#Feedback Requests

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tired delta
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yea

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how is it

hazy tundra
# tired delta how is it

It's great! One critique would be the drums sound a little robotic in some places, but that's a common issue with a lot of productions so it's fine. Instrumental death metal is always great, but I do love some good old death metal vocals

tired delta
# hazy tundra It's great! One critique would be the drums sound a little robotic in some place...

thank you for the feedback! i know that the drums are not perfect, simply because they are programmed. i try to use pre recorded midi grooves for drums but sometimes its just not possible to find what i want. so i have to squeeze in some handmade drum riffs. and they don't sound realistic. for the vocals, i was supposed to practice metal vocals this summer but family biz kept me from practicing so i'm stuck with making instrumental :/

hazy tundra
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I don't always do that though, but I should

tired delta
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hmmmmm i'll keep that in mind ty so much! my programmed midi tracks are always on 127 velocity and i only adjust the velocity when i'm gonna do blastbeats or ghost snares πŸ˜„ but i'm totally keeping the advice you just gave in my mind and implementing on my future tracks

surreal latch
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hey guys. this here is a track I've been working on the last few days. I'm sorta new to recording and mixing. personally I feel like the mix is very off balance in places and could use some work overall, so does anyone know where I could improve on this?

wide lake
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Hello everyone, I wanna buy strings to play electric guitar in tune B, without them turnning into spaghetti. Any reccomendations please?

tired delta
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either way these strings would work well

wide lake
wide lake
tired delta
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if you want looser strings 11-56 can be an option too

wide lake
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I might, I've been playing in Standard and drop D my entire life, I wanna try some heavier stuff now

kind blaze
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would love some feedback or suggestions what i can do better

open canyon
high igloo
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what is your vocal chain? and do you have spoterfiy?

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Separately

any tips or thoughts? Not done yet but i think its interesting

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not specifically from you Kirva, this was just a post i was making after

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maybe ill ad some compression

kind blaze
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i used multiple layers, on the clean vocals and shout vocals. i did not put many FX, on them. not even autotune.

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only a small part of vocodex.

kind blaze
kind blaze
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hmmm

tribal orbit
hazy tundra
high igloo
hazy tundra
high igloo
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so I just updated my FL studio and started playing with the built in sample store so i accidentally made an i prevail song which is not something i want to be associated with lmao. the original goal was spirit box, hence the name of the old version, spirt. i can already imagine the overcompressed vocals.

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im prob going to put a white noise syth matching the guitar during the chorus

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and do linkin parky during second verse

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and to think i got on today with the goal to make a thall part

hazy tundra
versed remnant
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need tips on this mix as well as someone willing to add bass cuz octave shifting my guitar always sounds shitty

hazy tundra
versed remnant
hazy tundra
versed remnant
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that sounds sick tho

versed remnant
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oh

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wait

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swag

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thats the tuning of the song so

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that works

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lemme fine it

hazy tundra
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I highly recommend using Bass Professor MK2 for any bass tone

versed remnant
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I found it

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this actually sounds nice tbh

hazy tundra
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I use it instead of my own bass in recordings

versed remnant
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I think i might need to turn down the bass a bit tbh

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Idk

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Mixing is hard

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I cant afford ez mix

hazy tundra
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I mix all my stuff myself, ez mix is crap

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(my opinion, not a statement)

versed remnant
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fairfair

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how do I mix deathcore

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I've never done deathcore really

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which is weird its my favorite genre

hazy tundra
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Start by adjusting levels, then put in a very light saturator, followed by parallel compression, eq, clipper and finally a limiter

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I mean, that's how I would go about it

versed remnant
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I understood nonenof that

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Except the ew and limiter part

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Eq

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I know how to do that

gleaming haven
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You guys know any tricks for switching from writing in a scale to writing chromatically?

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Rn I'm in harmonic minor but wanna transition smoothly to a chunky slam type riff

versed remnant
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Bell.

gleaming haven
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What a bell

versed remnant
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cut all instrumentals

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have a full bar

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and on the third click

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bell

gleaming haven
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Oh lmao

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I see what you mean

versed remnant
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Yesyes

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Best transition ever

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Or like a double snare hit

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Double snare hit i really prefer only when then next riff is gonna be really slow and chunky

gleaming haven
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Or pause and china cymbal

versed remnant
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This is true too

tribal orbit
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The vocals could be mixed a bit better. Can't figure out what sepcifically it needs, but some light delay and reverb + EQ would help

runic adder
# versed remnant Chat what do we think

guitars & bass could come up slightly imo, the lead at the end could also go down slightly
vocals feel a little dry; some light saturation, reverb, and delay could do some good

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pretty good though, good job

turbid radish
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what if its more of a just a heavily reverbed pitch scratch noise on the guitars?

open canyon
tribal orbit
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trying to dial in the drums atm

runic adder
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any tips for cutting the noisy shit out?

hazy tundra
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light noise gate before the amp and pedals

solid cradle
kind trail
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Need a mix review

hazy tundra
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It sounds like the attack and release on the mix compressor/limiter is too slow, making transient peaks after every pause.

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The guitars would require some more (or less?) or different eq-ing, mainly cutting out those low and high ends to make space for mid mid frequencies as they sound muddy and harsh. I recommend a high cut at around 4khz to 8khz ish and a low cut at 200hz ish, then boosting some 1khz and 500hz

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Also, try either panning the guitars 90% instead of 100%, or adding a mono track with a high cut at 500hz in the center with maybe a 50 millisecond reverb all wet on it to add some depth

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That's a lot of info, but not much to actually do

runic adder
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if the mids sound muddy, why cut the highs and lows? shouldn't you just cut out some of the muddy mid areas?

turbid radish
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I just typed it wrong

open canyon
hazy tundra
runic adder
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I think a high cut at 4K is excessive though

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I think that might just warrant tone tweaks at that point

runic adder
hazy tundra
hazy tundra
runic adder
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@kind trail send this person a guitar track please I really want to know what the rock is cooking

hazy tundra
mighty terrace
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First hour learning this riff I’d say I’m not doing horribly tbf

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Yes my low string is missing πŸ’€

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Or high idk what u call it

fringe bone
kind blaze
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Little intro

open canyon
# kind blaze

that made my fucking pants explode that sounds SO GOOD πŸ™ 😭

open canyon
# kind blaze

though jus for dramatic effect, maybe add some cymbal painting jus for a lil spice lol?

kind blaze
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I think it's worth a try

kind blaze
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Gonna send another song there today

open canyon
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shits brutal asf man

kind blaze
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I will definitely warn you

kind blaze
tribal orbit
tribal orbit
kind blaze
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another album song with no vocals for now

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@open canyon

open canyon
hazy tundra
runic adder
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or a straight high cut/low cut filter?

hazy tundra
runic adder
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oh boy

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once I get back to my workstation I'll send some guitar tracks, I need to hear what you're cooking

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straight cuts there go against everything I know about mixing guitars lol

hazy tundra
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I'm cooking brain damage atm but I'll show you what I mean

runic adder
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aight

hazy tundra
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This one I hard-ish cut at arround 5.8khz, and at arround 100hz since it's tuned lower, I wanted more low end

hazy tundra
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And I would probably cut some more low-end to leave room for a thicker bass

runic adder
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honestly interesting

runic adder
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what's different between "no processing" and "no eq"?

hazy tundra
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Before the eq in the fully processed version I added compression and saturation

runic adder
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I see

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so no eq is with just the saturation and compression?

hazy tundra
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yeah

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I thought it disingenuous to just say no eq while I also removed the compressor and saturator

runic adder
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that is a lot of saturation lmao

hazy tundra
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Only in the high end, yet the eq gets rid of the harshness

runic adder
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I can hear that

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I can smell what the rock is cooking fs

runic adder
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I process my guitars pretty differently so it was just hard to believe a high cut at 5k

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but yeah you really saturate that high end so it makes sense

hazy tundra
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the "only eq" version is without compression and saturation, so you can hear that the eq doesn't get rid of anything important in the tone and even de-muddies it

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the "no eq" version isn't really necessary in the comparison, it's just there as a token of honesty in the processing

runic adder
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alright

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I popped it on one of my own guitar chains just to hear it

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def not something I'd use much because I don't feel it changes anything for me but I see where you're coming from

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thanks for walking me through it through my doubts tho

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actually nvm you're cooking there I just dislike the high and low passes

hazy tundra
runic adder
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usually the case

hazy tundra
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The low end will clash with the bass and the kick and get muddy real quick. Just a warning

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Also, the high mids and high-end are much clearer in the first clip

runic adder
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the first clip is the new version, yes

tribal orbit
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reminds me of old megaman x and zero

runic adder
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I'd say thanks but it's a cover lol

tribal orbit
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damn

runic adder
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hold on I can send you the song

tribal orbit
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kk mr man

runic adder
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The end of an era (maybe lol idk)

πŸ”» === S T U F F === πŸ”»
The next (and final (allegedly)) track in the Destabilize series! as the "4b" in the title suggests, this is an alternative ending to the "4a" that was [CODE PHANTOM]!

[Spoilers?] In 4a Sweetiebot realises that she'll never be free of the violent corruption deep inside her and decides it'...

β–Ά Play video
tribal orbit
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In the meantime- working on an easycore cover of Stick Season by Noah Kahan. STyling it after ADTR's cover of Over My Head (Cable Car)

runic adder
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i think I fucked up the kick in this version of the mix lmao

tribal orbit
runic adder
tribal orbit
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yeah, i skipped to 1:19 and it's instantly better

runic adder
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good thing I didn't save version 3 in my daw (:

tribal orbit
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Oui oui mr Natty

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Wouldve been a pain to get the old settings

tribal orbit
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but it's all powerchords

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like

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they're all perfect 5ths

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so it translates to Pop-Punk and EasyCore very easily

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also helps that it's in a major key

swift slate
native cedar
hazy tundra
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I'm trying to write some swancore and I'm kind of blocked, but here's something I wrote (it's midi guitar, I can't play this πŸ˜› )

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Does anyone want to help me write some widly-woobly weewoo riffs?

swift slate
kind blaze
hazy tundra
tribal orbit
timber kayak
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Tried to do a lil bit of Lazarus by Angelmaker

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I can't get the highs though

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So I don't even try

timber kayak
runic adder
swift slate
hazy tundra
versed remnant
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Its all using synths in soundtrap bro i can’t

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I took music tech to get better at mixing and the teacher said hed probably have to ask me for help

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I’m actually so upset about that

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Fuck soundtrap

honest saffron
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I'm looking for a first guitar, and listen- I have a HUGE disability in purchasing, and that is the need to stand out. I am originally a bassist, I just wanted to try out guitar (play bfmv the poison riffs until my fingers bleed) Back to the disability thing- I have a tendency to standout, an example of this is instead of buying cheap normie squier basses, I bought a manly ibanez one, so here I am asking

Is it better buying a used Cort VX-4X explorer off of facebook marketplace rather than going with a mainstream squier?

real harness
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I've been trying to write the chorus for one of my songs recently and now I really need some unbiased opinions on it, because I'm not really sure about this chorus.

hazy tundra
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I think the idea is there, though the vocals lack power, either because of mixing or lack of projection.

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For mixing them so they seem more powerful, you could saturate them, add a very long delay (1/1 note delay, 1/2 note delay, 1/2 dotted note delay, something like that) followed by a long reverb

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If they do lack projection, then layering with harmonies would compensate

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A mix of both those tricks would do wonders I think

real harness
real harness
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I might've overdone the saturation a bit, but idk

hazy tundra
hazy tundra
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can I try something with the isolated vocals and then tell you if it works?

real harness
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Sounds like a lot of hastle

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I guess, I 'll work a bit by myself, but still thanks

hazy tundra
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No worries, I think balance is the thing that needs working on rn

kind blaze
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Hey guys sorry if i seem a little weird, but my family is struggling hard metal is the only way out for me but i dont have a band as dedicated as i am i am such in a bad place right now everything feels like shattering into pieces

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i only present my vocals on this channel and supporting other artist's projects / instrumentals.

short musk
kind blaze
kind blaze
tribal orbit
high igloo
# kind blaze if i update fl studio can i use my older projects?

It works great, you can just drag anything you want in, there are tons of freebies. my projects saved over but there might be certain features that havent been ported so I'm not sure. I was using a really old version of FL before, i forgot what it was and there are so many useful features in 21. It is worth it and you can always just backup your projects.

tribal orbit
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I added a bit more work to the cover so it's not 100% a lazy cover

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but easycore of a Noah Kahan song is pretty simple tbh

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Track pretty much just uses powerchords

wicked berry
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This is just intro btw

wicked berry
wicked berry
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In terms of tone

kind blaze
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And Paralax for bass

kind blaze
kind blaze
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and if you suddenly know, I'm also looking for a synthesizer plugin

wicked berry
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I use bcc orchestra

wicked berry
wicked berry
wicked berry
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If you want more of a naturey ambient synth another one on kontakt that comes with komplete start that's really good is ethereal earth

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You should just get komplete start due to its incredible instruments all for free

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It has most of the things I use now

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Including a choir

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One of my favorites is raum, which is a reverb plugin

hollow tulip
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additional instruments will be added soonℒ️

tribal orbit
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Reminds me of City of Evil stuff but heavier

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So good shit LanThumbsUp

hollow tulip
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Glad you appreciate it

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the idea came after listening to The Black Dahlia Murder a bit too much and wanted to implement some cool classical sounding stuff

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so i had to make it before i forget

tribal orbit
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based

wicked berry
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No problem

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Btw your stuff here is fucking awesome

wicked berry
kind blaze
wicked berry
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I'm sure it will, are you putting it on spotify?

kind blaze
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yeah

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spotify,youtube,apple music and other

runic adder
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segment of divine stigmata by disembodied tyrant

wicked berry
kind blaze
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I used to use freshtunes but there are a lot of problems with it so when I release this album I will probably buy a subscription to Distrokid

kind blaze
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?

runic adder
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vouch, distrokid is a very good service

kind blaze
wicked berry
kind blaze
wicked berry
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I have ultimate

wicked berry
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Its very nice

wicked berry
wicked berry
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and oh god good bass tone

kind blaze
# wicked berry I have ultimate

I also wanted to buy Ultimate at first, but I'm a student and I don't have a permanent income, so I decided to save money and buy Musician Plus.

wicked berry
wicked berry
kind blaze
wicked berry
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i have a really dumb slam project that has really cringe theming

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ill post a song in a sec

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also the mixing isnt good on it, but that kind on purpose because its slam

kind blaze
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i recorded first album on a phone

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so yeah

wicked berry
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damn, thats actually impressive

kind blaze
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quality sucks

wicked berry
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i started off early recording a couple years ago using capcut on an old ipad

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never posted that shit obviouslt

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really really dumb sample

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and i had a friend do half of the vocals

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the pig squeals were me though

wicked berry
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its going to be an ep

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and its all over the damn place

kind blaze
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youre wild dude

wicked berry
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Thanks alot

kind blaze
wicked berry
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yea me neither i did it cus its easier than deathcore haha

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im dabbling in black metal too

kind blaze
wicked berry
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just havent released any of it

wicked berry
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whens your album coming out?

kind blaze
wicked berry
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blackened death is awesome

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you know much about vocals?

kind blaze
wicked berry
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im like just learning lower ish screams and neep feedback

wicked berry
kind blaze
kind blaze
wicked berry
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badass

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i could mosh to that

kind blaze
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now 3 tracks out of 12 are ready and a new member has joined us, from Russia, a vocalist from America and me from the Czech Republic

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so the work takes some time, especially for the vocalist

runic adder
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mr worldwide

kind blaze
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but I think that by the middle of next year we should finish

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or even earlier

kind blaze
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I'm just living there

runic adder
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thats even better lol

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I used to be in a project with a guy from lebanon

wicked berry
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damn

kind blaze
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I also don't know anything about our vocalist

wicked berry
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thats funny

kind blaze
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he writes the lyrics and sings, I don't even know his real name

wicked berry
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wow

kind blaze
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and the new member didn't even communicate with the vocalist once

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Fucked up band

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But it's fun

wicked berry
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my symphonic deathcore project is just me, and some advice on songwriting and lyric writing from my friend

kind blaze
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I am in charge of all the instruments and mixing as well as everything related to the band, the vocalist writes the lyrics and sings and the new member will also be a guitarist and another vocalist

kind blaze
wicked berry
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thanks alot, i hope to eventually get a part time job so i can afford the non free trial version of archetype gojira and a better drum machine

tribal orbit
wicked berry
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it sure is

kind blaze
tribal orbit
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So fuckin real lmao

kind blaze
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the listening is not growing and it seems like I am not very good at the skill

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Of playing

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But it's still fun

wicked berry
kind blaze
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Sometimes more sometimes less

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I even went to study at a music school but I still don't really believe that I will become better but it's worth trying

wicked berry
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that would be fun

kind blaze
wicked berry
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Thanks, disembodied tyrant is peak

kind blaze
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Sometimes I think about becoming a vocalist or a drummer, but I can't sing at all

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I need to work on this

runic adder
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The discord notification in the middle πŸ’€

wicked berry
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yes that was me trolling

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lol

runic adder
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Lmao

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Need to edit my current setup, my room has too much reverb atm to properly record vocals

kind blaze
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I have a whole fucking church in my room

runic adder
kind blaze
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do distrokid mixing are good?

kind blaze
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would put it in my playlist

tribal orbit
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If you want, I can try my hand at making a master for you

kind blaze
kind blaze
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like its already sounds good i think

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but i dont sure

tribal orbit
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so it's like "eh"

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yknow?

kind blaze
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oh

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understand

tribal orbit
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depending on the track, you might need to send me stems so I can make everything sit nice and neat

kind blaze
runic adder
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But thanks

kind blaze
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what song is this?

runic adder
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The end of an era (maybe lol idk)

πŸ”» === S T U F F === πŸ”»
The next (and final (allegedly)) track in the Destabilize series! as the "4b" in the title suggests, this is an alternative ending to the "4a" that was [CODE PHANTOM]!

[Spoilers?] In 4a Sweetiebot realises that she'll never be free of the violent corruption deep inside her and decides it'...

β–Ά Play video
kind blaze
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Thanks

tribal orbit
kind blaze
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but if you don't mind, i would like to send them to you tomorrow or by the end of this week

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but I will immediately send you access to the folder in Google Drive so you can listen to the track, it doesn't have vocals yet but I've already uploaded it there

kind blaze
tribal orbit
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ye

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sounds good

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just send em whenever

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Update on this cover. Rerecorded all the cleans. Didn't have to repitch anything except the opening line. That was a nice surprise

ruby sparrow
versed remnant
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Me when I cover Crewcabanger for my music tech class to probably listen to again cuz thats what happened with the peace sells cover (It had the highest rating I suck at this and I'm still so far above the skill curve)

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I hate soundtrap sm

leaden finch
tribal orbit
versed remnant
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Thats really all I can do instrumental wise in soundtrap

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Tbh

hazy tundra
ruby sparrow
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ayeee thank you

hazy tundra
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someone want to help me do something with this?

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Nevermind I lost the stems... or I don't remember where I put them

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I really need to work on my organizational skills

tribal orbit
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Me when new mix of track. Still haven't rewritten the drums tho

wicked berry
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i love a loud clanky bass but i was wondering if its listenable with it being that loud

kind blaze
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added choir

wicked berry
wicked berry
tribal orbit
ruby sparrow
tribal orbit
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which is good

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I feel like the orchestral stuff could be EQ'd a bit better so each part has it's own little cut in the mix tho

ruby sparrow
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it’s more of a background element

tribal orbit
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*I say this as I'm struggling to mix a Koto/Shamisen into a song atm SobChamp *

tribal orbit
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yknow

ruby sparrow
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i didnt go perfect on the mix, things will be fixed

tribal orbit
ruby sparrow
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songwriting mostly is my concern

tribal orbit
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I believe in you

tribal orbit
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and thats so fair

tribal orbit
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synth = vocal line

ruby sparrow
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i’ll listen when i get home from skewl

tribal orbit
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kk mane

runic adder
runic adder
ruby sparrow
tribal orbit
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even after EQ and filter to try to cut the treble

runic adder
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ice-picky how?

tribal orbit
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The breakdown/bridge part sounds fine, but the verse just sounds

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idk

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maybe I'm just losing my mind

runic adder
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idk man im not hearing it

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the part at 0:36 sounds fine

tribal orbit
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Maybe I am just losing it lmao

tribal orbit
runic adder
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who knows lol

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I think it sounds fine though

tribal orbit
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alroighty

desert tartan
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I

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Listen to this

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Mastapiece

leaden finch
wicked berry
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I wish I my mix could sound like that πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

ruby sparrow
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yo thank you bro, that really made me smile πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

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i’m thinking on mixing peoples songs for free for a short period of time to see if they like the results

wicked berry
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No problem, I would listen to full song it would be on my on repeat playlist

ruby sparrow
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if you know how to exports stems and midi

wicked berry
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I'll figure it out

ruby sparrow
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alright, you’ll be my first victi- i mean.. customer πŸ˜‚

wicked berry
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Lmao

wicked berry
ruby sparrow
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ill take a listen real quick

wicked berry
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Also if for whatever reason like the tone of anything is off or if I need to add anything just lmk cus I'm an inexperienced 14 year old who doesn't know anything about mixing

ruby sparrow
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i can re amp everything if you need me to lol

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mixing metal is probably one of the hardest genres

wicked berry
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Yeah that would be chill

ruby sparrow
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i've been doing it for probably close to 2 years

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but i've been making music for 6 years

wicked berry
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Lucky me

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Lol

ruby sparrow
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i could mix it

wicked berry
wicked berry
ruby sparrow
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the mix isnt bad

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its audible

wicked berry
ruby sparrow
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of course bro

wicked berry
ruby sparrow
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trust me i've heard a lot of mixes, and they could use a ton of improvement

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this one, its listenable, and enjoyable

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yes, the mixing could use some improvement, but its not bad for only been doing it for less than a year

ruby sparrow
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and see where the guitars fit after

ruby sparrow
wicked berry
ruby sparrow
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the midi

wicked berry
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alright

ruby sparrow
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do you have di tracks?

wicked berry
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for di tracks i have only the bass and guitar

wicked berry
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reminds me of worm shepherd

ruby sparrow
wicked berry
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do you need to know the plugins I use?

ruby sparrow
ruby sparrow
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but if you want the simular guitar sound, id like to know

wicked berry
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its chill all my plugins are free

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as long as its a nice classic crunchy deathcore tone

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but i do use the ml sound labs stevie t djent god

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on the thall preset

ruby sparrow
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you want a thally sound?

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i gotchu

wicked berry
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yea also its all good if im asking too much but are you able to mix like 3 songs? if you were willing to i can get like a whole server of people to give me a rating on the mix and give the info back to you

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i just have an ep and struggle on mixing

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but its all good if you can only do this one

ruby sparrow
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i use bitwig as a daw so i can just replace the audio

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lets see how things go

wicked berry
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all good

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i can probably get you stems tomorrow at best

ruby sparrow
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alright, take your time, just dm me them

wicked berry
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cool thanks alot though

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what plugins do you think youll use?

ruby sparrow
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pod farm 2, for the guitars

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probably some getgooddrums for the drums

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and my signature bass tone

wicked berry
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nice

wicked berry
ruby sparrow
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modern & massive and the periphery one

wicked berry
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nice

ruby sparrow
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oh and invasion

wicked berry
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i could go for the modern and massive as long as it has a high snappy snare

ruby sparrow
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it has a lot of options

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ill give you some examples when i get the stems and midi

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to see what you like

wicked berry
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okay thanks

ruby sparrow
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yeah ofc, just want to test my skill before actually providing services

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and i strongly feel like people have a lot of potention in producing and songwriting, but struggle with mixing and master

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which is why i want to help

wicked berry
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yea fair enough

wicked berry
ruby sparrow
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i'll make sure to try my best to get you that ep out

wicked berry
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means alot to me

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also im in the process of lyric writing and dont have vocals yet, are you experienced in mixing vocals at all? its fine if not lol

ruby sparrow
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thats the one thing i struggle with

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i've done it before, i can manage it, but its not gonna be perfect

wicked berry
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oh thats fine

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doesnt need to be perfect

ruby sparrow
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ill try my best

wicked berry
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thanks

ruby sparrow
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ofc bro

wicked berry
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also, what do you want me to credit you as on producer credits

ruby sparrow
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"PVTHOS"

narrow trail
wicked berry
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super industrial

wicked berry
solemn mesa
high igloo
candid turret
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this needs hella work, and i was kinda just trying to learn FL Studio but i plan on making this a lot better once i get my audio interface

ruby sparrow
zenith hamlet
wicked berry
wicked berry
candid turret
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What do you use?

candid turret
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mic

wicked berry
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I used to record with a spark amp

wicked berry
wicked berry
wicked berry
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But yea sounds pretty good

ruby sparrow
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even if you have the first one

wicked berry
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But overall I think it's great

ruby sparrow
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oo niceee, yeah i got it for the soul purpose of practicing without having to plug my guitar into my computer/interface which is a whole hassle, plus having to connect it to a speaker if i wanted to play it out loud

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i kinda just wanted an amp to bring around with me when i needed it, so it looks like it’s a good deal

wicked berry
ruby sparrow
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i was close to getting the spark 40 because i’m super impatient lol

wicked berry
ruby sparrow
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but i decided that i think it would be worth it just to wait however long it takes to arrive

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i’m pretty stoked about it

ruby sparrow
wicked berry
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Btw, saw your PVTHOS on spotify, pretty good stuff

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I followed

ruby sparrow
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ayeee thank you bro! i really appreciate it!

wicked berry
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yea ofc

hollow tulip
wicked berry
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Who's your main inspiration?

hollow tulip
hollow tulip
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of course there are other influences like the Castlevania (Symphony of the Night) ost

fringe geode
kind blaze
versed remnant
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How does the current intro mix sound everyone? I want opinions on things I can change before I get to far into production so I can figure out what sounds best so I'm not recording everything to where it sounds like shit

tribal orbit
tribal orbit
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The guitar is pretty muddy,and the bass is kinda loud

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buuut idea is good

tribal orbit
zenith hamlet
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good

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πŸ‘

versed remnant
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I totally screwed over my filesave

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so I lost it

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but I remember how I played it

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so

tribal orbit
brave otter
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does the basic idea i have fr this song even work? a lot of the playing is bad but rn idk if this even sounds good

hazy tundra
narrow trail
narrow trail
hazy tundra
zenith hamlet
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kicks kinda loud i think

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but its very good

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damn 1:00 goes hard

hazy tundra
hazy tundra
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Fixed the kick loudness and it definitely helps

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thanks

sleek merlin
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Hi guys. Relatively recently, I decided to write and post my work on YouTube. I don't have much experience in mixing and other musical things, but I decided to write here in order to get feedback and maybe get advice on what I should study to improve my skills.

Be straightforward and strict. It's important for me to know my weaknesses.
If you like it, let me know too)

Good mood and fruitful creative success to all🀘

https://www.youtube.com/@Soulinsuit

hollow tulip
# sleek merlin Hi guys. Relatively recently, I decided to write and post my work on YouTube. I ...

1st listen imo the mixing isn't too bad for someone without much experience in mixing
what i'd advice is double tracking the rhythm guitar since it sounds kinda narrow (basically recording your playing of your guitar twice and panning both of the recordings on extreme left and extreme right so it sounds wider)
keep in mind you don't have to do double tracking on the lead guitar (especially on shredding), if it's for ambience purposes or overall melody, imo maybe you can
and you should maybe raise the volume of the bass guitar to make it sound more powerful

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imo your track "ready set die" sets all the checklists on the above

hollow tulip
sleek merlin
tribal orbit
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Mainly the vocals, but some increased volume on the rhythm guitars

tribal orbit
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And i think the rhythm is a little too compressed(?)

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Good track tho

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me like

hollow tulip
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glad you appreciate it

hazy tundra
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I want to add more

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MORE

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MOOOAAAAR

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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Really? Doesn’t sound like taht at all on my end

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I was actually considering lowering the mids

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Weird

tribal orbit
hazy tundra
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The whole mix

tribal orbit
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That’s strange

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Cuz my master chain increases the low mids and leaves the high mids alone

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Are you listening to this on mobile or pc?

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And do you have audio enhancements disabled?

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Cuz I’m not getting that mid scoop at all

hazy tundra
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It wasn't a real mid scoop, just a surplus of 4k and lack of 500

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sorry for the scare

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Just for fun

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Now the bass is too loud on export

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What is wrong with my pc

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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Ty

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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I'm doing some touch-ups with my master chain

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to try to see what you mean with the EQ

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A little tweaking, but I'm still really not hearing that big of a difference hmm

hazy tundra
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What I did basically

tribal orbit
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Ight, I'll do that on the EQ

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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Oh jeez thats a lot more than I have lmao

hazy tundra
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That for my adjustments πŸ˜›

tribal orbit
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Changed the original EQ8, added a second after the saturator that matches somehwat to what you did

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and changed a little bit in the JST Max

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left the JST Heat settings alone tho

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gonna export lmk what you think

hazy tundra
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1 - EQ saturator
2 - Clean EQ
3 - Tape emulator
4 - Compressor/Limiter/Clipper with basic eq

tribal orbit
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EQ > Saturator 1 > EQ2 > Limiter > Saturator2 > Multiband clipper

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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Nah nah

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I did notice something was off

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I just was like

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maybe I;m delulu

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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Also good lord my tracks take forever to render now

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
hazy tundra
tribal orbit
hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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I think mine just needs a good clean

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Also the second saturator is also a compressor

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Plus, a limiter is placed right before them too

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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Fair, I do use a lot of free shiz

tribal orbit
hazy tundra
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Same, I just use my paid ones because I feel guilty if I don't 😒

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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Yippeee

hazy tundra
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Thrashed and Frantic Futile have something weird going on mix wise, but all bangertracks

tribal orbit
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what dost thou meaneth?

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if you don't mind me asking

hazy tundra
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Thrashed has the same issue Smoking Gun had and the volume seems to fluctuate a little

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frantic futile is just an eq thing like Smoking Gun

tribal orbit
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The volume fluctuates...

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Odd

hazy tundra
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Like a tiny mini bit

tribal orbit
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legit don't know how that could happen with my mix whyohwhy

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tyty btw for the help

hazy tundra
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Export sometimes messes up stuff

tribal orbit
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I will listen in one moment. I use ASIO, so that won't play until I close Ableton

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and I'm fixing up Trashed rq

hazy tundra
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You can always disable that if you want, though it will be at the cost of more cpu usage

tribal orbit
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With how chunky Trashed is...

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Like at least 20 tracks are just symphonic bits and doo-dads

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that takes a lot of my CPU and RAM

hazy tundra
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fair

tribal orbit
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I saved the master chain I used on Smoking Gun so I can use it on Trashed (and FF for after I listen to your track)

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big brain

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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only took a year to export

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anyway, I loisten to yours now

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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There's a little too much room (reverb?) on the drums, mainly the toms. Could also pan the toms a bit more. The guitar feels a little too compressed. And idk if im going insane, but the kick feels a little on the soft side compared to the snare and toms?

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but me like

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I like the breakdown/bridge kind of dealio too

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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a mix of a high scream and a low on that section would be angelic

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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Ah, could be the windows audio driver being weird

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on my end

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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I think a saturator at around 100-200hz would be good on the kick, thats what I did on Smoking Gun

tribal orbit
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hear me out

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high-sing scream with lows or gutterals dual tracked as backing tracks

hazy tundra
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mmmhhhh mhm

tribal orbit
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I can't sing-scream for the life of me. I can scream, I can sing, just not both 😒

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So I envy you

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also looking up your band from yoru bio rn

hazy tundra
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We have one song out as of now

tribal orbit
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When you start?

hazy tundra
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Last december

tribal orbit
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I listen to unforgetting lost rn

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it gud

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I give LanThumbsUp

hazy tundra
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We have plenty of songs on the backburner, but I can't record vocals rn because of thin walls in apartment πŸ˜›

tribal orbit
tribal orbit
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I live in a college dorm and record in my room

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Thank god my roommates dont care

hazy tundra
hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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Based af

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You wanna know something really funny

hazy tundra
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yes

tribal orbit
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me and my bandmate sumeir did the same shit

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we wrote a metal track together and decided "fuck it, lets make a band"

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Granted, we originally scrapped the original 2 tracks we wrote until like recently

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Calypso was the second song we ever wrote and I'm glad we waited until I was a better vocalist/guitarist/mixer before we went about releasing it

hazy tundra
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We also wrote a couple of parts of songs together before Unforgetting Lost, but it's the first we actually finished

hazy tundra
tribal orbit
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Dawg, if you heard the initial versions of it, you'd understand

tribal orbit
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I gtg to bed, got work in the morning, but I appreciate the help. I sent a friend request btw

hazy tundra
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Same here

tribal orbit
spice arch
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almost done with this thing. pretty much gotta tweak my mids on the guitars a bit, get some vox in there and she's done

versed remnant
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Personally I really like it, I wanna add some more drum alternations and vocals obviously but Idk about the mix

high igloo
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i tried mixing in radio mono. Now i cant tell if the mix is alright, or if it is just better than listening to something from the 30s.
If its not good please help ;-;.
It feels really bassy but im not sure if its my headphones since EQ is almost flat with lower mids.

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i have no clue what im doing when it comes to mixing lol

hoary heart
# high igloo i have no clue what im doing when it comes to mixing lol

Get the accompanying resources here:
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In this video I walk you through everything you need to know about EQ, I'm not leaving any stone unturned.

We're covering how to EQ any instrument, stock vs. premium EQ plugins, frequency masking, how to nail the low-end...

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hoary heart
high igloo
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closed akg k72

hoary heart
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Mixing with those is really really tough.

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I can't really give much feedback as I don't have anything good to listen on currently

high igloo
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Any suggestions for cheap studio headphones?

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the video is really good btw thanks

hoary heart
# high igloo Any suggestions for cheap studio headphones?

No... You'd need something with a flat frequency response which I dont know any cheap headphones that offer that, most people recommend something like the dt990s and i have a pair but they still aren't great but might be the best "cheap" option. Headphones because they feed each ear directly makes it hard to judge the stero image well mixing.
Headphones do help bring out the quieter sounds out so they can make it easier to mix the really small details, purely mixing with just headphones is a really hard skill to get down though.

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You can learn your headphones frequency response curve and mix based off of that but then again that's extremely difficult to judge and takes alot of time and practice.

hoary heart
high igloo
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I just looked up the response on these AKGs if youre curious, there is a huge roll off at 10k that might explain another issue im having when i listen back through monitors. I thought my monitors were just really whiny, they are a little bit, others complained, but apparently these headphones just kill sound the second it hits 10k

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weird mids boost, usually headphones give high bass and treble

hoary heart
hoary heart
high igloo
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The cheapest money can buy, Sterling MX3s

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not the cheapest but its up there

hoary heart
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I'd recommend looking into setting up an EQ correction for them...

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You could do the same for the headphones but the more you mess with the stuff then again more you risk negative distortion on the sound but it might be helpful for you.

kind blaze
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random demo

eager sphinx
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thoughts on this angle for recording?

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couldnt send the actual thing, file too big

hazy tundra
real harness
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I'm finishing up one song rn, that I was working on for a while because of technical difficulties. And I thought that it would be nice to get some feedback, so I know, what to improve on, or remove, etc (kinda new to vocals btw, so idk, just to take into consideration)... also it's like almost 3 am for me rn and I have exams next week, so I'll go to sleep rn probably

leaden finch
zenith hamlet
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i think i would turn the vocals up a little bit

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but its good πŸ‘ πŸ‘

spice arch
spice arch
hoary heart
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Just don't mix with headphones... Only to pick on small details only time I throw them on.

kind blaze
kind blaze
hazy tundra
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Like, is the saxophone too much?
Or the hydrogen bomb sample?

lost dew
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Awfully absurd name
I know

wicked berry
tribal orbit
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or I will cry

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cuz that damn good

kind blaze
wicked berry
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I agree lol

iron cloak
wicked berry
wicked berry
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love it

fringe geode
wicked berry
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I love the way you wrote the drums

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Pretty good!

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Overall

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I like

tall aurora
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The guitar tone sounds nice

wicked berry
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Agree

tall aurora
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My only complaint would be the vocals, specifically how they're mixed

wicked berry
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Exactly what I was going to say

tall aurora
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The vocals sound a little bit to dry

wicked berry
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Really good though

tall aurora
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Some background harmonies would help

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I think it sounds great in the parts where the song gets softer

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But yeah, other than that, it sounds really solid

kind trail
wicked berry
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heavy

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super technical i like it

fringe geode
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@wicked berry @tall aurora, thanks guys for the feedback! As a guitarist and former drummer, I know nothing about vocals or recording them, so the feedback helps!

wicked berry
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ofc!!

fringe geode
# wicked berry ofc!!

Btw I use EZD2 to write my drums. I haven't upgraded to 3 yet but I plan to. But EZD2 is what I use to write drums 95% of the time. I use GGD for mixing purposes.

wicked berry
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i see

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ggd is awesome

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i love modern and massive so much

fringe geode
wicked berry
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nice nice

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sounds good

turbid radish
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wow this songs amazing

kind trail
kind trail
# turbid radish how do you get the bass tone like that?

So basically, there are 5 parts to this.

1: the normal DI with some mild compression and low pass EQ

2:
A blend between the NDSP darkglass and parallax

3: high pass eq into compressor to accentuate pick attack

4: DI an octave higher into guitar amp/cab for more mid definition

5: Sine wave with some minor processing underneath.

It's honestly a little overprocessed rn imo, and I'll probably rework my signal chain to something more reasonable but yeah πŸ‘

fringe geode
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Minus steps 4 and 5.

tall aurora
#

If you guys played DBZ BT2 back in the day, you might remember how hard its music goes
Well, since DB Sparking Zero is only 2 weeks away, I decided to make some kind of "synth metal" remix to celebrate
I hope you guys like it :3
(still in progress btw)
https://soundcloud.com/wkmusicofficial/dark-half-remix/s-VBcPIMvjFzL?si=544a9ddd7eda4a47851c53b9f4c2d9d7&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

unreal aspen
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Got bored last night and put that together

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Criticism is welcomed.

turbid radish
# unreal aspen

the guitars may have a lot of low mids and the cymbals might have too much very top end

fringe geode
unreal aspen
unreal aspen
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Any/all feedback is welcomed and appreciated; questions, comments, suggestions, etc... 🀝

tribal orbit
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it's .11 seconds long

unreal aspen
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If you click the link, it opens it in a browser. Not sure why it won’t play here. And yeah, it’s just a clip. You’ll see

tribal orbit
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I downloaded the file

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its .11 seconds long

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like

unreal aspen
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Yeah. Just a clip

tribal orbit
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nah dawg, I don't think you understand

unreal aspen
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Oh oh oh

tribal orbit
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its 0.11 seconds

unreal aspen
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Not 11 seconds

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.11

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wtf

tribal orbit
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oui

unreal aspen
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Hrmmm

tribal orbit
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re-export as an .mp3

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then send on here

unreal aspen
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Alright, stand by. Thanks for letting me know.

tribal orbit
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Negative

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same issue

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It's an encoder issue

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I have no problems with my own .wav files

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weird

unreal aspen
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That’s so strange. It works on my phone and my laptop.

tribal orbit
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idk, tis weird

tribal orbit
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Good scream

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I like

wicked berry
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im sorry, sometimes i cant resist the urge

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to make the stupidest fucking shit

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literally my lsd trips

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put into a song

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(i dont do lsd)

kind blaze
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vocaloid

kind blaze
tribal orbit
kind blaze
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sick tone

wicked berry
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I can hardly upload anything anymore

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I keep having to use google drive

wicked berry
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I clicked and it worked

kind blaze
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only after like 30 sec

wicked berry
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I will check it out

kind blaze
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but i love the riff and tone

wicked berry
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Thanks!

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Works fine for me

kind blaze
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strange

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oh now it works

wicked berry
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Nice

tribal orbit
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tyty

hollow tulip
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mix is still rough

wicked berry
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Nice!!!

fringe geode
wicked berry
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All good

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Lol

tribal orbit
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I added a synth line. It's subject to change, but I think the rest of the track is solid. Also the really out of place synth during teh chorus is just a placeholder for vocal melody

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just some thoughts would be appreciated

blissful cliff
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Working on a punk project. Any thoughts on the mix?

tribal orbit
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The guitars seem narrow

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Still listening atm tho

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So the intro teh guitars feel narrow. They hard panned?

blissful cliff
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Yeah they are

tribal orbit
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The rest of the song is fine tho

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Hm.

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Weird

blissful cliff
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Well the very beginning isn't

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that's just a single track i recorded of me playing through my amp picked up across the room by my mic

tribal orbit
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Hm

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The mix overall is good

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that guitar is just stumping me

blissful cliff
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The very first part is not panned

tribal orbit
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yeah, no I get that

blissful cliff
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the rest of the intro is

tribal orbit
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You okay if I try mastering it rq?

blissful cliff
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Go for it!

tribal orbit
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kk

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I figured it out

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you need some form of "widening"

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idrk how else to explain it

blissful cliff
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on which part?

tribal orbit
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exporting now with my master chain on it

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I just threw my master on the whole track

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If you have JST Maximizer, or use ableton, I can show you how