avatar-ideas

[quick harbor]

ok thanks

[next talon]

those templates aren’t png tho

[somber bronze]

and they got a grey background

[next talon]

that’s what i meant

[somber bronze]

well png can still have a background there is regular and transparent png

[next talon]

oh like that yeah ur right but i meant no bg lel

[topaz silo]

The gray background is easy to get rid of

And yea i did save them as png

They are

[somber bronze]

not really there is no way to get rid of it in medibang👀

[topaz silo]

Ik they are

[burnt apex]

yeah but they're not transparent

[stuck palm]

I have got it like this for now. Anything you would change ?

[dusty drift]

Yeah, I'd take the pupils a little further apart because it looks like she's squinting.

But otherwise very beautiful

[spring mauve]

the mouth does look really good in my oppinion, but you can work on the eyes. The eye itself needs some shading and the shaoe of it looks very unnatural tbh.
The pupil is also not centered, which makes it look a bit odd.
im also not sure if uve used gradients but if u have, gradiemts arent allowed👀

||all just my oppinion tho||

[stuck palm]

Ok, thank you

[topaz silo]

@stuck palm also note that your eyes have outlines which aren’t allowed

@atomic hearth do I need to move her eyes down?

[atomic hearth]

Simona doesnt have outlines afaik, just like yours the line doesnt go fully around and isnt the same thickness everywhere

[shell geyser]

You make these things through computer?

[atomic hearth]

@topaz silo I dont really know for sure to be honest, Im not into technical details like that, i dont design 😅

[shell geyser]

Even if the game it's for mobile

[atomic hearth]

there are good apps for designing on pc and on mobile ^^

[shell geyser]

Oh ok

[atomic hearth]

copied from pinned messages
The apps that you can use to be able to design an avatar:

Mobile:

• Medibang paint (Recommended) For iOS and Android
• ibis Paint X
• Sony sketch (recommended for Android)
• Sketch

PC:

• Inkscape (Recommended)
• Adobe illustrator
• GIMP
• Paint tool SAI
  Or any drawing apps

[shell geyser]

Iwant to make a vatar idea tho

[atomic hearth]

you can try to design it yourself, but you can also just give a description or some reference images of something you like ^^

[shell geyser]

Sorry for the grammar it's the phone I have big thumbs

[atomic hearth]

as long as it isnt copyrighted like anime characters

[shell geyser]

Film ones too

Aww man...

Only anime characters

[atomic hearth]

yeah anime/movies/games/tv all copyrighted characters

[near grove]

the lips can be thinned out at the corners

[radiant totem]

the hair has pretty shaky lines

[cold solstice]

How to able simetry on ibis paint x?

[quick harbor]

@cold solstice

Ruler in top corner to open the menu

[cold solstice]

@quick harbor thx

[quick harbor]

Np

[cold solstice]

Isnt on the midle how to fiz?

[quick harbor]

Move the circle

[cold solstice]

Thx again

[quick harbor]

Be sure to do each part of your outfit on separate layers btw and read the style guide @cold solstice

[cold solstice]

Ok

I Just want to make a hat

[quick harbor]

Well make sure to do it on a different layer than the body

[cold solstice]

Look good?

[quick harbor]

Outlines arent allowed sadly @cold solstice

[cold solstice]

No black lines?

Ok

Now?

[quick harbor]

I'm making random stuff that at then end I never finish again 😆

@quick harbor wanna make some random thing with me

I got an ideaa

@quick harbor Let's try

[noble canyon]

@cold solstice there are still outlines, for them to not be outlines they cant be going around the whole shape

[quick harbor]

Hello overpaid designers. First of all last week lava design sucks like really 2/10

Second... if its limited item why re release it

oooof whats the point of limited item

My little sister could draw better to be honest.

[atomic hearth]

They are not limited, everyone can still get them from the random shop, its only sold for a limited time without haiving to random it

and i am so done with your insults

[quick harbor]

Oh when did facts became insults?

[atomic hearth]

its an opinion, not a fact

[quick harbor]

It was facts

Lol

A Mod who has tempered is not a good mof

mod

you should be taken out from that hobby or job

[atomic hearth]

I am not having a temper i gave you verbal warns and you keep insulting

[quick harbor]

Whats wrong with giving facts or so you say opinions

[atomic hearth]

constructive criticism only please

explain why you didnt like it, and give your own ideas

Lighze is one of the most popular designers, most stuff that gets released is made by them

[quick harbor]

Well the hair is not visible cuz everything was red and black

And it was over designed big hairs and big background and the color hurts my eyes

You cant even tell if its a hair or not

Plus its not even attractive and also it didnt even looked wearable

Lets be honest only few people bought that

[atomic hearth]

I didnt buy it either, but that doesnt mean you have to trash talk it, there is always gonna be someone who does like it.

and you are still insulting it...

[quick harbor]

Well 1/10 people will like it

[atomic hearth]

so? what is it to you? saves you some money then

[quick harbor]

Well im willing to spend thousands of dollars on the game.

Compared to my previous rpg games like roblox and woozworld and stuff i spent so little for the wwo

Anyway i lost the point bye

I honestly actually liked the outfit and have even seen fan art done of it

Also majestical myself and toon are doin a uni horn 4 u

[buoyant zealot]

@quick harbor So, well, why don't you tell your sister to make their outfit and then post it here, so they got in-game, and you buy it, huh?

If you believe your sister could do better than the designers do ,then tell your sister to make outfits for you.

[atomic hearth]

@buoyant zealot Heya I already replied to him, no need to be rude back, he already quit...

[buoyant zealot]

I don't think I was rude, to be honest. But fine, I'm stopping 👌

[noble canyon]

what outfit was being talked about?

[quick harbor]

Something with lava?

[topaz silo]

“Overpaid designers” We don’t get paid, right?

[hazy falcon]

the topic is cleared afaik

[topaz silo]

I was actually just wondering that

Do these people get paid lol

[quaint bison]

No

[hazy falcon]

@topaz silo designers get codes for their designs, if they go in game ^^

[topaz silo]

Ok

[quick harbor]

Has something like a melon girl been done before?

[somber bronze]

@noble canyon this one

@topaz silo you'll get roses, coins and loot boxes as well afaik, that's atleast what it says after you voted for everything in the voting gallery👀

It also says "if you want to get paid instead contact philipp" there are hired designers indeed that's not really a secret tho these mostly got a contract with Philipp

doesn't go for everyone tho ig

[quick harbor]

Codes remembers me of the last time I got ones from the tournament and what happened...

[somber bronze]

Rip Jin :(

[quick harbor]

I still find it funny 😂

[hazy falcon]

Ooooh the wrong name thingy?

[quick harbor]

Yes😂

[hazy falcon]

I don't even know what the price was

[quick harbor]

I really thought my username started with a capital!

[hazy falcon]

XDD

[somber bronze]

Big rip for Jin that's such a funny and sad story

[quick harbor]

@hazy falcon maybe like 1000 coins... roses.... lootbox.....

[hazy falcon]

[quick harbor]

[hazy falcon]

Sowwy... Yes it's a sad story actually

[quick harbor]

Still also funny😂

[hazy falcon]

Yes xD

[quick harbor]

Lol

Wait did you send stuff to the wrong person?

@quick harbor I might have typed my username starting with a cap..... but my username doesn’t have caps......

Lmao

[topaz silo]

@hazy falcon

Thoughts

[quick harbor]

Any idea what I should do with this?

[last mountain]

The shading Gives me a Harley Quinn vibe lol

[stuck palm]

Guys?

Any ideas for skin?

I kinda wanted to do medic or artist, but i think it was done before

[quick harbor]

You can still do it if it’s different enough

[stuck palm]

Oh ok thanks

[quaint bison]

@stuck palm you can do
-bodyguard
-aura seer
-seer apprentice
-president

And some others

[spring mauve]

||cyberpunk ||

[teal ingot]

GUNNER!!!!

[fiery depot]

How about creating characters like Harry Potter or Maleficent?

[quick harbor]

@fiery depot those are copyrighted

[fiery depot]

Oh oke

[cold solstice]

Good?

[stuck palm]

What about the eyes now?

[topaz silo]

They are too big

Id also suggest adding eyebrows

[stuck palm]

Yeah i will

These are just... Eyes you know :)

Are they ok nie?

*now

[quaint bison]

Removed these parts, they look scary and weird 👀

[topaz silo]

^

[quaint bison]

For the rest it looks noice

[stuck palm]

Oh ok thanks ❤

[quaint bison]

Oh the iris and eye have outlines

[topaz silo]

The eye is ok

The outline doesnt go fully around the eye

Not sure about the iris

[quaint bison]

Iris is outline, and with the eye I know it’s not fully, but you don’t have eye liner on those part of your eye 👀

[stuck palm]

Where in the Iris is outline? Am i just blind

?

Also i fixed the parts

[quick harbor]

@stuck palm eyes are still too big

And this is the outline

[stuck palm]

Oh ok

I didn't know that thanks

Now?

I dont know the eyes are a bit creepy to je now 🤔

*me

[quaint bison]

Remove these part please

[cold solstice]

WIP, any tips?

[quick harbor]

@cold solstice try drawing your own eye shapr

@stuck palm the eyes are too close together and still a bit big

[cold solstice]

@quick harbor🤔

Ok

I am bad at draw eyes

[cold solstice]

Finished(I think)

[quaint bison]

What?

[next talon]

he naked

[quaint bison]

Hahaha

[cold solstice]

No lol

[next talon]

also why is the hair cut off?

[cold solstice]

@next talon the image isnt long enough

[next talon]

u can make ur canvas bigger

[cold solstice]

How

I use ibis paint x

[next talon]

idk what app are u on

[cold solstice]

I need to make the clothes?

[quick harbor]

Yep

[cold solstice]

@next talon thx

[quick harbor]

Oof I hate designing hair 😩

[quaint bison]

Same qwq

[cold solstice]

I Fix the hair

[quick harbor]

I don't know if the hair fits the style of the game

[cold solstice]

[somber bronze]

i love hair once i got a shape

[cold solstice]

It will be a shit to fix

[quick harbor]

I hate hair until I finished it

[topaz silo]

@stuck palm

Like this

[stuck palm]

Ooh okay thank you ❤

I like this a lot better actually

[cold solstice]

Fixed lol

[stuck palm]

Well i still think the original was quite Nice for a first design for wwo ever, but i really appreciate that you give me constructive criticism so i Can get better

[quaint bison]

It's really good for a first one! Just asking, what do you want the theme to be?

[spring mauve]

@cold solstice is this a sketch or the main outfit?👀
If its not the sketch, try to not leave some spaces without colour, like there on the pic. also try to add some shading and dont draw the mask arround the default eyes since the eyes are changeable on the inventory

also maybe try to make smoother lines, except its intended of course

[stuck palm]

@@quaint bison I actually dont know yet. Maybe some ideas? I was thinking painter/artist but i dont know if it was done already

[rancid shore]

There is a skin Made of that idea ^^ but you can always try

[hazy falcon]

I need ideas aaaaah

[quick harbor]

i wonder if he’s happy

[hazy falcon]

Yes he is xD

[quick harbor]

looks a bit similar to lighzes? no?

[hazy falcon]

?

I can't send my references because of #rules-archived xD

[hazy falcon]

It's completely different xD

[quick harbor]

kinda looks similar lol, but what are you going for

[hazy falcon]

Idk yet

I only design mouths tho

[quick harbor]

@stuck palm mask is above hair layer

I don’t think it looks really similar

[spring mauve]

shape and theme are kinda similar tbh👀

[quick harbor]

@hazy falcon idk why but I see the terrific version of Cheshire cat's smile

[hazy falcon]

XD

[quick harbor]

Yeah, it's insane

Maybe you should try to make a terrific version now 👀😂😂

[hazy falcon]

[tawdry sequoia]

Bunny front item pls 👀

[hazy falcon]

@spring mauve mouths always gave the same shape tho

Bunny with worms

[tawdry sequoia]

no

Nooo

[hazy falcon]

And Christmas hat

[tawdry sequoia]

nOOOO worms allowed

[hazy falcon]

Worm with Christmas hat

Okay I accept! No worms.

[quick harbor]

Hahahahaha

[hazy falcon]

But

[quick harbor]

A mix of everything?

[tawdry sequoia]

NO BUTS

NO WORMS

[hazy falcon]

But!

[jagged belfry]

Is there a penguin/penguin inspired outfit in game?

[hazy falcon]

Grub.... Larve?

[tawdry sequoia]

UNLESS IT TURNS INTO A BUTTERFLY

[atomic hearth]

there was a penguin in te winter bp, but a new one would be great probably

maybe one that isnt a full face mask, but leaves open the face area

[hazy falcon]

a butterfly out of the eyes with a mouth like the avatar?

[quick harbor]

Ooooh, the smile its very similar of Alastor's smile as well!! (Yes, definitely I have an obsession with hazbin hotel) @hazy falcon

[jagged belfry]

@atomic hearth Thank you, i'll give it a go, don't expect too good from me tho 😊

[atomic hearth]

worms dont turn into butterflies.. caterpillars do

[quick harbor]

Some caterpillars with the avatar 😂😂

[tawdry sequoia]

Hyde wants creepy insecty avatars 😭

[hazy falcon]

With little Christmas hats

[quick harbor]

That doesn't make it less terrific 😂😂

[tawdry sequoia]

@quick harbor Truth xDD

[quick harbor]

Noooo, it's still being gross hahahaha

[hazy falcon]

It's cute! Accept your fate

[quick harbor]

I won't!!! I'm in the Sharon's mood, I don't like bugs definitely

[atomic hearth]

aww i love it

[stuck palm]

Well i like bugs but not when they are near me

[hazy falcon]

I don't like bugs either but it's cute

[quick harbor]

U should try it and make me change my opinion 😂😂

[stuck palm]

Do you think there is maybe a jellyfish outfit?

Or peacock?

[quick harbor]

Peacock it's already ig

But jellyfish I think no actually

@hazy falcon bugcat

[hazy falcon]

Ye but

[hazy falcon]

#avatar-catwalk?

[quick harbor]

That's the peacock

No, it's for show it to @stuck palm

[hazy falcon]

Ah ye xD made by Structure

[jagged belfry]

Is this a good eye shape?

[quick harbor]

Too big maybe 👀

[jagged belfry]

Alrightie

Oh wow that is not centered

[quick harbor]

And if you try to do it as more stretched? how to stylize it

[jagged belfry]

Better?

Hmm

[quick harbor]

Oooh yess

[jagged belfry]

Alright

[quick harbor]

The second one it's definitely better

[hazy falcon]

The eyes are too low placed and big

[jagged belfry]

I can try to stretch it a little

Oh okay

[quick harbor]

Let's see it 👀

[barren harness]

👀

[spring mauve]

are those two lines considered as "outline"? 👀

[quick harbor]

I think so

It looks like outlines tbh

[spring mauve]

oof ty

[quick harbor]

Nvm i'm a bit unsure about it^^

[spring mauve]

well, might need some help then. i tried to make the middle thing look like its standing out but this looks kinda odd to me ||ik those shaddows arent perfect, its just a scetch||
if anyone might wanna help, id be very thankful :>

[hazy falcon]

Basically if you look at the eyes the black line is not really around the white part and the eye looks like my snipers eye

[spring mauve]

i knew that the orange was a little bit similar but not that they look that much like em, ill change it, sorry n thank u 👀

[hazy falcon]

DW xD

[spring mauve]

nah ill just find another shape, shdnt be too hard xd

btw it really looks oversaturated on my phone, is it just discord or shd i try to lower the saturation?👀👀

[granite sparrow]

i think it might be a bit too saturated so maybe lower it a tiny bit

i think thats an outline around the mask as well

[spring mauve]

yea, ill change it, thank u c:

[granite sparrow]

welcome ^-^

[jagged belfry]

It feels like this eye is better

Omg can I stop missplacing the eye too

I need to center it more gosh

[stuck palm]

Thanks @quick harbor

Ok I think i will do Jellyfish

[quick harbor]

@stuck palm you're welcome 💜💜

And good luck!!

[stuck palm]

Thank you! ❤

[jagged belfry]

Is this better?

[stuck palm]

Yeah i think this is just right position @jagged belfry but i'm not a professional

[jagged belfry]

Yeep

[quick harbor]

Mmm... try to make the withe part, with the colours and everything and show it again

[jagged belfry]

Okay

[quick harbor]

But, this time I like it better

@quick harbor dont be rude pls

what is rude?

I dont think this is a good channel to talk about it, just look for it in a dictionary 👀

[atomic hearth]

@quick harbor This channel is for constructive feedback only, we do not tolerate rudeness such as 'its shit' so please mind your language or just dont say anything at all, if it is not gonna help improve the design anyway.

[jagged belfry]

I honestly can't design eyes really, but here

[hazy falcon]

Oooh it's really a nice start 😊 just try to place the iris more centered

[jagged belfry]

Ah yes, my brain don't know how to center stuff but i'll try

[spring mauve]

what program r u using, carmi?👀

[jagged belfry]

Ibispaint

[spring mauve]

ouh okay

[quick harbor]

@jagged belfry it looks really lovely

[jagged belfry]

@quick harbor Thank you tho I feel like completing this is gonna take forever since I barely can do the eyes Good enough

[quick harbor]

@jagged belfry don't worry about that, we have a first time for everything, I'm not good enough either for draw in my cellphone. But I see u are more talented than me!! So, I'm hoping you surprise me!!

[jagged belfry]

@quick harbor Aww you're really sweet! I bet you'll help me improve alot, and I bet you can draw good anyway

Also here

[quick harbor]

Okay, it's going very well, now try to add shades and, maybe the withe part u can make more... blurry? Just to make the effect of reflection 👀

Withe part, I mean the dots in the iris

[jagged belfry]

Hmm

Yeah i'll give it a go

[quick harbor]

What theme are you using? 👀

[jagged belfry]

I'm gonna make a penguin outfit, a bit diffrent from the "whole penguin suit" that currently is in game

I was thinking like a beanie with a penguin on or something

And a jacket

[quick harbor]

There is also this one

I'm seeing it as a female version 👀

Cause in game and that one are male only 😂😂

[barren harness]

10/10

V:

[jagged belfry]

Ooooop

I didn't know that one existed 👀

[barren harness]

there is a deer outfit?🤔

[jagged belfry]

Don't think so

[quick harbor]

Oooh, you should try with the deer 👀

[barren harness]

I want deer horns >:D

[jagged belfry]

I mean yes I could

[quick harbor]

Or maybe ask if u can make a female version

[jagged belfry]

Also here I tried adding some sort of "blir"

[quick harbor]

(Of the penguin of course)

[jagged belfry]

Blur*

I'll try with deer I guess

Also all I did here was taking the edge color between the White and blue and i drew a circle around the white

So no shading

[jagged belfry]

No

Yes

Omg my English

[median briar]

@jagged belfry you aren't allowed to have blurs in the wwo style, I think we meant lower the saturation, not blur ^^

[jagged belfry]

I can't right now- 😂

Hmm alright

Idk of that is blur tho but i'll try something else

[quick harbor]

@median briar yeah, sorry, I was trying to look for a way to explain it

[median briar]

@quick harborno it's fine I understand what you meant

[barren harness]

( ꈍᴗꈍ)

[jagged belfry]

I honestly don't know how to do this

[quick harbor]

@barren harness show one of the eyes u design 👀

[barren harness]

...

[median briar]

@jagged belfry well first let me show you something

[jagged belfry]

Alright

[barren harness]

@quick harbor (゜o゜;

Okeeeu

[cold solstice]

The ideias we post here can go to the game?

[quick harbor]

If u have the necessary votes in game, yes @cold solstice

[barren harness]

¿this?

[jagged belfry]

Eyes

[quick harbor]

Thks 💜 @barren harness

[spring mauve]

omg from where are the 1st eyes👀👀

[quick harbor]

@jagged belfry the "blurry" I meant was the third example of Neah's eyes

[barren harness]

Oh this @spring mauve

[spring mauve]

it isnt ig atm, right?👀

[barren harness]

Nope

[cold solstice]

@quick harbor where we vote?

[spring mauve]

uuuh i need those eyes👀👀👀

[jagged belfry]

@quick harbor Ooooooh thanks

@cold solstice In #dev-vote

[barren harness]

I want red hair and eyes uou

[quick harbor]

In the part of "inventory", then u have the items and there's a space ship @cold solstice

@spring mauve yessss, me toooo

And #dev-vote as well @cold solstice

[median briar]

@jagged belfry so I'm a little messy about this sort of thing but if you turn on the one I circled it will mirror, so if you draw on one side it shows on the other ^^ this is something often used by us

Inception btw 😂

[jagged belfry]

Ooh yeah I know that one, but I don't use it as often because I can't center things good, but thank you

[barren harness]

[jagged belfry]

Wait do I have to remake it all then @median briar?

[cold solstice]

Last question, how to submit my avatar idea?

[median briar]

@jagged belfry no, but I get what you mean by not being able to center things, this trick helps you though ^^ it will show if it's up to our standard
Plus I would rather take the time centering than being told to redo it all

@cold solstice ask a mod to put it in vote

[cold solstice]

@median briar thx

This hair fit in game style?

[quick harbor]

@median briar I'll take that advise for my future design, I didn't notice that was on ibis 👀

[jagged belfry]

Okay I guess, but acctully i'mma finish or redo it tomorrow because it's kind of late for me and I lost both motivation and energy to really do much right now 😅

[quick harbor]

@cold solstice mmm... dont think so, and you should try to make it with more volume, cause hair is not most of the time as close as the head

[median briar]

@cold solstice I would move the hair line down like this, the forehead looks big

@jagged belfry I'm sorry if I made you loose motivation 😦 it looks good especially if you're knew

[cold solstice]

@median briar thx, and about the mouth?

[jagged belfry]

@median briar Nah it wasn't you, don't worry, I loose motivation easily if I feel like i'm trying to do something I know I probably wont be able to do/finish

[median briar]

@cold solstice well is the face paint supposed to be a mask? If so the eyes can't go over it so you might want to make a hole around the eyes or something ^^

[quick harbor]

@jagged belfry don't worry, have a rest, I know you can do it, just relax and let your ideas flow

[median briar]

The mouth is good I don't really thing there's much to ask for with it

@jagged belfry and dw I'm the same way, I spends months on just one outfit

[cold solstice]

@median briar make a hole around the eyes gonna look strange , but i will try

[median briar]

@cold solstice you can do whatever you want about it tbh, it was just a suggestion

[jagged belfry]

@median briar @quick harbor Thank ya both for being really supportive and helping me out, I will continue with this, maybe i'll have more motivation and ideas tomorrow

[median briar]

@jagged belfry I'm sure you'll do great ^^ have a good night

[jagged belfry]

@median briar Thanks, you too 😃

[stuck palm]

What would you change so far?

[topaz silo]

Id move the eyes down

Just a little bit

[stuck palm]

Okay, thanks

[topaz silo]

Mhm

[stuck palm]

Like this?

[topaz silo]

Yea

Looks good

[stuck palm]

Okay, thank you so much❤

[hazy falcon]

The eyes are still pretty big

Or us it just me?

[topaz silo]

U right @hazy falcon

[hazy falcon]

And I would Center the iris more 👀 on the other side, is this gradient?

[topaz silo]

I looked closely at it im not sure

[cold solstice]

@median briar i fixed the hair

[median briar]

@cold solstice great 😄

The hairline looks better

[hazy falcon]

Hair layer is still under the mask layer

[cold solstice]

@hazy falcon ?

@median briar would i make the gravel?

[hazy falcon]

The order of displaying items is:
Order:

• Background (day/night)
• Back item
• Body part of naked guy
• Shirt
• Badge
• Head part of naked guy
• Mouth (new)
• Eyes
  - Hair
  - Mask
• Glasses
• Hat
• Front item

[cold solstice]

@hazy falcon the mask need to be in front of the hair?

[hazy falcon]

Yes

Also why are the eyebrows in front of the mask? Please read the pinned style guide and the layer order

[cold solstice]

@hazy falcon ;-;, it the make up of joker, how the hair will be on the back?

[hazy falcon]

That's the only way.... We have to follow the style guide and layer order and it says mask is in front of the hair. Yes it's a struggle every one of us knows xD and we already suggested a change 👀

[atomic hearth]

also i dont mean to ruin the party, but this is a copyrighted character

thats exactly the joker's look in the current movie

[hazy falcon]

and such a mouth is ig tho

[median briar]

@cold solstice as unicorn said, that would be copyrighted but.. you can take inspiration or make some variations of the joker for an outfit ^^

We've had a lot of people who do that

[quick harbor]

what do yall think so far???

[quick harbor]

@quick harbor ehi there ^^ the idea looks nice overall but there are a few things you should fix: 1. Gradient is not allowed, try to make shadows with different tones of the same colour 2. The black line on top of the eyes (I guess those are the eyelashes) is a tiny bit to thick in my opinion and you should make the eyebrows longer and thicker

okayokay thanks

[jagged belfry]

Just wondering if this is good

Acctully I must agree it looks Kinda off

[hazy falcon]

Yes it looks much better and I see the improvement now try to make the eyes less neat to each other 👀

[jagged belfry]

Okay

Otherwise i'll remake them

[hazy falcon]

The only thing would be the mirrored highlights. These could be the reason, why it looks off for you

[jagged belfry]

Hmm true

I'll fix that

[hazy falcon]

Now the eye position fits ^^

[jagged belfry]

It honestly feels like i'm spamming in here-

[buoyant zealot]

@jagged belfry It looks amazing for now. :P
And it's not spamming, you are just showing your progress.

[hazy falcon]

@jagged belfry don't worry, since you improve🎃

[quaint bison]

Nice

[buoyant zealot]

No idea how to proceed

[buoyant zealot]

Added a shirt with no details nor shading

[spring mauve]

maybe add some more shading on the hair and mask and make the mask hair a bit mor detailed. Atm they kinda look boring bcs they are all 100% the same. also make them a bt longer 👀

[buoyant zealot]

"them"?

I have no idea how to make the mouth better

How about.... a mouth?

[spring mauve]

yea, maybe and give the mask hair a bit more variation

[buoyant zealot]

@spring mauve I added the mouth for the mask

[buoyant zealot]

I have no idea how to make the hair be less "boring"

🤷‍♂️

[burnt apex]

give it more volume on top, it's pretty flat right now

[jagged belfry]

Is this a good shirt/hoodie?

[median briar]

@jagged belfry looks great I think maybe make the strings longer, but to be honest you actually don't need to change much about it at all

[spring mauve]

the colours dont really fit tho

[median briar]

@buoyant zealot the blue line is where the mask is and the red line is where it should be, its currently a little curved

[spring mauve]

the eye colour and then the simple brown if yk what i mean

[median briar]

@spring mauve I think it's fine depending on what she does with the other pieces of the outfit

[spring mauve]

yea thats y i said atm

[median briar]

Sorry

Didn't see that

[spring mauve]

no problem xd

[median briar]

@buoyant zealot also this is an idea of how to make the hair less boring, just an idea though ^^ also I think it would be less boring when you add some more shading

[jade knot]

I keep doing

[burnt apex]

sadly, outlines aren't allowed

have you checked the style guide? it'll help you a lot!

[jagged belfry]

Changed it up a bit, also sorry for dissapearing so often i'm just busy at school so I kinda justgo randomly

[topaz silo]

Carmi id make the sweatshirt strings thinner

[jagged belfry]

Ookay

@topaz silo better?

[burnt apex]

maybe you could add arms or detail the hood more? there's some hoodies in #dev-vote you can use as reference!

[jagged belfry]

Okay thanks i'll check it out

[quick harbor]

Arms are too big

[jagged belfry]

Alright

[next talon]

the hood (?) of a hoodie usually starts in front of a shirt instead of what u drew, behind the shirt

sorry it’s messy but imo this would look better

[jagged belfry]

Thank you

Also @quick harbor is this better?

(Sorry for ping)

[quick harbor]

Yes

[jagged belfry]

@next talon

[next talon]

yess

[topaz silo]

Yes

That looks good

[jagged belfry]

I feel like the hair could be better somehow?

[quick harbor]

@jagged belfry I think it would be better if you raise the eyes a bit and lower the hair a bit as well

I'd make the (idk how to call it, it is like a hat of a sweater?) a bit more lighter or darker because now it seems to be blending with the other part of the shirt.

[jagged belfry]

@quick harbor Alright, thank you

Also I think the "hat" is called a hood

[buoyant zealot]

@median briar Thanks for the hair thing.
But the mask was intentionally curved.

[buoyant zealot]

I'd make the hair cover the cheeks

Make the side hair cover the cheeks as well

[jagged belfry]

@buoyant zealot Like this??

Ignore the horns

[rancid shore]

Antlers 😉😅

[jagged belfry]

Ah yes

Me mixing up Swedish and English

[rancid shore]

Imo the hair looks to symmetrical

[jagged belfry]

Okay i'll try to fix it

[quick harbor]

@jagged belfry Your design looks great, I also love the idea

[jagged belfry]

@quick harbor Thank you

[hazy falcon]

That's the reason it looks weird 👀 because the hair is.... Flying up?

[quick harbor]

I have a question can I do a design that was already done, but with a very different look and new ideas

[novel nebula]

You can edit your message instead of correcting like * 😂👍

[quick harbor]

Lol thanks 😂

[tawny cosmos]

that boy or girl?

[quick harbor]

@quick harbor if it looks different enough👍🏻

[jagged belfry]

@hazy falcon Any better? (Sorry for ping)

[hazy falcon]

Ye xD

[jagged belfry]

Hehe

[hazy falcon]

It looks like a boy with long hair

[jagged belfry]

Yes I agree

Idk how to fix that 🤔

[atomic hearth]

nothing wrong with that

is that snow on the antlers?

[jagged belfry]

Yes

I'm thinking of something a little more Christmas/winter like, other than just a deer

A res nose

[quick harbor]

How is this?

[solid yarrow]

oo pretty cool

[quaint bison]

Looks nice gurl

[jagged belfry]

Nice

I'm thinking to maybe make it more obvious that my character is a girl?

[spring mauve]

why tho? this is more genderneutral so boys n girls can use this👀

[jagged belfry]

Hmm

I mean yeah I could remove the eyelashes completely

Boom

Gender neutral

[quick harbor]

Help! Im not liking it and dunno why

[jagged belfry]

Hmm.. I'm not sure but I agree that something seems off.. Try changing up the glasses mayyybe??

[quick harbor]

To what

[jagged belfry]

I don't know really, i'm not good as art

At*

[tepid gate]

Glasses gotta change, they show hair and doesnt look good design wise

How about an eyepatch/cyborg eye-piece?

On the right eye

You know that purple flame eye piece?

Like that

Also looks too transparent for the design?

[quick harbor]

I don’t cyborg is what im going for and I also don’t know that purple flame eye piece😅

[hazy falcon]

I would place the glasses a little bit lower

[quick harbor]

Like this?

I think its better now x3

[hazy falcon]

Yep ^^

[quick harbor]

Jin, it's super cute ^^
The only thing that I don't really like is the brightness on the hair but that's a matter of taste I guess😄

i like it x3 i think the Skin is cute and all the colors suits the Skin. very Beautiful art x3 (I really like that the Flowers are shining x3)

Shirt = best part😏

Haha xD

@quick harbor maybe its the background

[median briar]

@buoyant zealot why was it curved? A stylistic choice?

[quaint bison]

@quick harbor whats the theme?

[quick harbor]

Neon (maybe) @quaint bison

[hazy falcon]

Maybe some more details on the flowers could look good 🤔 currently it's just a shape

[topaz silo]

^^^@quick harbor id add a white middle to the flowers to match the glasses

[buoyant zealot]

@median briar Yep

[topaz silo]

Can someone add in the new roles to the list in pinned messages so I can see which new roles also need skins

Like guardian wolf and fc and canni

Please

❤️

If anyone wants to use this they can^^^

Just give me credit please ❤️

[quick harbor]

Why is it so zoomed in

[topaz silo]

Because i didnt make it according to size of the face so it would look weird

😂

[quick harbor]

Well it's hard to see how they look that zoomed in

Plus cant u just move them on ibis

[topaz silo]

I mightve forgot to make it a separate layer 🤫

[quick harbor]

Then how would someone else use it

Other than tracing

[topaz silo]

U put it on a layer

Shrink it down

And color the outside with the fill bucket to match the skin

Its not that hard

Or u can use the erase fill bucket for the outside on ibis

[quick harbor]

Still ain't perfect

[topaz silo]

I feel like ur just trying to seem right now... u know its ok to be wrong

[quick harbor]

I'm aware just next time use layers

It's very important cause one small mistake like that could make u have to restart an entire outfit

Didnt mean it in any rude way @topaz silo

[topaz silo]

Ok

[buoyant zealot]

🐭

[terse warren]

thats very ratatouille 😄

would love a pair of ears tho

and maybe tail

big blinky eyes 👀

[tawny cosmos]

🐰

🐰

[last mountain]

ummm so this the first draft of an outfit ive been working on what do yall think id love some feed back

[quick harbor]

@last mountain please check out the style guide in the pinned messages. Gradients aren’t allowed

[last mountain]

oh noo ok thank you

[terse warren]

love the stitches!

[last mountain]

@terse warren thanks so much ❤️

i have a question so when making the avatars can you use gimp?

[tawny cosmos]

I like it too💕
But as jin said Gradients are not allowed
And the text on shirt looks so flat

[last mountain]

lol ya im still working on the clothes may change them up a bit to a bit ripped

[terse warren]

yeah, I would try a different font or style of typography

[last mountain]

oh ok 🙂 thats a good idea

[tawny cosmos]

Wdym by gimp? @last mountain

[terse warren]

and maybe a bit of small bloody marks around the stitches? i think that would look cool 😄 just an idea

[last mountain]

its my preferred drawing app its like a better version of paint

[terse warren]

be careful with fonts tho, check for those that allow commercial uses 🙂

[tawny cosmos]

Auh GIMP.
Sure you can use any app

[last mountain]

awesome

[novel nebula]

I like the girl one a lot, the boy look a little plain tho

[last mountain]

and one more stupid question can you use diifrent skin colors

[terse warren]

why not, there are other colors in pinned messages

play around 😄

[last mountain]

lol ya i not sure what all im doing with him yet im still toying with ideas atm lol

[tawny cosmos]

And you can change skin color in game

[terse warren]

how about more facial scars?

the eyes look a bit girly tho, imo

[last mountain]

i ment like purple or green something like that

ooo good idea

n ya his eyes do seem a bit girly lol

[terse warren]

I wonder if dark goth eyeliners would work here 😄

[last mountain]

oooo ill test that out ❤️ thats an awesome idea

thank you guys so much for the feed back yall are so helpful

[tawny cosmos]

What do cats eat?

[terse warren]

cat food in a bowl :p

but what about cat toys in the background? and maybe cats to play with them

something like this

[tawny cosmos]

the avatar will hide it?

[terse warren]

maybe not directly on top on on the sides?

[tawny cosmos]

let me see

[honest mural]

Feed back?

[patent willow]

That is the BEST

Try to finish it im interested

[honest mural]

Ok thanks

[quaint bison]

copyright

[terse warren]

what dead hooman said.
Try changing color and maybe shapes of scar 😉 also switch sides if possible

other than that, I like the idea

[next socket]

copyrighted
not allowed to do copyright thing, and also the hat > hair

[honest mural]

Ok

[tawny cosmos]

@next socket do you like my update on the cat?

[next socket]

@tawny cosmos the cat on the right looking good, not sure for the rest

[tawny cosmos]

i will add back and edit the shirt on left

[molten canopy]

@honest mural Danganronpa Anime?

[topaz silo]

@tawny cosmos add whiskers to that cat hat and mask

[tawny cosmos]

hmm?

[topaz silo]

Ye

[quaint bison]

Maybe make the eyes round circles? It's a bit bubbly. dobt know if it's the purpose tho

[quick harbor]

👌

[honest mural]

@molten canopy yes

[quick harbor]

@tawny cosmos looks beautiful

[tawny cosmos]

@quaint bison you dont watch anime

[quaint bison]

Yea tru

[tawny cosmos]

hyde love it like that

[quick harbor]

@tawny cosmos why you copy hyde?

[tawny cosmos]

why i copy you honey ? @hazy falcon

[quick harbor]

Lol

[topaz silo]

LMAO

[quick harbor]

[tawny cosmos]

what do you think will be good color for cat bowl?

[topaz silo]

Depends on what you want

Id go silver

[quick harbor]

@tawny cosmos blue ofc

Also this skin looks

[tawny cosmos]

i will back it with the pink cat

[quick harbor]

Ohhh like the blue & pink gummy bear candy barbarian skin

[quick harbor]

😍

[topaz silo]

❤️

[fiery depot]

Does this shape work (I would add shading later):

[quick harbor]

The two strands on the right look a buy chunky / weird.

But other than that it looks good

[fiery depot]

Okay thx

Better or should I remove them totally?

[quick harbor]

Better

I don’t think you have to remove them

[noble canyon]

I think the bit of hair below the ear could be longer around the jaw

[fiery depot]

On the left or right? Sry I don't exactly understand what u mean

[quick harbor]

@fiery depot I think they mean like this

[fiery depot]

Oke ty:)

[mossy shoal]

Well.. Are staying good

:3 ❤

[stuck palm]

So guys

Something is off with it but I don't know what

I mean the outfit could be better

I will also finish the hair but for now

[orchid plume]

I like it

[stuck palm]

Thank you ❤

[orchid plume]

Its really Nice

[quick harbor]

The hood + hair is too flat on the head

[orchid plume]

❤ here is your heart back

[stuck palm]

Ok, thank you both ❤

[orchid plume]

Np :3

[fierce pike]

This isnt finished but i accept advices about it. :3

[orchid plume]

That’s amazing

Can I have it 🥺

[fierce pike]

Well that dont depends on me

[rancid shore]

Moribac that looks freaking cool as you knew already

[fierce pike]

@rancid shore yeah xD but the rune didnt looked well on the shirt

So need to find any other idea for that empty place

[rancid shore]

Oh well its good like that too

[orchid plume]

You mean the background @fierce pike?

[fierce pike]

The shirt

The background item will be creating later when ill have any time

On the shirt there is a bigger green empty place and thats annoying for me lol

I tried rune but looked weird

[orchid plume]

But then the question is what do you want to fill it up

[rancid shore]

sees hyde typing 👀

[fierce pike]

Anything. What i cant see but others can

[rancid shore]

This place

[fierce pike]

Yup xd

[rancid shore]

😄

[orchid plume]

Maybe something like a pin?

So it’s ranked or something?

[fierce pike]

I cant imagine what pin do you mean (and my bad english doesnt help me xD)

[orchid plume]

Where you from?

[fierce pike]

Hungary

[orchid plume]

Oooh that’s cool

[fierce pike]

Why would it be cool? I wanna escape to a really good country

[orchid plume]

Why?

[fierce pike]

But i guess better to speak here about avatar things before we will be warning xD

[orchid plume]

Also if you give me maybe till tomorrow I can maybe give a sketch of a pin that would look nice

XD

[fierce pike]

What i give you? The svg?

[orchid plume]

Svg?

[fierce pike]

Ehm i made it in inkscape and the format is svg

[rancid shore]

Svg is a file 😄

[fierce pike]

Or did you meant the pic?

[orchid plume]

Oooh

[rancid shore]

Its the vector file for inkscape indeed

[orchid plume]

I can just take the pic and sketch like that

[fierce pike]

Of course

:D

[orchid plume]

:3

[fierce pike]

As i said i accept advices and that is one too

:D

[orchid plume]

So I helped?

Yay :3

[fierce pike]

Yes:3

[orchid plume]

What idea did you have

Since you used black and green

[fierce pike]

Well i just wanted to make something what make me feel well xD before i returned back to the drawing like this i was playing lot other game and sometimes i saw some cool things. So they made the inspired for example when was the halloween in a few games were lot black and green theme and they looked pretty cool

xd

[orchid plume]

Okay

Would you mind if it had a animal connection?

Cause when I saw the colours I thought of an animal

[fierce pike]

Why not :D

[orchid plume]

Okay :3

[stuck palm]

@rancid shore it's absolutely stunning!

[orchid plume]

I’m pink :3333

[hazy falcon]

@tawny cosmos heyo ^^ sorry I was outside.
So first of all, it looks really cute, especially the grave. That's my favorite part 👀
For the grave I would suggest to add more fur to be honest. It looks like a few shapes, but it's not furry. Also you could make their heads smaller ^^
For their little tails, i think they could be bigger, since it's hard to see them and the black lines are really straight... Can you make them more like cats and less like beard?
You could also work on the ears 🐱
For the black thingy. It looks squished. I sketched something pretty fast to show you what I mean.

For the avatars itself: yes they are also really cute, but I don't think you really got the effect you wanted with the mask. It doesn't look like a cute mouth, but just like a beard ^^' this makes it look really weird and doesn't fit.
The shirt part looks like an alien xD sorry xD but I would add some more details, which makes it more like a cat
Also the front items blend in with the shirts, since they use the same color. I think you can fix this pretty fast 👀 the same what I sketched for the grave also suits the oof 👀👀
And the back item looks random placed and cut 🤔
The idea is awesome, but you could work on details and shading.

[fierce pike]

@stuck palm i just now looked your idea, i like but that other two eyes scared me xD

[stuck palm]

I get what you mean xD

[fierce pike]

XD but i honestly like it :3

[orchid plume]

I think the eyes are cute

[fierce pike]

Idk why scared me xD

[orchid plume]

XD

[stuck palm]

Thank you so much ❤

[fierce pike]

:3

[hazy falcon]

@stuck palm Heya ^^ this looks so awesome! The idea with the low opacity hood is old, but the animal itself was just made 1-2 times and not with this type of design 0.0 it is really cool, but I agree with DJIN. It looks kinda flat and the collar looks too 3D to me. It makes it look weird. The shird compared to the hood is pretty boring. Maybe you could add some detail and shading?
The eyes look too big in my opinion and the eyes of the hood are not really necessary. If you wanna add them, please with lower opacity. Like the current version it looks like she has eyes on her hair.

[burnt apex]

maybe you could make the hood's eyes more cartoonish so they don't stand out as much?

[stuck palm]

Oh okay thank you guys

[tawny cosmos]

@hazy falcon fur

[topaz silo]

Hyde is writing paragraphs :000

[granite sparrow]

o

[hazy falcon]

@fierce pike hey to you too 👀👀
So first: the color combination is just.... Awesome! Black and green are such a nice one, but not used too much since it's hard to make it balanced. I think you did it pretty well. My problem is the gold part of the armor.... Doesn't fit in and looks random placed.
The horns are really cool and probably part of the hat? Just the shading is annoying xD why is the shadow lighter than the horn? Also if that's not the case, where is the light source?
The hood is just awesome, but in my opinion you also could work with darker green. Especially on the right and left bottom side of the hood. It's suddenly getting too light, which destroyed the effects of a little gradient.
Also for the choker you used a too light green. Same for the green crystal and parts around it
The cape could be more like it's windy, if you know what I mean?
And a last question.... Did you draw the armor yourself?

[stuck palm]

So what could I do with the eyes? I don't know, I really don't want to delete them but making them lower opacity is kinda weird? Maybe making them smaller and slightly lower opacity? Sorry put I would really appreciate your help ❤

[fierce pike]

I draw? Who other could draw for me? xD

[rancid shore]

He did draw everything hisself

[fierce pike]

Stef and me spoke about it how could it the best

And then tried our ideas xD

The horns are total black. What can be darker than black?

[burnt apex]

@tawny cosmos perhaps making the mask's mouth higher would make it cuter?

[fierce pike]

Originally the shoulder and other light things were dark things but honestly they huh whats the correct word wait... they almost disappear in each other xD

and the gold part... what color would be better there?

[terse warren]

I guess silver would fit better than gold

Very Slytherine vibe 😁

[fierce pike]

xD i didnt notice that xD but i like Slytherin:D

okay ill try with silver and the lighter things were be darker

[terse warren]

I might just leave out the whole armor part and do spikes or silver buttons instead. It does look a little odd

Or something leathery

[stuck palm]

So what could I do with the eyes? I don't know, I really don't want to delete them but making them lower opacity is kinda weird? Maybe making them smaller and slightly lower opacity? Sorry put I would really appreciate your help

Also sorry I wrote the same thing higher

[fierce pike]

hm the 2nd look cool

[terse warren]

@stuck palm sorry I didn't see your post. It does reminds me of tarot High Priestess card. Maybe a moon like this would work?

Or, just a wild idea, give her a blindfold.

[fierce pike]

@hazy falcon sorry for the question but i cant understand why did you thought i didnt draw it? i know a half year ago i made worse things but... that was not now:D

[hazy falcon]

@fierce pike for the horns I mean, that the part on the left horns left. Why is it light, if it should be darker? It's not really right, right?
For the armor I ask, because it has much more detail than the other avatar parts 👀

[terse warren]

@stuck palm something like this

[fierce pike]

i didnt thought it can be darker but you must know i fear then it cant be seeable if it will be darker because okay in big pic you can see well but when its little maybe not, or this fear is just an idiot thing? XD
first the armor hasnt much detail but stef and me knew it much have more parts so we made ideas and the 1st thing was that 😄 and honestly wasnt any other idea for hood... what other detail could add what doesnt looks random? xD

[terse warren]

I wouldnt stress too much about being detailed at this stage, isn't it still in development? ;)

[fierce pike]

honestly that would be cool if i would be able to find someone who draw things and i can say i draw them xD

yes its still there

but i think to thinking about details will make the result less random (usually if i start draw something the result will be random)

[terse warren]

I think you can tone the gradient and shininess down, maybe smooth out the grains, etc. Basically make it more flat

[stuck palm]

Huh thanks @terse warren , thank you really much but I dunno. I'll try to figure something out ❤

[fierce pike]

@terse warren okay i will try:D thank you:D

[terse warren]

@fierce pike Maybe this combo of gold colors would work better ^^
@stuck palm anytime, please post your next update if you have any new idea :D

[stuck palm]

Okay :)

[fierce pike]

Ah yeah true looks much better :D

[stuck palm]

I love how I am new to this community and still everyone is so nice ❤ even if you criticise it's not mean, you just do it so I can get better. Thank you so much guys

[fierce pike]

Hm but i know where can i use the gold color thing... i plan to remake with stef an almost 1 year old design with similar colors :D thank you again bunni and hyde's help is really useful:D

[terse warren]

I know I give a lot of ideas but I can't really create anything myself, so you guys are already a lot better than me ^^ keep up the good work!

[tawny cosmos]

@terse warren can i see one of your designs ?

[terse warren]

I haven't got any time for it, sorry ^^ although I'd really love to. I only joined the game couple weeks ago

[karmic frost]

A shark outfit ? : )

I think it would be cute, babyshark hahha

[rancid shore]

Already Made I think

[karmic frost]

oh ok

thanks

[rancid shore]

@karmic frost

[quick harbor]

Anyone wanna collab?

[rancid shore]

Depends

[quick harbor]

On?

[mossy shore]

Why it has so many dislikes?It looks cute 😕

[quaint bison]

Because people hate babyshard

Shark*

[quick harbor]

@quaint bison wanna collab?

[quaint bison]

Uh just telling you, I’m not the best at drawing stuff qwq

[quick harbor]

And u think I am😂

[quaint bison]

Can I see one of yours 👀

[quick harbor]

I havent designed in over 2 months

[quaint bison]

Oof

[rancid shore]

You always send the same one lol

[quick harbor]

All collabs thi

[quaint bison]

Oh yea! I loved that one. Still sad that people didn’t want it ig

[quick harbor]

It's the one on the top of the list😂

I'm to lazy to scroll further

[quaint bison]

Wow that’s detailed

[quick harbor]

I had help with details

Since I eh am not the best at em

[quaint bison]

Oooh same

[quick harbor]

Gettin better tho slowly

[quaint bison]

So, what theme

Noice

[quick harbor]

Wanna just do some bp single items?

Or a bp outfit

[quaint bison]

Yea

[quick harbor]

Since that's the new topic

[quaint bison]

R u good at hair and eyes

and shirts

[quick harbor]

Not hair

I'm decent at eyes

I can try a hair and get an irl friend to help with the rest of it if needed

[quaint bison]

Phew

[quick harbor]

Go the the dms

So we dont flood

[quaint bison]

Mkay

[mossy shore]

Don’t go dm because then I won’t read what you’re going to do

[quick harbor]

Trying to steal my ideas👀 👀

already happened in one of the old bps

[mossy shore]

Perhaps,who knows

[quick harbor]

What even counts as a fairytale

[mossy shore]

Ask it in #battle-pass-49-outfit-ideas ?

[burnt apex]

started a hansel and gretel outfit for the bp! any feedback? i feel like i should add another item for the male one but idk what. and i plan on making a grave later

[quaint bison]

Wait can you lower the eyes of the girl a bit? I wanna see how that looks like. And jeesh how fast are you xd it’s so good

[mossy shoal]

:O

I'm surprised with muuuch beauty

👍 ❤ ❤ 👍

Congratulations ;)

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[somber bronze]

owo @burnt apex that looks veryy cute uwu💕

Tho i personally think the eyes are a wee bit too high for both of them, also i'd maybe make the opacity of the blush higher? Because right now it's already barely visible on this skin tone so it'll be even less visible in game :c

As for the eyebrows of the girl i'd prefer them to be a bit thicker, also if you placed the eyes too high it mostly got something to do with that the hairline eye ratio seemed odd to you when being lower, so i'd advise you to lower the hairline as well for both of them

As for the lolli mask/mouth thing the philtrum looks a tad too big and the chin ratio too small, to fix that you'd simply move up the lollipop, for both male and female ^^

The shirt looks cutee but imo the arms of especially the girl, not necessarily the boy are too small/slim in ratio to their torso/chest width

As for the male eyes i'd advise you to tilt them less because currently the tilt looks too unnatural to me ^^

For the house in the background, it looks very bland, i'd add some royal icing-like ornaments and maybe even a bit of liquid chocolate dripping from the top? Some mini marshmallows or similar as front garden?
Or maybe a breadstick or gingerbread fence?

Nontheless it looks very cute and you did a good job on it, change these minor issues and it's really perfect ❣

[coarse sage]

@burnt apex I like it i like it. So cuteeee
But i think the mouth looks weird
And still a little simple for background or front

[tawny cosmos]

i agree the mouth is weird

[stuck palm]

Hey guys

[terse warren]

It's lovely @burnt apex :D I really really like how you used colors here.
Regarding the mouth, I think you can try to shade it a little wider, showing corners of the mouth, and add some color to show the upper lip (not necessarily showing teeth like in the picture). Or, you can hide the mouth completely with a bigger lollipop (because people tend to lick this type of lollipop, not putting the whole thing in their mouth 😂)

About the boy, I think you can keep him this way, his hair looks lovely. If you really want to add something on top, I'd suggest a paperboy beret. I think it would suit his costume ^^

[stuck palm]

@terse warren you remember my jellyfish design? Since I don't want to delete the eyes, I think I will move them to jellyfish on the shirt ^^

[terse warren]

@stuck palm lmao so it's really a jellyfish 😂 I thought so but I didn't want to offend you if it wasn't

[burnt apex]

oooooh thanks for all the feedback!
you're right @terse warren a beret would look so good :00 and originally it was a full lollipop but i thought it would look weird, but your reasoning makes a lot of sense

[stuck palm]

No @terse warren it's okay 😂

[terse warren]

@burnt apex anytime, can't wait to see the update 😻
@stuck palm I just realized people had the same idea as you :p if you want to keep the eyes, have you consider hiding her real eyes instead? Or simplify the upper eyes so that they don't contrast too much with the real one (only black and white circles with a few simple lashes). Can you maybe show the update?

[tawny cosmos]

hmm? what you think honey ? @hazy falcon

[hazy falcon]

The tail looks better now

[quick harbor]

The blue cats highlights are on different sides om the grave and fromt items eyes

[tawny cosmos]

😂 lol yeah why i will fix it

@hazy falcon would be better if the pink cat has long hair ?

[hazy falcon]

Idk ^^:

[quick harbor]

Any feedback?

[stuck palm]

I think it looks really nice, probably wouldn't change anything❤

Also @terse warren something like this?

Or should I make them a bit smaller?

[quaint bison]

Make the opacity from the hoodie a bit higher

[terse warren]

@stuck palm I'm actually thinking bigger lol. But yeah, try making the hoodie less transparent

[quaint bison]

And make the hairline touch each other because now it looks weird 👀

[terse warren]

And Idk, maybe the eyes can be higher?

[buoyant zealot]

Looks nice so far.

[terse warren]

@quaint bison which hairline do you mean? :p the split in the middle?

[buoyant zealot]

Eyes look fine , tbh.

[quaint bison]

Yea

And make the eyes a bit smaller

And why is she mad :c

[terse warren]

I think it looks a bit weird because it aligns with the hoodie in a line. If the hoodie is less transparent, maybe it's not so visible

@quick harbor it looks great to me, I love her sunglasses. She reminds me of Anna Akana 😁
I'm not very sure if the shading/highlighting in her hair would work in WWO, since everything is pretty flat there. And could you try putting it on a brighter background so we can see how she looks in daytime?

[stuck palm]

Like this?

[quick harbor]

Oof this is kinda a bummer😅 @terse warren

[stuck palm]

Hmm I like it

It looks pretty great even on game background

[quick harbor]

The blue kinda disappears though

[stuck palm]

Yeah Kinda but it will look sick during nighttime

I think I will change the shirt, this one is just really ... Uninteresting

[terse warren]

Something about her hair feels a bit odd, as in her hair is so thin it lays flat on her head and that doesn't feel natural. I'd either try to make her hair a little thicker (especially near the ears, maybe on top too), or more opacity on the hoodie so the head is almost invisible under it

@stuck palm

[stuck palm]

Okay I will look at it

Thanks ❤

[tawny cosmos]

hmmm

[granite sparrow]

i prefer 1

[terse warren]

@quick harbor I actually like her clothes, especially the jacket. Would love one like that irl
The blue flowers are kind of a bummer on bright bg yeahh... I'm not sure how to make it better since I don't want to change the color. I'm thinking of changing the furthest outline into something darker, so that it's also visible on the light bg

[rancid shore]

@tawny cosmos recycling for the win lol

[tawny cosmos]

~~ lazy to make new hair ~~

[stuck palm]

Oh yeah I meant that my clothes are uninteresting, not yours ^^ @quick harbor @terse warren

[rancid shore]

I am too lazy for it too lol

[tawny cosmos]

why fireman is not in game gallery

[rancid shore]

Idk actually

[tawny cosmos]

rude kem

i will ask him

[terse warren]

@quick harbor maybe get the eyedropper and use the outer color at full opacity (not transparent). Might make the flowers pop on light bg, I'm not sure :)

@tawny cosmos I'd take 1 :D the hair color of 2 is quite common, rather uninteresting

@stuck palm nah I love the shirt, it's unique ^^ you should keep it. I'm not so sure about the jellyfish on top tho, from a distance it looks like a mushroom...

[buoyant zealot]

@stuck palm The hightlight of jellyfish's eyes is mirrored.

[burnt apex]

@tawny cosmos you could make the mask whiskers more cartoonish, like three thick lines or something

[somber bronze]

Shirt ideas anyone?

I'm trynna go for fairytales and make it a la città di smeraldo, and the beauty and the beast cross over

Making the "ugly guy" hiding out in the castle from la città di smeraldo some sort of magician, and the special flowers he grows for her magical flowers, which got an effect to give you strong health and immortality

*To give off the vibe of what u will be wanting to go for the two tales are basically; in la città di smeraldo -> a guy which is very unconfident about his looks, hides out in a castle to not get judged or laughed at furthermore by the society, he has a garden with a lot of flowers and one day a beautiful woman walks by, she steals flowers from his garden which leaves him upset at first but then he keeps trying to get a peek at her whenever she comes, every night.

He discovers that this woman is poor and is selling his flowers to make a living, so he decides to not stop her from it, one day he tries to grow a special flower so the girl can sell them for more money because they are very rare, but after a while she doesn't come anymore, he never had the courage to talk to her because of his looks

~~in the orginal story she never comes anymore and he discovers the girl that stole his flowers and his heart has died but in my dream version they get their happily ever after *

So i'll give her a basket with some blue glowing flowers inside and him a blue flowers as front item, i was planning on giving him a white mask and crown as hat item as in some variations he's a prince/king and as background she'll get a field of these blue flowers and he'll maybe get some mist etc around him👀

[tawny cosmos]

@burnt apex idk i like it more without

[buoyant zealot]

@tawny cosmos I don't think I like the weird hand or something behind the back

It looks randomly-drawn and .. esp the white part looks very odd tbh

[stuck palm]

@terse warren well, I'm happy that you like it, but I'm already making a new one :/ it's even more unique I would say, so I hope you will Like it

Also the hair lays kind of flat on her face, because it was supposed to be tied in a ponytail which I will make later

[terse warren]

@somber bronze I think medieval/renaissance dresses would be perfect here. Something off shoulder like this girl would be really nice too

[buoyant zealot]

I think the 3rd would fit

[terse warren]

Or dress with laces (I don't know what the right word for it is lmao), beige chest part with contrast color for shoulder straps and the laces part,

One comment for the hair tho. Realistically, if the hair is supposed to be on one side like that, it should be longer and fall over the shoulder. Unless you're having a hairbun, short hair wouldn't stay stiff on one side

Nevertheless I still really like the hairstyle. Maybe you can try making the left side a little longer and we'll see how that work ^^

I'd pull the hair longer to cover the space between the hair and her shoulder. Sorry I have potatoes for fingers 😂

[somber bronze]

The hair is clipped down behind her head on the right side and it's not clipped down on the other side
That's why i made it like that

I'll try the dresses thanks for the references
Not a fan of long hair because it covers too much of the shirt which is just really a bummer imo👀

[burnt apex]

min i am in love with that design wow,,,,