#Cult of The Lamb: The Fallen Faith (an AU Discusion thread)

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reef solar
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"Maroon" is also another word for "hunter". When Bugs Bunny calls Fudd a maroon, he's saying it sarcastically.

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Fun fact

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Also what colors are there already, so I can list some I know that we don't have already

novel sentinel
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wait, do all of the crowns have a character assigned yet?/genq

reef solar
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Yeah I also agree that the number we have now is more than enough for whatever first chapter of the story we want to tell

novel sentinel
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ah, ok. just out of curiosity, is there a list somewhere of all the crown holders? i wanna try to draw some.

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(or just gimme a random one, if you’d like.)

lament ginkgo
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Not*

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They have a personality and story in mind but not all of them have an appearance or name

novel sentinel
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i see

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also

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i made a design for buttercup, if you wanna consider it

lament ginkgo
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Awhhhh

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Adorable

novel sentinel
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ty ty

lament ginkgo
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The clothing type might change but the pattern you made is probably going to stay

novel sentinel
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thats great then

novel sentinel
lament ginkgo
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Entirety of wave 3 and 4

versed ermine
novel sentinel
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im thinking of making designs for misfortune, incalescence, apathy, and drought. that sound alright? i’ll keep you paged.

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(if you could lmk their personality, i’ll keep it in mind.)

novel sentinel
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apathy design teehee

novel sentinel
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erasure teehee

novel sentinel
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(i made the cloak to look like a pair of bird wings wrapped around :3)

lament ginkgo
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I love these

royal olive
royal olive
reef solar
novel sentinel
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teehee ty for the praise yall :3

novel sentinel
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hihi, made a quick crown wheel thing to show which crowns have a design and which ones dont for quick reference :3

tulip hornet
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WAIT THAT'S FROM THE ACTUAL DEV TEAM?!

novel sentinel
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yuh from what i know

lament ginkgo
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Nono

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The art i used to make the edit is from the dev team

novel sentinel
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ahh i see

lament ginkgo
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Like the rabbit head and fleece

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I just put the two together

novel sentinel
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i see

lament ginkgo
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Neurosis and the 3 and 4th wave dont have any bit of a design

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Neurosis is planned to be a snake but

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We dont have a design

novel sentinel
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oh, i’ll fix that neurosis then

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there we go, i just wanted a quick reference hub

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personally, neurosis is my favourite crown, so do forgive me if i favour them a bit.

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like how yours is the chaos crown :3

fresh swallow
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WHAT DOES IT ALL MEAN!?

novel sentinel
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green dot = has a design
red dot = doesn’t have a design

fresh swallow
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like a character attached to it?

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that makes sence.

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a bit.

novel sentinel
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yyup

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neurosis design :3

fresh swallow
novel sentinel
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neurosis pog
bottom text

novel sentinel
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colour blocking, what r we thinking?

lament ginkgo
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Thats a crown bearer outfit

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This is a bishop

novel sentinel
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it is?

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huh..

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but this is the crown bearer for neurosis?

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how is it a bishop, i’m so confused…

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wait genuinely whats the difference between a bishop and a crown bearer, like out of the crowns, how can you tell?

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like what separates them?

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how can i tell the difference/gen

fresh swallow
lament ginkgo
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It's kind of like a narender and lamb situation

fresh swallow
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but how do you tell whats what?

lament ginkgo
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Narinder bestowed his crown to the lamb so that the lamb could do his bidding

novel sentinel
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ah i think i understand

fresh swallow
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im still confused.

novel sentinel
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but the point still stands, how do i know which crowns are bishops and which are bearers?

lament ginkgo
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All of them have Bishops and bearers

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The Bishop's bestow their crowns to the crown bearers so that they may carry out their bidding

fresh swallow
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how do you know who's what and what whatdo cold hot eat the fod?

lament ginkgo
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The crown bearers are the right hand man's of the Bishops

novel sentinel
lament ginkgo
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We already have a bearer for that crown

novel sentinel
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wait, what?

lament ginkgo
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The bishop is what we plan to make a snake

novel sentinel
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i’m very confused

lament ginkgo
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Okay think of it like this

novel sentinel
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i thought you said that it had no bearer??

fresh swallow
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cold hot eat the food!

lament ginkgo
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No I said it had no Bishop

novel sentinel
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the wheel i did were for the bearers

lament ginkgo
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Just above that message I said the Bishops need design

lament ginkgo
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Yes I was also adding on to that saying that the Bishops also need designs

novel sentinel
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i made the wheel off of the bearers, and you corrected it

fresh swallow
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but this and that...that and this and...
oh dear, i've gone crosseyed.

lament ginkgo
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Most of the crown bearers have their base design

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Okay this is really hard to explain I guess

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Hold on

novel sentinel
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..other then the ones marked on the wheel, thats the point of making it…

fresh swallow
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derp i am very confused.

lament ginkgo
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The wheel you made is accurate to how many Crown bearers have designs

novel sentinel
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i know, i did my research

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but you corrected me on that crown

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so i took it out of the wheel

lament ginkgo
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however i was talking about how there are Bishops who also need designs

novel sentinel
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i think i can see where the miscommunication happened

fresh swallow
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still confused.

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i dont know whatsgoing on.

lament ginkgo
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Basically you thought I was talking about Crown bearers when I was talking about Bishops

novel sentinel
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correct

fresh swallow
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Oj.

novel sentinel
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and i thought vice versa

lament ginkgo
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There

fresh swallow
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anyone want orange juice!?

lament ginkgo
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the snake design is really good btw

novel sentinel
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alr alr i can change up this design a little to make it a bishop :3 no problemo

lament ginkgo
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Definitely going to use it for the design for the bishop

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Cool

novel sentinel
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teehee ty

lament ginkgo
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Let me show you what the crown bearer looks like

novel sentinel
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the colours for the snake is inspired by the cheshire cat from alice in wonderland btw

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fun fact

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(and dw about it, i get it now)

lament ginkgo
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This is the base for the design

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Of the crown bearer of neurosis

novel sentinel
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i see that

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alr do you mind if i give the chicken the cloak of my snake design, and adjust the snake to be a bishop?

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cuz i made the cloak design for a crown bearer

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anyways yup yup it’s all ironed out now, confusion gone

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okok, newly updated crown circle. the big dots represent the crown bearers, green means they’ve got one, red means they don’t. the little dot inside the big dot represent the bishops, if its dark green, they’ve got one, if it’s dark red, they don’t. simple enough.

novel sentinel
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ok, like this?

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re-blocked the colours

novel sentinel
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hehe little chicky

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oh btw, for the poverty crown, is midas the bishop or the bearer?

novel sentinel
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naivety bishop ehe

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budderfry

novel sentinel
reef solar
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I got a lot to catch up on! loving the new designs too

reef solar
reef solar
lament ginkgo
lament ginkgo
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Bros designs are so good

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Omg

novel sentinel
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i’m a tad busy rn but i’m happy to see y’all are enjoying my art, teehee

versed ermine
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Multiplayer gonna be insane 😭😭😭😭

lament ginkgo
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Lmao

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20 Playable characters

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A 20 player co-op experience!

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(please keep in mind 20 players is not possible till post game as each player has to be unlocked)

thin bison
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Imagine wearing them all at once

jade monolith
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well... I mean... would be insane or crazy. but either way I'm hoping there will be classes for a player to choose from, by that I mean a fighter, tank, healer, supporter, or anything else. miscellaneous types. though.... That would have to be confirmed by the devs if that'll be the case.

novel sentinel
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if any of you guys have ideas for bishops or bearers with no preset design, lmk and i’ll draw it for ya when i get time

ashen umbra
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I acknowledge I’ve only lurked in this thread but I have an idea for the crown of pollution. A carp(known as a dirty fish in America because of it staying in dirty rivers as well as it being an invasive species) and a green sea turtle. Carp being the bishop and the sea turtle being the bearer

novel sentinel
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coolio and yea anyone can suggest things, i’ll draw that when i get the energy

thin bison
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Question, do all the bishops have names

novel sentinel
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half of em don’t even have designs yet, so i’m pretty sure thats a no.

jade monolith
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Hmm

lament ginkgo
jade monolith
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wait. only ten?

lament ginkgo
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Yep

jade monolith
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Huh… never knew that would be the case

lament ginkgo
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Just a message to revive the thread

novel sentinel
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real lol

lament ginkgo
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Damn i lost my cultist 😔

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Oh well

hollow lake
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It burns

tulip hornet
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Mortis

lament ginkgo
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.

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Woo boy i sure hope i get back into cotl

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I really want to continue the development of this au but my motivation is just not there 💀

royal olive
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Pfft, I've actually been planning to continue the basic ref art, might later on make more proper refs for them all after we get like the designs down

novel sentinel
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so real

lament ginkgo
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.

jade monolith
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.

thin bison
novel sentinel
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sigh.. maybe i’ll draw something for this thread again

royal olive
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Would be nice, as I've actually lost motivation for art again so these darn refs are gonna be delayed more sadly

lament ginkgo
lament ginkgo
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Keeping this alive once more

jade monolith
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.

rancid violet
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Death

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Goodbye forever

jade monolith
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…?

formal token
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AM I SEEING WHAT I'M SEEING?!

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I also have an AU with a pink crown!

jade monolith
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Nice!

lament ginkgo
formal token
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Thanks!

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Here's Lambina's reference sheets! (Lambina's my OC)

lament ginkgo
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Nice

lament ginkgo
lament ginkgo
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Obligatory message to keep the chat alive until i can be bothered to actually make an update to the AU

jade monolith
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i... don;t have a crown for my character to call their own sadly. but I don't think my character needs to be either a bishop or crown bearer, right?

lament ginkgo
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No I don't think so

jade monolith
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that's good to know since i lug around a shield that's twice my size. and a sword in my tail.

jade monolith
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well.. round shield but can call it a Tower Round Shield.

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this is what i'm refering to

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do you see what's behind my character? that's the shield.

restive cargo
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Yes

jade monolith
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what i'm holding is a silver sword.

restive cargo
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Personally I prefer pavises, but I suppose that works

jade monolith
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and what i'm wearing is a flowing robe with a bell attachment.

restive cargo
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Why silver, though?

jade monolith
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who knows. could come across a monster with the weakness to silver.

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or a monster weak to blunt damage.

restive cargo
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Just bash em with the shield

jade monolith
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i know. but did a moveset for just that.

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(this is what it looks like.)

restive cargo
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What is this for

jade monolith
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for my moveset with the shield.

restive cargo
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No I mean is this for a game or something?

jade monolith
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well if I was in Cult of the Lamb and with the shield as my weapon. yes.

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but don't ask how my shield can turn into a drill.

restive cargo
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I was thinking that was just some squash & stretch shenanigans

jade monolith
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but I based it off Copen's moveset from the Guvolt Series.

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the top part is from Luminous Avenger 2 but with a twist since I can throw the shield but will need to pick it up. and the buttom part is a tag mechanic since this allows me to send out homing wisps to damage the tagged enemy.

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after shield bashing the target.

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(but yea. aside from that. that's basically it.)

restive cargo
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Mhm

jade monolith
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.

lament ginkgo
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Still no motivation sad

tulip hornet
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Whistle

jade monolith
thin bison
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I donate some of my motivation

lament ginkgo
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I wish that was how it worked 😭

lament ginkgo
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Bap still no motivation

novel sentinel
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hallowed’een lamb

novel sentinel
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i didn’t, tha other dude did

royal olive
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Im alive once more, good lordy this is gonna take so long to actually do stuff for

lament ginkgo
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Ikr

lament ginkgo
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This MIGHT pick back up once sins of the flesh comes out 👀

rose cave
lament ginkgo
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But it's a possibility

lament ginkgo
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soon sin of the flesh will release.. and hopefully then this project with return

royal olive
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random idea i thought alongside this, might add instruments being a thing in the AU, as it'd be fun to have some unique things like that, and some of the instruments i might add as buildable things for it, will be fantasy like instruments but they will match some real world instruments

shadow wadi
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I just joined the Discord but hey, this AU seems really cool! I dunno how many of the crowns are still open but I may throw my hat into the ring and make a crown bearer or bishop :O

heavy quartz
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cute!

royal olive
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i do know we already have a LOT of bishops so maybe not really a crown, but i do know characters in general are useful

lament ginkgo
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I think it's okay

lament ginkgo
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guess what?!

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this is probably coming back :D

rose cave
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Noice

lament ginkgo
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Yippee

novel sentinel
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I’m still alive.. barely…. call on me if you have somethibg to draw, creativity is a bit dry atm

lament ginkgo
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Ok :3

lament ginkgo
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New fallen faith content?

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I made a reply to the twitter pfp contest where charcoal replaced the lamb lol

lament ginkgo
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@royal olive I had an idea to help us start working on this again

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Let's start writing the script for the first act

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None of the new bishops just the arc of the Lamb fighting the og bishops and their crown bearers

novel sentinel
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i am still kicking too

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if you want some pictures or designs, just @ me

novel sentinel
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lil neurosis sketch cuz he’s still my fav, hehe

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basilisks 🔛🔝

severe storm
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Question!

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Whats the idea of Fallen Faith

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And the shit ton of crowns?

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Sorry if I sound rude.

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I am just curious

hidden crescent
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Pig vessel

lament ginkgo
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It's mostly just an au with a deep story

jade monolith
lament ginkgo
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Progress is steadily resuming

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Im currently outlining the chapter count in the script

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There are a total of 4 acts in the AU each with 13 Chapters 1 Prologue and 4 Bonus Chapters that elaborate on the backstory of the Crown Bearers

lament ginkgo
lament ginkgo
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(i am counting the wonderful designs made by @/mako8589, mockups, and ones that haven't been redesigned yet)

lament ginkgo
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Okay so im torn on whether or not I make a raccoon one of the Bishops or one of the Crown Bearers

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What I do know is that a Llama, an Axolotl, and a Bee are likely contenders for Crown Bearers

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And I'm thinking either the Bishop or Crown Bearer of Insanity is gonna be a Rat

lament ginkgo
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I've made Mycelia Crown Bearer of Despair (Character owned by @/actuallyafungus)

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Head lineart is a little thick but im too lazy to fix that

lament ginkgo
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Updated a few crowns so they look more like crowns

severe storm
lament ginkgo
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I didn't want to disturb them

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They're also a mod

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So

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You usually only ping mods for emergencies

civic phoenix
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heyyy! i'm making an AU similar to this. wanna dm to talk about some art exchanging?

lament ginkgo
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That'd be cool

civic phoenix
lament ginkgo
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I've allowed for comments on the doc

novel sentinel
lament ginkgo
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Okay thank you

lament ginkgo
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Heres the group posing with their weapons

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Also yes I finally figured out the redesigns

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The Deer and Buttercup's outfits were inspired by some cultist robes

lament ginkgo
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Oh btw something about my au

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The doors to each realm (except Darkwood) have an extra requirement to open

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You must have at least defeated the previous realm's Crown Bearer

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So to get to Anura you'd have to beat Charcoal

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Need to name these guys

lament ginkgo
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Im gonna be modifying the chapters a bit

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Oh also

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Another tweak from the main game

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Each area actually requires 6 full crusades now

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The first three crusades lead to the the first 3 bosses from the og

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The 4th leads to the Crown bearer

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The 5th leads to the bishop

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And the 6th leads to the witness

lament ginkgo
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Oh! Also

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How many people would like to see a shrine for the main 4 Crown bearers in the au?

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I say only the main 4 bcs if all the crown bearers got shrines then so would all the bishops

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Alternatively

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I could make general shrines for all the Bishops in this au and the Crown Bearers

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Poll time!

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I mostly ask this bcs i want to see if y'all think having a separate area for Fallen Faith Fanart to be shared, so the main discussion of this thread (Lore, Character Designing, etc) isn't overshadowed by the fan works, is a good idea

lament ginkgo
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Phew that took forever

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I'm going to repost the link to the doc

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There is a bit more story added mostly it's just a reformat

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Each Act is now it's own separate doc

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DW tho the next and previous Act in the story will always be at the bottom of the document

broken rose
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Gives me final boss vibes

lament ginkgo
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Technically yes

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She is the final boss of act 2

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Also

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There's more canonical relevance to the AU's title

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But I'll keep that to myself and the co-writers for now

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Speaking of, Mycelia if you're not too busy and you see this, you should take a look through the new stuff

lament ginkgo
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Taking a nap then will be working on the au

lament ginkgo
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Im actually going to revert this change for a few reasons

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  1. im creating new traits (2 of which are semi related to Leshy's old Ability)
  2. I think it makes more sense
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However instead of the status being called "Angry" it'll be "Enraged"

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Enraged followers will destroy decorations and buildings and frequently pick fights with other followers (they will ALWAYS win unless you break the fight up) Enraged followers have a slightly higher chance to dissent

lament ginkgo
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Faithful and Faithless are getting an additional gimmick

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Faithful followers are less likely to dissent
Faithless followers are more likely to dissent

lament ginkgo
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Passive, Wrathful, Moderation, Gluttony, Stronger Immunity, Immunodeficient

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This is the icon for Enraged

lament ginkgo
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Envious, Greedy

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Envious followers will lose faith if they're nearby when you give anything to another follower
Greedy followers will take double the cost of resources for anything you give them for the same amount of faith and only contribute half the amount of resource generation rounding down (unless the contribution is only worth 1)

lament ginkgo
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Hydration meter

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Cold Resistance, Chill Intolerant, Heat Resistant, Heat Intolerant

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Stays Hydrated, Dehydrated

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Energetic, Lethargic

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That's all for now

lament ginkgo
novel sentinel
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with the amount of actual in-game mechanics you seem to be thinking of, are you actually going to mod the game? as in, make this playable? or is it all purely speculative?

lament ginkgo
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Mostly speculative

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But if we actually got the experience or could find people who would be willing to help us

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We could totally do that

novel sentinel
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if i may be a little bit blunt, there’s something i’ve been thinking of since i saw how many crowns you’ve thought up

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and that’s that there’s just too many for each character to get proper development

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sometimes less is more, y’know?

lament ginkgo
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That's why each Act is like

novel sentinel
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because if you think of it in the logistics, half of the crowns don’t even have assigned characters yet

lament ginkgo
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50 Chapters long

novel sentinel
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let alone developed personalities

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yes, but you’re BOUND to get burnt out, trying to put a face to all of those names

lament ginkgo
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With bonus chapters for some character backstory

novel sentinel
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and even if you do, it’ll get watered down the more you try to make

lament ginkgo
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I already have gotten burned out before

novel sentinel
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exactly

lament ginkgo
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But I still have a lot of passion behind this project and I plan to continue through it

novel sentinel
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so in my personal opinion, i think you should cut some of the crowns

lament ginkgo
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That will not be happening

novel sentinel
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there’s just an unnecessary amount

lament ginkgo
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Anytime soon

novel sentinel
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if you say so

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i’m just sayin

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it’s a bad idea to start out with so many characters

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you’ll just run yourself into the ground trying to think up original character concepts

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but if you’re so stubborn, it’s not my place to say

lament ginkgo
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We already have almost all the characters done

novel sentinel
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do you, tho?

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because a LOT of characters here have little more then a follower form and a crown

lament ginkgo
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We have about half of the vessels and Bishops already done

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Or at least base designs in mind

novel sentinel
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then why not just use that ‘half’?

lament ginkgo
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Plus this aint a solo project

novel sentinel
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the more characters you add on, the less important they become

lament ginkgo
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I've got 2 co-writers and plenty of people here who helped with design

lament ginkgo
novel sentinel
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i get that criticism sucks to hear when you’re passionate about something, but i’m saying this out of love for the project, not only to be critical

lament ginkgo
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I get that

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I'm glad you're trying to help, but i really don't think it'll be a big issue

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Especially when we're taking the project 1 step at a time

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Sure we've laid the groundwork for the entirety of the au

novel sentinel
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i’m telling you now, there’s no way that many characters will be comfortable to work with

lament ginkgo
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But most of the lore writing right now is focused on the first Act

novel sentinel
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but if you want to, go ahead

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i’m just saying it now

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give it some thought

lament ginkgo
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If it ever gets to the point where I think the character amount is detrimental I will consider that

novel sentinel
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thanks, thanks

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that’s all i’m sayin

lament ginkgo
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Thank you for trying to help

novel sentinel
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just to put the idea out there

lament ginkgo
novel sentinel
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…i’m aware. i’m the person who’s drawn up a good many designs for you before, you know?

lament ginkgo
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Oh right

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Sorry it's like 2:00 a.m. And I'm tired

novel sentinel
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haaha

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no problem

novel sentinel
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@lament ginkgo is it alright if i make my own spinoff au of the fallen faith? I won’t be posting it anywhere (except for maybe here with the due ‘not canon’ warnings) and will obviously credit/@ you, i’d just like to try my own hand with making a story from some of these characters and thought i’d check with the creator first

novel sentinel
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just that this seems… a bit much

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(that count is for the bishop+bearer of each crown, plus the 4 additional bearers for the base crowns.)

lament ginkgo
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I'm okay with it but you'll have to also ask my head co-writer

royal olive
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Honestly, it could help a little bit with some writing inspo too for Charcoal, he's not giving me much info so i can't actually help write a lot

lament ginkgo
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That's cuz we're writing this together

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You're allowed to write characters how you like

lament ginkgo
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I've redrawn the crowns again :3

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Changing Judgment to Conquest

lament ginkgo
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@royal olive i had a better idea for the second act bishop injuries

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Neurosis: no heart (in reference to the fact snakes can't feel love)
Poverty: no hands (Now Midas can no longer use his fabled touch to turn things to gold)
Deception: no tongue (what a cruel but ironic fate for The Fox, to lose sense of taste)
Fatigue: No Stomach (Would be hard not to be tired all the time if you've lost the very thing that helps generate the most energy)

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I have more ideas for injuries such as no nose, no wings (for any bishop that would've had em), no legs/a missing leg, no lower jaw

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Thoughts?

royal olive
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ooh, yeye, would make sense with how Erasure is protective of her land

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and basically the only family who give her respect living on that land she rules over, so if its in danger it makes a lot of sense she would be feisty, especially if Shamura was threatened the most cause well, those two being canonically married

lament ginkgo
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Yis

royal olive
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the bird wife is VERY protective of their spidey spouse

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i still wanna draw the two being cute together at some point, or you could draw both of them in their follower forms being a cute couple while i work on designs still

lament ginkgo
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Dew it

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Currently making the mock-ups for the rest of the vessels

royal olive
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i also remembered technically Hero has a ponytail as one of their design traits

lament ginkgo
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Speaking of hero I've made a slight tweak to the design to make them more unique from the bird follower forms

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I did the same to cody

royal olive
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Fun fact for yall, the bishops of the Old Faith including Malice have something special to them all, as in this special thing is one thing, they can recognize, even with some injuries, and they will wind up having special responses to this, it will be showed off in the story so i dont wanna downright say it unless Charcoal says it

lament ginkgo
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:)

royal olive
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but yeah, to say the least, this one thing, will bring back memories, and they all worked together on it when they were still a proper family

royal olive
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@low beacon here it is

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thee gooby thread

low beacon
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Oooo 👀

royal olive
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boutta give two teasers and colors should make it obvious who the two are

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also gonna show a lil of what the style is gonna be like

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or well, official rendering style

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but those two are two characters everyone in this thread who's not brand new would know

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also this is technically flat colors, despite how the eyes have a color fade

royal olive
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@tranquil sand

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Ray wanted to see what was up so i pinged him here lol

lament ginkgo
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Hah

royal olive
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you got lots to read here/pos

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lots of random tidbits of lore too

lament ginkgo
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I've opened an AMA for Charcoal in a thread in general, It might give an inside look at some of the lore and give more character development to Charcoal and a few others around him, just be aware though not everything will be answered fully, some things you'll have to wait for the first Act to end for answers

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The AMA takes place sometime after the Darkwood Saga of Act 1 but before Act 2

lament ginkgo
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Might write more today

royal olive
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and of course, im working on designs more lol

lament ginkgo
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I started writing more for this AU then went to the wiki for info only to start making contributions to it bcs the wiki didn't have the info i needed as easy to find than I thought 😅

ashen umbra
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Hey! I had proposed a design for the bearer and bishop of pollution, so I think I’ll finish it up and post it here

lament ginkgo
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Ooo ok

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We actually already have the bearer for pollution

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It's going to be an axolotl

ashen umbra
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Really? Why an axolotl? I'm just curious because when I think pollution, I don't normally think axolotl

lament ginkgo
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Because theyre endangered due to their natural habitat becoming polluted

ashen umbra
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makes sense

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got a specific color in mind?

lament ginkgo
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We did go with pink but the design aint released yet bcs its the rough concept so

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We actually have all the crown bearer species now

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It's just we haven't released any of them because they're still in early concept phase

royal olive
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Yesh and i am one making more detailed refs

lament ginkgo
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Did some more writing

lament ginkgo
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Have a silly

lament ginkgo
uncut hemlock
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ooooo look at this thread 👀

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I love what I'm seeing, nice work dude!

lament ginkgo
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(Repost from #🐐・general)
The Rabbit was the runt of his litter, his family didn't really treat him well because of it... And one day he ran away from home
He ran deep into Darkwood
For weeks he had to survive cold and alone until one rainy day Leshy found him
Leshy took him in, gave him clothes, and gave him a gift... A gift that he would forever hold dear

lament ginkgo
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Im making the lamb's relic next

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Its a framed photo of the lamb's family 😈

uncut hemlock
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this will be my 43rd art thread I'm following 😅

lament ginkgo
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Lol

uncut hemlock
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that's what's up, I'll deff dig through and try to catch up

lament ginkgo
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Lamb family portrait

royal olive
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Btw, the Lamb is directly given their artifact by someone who isn't Chamech, that's one thing o think would be a fun thing for yall to speculate, and some of these relics have planned tooltip style things to them

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Lamb's relic is planned to have something along the lines of "Something worth fighting for."

lament ginkgo
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The Shrine is up! Feel free to share any fanart you have related to the au here!
#1232980425274687579

lament ginkgo
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It's crazy how far we've come

royal olive
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indeed

thorn estuary
rose cave
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It's lookin' nice and alive in here, great to see that :3 Things have changed

lament ginkgo
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Hello shroom dealer

rose cave
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Heyo Char

lament ginkgo
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:3

lament ginkgo
lament ginkgo
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Ive been a little too busy to work on the script but I'll try to today

lament ginkgo
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I redid the crowns yet again

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But this time

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I gave them the red crown treatment

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What do i mean by that?

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I'll show you

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This is the highest quality asset of the red crown

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Notice how the eye has a bit of texture and the crown itself isn't completely black

royal olive
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Oooh?

lament ginkgo
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Now all of them have texture

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And also I redesigned some of them because I felt some still weren't unique enough, like the silhouette was too similar between a couple of them

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This issue still persists a little bit but it's certainly better

royal olive
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I still wanna give a sorta grand vibe th Erasure cause the new lore tidbits we got, of basically the bishop who owns that crown basically being a "god king"

uncut hemlock
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I love these, really well made dude!!

lament ginkgo
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The Crown Ring™ will be coming soon

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And the status on designs will come at the same time (Due to all the Vessels being finished this is only for the Bishops)

lament ginkgo
jade monolith
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that's... alot

novel sentinel
lament ginkgo
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Im currently redesigning weapons, some of these weapons will be changed to something else

lament ginkgo
uncut hemlock
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whoa owo

warm moat
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damn

rose cave
lament ginkgo
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Scythe

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Whats a kama?

royal olive
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its like the between of a scythe and sickle

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kamas are a japanese tool if i found the right article

lament ginkgo
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In regards to Cody's injury under Neurosis instead of Cody having his heart forcefully sacrificed (because I'm making it so the 2nd wave also have the injuries) he sacrificed a rib

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Since uhh Cody would die without a heart

royal olive
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Could also be even they were injured by Malice, but not as badly, so maybe missing the skin over the ribs so its also showing the missing rib

lament ginkgo
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No no

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The 2nd wave of Vessels (excluding Hero) get brainwashed into helping the 2nd wave of Bishops, These Bishops would take the very things from the Vessels that had been taken from them by Malice

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Also i thought about it and actually yes Cody will have his heart removed, but he has an artificial heart in it's place

rose cave
lament ginkgo
rose cave
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Well, a curse doesn't need to be dependent on a casters life, but also kinda true

lament ginkgo
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I could see that becoming a part of the plot if we ditch the more linear structure of the narrative and make more room for side plots and whatnot

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Which also brings me to think this au could work a whole lot better as a large scale fan game or mod but uhh my co-writers and I don't have that kinda experience nor the time to actually work on that

rose cave
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Which is fair

lament ginkgo
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Although more stuff could be explored in shorter side comics

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Cuz keep in mind this AU (and the novel-like script) is meant to become a comic series

rose cave
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I never knew that

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But that's cool

lament ginkgo
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They are all miserable (mostly bcs they all have VERY fresh wounds)

lament ginkgo
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Lore drop
Neurosis (Asclephobos) is actually the one who stole Ratoo's heart in this AU (which makes her losing her heart even more ironic)

warm moat
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i hate that follower form

lament ginkgo
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Why? The anatomical inaccurate beak?

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Also thats not a follower

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The follower form is unchanged in this au

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Thats the Vessel of Fear

royal olive
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also if i remember, we made Marcus have an over the shoulder sort of cape and not the robes

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or atleast when i drew him i had given it to him

lament ginkgo
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Yeah buth there were too many capes

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Couldn't think of unique enough designs that were also not to complicated

royal olive
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i mean we can start changing the others too, might keep the over the shoulder part, cause the cover art stuff allows more complex stuff

lament ginkgo
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I like how the others look imo

royal olive
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that's fair

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might give Cody a ripped tunic to show the bandages in the art of him im making

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also we could do an animation for some of these things, knowing how Ibis Paint allows animations now, i also just have Flipaclip too on my laptop

lament ginkgo
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Awhhh but i especially like cody's cape

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Unless you're giving him bith

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Both*

royal olive
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i was thinking of both

lament ginkgo
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Bet

royal olive
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like all the great despair crown bearers are a little fancier

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Hero literally wears a dress and uses their wings as a shawl out of battle, i think that's pretty fancy

lament ginkgo
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Omg i forgot to do hero!

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Eh oh well

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She's yours to design

royal olive
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that is true but idk how to do sprite edits as good as you

lament ginkgo
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Speaking of i actually have to talk to Mycelia about her character's design

lament ginkgo
royal olive
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we could reference also the fact Malice originally was once missing a leg by also giving Hero a similar injury with a wounded leg, but it was just a coincidental injury

lament ginkgo
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I love it

royal olive
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so maybe a bandaged foot could work cause well, Malice has a whole prosthetic leg

lament ginkgo
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Ill dm any references of the character that you'll need to you

royal olive
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im also busy helping a friend with a game wa

lament ginkgo
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Kk

jade monolith
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pretty cool so far

novel sentinel
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I feel like you should list off these characters at some point because despite my best efforts i have barely any idea who any of these characters are

lament ginkgo
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I will! Once the major characters are all done we'll make info cards or something

novel sentinel
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nifty, if you want some surface-level help (as in, not having me as a lorekeeper) lmk, i have an app that makes that kinda thing pretty easy

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(the actual information isn’t canon to the actual lore, this is my au stuff haha) but this is what it looks like ^-^

novel sentinel
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sneak peak of atlas (my spinoff au’s naivety bishop) in his battle form!!
lamb for scale ^-^

novel sentinel
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i’ve decided that in their battle forms, the 4 new bishops crown eye symbols will be inverted, as seen here ^-^ 2 of them don’t change when flipped, so i’m going to change it up another way

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atlas infodump

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disclaimer: none of this is canon to this au! this is purely my spinoff, and has no official affiliation to the fallen faith as seen in this channel ^^

jade monolith
lament ginkgo
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Might start on wave 3's vessels now

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Or might not

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I got sick over the weekend so my energy is fucked

distant zephyr
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I could imagine an UltraKill Clair De Soleil style battle between Lambert and the Rabbit with the Green Crown!

lament ginkgo
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For any newcomers this one might be a LONG read 😅

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I'll scroll to the top and reply to the first post to make it easier

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This is the start

lament ginkgo
lament ginkgo
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Lore Dump!
The Grand Authority was a great and cruel dictatorship ruling their lands with an iron fist, till one day, one of their own, The Reclusive Schismatic, saw the suffering they were causing and turned on them, Taking something precious of theirs before going into hiding forever... They took with them The Lungs of Pollution, The Wings of Torridity, The Jaw of Despair, and The Leg of Misfortune.

novel sentinel
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currently working on headshot designs for all the characters in my tff spinoff au!

lament ginkgo
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Awhhh

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This spinoff looks promising

novel sentinel
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bluebell (spinoff au’s buttercup) took a little more fiddling with the design then the other two, but here she is!

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she’s based off of a highland cow!! ^-^

lament ginkgo
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Awhhh

novel sentinel
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here’s the amount of crowns i’m working with in my au!! they’re all supposed to be a semi-direct parallel to the base game crowns, Pride thinking they can never die, Apathy being too careless to bother with chaos, peace, or anything like that, gluttony and famine being pretty obvious haha, fear and pestilence is supposed to be like they’re overly worried about everything, including getting sick, in the lore this leads to their total isolation, and naivety paralleling war in that people who think that conflict can always be avoided no matter the circumstances usually do more harm then good ^-^

lament ginkgo
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Pretty good 👍

novel sentinel
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since the 4 new bishops are relatively young in the timeline (they’re going to appear post-game, taking over the regions inhabited by the previous 4 after they die) they’re all gonna be a little on the shorter side compared to the og bishops

novel sentinel
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pythios and atlas, check! already halfway done with the new bishops, hehe

lament ginkgo
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You should make your own thread for this, i bet it'll get a lot of attention!

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If you do just remember to credit me, @royal olive, and @reef solar for the og AU (and link this thread)

royal olive
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yeah

lament ginkgo
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Okay so

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Im pretty much done with the 3rd wave of Vessels

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But I'm conflicted about the 4th wave for a few reasons

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1 I'm running out of injuries to give bishops that wouldn't just leave them or their vessel dead/extremely disabled (basically bed bound) without the crowns power
2 I'm debating whether or not to make the land ruled by The Holy Compassion more technologically advanced than the other lands

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Cuz like

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It'd make sense in some ways, The Holy Compassion would allow their followers more time to advance technology than the others since they're very kind to their followers

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Part of the second conflict ties to the 1st one because i could justify some of the extreme injuries not affecting them as much with advanced technology (sci fi shit) but on the other hand it could clash with CoLT's vibe

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I won't finish the designs for the 4th wave Vessels till I solve this

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I thought about it more, i dont think I'll be making them more technologically advanced, I'll explain the injuries not affecting them as much with the crowns being used to somewhat heal the injuries

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Also for The Holy Compassion the Vessel's injuries were not inflicted by the Bishops

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They either happened during the fight with Insanity or somewhere down the line, coincidentally being the same/similar injury as their bishop

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So heres the summary of why each vessel wave has their injuries (minus the 5th vessels of every wave)
Vessels of the Old Faith: to prove they're worthy of being a vessel
Vessels of the Great Despair: The Bishops wanted the Vessels to suffer the same pain they feel
Vessels of The Grand Authority: Pure Cruelty (The Vessels were given their injuries long before The Bishop's did)
Vessels of The Holy Compassion: Coincidence (Their Injuries were treated as a Sign that they were destined to be the Bishops Vessels)

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Now with that out of the way

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Here are the Vessels of The Grand Authority

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(no Mycelia's eyes aren't always glowing, i just chose to make them glow to reference their pfp)

severe storm
lament ginkgo
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They are

lament ginkgo
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Gonna be a small bit before I do more work on this

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I'll start more work sometime next week

lament ginkgo
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Expect the final vessels sometime this week

lament ginkgo
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Lore dump:
The Bishops of The Holy Compassion tried to calm Insanity's rampage... Unfortunately for them, insanity was beyond saving... Insanity nearly killed them, having torn out Apathy's Ribs, Drought's Kidneys, Conquest's Spine, and Naivety's Liver... But eventually they overpowered Insanity and locked him away in a soundproof vault stripping him of his crown and sending it far away... But not before Insanity cursed it to turn the first one to find it into a vessel for them to use to become free again

novel sentinel
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Laid out the crowns in their groups so it’s easier to read for y’all, yw

novel sentinel
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final main 4 of the spinoff done!

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the thing i’m specifically trying to avoid with these characters is making them NOT look like follower forms. like, if you were to recruit them, they would be easily identifiable as not just a follower form

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because as nice as the designs in the main au are, a LOT of them just look like slightly edited follower forms cuz.. y’know, they literally are

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for example (not to pick in fatigue in particular) if you were to fight this guy in-game it would feel like basically the same experience as fighting a damned (as in one that took in too much sin and becomes an enemy, not used as an expletive) follower form of a bison

lament ginkgo
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Yeah i hear ya, I tried my best to differentiate they'll probably look drastically different from the follower form in the final product but i was working with what i had

royal olive
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yeah with the ideas i have they likely would look more notably different too, such as maybe different expressions as a more subtle thing, but the hair could be more scruffy looking than the follower for Fatigue to make them more unique

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maybe even a mutation reference where horned animals can have more than their regular horns, like a little nub of a third horn?

lament ginkgo
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Also i think each wave of bishops should have different robe designs

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Coming from different cultures first off would mean they dress a little differently

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Plus being able to display their injures wouldn't be possible for a lot of them if they all wear a cloak that covers 90% of their body

royal olive
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yeahh

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the great despair could be the ones that wear more tribal like outfits, thus why Malice herself has the dress she does

novel sentinel
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i ❤️ this app for character development

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i’d say that makes the base 4 decently fleshed out, neato

novel sentinel
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made a few relationship charts so you get the gist of their feelings for eachother, if u were curious

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also pride bishop and bearer!!

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and brutus, we love you too brutus

novel sentinel
worn bronze
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I just read through this entire thread, and I have to say, I'm very impressed!

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I love how you added so many new crowns LambertWithHeartEyes

novel sentinel
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HELP ME IM BEING POSSESSED BY REVERSE ART BLOCK

lament ginkgo
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Lol

novel sentinel
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PHASE 1 FINALLY OVER RAUGHH

novel sentinel
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(for the canon au) thought i’d post this here too for the masses

atomic pike
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WRONG CHANNEL MY BAD

severe storm
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I call it Art Surge

novel sentinel
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axel my boy ily

dry oxide
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theres so much info this is an amazing au!

novel sentinel
novel sentinel
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hotako and his daughter, gluttony crown bishop and bearer respectively ^-^ (spinnoff)

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he’s a goat, she’s a fox

novel sentinel
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hotako deffo has one of those ‘#1 dad’ coffee mugs and he deserves it too

atomic pike
lament ginkgo
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Oooo

lament ginkgo
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I haven't worked on this in a bit 😅

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Ive been working on other projects (and making sure i dont fail school "=~=)

rose cave
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School is important

jade monolith
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Looks like a spear user

novel sentinel
thin bison
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I’ve come to donate some more motivation

lament ginkgo
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Torridity is purposely supposed to look like fire

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Deception would lose it's unique look imo and i wouldn't know how to improve erasure

royal olive
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Im trying to improve Erasure, so I've got it covered

reef solar
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I'm wondering how the existence of the Goat (The Kid?) will influence the au if at all?

lament ginkgo
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Probably not much considering most of this voids A lot of things post RotOF

novel sentinel
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i’ve decided to name the gluttony bearer valentine ^-^

novel sentinel
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new character just dropped gang.. i’ve got too much lore cooked for him to drop it all here but erm he made all the crowns a looong time ago. so don’t expect much interaction in the main storyline but. he’s here. and affects the lore. ❤️

novel sentinel
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he’s like.. the god above gods, ya know

novel sentinel
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did you, in your crusade to find god (before crowns) find out that they’re not real? Don’t worry, you can just make them.

novel sentinel
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2/4 bishops fully done.. still working on pythios’s monstrous form but still still that’s just colour

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biblically accurate blair. bottom text

novel sentinel
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i don’t write in google docs, so i’ll just paste in what i have when it’s done

reef solar
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Happy the god of gods is a bug

jade monolith
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cool

lament ginkgo
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Well this is ironic

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I gots a lamb pfp despite the fact that charcoal is the #1 lamb hater XD

novel sentinel
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pythios is all wrapped up now ^-^

lament ginkgo
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Might continue working on the script sometime soon

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Been very busy tho lately

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Got a lot of other projects and ideas im constantly jumping between

lament ginkgo
# reef solar I'm wondering how the existence of the Goat (The Kid?) will influence the au if ...

Now that I've thought about it the goat from base game could be a sort of "Story Shift" version of the lamb where all of the characters take a different but similar role in the story like each category of character (Mini boss, Bishop, vessel, ect.) getting their roles shuffled around within the category (i.e. no bishops getting turn to vessels for example) and the crowns shuffling color palette

royal olive
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im randomly wanting to sketch Shamura watching Malice wander like the beautiful goddess of fate she is pretty much

royal olive
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everyone has to see how whimsical the bird mama is

royal olive
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my phone broke so uh, here's the most recent thing of Bird Mama

lament ginkgo
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Srry for lack of updates my hyperfixations have been keeping me in a chokehold

lament ginkgo
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yall know the drill, new update to the game means im likely to do more for this lol

novel sentinel
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same here 😼 my cotl hyperfixation is roused with every new dlc

lament ginkgo
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"𝓯𝓻𝓮𝓪𝓴𝔂" charchar 🤨

novel sentinel
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i’m 𝓯𝓻𝓮𝓪𝓴𝔂 wdym freakdoka

lament ginkgo
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You getting ur 𝓯𝓻𝓮𝓪𝓴 on

royal olive
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remembered this, i think we could change Redo to Renewal, or Remembrance

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dangit, also remembered the idea of it being called Creation

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ight @lament ginkgo you wanna pick which one you prefer?

lament ginkgo
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Wont say the og 5 bcs thats obv

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Achievements for defeating the BISHOPS without taking damage

Neurosis - Bravery
Poverty - Wealth
Deception - Integrity
Fatigue - Stamina
Erasure - Creation
Misfortune - Luck
Despair - Hope
Incalescene - Temperate
Pollution - Purity
Isolation - Communication
Apathy - Enthusiasm
Naivety - Knowledge
Drought - Hydration
Judgement - Approval
Insanity - Sensibility

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These are also what the inverse crowns are called

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That was my response to the list

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With some slight modifications, as i recently thought of better ideas since then

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The crown bearers wouldn't have achievements

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If they did the name of said achievements wouldn't have anything to do with the bishop they serve

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More so their backstory

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plus the lamb wouldn't have an achievement anyway, you cant fight the lamb he's the MC

sand dirge
lament ginkgo
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Also

lament ginkgo
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Well it might not be a shift au but more so one where they have different personalities

lament ginkgo
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Like how in the trailer the lamb pulls another lamb out of the water and it turns into a goat

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Their species would only shift when pulled into this universe

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I DID however make the shifted crowns

sand dirge
lament ginkgo
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Now granted this concept would probably only come into play in like a spin-off comic or like a mini comic

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(saying that bcs this au is planned to become a comic series)

sand dirge
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Coooool

jade monolith
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A lot of crowns

sand dirge
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Yes

frigid rose
lament ginkgo
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Updates have been (and are being) made on the script for the au

lament ginkgo
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I have made the decision to separate Acts into 5 parts in order to ensure each entry of the comics isnt too long allowing for them to come out sooner

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Each part focuses on 1 area

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With the final part being the build up to and the finale of the act

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As of now only Act 1's script layout has been altered to fit this change

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Anyways i hope you all enjoy reading the revisions and additions to the script

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And remember to leave feedback using the google doc comment feature

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lament ginkgo
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@royal olive sooo I've had a few ideas

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1 The Eternal Mother's name should probably fit with the rest of the bishops naming trends (Most bishops have names that are based on actual gods)
2 maybe the crown of Erasure could be the Crown of Malice instead since i feel it fits the theme of "Horsemen of the apocalypse" more (+ it'd be a reference to the fact that she's a version of yourself)

royal olive
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Also technically works when erasure is usually seen as a malicious thing

lament ginkgo
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So we going with that?

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regardless of that, we have some major updates!

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Every area for this AU has been given a theme named!

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Not only that but A few major characters have been named!

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I'll be explaining these updates over the course of the next few days when i have time

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Let's start with the names!

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The final bosses of act 3 and 4 have been given a species and name!

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Act 3's final boss, The Bishop of Isolation, Has been given the species of Wolf/Hellhound! Their name is Anuberus (a fusion of the names Cerberus and Anubis)...

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They used to have 3 heads but the other bishops severed 2 of them. He was only able to save 1 of the severed heads from being completely destroyed, it serves as his relic

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(much like The Eternal Mother, Hes serves as my self insert)

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He created 2 robot companions in the image of the heads he lost, they're named Cerby and Nubis. They're the mini boss that you fight before fighting Anuberus

lament ginkgo
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Act 4's final boss, The Bishop of Insanity, is a Bear named Ursaheim. They were defanged after going on a massacre that resulted in several fatalities and severe injuries (including towards the other bishops)

lament ginkgo
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One of these fangs serves as their relic

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They were locked away in a vault guarded by 2 other bears named Purson and Balam

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Oh Also I'm planning on making the Bishop of Apathy a Vampire Bat, You'll find out why when i get to talking about the areas

lament ginkgo
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I'm actually going to something interesting with Despair's Bishop

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It's going to be a skeleton of some sort that has fungus growing on it. It's still going to be considered a mushroom because that is the thing that's alive and in control

lament ginkgo
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Aaand I've just come up with all the species

royal olive
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we could go Marri for Malice instead, technically referencing the first part of the name of the Morrigan, for the whole thing of going for names based on gods atleast

lament ginkgo
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IDK

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If we're making "Erasure" be "Malice" the name might be too close to the crown

lament ginkgo
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Gloomist is a land in the sky made entirely of fluffy storm clouds , it can get very foggy and is quite prone to thunder and rain storms. It is the realm of Misfortune

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Moltenridge is a charred mountainscape home to lakes of lava (basically your typical mario castle level except in a mountain environment instead of a castle) it is the realm of torridity

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Blighted Mire is a heavily polluted swap, the air quality is quite bad and there are quite a few patches of unbreathable air (it'd work like poison puddles). It is the realm of Pollution

summer arrow
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Oh a cow as a Successor/counterpart to the blue crown

lament ginkgo
lament ginkgo
summer arrow
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Anyway as a bishop their name is bathomer

lament ginkgo
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It's a bit confusing at times so if you have any questions feel free to dm me

lament ginkgo
summer arrow
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I thought i would just share as i saw that a bat bishop was mentioned

lament ginkgo
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I get it, but sharing OCs here can really interrupt the conversation flow

summer arrow
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Fair

lament ginkgo
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Again though they look really cool

summer arrow
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Thx

lament ginkgo
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Where was i? Oh yeah

summer arrow
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Ok 1750 messages isn't too much to scroll through

lament ginkgo
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Scorcholt is a forest filled with burnt and dead plant life. Not much wildlife can survive in this landscape as there are not many places to make home, and all the lakes have gone dry. It is the Realm of Drought

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Frightfair is a rundown circus/carnival filled with all sorts of fun things now twisted into terrifying attractions. It is the Realm of Naivety

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Ruined Providence is a kingdom/castle in ruin. This kingdom was once prosperous, now laid in ruin due to the conquest of a rival kingdom and laid in further ruin due to The Sadistic Whisperer's massacre that happened sometime after the Bishop of Conquest claimed this land as their own.

summer arrow
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Is Multiple tax collectors a thing in the game(as in at the same time) a thing?

lament ginkgo
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No no, if you read more you'd know they're all from different cults (at first at least)

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Once they join The Lamb's cult they lose tax collector status

summer arrow
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Ah

lament ginkgo
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Sorry for lack of updates fallen faith fans (although you're probably used to it by now) I've had a lot going on, I might continue to write on the story doc though later today, no promises though

lament ginkgo
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Okay i haven't written more BUT i do have a charcoal drawing done from memory gotta say he looks cute with 3 tufts of fur on each side

novel sentinel
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yo every1, i’m still here if u need me. i really reckon u guys just gotta iron your story out really, get a document and write down all your characters and their basic lore cuz atm this thread is extremely difficult to follow and the character development is extremely unbalanced

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if you don’t have the people/time/love to develop all the characters you’re creating, then they’re going to be 2 dimensional “just a name and a face” characters which are EXTREMELY hard to like, so i think you just need to cut off the excess and focus on your main characters and your lore rather then juggling all these crowns and characters that you’ll never develop properly without bloating ur au. just a bit of critical feedback from someone who’s been here for ages

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i’ve been watching y’all develop this bad boy for over a year and a half now and it still seems to hardly have developed, and i definitely feel like it’s because it’s suffering from the amount of characters here, it’s too much for someone to be able to actively engage with each

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A novel has too many characters if there are a bunch of characters who have no purpose. They tend to crowd the story and distract the reader. When I read books with ‘too many characters’ (at least for my taste), I find myself struggling to remember names, growing bored during the chapters or scenes dedicated to the unnecessary ones, and skipping large chunks of pointless narrative or dialogue.

In general, the consensus is that each character should have a purpose, even if it’s a small purpose. If a character is there for no other reason than to add another name or perspective, then you might need to reevaluate their place in the story. Could their role be given to another, more interesting character? Should they perhaps take on the role of other, less interesting characters?

The main reason for this is that the more concise your book is, in terms of plot, dialogue, and description, the more likely your readers are to remember and care about what’s important.

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i’ve been parroting this for ages by now, but seriously, this au is SUFFERING from it, and as someone who likes it and wants to see it thrive, i feel like it’s important for negative feedback to be heard as well as positive

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charcoal is OBVIOUSLY the creator’s favourite, and there’s no issue with that, but when all the character development and plot revolves around one character, the rest seem to fade out. i hope you don’t take this as hate, it’s genuine concern from a long time fan

novel sentinel
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also, i made a couple simple sketches of insanity and apathy’s bishops, based off of what little lore we have. i’d make more, but i don’t feel like it

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since the base game bishops have bandages around their injuries, i did the same for insanity’s defanging

novel sentinel
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quick speed round of my interpretation of the 4 forbidden bishops, or something. up to you whether you accept them as canon or not, but i stuck to the lore as best as i could

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anuberis just has a heavy shadow over his face, it’s not any different colour

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also finally have the inspiration to remember my au for this and pick it back up

lament ginkgo
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A lot of the characters are going to have a bigger purpose, i just haven't been focusing on them as much because they're later in the story, but yeah I can see how this project has gotten a little overambitious. I think for now the second half (act 3 and 4) could be cut from any focus at least until act 1 and 2 are complete

Another problem this AU faces is i simply haven't had the time or energy to work on it. My hyperfixations kinda lead what projects of mine i work on and i haven't been hyperfixated on Cult Of The Lamb in a while so I haven't had the motivation to work on this project as much

novel sentinel
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overambitious is definitely the word i’d use for this, and don’t worry i get the struggle with energy

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i just feel like it’d also be easier for you to develop and work on it if it didn’t feel so huge, it’s kind if an uphill battle trying to crank out info for this big of a scale, no real easy way to keep yourself from burning out

lament ginkgo
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I really do love this au though And I'm genuinely so grateful to have so many people interested in this silly little au idea

novel sentinel
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i love it too, that’s why i’ve stayed this long ^-^

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if you want help on it, i’d be happy to

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i feel like making a discord server for this project would help a lot, just in terms of organisation, even if it was only for developers of the story

lament ginkgo
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Ooo fun fact actually the concept for the first character Charcoal was actually originally supposed to be a swap au where Leshy was The One Who Waits then i made a "Lamb" for the rest too because why not, and the idea just kinda evolved into this

novel sentinel
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i get that, don’t worry

lament ginkgo
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yuppers

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even if it’s bare bones

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it’s great for keeping everything important there

lament ginkgo
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I might do that soonish then

novel sentinel
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rather then having to sift through all this to get to the basics

lament ginkgo
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You'd make a good design concept artist and possibly writer

novel sentinel
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add me if you do, i’d be happy to help

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thanks, thanks

lament ginkgo
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I still can't believe how far this au has gotten

novel sentinel
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agreed, but i still know it can go further, and i’d be thrilled to help it do that

lament ginkgo
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It's surreal anytime an idea of mine gets attention on a scale larger than just my close friend group

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But yeah I'll probably work on making a discord for this au tomorrow, prob have to leave a server tho since I'm at least close to max

novel sentinel
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i’ve loved this au for, as i’ve said, over a year and a half now, and i just can’t help but want to see it flourish properly and as it is now, it’s really hard to get into it with how disorganised the lore feels

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it’s rather all over the place, and i’d like to help get it all layed out

lament ginkgo
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Yeah i tend to have a problem of having too many ideas than i can reasonably make a reality on my own or with just a few people

novel sentinel
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trust me, it’s noticeable

lament ginkgo
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It would be nice to get everything laid out properly

novel sentinel
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even if it feels cohesive to you, the writer, it’s important to flesh everything out on paper (or digital, you get the point) or you’ll lose it all over time

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if i were you, i’d put the insanity and isolation crews on the backburner, and focus on fleshing out the erasure bishops and bearers first and foremost. no need to rush into it

lament ginkgo
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I might also tomorrow at least write basic descriptions of events and stuff on the story doc and then later actually like write out the scenes

novel sentinel
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Act 3 and 4 are being put on hold until act 1 and 2 get figured out

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i also have my own au of this, as i’ve been saying, because i see it’s potential but don’t personally like how wide the scale has gotten here, so i wanted to cut off my own little bite and take the story in the direction i like

lament ginkgo
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so it’ll probably help to take inspo from that too

lament ginkgo
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The amount of times I've had to search through it to remember a specific thing 😭

novel sentinel
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exactly, exactly

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this is why a discord server, even if simple, would do you wonders

lament ginkgo
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many thanks, it’s also been rotting for a while now, so i’m brushing the dust off and starting fresh today XD

lament ginkgo
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Side note I cannot believe my emoji contributions have survived this long

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They're almost as old as fallen faith

novel sentinel
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an example of how helpful making a discord server can be fir this sorta project, just a few lines and it expresses and documents a lot of basic important information to the viewer

lament ginkgo
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Y'know what imma do the server now

novel sentinel
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sick as, doesn’t take much

lament ginkgo
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At least like making it not setting up channels

novel sentinel
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yuppers, i can help with that

novel sentinel
lament ginkgo
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Gonna draw an icon for it and then make it

lament ginkgo
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how much is it used?!

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HEPLP idk but i use it a lot and i like it a lot

lament ginkgo
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I thought like maybe 2 people would be using it

novel sentinel
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i’m not active in general, but trust it’s one of my favs

lament ginkgo
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But yeh thats my fault

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I made that abomination

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:3

novel sentinel
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roblox man face is so based

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i gots to work on documenting more on my au now gang, lmk if i can help

worn bronze
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im moderately active in general so i kinda know whats going on in there

lament ginkgo
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Fun fact: The Saving Sozo and Reuniting Aym and Baal with Forneus questlines ARE canon to The Fallen Faith, it just isnt featured in the main comics, most likely it will be featured in small spin-off comics

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Their will also be various other "Saving" quests for fallen faith original side characters however it's unlikely they'll be featured in the main comics as for the most part only the Bishop Quests will be featured

lament ginkgo
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The Lamb also plays Knucklebones against the 4 Knucklebones players as well as _potential_* new players introduced in the other acts

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lament ginkgo
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Next post is gonna be headshots for all the act 1 crown bearers with tweaked designs to even further separate them from the Follower forms

worn bronze
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@lament ginkgo you dont mind if i use one of your crown forms in my pfp, do you?

lament ginkgo
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Uhhh

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No

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Why would you go ahead and do it anyways?

worn bronze
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i can go back to the older pfp anytime if you want

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no problem

lament ginkgo
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Please do 🙏

worn bronze
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ok

viral carbon
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Hi
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gloomy wolf
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Hola, amigos

viral carbon
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Nice thread

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Actually I don't know if this is like a thread or like a folder or idk. But I just want to say you're all doing a great job

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Okie bye

lament ginkgo
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Oh wow this got seen again, sorry for no updates y'all

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My life has been quite busy and my interests/hyperfixations have been elsewhere

viral carbon
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It's fine! But hi

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So uh. I actually saw this from a Reddit post

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And I have to say me and my friend, Prince are very inspired by your work

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I'm sorry if I rambled on. I'm very shy-

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I also just want to say I hope you have a nice day

gloomy wolf
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Facts

lament ginkgo
# viral carbon And I have to say me and my friend, Prince are very inspired by your work

Sorry, i missed this, I don't have notifications on for this server anymore, but I'm so happy i inspired you guys! On an unfortunate note, Fallen Faith is still gonna be on hiatus for a while and I honestly don't know when I will be returning to the project. I still got stuff going on irl and Cult of the Lamb hasn't been a hyperfixation in a long time so i haven't had the opportunity or motivation to work on it more

viral carbon
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It's quite alright. It's understandable

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No need to worry! ^^

lament ginkgo
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Glad you understand, luckily I'm not going to outright cancel the project as I still really love it and would be willing to return to it even if it's years from now that I will have the motivation to do so

viral carbon
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I mean the project is very amazing I will say

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It got me and my friends inspired by it

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I hope that you're doing well Irl and I hope you have a nice day

fierce carbon
viral carbon
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I'm not even sure if they would consider to be counted as a fallen Faith au character-

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But okay I guess

lament ginkgo
viral carbon
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Alrighty. Well I hope you have a good day. And good luck on college ^^

frigid rose
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that’s not me being a smartass btw it’s literally called paper

frigid rose
fierce carbon
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Today’s @viral carbon Birthday!

frigid rose
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You should make a Tumblr account about this fun, interesting, magnificent AU so that even more people can enjoy it!!👍

viral carbon
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Me?

frigid rose
# viral carbon Me?

Ah, I think I phrased it badly.
I mean, I just wish there was a Tumblr account about the AU.
But, I would like to see you in Tumblr, too because your OC is cute!

viral carbon
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Why thank you well I just finished all six of the characters for each of the crowns

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But I'll look into it

tender solar
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Nice

viral carbon
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Well..one is my COTL Mar

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The other five are original characters

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Yeah. I only did the five original characters and one of them being myself which is basically another Marisa

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The rest of the other crowns are given to my friends

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Yeah we basically all did this in a group

fierce carbon
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Damn

I remember you used to have three

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like a dragon and a skunk

viral carbon
lament ginkgo
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if i ever had the uhhh motivation to continue working on this 😅

frigid rose
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Alright, I want you to take your time!

lament ginkgo
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Made my server profile pic charcoal finally

viral carbon
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Nice

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By the way it's been awhile since I've been here

thorn estuary
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awesome

viral carbon
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I pretty much changed my profile to my COTL self

stable river
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im here too, diff acc same guy

viral carbon
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Oh

royal olive
lament ginkgo
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Fallen Faith might return soon

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For now all development will be focused on the main games story in this AU's continuity and then the second group of Bishops

viral carbon
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Curious to see where this will go

royal olive
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I dunno how I'd help much with how little communication happens, but I do atleast know its mostly because of how all over the place Charcoal is sometimes, which I understand is pretty fair

lament ginkgo
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When I'm ready to work again there's gonna be more communication

lament ginkgo
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Some of the vessels might get better redesigns if i get the motivation to draw

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Also I might rework the wolf boss from Woolhaven into this AU keeping his hatred of the gods he probably stole his crown to gain their power and usurp them tho I'd likely rearrange the species of the gods to reflect this

viral carbon
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Pretty much this au has given my own take on this au with my own spin so I'm just throwing that out there and I like to say thank you for the inspiration

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I mean the way I see it. This au is truly a work of art

viral carbon
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I would show my characters but I'm still a bit nervous around here

lament ginkgo
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Got sick so it might be a bit longer before I do anything

viral carbon
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It's all good

lament ginkgo
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We are currently redesigning/redrawing the Priests (AKA the Vessels) and the Bishops from Act 1

lament ginkgo
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Lambert and Charcoal done

mighty tide
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ok i see where youre going with this

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sorry i misjudged

lament ginkgo
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It's cool

mighty tide
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ive seen aus where the oc is too op

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-# cough glitchtale

lament ginkgo
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LMFAO no I try to make my OCs actually fit within the universe

mighty tide
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thats good

viral carbon
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On my spin of the au. Some of my characters have headcanon voices

royal olive
# mighty tide ive seen aus where the oc is too op

there isn't any technical op, but technically the strongest so far of everyone would be Malice, although even she got usurped by her peers, so we're absolutely tryin to avoid too op characters so dont worry lol

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Charcoal would rattle me like im a packet of misbehaving beans if i was making op characters(im usually designing eldritch gods so uhh-)

royal olive
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like imma be fr, technically even the old faith and great dispair could theoretically have an even fight, but the great dispair would win more out of collective combat competence, unless its during the time Malice's peers are jealous of her, then old faith wins, i compare the great despair as they are the actual oldest pantheon, as Malice was the only god never usurped, but that's because she was too nice to everyone who tried lmao

royal olive
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its very hard to usurp someone who is like "Oh! what a lovely sight for my many eyes! come now my dear, we have a freshwater river you can drink from, or we can brew tea! that adventure to these sacred lands must have been so harsh on you, please, make yourself welcome, the land is sanctuary to kin and pilgrim alike, if you need food aswell, i shall provide, my dear guest."

jade monolith