#avatar-ideas

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burnt basin
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they'll either come back with feedbacks and things that need to be fixed or publish it in #dev-vote

spare pawn
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i love the head accesories, but idk how to draw the headband

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I have this, is it good?

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ill add shading on the forhaid to

hazy frost
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Did u use a airbrush to get that red?

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^

spare pawn
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ohh

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no, i used fine pencil for the top hair

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So, now i have this

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is it good?

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I added bats as a background and a veil as a foreground

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any tips are welcome!! :3

dim tusk
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Can someone please tell me how to move everything at once in ibis paint?

spare pawn
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not

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you just have to put them on the same page

dim tusk
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You really can’t? Damn bro

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I use so many layers so it’s impossible

spare pawn
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yh, i use alot of layers to ;-;

spare pawn
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Like, i would actually wear it in the game

dim tusk
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If you want to submit it you also need a gravestoneGW_vamp_peek

spare pawn
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OH YH

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thx!

hazy frost
spare pawn
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gacha :3

hazy frost
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And if you move the folder u also drag every layer in there around without them getting all messed up

spare pawn
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oh

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i never knew that

hazy frost
# hazy frost

Same goes if you paint with procreate (its called a group there) but its basically the same thing

dim tusk
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Feedbacks? If not I will finally start with the bg

spare pawn
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it looks a bit busy/weird

spare pawn
wanton wave
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Maybe try shrinking down your design every once in a while and make note of things that won’t be seen or look confusing when the outfit is displayed at a smaller scale

spare pawn
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@wanton wave what do u think of my design?

spare pawn
dim tusk
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The pearls and the bow are outlined

dim tusk
dim tusk
wanton wave
# spare pawn I added bats as a background and a veil as a foreground

Shading is very important! I see you did some on the face but I recommend adding some more around the neck, clothes, veil, and hair. Also adding some contrast between her lips and the blood around them is important since when I first looked at it I couldn’t tell what it was. Also making the earrings and bats bigger since they’ll read better at a smaller size and removing the outlines on the top of the veil and bows

dim tusk
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Better now?

jagged crane
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Guys I have some ideas for game updates where can I post them? (This concerns changes to avatars)

dim tusk
wanton wave
dim tusk
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That’s creepy mouth saliva

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It looks empty without it

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So I kept it

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Maybe more teeth could be a solution

wanton wave
dim tusk
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Yes please

jagged crane
burnt basin
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I think I'm finished, any last feedback? (pls be really critic)

dim tusk
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Good job

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Looks awesome

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Hope it gets added

sweet hedge
wanton wave
# dim tusk Yes please

Alright here’s 3 options I sketched out
1: stretched out mouth. This is what I thought you were going for when I first saw the design. I think it adds a sort of “possessed” aspect to your character
2: what you said you were going for. If you did do this I would make the saliva drops bigger just for readability
3: extra teeth. Same thing with 2 I would make the teeth bigger if you did this

dim tusk
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I will try the first option

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Thank you so much

dim tusk
wanton wave
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Any suggestions? This would probably be a standalone item but if anyone thinks it could be a full outfit lmk

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I was also thinking of making a series of these, one for each category of clothes

wanton wave
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Another standalone item, could be part of a basic set

wanton wave
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Tbh I was worried it might look too similar to venom

naive prawn
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Maybe becaz of the strings from the mouth that makes it look like venom

wanton wave
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Yeah I might have to change the color or smth

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I’m waiting for a mod to get back to me abt it

vague ridge
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I ain't doing the male

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Tombstone time

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Ima make it a teddy bear

arctic stratus
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Icon doctor ( winter ) ❄️

vague ridge
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Fact : this is a bear

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Just asking one dumb question

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For the background of the outfit

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Do wed draw it

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Or take it from somewhere

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Cuz I ain't drawing the male one

naive prawn
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The outlines makes it look like a 3D model where did you get this jajajaa

spare pawn
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@wanton wave i did some things u said, is it better?

vague ridge
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I accidentally outlined the clothes

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Damnanananana

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Lazy

arctic stratus
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I don't know what else to add👽

vague ridge
naive prawn
vague ridge
burnt basin
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otherwise you could add like a phone back item with like breakup texts(?)

dim tusk
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Hmm

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What should I do

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A bg or a gravestone

loud stream
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Bg

burnt basin
dim tusk
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hmmmm

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i thought for gold quests you can only have 6 items

burnt basin
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but for gem it's 8👀

dim tusk
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but then i only have 7👀

burnt basin
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make the spider eyes a mask?

dim tusk
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Hmm…

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Good idea

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But I don’t even have a bg idea…

wanton wave
vague ridge
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8 items yey

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what do you guys think

dim tusk
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Does she have eyes?

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Looks a bit…

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Hmm idk

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The umbrella is…

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Interrupting it a bit

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Even though you can see through it

neon walrus
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i dont think this outfit will get voted, the clothes and umbrella colour look modest

dusk void
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Looks cool!

neon walrus
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try adding some glitters

dim tusk
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And the bear is just like a 3d model

neon walrus
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sorry if i was too harsh

sick prairie
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Neo fighter

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Bc there's not that much men skin, ( not counting feminine men like cute boy or tomboy)

hazy frost
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This is uh the progress (not much) any feedback to the hair wip?

neon walrus
# sick prairie

can you add more metallic lusture or steel like colour to the outfit, the outline fascinates me

hazy frost
# sick prairie

Ohhhh looks niceeeee, but does this headpiece v count as an outline?

dim tusk
sick prairie
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What's an outline

dim tusk
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The black thing that separates two parts of a character

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The line

sick prairie
hazy frost
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Also im quite fascinated cuz it doesnt seem to be a mirrored piece

neon walrus
hazy frost
sick prairie
sick prairie
neon walrus
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do you edit it on pc?

dim tusk
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Help me get two final ideas for my skin to submit it.

  1. A background
  2. A better shirt/clothing
naive prawn
# sick prairie

Nice! But textured brushes (in the bg) aren't allowed too along with the outlines 👀

sick prairie
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I only used a basic pen

naive prawn
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Ya it's kinda like air brush

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Oh

sick prairie
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I used only the basic one

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Nothing else

naive prawn
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Okk

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Then it's the pics

sick prairie
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Tho it's a idea

naive prawn
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Bg is blurry, blurs are not allowes GW_sadness

sick prairie
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Oh maybe i zoomed too much

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But it's an idea not a real skin directly in the game

naive prawn
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Okkk cool idea though

sick prairie
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I'll do a vikings one

naive prawn
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I'm still trying to bring war armos in game too

naive prawn
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Okie good luck

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👀

sick prairie
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Good luck too !

naive prawn
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Thxx

neon walrus
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or serpent's stone

hazy frost
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Giving me candy vibes

neon walrus
pseudo fiber
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Guys

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I Need opinions

hazy frost
hazy frost
pseudo fiber
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I am drawing a outfit for the game

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And idk what I draw 😭

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Look

vague ridge
pseudo fiber
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I want to add more items...

vague ridge
vague ridge
pseudo fiber
hazy frost
# pseudo fiber

So firstly its a really nice design, I think a foreground item would do great such as leaves or similar

vague ridge
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yippie

hazy frost
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Secondly on her shirt u used a airbrush/blur which isnt allowed in the game

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Same goes for the blush on her nose/eyes

pseudo fiber
vague ridge
hazy frost
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You can try something like this ( multiple opacity layers stacked) which gives a blurred look from afar but doesnt break any guidelines

pseudo fiber
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And her T-shirt, should I make another T-shirt?

hazy frost
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Nope i think its cute

pseudo fiber
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Thin lines cannot ?

hazy frost
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But the design is awesome otherwise

hazy frost
pseudo fiber
pseudo fiber
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What does this mean?

hazy frost
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So you use only a couple not connected lines to kinda show where the back hair is front where its overlapping

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Kinda like shadows

pseudo fiber
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Ohhhh

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I get

hazy frost
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Likese this hair yk

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Its like only using shadows and light to show the layering of the hair

pseudo fiber
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I will change everything and then bring it to see if it's good

hazy frost
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Sorry i am bad at explaining xD

dim tusk
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Uh I will make spider legs

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Behind the body

dusk void
hazy frost
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Thank youuuu!!!!

spare pawn
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@wanton wave or anyone, is this better?

dim tusk
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Haha now her head looks like a skull

spare pawn
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ur right XD, but its a front accesorie

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the bows are the hat

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so, you can always decide not to use it

dusk void
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Ack im so sad. I havent been able to work on my designs cause school is keeping me busy 🫠

spare pawn
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oof

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i just work when im home

sick prairie
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I've spent 2 hours on it for my second drawing 😭

sick prairie
bold violet
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Nice

sick prairie
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Wait is neo a english word

sick prairie
spare pawn
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cursed?

burnt basin
burnt basin
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yep, you can check the pinned messages for guidelines

burnt basin
sick prairie
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Okay thanks anyways

burnt basin
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np, keep it up

pseudo fiber
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Look at this

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I redid it

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I respected the lines and the shadow

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Should I add anything else?

burnt basin
pseudo fiber
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Oh, I get

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Better?

burnt basin
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also, I'm not sure if they'll allow the outlines, but try submitting and see what they say

burnt basin
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I have 0 ideas on what to do with these hairs(eyes n mouth are place holders), any suggestion?

pseudo fiber
dim tusk
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So… final design 😅

dusk void
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r we allowed to label the gravestone?

quiet dawn
dusk void
quiet dawn
dusk void
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cool cool, i shall do that

pseudo fiber
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i finished the skin, where can I send it?

quiet dawn
quaint hull
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I’m not submitting, i made her for fun which is why i broke a few rules, but feedback is ok

vague ridge
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the outlines

naive prawn
spare pawn
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I may change the veil, what do yall think?

spare pawn
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I added some shadow around the eyes and buttons to the neck

dim tusk
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What again do I have to do to submit a skin?

burnt basin
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dm a tmmod+ with design, name and references

hazy frost
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So far so good

spare pawn
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Ohh cute

spare pawn
hazy frost
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Some bats, maybe dark gravestone, or maybe a coffin

spare pawn
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There already is a conffin, maybe i can do a bat with rip?

burnt basin
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since they don't fit every skin colour

burnt basin
hazy frost
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So flat

burnt basin
hazy frost
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And if i make them for every skin colour?

patent basin
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Try something new GW_sip

quaint hull
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I thought i already specified that?

hazy frost
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I mean there is not much more to say

burnt basin
hazy frost
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Ye or meh?

sick prairie
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The grave:

crude finch
# sick prairie

You can't do hands like this because it needs to be matchable with the other skin colours, you could do gloves. Also, blushes are not allowed 'cause it can look blushed and as you can tell, blushing is also not allowed.

sick prairie
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I can do like white gloves

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Plastic

crude finch
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Look at the pinned messages for the rules (and also for the basic skins)

crude finch
quaint hull
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Or he

vague ridge
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just fix the blush and tada

quaint hull
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I have gradients in the eyes too.

vague ridge
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yeah just fix that and it's good

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I support you

dim tusk
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Or what

naive prawn
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Sketch can also be ref

dim tusk
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I didn’t make a sketch…

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What do I write

vague ridge
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for motorcycle

burnt basin
dim tusk
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Haha I didn’t

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I just started to draw

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Does that mean I can’t submit it?

burnt basin
naive prawn
dim tusk
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Final feedback pls

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What can I do better👀

patent basin
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Got no idea for the mouth lmao feelsfunny

dusk void
dim tusk
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Imma do it for a gold quest

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It isn’t good enough for a gem quest

dusk void
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xD i feel u

vague ridge
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And kinda big

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snail

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but I love the hair

dusk void
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Omg i just saw the monster bundle and i want it so bad 😭 but im pooooor

patent basin
spare pawn
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its cute :3

vague ridge
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perfect

patent basin
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I though bigger eyes were cuter GW_vamp_peek

spare pawn
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nah, this is better

dim tusk
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I‘m exited

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Should I submit it now?

hazy frost
dim tusk
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Who to submit to?

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Who is the best tmmod

spare pawn
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Alr, i like the design, but idk what collors to use and where to add more shading. Any tips?

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The design*

dim tusk
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Use grey I guess

spare pawn
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yh, black and grey?

patent basin
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Update

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Theme : Royalty Perfume (gravestone and background )

spare pawn
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Cool!

patent basin
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Need to fix the mask and hair item

patent basin
spare pawn
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Idk where to put the red

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Maybe the wings?

dim tusk
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With fix you mean delete the outlines?

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Good

crude finch
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And I really love this design cute_heart

patent basin
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But im lazy and ill do it later

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Too much outlines

patent basin
spare pawn
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where?

patent basin
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Alchemist icône GW_kek_dog

spare pawn
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W

patent basin
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Idk the name in english

spare pawn
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around the gravestone?

patent basin
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Yeeees

spare pawn
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ohh

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and maybe like some red wings?

patent basin
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Can you please re send me the avatar ?

spare pawn
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sure

patent basin
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Mmmh

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Yup

spare pawn
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the veil is a sepperate part

patent basin
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Dark red aura maybe behind the gravestone

spare pawn
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with a neon effect?

patent basin
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And add some bats maybe on the background of the grave ?

spare pawn
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how do i do that?

patent basin
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Wait

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Imma show you

spare pawn
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alr

patent basin
spare pawn
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alr, ill try :3

dim tusk
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I think sonblo doesn’t like my design😂

patent basin
spare pawn
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What collor should i make the lines and the gravestone @patent basin ?

patent basin
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For the gravestone

dim tusk
spare pawn
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What did u send?

dim tusk
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Spider thing

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Man he wrote like 100 lines of feedback

spare pawn
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XD

spare pawn
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With or without?

patent basin
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Feedback for the gravestone ?

spare pawn
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its cool!

patent basin
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Lotus Flower took me half of the drawing Time feelsfunny

spare pawn
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oof ;-;

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wait

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i have a better gravestone

patent basin
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Which app do you use ?

spare pawn
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ibis paint

patent basin
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Love the last one

spare pawn
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thx :3

patent basin
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Do you use a stabilisation tools ?

spare pawn
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what that?

patent basin
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To make lines more stable

spare pawn
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idk

patent basin
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Cause I think it can be easier for you if you use it

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Wait lemme download ibis paint

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I’m gonna search for you

spare pawn
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alr :3

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do i need a background when i send my idea to a tmmod?

patent basin
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Depend of what kind of skin you make cutie

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But you can add a background image yes !

spare pawn
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Cause i have this rn

patent basin
spare pawn
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ohh, yh i have it at 0 :3

patent basin
spare pawn
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yh, i know, idk how to remove that

patent basin
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Uh…

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Is it on different layers ?

spare pawn
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well

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wdym?

patent basin
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Uh

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Did you used différents layer to draw the bats ?

spare pawn
spare pawn
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ill see if i can fix it

patent basin
spare pawn
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ohh, its oki! and thx!

patent basin
spare pawn
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ohh yh thats way better XD :3

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btw good handwriting!

patent basin
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Hihi Tysm

spare pawn
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np :3

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So, any bg reccomandations? And btw i fixed the bats! :3

hazy frost
patent basin
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I recycle everything from my test XD

patent basin
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And yup I know for the outlines and I have to fix it but rn, I’m lazy and I won’t do it GW_kek_dog

patent basin
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Is it for a quest ?

spare pawn
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thx!

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prob

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im not sure

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cause im so lazy to do a male one ;-;

patent basin
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Bahaha

spare pawn
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XD

patent basin
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If you need help I’m there

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Also brain off for my matching male outfit GW_kek_dog

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Wanted to do a « advanced role » offer feelsfunny

spare pawn
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its just the girl took about 10 hours or more

patent basin
spare pawn
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nah me

patent basin
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Ooof

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You’re determined lmao

spare pawn
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and im bad a male eyes an hair ;-;

spare pawn
patent basin
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I often abandon my avatar idea cause I miss some ideas items

spare pawn
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XD

patent basin
spare pawn
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alr!

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but, do you have any idea for male eyes and hair?

patent basin
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On my avatar idea, hair and shirt came from other ideas I had few months ago GW_kek_dog

patent basin
spare pawn
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alr

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:3

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i always use google for ideas, but i always forget pinterest XD

patent basin
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Pinterest is a treasure for artists cute_heart

spare pawn
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i know ❤️

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ill do it tomorrow prob :3

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but i have 4 hours of scouting tomorrow;-;

patent basin
wanton wave
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Any ideas for background and foreground props?

visual coral
visual coral
patent basin
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Two versions

quaint hull
tribal swift
burnt basin
spare pawn
patent basin
vague ridge
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SUNSHINE USERS

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Where was my non umbrella pic

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I deleted it

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Now I have none

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I think I sended it here

burnt basin
patent basin
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But aren’t they too low ?

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I mean, for the guideline

candid dome
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Heyy guys I made something and thought I should ask if this idea is good for a skin. Tell me what modifications should I do, and I am new so be kind

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Idk how to submit a picture 🫠🥲

burnt basin
burnt basin
candid dome
hazy frost
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U just create the folder and drag the layers u want under it

hazy frost
hazy frost
spare pawn
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@hazy frost how do i put my layers in a folder in ibispaint?

spare pawn
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Its cool ig

candid dome
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It's kinda hard to choose, I would go with 1

patent basin
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1

spare pawn
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alr

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ill maybe like make the veil a lill smaller but ill see

raw ravine
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What do you think

spare pawn
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This good?

spare pawn
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yh, i didnt know i put them into the folder

spare pawn
limpid sandal
spare pawn
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yh, i got google :3

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but is the drawing good?

limpid sandal
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Its cute,just has some limes which seem intentional

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Or are abit wonkey looking

spare pawn
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where?

limpid sandal
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Im outside rn, i'll look later

spare pawn
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alr :3

dim tusk
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I think I’ll stop working on the current one

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I’ll finally use referencesGW_kek_dog

spare pawn
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XD

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smart idea :

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:3

dim tusk
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Is there a way to have a reference in ibis paint?

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So I don’t have to change the app every time I want to look at it

spare pawn
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do u have a laptop?

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or pc or any other device?

limpid sandal
quaint hull
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Can hats go behind the hair?

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Which one looks better

patent basin
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Idk what can I draw on the two last spaces GW_kek_dog

quaint hull
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A lemon?

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Maybe.

patent basin
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It’s « luxury perfume » the theme

quaint hull
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Ah

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Whats the perfume scent?

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Maybe try drawing where the scent is sourced. Like if its a tropical scent add tropical fruits.

patent basin
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I really don’t know 😭😹

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I just draw perfume with royalty

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The avatars ideas are this one

limpid sandal
quaint hull
patent basin
quaint hull
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I see!

quaint hull
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Guess the hat will cover her ear..

patent basin
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Maybe draw the hat as a mask ?

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Or as glasses item ?

quaint hull
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Nah its fine

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I had a backup plan

quaint hull
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It has to be on the face bcuz the nose will also be a face accessory

dim tusk
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Hmmm what could be a good reference

spare pawn
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Yay or nay?

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(its for the male vampire)

quaint hull
spare pawn
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yh, but the design?

quaint hull
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Good

spare pawn
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thx :3

quaint hull
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I dont think i can keep her makeup, i was testing what it would look like on darkskinned avatars and it doesnt look good.

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Oh shit i see a mistake one sec

dim tusk
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Very cute

quaint hull
dim tusk
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The lines won’t be seen in game because they‘re too smol

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Afaik

quaint hull
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Ahh ok

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I deleted em

dim tusk
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I need theme help

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Something cool

spare pawn
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obv eyes need to be further appart, and maybe a steampunk theme?

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cause when i look at the eyes, they scream steam punk

quaint hull
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Fb? (The tiny lines in the eyes are removed)

dim tusk
spare pawn
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u can use the lasso tool to have a wand around 1 eye, then u use the copy tool and remove the one eye u used the lasso on, then u paste the eye and voila

spare pawn
quiet dawn
# quaint hull Fb? (The tiny lines in the eyes are removed)

Hi!

  • Eyes are really really big. It isn’t reaaally wov style but should be fine if that’s your style
  • Though the eyebrows look a bit outlined? Very small lines, can be hardly judged
  • Same goes for the lashes area
  • The diamond on the necklace also appears outlined, same as above, really tiny
  • The shirt is lacking shading
  • I would honestly make the hat bigger and center it more. Either way, the hat doesn’t look like it’s on the head but more like it’s just put on it on it‘s side. That’s because the opening is completely visible (Hope it’s understandable what I mean meh)
  • The hair pieces look nice but are really tiny + the left hair piece is only a „w“ and doesn’t really look like a hair clip
  • Unsure if the nose, maybe you can expand that a bit more than just a black triangle?
dim tusk
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Finally something that looks good lmao

spare pawn
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she looks shocked

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:0

dim tusk
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But I have to make it ✨perfect✨

spare pawn
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have u decided what style u gon make?

dim tusk
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Not really

spare pawn
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maybe steampunk?

dim tusk
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I‘ll try that steampunk thingy

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Yea

spare pawn
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alr :3

dim tusk
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Ty for the inspiration :3

spare pawn
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np :3

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Any fb so far?

dim tusk
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It’s a wip so you’ll probably remove the outlines

quaint hull
quaint hull
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Thank you!

spare pawn
quaint hull
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Oh and, the eyelashes and eyebrows are not outlined, thats me adding a lighter color on the inside to make it appear more detailed, sorry if it looks that way

dim tusk
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Skin

spare pawn
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the other skin is gonna be the clothing

dim tusk
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Teeth are too

spare pawn
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oh yh, ill pob use stabalize for that

dim tusk
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Stabilize doesn’t actually help that much tho

hazy frost
# spare pawn Any fb so far?

Maybe Put the Eyes lower and they also are outlined, move the hair down a bit too and add some on the chin too

spare pawn
dim tusk
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Made a new alpha wolf icon with stabilizer
Yah doesn’t help

hazy frost
dim tusk
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10/10

dim tusk
hazy frost
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Still have a stabilized comparison, which should apply to ibis too

dim tusk
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I tried adding it and it didn’t do anything

spare pawn
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use the crown pattern hard

quaint hull
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How can i add more shading to this?

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This is why i struggle with dark clothing cuz its hard to shade

spare pawn
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Does this count as outline?

quaint hull
dim tusk
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The thing under the eye?

spare pawn
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yh and the whole eye

quaint hull
hazy frost
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Here also is a good example of how you should use fast strokes instead of slowly going along the way

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Especially if u have shaky hands like me

quaint hull
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Hey, @hazy frost

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Question

hazy frost
quaint hull
hazy frost
quaint hull
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Ahh okay, so where can i put shading

spare pawn
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how do i remove a layer from a folder, but it still need to be under it

hazy frost
hazy frost
spare pawn
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yh, but the prob is i have a layer thats not unde the folder, but then u cant see the layer, and if i drag it above the layer thats not in the folder then it will be in the folder

hazy frost
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It shouldnt

spare pawn
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wait, ill send a screen

dim tusk
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Phew I don’t know

spare pawn
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It looks shocked tbh

quaint hull
hazy frost
# spare pawn Ya see it?

Try moving the folder a layer up then moving layer two up and then bring the folder down again

spare pawn
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huh?

hazy frost
hazy frost
dim tusk
spare pawn
# hazy frost

but the prob is i have alot of folders, bc i have a folder for every part

dim tusk
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The eyes are in the two little rectangles?

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And over that the hair?

hazy frost
limpid sandal
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Thoughts? Smth random i was bored

dim tusk
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He looks like he’s embarrassed

limpid sandal
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Thats okay

hazy frost
candid dome
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Guys you are so cool and creative

limpid sandal
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I still ahve these 2 aswell, but no idea for a mack ground :'

candid dome
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Niceee

hazy frost
limpid sandal
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Skeleton?

hazy frost
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Since if u were to use a bigger neck top it would look weird

limpid sandal
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Oh yeah i didnt do clean ups yet

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Ohh

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u mean that

dim tusk
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They don’t fit in the rectangles

limpid sandal
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its suppossed to be like hair which isbend to the back abit, but ik wym

hazy frost
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Mine wouldnt fit in there either

dim tusk
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K

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Hair is soooo hard to do

spare pawn
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yh

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This allowed? (As in outlines)

limpid sandal
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The teeth for example do count as a outline, so more likely not:'

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U also wont he able to see the tiny teeth in game most likely

quaint hull
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How about now? @quiet dawn

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Oh the W clip i’ll fix that in a sec

quiet dawn
quaint hull
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Submittable? Or are there any more errors i need to fix besides the clips (im working on rn)

spare pawn
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Any fb so far?

quaint hull
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Lower eyes

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Remove outlines in mouth

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Add eyebrows

quiet dawn
hazy frost
hazy frost
quiet dawn
spare pawn
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Like this?

hazy frost
# quiet dawn always

Thank you sm! So I heard that elf ears aren’t really liked to be submitted now because it doesn’t fit every skin colour, is there like something one can do instead? So like either one for every skin colour or maybe as an accessory instead of a hair part? Or is it like just completely out

spare pawn
hazy frost
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Cuz I am sadly the most uncreative person that just slaps elf ears on any hair to fill up spacesad

quiet dawn
quaint hull
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I’ll clean it up after i get fb

hazy frost
spare pawn
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thx :3

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i actually agree

quiet dawn
quaint hull
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Yes

hazy frost
spare pawn
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@quiet dawn do u have any FB on my design?

hazy frost
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Also, are you accepting skin submissions or rather not?Shy

quiet dawn
hazy frost
quaint hull
quiet dawn
# spare pawn Like this?
  • Hair, eyes and mouth needs some cleaning. Some parts are a bit messy and wobbly
  • For the hairline above, maybe only use a darker red tone, you used one dark red and one lighter red before the main color to make a transition. It might be better at that place to only use the dark red part for shading
  • Eyebrows can’t go above the hair, hair has to be above eyebrows
  • For the earrings, maybe either try to make one end of them appear to go „under“ the ear or „on the other side“ of the ear, or you move both ends of the earring a bit so it appears as it’s going in the hair on both sides
  • some hair strings overlap with light and dark red, would adjust that so it looks like a hair transition (when you dye a hair string or as here the end of it, the whole string would be colored)

Overall I like the colors and the idea, just mainly needs some clearing at some edges 🙈

quiet dawn
quaint hull
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Wait, how would i fix that then

quiet dawn
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you can tell the dark purple part is behind the avatar, it has a different color, no shading and doesn’t fall infront of the face

quaint hull
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Would this still be considered behind (will clean up after feedback asb)

quiet dawn
quaint hull
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Wait now im confused

spare pawn
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@quiet dawn any FB on this?

quaint hull
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If i just remove it completely?? 😅

quiet dawn
quaint hull
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I see

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I think i’ll just remove it, it looks a bit better w/o

quaint hull
quiet dawn
# spare pawn <@703204271801237565> any FB on this?
  • A lot of parts need to be cleaned as they’re unclean/wobbly (marked them all over grave stone/hair/lips/shirt)
  • Earrings same as above
  • Would personally make the mask that covers the face and the ribbon in a different color than red. It looks good but it melts in with everything else
  • Lips, cleavage and the diamond aren’t centered
  • The blood on the teeth seem to be just some red lines, would need to make that a bit more visible and clearer
  • Some parts of the shirt appear outlined
  • Shading is inconsistent a bit
  • Diamond on the shirt as well, maybe use shapes for that?
  • Can you maybe send a version without the mask too? 🙈 So the shirt and the eyes be viewed better
quiet dawn
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or fix

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fox*

quaint hull
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Ah thought you meant the actual ears. Thanks!

quiet dawn
quaint hull
spare pawn
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Without mask

quiet dawn
# spare pawn Without mask
  • eyes are really really big but if that’s your style then alright
  • the eyes have some blurry parts in them which isn’t allowed as per guidelines
  • eyes inside seem outlined
  • the dots on the neck aren’t centered
  • shirt isn’t symmetrical
  • some other parts that need cleaning too

btw you would need a background for your design because of the bats, you can’t really see them if you open the pic

spare pawn
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The blurry isnt intentianol (or however u spell it)

quiet dawn
quaint hull
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Sorry im just making sure

quaint hull
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Okay

dim tusk
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Cherry, I know this isn’t much but can you already give feedback?👀cute_heart

quaint hull
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Hold on i fixed smth

quiet dawn
# dim tusk
  • some parts are wobbly/messy and need to be cleaned (eyes, pupil, eyebrows)
  • some colors are overlapping (grey/black)
  • what is the black part? It looks like some sort of liquid/slime coming from the eyes
  • the purple part in the eyes below the red and pink makes the iris look outlined, maybe just leave the purple line out once the red color starts
quiet dawn
# quaint hull

it looks good but the sides are a bit thick, maybe if you got for a small shading line there it’s enough? i‘m not a pro at this but just so the ears don’t look 2D xD

hazy frost
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Meh i have no idea

quiet dawn
# hazy frost Meh i have no idea

lol I didn’t see this was sent by you and was about to ping you and say „that’s what I meant with elf ears without skin“ 😭 you nailed it hahaha

quiet dawn
# hazy frost Meh i have no idea

but if you have one on one side, maybe also add one for the other side? or at least create it because i‘m pretty sure if it goes ingame, it should have a version of the elf ears for both sides

quiet dawn
# hazy frost Meh i have no idea

i btw love the hair, it reminds me of Sakura and the design overall

Only the eyes look a bit blurry (?) unsure if we allow/have items like that ingame even though they look amazing

dim tusk
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It was featured in my reference

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So I added it

quiet dawn
dim tusk
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Here…

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I think I just did it badlyGW_kek_dog

hazy frost
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Also I made the cufflins onesided hair layer, hair without the cufflings, one ear cuffling and both ear cufflings which i would use as this glasses slot in the game dunno what it’s called

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Im unsure of the colour, if i wanna go with a more golden look or a more silvery

quiet dawn
# dim tusk Here…

ahh yea it’s a different style than wov generally uses
it’s her eyelid, just thicker cause that’s the designs style

dim tusk
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Oh ok

quiet dawn
dim tusk
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I just use the reference for the eyes

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So should be wolvesville style after

quiet dawn
dusk void
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so sad my ipad is about to die so i cant drawwwww until it has enough chargeeeeeee

hazy frost
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i feel that so bad

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im hanging on 11 percent and charging to 20 and going back down xD

quiet dawn
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I should start learning to draw too lmao

dusk void
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it refuses to stay charged for very long

dusk void
hazy frost
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ooh that'd be fun

dusk void
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i mostly draw on paper so this whole digital thing is very new for me

dim tusk
quiet dawn
dim tusk
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And then we give you feedback feelsfunny

hazy frost
quiet dawn
hazy frost
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You are doing greatc_fufu c_ZeroTwo_Love

dim tusk
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Yu are doing greatGW_kek_dog

quaint hull
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@quiet dawn ?

hazy frost
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Update

hazy frost
quiet dawn
quaint hull
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If youre taking submissions!

quiet dawn
quaint hull
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Dmd

vague ridge
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cherry cooking

quiet dawn
wanton wave
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Thoughts?

naive prawn
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Nice nice nice nice

dim tusk
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Please help me get the hair right

naive prawn
dim tusk
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Ty

dusk void
# dim tusk Please help me get the hair right

It might help to throw in some shading in addition the the highlight. Or you could do straighter hair. I found that straight hair is easier to get right and to have look natural (but of course u dont have to since its ur design after all)

spare pawn
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Any FB?

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(So far)

spare pawn
spare pawn
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no...

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just no

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can u send inspo pick?

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or u have non?

dim tusk
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I have one but only used it for the eyes

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Deleting it real fast….

spare pawn
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XD

trail crag
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Pls Oktoberfest skin thx bye

dim tusk
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Biierrrr

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Can someone please help me with hair

wanton wave
dim tusk
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Curly

dim tusk
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Hmmm a phoenix skin?

spare pawn
hazy frost
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Any ideas for either a mask or a hat?

hazy frost
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Also the iris is crosseyed now, if thats not intended u can try having the iris like a half circle upwards

raw ravine
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Added hat and front item

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Can you guys suggest me a back item

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I don't know what to make

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Fit name: stray pixels

lusty mason
# spare pawn FB?

Well, first of all I would change positioning of eyes and lips. They seem too apart from each other. To position your eyes and lips better, try using nagini's positioning guide in pins. If you have already, maybe it's just the illusion of the lips being wide. Speaking about that, the lips are too wide and the colors are too striking, I would suggest changing the color scheme, doing a different lip color for top and bottom lip but still keeping it within the same color, and fixing the lips overall. Also, I would add eyebrows to the eyes.

About the hair, I would change the hairstyle. Personally, spacebuns are supposed to be used on the more cutesy side of things. If you're opting for a vampire theme, I wouldn't suggest spacebuns as the first option. In fact it would be one of the last options.

The main dress part seems a bit off. The shaping looks weird with the cloak, and it looks like a Little Red Riding Hood. I would change the dress to have a little bit more of a "waistline" or a Jessica Rabbit type of look. For mroe details, look at my picture.

A part of the outfit seems to be erased? I've highlighted it within the red circle of my pic. And also, highlights in the eyes should not be mirrored. They should follow only one eye. Usually, the left eye.

Blue: how the lips and eyebrows could potentially be done
Purple: how the hairstyle could maybe look like.
Yellow: what I mean by a "Jessica Rabbit" type of look.
Red: erased part of the outfit.
Cyan: this highlight is mirrored

lusty mason
lusty mason
lusty mason
# spare pawn Any FB?

I would change the lips, they're outlined and that is breaking guidelines. I would also shorten the eyes a bit, it looks too wide. Also, highlights in the eyes, once again should not be mirrored.
Honestly, not much to say since not much has been done yet

spare pawn
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I aint changing my whole design, but thx for the feedback

dusky plover
hazy frost
lusty mason
hazy frost
spare pawn
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ohh, cuteee!!

hazy frost
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Dunno ngl

naive prawn
hazy frost
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Rlly? Im not too sureHoVLoading

naive prawn
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👀👀👀

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Some of lines in the wings doesn't connect to the wings frame

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Donkno if you made it on purpose

hazy frost
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Yass i did

naive prawn
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Okie

zenith scroll
spare pawn
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bro, i feel like a noob now ;-;

burnt basin
zenith scroll
cloud mountain
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can i get some advice? just sketching rn not the final product

dusk void
cloud mountain
dusky plover
# zenith scroll

Quick reminder that this character is copyrighted if you plan on something more, yet the shirt is quite quality 👏

dim tusk
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Oh gawd
No

dusky plover
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Hello 👋 I recommend you to watch in game items while designing, it helps learning what's right or not. There's a guideline in pinned messages but I'll sum up things to fix for you:

  1. The blurry brush (airbrush):
    Outfits are flat colours, no blurry gradiant is allowed. For blush and global face shading you need play with layers and opacities 🍎 round shapes works better, with lot of details it will do the effect.

  2. The outlines:
    Currently hairstyle, shirt, background and fore items are outlined. Yet you may see in game that there is a few exceptions that allows outlines, but it's quite not obvious. You can easily fix this by filling the outline colour with the same colour as inside, for example the dark blond needs to be light as the main blond and you can keep the dark parts inside the hair as shading.

More:
The freckles are too small to be visible

Last thing, I noticed you used a sketchy brush, it's good for sketching but for designing remember your brush have to be flat too to prevent gradiant and unwanted transparency. You can also cancel this opacity in copypasting and merging layers multiple times till it's flat fool

dusky plover
# cloud mountain Tysm

No problem 🍪 (also the edit were made on phone so the lines are not precise at all) I like the overall design, can't wait 🙌

zenith scroll
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I fix the hair to match with maid outfit🐸

dusky plover
zenith scroll
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should i draw a tombstone for itGW_vamp_peek

dusky plover
cloud mountain
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This is the background I have to use?

quiet dawn
quiet dawn
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anytime!

dusk void
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Is times new roman a copy writed font?

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Or ig a better question is can i use times new roman in my design?

burnt basin
brisk hedge
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Which style is better?

hard sorrel
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What do you think:D?

wanton wave
zenith scroll
winter ledge
hard sorrel
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What are you doin here

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Can wait for Ram GW_kek_dog

quaint hull
mystic ridge
wanton wave
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I tried a thing since you can’t do hair going behind the back so I made the hair part of the background prop

naive prawn
hard sorrel
burnt basin
naive prawn
hard sorrel
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Here is the recolored ver:D

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Also I added some shading

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Any feedback:D?

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Oh, the font I used in the design was handwritten by me, so it's not related to any other copyrighted font.

crystal knoll
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Also, the eyes are adorable!

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maybe I would try to clean some details, let me show you

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well, the lineart on the candy doen't fully touch, the stick on the lollypop has varying width, and in a part of the lollypop (right on top) the line goes a bit off

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apart from that it looks quite good i think, you made sure to use no gradients and that's important

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but (unless you're going to color those in) you should try to make all the line-focussed parts really neat, since it will be quite obvious if they're not

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love it so far!

hard sorrel
hazy frost
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New wip, Mercy and Absolute Judgement

hazy frost
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And final product I think

lusty mason
lusty mason
hazy frost
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Thank youuu!

lusty mason
# hard sorrel Here is the recolored ver:D

Nice! Here's some feedback:
First of all, highlights in eyes shouldn't be mirrored. I feel like people tend to miss out this part a lot, but highlights should be facing only one side or the other.
I would do something a little more with the ahoge, maybe add a hint of pink there. The transition from pink to blue looks quite abrupt, and it sort of looks like it's from the back of the hair.
And lastly, I would change the circled peppermint to look a bit darker when the body sort of "separates". Like, the line between the arms and the torso.
Other than those flaws, it's pretty good! I like the design you went for and the childlike style. Your style reminds me a bit of Mudtoei.

Red: mirrored highlights on eyes
Cyan: how I would color it (demonstrated with the pink)
Indigo: this peppermint. the highlighted part specifically is to be fixed

hazy frost
lusty mason
quiet dawn
# hazy frost One or two

the wings need a tad cleaning tho, they look a but different then the rest of the outfit style wise
most likely because some parts look like multiple colors overlap instead of shading

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  • it melts a bit with the shirt here
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eyes are really huge btw, I assume that’s just your style tho?

quaint hull
hard sorrel
dim tusk
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I‘m running out of ideas

burnt basin
dim tusk
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Uh

burnt basin
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if you want I have a full pin board of ideas I can share

dim tusk
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Yay

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Please

burnt basin
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I'll DM you

naive prawn
# dim tusk I‘m running out of ideas

Ah you can also try something like this, think of element, random vibe and write it down: || Exam > ' Element: Big Bike / Vibe: Rainy nights = outfit ||

dim tusk
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What’s the best thing to start with a skin?

dusky plover
dim tusk
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Is there already a mouth in game that makes the face of the skin white?

dim tusk
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Ok

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So I’ll have to think of another thing

hazy frost
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recently we have had a lot of dark themed battlepasses, so why not start with maybe an angel, animal or some summer skins

cloud mountain
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Halloween skins?

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😳😳

hard sorrel
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😭😭😭

naive prawn
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Oh sheesh all i could restore was plain avatar base... I think you need to redraw the outfit again sorry

loud stream
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Sry i Tried, couldnt get anything :'}

hard sorrel
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Which eyebrows look better?

hard sorrel
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I forgot to send the fixed ver

hard sorrel
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well. . . . i need feedbacks

dim tusk
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Cute

dim tusk
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Is this intended?

hard sorrel
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as i said. I intentionally made those hand-drawn parts a bit off to make them look more childlike
but if you want to fix, i'll fix it

dim tusk
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Well if that’s the case you should make more mistakes

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I only see 2 in the whole skin

hard sorrel
dim tusk
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It looks sooo cool

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I could never make something like that

hard sorrel
dim tusk
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I can’t

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And I’m new too

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What program do you use?

hard sorrel
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i used IbisPaint X

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for mobile

dim tusk
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Well, me too

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I guess I have to learn more

hard sorrel
dim tusk
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Look at this

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Haha jk

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Made better ones

hard sorrel
dim tusk
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Didn’t actually finish one

hard sorrel
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You did the iris better than me

dim tusk
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Yours looks still better

hard sorrel
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meh i just add a lot of glow on it

dim tusk
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Im working one something rn that will be better

hard sorrel
dim tusk
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Thx

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For you too

hard sorrel
dim tusk
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Gather a little bit more fb and boom - you can submit it

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And it will get a thousand upvotes

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Two other skins, boom you are a designer

hard sorrel
dim tusk
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Always be positive! Gl with your skin!

hard sorrel
dim tusk
hard sorrel
# dim tusk Fb?

I think you should smooth the lines. Suggestion: use the stabilization tool on IbisPaint

cloud mountain
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Guys how do you use ibis paint?

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Do you use it only for sketch?

hard sorrel
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Ohh

dim tusk
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Well

dim tusk
hard sorrel
hard sorrel
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You can also try these tools

dim tusk
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For things like this I always use the circle ruler

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Can you show me where the lines are not smooth?

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Maybe that helps me to fix it

sly juniper