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vernal yew Jun 17, 2022, 12:05 AM

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Yeah there are a few things I'd change if I were you

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I think some of your points are a little weak and don't follow the xyz format

keen birch Jun 17, 2022, 12:06 AM

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and the points don’t follow the format?

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or that they do follow it and he shouldn’t

vernal yew Jun 17, 2022, 12:06 AM

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Like they don't start with action verbs

keen birch Jun 17, 2022, 12:06 AM

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English is a dumb language and I really shouldn’t need to ask this

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Also implemented is lowercase

vernal yew Jun 17, 2022, 12:07 AM

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Yeah

keen birch Jun 17, 2022, 12:07 AM

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vernal yew Like they don't start with action verbs

ok ye I see that, agree

vernal yew Jun 17, 2022, 12:07 AM

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And so is theater in the first project

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and for spacing

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it's

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c++, python, whatever

empty herald Jun 17, 2022, 12:07 AM

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Looks like the u in utilize is bolded also?

vernal yew Jun 17, 2022, 12:07 AM

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a comma and then the space

uncut forum Jun 17, 2022, 12:08 AM

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vernal yew I think some of your points are a little weak and don't follow the xyz format

like which point

empty herald Jun 17, 2022, 12:08 AM

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hash and salts passwords is not in past tense like everything else

vernal yew Jun 17, 2022, 12:08 AM

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^ that point

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along with Ejs was used as

uncut forum Jun 17, 2022, 12:08 AM

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empty herald hash and salts passwords is not in past tense like everything else

sorry my english is bad

vernal yew Jun 17, 2022, 12:08 AM

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no worries

empty herald Jun 17, 2022, 12:09 AM

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no problem, that stuff is hard to catch even for native speakers

vernal yew Jun 17, 2022, 12:09 AM

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yeah for sure

uncut forum Jun 17, 2022, 12:09 AM

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vernal yew along with Ejs was used as

get it

vernal yew Jun 17, 2022, 12:09 AM

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i always fuck up my bullet points too

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that's why i always let other people read my stuff

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since they'll catch things i can't

empty herald Jun 17, 2022, 12:09 AM

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I would remove "even" from 2nd bullet point under movies

uncut forum Jun 17, 2022, 12:10 AM

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empty herald I would remove "even" from 2nd bullet point under movies

get it

empty herald Jun 17, 2022, 12:10 AM

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also a lot of stuff is repeated between 1st and 2nd bullet point there

calm surge Jun 17, 2022, 12:10 AM

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remove

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: and , should have space after and no space before

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a: b
a, b

uncut forum Jun 17, 2022, 12:12 AM

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empty herald also a lot of stuff is repeated between 1st and 2nd bullet point there

which project?

empty herald Jun 17, 2022, 12:12 AM

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Movies

uncut forum Jun 17, 2022, 12:12 AM

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okay get it

empty herald Jun 17, 2022, 12:12 AM

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both say review and add movies

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I would condense to one bullet point

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actually no

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Sorry I'm drawing a blank here

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But I think you should have something like "Developed backend server using ... with React as the Frontend"

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as one bullet point

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then all the other capabilities you added in another

uncut forum Jun 17, 2022, 12:15 AM

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okay i will

empty herald Jun 17, 2022, 12:15 AM

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But tricky to word since some functionality is based around watch later list

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and some relating to comments

uncut forum Jun 17, 2022, 12:15 AM

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yeah exactly

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what about the spacing

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which lines the spaces get me confused

uncut forum Jun 17, 2022, 12:17 AM

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vernal yew Like they don't start with action verbs

and also the action verbs

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like what

vernal yew Jun 17, 2022, 12:19 AM

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developed, implemented, utilized etc

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you use some of them

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but I feel like most if not all bullet points should start with one

uncut forum Jun 17, 2022, 12:20 AM

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what should i start with instead ?

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if you could help

vernal yew Jun 17, 2022, 12:36 AM

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hmm

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upt you honestly

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depends on what you want to say

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i can't really hlep here because i'm not super familiar with what you did for those projects

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