're serious most of the time sect_read

mossy shoal
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Ikr

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this is bcz i asked

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🙄

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Your first attemp is not too bad, btw

sage trellis
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Whose?

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Theirs or mine

mossy shoal
sage trellis
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Where do you know it from lolsect_shocked

mossy shoal
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I just saw, _woooowwww _

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I hope you have a great idea for the skin theme

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tbh

sage trellis
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The girl one?

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Or emerald

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The ruby one got scrapped btw

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Maybe when I'll have a new device to draw on I will start again

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But that won't be soon

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Maybe I will just submit the emerald one as gem quest and that's it

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Rip gem god offer

mossy shoal
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hm

sage trellis
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What ruv why do u hm sect_shocked

mossy shoal
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You are nice cultured

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sect_agree .

quaint nacelle
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an avatar resembling isoka a clown.

mellow salmon
# mossy shoal You make this skin kidding or is a serious attemp?

i believe it is a serious attempt

i mean, everyone starts from somewhere. Perhaps someone is just getting used to digital drawing or has been doing it for over a year. You never know.

i must add that my digital drawing is inferior to pen & paper drawing.

Also, if you don't like it, give feedback on how to improve it. From the tone it seems like you didn't like the skin. You could perhaps give feedback on how to make it better, and in this way you get to see better skins over time.

mellow salmon
autumn anvil
mellow salmon
rocky eagle
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I think you shouldn’t be rude by asking if it’s an serious attempt or not - everyone started from a beginner level.
Buuut this skin has been posted here numerous times and a lot of people including me already gave feedback esp. about gradients and stuff like drawing over default mouth but yet the same skin gets posted over and over again. So I kind a get why Moon asked that too but I am not saying it’s okay to ask such things.

mellow salmon
# lusty mason

Heya! Some feedback for you:

Hair
The hairline seems to be really high, you could lower it. It appears rather line-y and pretty messy. I can also see some gradient in the hair.

Eyes (second)
I quite like its shape! However, the two eyes should be as similar as possible. Perhaps you could activate the mirror tool to mirror the eyes.

Mouth
Pretty ❤️ But Again, the left and right side arent symmetrical, so mirror tool again

Shirt
Right now the shirt is too squeezed. In a typical human body, the arms are to the side of the neck. Here, the arms begin in the neck area. make the shirt wider. Also mirror tool would help you here.

Blue flame (Back ground i suppose)
I quite like it. But, there are white unfilled spaces, so go through it once more. the mini-flames could be more joined-together as well. Overally, it's pretty and gives a glowing feel.

Grave
Is it meant to be icicles? The faces on them dont quite fit imo. Maybe you could do fake gradient to make them look like they are shining.

Overall
Nice start imo. You need to remember that there's a mirror tool in drawing applications and that helps save time. There are wobbly lines at certain areas of the skin that you may want to touch up. Also you'll need to shade the shirt and grave more.

Remember, gradients and outlines aren't permitted!

sage trellis
mellow salmon
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;-;

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why

sage trellis
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Well, you're talking about this one right?

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  1. My device is super slow and it's a huge struggle to draw
  2. I lost my motivation within 1.
  3. I deleted the hair layers since the hairline is too high, I needed to redo it, I couldnt so I gave up
  4. I will come back to designing once I get possibilities and the ruby outfit can be started once again
mellow salmon
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oh okie

sage trellis
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That won't be soon

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And

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If I ever get back to it

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My time will be limited

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So I guess slim chances

dark aurora
dark aurora
sage trellis
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No

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It isnt hard

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It is hard on my devicd

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But overall If I have time and motivation

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I can finish 1 outfit a day

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My first design took 3 days

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Note that I had to redesign it since I lost my old files

lusty mason
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design is hard❤️

timber mural
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depends TrollFast

lusty mason
# lusty dove Bf? Pls

FEMALE

The Microsoft thing (background): it looks pretty great

the hair: it's pretty good and it look cool however I don't like it I love it

the eyes: pretty cool I would say a 5 out o' 5

the mouth: it looks like the skin the lip color however I think I still like it

the shirt: doesn't really fit imo

quick harbor
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can i make a sadistic girl?

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(not terrifying)

blissful grotto
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Yes u can

quick harbor
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ah ok

warm agate
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There is a background item in the inventory (no the avatar background, the background that all 16 players share)
Is including that in the avatar set allowed? And are there specific guidelines for it?

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↑this

strange ibex
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Any fb ?

quick harbor
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If you braid the hair

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I think it will be nice

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the background is great

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lol telewolve

strange ibex
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It’s actually the foreground

sharp notch
strange ibex
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The hair is just a scetch I’m so bad at drawing hair braided hair would be impossible

warm agate
quick harbor
strange ibex
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Lol

warm agate
quick harbor
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gradie?

strange ibex
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Oh right shit I need to change that

quick harbor
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how can i make a sweater

strange ibex
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The lines are need to be more smooth
And it need more shades

quick harbor
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?

strange ibex
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Yes make everything smooth and add details later

quick harbor
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okay thank you

pine junco
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I need some feedback sect_peek 👉👈

quick harbor
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hair is great

strange ibex
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No air brush nomore

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I agree the hair looks great

quick harbor
pine junco
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xd

scenic bear
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where can I find the avatar template that leaves me more space? the one in pinnes messages cant fit a hair or hat

rocky eagle
quick harbor
rocky eagle
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I don’t think that was the question.
You use the one from pinned messages but when you start designing you use a larger canvas, like you can put the avatar template in your background

pine junco
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Actually, you can move and small them when trying to create hair or hat

quick harbor
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how

lucid fossil
quick harbor
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ı am using ıbs pint

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ıbis paint

pine junco
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Go to the layer numbers -> search Move Layer -> you can move or small or big them whatever you want

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You can choose what layer to be moved

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I mean, before pressing the Move Layer

quick harbor
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Nothing changed

lucid fossil
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Try to move your finger/pen on the screen GW_pika_think

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Or look again the layer

quick harbor
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haaa

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okokok

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I have just done thank you so much

blissful grotto
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Pro

pine junco
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Not rlly koekje
I use many layers but because of I encountered lag many times, I merge the layer down 🥲

sharp notch
# pine junco I need some feedback <:sect_peek:696411601921638421> 👉👈

heya! its hard to give feedback on only a few items, but i'll try my best 😁

hair:
-it has some white pixels/outlines on the side of the hair, it isnt there when i zoom in though, so it may be a discord thing. either way, maybe check that to be sure it is gone

eyes:
-they are very, very light, not sure if they would fit good on darker skintones 😬
-the dark eyelashes and eyebrows are really contrasting, maybe go for a lighter brown to match both the light eyes and the brown hair?

mouth:
-same issue as with the eyes, im not sure if they will fit on the darker skintones, it also disappears into the skin color already, especially from a distance

pine junco
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Thanks for the feedback! cute_heart
I'll change the colour

sharp notch
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anyone else who needs feedback?

quick harbor
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wait pls

sharp notch
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sure, take your time. if you need feedback you can always ping me

quick harbor
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oka :P

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okay

rocky eagle
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I can also give a little bit feedback

  • I like the color of the pullover it’s a nice reddish orange tone
    Some things I spotted:
  • your Avatar is outlined - did you copy and paste the avatar from pinned messages?
  • the shape of your eyes is different - I would use a mirror tool to make them look the same. Mirror, flip and reposition. Imo eyebrows are a bit too high too
  • did you use gradients on the shirt? If yes, they are not allowed :/
rocky eagle
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Hmm I don’t know your Programm but do you know why you have an outline there?

quick harbor
quick harbor
rocky eagle
quick harbor
quick harbor
rocky eagle
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I mean you need to remove the outline but if you don’t know how maybe some other person who also uses ibispaint can help you with that issue

gentle lily
worthy moth
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I use ibis too and honestly have no idea why that line is theresect_peek

gentle lily
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me: okay nice, i almost fi-
lower hair part: hello there~
me: sect_sad

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but anyways, any fb? (excluding hair that is wip)

rocky eagle
quick harbor
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its okay?

pine junco
gentle lily
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pog

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ye luv it 😌👌

pine junco
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Thank cute_heart

gentle lily
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and my hair looks like shit feelsfunny

pine junco
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Nah, it looks awesome af cute_heart

somber bronze
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I join the hair looks like shit club

pine junco
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Nuuu it's pretty cute_heart cute_heart cute_heart

gentle lily
quick harbor
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İts interesting but why idk :' feedback please?

lucid fossil
pine junco
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voting time feelsfunny
Choose the best owo

gentle lily
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what's the difference GW_pika_think

blissful grotto
gentle lily
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oh i see now feelsfunny

sharp notch
# quick harbor oka :P

sorry for the delay, got busy with something 🙈 is this your first attempt? i dont remember anymore, or at least is has been a long time. either way, i would change these things:

-as liiv said, there are some issues with how you got the template placed. im not too familiar with the program, but im sure others will be able to help you out with that
-the whole outfit seems to be messy, by using different brushes which doesnt fit the wov style. make sure you use a pen tool or something which has a stabilser which just draws classic shapes and nothing speacial
-the eyes have a weird shape and look weird. probably due to the 2 different shapes per eyes. i recommend you to give both eyes the same shape. i would also make the eye whites actually white, especially if the outfit is meant to be normal and not any supernatural creature. a good idea is also to make the pupil bigger. it gives a dead look off atm
-the shirt has gradient, make sure to check the pinned guidelines 😉
-the blue shirt part is quite messy, make sure to fix that too

scenic bear
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Hello, could anyone give me a little feedback on my eyes and hair shape? Ik I didn't shade them yet (my first attempt 🙈)

dusk kiln
somber bronze
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Its not done yet

dusk kiln
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Oh🥺

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But... You should keep it mirrored

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Its awesome

somber bronze
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Nah

dusk kiln
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🥺 Oki...

quick harbor
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İs this better? GW_pika_think GW_pika_think GW_pika_think GW_vamp_peek

gentle lily
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mhm, yep, bg killed me

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fb is welcome

lucid fossil
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highlights pls||jk||

burnt yoke
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Feedback? GW_vamp_peek

gentle lily
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looks great cute_heart

lucid fossil
gentle lily
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any final fb before i submit?

lofty estuary
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@morte9x1, You do not have any queued/opened ticket for claiming rewards.

smoky nacelle
mellow salmon
mellow salmon
blissful grotto
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Still ketchup

blissful grotto
rocky eagle
scenic bear
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Hiiii this is my second try, feedback appreciated!

quick harbor
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I cant type anymire 🤝

zenith oasis
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Hello?

fluid cedar
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Hi there, anyone got any tips for levelling up I want to send my sketch

fluid cedar
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OK ty

umbral wave
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Np

strange ibex
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Now I only need a guy and a girl

quick harbor
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I smell gradient on the first pic hmMmMmmMMM

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But it looks awrsome

strange ibex
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Thx but where ?

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I made sure not to use any airbrush

quick harbor
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Inside

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Like wgen it fades from darker purple to lightrr purple

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When

strange ibex
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I used two layers of purple

quick harbor
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Gradient doesnt really mean using airbrish

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It means the fade from one color to another

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Like the smooth fade and all

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I would suggest to either use only a flat color or maybe to use a darker shade but in blocky form

strange ibex
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Wait I will change it real quick

quick harbor
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Sure

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You can also do a fake gradient (a gradient you do manually without any special brush with fade)

strange ibex
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Oh sheet you are right 😅 I have so many layers the old air brush layer was still visible I mixed them up

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So embarrassing

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Ty

quick harbor
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Yw GW_foxto_love

strange ibex
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Forgot some layers again this must be the final one

tawny cosmos
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That is grave?

lusty dove
sage trellis
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Ok I actually wrote this in the wrong channel, sorry!!!

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I want to make it clear, please don't dm me for advice. Im not bothered, I really appreciate it, but I'm not a "master", ok? I'm not that good and asking me, a new person in this domain about this it's risky since I'M NOT ELIGIBLE FOR GIVING ADVICE. If you really want advice, please ask here, people here are way helpful than I am. Thank you.

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I wrote it in role ideas instead of here sect_sad

timber mural
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at least you get dms

sage trellis
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That is a little bit funny

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I didnt get many

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But to be cautious

worthy moth
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I suggest if you just send that to the people that sended u a dm...sect_peek

Nobody will read it here and otherwise you can just set your dms on private aka closed. If you need any help with that, feel free to dm me ^^

sage trellis
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Sorry if I bothered you. I just wanted to make it clear here. That's all sect_bunny

rocky eagle
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no I didn’t DM them Jeremiahmeme

sage trellis
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I dont even know what to explain lol

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Kids, use stabilizer <3

rocky eagle
sage trellis
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Draw.

rocky eagle
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I prefer Leticiels tutorial more, it was „draw base + add details“ Jeremiahmeme

sage trellis
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Yeah

rocky eagle
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Sadly I am not designing rn just lurking in here

sage trellis
somber bronze
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Me trynna figure out what to front item

sage trellis
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Thats so cool

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Maybe

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Some ghosts

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That have skeleton hands in them

rocky eagle
sage trellis
buoyant mantle
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Anyone need fb? 👀

lusty dove
lusty dove
buoyant mantle
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You didn't ping me originally, I'm here now😂

lusty dove
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😓

buoyant mantle
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Hair
The hair looks really good! The shading and lighting you drew in works really well. Gj!!

Eyes
The idea of having the eyes carry the hexagon kinda feel is really creative! Matching the color tone of the hair works nicely as well. If possible I would try to incorporate a bit more lighting, but they are good overall!

Mask
The mask looks good, but unfortunately masks go over hair in game. Maybe try adjusting how it fits? The design on the mask works really well though!!

Shirt
The shirt looks very nice! The details on it work well and feel that they fit in with the overall theme of the outfit. The only thing that I would change a bit is that some of the lines are a little wobbly.

BG
Really cool background! I would try adding more details (maybe some coils would work well). Also~ there's currently outlines on the hexagons which unfortunately aren't part of the style of wwo😓

Really strong design overall, great job so far!!

buoyant mantle
tawny cosmos
buoyant mantle
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I always need pingcat_sad

astral yoke
pine junco
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You'll believe god is a woman 🧚‍♀️

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P. S: The outline is blurred because I don't want it to accidentally mixed with the bg xd

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And I need feedback too 🙈

buoyant mantle
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PS: there are a few parts where I see gradients~ I assume that's from the extra outline most designs have when they are fully shown off with the background photo and etc... just wanted to make sure^

pine junco
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Okie and thanks for the fb cute_heart

median briar
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I took a long break from this outfit bc I couldn't think of foregrounds GW_sadness I'm not sure how i feel about them

dusk kiln
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Im in love with your hairstyle btw 🥺

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How can you even shade it like that

median briar
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Tysm haha and tbh i kinda love drawing hair so i don't pay attention to time when shading it 😂

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Also references are my best friend

dusk kiln
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If thats a rushed hair, i wonder how amazing the one that is made with patience would be.

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Oh you didnt mean that

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Still amazing lol

median briar
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LOL it's fine feelsfunny

sour apex
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Lips eyes hair bg so so so perfect 🥺

median briar
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GW_vamp_peek that means a lot coming from someone who makes AMAZING outfits

stable ether
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,hmm what about this Marvel themed look I'm,thinking doctor strange

rocky eagle
sage trellis
sharp notch
somber bronze
rocky eagle
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👀

gentle lily
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@blissful temple @mellow salmon nice skin in #dev-vote cute_heart

sage trellis
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I have bad connection and I can't see :((

mellow salmon
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Oh chef egg-

sage trellis
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I think I do know the outfit

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I used to see it often here

rocky eagle
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I only saw it once I guess

blissful temple
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Ohhhh look izza eggieeeee!

pine junco
blissful temple
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Thank youuuu😊 ❤️

rose bough
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@blissful temple good luck to ur chef egg

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I want it ig

sage trellis
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I still cant see the photo oof

quick harbor
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Feedback please? GW_pika_think

gentle lily
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it's cute, but i think the eyes might be far from each other GW_pika_think

rocky eagle
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I love it 🥰
But I agree with Taryara, they are a little bit too far apart, now they kind of look like bees eyes if you know what I am trying to say

sour apex
quick harbor
blissful grotto
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a worthy opponent

rocky eagle
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me who hasn’t designed anything for over a week 3593byeeeeeee

sour apex
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I even deleted and reworked feelsfunny

gentle lily
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i made design, submitted and hate it it now feelsfunny

rocky eagle
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I know that feeling

sour apex
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I designed, submitted, hated it, reworked it, and begged minimod not to submit the original feelsfunny

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I hate myself feelsfunny

gentle lily
rocky eagle
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i just watch mine fail in voting soon

gentle lily
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idk is it way too high or low, the message said that

rocky eagle
gentle lily
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i'll rework the skin anyway

rocky eagle
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Which one was it?

gentle lily
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dragonskull necromancer

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dont look for it

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it's trash asf feelsfunny

sour apex
rocky eagle
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Yeah, I am also trying to find out what was wrong with my last 2 submissions

sour apex
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gj n gl sect_agree

rocky eagle
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my head is like galaxybrain bye

sour apex
#

I try to come up with new ideas
My brain:

vapid pilot
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i know how that feels

tulip jacinth
#

if you are in lack of ideas for skins to make, well I suggest a frog skin because it is trendy and so cute!

rocky eagle
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But there is already a frog skin IG koekje

tulip jacinth
buoyant mantle
# quick harbor Feedback please? <:GW_pika_think:776170462555144212>

It looks really good! The shading and lighting you did camd out very well. The colors you chose complement each other really nicely. Personally, there's only 2 things I would change

1- Lift the "Strawberry Milk" design up on the shirt a bit more to show the design more
2- (already said above) But move the eyes just tinge closer to each other.

Great job overall!!

untold ingot
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Feedback, and which one is better

quick harbor
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I like second one more cute_heart

rocky eagle
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Depends on what you are aiming for wsmile 1 is defmore smexy

dusk kiln
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I think 2

quick harbor
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I think also 2 is better

junior thistle
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Same

untold ingot
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I will choose 2 according to everyone's opinion but I don't know what to do next GW_pika_think

junior thistle
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Is it supposed to be a quest?

blissful grotto
#

1

untold ingot
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@junior thistle I have not thought about it yet, if possible I will work on the male version

untold ingot
lusty flare
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I want to design outfits, what should I do?

median briar
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^ read pins first of you haven't yet

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If*

lusty dove
mellow salmon
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Opinions? I need female shirt ideas

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The male bg isnt shaded yet^^

hollow bobcat
#

The hairline is too high

mellow salmon
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alrighty, ill lower it

crisp forge
blissful grotto
autumn anvil
#

yes

sour apex
#

Still:

crisp forge
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just imagineGW_kek_dog

crisp forge
#

IMAGINE THE RED SHIELDS AROUND YOU OMGGG

strange ibex
buoyant mantle
# lusty dove 1 or 2?

The second image with the head piece works really well with the theme and compliments the other items nicely. I would definitely go with that!! Good job so far :3

buoyant mantle
# mellow salmon Opinions? I need female shirt ideas

It looks very good so far! The shading and lighting used on the hair is very effective. It was already said, but I would try to lower the hairline just a bit more. The two backgrounds also look nice! What kind of theme are you going for with the design? That would make it easier to come up with ideas for the other items.

buoyant mantle
# strange ibex

Great job so far! All the items add weight to the design so that's a plus for it! I would try to add some more shading on the males hair and eyes. Also, some of the writing comes off a bit messy and too much like handwriting in my opinion (for example: Telewolve). I would also try to make the crack on the males screen a bit more bold. The theme of the design overall is really creative!! Can't wait to see the finished product!

strange ibex
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and thx for the kind words I really appreciate it 🙂

somber bronze
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@buoyant mantle you

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Feedback? 🥺👉🏻👈🏻

buoyant mantle
#

ofc!! Send emPandaaaaFreude

lusty dove
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Fb? and some ideas for the bg

buoyant mantle
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@lusty dove aaaa I'm glad you brought over the mask to this guy!! It works really well. It looks reallh good so far, the only thing I would change tbh is that that light in the eyes is reflected >< For the background, maybe do something with like a robot? 👀 That could honestly work for a foreground as well though😂

quick harbor
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I'm not sure abaut the outfit, feedback please?

buoyant mantle
# quick harbor I'm not sure abaut the outfit, feedback please?

It looks really nice!! I love the addition of the purple green contrast. All of the other colors work well also! The only thing I would suggest would to either add a FG or BG item to replace either the hat or mask item (unless the mask is apart of the eyes, then you have an room for another item!) It's not necessarily needed, but I think an extra item infront or behind the avatar would just make it have more weight... not sure if that makes sense. Great job though!!

pliant olive
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the hair seems a bit unnaturally split in the center with the purple line through the middle

stable ether
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Um can someone teach me how to make suits and ideas please.

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!discordhat

buoyant mantle
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@stable ether hey! I reccomend checking out the pinned messages to find out how to design for the game.

You can use the commands ?discord hat and ?discord shirt in #bot-commands :)

stable ether
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Ok thanks flayer

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discord hat

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?discord hat

dense kelpBOT
gentle lily
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for only these 2 items i needed 36 layers GW_kek_dog

somber bronze
gentle lily
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i must buy it

gentle lily
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you haven't seen the hair yet koekje

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here it is koekje

quick harbor
#

hawtttttttttttttt

somber bronze
dusk kiln
dusk kiln
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||i like the old lips better btw, this one seems so thick...||

gentle lily
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haha, ty

somber bronze
dusk kiln
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It kinda it, still counts 🪞

somber bronze
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K time to change the hair entirely

dusk kiln
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Noo 😭

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Alright, it is not 🪞 .

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Just keep the hair

strange ibex
somber bronze
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Nah they are "glasses"

strange ibex
#

My second guess was “hat”

gentle lily
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hair finished ✌️😌

timber mural
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nice

gentle lily
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okay time to sleep lol

gentle lily
graceful egret
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Love the color contrast

hollow bobcat
#

I might say something about the eyes shape but it'd get ignored anyways as always so

shut crystal
queen wolf
#

@graceful egret Hey, please don’t use epileptic emojis on the server. They’re against our rules

graceful egret
#

Sowwy

median briar
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A or B for the girls front item?

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GW_vamp_peek ignore the guy he has nothing to do with the question i was just too lazy to crop him out

mellow salmon
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Both are so good-

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I would prefer 2 tho

median briar
#

Okay ty, also someone suggested floating lanterns but I thought it might be weird with the background, what do u think 🤔

mellow salmon
crisp forge
quick harbor
#

fb pls✨

quick harbor
#

Feedback?

median briar
quick harbor
#

pink 👁️👄👁️

median briar
# quick harbor Feedback?

I would make the straps a little less round but you probably don't even need to do that, looks great just some more shading 😍

median briar
grim pond
#

Can someone send me the skin base? I wanna try to make one UwU

quick harbor
#

only girl

median briar
median briar
grim pond
quick harbor
#

ty for fb

median briar
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Ofc excited to see the outcome

astral yoke
acoustic wyvern
#

Not done but any feedback?

blissful temple
acoustic wyvern
pine junco
#

#dev-vote that skin not mine 👁️👄👁️

gentle lily
#

Yeah, it's not your style 👀 i was also wondering y does it say it's yours lol

pine junco
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lol

#

Um

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this is awkward

rocky eagle
#

Did you tell Mods yet? Maybe they can remove it, it has just been posted like a few minutes ago

pine junco
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Wait

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Ok done

#

how to calm-

rocky eagle
#

Now I am really curious who made it 👀

pine junco
#

same

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Alright, it disappeared

shy kraken
pine junco
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pretends nothing happens sect_peek

safe smelt
#

Looks like I've been summoned 👀

blissful temple
#

Nice skin👀

safe smelt
quick harbor
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Lets keep the ratio on her cute skin good 🤝

timber mural
#

xd

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the eyes seem a bit off though

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other than that i guess it's nice anime_sip

untold ingot
#

Feedback for background?

sage trellis
scenic bear
graceful egret
#

Ciute

untold ingot
untold ingot
gentle lily
#

which shirt?

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i think 1st one matches better w/ the theme since the theme is connected w/ angels 👀

scenic bear
#

Please feedback and ideas for a shirt

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😃

next solstice
#

I thought of doing a RL skin a week ago or so 😂 feedback? And the outfit too

steep moth
#

Im making this outfit (the rainbows are not coloured i will delete lineart shade and i think i will change the hair too

rocky eagle
next solstice
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Yea the eye was predone. I wanted to kind of paint sketch the rest first before making it cleaner

hollow bobcat
#

there is already a RL skin in the game

gentle lily
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okay, which hair color? xd

quick harbor
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second

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oh wait there is voting thingy

gentle lily
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yeah lol

gentle lily
#

how to wings

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and any fg ideas? 👀

lucid fossil
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Hmm wait

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how about starz

gentle lily
#

golden stars....sure

vague shard
#

Guys, can you draw skins on your own character? 🤔

junior thistle
gentle lily
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ooh, nice idea! i'll try it cute_heart

junior thistle
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I'm happy i could help ^^

mellow salmon
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Fb?

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And the shirt is meant to be a leather jacket on a dress thing

Opinions on that?

blissful temple
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Buttons on the jacket

buoyant mantle
# somber bronze 🥺👉🏻👈🏻

It looks great. I was thinking about fg items when you posted it on your story but couldn't come up with any. You did a great job with coming up with it! The fg works really well. All of the items fit and add weight to the design which is always a plus. I'm not sure if this is just the image quality but the colors on the shirt look much more dull than on the fg, is this intentional? Great job overall!!

sour apex
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the template has been reversed :v

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@mellow salmon

dusk kiln
gentle lily
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yeah

sour apex
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@gentle lily She is radiant 🤩

gentle lily
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yess cute_heart

acoustic wyvern
sharp notch
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GW_vamp_peek anyone in need of feedback? if so, please ping me to a link or reply with your design please

astral yoke
dusk kiln
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I wanted to try a new hairstyle, but i feel like i overdetailed it now koekje

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Does it look overdetailed

blissful temple
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@sour apex ohhh that skin in #dev-vote is beautifullll🥺

dusk kiln
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Ikr 🥺

sour apex
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ty :v

dusk kiln
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Imagine not having 100 downvotes already at first minute

dusk kiln
blissful grotto
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13:4

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Pro

dusk kiln
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3/1 already...

blissful grotto
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Getting 3:1 within 5 mins

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Pro

somber bronze
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||i wish Leticiel would make me a fanart, i love her fanarts||

dusk kiln
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Hmmmmmmmmm

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Whats a "0% gang"

blissful grotto
dusk kiln
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Oh

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Thats me

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But im like -100%

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Not even 0

scenic bear
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sorry for lower quality image

rocky eagle
scenic bear
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Ik, the shirt is just a sketch thingy

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Thanks for the advice!

frosty rover
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;-; I did my fist avatars ever... can I get some fb •~•?

dusk kiln
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BAA NAA NAAA NAAAAAA

silent widget
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@frosty rover AHhh- I MISSED YOU!

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Wait I did?

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Let's not flood this chat though.

graceful egret
frosty rover
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I am using this but I change the opacity ;-;...

silent widget
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IMO, actually too detailed ;-;

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She is suffering from success :v

frosty rover
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=))

mellow salmon
gentle lily
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yesss cute_heart

sharp notch
scenic bear
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Heartbroken girl maybe?

vocal vessel
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sweats did this one day but hahhhh it‘s like from almost a year ago

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Actually funny thing I stopped designing so I will never change/finish this

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(Thats so ugly)

sharp notch
# frosty rover ;-; I did my fist avatars ever... can I get some fb •~•?

hey hey! looks like a really good first attempt, it is pretty hard to distinct a theme yet, but sometimes thats fine either way, this is my feedback:

-the clothing from the boy is pure black and it is hard to see the details on it. for wov style, you best avoid using pure black for anything except shading purposes (altough it may not look pretty if thats the case). because it is really hard to shade and just makes things disappear like your case 🙈
-the mask of the boy and his clothing could suit better, think about the one ingame that you can get from the rose wheel (see ss)
-avoid using gradient! the ears, hair, grave and eyes have some of it. i suggest you to read the style guide, so you can fit it to the wov style.
-im not sure whats wrong with the female eyes. i think they are too low and too far from eachother? it also may be due to the hairline being too high. have you tried doing it like you did with the boy? as it suits there very well
-the female clothing misses shading, when shading, you need to shade every item
-what are the black dots above the boy his mask? they look odd, are distracting and seem out of place, removing would be better
-the letters for the grave look kinda basic, if you use letters, play around with the style and how it could fit the outfit in the best way possible

overall it is a really good first attempt, but things need some fixing, a good idea can be to take a look at the style guide and take some inspiration from things which are already ingame ^-^

frosty rover
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Thank you so much, the dots are piercing and they part of the eyes layer :0..

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Also I will try to fix it and read the guide thank you again

scenic bear
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In the pinned messages it say that head part of naked guy and body part are on different layers. how do I divide them?

gentle lily
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will shade wings later, rn i'll take a break xd

sharp notch
# scenic bear The shirt isn't finished but please feedback on the other items?

alright, you dont seem to be so certain about your theme, are you sure you were wanting to go in that direction? when designing, you need some confidence because you are putting yourself out there with your art skills and you can be proud of what you make, even if it is your first attempt. have a clear theme in mind before designing, that helps you a lot and will give you confidence in what you are creating! i havent seen you here before, can it be that you are new to the designing community? it looks really good for a first attempt. but this is what i would change:

-i would make either the color of the hair, or the color or the heart something else, at first sight i thought the broken heart pieces were long pigtails, since there is a lot in the facial area, i suggest you to change the haircolor
-the shards floating in the hair seems weird, like it is just there to fill in the space, what if you put them more in the centre and so fill in the white spaces inbetween the heart pieces? it like it looks like it got shattered there and not already moved. that will make it more fitting and brings the theme more clearly
-the hair is obviously mirrored, there is nothing wrong with that, but due to it it gives the hair a weird shape, it makes it look like the hair is very flat
-the sticker on her mouth has outlines, which isnt allowed as by the style guidelines
-what is the front supposed to be? im not entirely sure how to link that to the broken heart theme

Overall, it is a nice start! but there are some things which need fixing on the design, and a little bit more confidence in you and your art skills!

sharp notch
gentle lily
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tyy ^^

scenic bear
sharp notch
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❤️ no problem! if you would need more feedback you are always free to ping me!

frosty rover
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@sharp notch

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:0

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I will delete the bg item :/

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Just ignore that for now

vague shard
graceful egret
safe smelt
silent widget
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I will continue this later but uhh- How is the hair for you guys?

frosty rover
blissful grotto
vague shard
sharp notch
burnt yoke
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is it like this for now, any feedback?

dusk kiln
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Im not sure with this bg tbh...

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Imma just make another bg instead

frosty rover
worthy moth
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Wow, that’s awesome @burnt yoke ! 🤩

May I see how the eyes look without the mask?^^

dusk kiln
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Someone teach me eyes or i will rage quit sect_angry

worthy moth
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The eye shape looks good to me 👀

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First draw a simple pupil, that would be the easiest and after that start highlighting.

dusk kiln
worthy moth
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Oh well, I’d love to help you draw the pupilkoekje

Just send me a dm ^^

dusk kiln
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Alright 🥰

frosty rover
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♡__♡....

dusk kiln
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Are those eyebrows so thick?

frosty rover
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Don't seem thick to me :/

sharp notch
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i agree, they dont look as thick, i think we have thicker items ingame

dusk kiln
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Alright then, any other feedback?

sharp notch
# burnt yoke ^^

looks cute! but i think the eyes are a little cross eyed. not sure if it is because of the hair or the eyeballs being positioned weirdly

lucid rover
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where do you get the avatar?

sharp notch
lucid rover
sharp notch
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just a moment

lucid rover
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Ah yes I found

sharp notch
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ah great 😁

lucid rover
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I thought it would be a picture, but that's okay :)

wise mirage
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Any fb for this sketch?koekje

median briar
rotund stirrup
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Yes its really cuteHihi But I would make the lips bigger too

quick harbor
lusty dove
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Fb? Idk, I have no ideas for the bg and fg

mellow salmon
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hair could have more shading

quick harbor
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fb lol😽❤️

safe smelt
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I need feedback on this, also need suggestions, if I should submit as gems quest or make a full boy girl outfit