#avatar-ideas
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If you see closely it's connected to her arms
Sorta. Don't try to think of it like regular capes
U just gave me a good design idea
Lmao you're welcome
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I just realized the combined one had the prototype of the female version, so I'm reuploading :)
it looks beautiful, very fancy, but there is a lot of small details that would be lost in the game
masks need to go over the hair, sadly thats how the layers on the game are
i think the male eyes look a little, like he's sleepy, and both eye sets hav outline around the whole eye which is not allowed and doesnt look that nice imo
and the eyebrows are a little too big and simple, compared to how detailed everthing else is
looks great ๐ eyelashes can be a little more subtle tho. the gold designs on shirts and mask can be a little bigger too
well you can't exactly detail eyebrows in wwo style
To detail eyebrows you would need to add several small lines in a darker/lighter colour which usually gets criticed right away as "too detailed"
Its either positive that the eyebrows dont add anything on top as eyebrows arent really an extremely fancy thing...
maybe theyre just too big/dark then, cause they do stand out to me
but not in a nice way
@atomic hearth thanks, but I expected the small designs to not be clearly visible ig. But in order to make a design that has the extravagant characteristics I aimed for, I believe the small designs are okay, since it established what I wanted. The eyes are my signature style, so it was intentional too. And you mentioned the outline of the eyes, but I was pretty sure that eyelines were ok, since they symbolize the eyelashes. I'll make sure to make the mask go above the hair though :)
@near grove :) I deliberately emphasized the eyelashes so they stand out for the character of the female. And the small gold designs were there to give the impression of extravaganza, and when I tried to make them bigger, it didn't give the same effects
you're gonna have to chec those things with an actual designer, if they are acceptible with wwo style :(
Im more of a call-it-as-i-see-it person and dont design stuff myself๐
^ lmao same
@somber bronze โค I'm so excited for my second design, I had to be dramatic ๐
The whole countdown was sooo fun
Okay so
Beginning from the shirt
The male shirt looks pretty good but one shoulder is higher than the other one, idk if that was intended but it looks a lil weird, also both arm airs aren't exactly identical
For the cape of the girl the main part of it would get cut off so it may not be recognizable at all anymore and if its part of the shirt it might also hide some backgrounds as back item is behind the shirt
The hair looks like its not shaded at all and imo blends pretty much with the skin colour you used, on the girl you can barely see a difference between left face half and hair
Also where the falls into the face it is pretty stiff and sharp instead of flowing like regular hair
as for the girls hair the bottom of it could maybe get either a bit sharper or a bit more straight cut, because right now its pretty round and usually hair doesnt end in a rounded shape at the tips
Other than that it looks very cool and i love the colour scheme etc you used ^^
it does look beautiful btw, the hair is amazing and i loove the dark blue colours
With small details - well
They wont fully be seen in game but if they aren't seen in game and it doesnt bother the designer there is no reason in removing them ^^
@somber bronze so first, thank you for the detailed suggestions :)
The male's shirt was intentionally higher on one shoulder, because I designed him to be posing as a slight shrug.
The cape for the girl was checked on the preview in game template, and thankfully did not exclude the main parts I wanted it to exhibit :) the ends were slightly cut off but I think I can work with that. The cape is the background item for this avatar, so that solves the coverage problem too!
The hair was shaded minimum, mostly because I was working on not overdoing the hair (like the first design). I recognized many prior designs ig to have minimum shading as well, and I would prefer the shading I have right now :(
I'll see if the different shades around the face will be better :)
The girl's hair was actually cut off in the photo, so it could've been the hair tie you were looking at! I'll make sure the ends are sharper.
Again, thank you :)
That's an earring @quick harbor
With a feather at the end
Why does the male version have an earring?
? Why not?
It looks like you're not using that command in the right way :thinking: Please check with ?help!
And the feather seems to be a little small ๐
Anyway, I'm horrible at those designing stuff hide myself and run away
Lel
I reduced the size of the feather so it doesn't stand out as much. It kinda takes the stage when it's noticable
But the size is still visible ig :)
Can someone who is good with backgrounds hmu i have an idea for a project
(Collab as well)
Cybrog๐ค
Am I allowed to makes lips the 'mask' and if so can they change depending on the skin color or do they stay the same?? ๐ค
So is it a bad idea then? ๐คฃ
Am I allowed to use a more transparent color like they do with glasses?
@median briar -> yes you can do lips as mask item but they shouldn't have a certain skin colour because light skin colour lips would look unnatural with dark skin tones so you can just use a colour like if its lipstick, also they would have to cover the default mouth ^^
-> yes you can use translucency for any items, so same would go with lips, tho if you want to add lips which are wider/bigger than the default lips it might look a little weird depending on the translucency you choose
@molten canopy that looks cool and its called a cyborg ๐
I love the way you draw hair and eyes, those designs are so pretty omd ๐ฅบ๐@sejajeoha
@wanton hamlet *
@quick harbor omg thank youuu โค โบ
ok so i made this dress, settled for a halloween theme but i was wondering whether to make it a halloween skin with covers the theme halloween as a general thing or to change the dress colour to a bit more blood-type red and make it a vampire only 
Help
hair ideas are welcomed uwu
Hmmmm this dress is really beautiful and would be a cool vampire since you used a bat ๐๐ maybe you can add some detail on the <Spitze>
this is gorgeous
Its amazing squishy squish 
We don't have a vampire yet, and the dress will look really good with that theme :)
Oof i still like the dress with the vampire theme
yeah looks great for a vampire outfit, do it plsss
vampire it is๐
still working on the mouth aaa
Hrhr
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That looks awesome miw
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Alrdy is a vampire btw
Already said this btw
@somber bronze why is the inside of the mouth the same as the outside?
Got any single item ideas?
Uhm... Wait wanna show you what doesn't fit
@quick harbor a bugcat ;+; sadly copyrighted
Then i need a non copyrighted idea๐
I still dont really have any crowns in my inv :(
and green items are always not enough
halloween bg's maybe
Yes green items pls
Hmm
@somber bronze I mean... It has no throat or deep look ooooof my English dies right now ;+;
Hey I have no idea on how designs get ig but showing it to here is one of the steps right
yeah people here give tips and things to change, and then when its finished and you dont wanna cange anthing and it follows the guide, then you can ping a minimod+ and they will discuss about it to add it to #dev-vote

Oiiii
Yup๐ it gets to the voting gallery either way just #dev-vote is the longer way to go and the way you can get the designer role on this server ^^
Knight you destroy the use of this channel ;+;
A designer role is tempting ๐
You can also submit it to vote and to kem at the same time 
Vote can take a while and kem is usually a tad faster than that
Ooh thanks for all the tips ;D
You're welcome ๐
Always encouraging new people to join da teeam
@hazy falcon i said i am still working on it 
First
hmm, any front/back item ideas? 
@somber bronze How about like a haunted house background and like other ones have little pets, she can have a little bat by her side ๐
there's already a bat front item, but its a little derpy tbh
i actually have no idea for a front item :/
and a background, I think an old timey inside-decor would also be cool
Someone give me some single items to make๐
did you draw all of it yourself?
it looks a little messy in some places and the mask has a weird black blur on top
Ah, as an idea it's cute, maybe someone wants to make it
Make Casper please
Or a turkey
For thanksgiving
What do you mean by casper @quick harbor
As in the famous ghost (thats copyrighted)
thought? and give me some ideas for background and front item.. my theme is, he's finding a part of himself. finding the unknown X. my intention was to draw an X as background but it seems boring. and im looking for someone wants to collab with me and help me with the hair bc im so bad at that ๐ข
@mint scarab can u send me the manikin?
u mean the body template? its in pinned message
@buoyant mantle i traced it ๐
@mint scarab heyo ^^ sorry for the late ping that's your first outfit or second? ๐ It looks really cool! The shading is good, but probably doesn't fit with wwo style.
It probably cost much time to make it like this right? ||I would tell you to ask lime, but she isn't here anymore ;+;||
I would help you with the hair shading but idk if I'm good enough for it too...
As far as I see it now the eye is pretty edgy... And the shirts arms are too thin... For the background we first need the outfit so we can help with ideas
@rancid shore details xD
I knuw
@hazy falcon where can i add details ๐
Hmmm I would add them on the wings as example
0w0
Hi
We talk about lighze xD
So good in design xD
Ofc it has quality
Just look in #dev-vote for lighze xD
That's an older design from him... He did a few bugs btw so bugs are out....
Link this discord?
@earnest flower #avatar-catwalk?
an aura skin! any ideas for a head item?
i'm going to add some more details to the bg orb too
Maybe an ifea is to add a layer of yellow but on a low opacity around those lines on het face so that it looks more like it glows
i did but it looked kinda weird
Could I maybe see?
ah wait i just realized that's not the right version,,,,
What changed?
with glow
No I dont mean it like that
without glow
Wait let me see if I can find an example
@burnt apex heyo 
The hair is just A-W-E-S-O-M-E! just omg I love it 0w0
I don't want to give so much feedback for the hair tbh since yeeeeee wow xD
The eyes are really cool too, but maybe you can make the green shading in the eyes more white? Because like this it looks kinda weird.
I agree with JIN, but maybe you can make the straight lines between the dots with lower opacity and less shiny than the dots because it looks like stars and stars shine more than the lines between 
The background looks a little bit boring to me. It doesn't really fit with the rest... Maybe you can make it so it fits more with the eyes so they don't look that random placed?
The shirt is really Nicu and on the next pic with mask, I would place the mask lower since it covers the eye thing.
@burnt apex you see the hands? I dont mean to put a glow on the entire face like you did. But more on thosr stripes itself so it follows it. If that makes sense?
I GOT AN IDEA
For hat item make like a flower crown but with stars. Does that make sense? Like some stars connected with glowing stripes
oh that's a really cool idea!!! i'll add the changes now

and tbh i had absolutely no idea on what to do for the background so feedback on that is very welcome
back item is torture
I agree
I still havenโt finished a design just because I got no motivation for the background
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Remember how long it took me to make the bg for the cat whisperer?
And on top of that you had to redo it
5 times xD
But now it's on a stick!
Ha
Gotcha laptop!
I need someone to make a bugcat ;-:
You said it was copyright
Yes!
Maybe something post apocalypse?
I will just recycle my dog
That sounds weird๐
Im making single items now
Not full sets๐
Sports is also suggested a lot
Maybe you can do something with that?

I have like 5 outfits to recycle
I saw it in the voting gallery a gazillion times already
@quick harbor sure
U dont have to accept to maybe suggest someone who might
Maybe you all can help with my recycling process
The older eyes of the cat whisperer
I did things which will never be used
I designed the hat last Easter btw
There are more eyes too


Yes this shirt is uwu
the shirt is min 
@topaz silo tried a cute lil bat as front item 
Onto the haunted house bg now 
Thanks for your suggestions btw they helped alot same for you majestical๐
Someone wanna try a bugcat which is not copyrighted ||hopefully||
@hazy falcon random fat blue cat
@somber bronze it's just... Black
If i make my screen like this I can barely see any detail
@hazy falcon i want bugcat skin ๐
@rancid shore any ideas? ;-;
@somber bronze maybe make the bat a little lighter from colour. Because it is barely visible
You Made a few things in #fan-art maybe you can use that as inspiration ๐
100% bugcat front item
Maybe the angel one as grave
But I used bugcat... Bugcat is copyrighted
Rip
Catbug ๐ณ
It's only on the screenshot 
I need help? Collab? Should I use my doggo?
Its a mid tone grey
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Oh also! Maybe make the eyes a little brighter, I think that can look cool.
Also: where is your pfp from?๐
looks like this exported๐
Better!
Vampire catto
i didn't change anything
As a suggestion, make the inside of the ears darker and the tree lighter
@quick harbor oooh will try that! ๐ also....idk ask @/Subglory#1633 owo
@somber bronze for me it's lighter
screenshots usually don't show the colour off very well,,, atleast for me
I already know why I couldnt really see it... my phone light was really low
Yeah mine is fully up bc i work with black and i am literally blind
Tree 
Ye tree
Why a tree?
the bottom lip looks like it was cut or smth
Leave my words!
Bc it cant sit in the air 
added the crown + a bg item
I feel like you can see too much of her inner mouth ๐ค @somber bronze
@burnt apex i would suggest to make this part a little smaller and as hyde said make the stripes connecting the dots lighter so it will probably look less busy
The makeup reminds me a lot of this ๐ค
it was kind of inspired by it wwww
i had had the idea for a while and then i saw that one and thought "alright let's do it"
and i did make the stripes lighter but i guess it's not enough
How to background?
@somber bronze the character or the background?๐
add someone peeking behind a tree ๐
Pls tell me where can I add more detail
@quick harbor everything ๐
@pale iron check the style guide ^^
@somber bronze ๐ฑ
@pale iron shadow more the front hair, the eyes, the shirt and the crown
it would also be nice if you used a less saturated color in the red part of the shirt and the leaves
making the wings translucent and more detailed would look cool too
Style guide xD
@grand isle special for you
then add the same but an owl/crow sitting at the far right branch
@quick harbor lol I think I should quit after seeing that masterpiece xD
@quick harbor yesssss
Pls tell me where is the style guide
@quick harbor
Heyyy everyone 
From now on you have to submit your design to a mini mod+ (ping them in #avatar-ideas with your final version and the name of your design or send them a direct message) to go through #dev-vote first and after it was posted Kem takes it to the voting gallery ๐จ
Ty Lisa 
Yes
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@hazy falcon do you have any feedbacks?
Where?
The default bg
So pretty!! โคโค How you do it??? ๐
@hazy falcon
Jin if you think yes then yes!
I can draw ideas too?? :o
Sure ^^
Anyone can, just check out the pinned messages there is everything you need for designing
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I couldnโt use discord for over an hour๐ฑ
Uggg vote now gallery๐ญ
?
Designs cant skip discords vote now
Since when
Just now
Read pinned
Since Lisas message
Im thinking of making pineapple glasses
Cause why not and glasses are underrated
Trying to get some green as well
Ah now I see
I like glasses but there arent many ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ
I never really find them fit my design๐
@quick harbor thatโs awesome
Thank you
Any ideas for glasses to make?
@quick harbor wow I really love your avatar!
@quick harbor maybe some big and bright ones? Or some simple ones people would actually wear?
@quick harbor search steampunk glasses ๐
Hm
Medieval glasses special for stef๐
@somber bronze the stripes on the shirt blend in to much with the zipper of the jacket, the brush looks like itโs broke too tbh,
Also I would prefer the paintings on the background not the same but maybe hang them on other places, and the grave still looks weird, also 3D isnโt allowed right? The grave kinda looks 3D, and the brush isnโt standing against the grave really
๐ medieval
Im not going for a full outfit soo i dont wanna take something huge
Rather save that for the medieval bp๐
I hope it Will come Some day ๐
Same
I have an ifea
Idea*
You can make it now and still send it in later though
Ooh what are you gonna do?
@tawny cosmos I meant, sorry min
Make enough steampunk items in game before the steampunk battle pass so no one wants it๐ฑ
Min is gonna kill you๐
Yeah its a joke
Hmm post apo glasses
What even would that be tho
Broken glasses
Not interesting enough imo
Could also maybe be some more futuristic. Like they discovered some new technology
Issue is all the ideas im having are colliding with full outfits that i might make in the future
Like i was gonna do some nightvision ones
But im using that idea in an outfit im currently workin on
@quick harbor i dont like to change or fix anything after posted in #dev-vote thx for ur feedback 
@quick harbor has something like this been made?
Old retro futuristic style
I dont think so
Min is gonna kill someone.... i wonder who that is... 
Crush?
That was me not crush๐
@hazy falcon him too!
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See xD
jk
Who need this
||me, me, me, i want this to be in game!||
Give it to me
Thats hot
@tawny cosmos no problem
Im makin vr goggles as a solo item but idk what to put on the front
Any recommendations?
It looks to straight, a normal one isnโt as straight as this one
Like make the edges better?
Yeah
How is this?
Or more
@quick harbor
welp
Seer eyes on both sides lel
Yes hahaha
Prob will do wwo logo just wasnt sure if it would look nice
Ye this isnt gonna be a full outfit either
Just an item
@heady flame how is this?
Sure thing
Imma stay awake just to see this, how do you create these
@honest swan pinned messages
Practice
I can barley still draw tbh
Plus if u ever need help ppl are here
Hm
okay but what even is it
Vr headset
its an interesting idea, but the left side should be shaded accordingly to the avatar template
I havent gotten to shading yet๐
alright, just pointing out what i see 

Heres it with half shading
Looks nice
Lotta ppl dislike half shading is the issue๐
I dont see why
Thats pretty much how shading works 
If its gonna be a gold coin item, it fits just fine I think
Ye thats what im going for๐
๐ lol I just made a character with a basket ball too
I asked for feedback on the hair but no one answered.. did I put to much into it? I don't know how to shade curly hair
Holy hair thats really detailed
Oops
You definitely wanna tone it down on the detail, it doesnt match the rest of the outfit
Yeah I don't know how to do it and make it look curly though..
Just putting in strokes of highlights and shading does a pretty good job
It doesnt look curly rn either imo
Yeah it just looks very frizzy..
Do you think you could do a rough sketch of better hair?
i can try
So I have an idea ๐ sorry for bothering you
be right back
@median briar sorry i didnt know u already planned to do a basketball
I can delete mine since its just supposed to be a item for gold that im tryin to submit to philipp
No it's fine
@median briar short example, but maybe strands like this, of course youโd probably wanna do more than i did, but its an idea
@quick harbor thank you, what drawing app do you use btw?
personally i use vectornator, its an iPhone only app afaik
Can u add clout goggles in ww
Plz
Am I allowed to keep the shape of my current hair and just change the shading?? It's more of my style and I prefer it to some of the newer hair shapes.. I mean they're good but it's just my personal opinion
Plz add clout goggles
@quick harbor Clout Goggles??
Ohh I see what you mean
I might do it but I'm busy with another project currently, maybe ask someone else??
Dope
Thank you
@quick harbor can u send me a pic of what they look like in the dms
I could try later to make em
Oh and maybe hair dye
Too
aw i hoped for literal clouds ๐
No no no clout
Not cloud
Like clout as in fame I guess
I might try later cant now rn
Thank very much
Np๐
Lol
If u want more pics btw just ask
@median briar I know im really late, but I think you just need to remove some of the highlights. Because I can see where you placed the shadows and those are in the right places. So if you make those a bit thicker and remove some of the highlights it would look really cool
Oh and also. I personally think the eyes are a little too big and you could use a darker colour for the freckles.
If it gets designed as a mask it can I believe
@runic oar yes they can be. They will be part of the mask as fanboy said
@quick harbor uhm -> no, shading doesnt work as blocky and straight half shading 
@quick harbor what really bothers me is that the ww icon has such bad resolution tbh, i can send you a better res version bc this one is just sooo unclean
Also i'd shade them like that 
@median briar heey, do you mind if i steal you avatar for a sec to try out some shading to show you? ๐โค
Btw this is no fan art it's a character from one Punch man :3 I forgot the name
@somber bronze not at all
@lone cedar his hero name is watchman dog
And I love the fanart 
@somber bronze ye i will change that when i make it svg
@quick harbor that looks really cool ๐
some final feedback?
The smoke looks a bit off
Partly because of the harsh green edge
Ye closer on the right side
Yeah and try make smoke more invisible ^^
And maybe move the eyebrow like this? Just a suggestion
Ye also the background is an eye catcher and I always say, that the outfit should be the eye catcher because it looks too much
@quick harbor actually I kinda like the shirt idea ๐
@quick harbor You go making better ๐
๐ I might do it after my current project
If you're not serious of course
How many votes do you need in ww's voting gallery to get your outfit in??
Check the pinned messages ๐โค
But its >3.9 for clan quest and 4.2<ideally to get a special offer ^^
Its not 100% sure becouse it depends if Philipp wants it ingame
@somber bronze another thing just happened.. when I was watching ads I realised I didn't get any money, this happens sometimes to my friends apparently too. Is that a glitch?
@rancid shore has anyone tried fixing it yet?
I think so
@median briar yeah i am sure it's a known bug and the devs are aware of it and trying to fix it asap ^^
for further questions make sure to use #questions 
@mossy shoal check pinned messages! It will be around the bottom of there 
Hyde im trying to prove myself stop being so good at your job ๐๐
Anytime! Happy to help
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@quick harborheyo ^^ this idea looks interesting, but we already have many cat ears.
Maybe you could work a little bit on it, since it looks messy ^^
I just finished this xD^
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Also moon ^^ pls don't use too much emotes in one message 
@quick harborhey don't be sorry for an idea! Never! It's already awesome to see, that someone starts to design ^^
We are always here to help 

@quick harbor its a great idea! Tis could be easily transformed into a mouse outfit which is simple and not alot of people have thought of this idea
Do not apologize for showin ideas!!
Nah dw
Heey @quick harbor
That looks cooll, but for the balloon i assume you used the airbrush for the highlights?๐
In the style guide it says no gradient is allowed so maybe try just a low opacity white line instead ^^
Same for the blush and the other highlights,, it does look quite nice tho๐
However the make up is a bit off as its bigger on one side than the other, same for the shirt
So maybe try to use the mirror function to make it look more accurate ๐โค
also mind telling me which app you use?^^
Sonia I just call you like this
May I take it for a second?
But yeah i agree
Try working on one design first and try to perfection it, instead of rushing into many ideas
i love both ideas tho๐
@somber bronze it looks weird that you are yellow now๐
XD
@quick harbor may i suggest checking out the style guide and alot of the outfits in #dev-vote ?
Oooh ibispaint got a mirror tool, maybe try to use that for getting a bit more symmetry into the eye make up and the shirt!
Alright! Make sure to ping me whenever you got a newer version on hand

The avatar guide in the fixed messages, okay? 
@mossy shoal yup in the pinned, are you having trouble/
what program do you all use?
@quick harbor I use ibispaintx too, I'll recommend taking advantage of the stabilizer
I personally use medibang paint ^^
Medibang paint has the best stabilizer of all drawing apps btw๐
And if you'd need any advice about it you could always hmu 
haushauhsauhs
lol
@somber bronze you already finish a avatar? If yes, you can show for me? :3

Sure! ^^
^w^ โค
finished that one like beginning of the month also has a male version with it but i dont wanna fload the chat
AAAAAAAAAAA
SO BEAUTIFULLLLLL
( ร O รง ) |||
Wtf asauhsuh
@quick harbor Truee... โค
@somber bronze show me the male vers!
:3
Welp 
@tepid gate 
@quick harbor 
I think i cannot exactly teach you but you can always ping me if you display your outfit here for feedback or you can join designer club a side server of wwo, it's in #partners and there are many amazing artists who would love to help you! ๐
Min give me ideas for shirt for outfit
Oh man you can ask me for anything but not shirts
the vr one is going to be a full outfit, or something else?
bp 5 had blavk/blue tron-like outfit maybe you can take some inspiration from it and also yknow, not make it look too similar :P
Yeah thats what ive tried so far๐
cute!
Prob not keeping that version tho
hm maybe if it looks more straight, like a vest-shape?
yeah i mean like those lasertag vests
Looks cool ๐
well if you wanna make this more vr-themed i guess theoretically it would be a nerdy gamer t-shirt instead of a glowy body suit
Thats not as cool tho tbh
It was an idea before, but there are many hoods
?? didnt say anything about hoods :P
It looks like you're not using that command in the right way :thinking: Please check with ?help!
pfft shush, bot
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Kekeke my bot friend wants to help us!
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Bot friend? Waaw
Huh
Recent design's rough draft feat. Class Notes
fancy
I like seeing rough drafts of designs lol show me yalls
I did make a design recently on this
wow the male's lips look like a photograph cut out thats awesome lookin'
Seja is just a born talent๐โค
Ahhhh stop it I don't know what to do
You're suppsed to be judging the designs on the designs themself and not on who made them so it shouldn't be a problem โก
He also sent it in before was banned
Uuuh does anyone know how to shade fur
๐ hyde?
I could try too if you want me to! 
I tried making a bear hat but it looks really messy ๐
Are there other designs that have a fur texture? I might wanna take inspiration from there
Yup there are indeed some in #dev-vote
I can think of atleast one 
I can try to search them for you once i am home which is in approx 15 minutes ๐
okay
@somber bronze r u available ?
@tawny cosmos yes i am, do you need help with anything?
yees dm pls
@signal raft found these as two examples from designs in #dev-vote aaand
Found these as quite good examples online๐
Of course you still have to adjust it to wwo style but i hope it helps as a rough source of inspiration 
@tawny cosmos sure thing! dm me ^^
Also my skin walker could be a ref too uwu uwu
send send send
HOLON DID I NOT POST IT HERE.. WHERE TFFFF
or was that hair
Min stole my hood reeee
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Indeed, beep boop, you are a bot you cannot beep boop proof anything ๐ค
Hmmmm/
Fairy tail Kingdom : Snow White
Oooh that looks cuute๐๐
i like
Beautiful ~~ i think its copyright but thats not a thing lol~~
No,fairy tails aren't copyrighted,right?
i think it's okay if it not base on Disney's snow white ๐ค
@next socket thank you btw ;+; it fits better!
Haven't been here in a while
dd some shading on the tail?
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i really dont like how the eyes use the default eyebrows, and the eye color doesnt really make sense
I dont think they are the default eyebrows
I think the eye color is really pretty and does not need to make sense, it's better than always having the same eye colors 
Though maybe you can change the colour to something more matching?
if they were darker and more shaped would work
The eyes color is okay i think what the problem is it doesnt match how the raccoonโs eyes are
But thats just me
the only thing I dont understand, is why there's a shirt with a coin on it...?
Unicron is correct with that. Thereโs really only 3 problems to me.
- The eye matching (itโs not the color itโs the shape and size sort of thing)
- The eyebrow color (this should match the brown of the actual raccoon skin)
- The shirt; I agree with Unicron
@atomic hearth its becouse Racoons like shiny things ๐
The rest of the outfit has nothing to do with that stereotypical 'stealing bandit' idea though, so it doesnt fit Imo
The original background for the skin (got removed) was to have Flying coins
there could be a bandit mask, or the pet could be holding a coin too ^^
Better?
White, white, white, white, I still vote white 
No it looked cooler in white :*:
;-;
thats a really cool jacket, its not a shape i would expect for this style, but perhaps thats what makes it look so dang cool
NO I just said its cool, why would you wanna change it then insertt angerycry emote that i dont have
i dont punch people, i basically got a knife on my head 

XD
That looks amazing hyde 
@atomic hearth 
So maje wants to say, that they will not punch, but stab us
@sharp notch than youwww

No what Unicron wants to say is, theyre threatening to stab you if you dare to remove the cool jacket
ok that looks good too, dangit
white ftw

if you'd make it darkblue or red, with yellow it would be like either a marching band or a historical era outfit lol
XD
Looks neo like this tho๐
I mean... We are not going for pay skin so not more that 6 items
I would say boy and girl version white and black, buuuuut too much items
Unless we doin daily
Ye
idk, are there even rules against adding the same item twice but with diff colours
We can change the design a small amout if their is
True... For girl more "round" lines maybe
idk what other items you have in mind to add
male/female versions being in 2 different colours is a little annoyin in my personal opinion, caus its like 'but im the opposite gender and i wanna have the other colour whaaah'
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This one is diff
The color scheme is still the same
More blavk
I mean.... The dark one is more like neon and the white looks dope
Black*
Can I have an outline for two characters?? Does that make sense? ๐คฃ
I'll try to explain..
Ye pls
You know how some outfits come with a girls and a boys? Like an outline of that kinda ... Idk if I have to make it but I thought I'd just ask
Ah the white low opacity thing
Or a blank slate to draw outfits on* not a outline
Like the naked man?
It's just an effect, to present it better ๐
You don't need it
@quick harbor yes but two
I see now
@hazy falcon sorry


They just put them both on the same picture
XD 
makes sense
It's one Design in two colors xD
Which is better
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Yes but they different colors
Wanted to ask too xD
Which color is better tho๐
Personally the white

I like the black..
But the black emphasizes the neon more
@wanton hamlet agreeeeeeeeed!
Tbh it looks like two completely different designs, if I don't look at the details....
Yeah they do
for the neon outfit just keep it black, and for the white version it might be ok as a gold shop single item or be turned into a new outfit completely, but then maybe it needs some adjustments
Reeee
So I first didn't shade the hair enough then over did the shading... Is this better??
@quick harbor what avatar
Still looks odd im not 100% why tho @median briar
Who knew creating avatars is so stressful, o think the same but I don't know why it's off yet
Might be because the shading on where it kinda parts is a lot more detaoled
Yeah i know how it feels you will get better tho @median briar
How do you make a white shirt more detailed with the shading??
@topaz silo omg that's a really good idea
Ty
Thanks ๐๐
Np
@median briar try making thicker lines instead of thin ones and as for highlights i'd recommend putting them on the top of both side on the hair, let's say on the part above the eyebrows if you know what i mean 
Ann is this a Dutch baskeballer or is this just a random colour?
simplified the background some more!
I still think that smoke looks weird
Maybe just a couple of white eyes?
Or stars like you did on the face and as hat
oh yeah, stars could look good!
something like this or maybe smaller?
spoocat think its a mess that doesnt fit gamestyle
then how do i fix it?
I think it's good ^^ just the headpiece is maybe too much
Also still. The shading in the eyes is too greenish for meh
I think the highlights are too thin
i think that too ^
Any feedback?
Looks great 
Maybe a little bit of shading to the lights ๐
@topaz silo I donโt undrrstand๐ those floating blobs arent part of the design btw๐
@quick harbor cute, but the highlights look odd to me?
The blobs are the light sources ๐
@tepid gate could you describe it? Because fixing something that looks odd but I dont know the odd things is pretty hard๐
@rancid shore BINGO! You win......... nothing๐
I win no caps ๐
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Yee its a collab ๐
@quick harbor It looks sort of airbrushed, if you get what i mean? I understand the highlights in the hair and i do like it but it would look better it is was designed like this outfit:
If you need help just hit me up ๐
you see this outfit?
Yes?
More bold colours, it looks pretty odd in the hair but if it was more like that i think it'd look so cool!
also you see the highlights have that secondary colour on the back? Looks like outlines
Itโs not what Im going for
hmmm...
Im not a style expert but you get what i mean?
usually in outfits you dont have a light/dark in shading
the light on the hair is reflecting the blobs, you used this for shading right?
Yes....
why dont you rid of the highlights and slightly change the colour of the hair in some places?
it would fit the game's style more imo. im no pro so 
But the highlights are the idea
ya ^
but they dont look exactly like that, a light reflection would fit the whole head no?
If blue light shines on your hair you got a blue reflection at the part where it hits it
@tepid gate there are two different coloured lamps placed at each side
yes yes, what i mean
I cannot rlly describewhat im trying to say but rather than little lines more or so a more or so spread out reflection?
Imo the bold blue/pink on top of the light reflection looks odd now that i look at it more
ya that's what i mean
That's is an effect that makes it look like it glows
I understand but how to โfixโ
Idk if that was intended but it does look like it
I guess they are suggesting to remove the non translucent lines
@quick harbor I thought they were; I thought u were making a party background with like stage lights ๐
@somber bronze @tepid gate
Oooh ya that looks better already
@next talon what do you think?
I just find it a bit odd, that the left hand side of the hair hasnt got a blue shimmer onto it like the right one has
?
and on top the hair kinda looks like dreadlocks but they arent
The right side is reddish and the left side is just black-ish instead of blue-ish
@craggy pivot light sources are on both sides 
There is light coming from the left side and light coming from the right side the blue and red so called, random blobs๐
That's not what I mean
The light comes from top left and top right
So it should be kinda like this (dark parts)
But for some reason it's random splotches on the hair? Sorry it's just weird to me ๐
that was my idea too i just didnt know how to formulate it lmao thanks
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Hi!
Im gonna write feedback๐
u go jin
No problem xD
you must have many mistakes because of how long they take with the message
XD
Feedback is always long lol
First thing first. I really like the idea. There are a few things you can improve.
Hair: it canโt go behind tbr back. I personally prefer the hair colours you used in the girl version. So I would suggest to use the same colour in the boys hair.
Eyes: I like the girls eyes. Nothing to say about that. The boys eyes are a bit blurred though. Donโt know why but yeah. The eyebrows are also a bit wobbly. So I would make sure that the eyes are clearer and the eyebrows straighter.
Shirt: the both shirts can use some shading. I would suggest to make the collar of the girls shirt the same as the boys. The hood thing (idk how to call it in english) should be a bit higher so it cover the neck a bit. (I can show you if you dont understand)
Front item: i like it! Just add some shadows and its good.
Back item: i like the fading out idea. Just the brighter pink and purple direct behind the character are a bit weird. In would suggest to remove them or shape them so they are less massive.
Last thing: I like the freckles but they are too small. They wonโt be visible in game. Im not sure if the earrings are big enough or not
@barren harness points to improve! Never mistakes
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If you donโt understand anything just ping me
Is this better?
So much better I love it ๐
@barren harness hey!
Great to see you back with a new design๐
been missing you
Okay so, first off i really like the concept and execution but some things are slightly off like...
Lets shart with the Background, i like the idea of it but its pretty unclean and very huge
It is quite the eyecatcher of the design which it shouldn't be, so maybe try something a little bit more subtle maybe?๐
Like the milky way for example? I can imagine that working well with low opacity layers and some white stars on it would look awesome at night i bet!
I get what you're aiming at with the shirt but, the shading of the jacket it a bit off, at least from the female version
For example at the armpit area, that thin line will barely be visible in game and doesnt rly look realistic hm
Maybe try thickening it a tad and making it get pointier where it gets into the armpit and get a tad thinner once it hits the bottom can sketch up what i mean if you dont understand it well ^^
Also it's a bit weird the shirt is curved upwards, usually with an off shoulder shirt its either curved downwards and more diagonal
For the male shirt try making the hood look cleaner and also make the black a tad less black and add shadows where the arms are at too ๐
I'd also suggest making the strings a bit thicker
As for the front item, i think it looks cute but would look better without the emote stickers as the white border isnt exactly proportional all along and its already cute enough without those stickers๐
~~i dont think you use medibang but maybe your app also got an "add border" option? This would create a clean white border around the emote
I would also suggest adding some shading at the downer side of the telescope!
As for the freckles, of both male and female version as they are the same mostly, they should be a bit thicker/bigger because the way they are right now they are hardly recognisable so in game i thini they'd just get completely lost
As for the shape of the eyes, try making them a bit... sharper? Probably not the right word for this but... lets say cleaner! Like the eyeline for both male and female should get a bit thinner at the ends and also maybe make the corner of the eye where the eyeliner is a bit sharper, so the white part looks a tad sharper maybe? ^^
Also for the eyebrows in my opinion they should start thicker and get thinner at the end and not the other way around,,, just looks more natural imoeyes
as for the earring, i am wondering which category you want it to be placed?
Also it seems to be a bit too thin, try making it a bit bigger in order for it getting seen in gameeyes
I think the hair shading is a bit off, you may take a look into #dev-voteย on how others shade their hair, i could propose you what to change about it but you may prefer an other style
But right now it just doesnt look realistic and a tad odd to me!
In general i'd add more shading to the items, especially, shirt, at the downer side of the telescope and a more realistic shading to the hair,,
As for the female shirt i'd also maybe make the symbol on her shirt bigger because it looks a bit empty right now
Either that or add some more stars!!
The telescope as gravestone -> again shading ofceyes
Then maybe removing the stickers or making them more clean
And also shade the single pieces of glass just like you shaded the whole one, i dont think the shading changes for a tinier surface
And as for the cracks try giving them more depth + making them with a thicker brush, because rn it looks slightly scratched but not like actual cracks
Other than that i really really really love the idea and you did a well job over thereeyes
Keep up the great work
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2000 character limit legitimately killed me but 16/10 worth it would do again
@somber bronze hi again uwu I was dead I'm still trying to improve the quality of the drawings :'v
Don't worry i am very glad you're back and dont be shy of asking as whenever you need help๐
Yeah They told me that my only option would be to collaborate with others xD
Thank you all for the feedbacks uwu
Naaah, your option is to just never give up and even get better than those "others" one day๐ 
Tyโค But it will cost me being that I draw with a phone and with my fingers โค ๐
Well i can only recommend using medibang๐
i also use phone and my fingers but the medibang stabilizer is just the work of god 
Also my dms are always open for questions about medibang etc ^^โค
preferably if you use android bc i am not familiar with the ios setup
Ty!!!
You're very welcome๐
Sweet jeebus that's long
hellooo? bully much? :(((
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Gotta practice em english and i like getting into details 
I am sure neah will make it look just awesome as always 
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Take it slowly๐
@quick harbor donโt be rude
Im not being rude we are friends and she knows what i mean by that
Its a joke
@quick harbor
#feedback-readonly for that one
Oh
Uhm... Tokyo ghoul is still copyrighted, even if you post it here too ^^ there is similar hair in game, the one from the cyborg and also Something that looks like the other version of kaneki above the eye in the daily rewards. You can find a black shirt in the gold wheel too
@quick harbor
yeah
The hair is from a special offer as far as I know.... The mask is clan quest the shirt from the rose wheel, the eyes are from the tomatoe Clan quest and the eye thing from the inventory
@hazy falcon The hair is from Rose Wheel
Yes yes
@primal pecan no. The rose wheel is an Easter egg.
bruh
@somber bronze that's what they all say






