[4k] BUTCHER VANITY (normal)

[plain cedar]

Song: BUTCHER VANITY
Artist: FLAVOR FOLEY
Style: Jumpstream/dump/technical
Rating: 4 to 24
I would like feedback specifically on the dump difficulty (challenge)

[zealous panther]

@plain cedar this is a very fun file. I really like the 32nd trilly sections at the climax of the choruses, and the 16th jacks in the choruses.

this jack section at measure 89.25 feels like a big spike compared to the other jack sections, especially since it isnt in a repeating section like all the other jack sections, so its kind of a jumpscare. I would suggest keep the jacks but make them 2 notes long

the transitions between some sections feels a bit off (mainly the one at measure 51.5), since there is a constant sound in the music but there is a large gap in the notes.

imo the entire section at measure 67.25 feels a bit empty compared to the intensity of the song, however i can understand this may be on purpose to give a break from the chorus, and to make the choruses the highlight of the file

in the choruses, there are some sections that sound very distinct, and I cant really tell how they are represented by the jumpstream. for example the section from measure 85.25-85.75.

[zealous panther]

for measure 85.25-85.75, something like this would represent the vocals better imo

ofc everything i said are small nitpicks, for me the general structure of the file feels coherent and the file is overall very fun :)