Struggling to get responses || New Grad Internships

[umbral tiger]

What can I do better? I’m getting rejected / no responses. Can’t get passed this stage, 🆘!

[light hedge]

At first glance, your bullet points are pretty weak

[umbral tiger]

Any tips on that?

I took my time this time and thought it was good

[spice cave]

if your GPA is good, put it on

use periods

put your work experience at the top after education

no need to say "partially", maybe just "rebuilt significant portions of" or something

any examples of these "various upsell features"?

or just more details in general

see: the XYZ formula (lots of pinned stuff in #339595755851612161 )

provide links to your projects?

your project bullet points aren't bad but be wary of lines that sound too amateurish like "developed the front-end interface using HTML and CSS" (as opposed to...using java?)

[umbral tiger]

Thank you!

I’ll adjust accordingly