Resume review for upcoming grad in MS Data Science

[woven rock]

1st bullet in aricent technologies sounds like fluff.

“Drove” -> Led

what did u use to redevelop the tracking system?

i personally dont care for the last nullet in ur ernst and young position

[cunning ocean]

Thank you so much. I agree. I didn’t like what I put under Aricent, just needed a confirmation.

The third bullet is to show I have non-technical skills as well which are important is DS. I’ll take your suggestion and consider removing it though.