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fringe geode
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Wot

kind blaze
mortal dock
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O dang that's a bop

kind blaze
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Yeah
Gonna release it soon

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Yesterday I finished making the cover and logo of the band

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Wanna see?

mortal dock
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yas

kind blaze
mortal dock
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Seraph null? Awesome name

kind blaze
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I came up with it yesterday lol

mortal dock
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The design is quite sleek too

kind blaze
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Thanks!

mortal dock
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Speaking of yesterday, just yest I was sketching this fanfare thingy, yk like those victory screens in games, but more epic

kind blaze
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Clash of Clans vibe lmao

mortal dock
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Whoa that's a throwback xD

kind blaze
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Yeah
Peak game
Still not bad but not as good as it used to be

fringe geode
kind blaze
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We just need to do the mastering

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Well, or at least try lol

runic adder
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Oh shit mental cruelty

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๐Ÿ”ฅ

mortal dock
runic adder
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I think so

fringe geode
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Or maybe you prefer Circle of Dust?

mortal dock
fringe geode
mortal dock
fringe geode
runic adder
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Thatโ€™s quite the combo

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I have not heard blue stahli in a hot minute

fringe geode
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Man's been mia

runic adder
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Damn

mortal dock
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I've liked Celldweller since I played Asphalt8 hehe

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Like a decade ago lol

fringe geode
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Kill the Sound was a dope ass song.

kind blaze
mortal dock
mortal dock
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Good idea or nah?

fringe geode
kind blaze
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Nah

fringe geode
kind blaze
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I'll listen to them

mortal dock
runic adder
fringe geode
mortal dock
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There's this too

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From some old project that got scrapped

fringe geode
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Woah it just took a turn.

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Wasn't expecting that.

mortal dock
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Lmao

tiny trout
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bro teach them whistle screams bro tfPrayge

mortal dock
fringe geode
tiny trout
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one of the admin from the screaming discord said it can be done true vocal folds, imma try that one

mortal dock
fringe geode
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Like wtf

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This is great

tiny trout
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sounds like a dying animal

mortal dock
fringe geode
mortal dock
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Maybe when I finish half of these demos and actually post them lmao

fringe geode
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The goal was just experimentation with ambience.

mortal dock
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I love The Raven Age

fringe geode
mortal dock
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They're not bad at all they've got bangers

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Idk why they're so underground

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Considering who their founder is

fringe geode
mortal dock
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dang it I was about to say that

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No way we share the same braincell wtf

fringe geode
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Man was arguably doing djent long before Misha was.

mortal dock
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They've got backing

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Yet they don't pop off which is hilarious

mortal dock
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LMAO

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Everyone always freaks out when I tell them

fringe geode
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I gotta give them another listen.

mortal dock
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I'm not into iron maiden but I love the raven age, go figure

fringe geode
mortal dock
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He doesn't play bass tho he plays guitar

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Which might have stung to the old gentleman xD

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But yeah
They've even been allowed to open for them and stuff in shows

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Yet it's like there's invisible

fringe geode
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Honestly I'm not surprised why they don't get a lot of attention. Despite the backing of Maiden, Maiden themselves aren't as mainstream as other bands of their era.

mortal dock
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Yeah that is true

fringe geode
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Its kinda like we know who Vended are becuz both Corey and Clown are in one of the biggest bands of their era.

mortal dock
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Yea

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Or stone sour

fringe geode
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Or another example is Wolfgang Van Halen. He's a fuckin Van Halen, of course he's gonna attention. I remember when he was in Tremonti for a bit. Ppl were freaking out.

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I got to see Tremonti when Wolfie was in. Tho it was only once.

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He left after that album came out.

mortal dock
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Oo

fringe geode
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It was awesome.

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The final song was Wish You Well from the first album (one of the few Tremonti songs I know how to play minus the solo cuz he's a mad lad)

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Went hard af live.

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The place was small so when multiple pits opened up with me right in the middle of 2 or 3 of em it was something else.

kind blaze
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Damn

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One bro just did the mixing of my track

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Wild stuff

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For me, mixing is like magic

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I don't understand it absolutely

runic adder
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I be doin wizard shit in my tower

tribal orbit
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I'm trying to figure out what about the mix is bothering me

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I think there's something wrong with teh vocal eq when combined with the guitars?

mortal dock
tribal orbit
mortal dock
tribal orbit
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Ahhhh

mortal dock
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The instrumental being just a single audio file yea

tribal orbit
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yeah that'd do it

mortal dock
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Lol ye

tribal orbit
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okay that makes a lot more sense

mortal dock
# tribal orbit yeah that'd do it

I guess I could do something like Trackspacer style sidechain the whole instrumentals to my vocal signal to make auto EQ cuts to have it clash less?

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Didn't do it out of lazyness tho tbh

mortal dock
tribal orbit
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It's good

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No complaints on the performance

tribal orbit
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lmk what you guys tink

runic adder
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Finally decided to do some vocals lol

tribal orbit
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I think they could use less delay and reverb

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technique wise, sounds sick

runic adder
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Maybe

runic adder
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Might choose a diff kick sample, not sure how much I fw the one I used

tribal orbit
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fair enough

tribal orbit
tribal orbit
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also did a stupid and added 808 cowbell synth bits, trying to do a phonky thing

runic adder
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well first of all, why is alexis on fire?

Song is cool imo, very upbeat

mix-wise, it sounds fine, again i really fw the saturated/compressed vocals

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also the speed up at the end is fun

runic adder
tribal orbit
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I think the most obvious part would be the verse for the AoF inspiration

tribal orbit
runic adder
tribal orbit
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ty

tribal orbit
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there's something wrong but for the life of me I cnat tell what it is

kind blaze
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it sounds real good to me

cerulean storm
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Hey guys. I just bought Gojira X and my first audio interface. Felt like I needed to go to the next step. So I don't really know how all of it works, nor the best ways of handling them are. Though, here's my first attempt at a mix and guitar sound.

The song is not finished, vocals, finishing touches etc. But I'm not quite sure on the guitar sound. I've had a hard time making it fit in the best way. Any tips on the EQ or tone-setting in the plug-in? Thanks for any feedback!

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(I know, it's a long boi, you can skip around)

open mason
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here's some of my stuff, one example is way higher tuned than the other (Drop C# for the nu metal style one and Double Drop D# for Invent Animate copycat), looking for some feedback on the mix and whatnot!

cerulean storm
open mason
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thanks man

wicked berry
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strong on the high end

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i like it alot though

open mason
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thank you!

wicked berry
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also my mixes suck so dont take it all for serious

open mason
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the nu metal styleone is tinny but that's because there any real kicks and whatnot to add to the low end

wicked berry
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got it

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that makes sense

cerulean storm
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I'm trying to get better at mixing too. Very difficult.

runic adder
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Takes time and practice really

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I believe in yall

open mason
wicked berry
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lol i feel you ๐Ÿ’€

open mason
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also right before that one I was recording some stuff that went as low as Drop F# an octave down

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so I was kinda used to that

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like here I think the bass is more present

cerulean storm
cerulean storm
open mason
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thanks man

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Odeholm Drums helped a lot with the mix

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I mean I could mix drums myself but it's easier not to bother

cerulean storm
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Yeah

open mason
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also SD3 (the kit I used before) after a while would just consistently crash Reaper soooo

cerulean storm
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I use EZdrummer with the Death Metal extension.

open mason
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that's decent for demoing

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the best advice I can give for mixing at the beginning is just
use a pre-mixed kit

runic adder
open mason
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oh yeah

runic adder
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ignore the 5 version jump that's not real

tribal orbit
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lmao. I'll give it a listen in a sec

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fixing a year-old mix atm

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taking a lot of work

runic adder
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fair

tribal orbit
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SOOO MUCH BETTER GODDAMN

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@runic adder that shit is nasty and I love it

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I think all that's left vocal mix wise is to adjust some levels and then bam

runic adder
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i think if i open that project again I'm going to explode ๐Ÿ’€

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adjust levels up or down?

tribal orbit
tribal orbit
runic adder
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maybe make the growls less reverby? not a pressing issue, sounds good for remixes of old productions

tribal orbit
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The lead tone's always been more washed out than anything else, and tbh I like it like that

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but ye I was concerned about the vocal levels

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ty

dusky bane
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spent a bit of time working on this today with my band, mostly did production stuff

kind blaze
dusky bane
kind blaze
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๐Ÿ”ฅ

lapis ember
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We need more st. Anger snares in metal

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xD

hollow tulip
mortal dock
# hollow tulip what choir vst you use bro ๐Ÿ™ sounds fuckin sick!!!!!

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hollow tulip
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oh wow thanks :DDD

hollow tulip
mortal dock
hollow tulip
hollow tulip
mortal dock
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But usually best results are combining chorus with another layer

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Like Metropolis ARK 1's choir, Oceania2, Wotan/Freya, etc

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So it's a lot of $$$$$ for realistic choir

hollow tulip
mortal dock
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It's also heavy

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Like... 60 gigs I think?

hollow tulip
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just checked the size

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Damn

hollow tulip
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do you have to work extra for it to sound realistic???

mortal dock
hollow tulip
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I try w/ other instruments but it doesn't sound as realistic as I wanted

mortal dock
hollow tulip
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Okay

mortal dock
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I find so many people who just write for their symphonic demos

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And then I take a listen

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And their strings/brass sucks cuz they're all using the frigging Sustain/Legato articulation to do short notes

hollow tulip
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yea

mortal dock
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Staccato and spiccato, and even marcato have their separate articulations for a reason

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If that + proper Modwheel dynamic curves and velocities doesn't get you sounding nice, then it's just you using a bad library

hollow tulip
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so the key is in the modwheel and velocities? noted

mortal dock
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Some libraries need to process a lot in real time

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So the notes you play might have a couple milliseconds of delay

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You have to compensate for that by putting a negative time delay adjustment in your track

hollow tulip
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yea

mortal dock
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It's different amounts for every single library out there so the best recommendation is just by ear

hollow tulip
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I do that whenever I use Joshua Bell Violin

mortal dock
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Some libraries are also "tighter" in timing than others

hollow tulip
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it allows you to customize the time delay I think

mortal dock
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Metropolis Ark 1 has sloppy as shit spiccatos that aren't all that in time

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While something like Jaeger has super tight spiccs to the grid

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But Jaeger sounds way more synthy while ark has a lot of real character lol

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Somewhere in between is the sweet spot

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You can fix too much tightness by manually slightly off centering the notes from the grid to humanize them

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But you cannot fix super sloppy short notes that are baked into the library

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You can only layer them to mask it

hollow tulip
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okay

hollow tulip
mortal dock
# hollow tulip okay

Here's some good string libraries:

1-Pacific (legato is gorgeous but very portamento-ish. Needs a bit of reverb help)
2-CSS (gorgeous legato. needs considerable reverb help and the delays are a nightmare)
3-Vista (great legato but it's chamber strings so way smaller sounding)
4-TSS (Dry as bones. ridiculously heavy. 250GB)
5-CS2 (CSS but old and bigger hall)
6-Areia (very processed)
7-Duality
8-SSO
9-ARO (the low strings are top 3 tho and sold separately)
10-ARK

Here's brass:

-Afflatus (imo best legato. Room is kinda small so you gotta reverb it a bit and mess with the mic positions)
-Infinite Brass (combines it with synth modeling, it's harder to use than all others but can get you quite nice results)
-JXL brass (not great legato, the low end is great tho)
-Pacific Brass (Great for shorts and all that, doesn't have legato tho)
-CSB (good french horn, rest is meh tho)
-Cinebrass (A bit old and complex but it can get a lovely old school Hollywood sound if you're really good at what you do)
-Ark's brass (kinda ok, it sounds humongous and epic but the legato is bleh and the timing can be sloppy)
-Talos (Epic over the top only, no low dynamics and the dynamic layer crossfades are not great for smooth changes in dynamics)

Percussion
-If you want epic, go with DAMAGE2
-If you want traditional, go with Cineperc

Woodwinds:
-CSW

hollow tulip
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oh wow

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that's a lot of reccomendations

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I'll keep note of them, thanks

mortal dock
# hollow tulip what about Audio Imperia Nucleus?

All in ones:

-Nucleus. (Nucleus is cheap in general like $250 for that huge orchestra+ their nucleus choir. Nucleus Lite allows you to only write sections aka the violins and violas are together and you can separate them, but it's the best entry level deal you can get. $99 is awesome for the enormous amount of instruments to get. It won't sound as good as specialized separate libraries like the ones above, but cohesively, it can make you sound pro. Sounds very processed out of the box tho.)
-SpitfireSymphonicOrchestra (The new revamp of their orchestra where they package everything together. It's a great all in one. Doesn't sound as processed as nucleus out of the box but it is way more expensive and not that well suited for epic over the top modern.)

hollow tulip
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you sure know a lot about these libraries

mortal dock
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hollow tulip
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Cool

mortal dock
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Just go watch Kevin's vids, he reviews these very honestly lol. More indepth than what I told you. They don't sponsor him to talk nicely, it's his earnest thoughts on em

hollow tulip
cerulean storm
cerulean storm
open canyon
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this is my first attempt in a LONG while making something that is not slam or tech death lol.

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mixing and shi also has a long way to go

hollow tulip
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pretty good, kinda reminds me a bit of Solstice by Starset

kind blaze
kind blaze
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Really love this solo for no reason

kind blaze
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i think i fixed the guitar tone for the most part any tips on how i could make it sound better?

kind blaze
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u can hear it a little better now

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dont wanna make it too obnoxious ofc

hollow tulip
kind blaze
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drunk riffs / psychedelic sounds. best

open canyon
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awsome

shut igloo
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what do u think guys

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@tribal orbit @mortal dock @kind blaze @kind blaze

kind blaze
# shut igloo

nice riffs drums good too i like it,cant say much about mix but sounds pretty good

kind blaze
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i feel like the snare is just a bit loud here's the isolated drum track

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should i lower the cymbals?

kind blaze
# shut igloo

sounds great the breakcore drums at 1:55 are a bit loud though

open canyon
kind blaze
# shut igloo

more low end on the guitars and i love this shit! good stuff

open canyon
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in case you guys want to you can give me feedback ๐Ÿ’€ idk on what you could give feedback but if you want to try blese do

open canyon
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love it

open canyon
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trivium style

shut igloo
shut igloo
open canyon
shut igloo
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this track is begging for some vocals ngl

open canyon
kind blaze
shut igloo
kind blaze
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i know, i still have to figure out riffs xd

kind blaze
open canyon
shut igloo
kind blaze
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yes

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like you got vocals, and bass and other stuff

shut igloo
kind blaze
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thx

shut igloo
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no worries fam

tribal orbit
tribal orbit
shut igloo
tribal orbit
kind blaze
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i like it bright, and roomy.

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still need to figure out some mixing myself. i only dont know how to process drums right.

shut igloo
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it kinda makes it wide asf

shut igloo
tribal orbit
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depends on the lyrics and if I have time but sure

mortal dock
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Lmao AmenBreak metal needs to be a thing more often

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That was fun

shut igloo
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Apparently I was today years old when I found that eyeless intro also had amen break

mortal dock
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Btw did I get it this time? I tried this one as practice. Phone recordin. Might as well also ping @tribal orbit @fringe geode @kind blaze

mortal dock
shut igloo
kind blaze
kind blaze
shut igloo
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@mortal dock
How do you record vocals in a track
Like how many layers of vocals should be recorded

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Like atleast 2 hardpanned channels for guitars etc, in that context is there any basic ruleish type thing?

mortal dock
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It depends on what you're wanting

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The standard tends to be that you at least do two takes and double them

Or do 3. One center, one L, one R

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If you want way more thickness you can do a shit ton of more layers and go wild with their panning, but that's the minimum standard

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Unless you want to be way more straightforward and just do single take centered, which is more old school

shut igloo
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Alrighty

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Thanks

tribal orbit
finite coral
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on the mix, not my ass guitar playing ๐Ÿ˜ญ

shut igloo
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guitar sounds noice

hollow tulip
# finite coral need thoughts on this

the mix sounds neat
I think the drums could be a bit more louder and the snare could sound more snappy/punchy tho, since it kinda sounds more on the background rather than giving the song a clear pulse IMO
vocals should be a bit louder, most metalcore songs you hear the vocal clearly through the instrumentals

tribal orbit
tribal orbit
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Buy the rest of it is really kewl

finite coral
tribal orbit
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Dark as in the bass and lower mids overpower anything in the treble and high mid range

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So youโ€™re left with something thatโ€™s not bright, but dark

finite coral
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i guess i got too cocky when people told me my mixes have no bass ๐Ÿ’€

tribal orbit
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Thereโ€™s always a balance to achieve

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The bass should occupy, well, the bass

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The kick and part of the snare sit in that same range too

finite coral
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im mixing with a normal cheap gaming headset too so im hoping that isnt holding me back, i dont wanna use that as an excuse tho

tribal orbit
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That can hold you back

finite coral
tribal orbit
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Depending on the make and model, itโ€™ll have a diff freq response

finite coral
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its a hyperx cloud stinger lol

tribal orbit
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I donโ€™t know it, youโ€™d have to search it up

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And usually a dark mix isnโ€™t caused by the bass tone

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Itโ€™s usually an over tuned guitar and vocal tone that cuts too much high mids and trebles

finite coral
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ooh

tribal orbit
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You can probably see what your mix looks like using a multiband EQ to show the response and youโ€™ll see that your bass is definitely overpowering the treble

finite coral
tribal orbit
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Hm

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Then ig there are things happening in the treble

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I just canโ€™t notice them lmao

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Uh what does your guitar tone and EQ look like?

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Like do you have a high pass at around 120 hz?

tribal orbit
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You arenโ€™t shaping the EQ?

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In just that file, I can tell you need to shape it better. Clear up the mud in the mids and maybe add some high mids and treble

finite coral
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i also have this in my program that i use to turn my interface sound as an input

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lol

finite coral
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methink too loud drums now

cyan spear
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i think it's the best "song" i made, the one i like the most

hazy tundra
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A wip from my band

cerulean storm
runic adder
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sounds nice

runic adder
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gonna extend it? or will it be only 45 seconds?

runic adder
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sounds interesting so far, though

shut igloo
runic adder
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loud jumpscare ๐Ÿ’€ came straight off spotify lmfao

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give me a sec

shut igloo
runic adder
# shut igloo

guitars could use a little more mids, and the bass could come up a little. cymbals could come down juuuust a little, but Im a sucker for loud cymbals lol so I like it. The electronic segments, to me at least, feel a little too loud? just feels like a definite volume shift between those and the non electronic sections. song sounds good though

shut igloo
shut igloo
runic adder
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play around with it

shut igloo
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alrighty

runic adder
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start with like -2 id say

shut igloo
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tho i think the synths and all are pretty low
just that amen break sample is a bit too loud

shut igloo
runic adder
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could also feel that way because the guitars feel thin

shut igloo
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just listened to the switching from electronic bit to drum

runic adder
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sure

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but also the guitars are thin

shut igloo
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and the inner tracks are75% panned and they are mid scooped

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and highs rolled down a bit

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might increase the mids

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to make it feel

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a bit heavier

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gonna try that after i come back from school

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xD

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today's my eng final exam of my final year at school

runic adder
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nice

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good luck soldier ๐Ÿซก

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but definitely try either

a. increasing the mids in the guitars
b. lowering the trble and presence and raising the level of the guitars a little

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when you get the chance

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@shut igloo

shut igloo
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Okay

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Hat

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That

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Sounds instantly better

runic adder
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mids bump and highs lowered a little, though this is on the full track so you'd be able to change it a lot more

shut igloo
runic adder
shut igloo
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That sounded way better

runic adder
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actually lowering the cymbals a little bit and tweaking the guitar tone a little can get great results

runic adder
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no problemo

cyan spear
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thanks man! i got that clean tone with archetype gojira

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the shimmer delay effect is awesome

cerulean storm
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I've never really mixed vocals before, I'll see what I can do.

hollow tulip
hollow tulip
tribal orbit
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I think it needs to be mixed in more? Maybe have some humanization one the hits themselves

hollow tulip
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I'll try

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i've been studying the sound of the Ashes of the Wake album recently and i've been trying to recreate the mixing of the album

tribal orbit
hollow tulip
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anyone know some good drum libraries for that LoG type snare besides Drums of Destruction

craggy plover
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when did the trackspacer became free?

hazy tundra
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Should I have said 80% to be absolutely exact?

tribal orbit
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I think there is something wrong with the vocals

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Maybe its a level issue? I think there's something going on in the EQ too, but I'm too lazy to fix it rn. Maybe tmr or later tn once my brain starts working again

tribal orbit
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nvm, I think I figured it out

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exporting a new version now LanThumbsUp

tribal orbit
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audio driver completely shit the bed

finite coral
lapis ember
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Please check out my Screamo / Emo song ๐Ÿ™‚

lapis ember
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I need to know if things are level.

shut igloo
shut igloo
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Idk how to say it

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But

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More interesting ig

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Like they sound very basic

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Vocals sound fire asf

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Yea drums are too bland

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Maybe use a better kit too like ezdrummer death metal pack

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Idk what u use it sounds very basic tho

tribal orbit
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Yeah that's fair. I'm waiting on my drummer to actually write the stuff, so atm, it's my basic preset kit

tribal orbit
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oui oui

lapis ember
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I'll listen to your songs if you check out my new one xD

tribal orbit
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Probably will at some point today. Am in class (not paying attention)

lapis ember
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This is actually stiff I grew up with. Killswitch meets I Killed The Prom Queen to me

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The clean vox remind me of power metal and I like power metal xD

tribal orbit
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like the clean is wide, atmospheric and pretty smooth mix wise

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once the dist guitars and vocals come in, everything becomes really mid heavy and narrow

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not sure if that's a design choice but its a little weird, yknow?

tribal orbit
# finite coral

The overall mix is pretty muddy?, especially when it comes to the way the vocals and guitars interact. Also need to widen the guitars

finite coral
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i think theyre hard panned

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and yeh i wasnt mixing the instrumental with vocals in mind so makes sense lol

tribal orbit
finite coral
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i dont even remember imma check rq

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should i always hard pan them lol i sometimes do 70 sometimes hard idk what to pick

tribal orbit
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Hard pan is always the move

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Also if youโ€™re using any reverb, make sure to use one for each track so thereโ€™s no bleed to the center

finite coral
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the entire track is panned not just the recordings

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i have this on master

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mono under 100hz

lapis ember
lapis ember
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Light verse then heavy chorus / breakdown

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Honestly a cross between Hawthorne Heights and Silverstein

lapis ember
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There, I edited it a bit.

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Makes that squier sound way better now xD

lapis ember
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Should I redo this one?

fringe geode
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So

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I have a test song

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And I want opinions

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@tribal orbit @mortal dock

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Got a min?

mortal dock
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Maybe when I'm back home xd

I just went out wHEEZe

fringe geode
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RIP

fringe geode
eager sphinx
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switching from a 1.5mm pick to a 4mm pick was actually way more comfortable than i thought it would be

lapis ember
mortal dock
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Gives me slight 2008s metalcore era

fringe geode
fringe geode
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Working with a friend to see if she likes it.

mortal dock
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Maybe that gives you ideas

fringe geode
mortal dock
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You got any hard limits?

fringe geode
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And prog.

mortal dock
mortal dock
fringe geode
fringe geode
fringe geode
# mortal dock Ooo icic

I can do some tapping but that's about it for complexity lol. I can't trem pick or do legato or sweep or anything like that for the life of me.

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I've tried.

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Like seriously tried to learn, but riffs guide me.

runic adder
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Kinda volbeat vibes

fringe geode
tribal orbit
mortal dock
kind blaze
mortal dock
lapis ember
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Haha

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Mike checking out my new instrumental?

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Mind

mortal dock
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Wher

lapis ember
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One sec

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I suck at mixing so sry xD

kind blaze
mortal dock
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I've never taken drugs, but I feel like listening to this is how taking acid would feel like, lmao
That intro is trippy

mortal dock
lapis ember
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I only smoke weed haha

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I need lyrics now xD

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Omg OmFG

mortal dock
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Nah am boring, no drugs, I don't smoke, I don't even drink alcohol, not even at parties lmao

lapis ember
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AcidCore

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Let's goooo

lapis ember
lapis ember
lapis ember
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And SOAD

kind blaze
finite coral
hollow tulip
# kind blaze

the drum tone is really reminiscent of AILD's Frail Words Collapse album

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what drum library is that? cool wip btw

hollow tulip
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it also helps to try adding slight amounts of delay and/or reverb to the lead to make it a bit more stereo besides also letting it be more present

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update
added intro, still need outro tho
took me this long to stop being a lazy ass and get some work done

fringe geode
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@mortal dock

mortal dock
fringe geode
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Like the transition from Kellin Quinn cleans to disgusting vocals was awesome.

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It's like hearing 2 totally different people when it's actually the same person.

mortal dock
fringe geode
mortal dock
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Oh kinda like

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Picturesque-ish ?

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U know em?

fringe geode
mortal dock
mortal dock
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Lmao if u think Kellin has a high af voice

Wait till you've heard this fella

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Kyle Hollis from Picturesque

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One of my influences

fringe geode
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It's like a modern version of SwS.

mortal dock
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I've heard him belt a B5

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Close to my highest limit

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Which is more like D6

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But anyways I was speaking more about your instrumentals kinda having the same "thickness" style

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Though you had a bit more old school rhythm going on

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I really like ur track btw it's really fire

mortal dock
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The sound is very rich in a lot of near pad-like texture from all the overtones

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And it's very reverby

fringe geode
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Also each rhythm track was done in one take.

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Like I double tracked it but it was one take.

fringe geode
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And a lot of that thickness can be attributed to meshing a Mesa Mark sim with Parallax. So the Mesa has some oomf to the low mids while the bass supports it.

fringe geode
mortal dock
mortal dock
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Everything I mentioned so far was stuff I liked, sure, you might adjust like -5% of all that reverb if you manage to make the tone a bit stronger, but it's not bad in any way, it's very nice actually

mortal dock
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It's almost Dance Gavin Dance -ish at times

fringe geode
# mortal dock I feel like you could really go bolder

Thanks brotha! Honestly there are times I don't really think about doing stuff an octave higher or reinforcing things because the things I write are very raw and in the moment. There are very few things that I've written that I'm thinking from a technical perspective. The Break the Glass stuff is very much written in the moment and loosely mixed. But all of the stuff you mentioned I will take to heart and try out!

fringe geode
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This is one of my biggest inspirations, it's just one dude from Australia and this was off his 2nd album. His 1st album really made me pick back up the guitar at 13ish and this kicked it into overdrive.

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I have a weird variety of inspirations. From Mark Tremonti's stuff in AB and his solo stuff which Alt. Metal and Thrashy, to Crush 40 which is more 80s inspired, to Rabea which is just BIG CHONKY RIFFS. Then there's PT, which I never knew what to make of.

mortal dock
fringe geode
mortal dock
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I like one or two songs from it

fringe geode
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Think of bands like Blink-182, Simple Plan, Yellowcard, Sum41 that kind of thing.

mortal dock
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It's the antithesis of everything I like lol

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I like bands that have clean vocals that feel very groovy and almost poppy at times

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Like Dance Gavin Dance (I love them)

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But it needs to have a very powerful instrumental backbone for me to really like it

fringe geode
mortal dock
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Though I tend to stick a lot to aggressive melodeath and metalcore/deathcore too. It can be either the simplistic old school, the technical over the top of the present, or the more emotional and introspective mature kinds, I can vibe with all

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And some blackgaze and blackened stuff

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The occasional Brutal Slam or goregrind thing too, but that's a bit more rare

fringe geode
mortal dock
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I don't

fringe geode
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More on the New Found Glory side of it tho. Sum41 has HEAVY thrash metal influences and it shows on albums like Chuck.

New Found Glory took more to the post hard-core stuff like DGD did.

fringe geode
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Well it was a popular genre when I was a kid so I took it.

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That and nu metal.

mortal dock
fringe geode
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But I liked the more aggressive side of Pop Punk that spawned Easycore (and eventually Swancore) rather than the Blink/Green Day side of it.

mortal dock
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Now, THAT was my fire childhood fire

fringe geode
mortal dock
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We talking og Of Mice & Men, Asking Alexandria, Bmth, Of Machines, stuff like that

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Then I got into atmospheric melodic metalcore thingies, and other stuff like SEVEN and The Raven Age, then deathcore, and that opened the doorway to extreme metal and death metal. Then dipped into Swancore too. Then got into some melodeath

Black metal was one of the last I got into. Thanks to stuff like Ulver Bergtatt, Lantlรดs, Cรขn Bardd, Gallowbraid, etc

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I tend to alternate between all these genres, there's a couple others but those are the main I stick to

mortal dock
fringe geode
# mortal dock Then I got into atmospheric melodic metalcore thingies, and other stuff like SEV...

I didn't really get into death metal much minus maybe early Gojira and Opeth stuff. And black metal never appealed to me at all but it was fun to laugh at it cuz it's so ridiculous. Melodeath is hit or miss but when it hits it HITS. Took me a long time to get into metalcore though, and only when djent hit did I really do a double take and eventually got into Swancore when I discovered Eidola.

fringe geode
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It took me a long time to really appreciate metalcore as a genre too. I don't think I did, even after being big into djent until Spiritbox hit the scene.

mortal dock
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Those genres are so big you're bound to find something you enjoy at some point or another

mortal dock
finite coral
kind blaze
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Testing the new plugin

shut igloo
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does this feel a bit dark?

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@tribal orbit

shut igloo
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@mortal dock

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Do u think the guitars are a bit darker than previous version

shut igloo
tribal orbit
shut igloo
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Listen to this instead

tribal orbit
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The kick is a little out of place EQ wise, same with the snare, but the rest sounds pretty good

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I'm guessing the main riff was like 2-2-0-0

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?

shut igloo
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xD

tribal orbit
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They cut through the mix a little too much, so maybe widen their eq profiles?

tribal orbit
runic adder
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The guitars arenโ€™t dark

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For the kick, you could give them a little more high mid

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Thinking 1.2-2K

naive owl
open canyon
shut igloo
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"how to fuck a bitch and kick her out"

-Mr. White (2025)

kind blaze
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random slam

kind blaze
lapis ember
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I made a psychedelic rock song. Check it out plz ๐Ÿ™‚

kind blaze
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just finished this demo

shut igloo
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holy cow

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the drums go hard

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and vocals

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fucks

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dont ask me for eq and shit

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the idea and execution is pretty solid asf

kind blaze
# shut igloo dont ask me for eq and shit

At the moment there is no mixing at all and I am not a vocalist at all, in the final version our vocalist will sing,I sing only demo
I write instrumental usually but still thank youโค๏ธ

kind blaze
# kind blaze

Yes
We mostly doin Metalcore but sometimes things like that

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We are a multi-genre band

shut igloo
kind blaze
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I'm the drummer

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And guitarist

shut igloo
kind blaze
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And bassist

shut igloo
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oh wow

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so

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its just u and yoiur vocalist

kind blaze
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So far yeah

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We just started band

shut igloo
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and u can play those drums

kind blaze
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About a month ago

shut igloo
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interesting

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where are u based

kind blaze
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I'm still torn between being a guitarist or a drummer

kind blaze
shut igloo
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interesting

kind blaze
shut igloo
kind blaze
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Next month we will release 3 songs if you are interested I will be glad if you listen to them haha

kind blaze
shut igloo
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my band will release an ep in april stay tuned for that

kind blaze
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Forgive me all Czechs but 90% of Czech music is crap

kind blaze
shut igloo
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since i dont know how to record indian instruments even tho i can play few

kind blaze
lapis ember
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Did I argue with someone last night about iPhones being crap and most of their product was made by Android?

Or was that a dream.

lapis ember
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Lol xD

shut igloo
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will do someday

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for now we'll just add indian elements to vocals only xD

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dont wanna be too bloodywood

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xD

kind blaze
#

Still cool

shut igloo
kind blaze
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I sometimes sing Russian in our band

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Cause I speak 4 languages

shut igloo
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we havent recorded any vocals yet
just written lyrics, produced tracks and practiced live
otherwise id send u my demos

kind blaze
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(we will definitely be compared to Slaughter to prevail)

shut igloo
shut igloo
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i speak 3 languages

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including english

open canyon
thorn dock
shut igloo
mortal dock
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Hm... What are you using for the orchestra?

tidal wasp
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wanted to make a metal song but didn't have money for new strings so i made one with synths what do you think?

mortal dock
shut igloo
shut igloo
mortal dock
grave kestrel
naive owl
kind blaze
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any thoughts

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training some long screams

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and this is by far my best take

kind blaze
kind blaze
dusk siren
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Can anyone give me any feedback on my bands song we're currently writing?

cerulean storm
versed remnant
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There is no bass yet

fathom jewel
runic adder
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Song sounds cool though, ping me again when thereโ€™s bass

finite coral
fathom jewel
versed remnant
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Also is there any bass players here willing to lay down some bass for this i really don't wanna program it

finite coral
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mix is really harsh sounding in general

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the 5k hz is painful

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doesnt something like this sound better

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put a soft low pass and removed a bunch of 4khz-6khz

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not really a low pass just a slope down after like 1khz

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maybe too low idk i did it in like 20 sec

versed remnant
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Iโ€™m still learnong how to mix properly

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Idrk what iโ€™m doing so thank you

finite coral
versed remnant
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I still have no post eq

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Only individual channel eqs atm

finite coral
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i dont master eq in my stuff either mostly just basic stuff like limiters duh

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but if something is harsh id adjust the instruments seperately until it sounds good

versed remnant
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Do the vocsls sound fine? Iโ€™m more worried about locking those in for this than guitsrs atm bc i feel like i can find more guitar eq turtorials than vocal ones if it comes to it

finite coral
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i dont really do vocals so i cant give that much help

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the first scream tho is a bit irritating i cant lie

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idk what could fix it

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i used to have this stupid low pass on my guitars, should i remove it lol

shut igloo
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rate this

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@tribal orbit @mortal dock @kind blaze

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@kind blaze @open canyon

mortal dock
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Feels a bit bright and harsh but I do like the composition :D

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Kinda clips a bit at 1:30 ish

shut igloo
#

well brightness was intended but how do i fix harshness

mortal dock
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Well am not a mixer. The most I can really mix is super basics and vocals

But what I can say is too much brightness can cause that if u don't surgically cut a lot of EQ stuff xd

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Learned that the hard way

shut igloo
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okok

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ill try

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do smth

tribal orbit
# shut igloo

The cymbals are really bright. Could probably do with shaving off some of the harsher treble freq

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but the track is neato

shut igloo
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i have one more ver without the booist in highs lemme send that

fossil yoke
kind blaze
shut igloo
#

Same
(Its 6am for me)

versed remnant
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@tribal orbit @runic adder could you look at this for me?

tribal orbit
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Still very bright

versed remnant
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How make less bright?

versed remnant
versed remnant
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@runic adder can you take a look too

runic adder
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Yah i can look

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Gimme a seed

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Sec

versed remnant
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TY

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Okok

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Im giving car test rn and lowk i think this is my best mix iโ€™ve done

runic adder
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Iโ€™d still give the guitars more body

versed remnant
#

How so

runic adder
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Mids

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Mids mids mids

versed remnant
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I do have the mids turned down a bit

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Lemme make the change and rip it bc i wanna start the upload tonight

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What do you think of the song as a whole?

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Like non production standpoint

runic adder
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The mix sounds fine, def good to upload

versed remnant
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Specifically the part right before the ending breakdown

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I want it to be catchy as hell

runic adder
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But the guitars could use more mids

versed remnant
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Iโ€™m hoping i caught that

versed remnant
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Gocha*

runic adder
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Part before the breakdown sounds fine

versed remnant
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Is it catchy

runic adder
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Personally not the best songwriting coach/feedback guy but Iโ€™d say yeah

versed remnant
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SWAG

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Hold up iโ€™m about to rip hut how much more mids?

runic adder
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Thatโ€™s not something I can quantify ๐Ÿ˜ญ

versed remnant
#

Fair!

runic adder
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This is amp level

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Lower treble and presence slightly, raise mids a bit

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If you could show me the amp settings I could recommend something?

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Iโ€™m currently not in the same state as my studio so I canโ€™t boost the mods as a demo

versed remnant
runic adder
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Mids to 4, treble to 6

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Try that

versed remnant
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Rendering

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@runic adder

runic adder
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Sounds better

versed remnant
#

SCORE

mortal dock
#

Do you like Chameleons? I feel like one after attempting this song where there's 2 vocalists and I ended up just switching between both of them back to back lmaooo what do u think? @runic adder @tribal orbit @shut igloo

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^Also gotta ping too @fringe geode @kind blaze @versed remnant

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Oh and @kind blaze
I also did this other take with the music in the background what do u think? all on my phone lol

versed remnant
runic adder
runic adder
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Good control (I think? Idk much about clean singing Iโ€™m a screamer lol)

runic adder
mortal dock
runic adder
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Ah

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I see

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I have a much lower voice so itโ€™s a little more difficult for me

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But yea sounds good

kind blaze
kind blaze
# shut igloo

i really enjoy this kinda stuff a lot. my adhd braincells sais APPROVED!

shut igloo
kind blaze
#

My first pig squeal lol

kind blaze
shut igloo
shut igloo
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didnt think this track would receive this positive response

primal tide
kind blaze
#

Bro send me how he plays piano
And I did slam with it lol

kind blaze
#

Some peak Metalcore material
With huge clean choruses fr

mortal dock
kind blaze
mortal dock
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@runic adder
And here's another take with the backing music track in the background lmao

kind blaze
kind blaze
#

Damn I need to learn to sing

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I can scream a little bit

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But I suck at cleans
And I need them cause I am doing Metalcore

mortal dock
mortal dock
opal condor
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Hey guys, planning on releasing this song soon, any feedback on the mix?

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Intrumental thall btw

kind blaze
#

random ass black metal

open canyon
# shut igloo

i know the EXACT vibe you are going for, and im going to give you a song to give you alot more inspiration to take from ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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either way nice

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giving alot of periphery and what i just sent there vibes

kind blaze
hollow tulip
#

a lil wip metalcore project
this one's a rearrange based off Komachi's theme, "Higan Retour ~ Riverside View" from the OST for Phantasmagoria of Flower View
some parts are empty because that's where i imagine the vocals to be (can't do vocals)

kind blaze
#

finished russian black metal

hollow tulip
# kind blaze

neat and dark black metal ๐Ÿ‘
don't have any feedback for the mix since black metal is supposed to be raw sounding n stuff

kind blaze
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i dont even listen to black metal

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lol

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just had idea to did it for fun

hollow tulip
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me neither
i listen to black metal SOMETIMES but rn it's just the hi-fi sounding ones like Kanonenfieber and 1914

kind blaze
#

yo guys any thoughts to this? im having a blockade. its fucking me up, because i think its gonna be a showstarter, the way it sounds like.

fringe geode