#2nd resume - rising soph SDE internship

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waxen meadow
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Hey sorry I just saw this

waxen meadow
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So an increase of 200% = tripling efficiency

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I hope that’s right?

echo raft
waxen meadow
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I can see how it’s a little off putting

echo raft
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you can try putting the averages you found instead? maybe? not sure. But yeah just off a glance it looks a little 🤔 but i asked just to see of u actually had something to back it up. If you have the build times available then try putting that and we can see if it makes it sound a little more “””believable”””

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also because u didnt really say anything about CODING , u just said u documented how to use it

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yeah idk it kinda seems like ur taking the credit there

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surely a person on the frontend team would have that in their bullet point

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but u didnt do any of the coding

waxen meadow
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Hm yah that makes sense. Okay I’ll try finding a better way to quantify that impact, thanks!

waxen meadow
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I can try combining the first and second point

echo raft
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oh i see

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maybe put the %% in this first bullet

waxen meadow
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Since that build time difference is dependent on the actual component library, not the documentation only oops

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Yah that makes way more sense

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That’s my bad, I didn’t catch that

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@echo raft if I’m combining the 2 points, do u think it’s off putting to only have 2 points for that one internship?

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I’ve previously heard it’s best to stay consistent with the number of points u have per entry

echo raft
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i mean idk i personally think its fine to have 2 bullets.
But it will also probably be fine to keep the documentation thing as a standalone bullet

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i would dwindle down some of the course work

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change bullet points of full stack intern position to be in past tense

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ah nvm i see ur still in it

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well make sure u do that once the internship ends

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how did u end up at “increasing efficiency by 200%” , how was this measured?

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i would possibly add horizontal borders/rules between sections just do its a tiny bit more easy to read. Just my 2cent

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i think bolding can also be dwindled a bit.