#Feedback Requests
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It's great! One critique would be the drums sound a little robotic in some places, but that's a common issue with a lot of productions so it's fine. Instrumental death metal is always great, but I do love some good old death metal vocals
thank you for the feedback! i know that the drums are not perfect, simply because they are programmed. i try to use pre recorded midi grooves for drums but sometimes its just not possible to find what i want. so i have to squeeze in some handmade drum riffs. and they don't sound realistic. for the vocals, i was supposed to practice metal vocals this summer but family biz kept me from practicing so i'm stuck with making instrumental :/
A good way to quickly "humanize" programmed drums is in your midi editor, randomize the note position just a little bit and the note velocity by like +/-5. It's not much, but it makes a whole lot of difference in feel
I don't always do that though, but I should
hmmmmm i'll keep that in mind ty so much! my programmed midi tracks are always on 127 velocity and i only adjust the velocity when i'm gonna do blastbeats or ghost snares π but i'm totally keeping the advice you just gave in my mind and implementing on my future tracks
hey guys. this here is a track I've been working on the last few days. I'm sorta new to recording and mixing. personally I feel like the mix is very off balance in places and could use some work overall, so does anyone know where I could improve on this?
Hello everyone, I wanna buy strings to play electric guitar in tune B, without them turnning into spaghetti. Any reccomendations please?
drop b or b standard?
either way these strings would work well
Drop B, sorry π¬
Thanks ππ»ππ»
if you want looser strings 11-56 can be an option too
I might, I've been playing in Standard and drop D my entire life, I wanna try some heavier stuff now
Clean vocals could defenitley need some re-recording. Otherwise it sounds pretty good!
what is your vocal chain? and do you have spoterfiy?
Separately
any tips or thoughts? Not done yet but i think its interesting
not specifically from you Kirva, this was just a post i was making after
maybe ill ad some compression
i used multiple layers, on the clean vocals and shout vocals. i did not put many FX, on them. not even autotune.
only a small part of vocodex.
instead of a distorted lead i would use a clean amp for the bridge part and the bass sounds a bit off at 0:30
hmmm


alright, the bass is getting replaced anyways so thats good to know. I was using a very rough midi bass as a filler as I do not want to track my actual bass right now, I would prefer not to touch that thing anytime soon. And the lead I will take into account, thank you!
so I just updated my FL studio and started playing with the built in sample store so i accidentally made an i prevail song which is not something i want to be associated with lmao. the original goal was spirit box, hence the name of the old version, spirt. i can already imagine the overcompressed vocals.
im prob going to put a white noise syth matching the guitar during the chorus
and do linkin parky during second verse
and to think i got on today with the goal to make a thall part
Nothing stopping you from adding Thall to it π
need tips on this mix as well as someone willing to add bass cuz octave shifting my guitar always sounds shitty
Bass programming with some free synths can always work
do u know any decent free bass vsts?
MODO bass (the free version) comes to mind first as it sounds incredible, but the free version can only tune so low
here's something I did with it
you see since the base tuning is probaby e standard I probably couldnt tune it to drop A could I?
that sounds sick tho
It can go to drop A
MODO BASS 2 is the expanded edition of IKβs industry-first physically modeled bass virtual instrument, adding 8 new basses, including new fretless and upright options, a new patterns section with tons of new grooves, advanced performance controls and more ways to enter the MODO BASS world.
I highly recommend using Bass Professor MK2 for any bass tone
I use it instead of my own bass in recordings
with bass
I think i might need to turn down the bass a bit tbh
Idk
Mixing is hard
I cant afford ez mix
fairfair
how do I mix deathcore
I've never done deathcore really
which is weird its my favorite genre
Start by adjusting levels, then put in a very light saturator, followed by parallel compression, eq, clipper and finally a limiter
I mean, that's how I would go about it
I understood nonenof that
Except the ew and limiter part
Eq
I know how to do that
You guys know any tricks for switching from writing in a scale to writing chromatically?
Rn I'm in harmonic minor but wanna transition smoothly to a chunky slam type riff
Bell.
What a bell
drum bell
cut all instrumentals
have a full bar
and on the third click
bell
Chat what do we think
Yesyes
Best transition ever
Or like a double snare hit
Double snare hit i really prefer only when then next riff is gonna be really slow and chunky
Or pause and china cymbal
This is true too
Not bad, drums are too loud though. Also you gotta double track the stuff
The vocals could be mixed a bit better. Can't figure out what sepcifically it needs, but some light delay and reverb + EQ would help
guitars & bass could come up slightly imo, the lead at the end could also go down slightly
vocals feel a little dry; some light saturation, reverb, and delay could do some good
pretty good though, good job
what if its more of a just a heavily reverbed pitch scratch noise on the guitars?
that is what it is. realy short reverb with distortion lol
realized how much string noise I get when I play
any tips for cutting the noisy shit out?
light noise gate before the amp and pedals
This is just a test of some new riffs I wrote earlier today, drums are not final.
It sounds like the attack and release on the mix compressor/limiter is too slow, making transient peaks after every pause.
The guitars would require some more (or less?) or different eq-ing, mainly cutting out those low and high ends to make space for mid mid frequencies as they sound muddy and harsh. I recommend a high cut at around 4khz to 8khz ish and a low cut at 200hz ish, then boosting some 1khz and 500hz
Also, try either panning the guitars 90% instead of 100%, or adding a mono track with a high cut at 500hz in the center with maybe a 50 millisecond reverb all wet on it to add some depth
That's a lot of info, but not much to actually do
if the mids sound muddy, why cut the highs and lows? shouldn't you just cut out some of the muddy mid areas?
Sorry I meant string or pick scrape lol not pitch scratch
I just typed it wrong
ehhh prolly a mix of both, since there are bends n stuff in the riffs π§
Sometimes, some frequencies make others sound muddy because they mask some dynamics. It's weird I know
I think a high cut at 4K is excessive though
I think that might just warrant tone tweaks at that point
Could I see an example of this working for you? Iβm genuinely curious, those moves feel way too sharp to me π
Sure, if you can send me a guitar track π
4k might be excessive in most cases yes, but the point is to exaggerate the roll back of the highs then adjust the cut off frequency as needed
@kind trail send this person a guitar track please I really want to know what the rock is cooking
I might be completely wrong too, but we never know until we try
First hour learning this riff Iβd say Iβm not doing horribly tbf
Yes my low string is missing π
Or high idk what u call it
was playing around with some ai and created a masterpiece
that made my fucking pants explode that sounds SO GOOD π π
though jus for dramatic effect, maybe add some cymbal painting jus for a lil spice lol?
I think it's worth a try
Thank youβ¨
Gonna be one of the songs for the album
Gonna send another song there today
PLEASE let me know when you release, or if youve already released anything.
shits brutal asf man
I will definitely warn you
Thanks man
Less gain, more gate
Very bassy mix. Its hard to tell whats being played when it comes to guitar
intro went so fucking hard damn
This is fire
looking at this again, do you mean a dip at those regions?
or a straight high cut/low cut filter?
Straight cut, though it can be a smooth gradual cut
oh boy
once I get back to my workstation I'll send some guitar tracks, I need to hear what you're cooking
straight cuts there go against everything I know about mixing guitars lol
I'm cooking brain damage atm but I'll show you what I mean
aight
This one I hard-ish cut at arround 5.8khz, and at arround 100hz since it's tuned lower, I wanted more low end
And I would probably cut some more low-end to leave room for a thicker bass
what's different between "no processing" and "no eq"?
Before the eq in the fully processed version I added compression and saturation
yeah
I thought it disingenuous to just say no eq while I also removed the compressor and saturator
that is a lot of saturation lmao
Only in the high end, yet the eq gets rid of the harshness
I process my guitars pretty differently so it was just hard to believe a high cut at 5k
but yeah you really saturate that high end so it makes sense
the "only eq" version is without compression and saturation, so you can hear that the eq doesn't get rid of anything important in the tone and even de-muddies it
the "no eq" version isn't really necessary in the comparison, it's just there as a token of honesty in the processing
alright
I popped it on one of my own guitar chains just to hear it
def not something I'd use much because I don't feel it changes anything for me but I see where you're coming from
thanks for walking me through it through my doubts tho
actually nvm you're cooking there I just dislike the high and low passes
It doesn't really change much on the individual track, it's in the context of a mix that it really makes a difference
The low end will clash with the bass and the kick and get muddy real quick. Just a warning
Also, the high mids and high-end are much clearer in the first clip
the first clip is the new version, yes
I really like this idea, Natty
reminds me of old megaman x and zero
I'd say thanks but it's a cover lol
damn
hold on I can send you the song
kk mr man
https://youtu.be/GIue4OB1D0g?si=d5GmHAiziQM1a0lk
original vs my cover
The end of an era (maybe lol idk)
π» === S T U F F === π»
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In the meantime- working on an easycore cover of Stick Season by Noah Kahan. STyling it after ADTR's cover of Over My Head (Cable Car)
i think I fucked up the kick in this version of the mix lmao
Yeah, it gets kinds washed out
I think this is the one with the good kick
yeah, i skipped to 1:19 and it's instantly better
good thing I didn't save version 3 in my daw (:
sounds fun
yah fs
I find it super funny. The original's a folk track, yknow
but it's all powerchords
like
they're all perfect 5ths
so it translates to Pop-Punk and EasyCore very easily
also helps that it's in a major key
experimented a bit on this one
This is actually fire bro! do you plan on adding vocals?
I'm trying to write some swancore and I'm kind of blocked, but here's something I wrote (it's midi guitar, I can't play this π )
Does anyone want to help me write some widly-woobly weewoo riffs?
i can't do vocals but if i could i would tbh
Same
Same
I could try, a fine addition to my backlog
japanese scale idea
Tried to do a lil bit of Lazarus by Angelmaker
I can't get the highs though
So I don't even try
I also gave this part of What I Would Give a shot
Been listening to a lot of metallica recently
you can try if you want
Hell yeah
I was supposed to use loops for the assignment I got bored thi
Its all using synths in soundtrap bro i canβt
I took music tech to get better at mixing and the teacher said hed probably have to ask me for help
Iβm actually so upset about that
Fuck soundtrap
I'm looking for a first guitar, and listen- I have a HUGE disability in purchasing, and that is the need to stand out. I am originally a bassist, I just wanted to try out guitar (play bfmv the poison riffs until my fingers bleed) Back to the disability thing- I have a tendency to standout, an example of this is instead of buying cheap normie squier basses, I bought a manly ibanez one, so here I am asking
Is it better buying a used Cort VX-4X explorer off of facebook marketplace rather than going with a mainstream squier?
I've been trying to write the chorus for one of my songs recently and now I really need some unbiased opinions on it, because I'm not really sure about this chorus.
I think the idea is there, though the vocals lack power, either because of mixing or lack of projection.
For mixing them so they seem more powerful, you could saturate them, add a very long delay (1/1 note delay, 1/2 note delay, 1/2 dotted note delay, something like that) followed by a long reverb
If they do lack projection, then layering with harmonies would compensate
A mix of both those tricks would do wonders I think
thx, will try
What about now?
I might've overdone the saturation a bit, but idk
Maybe a bit yeah, try duplicating the track and removing the saturation from the copy
Like this?
can I try something with the isolated vocals and then tell you if it works?
No worries, I think balance is the thing that needs working on rn
Hey guys sorry if i seem a little weird, but my family is struggling hard metal is the only way out for me but i dont have a band as dedicated as i am i am such in a bad place right now everything feels like shattering into pieces
Til The Day Collapses - 7 7 7 | (instrumental by Check The Distortion)
follow check the distortion:
https://checkthedistortion.bandcamp.com/
i only present my vocals on this channel and supporting other artist's projects / instrumentals.
first time programming drums does it sound too "robotic"
how is the built in sample store working? are there freebies also?
if i update fl studio can i use my older projects?
the laziest of covers 
It works great, you can just drag anything you want in, there are tons of freebies. my projects saved over but there might be certain features that havent been ported so I'm not sure. I was using a really old version of FL before, i forgot what it was and there are so many useful features in 21. It is worth it and you can always just backup your projects.
I added a bit more work to the cover so it's not 100% a lazy cover
but easycore of a Noah Kahan song is pretty simple tbh
Track pretty much just uses powerchords
Loving the mare pfp
I tune the guitar to drop D and pitch shift it to drop C# an octave lower. I use the Archetype Gojira plugin
And Paralax for bass
I don't think the tone is very good but it sounds decent in the mix
Sounds sick
what plugins do you use for the symphonic part? I just need orchestral instruments and piano
and if you suddenly know, I'm also looking for a synthesizer plugin
All of my plugins are free
I use bcc orchestra
And for that I use kontakt with a plugin called analog dreams which comes with the native instruments komplete start free pack
Ah, makes sense. Archetype gojira is so fun.
I didn't use it in the video I just put in, but I use it for so many things it is incredible
If you want more of a naturey ambient synth another one on kontakt that comes with komplete start that's really good is ethereal earth
You should just get komplete start due to its incredible instruments all for free
It has most of the things I use now
Including a choir
One of my favorites is raum, which is a reverb plugin
some melodic death metal experiment i think
additional instruments will be added soonβ’οΈ
Damb that's sick sounding
Reminds me of City of Evil stuff but heavier
So good shit 
Glad you appreciate it
the idea came after listening to The Black Dahlia Murder a bit too much and wanted to implement some cool classical sounding stuff
so i had to make it before i forget
based
Thank
Gonna try it!
That is awesome
Thanks
I hope the whole album turns out great
I'm sure it will, are you putting it on spotify?
Redid an old clip because I got bored
segment of divine stigmata by disembodied tyrant
Do you use distrokid? I do and I honestly like it alot
I used to use freshtunes but there are a lot of problems with it so when I release this album I will probably buy a subscription to Distrokid
do you have a band&]
?
vouch, distrokid is a very good service
bass tone
I have like 3 running projects, and 1 in progress (the one in progress includes the video i posted earlier)
Im thinking about buying a distrokid musician plus
I have ultimate
nice
Its very nice
thanks
I also wanted to buy Ultimate at first, but I'm a student and I don't have a permanent income, so I decided to save money and buy Musician Plus.
thats really good
yeah, im 14 and convinced my parents to pay so π€
where i can listen your songs?
haha nice
i have a really dumb slam project that has really cringe theming
ill post a song in a sec
also the mixing isnt good on it, but that kind on purpose because its slam
the sound in my old albums was terrible so i even deleted them from spotify
i recorded first album on a phone
so yeah
damn, thats actually impressive
quality sucks
i started off early recording a couple years ago using capcut on an old ipad
never posted that shit obviouslt
https://open.spotify.com/track/738Ccr8PqtXLzCdV4ILck1?si=b66cb6a73b004deb this was before i could scream as good as i can now, but i still think its alright. also theres a really dumb sample in the middle i almost regret putting in. it was hard to find though
really really dumb sample
and i had a friend do half of the vocals
the pig squeals were me though
my main project though will definitely take another year or so
its going to be an ep
and its all over the damn place
You used to play better than I do now.
youre wild dude
Thanks alot
im not a big fan of slam but it sounds sick
yea me neither i did it cus its easier than deathcore haha
im dabbling in black metal too
gonna wait for it
just havent released any of it
i used to do some blackened death or something like that
im like just learning lower ish screams and neep feedback
that sounds sick
thats hard question
now 3 tracks out of 12 are ready and a new member has joined us, from Russia, a vocalist from America and me from the Czech Republic
so the work takes some time, especially for the vocalist
mr worldwide
It all becomes funnier when you consider that I'm not Czech
I'm just living there
damn
I also don't know anything about our vocalist
thats funny
he writes the lyrics and sings, I don't even know his real name
wow
and the new member didn't even communicate with the vocalist once
Fucked up band
But it's fun
my symphonic deathcore project is just me, and some advice on songwriting and lyric writing from my friend
I am in charge of all the instruments and mixing as well as everything related to the band, the vocalist writes the lyrics and sings and the new member will also be a guitarist and another vocalist
you're doing damn cool even despite your age and if you take that into account then you're just damn good
thanks alot, i hope to eventually get a part time job so i can afford the non free trial version of archetype gojira and a better drum machine
Thats a lot of responibility (i say this as I'm stuck in a similar situation)
it sure is
yeah sometimes i get so damn tired of it
So fuckin real lmao
the listening is not growing and it seems like I am not very good at the skill
Of playing
But it's still fun
anyone who knows stuff about false chord is this any good
Sometimes more sometimes less
I even went to study at a music school but I still don't really believe that I will become better but it's worth trying
that would be fun
I'm not a singer but
For me
That's hard
Thanks, disembodied tyrant is peak
Sometimes I think about becoming a vocalist or a drummer, but I can't sing at all
I need to work on this
Sounds fine to me
The discord notification in the middle π
Lmao
Need to edit my current setup, my room has too much reverb atm to properly record vocals
I have a whole fucking church in my room
All the reverb on these vocals is from the room π
do distrokid mixing are good?
i like it
would put it in my playlist
very iffy
If you want, I can try my hand at making a master for you

what is iffi?
that would be sick if you dont mind to
like its already sounds good i think
but i dont sure
Iffy is an adjective, typically meaning ambivalence, leaning on a more negative connotation
so it's like "eh"
yknow?
If you send me a .wav file or something of the track pre-master, I'll try my hand at it
depending on the track, you might need to send me stems so I can make everything sit nice and neat
its too big for discord but i can send you my google drive
what song is this?
The end of an era (maybe lol idk)
π» === S T U F F === π»
The next (and final (allegedly)) track in the Destabilize series! as the "4b" in the title suggests, this is an alternative ending to the "4a" that was [CODE PHANTOM]!
[Spoilers?] In 4a Sweetiebot realises that she'll never be free of the violent corruption deep inside her and decides it'...
Thanks
Sounds good. Stems or the regular .wav?
but if you don't mind, i would like to send them to you tomorrow or by the end of this week
but I will immediately send you access to the folder in Google Drive so you can listen to the track, it doesn't have vocals yet but I've already uploaded it there
i think steams would be better
ye
sounds good
just send em whenever
Update on this cover. Rerecorded all the cleans. Didn't have to repitch anything except the opening line. That was a nice surprise
just from the sneak peak, is it listenable?
Me when I cover Crewcabanger for my music tech class to probably listen to again cuz thats what happened with the peace sells cover (It had the highest rating I suck at this and I'm still so far above the skill curve)
I hate soundtrap sm
Just released a new song, what do you guys think?
The vocals are probbaly the part that needs the most work
Slee deprived+sore throat already planned on rerecording them today
Thats really all I can do instrumental wise in soundtrap
Tbh
This is awesome
ayeee thank you
someone want to help me do something with this?
Nevermind I lost the stems... or I don't remember where I put them
same with this...
I really need to work on my organizational skills
Me when new mix of track. Still haven't rewritten the drums tho
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OuXSg8qA_iv5ysPIDBQasaJGiMNzPweO/view?usp=sharing is the bass too loud?
i love a loud clanky bass but i was wondering if its listenable with it being that loud
nice tone
lol after re listening a while later yes its way too loud
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1V2wwV6yGLCuavfNesQKdDadAqp8RrLP8/view?usp=sharing improved version. thoughts?
tyty
short orchestral thall
The mix certainly feels like a wall of sound
which is good
I feel like the orchestral stuff could be EQ'd a bit better so each part has it's own little cut in the mix tho
itβs more of a background element
*I say this as I'm struggling to mix a Koto/Shamisen into a song atm
*
I'm aware, but it'd still be a nice little piece of ear candy
yknow
i didnt go perfect on the mix, things will be fixed

songwriting mostly is my concern
I believe in you
true
and thats so fair
i could help if you need
iβll listen when i get home from skewl
kk mane
that's sick
what're you struggling with? sounds fine to me
aye thank you
The koto sounds too ice-picky
even after EQ and filter to try to cut the treble
ice-picky how?
The breakdown/bridge part sounds fine, but the verse just sounds
idk
maybe I'm just losing my mind
Maybe I am just losing it lmao
That's the part I feel iffy about but if you say it's fine, maybe I'm just going insane
Where can
I
Listen to this
Mastapiece
Only have stuff on YouTube for now, I can dm you my channel if you want
Please I love it
This is very good.
I wish I my mix could sound like that π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯
yo thank you bro, that really made me smile π₯π₯
iβm thinking on mixing peoples songs for free for a short period of time to see if they like the results
No problem, I would listen to full song it would be on my on repeat playlist
Can I try lol?
if you know how to exports stems and midi
I'll figure it out
alright, youβll be my first victi- i mean.. customer π
Lmao
This is what I was thinking if having you try out
ill take a listen real quick
Also if for whatever reason like the tone of anything is off or if I need to add anything just lmk cus I'm an inexperienced 14 year old who doesn't know anything about mixing
i can re amp everything if you need me to lol
mixing metal is probably one of the hardest genres
Yeah that would be chill
i've been doing it for probably close to 2 years
but i've been making music for 6 years
very lorna shore like
i could mix it
It's been less than a year for me
Nice
if you're still 14, you have potential
the mix isnt bad
its audible
Why thank you
of course bro
That's a relief
trust me i've heard a lot of mixes, and they could use a ton of improvement
this one, its listenable, and enjoyable
yes, the mixing could use some improvement, but its not bad for only been doing it for less than a year
not bad, i have to say, you could try compressing the drums a bit, especially the snare, and put it louder in the mix
and see where the guitars fit after
Thanks alot
yeah ofc
also do you want the midi or the mono stems of the tracks that use midi
the midi
alright
do you have di tracks?
for di tracks i have only the bass and guitar
also damn what strings plugins are used?
reminds me of worm shepherd
perfect
do you need to know the plugins I use?
metropolis ark
if i just have the drum midi and the raw di tracks for the bass and guitar, i should be fine
but if you want the simular guitar sound, id like to know
its chill all my plugins are free
as long as its a nice classic crunchy deathcore tone
but i do use the ml sound labs stevie t djent god
on the thall preset
yea also its all good if im asking too much but are you able to mix like 3 songs? if you were willing to i can get like a whole server of people to give me a rating on the mix and give the info back to you
i just have an ep and struggle on mixing
but its all good if you can only do this one
i can try my best
i use bitwig as a daw so i can just replace the audio
lets see how things go
alright, take your time, just dm me them
pod farm 2, for the guitars
probably some getgooddrums for the drums
and my signature bass tone
nice
which ones do you have?
modern & massive and the periphery one
nice
oh and invasion
i could go for the modern and massive as long as it has a high snappy snare
it has a lot of options
ill give you some examples when i get the stems and midi
to see what you like
okay thanks
yeah ofc, just want to test my skill before actually providing services
and i strongly feel like people have a lot of potention in producing and songwriting, but struggle with mixing and master
which is why i want to help
yea fair enough
yeah im lucky
i'll make sure to try my best to get you that ep out
means alot to me
also im in the process of lyric writing and dont have vocals yet, are you experienced in mixing vocals at all? its fine if not lol
thats the one thing i struggle with
i've done it before, i can manage it, but its not gonna be perfect
ill try my best
thanks
ofc bro
also, what do you want me to credit you as on producer credits
"PVTHOS"
The Start of a Beat - Thoughts?
got it
start of a fun little project. thoughts?
The project I'm currently working on, I think you can guess the inspiration.
this needs hella work, and i was kinda just trying to learn FL Studio but i plan on making this a lot better once i get my audio interface
all i can think about is lincoln park
its very well made π π
Same here
Which interface do you have now?
none
What do you use?
mic
I used to record with a spark amp
Doesn't sound bad to me
This was not very pleasing
Oh sorry lol I misread though it said once you get a better one
But yea sounds pretty good
i preordered the spark 2 recently, its coming wednesday, is the amp good at all?
even if you have the first one
Oh sick! I have a spark 40, which is the first one and I love it so much. I can only imagine how much better the spark 2 is, after watching a ton of videos about it. I only don't like recording with it because there is a bit of latency and I can't find a tone that suites my recording style and it's generally a hassle, but it might be better on spark 2.
But overall I think it's great
oo niceee, yeah i got it for the soul purpose of practicing without having to plug my guitar into my computer/interface which is a whole hassle, plus having to connect it to a speaker if i wanted to play it out loud
i kinda just wanted an amp to bring around with me when i needed it, so it looks like itβs a good deal
Well it's a sick practice amp for sure if that's all you'll do
i was close to getting the spark 40 because iβm super impatient lol
Yep I bring my spark to school, it's a great size
I can agree
but i decided that i think it would be worth it just to wait however long it takes to arrive
iβm pretty stoked about it
yup, small but powerful
ayeee thank you bro! i really appreciate it!
yea ofc
another melodeath project sketch
Sounds awesome
Who's your main inspiration?
Glad you appreciate it
probably The Black Dahlia Murder
of course there are other influences like the Castlevania (Symphony of the Night) ost
I decided whynot. It's not really complete yet but hey might as well.
ok final review here!
How does the current intro mix sound everyone? I want opinions on things I can change before I get to far into production so I can figure out what sounds best so I'm not recording everything to where it sounds like shit
Iβll listen when I get to work and on my laptop
thoughts?
Thank you I will take this into note
I totally screwed over my filesave
so I lost it
but I remember how I played it
so
Lmao ty
does the basic idea i have fr this song even work? a lot of the playing is bad but rn idk if this even sounds good
what do you think of my lyrics?
"Is This Art?" Patch Notes Ver. 2:
-Added Cello
-Added Flute
BREE out of 10
I need some feedback on the mix
I wasn't sure but outside confirmation helps
Hi guys. Relatively recently, I decided to write and post my work on YouTube. I don't have much experience in mixing and other musical things, but I decided to write here in order to get feedback and maybe get advice on what I should study to improve my skills.
Be straightforward and strict. It's important for me to know my weaknesses.
If you like it, let me know too)
Good mood and fruitful creative success to allπ€
1st listen imo the mixing isn't too bad for someone without much experience in mixing
what i'd advice is double tracking the rhythm guitar since it sounds kinda narrow (basically recording your playing of your guitar twice and panning both of the recordings on extreme left and extreme right so it sounds wider)
keep in mind you don't have to do double tracking on the lead guitar (especially on shredding), if it's for ambience purposes or overall melody, imo maybe you can
and you should maybe raise the volume of the bass guitar to make it sound more powerful
imo your track "ready set die" sets all the checklists on the above
extended, added solo
the sweeping arpeggio part on the solo is inspired by Twilight Symphony by Thousand Leaves
Thank you very much. I will try and work on itπ
updated the mix a lil bit
Mainly the vocals, but some increased volume on the rhythm guitars
The kicks a little muddy in parts
And i think the rhythm is a little too compressed(?)
Good track tho
me like
glad you appreciate it
Where are the mids?
Wdym?
It sounds like the mids have been completely scooped out
Really? Doesnβt sound like taht at all on my end

I was actually considering lowering the mids
Weird
And do you mean the entire track or the guitars?
The whole mix
Thatβs strange
Cuz my master chain increases the low mids and leaves the high mids alone

Are you listening to this on mobile or pc?
And do you have audio enhancements disabled?
Cuz Iβm not getting that mid scoop at all
It wasn't a real mid scoop, just a surplus of 4k and lack of 500
sorry for the scare
Just for fun
Now the bass is too loud on export
What is wrong with my pc
Btw the track is really good
I will take look
Ty
I messed a little with it in my mastering chain
I'm doing some touch-ups with my master chain
to try to see what you mean with the EQ
A little tweaking, but I'm still really not hearing that big of a difference 
What I did basically
Ight, I'll do that on the EQ
Oh jeez thats a lot more than I have lmao
That for my adjustments π
Changed the original EQ8, added a second after the saturator that matches somehwat to what you did
and changed a little bit in the JST Max
left the JST Heat settings alone tho
gonna export lmk what you think
1 - EQ saturator
2 - Clean EQ
3 - Tape emulator
4 - Compressor/Limiter/Clipper with basic eq
EQ > Saturator 1 > EQ2 > Limiter > Saturator2 > Multiband clipper
Sounds good, the goal is to make it sound like you want though, I'm just a person on the internet who's picky π
Maybe I am too
Maybe a parallel compressor would make the load more easy to handle for your limitter and clipper, but that's optional
I don't think ableton has that and I don't have money for more plugins atm
My cpu is always at 100% usage and my renders take 3-5 minutes π’
My CPu never touches 100, but renders, especially on tracks with symphnic bits take like 5-10 minutes
A compressor with the mix knob at 80-90% I mean
My computer is old though
icic
I think mine just needs a good clean
Also the second saturator is also a compressor
Plus, a limiter is placed right before them too
Plenty of amazing free plugins on the market, no need to go for expensive or even paid ones
Fair, I do use a lot of free shiz
also does this sound better?
Same, I just use my paid ones because I feel guilty if I don't π’
Actually does
Thrashed and Frantic Futile have something weird going on mix wise, but all bangertracks
Thrashed has the same issue Smoking Gun had and the volume seems to fluctuate a little
frantic futile is just an eq thing like Smoking Gun
Like a tiny mini bit
Export sometimes messes up stuff
Now your turn, what if anything could I do better in my mix
I will listen in one moment. I use ASIO, so that won't play until I close Ableton
and I'm fixing up Trashed rq
You can always disable that if you want, though it will be at the cost of more cpu usage
With how chunky Trashed is...
Like at least 20 tracks are just symphonic bits and doo-dads
that takes a lot of my CPU and RAM
fair
I saved the master chain I used on Smoking Gun so I can use it on Trashed (and FF for after I listen to your track)
big brain
Galaxy brain moment. I always redo everything from scratch because I keep changing everything
That sounds great
Reminds me of One More by Beartooth, at least at the intro
There's a little too much room (reverb?) on the drums, mainly the toms. Could also pan the toms a bit more. The guitar feels a little too compressed. And idk if im going insane, but the kick feels a little on the soft side compared to the snare and toms?
but me like
I like the breakdown/bridge kind of dealio too
The guitars are a little too compressed you are right
a mix of a high scream and a low on that section would be angelic
The toms are actually pretty much just compressed and clipped and I removed a lot of them from the room track. The kick sounds a bit soft because I didn't want it to sound too loud or clicky, but that backfired a little
I had in mind some high sing-screams with tons of reverb for that section
I think a saturator at around 100-200hz would be good on the kick, thats what I did on Smoking Gun
What if
hear me out
high-sing scream with lows or gutterals dual tracked as backing tracks
mmmhhhh 
I can't sing-scream for the life of me. I can scream, I can sing, just not both π’
So I envy you
also looking up your band from yoru bio rn
We have one song out as of now
When you start?
Last december
We have plenty of songs on the backburner, but I can't record vocals rn because of thin walls in apartment π
Damn, founding to release was pretty quick for you guys
π₯²
I live in a college dorm and record in my room
Thank god my roommates dont care
We made the song as a collab, realized we worked well together, made the band and released the song
Thank you ^_^
yes
me and my bandmate sumeir did the same shit
we wrote a metal track together and decided "fuck it, lets make a band"
Granted, we originally scrapped the original 2 tracks we wrote until like recently
Calypso was the second song we ever wrote and I'm glad we waited until I was a better vocalist/guitarist/mixer before we went about releasing it
We also wrote a couple of parts of songs together before Unforgetting Lost, but it's the first we actually finished
I mean, you can always rerelease, it's good for the algorithm
Dawg, if you heard the initial versions of it, you'd understand
Real
I gtg to bed, got work in the morning, but I appreciate the help. I sent a friend request btw
Same here

almost done with this thing. pretty much gotta tweak my mids on the guitars a bit, get some vox in there and she's done
chat what can I change here
Personally I really like it, I wanna add some more drum alternations and vocals obviously but Idk about the mix
i tried mixing in radio mono. Now i cant tell if the mix is alright, or if it is just better than listening to something from the 30s.
If its not good please help ;-;.
It feels really bassy but im not sure if its my headphones since EQ is almost flat with lower mids.
i have no clue what im doing when it comes to mixing lol
Get the accompanying resources here:
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We're covering how to EQ any instrument, stock vs. premium EQ plugins, frequency masking, how to nail the low-end...
Are your headphones open or closed back?
closed akg k72
Mixing with those is really really tough.
I can't really give much feedback as I don't have anything good to listen on currently
No... You'd need something with a flat frequency response which I dont know any cheap headphones that offer that, most people recommend something like the dt990s and i have a pair but they still aren't great but might be the best "cheap" option. Headphones because they feed each ear directly makes it hard to judge the stero image well mixing.
Headphones do help bring out the quieter sounds out so they can make it easier to mix the really small details, purely mixing with just headphones is a really hard skill to get down though.
You can learn your headphones frequency response curve and mix based off of that but then again that's extremely difficult to judge and takes alot of time and practice.
Hopefully it helps with learning EQ that channel has lots of options for other things so if you are having issues look into their catalogs I bet they have answers
I just looked up the response on these AKGs if youre curious, there is a huge roll off at 10k that might explain another issue im having when i listen back through monitors. I thought my monitors were just really whiny, they are a little bit, others complained, but apparently these headphones just kill sound the second it hits 10k
weird mids boost, usually headphones give high bass and treble
Yea I had looked them up... What monitors are you using?
It is a weird FR
I'd recommend looking into setting up an EQ correction for them...
You could do the same for the headphones but the more you mess with the stuff then again more you risk negative distortion on the sound but it might be helpful for you.
thoughts on this angle for recording?
couldnt send the actual thing, file too big
My bandmates were angry at me because of what I did to this section. Can you guess what it is that made them angry?
I'm finishing up one song rn, that I was working on for a while because of technical difficulties. And I thought that it would be nice to get some feedback, so I know, what to improve on, or remove, etc (kinda new to vocals btw, so idk, just to take into consideration)... also it's like almost 3 am for me rn and I have exams next week, so I'll go to sleep rn probably
Honestly just a bit better mixing and this is a hit ngl
FL Studio is kinda tricky considering it was originally meant for EDM or RAP. I use it in my recordings too. I tried Reaper but it's just confusing for me
I do my mixing with gaming headphones from SteelSeries right now due to my cat chomping the wite to my AudioTechnica ones I had
Just don't mix with headphones... Only to pick on small details only time I throw them on.
eleine cover of i got permission to cover it.
Ia this getting too stupid?
Like, is the saxophone too much?
Or the hydrogen bomb sample?
this any good? inspired by immortal disfigurement's king
This better lead into the most disgusting deathcore riff + scream
or I will cry
cuz that damn good
tried some industrial manson weird electro on this
bass intro
that is really awesome dude
love it
The song has been written as well as finally having lyrics. Opinions?
Sounds pretty good
The guitar tone sounds nice
Agree
My only complaint would be the vocals, specifically how they're mixed
Exactly what I was going to say
The vocals sound a little bit to dry
Really good though
Some background harmonies would help
I think it sounds great in the parts where the song gets softer
But yeah, other than that, it sounds really solid
@wicked berry @tall aurora, thanks guys for the feedback! As a guitarist and former drummer, I know nothing about vocals or recording them, so the feedback helps!
ofc!!
Btw I use EZD2 to write my drums. I haven't upgraded to 3 yet but I plan to. But EZD2 is what I use to write drums 95% of the time. I use GGD for mixing purposes.
I used a combination OKW Aggressive Rock and Metal.
I added Scratch
So basically, there are 5 parts to this.
1: the normal DI with some mild compression and low pass EQ
2:
A blend between the NDSP darkglass and parallax
3: high pass eq into compressor to accentuate pick attack
4: DI an octave higher into guitar amp/cab for more mid definition
5: Sine wave with some minor processing underneath.
It's honestly a little overprocessed rn imo, and I'll probably rework my signal chain to something more reasonable but yeah π
I just use Parallax cuz it does all that shit for me lol.
Minus steps 4 and 5.
If you guys played DBZ BT2 back in the day, you might remember how hard its music goes
Well, since DB Sparking Zero is only 2 weeks away, I decided to make some kind of "synth metal" remix to celebrate
I hope you guys like it :3
(still in progress btw)
https://soundcloud.com/wkmusicofficial/dark-half-remix/s-VBcPIMvjFzL?si=544a9ddd7eda4a47851c53b9f4c2d9d7&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
The night rider is near...
'Fear of Change' out now!
https://soundcloud.com/wkmusicofficial/fear-of-change
#nightrider
the guitars may have a lot of low mids and the cymbals might have too much very top end
It's Neural's Mark IIC+ (with some Archetype Plini X sprinkled in) through ML Sound Labs' MIKKO 2 plugin, specifically the Mesa cab with V30s.
Nice
The instrumentals are the original. I only did the vocals
Got my wrist slapped for sharing this in general: Kublai Khan - Supreme Ruler. Original track stripped of vocals and redone by myself.
Any/all feedback is welcomed and appreciated; questions, comments, suggestions, etc... π€
Dawg, the file is empty 
it's .11 seconds long
If you click the link, it opens it in a browser. Not sure why it wonβt play here. And yeah, itβs just a clip. Youβll see
Yeah. Just a clip
nah dawg, I don't think you understand
Oh oh oh
its 0.11 seconds
oui
Hrmmm
Hahaha this cracked me up
Alright, stand by. Thanks for letting me know.
Negative
same issue
It's an encoder issue
I have no problems with my own .wav files
weird
Thatβs so strange. It works on my phone and my laptop.
idk, tis weird
im sorry, sometimes i cant resist the urge
to make the stupidest fucking shit
literally my lsd trips
put into a song
(i dont do lsd)
vocaloid
me when 578
sick tone
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZC_AsbbkQNB5llPG0uz8PQjB81yFsF6n/view?usp=sharing heavy riff, double drop d
I can hardly upload anything anymore
I keep having to use google drive
no sound
only after like 30 sec
I will check it out
but i love the riff and tone
Nice
Nice!!!
I put that in the wrong channel lol
I added a synth line. It's subject to change, but I think the rest of the track is solid. Also the really out of place synth during teh chorus is just a placeholder for vocal melody
just some thoughts would be appreciated
The guitars seem narrow
Still listening atm tho
So the intro teh guitars feel narrow. They hard panned?
Yeah they are
Well the very beginning isn't
that's just a single track i recorded of me playing through my amp picked up across the room by my mic
The very first part is not panned
yeah, no I get that
the rest of the intro is
You okay if I try mastering it rq?
Go for it!
kk
I figured it out
you need some form of "widening"
idrk how else to explain it
on which part?


