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Woah that actually sounds a lot better XDDD
It needed to be a bit brighter, a bit more saturated, and needed some added width
Gotcha
My chain goes EQ1 -> Saturator -> EQ2 -> Limiter -> Saturator2/Compressor -> JST Max
Nice
I'm really not familiar with mastering stuff at all, I've only recently got halfway decent at mixing
For being halfway decent, you're decent lmao
Def pick up the mastering side of things. Doesn't take too long tbh
Learning plugins take long tho
Yeah
Ableton has a ton of built in shit
So I usually just use that
Buuut
I use JST Heat and Maximizer for the final touches
Alrighty
Max is 49 bucks rn
I saw that
And they allow for discount codes to stack on deals
I just don't have that kind of spending money rn lol
That's cool
I'll def keep my eye on it though
I'll do some research for sure
but I'm sure if you search "How to master metal/punk/rock/etc. in reaper" on youtube, you'll find something
I just use glue compressors
regular compressors go over my head even now. I understand teh gist of them, but teh glue compressors in Ableton make my brain work more
I've been using a compressor on each of my guitar tracks and on bass, and then a glue compressor on the whole mix
I've found it makes the guitars sound brighter
my tone used to sound pretty muddy and awful
yeah that was always so weird to me
especially the lower you tune the less gain the better it generally sounds
so real
I found some good tutorial stuff using stock reaper plugins so ima see what I can do with that
awesome
That's super awesome. I really like the riff, it's simple but quintessentially metalcore
Trying to make a rock track instead of metal is hard
Thanks☺️
yw!
Me trying not to blast beat 240bmp in Rihanna song
what did you use for drums?
i like the ride alot
Takes a bit to mix in
Saturation, EQ, compression, etc
Buuuut
They’re cool
Just remember to remove the one shots
Damn I love how the ride and bass drum sounds together in fast riffs
Gives me some Rev vibe I think
Coolll
I love ugritones "kvlt drums" and "trve cabs"
For the names
Awesome
Tbh k think kvlt drums are probably the worst of the sample sets they have
Total/Tight Studio and the Punk & Grind are the best
lmao wow
thats actually trve kvlt
having shitty drum samples is trve kvlt
Tell me what you think, I made it for fun, I would have made a full version if my laptop didnt freeze and melt every 0.000001 seconds
My face was on stank mode as I was making this
thank uu
Ofc!!
It Was actually inspired by mick gordon soundtracks lol
They just require too much mixing to be worth it imo
also the snare samples 
It's a relatively similar process. Just depends on the style of rock your going for.
@sacred estuary This is the Karnivool esc song I was talking about.
@tribal orbit @wicked berry Wot chu think. When I initially shared the track here forever ago, I used GGD for the drums, I remixed it using EzDrummer 3.
will listen in a bit. chatting w my partner and if i keep bouncing between chats i'll have to start it over
she goes to work soonish tho
Ah okay LMK when you take a listen :3
i love the whole kit tbh
nice kick, hi hats, snare
cymbals are great
very good mix
also good bass
guitar tone fits the mix
Took forever to get it that way, The drum bus is doing a lot of the heavy lifting
yea i would think so
But some work was done to the snare too.
It all Neural. But different plugins for each part.
The High Gain is the Mark IIC+ (My favorite)
The crunch is Rabea Amp 2. Which is ch. 1 of the 50w Kraken.
The clean is also Rabea, Amp 1. Which is a Fender Twin.
The bass is Parallax
ahh niceee
Yeeee. I don't mind paying for my source tones like good drums or amp sims or even IRs. But I mix using essentially freeware.
Nope
nice
I use TDR Nova as my EQ.
Cuz it has an option where it can double as a multiband compressor if I need it.
And if I REALLY need to be surgical, or need more bands on my EQ, Reaper's built in one is fantasitc.
true true
Took me a long to figure out how to mix. I still don't know wtf Im doing ngl XD
okay she just headed off, listening now
this reminds me so much of something.. definitely a local band from way back
loving the heck outta this
like, actually a fantastic track
right up my alley
I'm glad you're liking it :3
one of my favorite styles of music

def post more stuff and lemme know when/if ya do
do you have a vocalist?
what that
Think Vocaloid mixed with IRs for voices.
It's a voicebank
ah okay
lemme know when ya add em in. i'm keen to see how it all comes together
good vocalist is hard to find. everyone thinks they can do it but the vast majority are real bad lol
I will :3
Whenever I update the mix significantly I usually post it.
awesome. i would say the bass could go up a lil bit, but that might just be my earbuds
Earbuds usually lack bass.
most of mine historically have had too much 
Or it's the opposite in some cases lol.
i had a band in the late 00s/early 10s. kind of.. hard rock with a similar vibe like.. but way less creative lol
But I have sensitive hearing (albiet damaged as I have slight tinnitus due to playing loud amps for many years) so earbuds and me don't mix.
Ouch
yeaaa
i shoulda worn earplugs but the only good ones back then that didn't actually block sound were hundreds of dollars
Yeah I used to blast them old Rectos back in the day. Shoulda worn ear pro but ehh
I describe it as a "sonic condom"
lmao yeah pretty much
altho i wouldn't recommend googling that
the only ones we could afford were the yellow foamy ones, and those are not great if you actually want to hear what you're playing
i also went to a tonnn of loud shows
so that didn't help the whole hearing thing
but ye. i gotta get some sleep lol
really great track, i look forward to hearing more. if you've posted any others in here, link me to em, i'll give em a peep
have a good night!
Good night bro!
ok which one do y'all like more - the first one with Granophyre + Bogren downtuned IRs or this one with just nameless x
Personally I like the Nameless X because it's just massive and untamed. THAT SAID, mix wise I think Grano + Bogren downtuned IRs might be the way. It gives the bass some room to breathe.
That said there's this low mid push in Nameless X that fills it out nicely that the Granophyre lacks.
Try combining both sounds together.
Just note your gonna wanna EQ them separately first before you bring them into a bus for further processing. Joey Sturgis goes into this process more if you wanna delve deeper into it.
they're fully processed already
same relative process for both - EQ and saturation
and yeah, the balancing on the nameless version is a little off
No I meant like. If you're gonna combine the sounds of the Grano and the Nameless, you'll have to EQ separately before you continue doing your usual thing. Each amp with their IRs have their own nasty resonant frequencies y'know?
I don't combine amps often, but it's the process I go through when I combine the Mesa Mark with the SLO.
I'm not good at modern metal like thall or anything. That'll take me years to learn how to mix for that, but usually the same process applies.
But yeah I'd recommend combining the almost buzzsaw nature of the Grano with that almost untamed mid push of the Nameless. You'd probably get something super unique out of it.
hows thiss
It's a good start. The Nameless cab tames the Granos buzz saw nature a little bit while giving it a bit of a mid bump.
There are certain cabs in Neural's collection that are really stupidly good. Nameless' cab is one of them.
I took a quick listen last night, forgot to reply. It’s good, I think. I’ll have to reposted for a better response, but I can’t remember anything sticking out as “bad”
Upon relisten, the only complaint I have is the drums are a tad too roomy
Ahh. Thanks for the feedback! I like roomy drums ^^;
EzDrummer 3 doesn't have the best room (which is something I'll admit GGD excels at, their rooms are immaculate), so I compensated a little with reverb.
Fair, I usually like my drums pretty dry, so that's a personal thing
Been a hot minute, but I'm back making metal 
i kind of suck at mixing
but this is something i put together
i need advice
Not a bad first attempt.
Lower the guitars about a dB, raise the drums and the bass about the same and add some compression on them drums.
Ay thanks
intro
how different do these sound from each other
L uses the nameless head, R uses the granophyre head, everything else is the same
am considering just using one or the other though
full mix for context
That Bass tone wtf
just about made me shit my pants, good work dude
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IoMVZm9c6NU posted this in #1095996414481416274 a bit back, figured i might aswell share it here :)
It's a vocal cover i did of Nik's Come To Brazil as a first project, let me know what you think :)
All credits go to @NikNocturnal @PaulaCarregosa and Chris Turner for writing the instrumental.
The song was made purely for the fun of it :)
Posted this guitar solo improvisation a couple days ago and would love to know what people think 🙂 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uBsbrRhp6g4&ab_channel=Elwood
Guitar solo in B minor by me :)
Thanks so much man!
For me personally, the secret of the Djinnbass 2 plugin is to use just the DI bass with a little bit of grit
I believe it's through the Archetype Nolly cab but I have to double check
Nameless is more low mid forward....kinda has this ooaaa sound. It also has a very sparkly high end to it that the Grano doesn't have.
Grano on the other hand is more upper mid forward (its so aggressive), tight er, and has a certain grindy characteristic to it. It high end isn't as sparkly but I think that's fine.
Expanded on it and changed the guitar tone. Fortin Nameless Suite is the goat
Wdyt of mix and production?
Guitar tuned down to A# for this one so I'm mainly concerned about the low end on this one
Hey everyone! 🎸
Here’s my guitar cover of “In the End” by @LinkinPark. This song has always been one of my favorites, and I had a blast putting my own spin on it. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed playing it! Don’t forget to like, comment, and subscribe for more covers and original music.
Gear Used:
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New drum vst and song idea
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LMMRaX1wbXVPn3udjM96VWobwcuGtDJv/view?usp=sharing some darko inspired shit
Nice I like
Heavy riff
Giving me slipknot vibes
Ough that's fucking sick
ayyyyyy thanks lol
ILL TAKE IT THAT KINDA WHAT I THOUGHT
its almost done
I pretty much just have vocals to do now
its a deathcore song now
with
two breakdowns
a 21 second fry scream for the first breakdown callout
which reads My Iq Is Six
A beautiful piano part right before the second breakdown
And
a cool buildup
it totalled to 8 minutes
ykw I can't say its deathcore
idk what it is
theres lots of deathcore elements
mostly the drums
but
like
weird melodys that feel more metalcore
but also the breakdown feels like some shit Netherwalker would do without brick vocals and is 80 bpm
like
idk what this shit is
oh sick id love to hear it
lemme render it rq
I still have mostly no vocals
so
keep that in mind
Oh wonderful I can't send it in the server
its too big
What do we think of this (pre vocals still, just need feedback on the current mix)
The mix is narrow overall, but nothings sticking out as like an "ow, my ear". I think the guitar needs to be a bit brighter imo, maybe a little less gain?
@versed remnant
and the lead tone is too similar to the rhythm, so they clash at 2:30 ish?
Noted and noted, thank you for the feedback ur the best
How can I make the mix wider?
Are you ahrd panning the guitars left and right?
Yeah I have a left and right track for lead, I also for the most part don't have a rythym going until the second half of the song, that middle space is entirely drums and bass
I think I fixed a lot of it it sounds a bit more full
I also added rythym guitar
and I did some vocals to it but only for the breakdown and build up to the breakdown
@tribal orbit
Chat what do we think
is it krimh?
Yesyes
i thought i knew those toms
how much is it i dont remember?
I’ve been looking for a nice free vst with nice punchy kick and nice sounding symbols i’ve been using easydrummer or some shit I totally forgot the name of the other one but
No clue I saw the free version and didn’t look any further
same lmao
It sounds so good for no reason dude its insane
i know its my favorite free drum library
Fax bro im so glad i found it
Same lol it helped me learn so much before getting a better library
Still narrow
are you recording two takes for the rhythm and then panning them? Cuz it still seems mono
The rythym is a monotrack I have lead dualtracked
gang is this shi fire or nah
brother HAHHAHA
thats crazy good tho
thanks lmao
yes it is
yay
i love it
suno ai?
that basline slapin doe ayo
thats so fucking fire ohmy
tho tbh the background cleans on that one part should prolly be in falsete and a lil more power behind the cleans
the mix is so good tho dammmmn
that snare is fucking explooosivveee
here the whole track
thank you man
goonna fix it asap
im firing this shit up
ks evolved bahhhaha
if you want to i could do the cleans for you jus for fun tee hee
:o
instrumental is from jacob lizotte
but i dont have any bucks to buy the copy :(
the licence
im down
i dont have a band yet
jus send me the track w/out the cleans and then the lyrics for it and ill do it as soon as i wake up tmrw lol
i added you btw so jus send me whenever bahah
appreciate your feedback a lot man
wait are you swedish? lmao
looool i got viking blood in me but im not
shi
thought i heard a swedish accent lmao
idk i was prolly jus tweakin lmao
this mix happened on coincidence btw lol
anyways as said jus dm the track n shi like i said and ill lay pipe on the beat lol
ima sleep now so 🙏
My best try
Who needs guitars 
Did an EzDrummer Mix!
👽
Awesome
what do you guys think about my album cover
Looks black metal af
I dont want it to look black metal cuz it is a deathcore album😭
What kind of deathcore
Because it can look like deathcore
Like old school deathcore I guess
Don't know how to explain what I mean
But it can go deathcore for sure
something like disemobodied tyrant and infant annihilator
thats what i am aiming for
It will take a lot of time but i will try to lock in on this project
I got this guy to help me with mixing and some writing and vocals
How do we feel about this?
Trying to make spooky song but I cant get the mix right
I love music tech
idk about the groovy part of the file name but something i made recently
this is not mixed just in case
i dont even know
some playing is off time but ignore that its a draft
what do we think of this riff Idea I had in 7/4, what can I change to make it better?
change 7/4 to 4/4 (just kidding, i actually fw the riff)
How would I even-
What genre is this riff even
I confused myself
i dont know...
i suck at genres tbh im confused
i see whatchu mean
all I know is that blast beats
its also just in drop C
its sounds brutal for a drop C riff]
it does
I think its just death metal right?
I mean like
it kinda sounds how Frantic Disembowlent down like the trem picking
sounds like death metal to me
Guys, what do you think of this as a vocal demo?
Hey guys if you have a band please let me know! i can get you some promotion done on twitch on a small streamer page but the people are very open to listen to ya'lls music!
What's up guys
So, I've been working on a musical direction that fuses electronic music with metal, and this is a new thing I've been working on, and I'm liking the results so far
Let me know what you think about it :3
https://soundcloud.com/wkmusicofficial/midtempoelectro-industrialmetalidk/s-2cDU4aRB2wp?si=136b7eb9c0854962ad0dfae84cbeb287&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
The night rider is near...
'Fear of Change' out now!
https://soundcloud.com/wkmusicofficial/fear-of-change
#nightrider
vocal hooks have been added
I'm working on a symphonic deathcore ep and the first single of it will be out soon and I'm only 15 so it might suck a little haha but people I've showed it to seem to like it
The single will have dondoesvocals on it
And it will be mixed by pvthos
Both are on this server with us
This is really really cool
Like fr
Thanks dude 😄
Something I made just now, I'd appreciate any feed back
I know I need to work on the bass accents still
Any thoughts on the mix? This is the first time I've made a track like this, and something feels a bit off
Sounds pretty good if you're going for that old school death metal feel. Once you fix the bass, I'd retrack some of the guitars and try to nail that timing in a couple of those spots
Revisited an Old Demo and laid down some rudimentary vocals, wdyt?
gang does this dark, o? or nah?
it does, yeah
aaaayyyeeeeee
shi heavy
Want peoples honest opinions on my bands EP we just released. It’s a long time coming and these are old songs that we’ve completely re done to sort of announce our return into making music together. Next EP drops early 2025
incelcore moment
Started doing a remaster of an old song I made on my first album, thoughts on the current state?
darko with shreddage keyswitch noises 
New project. I realized transitions between sections sound better than just dropping a new riff
yah that's usually the case
perhaps yes
Added harmonies, more to the intro, other stuff, an ouitro, just really need to do vocals and my sfx now
theres the original for reference
This one I just changed some of the outro/breakdown stuff
I can't critique I have zero experience but dude it sounds awesome af
Good songwriting too
vocals!!
the vocals have the best mixing in this mix so gj i say
im getting born of osiris vibes
Well thank you!
That's actually super encouraging considering that's what I've struggled with the most to get sounding good
lacks clean vocals (thats the buzzy synth atm), properly written drums, and real bass, but I think it's coming along
Sounds really good!
Something new I'm working on. Happy to hear any feedback! 🙂
Heavy like tungsten!
thanks!
Not metal this time. From my instrumental side project, this one comes (Ambient atmospheric). Recorded with real instruments (except for the synth).
i love it sick ambiance
finaly instrumental part finished i think
Wanna know what you guys think
What do we think of the instrumental mix for this cover of TV by Billie Eilish?
What do you think of the mix on it?
I feel like the guitar tones are a little murky at parts so I wanna work on my tones a bit
The Break the Glass series is back with Break the Glass IX!!!
@tribal orbit @wicked berry
do you upload your music anywhere?
on like soundcloud/bandcamp/spotify?
No, I should tho. Been thinking about it lately.
Why do you ask?
I asked because you were referring to a series, so I thought this track might be a part of a collection of songs that I havent heard yet
I have uploaded a number of them here as they've been made. I think I skipped 5 but that's because I never ended up not liking it lol.
revisited
Fuck yeah 🤘I love it
I love that pfp
Reminds me of Rings of Saturn; nice!
Thanks!
Guitars narrow and muddy. The drums are the most dominant aprt of the mix atm.
Bass is... fine?
Good riffage. Me like. Any plans for vocals?
Yesyes i needa turn down the gain on the guitars
Gain, and EQ. Too mcuh in the mids i think?
@tribal orbit do u know how to count time sig
I can't figure this one out for the life of me
heres a riff I came up with
I can't figure out the ts
I wanna say 5/4 maybe
idk tho
I’m not great at it, but I can check it later
I put it in 16/4
it works
I could half it to 8/4 but each repeat of the riff would use two bars
so
ykw it doesn't matter i'ma j put it in 8/4
Dunno yet. Might turn it to a full fledged song before I do.
Quick little idea test I whipped up with that riff I came up with earlier
Thanks, glad you like it
It's supposed to sound kinda chaotic like Slipknot with the drumming and snare tone because the original theme came from a EXTREMELY stressful boss fight
but on second thought it does sound kinda technical
Guys, is there any female metal singer here who likes to do funny metal stuff? We want to make 1-2 tracks on the album where there would be female vocals (we need someone who can sing clean and possibly extreme vocals) if you want, write to me (also looking for a male vocalist for another track, so if you want to do a Feat, write)
I'd be open to tracking some of the male vocals depending on the needs and style...
We can talk in dm!
if there are others interested dm me!
A raw instrumental demo of a punk song I cooked up some time ago. The playing is a bit sloppy and the mix probably isn't that good but I think it's enough to get the point
I mean I'd be down
nice!
Honestly kinda banger I like the direction this is taking a lot now
Synth go brr
This probably my favorite riff i’ve come up with
do you ever scream?
fc fry, yk
indeed
I just don’t know how to work vocals into it
I think i’ma try some early bmth style frys on it or some miw screams
Idk
I’ll figure it out
nice
did i cook
I liked the violins
you can probably find more by scrolling up lmao
thanks
metropolis
And nice
stacatto
I have an orchestral black metal waltz I made somewhere on my pc
damn that sounds fire just from the description
bruh...
It’s 3/4 as are waltz’s, it uses violins and shit the most un black metal instruments and shit for a beautiful intro and then the tremming starts and screams
And its beautiful
amazing
lmk if you do
I think this is the best I'm gonna get out of the vocals
Guys we still searching for female vocals! If you interested DM me
idk a wip
Whynot use the SynthV voicebank?
find someone who would sing it more fun)
remaking old riff
I completely understand that
This is some good shit holy fuck
need opinions on this riff
came up with it in like 15 minutes or something
i get my inspo for my riffs from knocked loose and to the grave stuff so idk
This sounds wrong, vocally. The mix is eh for now
but I wanna re-record my cleans
shit's pissin me off
I need thoughts on this concept idea for a song from y'all por favor
@tribal orbit , if you have a chance could you take a look at this for me?
kind of ripped off Diamond Construct and mixed in some other riffs. any tips/opinions?
Is it a little better now? I started dual tracking with two different tones for each ear cuz I feel like thats something I hear a lot in music and I wanted to try
Idk whats going on in your mixes atm cuz they feel very narrow, at least in the guitars. The drums sound big and wide

how make them wider
put one guitar track all the way to the right and one all the way to the left
or you could quad track them
makes the sound super huge
but i genuinely have no fucking clue how to mix thats just advice i was shared by my buddies dad whos a sound guy
I did do that I have an L and R track with different tones
thats odd it sounds like its in the center
some project i made quite some time ago while trying to "borrow" the Fear Factory style of industrial metal
this is a remix of Heian Alien (fyi)

is the track panned pre-fx? cuz ik thats a thing in some daws
It’s dual tracked usually I have my lead tone left and right and my rythym down the middle with bass
But on the electronic one i sent its rythym on right and lead on left
Two tones playing for the most part the same thing but some alternations
I hear that a lot in edpecially deathcore
Like pray for plagues
The lead tone is left and rythym is right
You hear it very heavily during the solo
The synth is dual tracked, yeah, I hear that
but the guitars def feel narrow
idk why dawg
unless I look at your mix, I won't know
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hello people what do you think about this riff I just cooked up? and yes I know I need to retrack the clean guitar
made a short thingy to try out my new MIDI keyboard i got for my birthday 👀
I can't think of what this reminds me of. Maybe Whitechapel's Kin album?
it deec tho
needs more chainsaws
jkjk
I think an eery synth with a basic heavy drum beat behind it would help it out
like a pad with some vinyl distortion
Feels like a christmas metal song
very bassy tho
also adjusted vocals. Is any good?
@fringe geode
I’ll send you some screenies tonight of what my average mix looks like w the fx chains and stuff
I finally stopped using tonocracy yesterday cuz I finally learned how to properly use fx chains
ive got some ideas for it
very mick gordon
any opinions / feedback?
Lmao I love my English class teacher, any thoughts on this? Btw the actual audio length is around 30-35 seconds so far
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jt-tLnc-omX7o67fLH5RtMRP6MDQQqB7/view?usp=sharing better mixing in this one
I can hear a lot of white noise
The vocals are pretty fuckin good bro!
updates
changes on drum mixing
streamlined the song so it's a bit shorter
fixed a minor error in the drums around 3:08
This fuckin rips. How'd you get the drums to sound like that?
Also sidenote: Nice PFP. The ONI logo :3
this is really cool!
tyty!
Hopefully will have it closer to finished in the next month or so. Lacks real Bass and Drums
I think bass wise it just needs a slight bump in level but the drums are pretty raw yeah.
that + a real recording lmao
Drums are fake and not programmed to sound too realistic
That's fine.
Not all drums have to sound realistic. If that's a concern you can always tweak it later.
God damn
definitely Kin vibes
it's slow and mostly palm muted with focus on groove
added some ambiance in the beginning and end to sort of set up a "mood" (do you like before or after the addition?)
also made the rhythm guitar slightly louder
any suggestions to improve the mix on this?
what do we think of the concept
Good start so far!
Something heavy I'm working on:
Sounds really good!!
This is so sick! Great job, man!
not my best mix
Is my tone alright?
The low chugs sound really percussive imo
I think you need to cut anything lower than 100 or 120 before the amp sim. So an EQ before it
I was planning on adding a multi band compressor afterwards that tames the low end during palm mutes
I think pre-EQ might be better tho
That way you’re not sacrificing any time post-amp
Tone*
something i made to try out the trivium drums and the GGD cab contenders plugin
it's not mixed in any way tho
btw there is no GGD cab contenders on the cleans
only on the distorded guitars
A better toan than I can certainly get out of Gojira default IRs.
Personally I really dislike Gojira's cabs. Other than 1st cab for cleans, I generally really dislike them.
How’d you know that I was using archetype Gojira?
A. Because Gojira cabs have a very specific sound to them that are real easy to pick out.
B. I've owned it for a long time lol.
Even if I didn't own it Archetype Gojira is EVERYWHERE in metalcore now.
Buster uses it with Vildhjarta and HLB.
Architects use it (I believe in alongside Josh Middleton's plugin with STL.)
Bleed From Within use it.
Ermin Hamidovic uses it in his mixes even tho in a convo with him, he admitted he didn't like it.
Obviously Gojira use it.
And that's just a few examples.
Arc Gojira is becoming a standard now in metalcore, much like how Nolly was for a little bit.
me when i try wierd shit lol
me when I've been listening to a lot AoF and Offspring and wrote this
nasty vocals
Skip to ab halfway for dirty vocals, also turn the discord audio file volume down, loud master :p
hi guys, I'm making an orchestral cover of Immortal by Lorna Shore. any thoughts on orchestration? still haven't touched dynamics and mix
Could someone help me. I am going crazy because I want to make a full song, but I always want to go for ✨ the perfect song ✨ and never get anything finished. Is this a good riff for a verse or should I indeed keep iterating it
I have this issue with pretty much all my riffs
Thoughts on the thrasher?
Hey everyone. I've finally released my first song with vocals. And I'd really love some feedback on it. Also on the video, because I just put it together in my bedroom, and don't know much about mv making. I'd really appreciate any feedback.
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So I wanted to make music like the game Nier but instead I made this short test riff thingy. @tribal orbit @swift slate @wicked berry
Thanks! I honestly had no idea what I was doing and that's what popped out of my brain.
I get that lmao
BTW I've switched up my tones on this one. Normally Im using the Mesa Mark IIC+ for my main rhythms and one of the Archetypes for guitar fx. But I'm using the Soldano SLO-100 for my rhythms and the Mesa for my guitar fx.
And I've completely switched over to EZD3 for drums.
Oh! That's interesting
What did you normally use
Usually a frankenkit of GGD Aggressive Rock and Metal.
I stopped because I like switch kit pieces on the fly.
Nice
I normally combine mario duplantier and Austin archey
Plus actually learning how to actually mix drums instead of using premixed ones is fun and EZD3 has a lot of natural drum sounds.
Ooooo....if there's one kit that'd make me use Kontakt kits again its the Mario Duplantier kit.
Either the first or 2nd one that just released.
Those kits are just chef's kiss
Oh I agreee
Man I want that new one
27 or something inch china blew me away
For REAL. I actually used to be a drummer and I've NEVER seen a China that big before.
I'm a drummer now and that stuff is still ludicrous to me
Never seen that before
Humongous
Oooo. What's your kit of choice?
Well I actually haven't had any set of drums for the longest time, and had to live off of practicing at school, my friends house, and music stores, but I recently got a roland td 0 something pretty damn basic but if I could choose any kit I'd go with pearl 9 piece something massive
Also, at least 2 bells and 1 stack are required,
Pearl kits are really nice. While I used Ludwig for a long time, I actually preferred Gretsch kits myself.
Also I might need Danny careys kit 
Sabian is great but I'd choose meinl over sabian
Zildians are pretty good though. Darker than I'd like but still nice.
Yes agreed
I haven't tried any Meinls. I've only heard em through plugins like GGD Modern Fusion.
Ah yeah that plugin makes good use of them
Do they really have that sheen and clarity to em.
But just by demoing that stuff in music stores yep
Man I gotta try some now. It's been a while since I hopped on the kit for real.
Damn
Highly recommend
Hell yeah. Ever try any DW Kits?
They're really snappy.
No I haven't, but I wanna
They're snappy like Gretsch kits but have more highs like Tama.
A really nice ring to em.
That sounds real nice
DWs are great kits. Bit of an aquired taste but I like em.
I'll try one out if I see one
Actually Dan Searle from Architects is an artist with DW.
His kit from GGD is an SJC kit though. Thats the kit they used on Holy Hell and For Those Who Wish to Exist.
Ahhh I see
A little something I'm working on. Just the vocals left.
tesseracting
the mix needs some work
Little update to a concept I had come up with
I wanna change up the drums some more still
and add some more alternations to the main riff
but
still just in the drawing board phase
that is not a bass, it is a guitar with a bass amp 💀
id kill for a band
if I was a member of a thall band I'll let you be the vocalist, you sound almost identical to the vocalist of vildhjarta 🤯
cool
ngl i'd gladly like like to have a look at the cabs and mic you used for that tone 👀
Could you be a bit more precise? Exactly what could I change?
yeah I can break it down for ya
Gojira half-wet octave on the wow pedal
nameless hexdrive
gojira head
ENG, two Orange, and mesa trad cabs
thx and i have both the gojira and nameless plugin too
the guitar tone is siiiiick ^^
This is sick dude
tweaked it a little, needed a little more high mid
I'm not them but I had a question of my own. Did you put compression on the guitars? They seem to be constantly changing volume, especially during what I think is a verse? section at 1:50 and 3:03 are the main culprits. Otherwise, song sounds dope, just need to smooth out some rough cuts between sections
Thank you! Yeah, I've noticed that too. I don't really know what causes it though. I have a limiter on the master, but other than that there's nothing.
Does it happen even without the limiter?
I can check.
No, it does not. The limiter would appear to be the problem.
But I need it in order to make the audio the same volume as the standards on most platforms.
I’ll take a listen when I get back to my pc. If anything I can help with the limiter settings
Okay, thank you so much!
I'm still hearing it around those sections, do you have crossfades on your guitar tracks? Like, going from one take to another?
No, I don't think so. I'll take a look.
ik I;m a few days late, but that sounds pretty neat. I like the intro
It's pretty cool, guitars still narrow like usual
reminds me of metallica with the riff
is there a way to set ggd cab plugins in stereo?
two amp sims are too heavy for my cpu along with drums and mix stuff
it's a bit messy and distorted
sounds like overcompressed or overlimited
Not that I’m aware of, but you can export the cab preset as its own IR and use it in an external IR loader
thanks you that's very useful
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xdpbCl1vgUpjZIo5dNSdBTaSIiZA-9pO/view?usp=sharing erm, I tried playing around with clippers for the first time
Don't diss the mix it's supposed to sound how it sounds
By that I mean it's supposed to sound like your speakers are breaking
bwoooooooooow
Im trying to mix my song, but this is really first time doing it so i want some feedback to it
I think drums are little to loud and that's the main issue, but i still want to hear others opinion what i could potentialy do better
I got jumpscared by the bass
Let me know when you finish it. fucking banger🗣️ 🔥
Lmao good
I agree with the drums being too loud, the snare and cymbols specificaly
you can probably widen the guitar and bring it up in the mix. The synth arp sounds cool, but I think it could benefit from a little delay (i think?)
Also that snare has a weird treble-y TANG at the end of the hit you might wanna fix with some EQ or soemthing
buut, besides that, it reminds me of like a secret hideout theme song
If that TANG you mean is that metalic sound, it should be here, i just added some metal hit sound to make this snare more "Industrial" or smth idk
Yeah, guitars are quiet, i think i can try to make them more hearable
Fair enough, it just sounds a little out of the mix. I thing some EQ and maybe some pitch correction so it matches the key would be good
it just sounds dissonant otherwise
Are they hard-panned left and right?
No, its just one track, no panning
i will try
I think dual-tracking will really bring them up in the mix
help make them pop rather than drowned out and all that
How do i do it with one track? just double it and pan left right?
You have to add a 100% wet delay to teh copied track and make it roughly 8-10 ms behind the original
you can also use a doubler function, if you're using a Neural DSP amp
Okay, ill try it
just copying and panning left and right will just make it louder down the center channel cuz thats just how sound works yknow
Ey, that sounds better now, thanks
You were right, snare is in f# and metalic sound was in A so very close, thats why it sounded dissonant
With the cymbals it will be little hard to bring the down as all drums are on whan channel, but i will try just use dynamic eq on highs and maybe it will work
Glad I was able to help
Are you using a drum sim or is it just a recorded track?
Midi drums
cuz if it's a sim, you can create a new track with the midi for each group of hits (1x snare, 1x kick, 1x toms, 1x cymbols)
def do this then
create a chain for each group
Yeah, but it would be kinda annoing and my pc is lagging on 3 vitals open
I could render it one for one
But ill try it with dynamic eq and if it wont work ill do it
Render each hit track as a .wav for the entire song
I wouldn't cuz it'll take away from the snare
plus if you do each individually, you can dial in each tone with compression, saturation, etc
Actually truth
it's tedious at first, but it;s worth
I will do render drums separately, but just not now
I think it still sounds better than the first
But now drums are to quiet i think in the breakdown 😭
Fuck it, ill fix it later
The guitars still sound narrow, but otehrwise, it sounds better ye
i know, but i panned them left right
Did you delay one of them?
yes
I CANT FIGURE THIS OUT
starting my music tech final btw
this is the intro I have
@tribal orbit are my guitars wide yet
I have
two tones on left and right lead tracks
which are harmonies
btw
and
I have rythym
with a third tone
right down the middle
as well as bass
Doesn’t sound like it 
I’ll listen at some point later
Do you have screenshots of your DAW? Just so I can see what you have going?
guitars feel a little too bright, kinda lacking body
what're you using for the tone?
The bass is kinda goofy, but the lead tones do feel wide. Now you just gotta do the same for teh rythm
Yeah i’ll send em whn i get back home
Thats the point its supposed to be funky, IVE ACHIEVED WIDE, and yeah I know how to do that to rhythm now tho i THINK
I think the reason the lead is wide is cuz its properly dual tracked and playing two different things
So i might not have rythym wide immediately j by doing the same
Gate, pre eq, gate to push for the volume, distortion pedal, amp sim, post eq, cab sim
Its pretty much the same for all guitar tracks only difference is the amp sim to change the tone
Its three guitar tracks rn
So three different amp sims
Actually wait
I took off the amp sim on the rythym
So that doesn’t have an amp sim
I wanted rythym to be very driving and crunchy
let me guess:
TSE SDM-2, fortin nameless, GGD cali?
sorry im being an asshole rn, what amp sim(s) and cabs are you using?
LePoulin Hybrit on the right track, LePoulin also on the lefy but i forgot exsctly which one, PRO F.E.T. Dist pedal, 7Q EQ (mids pushed on pre, balanced on post), and NadIR with a jaguar cab sim
@tribal orbit
can I hear the rhythm isolated?
I think I'm just tripping then
mightve just been because the bass is matching with the leads instead of the rhythm
For the intro yeah it matches lead and rythym
yeah, the lead stuff looks ight
Anyways parts sound off to you guys?
I thought I was cooking but in retrospect maybe I was burning the food
how make rythym full
leads are playing two different things
I think thats the only reason it works
also i just added a kick ass chorus
no verse yet
or words
just the chorus instrumentals
same way you did lead lmao
you gotta dual track, pan hard left, hard right
so exactly what I did for lead
but
I always do that
you always say its thin sounding
it all sounds kinda... old game midi-ish? Like a SNES soundfont
are you doing two takes?
or just one and copy-pasting it
I usually two take but sometimes I'll copy and paste but even then its just a placeholder for when I two take
i just added a second track for rythym right now its just copy and paste but do you like the tones I used on rythym tracks?

Dude I genuinely don't know why that doesn't sound right
very legitimately
cuz you did the same thing as your lead
The tone isn't bad, but the overall mix is kinda... weird?
idk how else to say it atm cuz sleepy
Here I did a second take for rythym
How is it weird
I'm so confused
idk what im doing wrong
the left take sounds fine, and wide
the right... doesn't? Maybe it's a leveling issue
the bass sample set your using sounds off, thats definitely one big thing
Should be an octave down? or less attack, I think
It just stands out in the mix too much
So i should turn bass down and fix my right track?
iit's a good start, I'd say bass down, guitars up, make sure right and left tracks are balanced with each other
Bro thank you very much man i really appreciate thaaat!!
HOW DO YOU GET OTHER PADELS INTO GOJIRA??
Multiple instances of the sims
Using them as effects rather than full amp sims
yeah separate instances lol
If I really wanted to, I could run this entire tone out of Gojira, and I could help you with that if you'd like. I just like fortin nameless's hexdrive over gojira's od pedal, and I'm running GGD contenders for the cabs
GGD has the convenient feature to export presets as IRs, so I could make a lite version of the tone that runs native to gojira lol
well not really lite but you get the idea, def lighter on resources
it's become my Knocked Loose/chainsaw tone
really good
but somehow knocked loose tone is dirtier but with a lot a punch
i don't know how they mixed it
but the chugs in kl are explosive
oh yeah they have a lot more distortion running through that chain than I do
this is just an approximation that I liked
general idea was distortion pedal into 5150 into mesa 412, that swollen pickle pedal does a lot for em too
idk what they did in studio but ik live they run quad cortex into a preamp into actual 4x12s, and that's not something I can emulate with just plugins lol
yeah quad cortex is really good
kl sounds great live

