#Roast it

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tacit furnace
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emphasize accomplishments with ur work instead of "developed x"; outline the impact of the thing u developed
and also add more detail because there is not enough

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moved from: #tech-chat message

olive creek
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do you have projects

foggy sierra
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don't have too much time right now but I can see some outright things u must fix

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make your font much smaller

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just use a normal resume format

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look up new grad software engineer resume example/format

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copy them

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you don't need those huge letters and a huge font

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because it's taking up a lot of space

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anyway the real problem is that you'll need to go into more detail

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you're very vague about what you did at each company

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you need to be very specific

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list very specific contributions you've made

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list very specific technologies you've used

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you can even make them bold (the specific tech)

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like, "Used GCP NLP Platform to optimize our company's blah blah, improving our companies efficiency at doing X, and boosting our sales by Y."

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well that's the ideal thing you'd want to say if you can...like talk about the numbers and improving sales or value for the company and crap like that

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also look up CS New grad software engineer resume like I said

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and copy the keywords they use and the way that they're talking.

keen kite
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If you need a model for wording bullets/layout, here is mine

tight depot
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Ugh you probably need an image not a pdf

wintry silo
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You don’t have to list your community college (I didn’t) and you only need to list your graduation date imo

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You can use that room to expand a little on company C maybe? Or whichever company you want

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I like the bullet points though

tight depot
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fwiw the company c was part time i didnt do muchh

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but i can try to add a couple tings

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anything wrong with like the descriptions and stuff??

wintry silo
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Cursory glance says they look good, but maybe someone else will point out something I’m missing

tight depot
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hopefully someone says something bad, i feel awful when no critiques are given 😦

severe lynx
tight depot
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idk, that’s how it came

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is that a problem? how can i improve on that?