#Roast it
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do you have projects
yo
don't have too much time right now but I can see some outright things u must fix
make your font much smaller
just use a normal resume format
look up new grad software engineer resume example/format
copy them
you don't need those huge letters and a huge font
because it's taking up a lot of space
anyway the real problem is that you'll need to go into more detail
you're very vague about what you did at each company
you need to be very specific
list very specific contributions you've made
list very specific technologies you've used
you can even make them bold (the specific tech)
like, "Used GCP NLP Platform to optimize our company's blah blah, improving our companies efficiency at doing X, and boosting our sales by Y."
well that's the ideal thing you'd want to say if you can...like talk about the numbers and improving sales or value for the company and crap like that
also look up CS New grad software engineer resume like I said
and copy the keywords they use and the way that they're talking.
If you need a model for wording bullets/layout, here is mine
Wanna see what errors/bad things are done on this so I can improve on it?
Ugh you probably need an image not a pdf
You don’t have to list your community college (I didn’t) and you only need to list your graduation date imo
You can use that room to expand a little on company C maybe? Or whichever company you want
I like the bullet points though
fwiw the company c was part time i didnt do muchh
but i can try to add a couple tings
anything wrong with like the descriptions and stuff??
Cursory glance says they look good, but maybe someone else will point out something I’m missing
hopefully someone says something bad, i feel awful when no critiques are given 😦
Why is everything so big 😂