#Feedback Requests

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blissful cliff
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I use Reaper lol

tribal orbit
tribal orbit
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JST Max is a great plugin

blissful cliff
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Woah that actually sounds a lot better XDDD

tribal orbit
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It needed to be a bit brighter, a bit more saturated, and needed some added width

blissful cliff
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Gotcha

tribal orbit
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My chain goes EQ1 -> Saturator -> EQ2 -> Limiter -> Saturator2/Compressor -> JST Max

blissful cliff
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Nice

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I'm really not familiar with mastering stuff at all, I've only recently got halfway decent at mixing

tribal orbit
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For being halfway decent, you're decent lmao

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Def pick up the mastering side of things. Doesn't take too long tbh

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Learning plugins take long tho

blissful cliff
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I'll definitely give it a shot

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Do you know any good free plugins?

tribal orbit
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For mastering?

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I do not

blissful cliff
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Yeah

tribal orbit
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Ableton has a ton of built in shit

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So I usually just use that

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Buuut

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I use JST Heat and Maximizer for the final touches

blissful cliff
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Alrighty

tribal orbit
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Max is 49 bucks rn

blissful cliff
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I saw that

tribal orbit
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And they allow for discount codes to stack on deals

blissful cliff
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I just don't have that kind of spending money rn lol

blissful cliff
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I'll def keep my eye on it though

tribal orbit
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Def do

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Idk much about the tools built in to reaper

blissful cliff
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I'll do some research for sure

tribal orbit
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but I'm sure if you search "How to master metal/punk/rock/etc. in reaper" on youtube, you'll find something

blissful cliff
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I mean that's how I learned mixing XD

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Dude EQs and Compressors are so confusing

tribal orbit
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I just use glue compressors

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regular compressors go over my head even now. I understand teh gist of them, but teh glue compressors in Ableton make my brain work more

blissful cliff
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I've been using a compressor on each of my guitar tracks and on bass, and then a glue compressor on the whole mix

tribal orbit
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Ah

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Yeah, I only use glue

blissful cliff
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I've found it makes the guitars sound brighter

tribal orbit
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Never felt that tbh

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But also, most of my tones are bright

blissful cliff
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fair enough

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I've been learning a lot about tones too

tribal orbit
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Less gain = more gain

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yknwo

blissful cliff
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my tone used to sound pretty muddy and awful

blissful cliff
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especially the lower you tune the less gain the better it generally sounds

tribal orbit
blissful cliff
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Anyways thanks for your help bro!

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I appreciate it a lot

tribal orbit
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Np

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Not like I have anything going on today lmao

blissful cliff
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I found some good tutorial stuff using stock reaper plugins so ima see what I can do with that

tribal orbit
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awesome

tribal orbit
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@blissful cliff if you have a moment toptier

blissful cliff
tribal orbit
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Good old 5-7-8

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The synth to your liking?

blissful cliff
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Yeah it sounds pretty good

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It will be way better once vocals are added

kind blaze
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I tested new drums and this is what came out of it

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I like the 2nd half

wicked berry
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it sounds cool

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nice drums

tribal orbit
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Trying to make a rock track instead of metal is hard

kind blaze
kind blaze
wicked berry
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yw!

kind blaze
tribal orbit
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Lmao

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The drums def need to be reworked on mine

wicked berry
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i like the ride alot

tribal orbit
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Ugritone

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They’re going out of business, so I bought their whole site for liek 80

kind blaze
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Nice deal

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Drums sounds great

tribal orbit
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Takes a bit to mix in

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Saturation, EQ, compression, etc

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Buuuut

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They’re cool

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Just remember to remove the one shots

kind blaze
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Damn I love how the ride and bass drum sounds together in fast riffs

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Gives me some Rev vibe I think

wicked berry
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I love ugritones "kvlt drums" and "trve cabs"

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For the names

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Awesome

tribal orbit
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Tbh k think kvlt drums are probably the worst of the sample sets they have

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Total/Tight Studio and the Punk & Grind are the best

wicked berry
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thats actually trve kvlt

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having shitty drum samples is trve kvlt

young shore
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Tell me what you think, I made it for fun, I would have made a full version if my laptop didnt freeze and melt every 0.000001 seconds

young shore
wicked berry
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Heavy

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Really good

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Interesting tone

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The synth reminds me of miw

young shore
wicked berry
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Ofc!!

young shore
wicked berry
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Ohhhhhhhh makes sense

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Totally

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Sick

tribal orbit
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also the snare samples death

kind blaze
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little terrible Everlong cover made when i testing how mic recording clasic guitar

fringe geode
fringe geode
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@sacred estuary This is the Karnivool esc song I was talking about.

@tribal orbit @wicked berry Wot chu think. When I initially shared the track here forever ago, I used GGD for the drums, I remixed it using EzDrummer 3.

wicked berry
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massive snare holy

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the mix is great

sacred estuary
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will listen in a bit. chatting w my partner and if i keep bouncing between chats i'll have to start it over EHEHEHE she goes to work soonish tho

fringe geode
wicked berry
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i love the whole kit tbh

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nice kick, hi hats, snare

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cymbals are great

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very good mix

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also good bass

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guitar tone fits the mix

fringe geode
wicked berry
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yea i would think so

fringe geode
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But some work was done to the snare too.

wicked berry
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i would fall asleep to it lmao

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nice and calm

fringe geode
# wicked berry guitar tone fits the mix

It all Neural. But different plugins for each part.

The High Gain is the Mark IIC+ (My favorite)
The crunch is Rabea Amp 2. Which is ch. 1 of the 50w Kraken.
The clean is also Rabea, Amp 1. Which is a Fender Twin.
The bass is Parallax

wicked berry
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ahh niceee

fringe geode
# wicked berry ahh niceee

Yeeee. I don't mind paying for my source tones like good drums or amp sims or even IRs. But I mix using essentially freeware.

wicked berry
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yea

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do you use fabfilter for anything

fringe geode
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Nope

wicked berry
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nice

fringe geode
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I use TDR Nova as my EQ.

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Cuz it has an option where it can double as a multiband compressor if I need it.

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And if I REALLY need to be surgical, or need more bands on my EQ, Reaper's built in one is fantasitc.

wicked berry
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true true

fringe geode
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Took me a long to figure out how to mix. I still don't know wtf Im doing ngl XD

sacred estuary
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this reminds me so much of something.. definitely a local band from way back

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loving the heck outta this

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like, actually a fantastic track

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right up my alley

fringe geode
sacred estuary
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one of my favorite styles of music

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def post more stuff and lemme know when/if ya do

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do you have a vocalist?

fringe geode
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I'm using SynthV for vocals

sacred estuary
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what that

fringe geode
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It's a voicebank

sacred estuary
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ah okay

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lemme know when ya add em in. i'm keen to see how it all comes together

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good vocalist is hard to find. everyone thinks they can do it but the vast majority are real bad lol

fringe geode
sacred estuary
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awesome. i would say the bass could go up a lil bit, but that might just be my earbuds

sacred estuary
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most of mine historically have had too much EHEHEHE

fringe geode
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Or it's the opposite in some cases lol.

sacred estuary
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i had a band in the late 00s/early 10s. kind of.. hard rock with a similar vibe like.. but way less creative lol

fringe geode
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But I have sensitive hearing (albiet damaged as I have slight tinnitus due to playing loud amps for many years) so earbuds and me don't mix.

sacred estuary
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same lol. we used to practice in a tiny metal storage unit lol

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very loud

fringe geode
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Ouch

sacred estuary
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yeaaa

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i shoulda worn earplugs but the only good ones back then that didn't actually block sound were hundreds of dollars

fringe geode
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Yeah I used to blast them old Rectos back in the day. Shoulda worn ear pro but ehh

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I describe it as a "sonic condom"

sacred estuary
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lmao yeah pretty much

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altho i wouldn't recommend googling that

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the only ones we could afford were the yellow foamy ones, and those are not great if you actually want to hear what you're playing

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i also went to a tonnn of loud shows

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so that didn't help the whole hearing thing

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but ye. i gotta get some sleep lol

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really great track, i look forward to hearing more. if you've posted any others in here, link me to em, i'll give em a peep

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have a good night!

fringe geode
runic adder
runic adder
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ok which one do y'all like more - the first one with Granophyre + Bogren downtuned IRs or this one with just nameless x

fringe geode
# runic adder

Personally I like the Nameless X because it's just massive and untamed. THAT SAID, mix wise I think Grano + Bogren downtuned IRs might be the way. It gives the bass some room to breathe.

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That said there's this low mid push in Nameless X that fills it out nicely that the Granophyre lacks.

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Try combining both sounds together.

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Just note your gonna wanna EQ them separately first before you bring them into a bus for further processing. Joey Sturgis goes into this process more if you wanna delve deeper into it.

runic adder
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they're fully processed already

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same relative process for both - EQ and saturation

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and yeah, the balancing on the nameless version is a little off

fringe geode
# runic adder they're fully processed already

No I meant like. If you're gonna combine the sounds of the Grano and the Nameless, you'll have to EQ separately before you continue doing your usual thing. Each amp with their IRs have their own nasty resonant frequencies y'know?

runic adder
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ooooh yeah

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definitely

fringe geode
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I don't combine amps often, but it's the process I go through when I combine the Mesa Mark with the SLO.

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I'm not good at modern metal like thall or anything. That'll take me years to learn how to mix for that, but usually the same process applies.

fringe geode
# runic adder ooooh yeah

But yeah I'd recommend combining the almost buzzsaw nature of the Grano with that almost untamed mid push of the Nameless. You'd probably get something super unique out of it.

fringe geode
# runic adder hows thiss

It's a good start. The Nameless cab tames the Granos buzz saw nature a little bit while giving it a bit of a mid bump.

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There are certain cabs in Neural's collection that are really stupidly good. Nameless' cab is one of them.

tribal orbit
tribal orbit
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Upon relisten, the only complaint I have is the drums are a tad too roomy

fringe geode
tribal orbit
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Fair, I usually like my drums pretty dry, so that's a personal thing

kind trail
spare sundial
wicked berry
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i kind of suck at mixing

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but this is something i put together

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i need advice

fringe geode
wicked berry
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Ay thanks

kind blaze
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intro

kind blaze
kind blaze
runic adder
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L uses the nameless head, R uses the granophyre head, everything else is the same

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am considering just using one or the other though

blissful cliff
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Phonk Metal RAHHHHH

blissful cliff
untold knot
kind blaze
kind blaze
spare sundial
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For me personally, the secret of the Djinnbass 2 plugin is to use just the DI bass with a little bit of grit

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I believe it's through the Archetype Nolly cab but I have to double check

fringe geode
# runic adder how different do these sound from each other

Nameless is more low mid forward....kinda has this ooaaa sound. It also has a very sparkly high end to it that the Grano doesn't have.

Grano on the other hand is more upper mid forward (its so aggressive), tight er, and has a certain grindy characteristic to it. It high end isn't as sparkly but I think that's fine.

spare sundial
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Expanded on it and changed the guitar tone. Fortin Nameless Suite is the goat

kind blaze
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My first ever cover of song with not clean vocals

blissful cliff
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Metalcore/punk track with goofy ahh breakdown

kind trail
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Wdyt of mix and production?

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Guitar tuned down to A# for this one so I'm mainly concerned about the low end on this one

lost dew
versed remnant
wicked berry
wicked berry
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Heavy riff

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Giving me slipknot vibes

wicked berry
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ayyyyyy thanks lol

versed remnant
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its almost done

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I pretty much just have vocals to do now

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its a deathcore song now

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with

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two breakdowns

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a 21 second fry scream for the first breakdown callout

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which reads My Iq Is Six

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A beautiful piano part right before the second breakdown

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And

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a cool buildup

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it totalled to 8 minutes

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ykw I can't say its deathcore

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idk what it is

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theres lots of deathcore elements

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mostly the drums

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but

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like

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weird melodys that feel more metalcore

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but also the breakdown feels like some shit Netherwalker would do without brick vocals and is 80 bpm

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like

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idk what this shit is

wicked berry
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oh sick id love to hear it

versed remnant
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lemme render it rq

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I still have mostly no vocals

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so

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keep that in mind

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Oh wonderful I can't send it in the server

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its too big

wicked berry
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Lol

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I normally use google drive

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And send a link

versed remnant
tribal orbit
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The mix is narrow overall, but nothings sticking out as like an "ow, my ear". I think the guitar needs to be a bit brighter imo, maybe a little less gain?

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@versed remnant

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and the lead tone is too similar to the rhythm, so they clash at 2:30 ish?

versed remnant
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How can I make the mix wider?

tribal orbit
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Are you ahrd panning the guitars left and right?

versed remnant
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Yeah I have a left and right track for lead, I also for the most part don't have a rythym going until the second half of the song, that middle space is entirely drums and bass

versed remnant
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I think I fixed a lot of it it sounds a bit more full

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I also added rythym guitar

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and I did some vocals to it but only for the breakdown and build up to the breakdown

versed remnant
wicked berry
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i like the song

wicked berry
versed remnant
wicked berry
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i thought i knew those toms

versed remnant
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I might actually buy the paid version I love the way it sounds

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So much

wicked berry
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how much is it i dont remember?

versed remnant
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I’ve been looking for a nice free vst with nice punchy kick and nice sounding symbols i’ve been using easydrummer or some shit I totally forgot the name of the other one but

versed remnant
wicked berry
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same lmao

versed remnant
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It sounds so good for no reason dude its insane

wicked berry
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i know its my favorite free drum library

versed remnant
wicked berry
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Same lol it helped me learn so much before getting a better library

tribal orbit
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are you recording two takes for the rhythm and then panning them? Cuz it still seems mono

versed remnant
kind blaze
open canyon
open canyon
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thats crazy good tho

wicked berry
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thanks lmao

wicked berry
open canyon
kind blaze
kind blaze
kind blaze
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intro

open canyon
kind blaze
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Guitar part added

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Not Shure about it but gonna keep it for some time

open canyon
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whatchall think

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lol

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(pls gibb feedback)

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and idea

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s

kind blaze
kind blaze
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giving it 9000% on this demo guys

open canyon
open canyon
# kind blaze

tho tbh the background cleans on that one part should prolly be in falsete and a lil more power behind the cleans

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the mix is so good tho dammmmn

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that snare is fucking explooosivveee

kind blaze
kind blaze
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goonna fix it asap

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im firing this shit up

open canyon
open canyon
kind blaze
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:o

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instrumental is from jacob lizotte

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but i dont have any bucks to buy the copy :(

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the licence

kind blaze
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i dont have a band yet

open canyon
# kind blaze im down

jus send me the track w/out the cleans and then the lyrics for it and ill do it as soon as i wake up tmrw lol

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i added you btw so jus send me whenever bahah

kind blaze
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appreciate your feedback a lot man

open canyon
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wait are you swedish? lmao

kind blaze
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looool i got viking blood in me but im not

open canyon
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shi

kind blaze
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sorry m8, godden abend

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lol

open canyon
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thought i heard a swedish accent lmao

kind blaze
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:O

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FR?

open canyon
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idk i was prolly jus tweakin lmao

kind blaze
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this mix happened on coincidence btw lol

open canyon
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anyways as said jus dm the track n shi like i said and ill lay pipe on the beat lol

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ima sleep now so 🙏

kind blaze
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hell yea

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catch ya up soon

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cant write you

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somehow discord bugging

kind blaze
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How da fuck he goes so low

kind blaze
sage plinth
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something

kind blaze
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Yeah
Still learning

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It sounds pretty bad off mix

spare sundial
fringe geode
ruby sparrow
wicked berry
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Awesome

ripe basalt
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what do you guys think about my album cover

wicked berry
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Looks black metal af

ripe basalt
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I dont want it to look black metal cuz it is a deathcore album😭

wicked berry
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What kind of deathcore

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Because it can look like deathcore

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Like old school deathcore I guess

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Don't know how to explain what I mean

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But it can go deathcore for sure

ripe basalt
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thats what i am aiming for

wicked berry
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Ooh nice

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Looks good to me

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Let me know when it drops

ripe basalt
wicked berry
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Same here for mine

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Mines like disembodied tyrant and worm shepherd

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For style

wicked berry
versed remnant
brave otter
versed remnant
swift slate
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idk about the groovy part of the file name but something i made recently

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this is not mixed just in case

kind blaze
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Gonna add some vocals

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Lol

kind blaze
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i need someone to do vocals

wicked berry
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i dont even know

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some playing is off time but ignore that its a draft

kind blaze
versed remnant
wicked berry
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change 7/4 to 4/4 (just kidding, i actually fw the riff)

versed remnant
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What genre is this riff even

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I confused myself

wicked berry
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i dont know...

versed remnant
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fucking 7/4

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its like

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death metal

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but like

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slam kinda

wicked berry
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i suck at genres tbh im confused

versed remnant
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but like

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idfk

wicked berry
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i see whatchu mean

versed remnant
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all I know is that blast beats

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its also just in drop C

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its sounds brutal for a drop C riff]

wicked berry
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it does

versed remnant
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I think its just death metal right?

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I mean like

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it kinda sounds how Frantic Disembowlent down like the trem picking

wicked berry
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sounds like death metal to me

narrow trail
kind blaze
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Hey guys if you have a band please let me know! i can get you some promotion done on twitch on a small streamer page but the people are very open to listen to ya'lls music!

tall aurora
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What's up guys
So, I've been working on a musical direction that fuses electronic music with metal, and this is a new thing I've been working on, and I'm liking the results so far
Let me know what you think about it :3
https://soundcloud.com/wkmusicofficial/midtempoelectro-industrialmetalidk/s-2cDU4aRB2wp?si=136b7eb9c0854962ad0dfae84cbeb287&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

fathom jewel
wicked berry
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The single will have dondoesvocals on it

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And it will be mixed by pvthos

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Both are on this server with us

wicked berry
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Like fr

wicked berry
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Crazy stuff you all

tall aurora
versed remnant
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Something I made just now, I'd appreciate any feed back

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I know I need to work on the bass accents still

blissful cliff
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Any thoughts on the mix? This is the first time I've made a track like this, and something feels a bit off

blissful cliff
kind trail
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Revisited an Old Demo and laid down some rudimentary vocals, wdyt?

kind blaze
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its happening guys

open canyon
lavish sundial
blissful cliff
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Deathcore go brrrrrrrr

kind blaze
open canyon
nimble cloud
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Want peoples honest opinions on my bands EP we just released. It’s a long time coming and these are old songs that we’ve completely re done to sort of announce our return into making music together. Next EP drops early 2025

https://open.spotify.com/album/5FnyI5f4BiVkcBlDw9gt8p?

wicked berry
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I like it alot

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Also great album cover

sand steeple
versed remnant
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Started doing a remaster of an old song I made on my first album, thoughts on the current state?

fathom jewel
scenic heath
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New project. I realized transitions between sections sound better than just dropping a new riff

runic adder
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yah that's usually the case

versed remnant
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Added harmonies, more to the intro, other stuff, an ouitro, just really need to do vocals and my sfx now

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theres the original for reference

blissful cliff
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Guys, I need critiquing on my vocals mixing.

wicked berry
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I can't critique I have zero experience but dude it sounds awesome af

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Good songwriting too

versed remnant
turbid radish
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im getting born of osiris vibes

blissful cliff
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That's actually super encouraging considering that's what I've struggled with the most to get sounding good

wicked berry
tribal orbit
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lacks clean vocals (thats the buzzy synth atm), properly written drums, and real bass, but I think it's coming along

cerulean storm
kind blaze
cerulean storm
kind blaze
kind blaze
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goofy ahh brake

cerulean storm
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Not metal this time. From my instrumental side project, this one comes (Ambient atmospheric). Recorded with real instruments (except for the synth).

kind blaze
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finaly instrumental part finished i think

kind blaze
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Wanna know what you guys think

versed remnant
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What do we think of the instrumental mix for this cover of TV by Billie Eilish?

tribal orbit
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I don’t like the original song, but it has potential

versed remnant
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I feel like the guitar tones are a little murky at parts so I wanna work on my tones a bit

fringe geode
fathom jewel
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on like soundcloud/bandcamp/spotify?

fringe geode
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Why do you ask?

fathom jewel
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I asked because you were referring to a series, so I thought this track might be a part of a collection of songs that I havent heard yet

fringe geode
hollow tulip
honest perch
wicked berry
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Same lol, took the logo, and played with effects

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Turned out real nice

cerulean storm
fringe geode
wicked berry
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I make rap beats starting at $3000 for anyone interested^^^^

tribal orbit
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Bass is... fine?

tribal orbit
kind blaze
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few fixes for instrumentals

versed remnant
tribal orbit
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Gain, and EQ. Too mcuh in the mids i think?

versed remnant
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@tribal orbit do u know how to count time sig

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I can't figure this one out for the life of me

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I can't figure out the ts

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I wanna say 5/4 maybe

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idk tho

tribal orbit
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I’m not great at it, but I can check it later

versed remnant
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I put it in 16/4

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it works

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I could half it to 8/4 but each repeat of the riff would use two bars

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so

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ykw it doesn't matter i'ma j put it in 8/4

fringe geode
versed remnant
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Quick little idea test I whipped up with that riff I came up with earlier

hollow tulip
# cerulean storm Reminds me of Rings of Saturn; nice!

Thanks, glad you like it
It's supposed to sound kinda chaotic like Slipknot with the drumming and snare tone because the original theme came from a EXTREMELY stressful boss fight
but on second thought it does sound kinda technical

kind blaze
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Guys, is there any female metal singer here who likes to do funny metal stuff? We want to make 1-2 tracks on the album where there would be female vocals (we need someone who can sing clean and possibly extreme vocals) if you want, write to me (also looking for a male vocalist for another track, so if you want to do a Feat, write)

hoary heart
kind blaze
humble smelt
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A raw instrumental demo of a punk song I cooked up some time ago. The playing is a bit sloppy and the mix probably isn't that good but I think it's enough to get the point

blissful cliff
kind blaze
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nice!

versed remnant
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Honestly kinda banger I like the direction this is taking a lot now

wicked berry
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nice riff bro!

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woah synth too

versed remnant
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Synth go brr

versed remnant
wicked berry
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awesome

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its pretty badass

versed remnant
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Tyty

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I have no ideas on how to do vocals on this tho

wicked berry
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do you ever scream?

versed remnant
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I do screams thats my vocal style

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I just don’t know how to scream on it

wicked berry
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fc fry, yk

wicked berry
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i know what you mean

versed remnant
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Its like idk how to fit this groove

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Cuz

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Its groovy as fuck

wicked berry
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indeed

versed remnant
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I just don’t know how to work vocals into it

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I think i’ma try some early bmth style frys on it or some miw screams

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Idk

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I’ll figure it out

versed remnant
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FIRE

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MASTERPIECE

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BRAVO

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ENCORE

wicked berry
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lmao ty

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i do alotttt of brainrot symphony stuff

versed remnant
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I liked the violins

wicked berry
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you can probably find more by scrolling up lmao

wicked berry
versed remnant
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They were

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Short

wicked berry
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metropolis

versed remnant
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And nice

wicked berry
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stacatto

versed remnant
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I have an orchestral black metal waltz I made somewhere on my pc

wicked berry
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damn that sounds fire just from the description

wicked berry
versed remnant
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It’s 3/4 as are waltz’s, it uses violins and shit the most un black metal instruments and shit for a beautiful intro and then the tremming starts and screams

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And its beautiful

wicked berry
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amazing

versed remnant
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I needa find that again

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It was fire

wicked berry
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lmk if you do

versed remnant
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I think this is the best I'm gonna get out of the vocals

kind blaze
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Guys we still searching for female vocals! If you interested DM me

tribal orbit
fringe geode
kind blaze
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find someone who would sing it more fun)

kind blaze
fringe geode
kindred scaffold
wet breach
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need opinions on this riff

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came up with it in like 15 minutes or something

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i get my inspo for my riffs from knocked loose and to the grave stuff so idk

tribal orbit
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but I wanna re-record my cleans

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shit's pissin me off

versed remnant
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I need thoughts on this concept idea for a song from y'all por favor

versed remnant
tribal orbit
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it's cyber-punk esque

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guitar mixing still needs work

scarlet brook
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kind of ripped off Diamond Construct and mixed in some other riffs. any tips/opinions?

versed remnant
tribal orbit
wet breach
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or you could quad track them

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makes the sound super huge

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but i genuinely have no fucking clue how to mix thats just advice i was shared by my buddies dad whos a sound guy

versed remnant
wet breach
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thats odd it sounds like its in the center

hollow tulip
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some project i made quite some time ago while trying to "borrow" the Fear Factory style of industrial metal
this is a remix of Heian Alien (fyi)

tribal orbit
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is the track panned pre-fx? cuz ik thats a thing in some daws

versed remnant
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But on the electronic one i sent its rythym on right and lead on left

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Two tones playing for the most part the same thing but some alternations

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I hear that a lot in edpecially deathcore

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Like pray for plagues

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The lead tone is left and rythym is right

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You hear it very heavily during the solo

tribal orbit
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The synth is dual tracked, yeah, I hear that

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but the guitars def feel narrow

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idk why dawg

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unless I look at your mix, I won't know

scenic bronze
ripe elk
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hello people what do you think about this riff I just cooked up? and yes I know I need to retrack the clean guitar

wet breach
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tried doing some djenty stuff

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any thoughts?>

swift slate
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made a short thingy to try out my new MIDI keyboard i got for my birthday 👀

tribal orbit
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it deec tho

tribal orbit
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jkjk

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I think an eery synth with a basic heavy drum beat behind it would help it out

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like a pad with some vinyl distortion

tribal orbit
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very bassy tho

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@fringe geode

versed remnant
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I finally stopped using tonocracy yesterday cuz I finally learned how to properly use fx chains

wet breach
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very mick gordon

wet breach
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working on this one has been fun

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any thoughts?

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specifically 39 seconds

kind blaze
native cedar
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Lmao I love my English class teacher, any thoughts on this? Btw the actual audio length is around 30-35 seconds so far

wicked berry
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good bass?

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anyone?

wicked berry
fathom jewel
fringe geode
hollow tulip
fringe geode
wicked berry
tribal orbit
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Hopefully will have it closer to finished in the next month or so. Lacks real Bass and Drums

fringe geode
tribal orbit
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Drums are fake and not programmed to sound too realistic

fringe geode
hollow tulip
hollow tulip
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it's slow and mostly palm muted with focus on groove

hollow tulip
sullen vector
versed remnant
narrow trail
cerulean storm
cerulean storm
cerulean storm
ruby sparrow
quasi summit
tribal orbit
tribal orbit
quasi summit
tribal orbit
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I think pre-EQ might be better tho

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That way you’re not sacrificing any time post-amp

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Tone*

swift slate
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something i made to try out the trivium drums and the GGD cab contenders plugin

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it's not mixed in any way tho

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btw there is no GGD cab contenders on the cleans

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only on the distorded guitars

fringe geode
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Personally I really dislike Gojira's cabs. Other than 1st cab for cleans, I generally really dislike them.

quasi summit
fringe geode
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Even if I didn't own it Archetype Gojira is EVERYWHERE in metalcore now.

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Buster uses it with Vildhjarta and HLB.
Architects use it (I believe in alongside Josh Middleton's plugin with STL.)
Bleed From Within use it.
Ermin Hamidovic uses it in his mixes even tho in a convo with him, he admitted he didn't like it.
Obviously Gojira use it.

And that's just a few examples.

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Arc Gojira is becoming a standard now in metalcore, much like how Nolly was for a little bit.

swift slate
tribal orbit
covert elbow
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So far the best blegh i have done

rose plume
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nasty vocals

kind blaze
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(Hopefully the thing works)

covert elbow
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I legit dont even know what to call this

empty roost
craggy plover
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hi guys, I'm making an orchestral cover of Immortal by Lorna Shore. any thoughts on orchestration? still haven't touched dynamics and mix

gritty goblet
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Could someone help me. I am going crazy because I want to make a full song, but I always want to go for ✨ the perfect song ✨ and never get anything finished. Is this a good riff for a verse or should I indeed keep iterating it

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I have this issue with pretty much all my riffs

versed remnant
real harness
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Hey everyone. I've finally released my first song with vocals. And I'd really love some feedback on it. Also on the video, because I just put it together in my bedroom, and don't know much about mv making. I'd really appreciate any feedback.
https://youtu.be/o7KFUdg9A3A?si=GQ3Vlt-2N-Kh8DOi

fringe geode
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So I wanted to make music like the game Nier but instead I made this short test riff thingy. @tribal orbit @swift slate @wicked berry

wicked berry
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Oh that goes hard

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I like it alot

fringe geode
wicked berry
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I get that lmao

fringe geode
# wicked berry I get that lmao

BTW I've switched up my tones on this one. Normally Im using the Mesa Mark IIC+ for my main rhythms and one of the Archetypes for guitar fx. But I'm using the Soldano SLO-100 for my rhythms and the Mesa for my guitar fx.

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And I've completely switched over to EZD3 for drums.

wicked berry
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Oh! That's interesting

wicked berry
fringe geode
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I stopped because I like switch kit pieces on the fly.

wicked berry
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Nice

wicked berry
fringe geode
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Plus actually learning how to actually mix drums instead of using premixed ones is fun and EZD3 has a lot of natural drum sounds.

fringe geode
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Either the first or 2nd one that just released.

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Those kits are just chef's kiss

wicked berry
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Oh I agreee

wicked berry
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27 or something inch china blew me away

fringe geode
wicked berry
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I'm a drummer now and that stuff is still ludicrous to me

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Never seen that before

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Humongous

fringe geode
wicked berry
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Well I actually haven't had any set of drums for the longest time, and had to live off of practicing at school, my friends house, and music stores, but I recently got a roland td 0 something pretty damn basic but if I could choose any kit I'd go with pearl 9 piece something massive

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Also, at least 2 bells and 1 stack are required,

fringe geode
wicked berry
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Gretsch kits are wonderful

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They have nice tone

fringe geode
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Yes siirrr

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Cymbals being sabian are a must.

wicked berry
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Also I might need Danny careys kit ExcitedNik

wicked berry
fringe geode
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Zildians are pretty good though. Darker than I'd like but still nice.

wicked berry
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Yes agreed

fringe geode
wicked berry
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Ah yeah that plugin makes good use of them

fringe geode
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Do they really have that sheen and clarity to em.

wicked berry
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For sure

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I think so

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Austin archeys cymbals prove it

fringe geode
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Austin uses Meinl?

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Damn

wicked berry
wicked berry
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And they're BEAUTIFUL

fringe geode
wicked berry
fringe geode
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They're really snappy.

wicked berry
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No I haven't, but I wanna

fringe geode
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A really nice ring to em.

wicked berry
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That sounds real nice

fringe geode
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DWs are great kits. Bit of an aquired taste but I like em.

wicked berry
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I'll try one out if I see one

fringe geode
wicked berry
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Oh I love his kit from ggd

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It's great

fringe geode
wicked berry
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Ahhh I see

cerulean storm
fathom jewel
craggy plover
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the bass solo was on point too

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congrats

craggy plover
versed remnant
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Little update to a concept I had come up with

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I wanna change up the drums some more still

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and add some more alternations to the main riff

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but

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still just in the drawing board phase

fathom jewel
kind blaze
fathom jewel
runic adder
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I love knocked loose

swift slate
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ngl i'd gladly like like to have a look at the cabs and mic you used for that tone 👀

cerulean storm
runic adder
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Gojira half-wet octave on the wow pedal
nameless hexdrive
gojira head
ENG, two Orange, and mesa trad cabs

swift slate
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thx and i have both the gojira and nameless plugin too

livid dragon
runic adder
runic adder
cerulean storm
runic adder
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Does it happen even without the limiter?

cerulean storm
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I can check.

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No, it does not. The limiter would appear to be the problem.

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But I need it in order to make the audio the same volume as the standards on most platforms.

runic adder
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I’ll take a listen when I get back to my pc. If anything I can help with the limiter settings

runic adder
# cerulean storm

I'm still hearing it around those sections, do you have crossfades on your guitar tracks? Like, going from one take to another?

cerulean storm
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No, I don't think so. I'll take a look.

tribal orbit
tribal orbit
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reminds me of metallica with the riff

craggy plover
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two amp sims are too heavy for my cpu along with drums and mix stuff

craggy plover
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sounds like overcompressed or overlimited

runic adder
wicked berry
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Don't diss the mix it's supposed to sound how it sounds

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By that I mean it's supposed to sound like your speakers are breaking

runic adder
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bwoooooooooow

floral swallow
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I think drums are little to loud and that's the main issue, but i still want to hear others opinion what i could potentialy do better

floral swallow
floral swallow
wicked berry
tribal orbit
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you can probably widen the guitar and bring it up in the mix. The synth arp sounds cool, but I think it could benefit from a little delay (i think?)

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Also that snare has a weird treble-y TANG at the end of the hit you might wanna fix with some EQ or soemthing

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buut, besides that, it reminds me of like a secret hideout theme song

floral swallow
floral swallow
tribal orbit
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it just sounds dissonant otherwise

tribal orbit
floral swallow
tribal orbit
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help make them pop rather than drowned out and all that

floral swallow
tribal orbit
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You have to add a 100% wet delay to teh copied track and make it roughly 8-10 ms behind the original

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you can also use a doubler function, if you're using a Neural DSP amp

tribal orbit
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just copying and panning left and right will just make it louder down the center channel cuz thats just how sound works yknow

floral swallow
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You were right, snare is in f# and metalic sound was in A so very close, thats why it sounded dissonant

floral swallow
tribal orbit
tribal orbit
floral swallow
tribal orbit
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cuz if it's a sim, you can create a new track with the midi for each group of hits (1x snare, 1x kick, 1x toms, 1x cymbols)

tribal orbit
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create a chain for each group

floral swallow
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I could render it one for one

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But ill try it with dynamic eq and if it wont work ill do it

tribal orbit
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Render each hit track as a .wav for the entire song

tribal orbit
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plus if you do each individually, you can dial in each tone with compression, saturation, etc

floral swallow
tribal orbit
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it's tedious at first, but it;s worth

floral swallow
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I think it still sounds better than the first

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But now drums are to quiet i think in the breakdown 😭

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Fuck it, ill fix it later

tribal orbit
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The guitars still sound narrow, but otehrwise, it sounds better ye

floral swallow
tribal orbit
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Did you delay one of them?

floral swallow
versed remnant
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starting my music tech final btw

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this is the intro I have

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@tribal orbit are my guitars wide yet

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I have

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two tones on left and right lead tracks

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which are harmonies

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btw

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and

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I have rythym

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with a third tone

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right down the middle

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as well as bass

tribal orbit
tribal orbit
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Do you have screenshots of your DAW? Just so I can see what you have going?

runic adder
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what're you using for the tone?

tribal orbit
# versed remnant

The bass is kinda goofy, but the lead tones do feel wide. Now you just gotta do the same for teh rythm

versed remnant
versed remnant
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I think the reason the lead is wide is cuz its properly dual tracked and playing two different things

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So i might not have rythym wide immediately j by doing the same

versed remnant
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Its pretty much the same for all guitar tracks only difference is the amp sim to change the tone

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Its three guitar tracks rn

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So three different amp sims

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Actually wait

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I took off the amp sim on the rythym

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So that doesn’t have an amp sim

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I wanted rythym to be very driving and crunchy

runic adder
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let me guess:
TSE SDM-2, fortin nameless, GGD cali?

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sorry im being an asshole rn, what amp sim(s) and cabs are you using?

versed remnant
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LePoulin Hybrit on the right track, LePoulin also on the lefy but i forgot exsctly which one, PRO F.E.T. Dist pedal, 7Q EQ (mids pushed on pre, balanced on post), and NadIR with a jaguar cab sim

runic adder
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oh that's new

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and what about the rhythm guitar?

versed remnant
runic adder
runic adder
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I think I'm just tripping then

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mightve just been because the bass is matching with the leads instead of the rhythm

versed remnant
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For the intro yeah it matches lead and rythym

tribal orbit
gleaming haven
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I thought I was cooking but in retrospect maybe I was burning the food

versed remnant
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leads are playing two different things

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I think thats the only reason it works

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also i just added a kick ass chorus

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no verse yet

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or words

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just the chorus instrumentals

tribal orbit
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you gotta dual track, pan hard left, hard right

versed remnant
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but

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I always do that

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you always say its thin sounding

tribal orbit
tribal orbit
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or just one and copy-pasting it

versed remnant
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i just added a second track for rythym right now its just copy and paste but do you like the tones I used on rythym tracks?

tribal orbit
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Dude I genuinely don't know why that doesn't sound right

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very legitimately

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cuz you did the same thing as your lead

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The tone isn't bad, but the overall mix is kinda... weird?

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idk how else to say it atm cuz sleepy

versed remnant
versed remnant
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I'm so confused

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idk what im doing wrong

tribal orbit
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the left take sounds fine, and wide

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the right... doesn't? Maybe it's a leveling issue

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the bass sample set your using sounds off, thats definitely one big thing

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Should be an octave down? or less attack, I think

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It just stands out in the mix too much

versed remnant
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So i should turn bass down and fix my right track?

runic adder
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iit's a good start, I'd say bass down, guitars up, make sure right and left tracks are balanced with each other

kind blaze
kind blaze
tribal orbit
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Using them as effects rather than full amp sims

runic adder
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If I really wanted to, I could run this entire tone out of Gojira, and I could help you with that if you'd like. I just like fortin nameless's hexdrive over gojira's od pedal, and I'm running GGD contenders for the cabs

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GGD has the convenient feature to export presets as IRs, so I could make a lite version of the tone that runs native to gojira lol

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well not really lite but you get the idea, def lighter on resources

craggy plover
craggy plover
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but somehow knocked loose tone is dirtier but with a lot a punch

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i don't know how they mixed it

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but the chugs in kl are explosive

runic adder
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this is just an approximation that I liked

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general idea was distortion pedal into 5150 into mesa 412, that swollen pickle pedal does a lot for em too

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idk what they did in studio but ik live they run quad cortex into a preamp into actual 4x12s, and that's not something I can emulate with just plugins lol

craggy plover
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kl sounds great live