So I’ve been working on this idea for a while and need help on what I could do to improve it
#critique my track idea
deep swan
raw cipher
pitch in should be less lazy i think, and maybe if you gave it a real melody would be pretty good. first drop is good but transition into second verse could be a little smoother, same with transition into second drop although it is a cool idea, maybe make it more different from the first drop. last drop is sick tho, if you work on your basics, kicks/snares and stuff, could be super sick
fair pond
I find that there are a lot of timing mistakes and i think it would really benefit from some contrast between big and heavy and small and fast yk
deep swan
Yeah man, thanks guys
raw cipher
pitch in should be less lazy i think, and maybe if you gave it a real melody wou...
Meant to say pitch in intro sorry